My poems and other people's poems here! OPEN!!

[Gneo]

The craving for you...

Is something to shun...

Saiyumei II and Irish Suds.....

Those were really good!

And you know I think they were good, because I bold'd "really"!!

Thinking is bad...

It spoils the fun!

 

[Chaotic Vibe]

Gneo

The craving for you...

Is something to shun...

Saiyumei II and Irish Suds.....

Those were really good!

And you know I think they were good, because I bold'd "really"!!

Thinking is bad...

It spoils the fun!

^^; It wasn't that good.

Irish's were better =p  

[Nerienda]

These are all great! Thanks for sharing these, everyone! I would post a poem, but every time I try to write one, I spend more time tweaking the words into what I think I want, that it loses its original meaning. If I do manage to write one that I'm happy with, though, I'll bring it here...  

[wolvesaber]

everyone's poems are so cool ^_^

here are some things I had to write for school-they're not really good but enjoy XD  

[wolvesaber]

When the moon is full
She imagines her true love
Whatching the same stars

Her kindred spirit
Who she knows so well, although
they have never met

Her heart believes fate
Binds together those who are
Meant for each other

Until she finds him
Her heart opens for no one
Save only for love  

[wolvesaber]

(this one's about my dog, and it's lame.)

I, the cutest puppy,though I am small
Have big attitude, and plenty of heart.
My humans love me, and I like to crawl
into their arms; i am so very smart.

Whether I bark or growl, they will respond.
Be it walks, toys, or treats, they know each noise
tells them what I need, and strenthens our bond.
All over the house are spread out my toys.

In four different rooms I have a bed,
For attention I need only to ask.
They will rub my tummy and scratch my head,
They will also praise me for my every task.

Though they think they're the one ones who have trained me,
They're the ones trained, anyone can see.  

[wolvesaber]

This one I wrote on my own time. I was trying to put a feeling I'd been having on and off for years into words-fortunately I hardly ever get that feeling any more.


Chained to this solitude and darkened heart,
No one to help you break this spell.
Running from the lies, forced apart
By the hand that steals light from your eyes.
Mind is battered and broken and lost,
Waging wars withitself, never finding rest.
Try to hold to the truth, weakness is the cost,
All hope is dimmed, an extinguished flame.
A haunting forest of doubts and fears-
all that remains as your heart decays.
Your soul is shattered, withonly tears
To hear your thoughts and heal your pain.  

[wolvesaber]

haikus are fun ^_^

with the stars alight
while the cool breeze is blowing
we walk through the woods

heart  

[PixieofDestruction]

wolvesaber

When the moon is full
She imagines her true love
Whatching the same stars

Her kindred spirit
Who she knows so well, although
they have never met

Her heart believes fate
Binds together those who are
Meant for each other

Until she finds him
Her heart opens for no one
Save only for love

I heart this one! It reminds me of me searching for my true love but I found him! N now its over!!!!

Quote:

This one I wrote on my own time. I was trying to put a feeling I'd been having on and off for years into words-fortunately I hardly ever get that feeling any more

I think its because you've had time to analyse yourself and your emotions better to be able to write about it. Usually poems are best when they're raw but sometimes its too much emotion to make sence of it all.

Quote:

with the stars alight
while the cool breeze is blowing
we walk through the woods

Its so beautiful! I can picture a couple taking a romantic stroll in that scenery  

[PixieofDestruction]

Irish Suds

"Untitled"

As clouds rise into the Oceanic Sky,
so do the spirits of our hearts.

As birds awaken to prepare to fly,
so does the Morning Day start.

As people differ in unique ways,
so do thier cultures blend.

As birds fly home under sunset rays,
so does the Evening Day end.

This one reminds me of the real Little Mermaid story. Its so sad... Nothing like the Disney movie. Have you read the book? Its a really short children's book sized book. Its written by Christian Hans Anderson. If you havn't you should check it out from your school's/local library.

I don't wanna ruin the story so I can't say why it reminds me of it... unless readers don't care if I'm spoiling the story.  

[icy_wyvern]

This one's set in WWII xp


Dying Soldier

Her eyes were so bright in that picture,
Brighter than I ever remembered them being before
I stared at the image
Taking notice of every feature...
Her smile...
Her slightly flushed complexion from the sun...
That one strand of hair that had fallen down into her face...
The ground shook around me
I stood motionless
I watched as friends fell
Screams echoing through my skin
But somehow within all the chaos
I was not afraid
I was about to meet my mortality face to face
But there was a nostalgic peace that consumed me
And even as the tears hit the surface of the photograph
I hoped that she would not cry for me as I was for her
I kissed that happy face one last time
Pressing it to my heart and reloading my gun...



... Hours later the picture of a young woman was found
in the firm grasp of a dead soldier's hand, his wedding ring still wrapped around his finger...  

[Chaotic Vibe]

icy_wyvern

This one's set in WWII xp


Dying Soldier

Her eyes were so bright in that picture,
Brighter than I ever remembered them being before
I stared at the image
Taking notice of every feature...
Her smile...
Her slightly flushed complexion from the sun...
That one strand of hair that had fallen down into her face...
The ground shook around me
I stood motionless
I watched as friends fell
Screams echoing through my skin
But somehow within all the chaos
I was not afraid
I was about to meet my mortality face to face
But there was a nostalgic peace that consumed me
And even as the tears hit the surface of the photograph
I hoped that she would not cry for me as I was for her
I kissed that happy face one last time
Pressing it to my heart and reloading my gun...



... Hours later the picture of a young woman was found
in the firm grasp of a dead soldier's hand, his wedding ring still wrapped around his finger...

emo crying  

[xX C a g e d Bird Xx]

icy_wyvern

This one's set in WWII xp


Dying Soldier

Her eyes were so bright in that picture,
Brighter than I ever remembered them being before
I stared at the image
Taking notice of every feature...
Her smile...
Her slightly flushed complexion from the sun...
That one strand of hair that had fallen down into her face...
The ground shook around me
I stood motionless
I watched as friends fell
Screams echoing through my skin
But somehow within all the chaos
I was not afraid
I was about to meet my mortality face to face
But there was a nostalgic peace that consumed me
And even as the tears hit the surface of the photograph
I hoped that she would not cry for me as I was for her
I kissed that happy face one last time
Pressing it to my heart and reloading my gun...



... Hours later the picture of a young woman was found
in the firm grasp of a dead soldier's hand, his wedding ring still wrapped around his finger...

that's so beautiful! the ending stanza, even though it's not poetic, is still so meaningful... i really like this poem!  

[PixieofDestruction]

crying crying crying crying crying crying crying
It was so beautiful n sad... I just wanna lay in my bed n hug a pillow.  

[icy_wyvern]

I didn't mean to make everyone so sad. xd sweatdrop