★ Profile and Negotiable PAs Section

[Shinsua]

Okie dokies. Good to go.  

[Anbu Black Oinin]

thanks shinny  

[Jolt of Fate]

Shinsua

[ Jolt of Fate: } Mmm... looks good to go. Though, your attribute... do you mean one additional taijutsu style, or what?

[ Barron: } Well... there are two problems with him:
• There is no separation of branches, so you won't have the curse mark anyway.
• The Gentle Fist is a style learned in the bloodline. You can still have your piercing fist, but you have to make sure you learn it as you would the gentle fist style.

[ Anbu: } What exactly do you mean "learn taijutsu like a taijutsu user" ?

Yes one additional taijutsu style.  

[Shinsua]

Yeah, that should be fine.  

[astrasinthewild]

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Full Name: Jingjing Yue Wing
Nickname: Bell

Age: 12
Birthdate: 8/8
Gender: Female

Height: 5'4"
Weight: 96lbs

Nindo: "Life is made of so many little wonderful things. To contribute is to add life. To destroy any part is to ruin the whole."
Personality: Jingjing is a happy child with a personality as bright as her hair. She was often teased for it but her ability to overcome such things earned her more friends than enemies. She believes in looking at things positively but will fight for what she wants.

Village: Leaf
Rank: Genin
Class: Performer

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Chakra Pool: 200
Chakra Color: Pastel Pink
Chakra Element: Water, Wind

Strengths:
• She can hold her breathe for almost 6minutes.
• She has strong legs and can run for several miles without needing to stop.
Weaknesses:
• Distraction Prone; Her mind wanders when she's performing. Leaves her opens to attacks.
• Clumsy; She falls and is easily tripped.
Fears:
• Large Birds
• Ants

Attributes:
• Xun Bonus: Allows learning of Wind jutsu and genjutsu 1 post faster when using her instrument.
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Class Attribute:
• C. Attribute [1] - Rustic Disguise: Transformation technique effects slightly increased
• C. Attribute [2] - Latent Talent: Able to perform nin and genjutsu under rank C via instrument


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Ryo: 両{Money} {Start at zero}
AC: {Advancement credit} {Start at zero}

Missions Complete:
D Rank :: 0 {All start at zero}
C Rank :: 0
B Rank :: 0
A Rank :: 0
S Rank :: 0

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Weapon Type: Xun ( http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Xun_(instrument) )
Weapon Range: N/A
Weapon Weight: 1lb
Weapon Location: Silk bag/Hip


Summoning Type: {BLANK}


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• (30projectiles)
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▬▬┤|N i n j u t s u
Maruton {Start with the following six only}
• Henge no Jutsu [Transformation Technique]
• Kawarimi no Jutsu [Substitution Technique]
• Bushin no Jutsu [Clone Technique]
• Suimen Hokou no Waza [Act of Water Surface Walking]
• Kinobori no Waza [Act of Tree Climbing]
• Kai [Release]

Water
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Wind
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{Other jutsu type's name}
• [8] Ninjutsu
• [3] Genjutsu


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Jingjing was born to Chinese parents with a genetic disorder that turned her hair a sunshine blonde at an early age. Her parent's, while a little stunned at color, choose to change her middle and last name to Moon Glory from her original. Despite the change in her hair, she proved to be adept at musical arts and enrolled in the academy immediately, choosing the performer class.  

[Shinsua]

Hmmm... your attributes and strengths seem a little messed up.
The strengths should typically be two to five words describing something she's good at.
Lung capacity is fine, but upper body strength is a no-no.
You also need to add another weakness. Two minimum, sorry. :I
For attributes... erm... if you want, you could just combine that into one general thing... like... "Learns wind ninjutsu and genjutsu techniques one post faster, if done with instrument."

Also, for your class attribute, the performer actually has two, so put them both down.  

[astrasinthewild]

Ok...think I fixed 'em all up smile Been a while since I done this.  

[Shinsua]

Er, alrighty, I guess you don't necessarily need two custom attributes, unless you want another? xD  

[astrasinthewild]

If I think of one later, I'll pm it to you for approval x3
Thanks.  

[Shinsua]

Okie dokies~
Well, you're all set to go. c:  

[BarronVonManfreadGreed]

(I made the changes so I think I have everything now. sorry about the large picture again...working that out soon...)


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Full Name: Manfread, Amamiya (Hyuuga) Bogojlanskist
Nickname:

Age: 17
Birthdate: January 13
Gender: Male

Height: 5 foot 11 inches / 5'11”
Weight: 149.5 lbs

Nindo: Might makes Right, the strong eat, the weak are meat.
Personality: There is a fine grey line between Genius and Insanity. A line Manfread walks perfectly. Completely ruled by his emotions, an unnatural hunger and a weird herculean life style. Preferring to do what his 'gut' tell him, it is difficult to understand his true motives. Seemingly lacking in manners, Manfread is crude, rude and savage in nature. He is the first to jump into a fight and the last to leave. Choosing close combat or the usage of genjutsu. He uses 'Armour Piercing Fist' or Haiken, a style of his own devising, and is eager to utilize it for battle.

