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Posted: Tue Mar 29, 2011 11:34 pm
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Posted: Wed Mar 30, 2011 4:48 pm
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Posted: Wed Mar 30, 2011 5:04 pm
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Posted: Wed Mar 30, 2011 11:44 pm
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Posted: Thu Mar 31, 2011 11:51 am
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Posted: Sat Apr 02, 2011 7:47 am
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Posted: Sat Apr 02, 2011 1:07 pm
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Posted: Sat Apr 02, 2011 2:28 pm
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lightangel33 Here's mine. I drew it and colored it with colored pencils because I'm also going to use it as an idea for an art project for a class. The description's under the drawing, but I'll put it on here for everyone. It's a demonic version of The Ugly Duckling. The swan (I've always been told the ugly duckling was actually a swan) is beautiful in this tale but hates ugly things. When he hatched, he found his 'sibling' ducklings of yellowed feathers to be ugly and so he attacked and killed them since they weren't beautiful. Sweet revenge for them calling him names in the original tale! XD
- Color-6 - Creativity-6 - Effort-7 - Flow-6 - Background-7
Total- 32
I gave you a 6 for color because its good overall but there is too much white showing. A tip, your coloring looks better if you color in one direction. I gave you a 6 for creativity because the swan is eating all the ducklings. I gave you a 7 for effort, you did realy well on the tree and i like the duck skull on the ground. I gave you a 6 for flow. The reason is the swans neck is crooked and the wings look like they have lumps in it and the blood in the water could be a little more dispersed evenly, instead of the random pathches, the eye hanging out of the swans mouth is a nice touch though. I gave you an 7 for background, you did fairly well. I like how the sun is setting. You could have had dead duckling or carcasess strewn across the hill. just a thought ^^
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Posted: Sat Apr 02, 2011 2:43 pm
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