Village: Sand Village
Rank: Genin
Class: Bloodline

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Bloodline: Hyuuga

Chakra Pool: 225
Chakra Color: Sickly dark Green, with Black hues
Chakra Element: Earth and Fire

Strengths:
• {Minimum of two}
• Close combat, Armour Piercing Fist,
Weaknesses:
• Long range, hot women,

Fears:
•White horses, Deep water, and eating mushrooms.

Attributes:
• Armour Piercing Fist Style -> Haiken *(see below, sorry if the translation is wrong)
• Sacred Footing -> possesses greatly increased speed

* The Armour Piercing Fist style is was created by Manfread in place of the Gentle Fist. Which he never fully learned form his mother. Unlike Gentle fist, this style disrupts the nerves, breaking and destroying muscles, leaving internal bleeding, and crippling the body. Although Chakra systems are unaffected by the damage dealt, it can pass through most armour and defences. (NOTE-> for purposes of Game play new gentle fist techniques must be learnt then converted over. Then the Gentle fist technique is lost. Conversion takes 1 post for B rank techniques and lower, and 3 for A rank and up.)


Class Attribute:
• Weak blood


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Ryo: 両Money Zero
AC: Advancement credit Zero

Missions Complete:
D Rank :: 0 Zero
C Rank :: 0
B Rank :: 0
A Rank :: 0
S Rank :: 0

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Weapon Type: Bladed bracers
Weapon Range: 4 and 1/2 inched parallel to the forearm.
Weapon Weight: 3 lbs, each
Weapon Location: On the forearm

Headband location: pinned to the centre of the chest
Colour: black

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• projectiles-> 15 kuni and explosive tages


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▬▬┤|N i n j u t s u
Maruton
• Henge no Jutsu [Transformation Technique]
• Kawarimi no Jutsu [Substitution Technique]
• Bushin no Jutsu [Clone Technique]
• Suimen Hokou no Waza [Act of Water Surface Walking]
• Kinobori no Waza [Act of Tree Climbing]
• Kai [Release]

{Your first element's name} Doton
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{Your second element's name} Katon
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Hyuuga
• Gentle Fist (Haiken)




▬▬┤|T a i j u t s u
Iwagakure no Taijutsu (Body of stone)

• {Stage progression / techniques learned}


▬▬┤|B u k i j u t s u
•Hakyoku-ken no Kata

• {Stage progression / techniques learned}



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His mother, before she died, had been the kind of person who fought for what she believed in. She defected to the Sand Village and married Bjorn, so he is unique in the fact that he does not posses the branch family curse placed on all members of the Hyuuga clan. Manfread also has blonde hair and storm blue eyes, that shift white in strange ever changing patterns. If he had not learned how to use the Byakugan before his mother, Lilyan, died it would be almost impossible to tell that he is Hyuuga.
His father Bjorn, is an aristocrat who shy’s away from combat and follows a strict non-aggression code. A code which lead to the death of his wife. After secretly witnessing her untimely demise at a young age, something in Manfread snapped, and he began to hear a strange voice that came from his gut. Asking him if he were strong enough to know the name of his mother's killers, Manfread started to listen to the advise of his gut. Perhaps this is why he is ruled completely by his emotions, his hunger, and a ridiculous almost herculean life style.
Unlike normal Hyuuga, Manfread only learned the very basics of the Gentle fist, but with the firm belief that corruption would lead him to power he created a new fighting style he calls 'Armour Piercing Fist' or 'Haiken'. Disrupting nerves, breaking and deteriorating muscles, inflicting large internal damage to create internal bleeding, he has made incredible progress.
Manfread respects two things, strength and food. He also has an unnaturally high metabolism and is constantly trying to gain weight with no success.  

[Shinsua]

Looks good!  

[Hacksaw Jim Duggan]

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Full Name: Suichi Uchiha
Nickname: The Fox OF The Leaf

Age: 14
Birthdate: December 4th
Gender: Male

Height: 5'6
Weight: 125lbs

Nindo: "When in battle, never let up"
Personality: Suichi is a very silent boy, allwayse training he hopes to hone his skills to become one of the elete ambu black ops that reside in his village. Though he is silent he shows great leadership qualities, and is one to never underestimate an opponent.

Village: Leaf village
Rank: Genin
Class: Genjutsu

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Bloodline: Sharringan

Chakra Pool: 225
Chakra Color: Violet
Chakra Element: Fire and Water

Strengths:
• Able to collect data on an opponent very quickly througout battle
• Extreemly talented in Genjutsu
Weaknesses:
• Lightning style jutsu
• Fighting girls
Fears:
• Losing his eyes to Mangeky sharingan (If achived)
• Tailed beast

Attributes:
• {Maximum of two}
• Able to learn opponents jutsu through sharringan one post faster.
. Able to do fast handseals
Class Attribute:
• Able to learn genjutsu one post faster.

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Ryo: 両{Money} {Start at zero}
AC: {Advancement credit} {Start at zero}

Missions Complete:
D Rank :: 0 {All start at zero}
C Rank :: 0
B Rank :: 0
A Rank :: 0
S Rank :: 0

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Weapon Type: Katana
Weapon Range: 20 inches
Weapon Weight: 12lbs
Weapon Location: on the back
• {When you create your profile, you may have any one basic weapon.)

Summoning Type: Monkeys
Summon Sage: No


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• 10 shuriken 10 smoke bomb 5 paper bomb 5explosive kunai

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▬▬┤|N i n j u t s u
Maruton {Start with the following six only}
• Henge no Jutsu [Transformation Technique]
• Kawarimi no Jutsu [Substitution Technique]
• Bushin no Jutsu [Clone Technique]
• Suimen Hokou no Waza [Act of Water Surface Walking]
• Kinobori no Waza [Act of Tree Climbing]
• Kai [Release]


Kasumi Enbu no Jutsu (Mist Waltz Technique)
Rank: (null rank)
Description: Katon • Kasumi Enbu no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Fire Element. The ninja does a string of hand seals and then proceeds to blow a large combustible mist at the target. When the mist hits flame, it will ignite in an explosion of fire.
• Katon: Hi Shinten no Jutsu (Fire Release: Flame Spread Technique)
Rank: D
Description: This jutsu allows the user to extend the flame from their hand to any weapon or item they may be holding. This creates a surrounding layer of flame around the object, but the object is unharmed. This can only extend to a length of 3 feet maximum, or the length of a medium sized sword.



Kokuun no Jutsu (Black Clouds Technique)
Rank: (null rank)
Description: Suiton • Kokuun no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique used by the Rain ninja Kagari which utilizes the Water Element. After forming the necessary hand seals, a black mist will emit from his body and rise into the sky. Black clouds will form, releasing a flammable rain of oil onto his targets.

• Mizu Bunshin no Jutsu (Water Clone Technique)
Rank: D
Description: Mizu Bunshin no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique that utilizes water to create a Bunshin clone. Unlike a normal Bunshin, the Mizu Bunshin has the ability to interact more with the environment due to it having physical substance. This allows the clone to carry out limited attacks on its target. The range of the clone is limited however, it can not travel very far from the original body. If the Mizu Bunshin is injured, the clone will usually revert back into its natural water state.

. Mizutamari no Jutsu (Water Puddle Technique)
Rank: D
Description: By altering personal body shape, the user can melt into a puddle of water on the ground. This allows the user to hide and set up an ambush, or lose inexperienced trackers.






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• Kurenai's Flower Petal Escape
D (for learning purposes)
This unnamed flower petal technique is a Genjutsu utilized by the Leaf Jounin Yuuhi Kurenai. If Kurenai comes under attack, she can use this technique to cover her escape. After forming the needed hand seals, Kurenai's body will disperse into a shower of flower petals. These petals will confuse and distract her opponent while she escapes or hides. The actual cost is relative to what she is escaping from, matching it in chakra strength minus 1 rank.
Base Duration: 1 Post

Buki Hanshoku (Weapon Multiply)
D
Making a single handsign, the user must first throw a senbon, kunai, or other projectile weapon, and then the genjutsu takes effect. Working on the perception of the target, the weapon becomes many, turning anything from one senbon into one hundred, in the target's eyes. Mainly used to get the opponent to get caught up with the oncoming weapons, it is a good distraction jutsu, but can be dodged if the opponent can get away from the one weapon thrown.
Base Duration: 1 Post

Magen: Chirudo Tamashii (Demonic Illusion: Chilled Soul)
D
The opponent sudden feels very cold, enough to make them shiver uncontrollably.
Base Duration: 2 Posts



Magen: Kokuni Arazu no Jutsu (Demonic Illusion: False Surrounding Technique)
D
A genjutsu technique that makes the victim believe that he/she is in a totally different surrounding than they really are. The user creates a whole new surrounding that the opponent ends up seeing, instead of the old one, giving the user the advantage as only they would be aware of the exact lay of the land. However, note that people, pets, puppets, weaponry, the user, and the target are not part of the surroundings. These things stay where they are.



▬▬┤|T a i j u t s u
{Style name here}
• {Stage progression / techniques learned}

▬▬┤|B u k i j u t s u
{Style name here}
• {Stage progression / techniques learned}

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Suichi was allwayse a bright young kid. Awakening his sharringan at age 8 through rigerus training with his older brother Noitra. Noitra was allwayse there for Suichi and so was his parents. Seeing the talent Suichi had they put him in the ninja academy where he graduated at the top of his class. Now Suichi aspires to become an ambu black ops.  

[Shinsua]

Well, right off the bat, you need to take off any jutsu that you added to your character list- you only start with the 6 that were on the skeleton.
You should also probably leave the summon section blank, or just make note that you can't summon monkeys yet.