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Posted: Tue Jan 31, 2012 2:27 pm
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Posted: Tue Jan 31, 2012 2:34 pm
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Uncle Haijin I had to edit this freshman English major's stupid as ******** little romance story that she submitted to the newspaper, and it's stupid as ********. Like, I would understand purple prose because it would at least mean she's trying, but her prose is beige in the worst way with random words like "orbs" tossed in that you know she cribbed from RP, she has no concept of conflict or pacing or anything that would actually make her stories interesting, her plots mostly consist of, "straight Britons become childhood friends, have chaste romance, woman dies of old age and the other is sort of sad about that, I guess" or "child in a third-world-country has a horrific life, meets a missionary, converts to Christianity and moves to US, everything is awesome now."
And I'm not allowed to do anything about it except to correct her grammar because we have to accept anything and I'm not allowed to scare authors with ~*~delicate feelings~*~ away. Why the hell is a newspaper expected to run stories anyway? That sounds like the most boring piece of trash ever. Of course, I can't say much since I'm not very good at writing. |D
Maybe the newspaper just needs something to fill space?
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Posted: Tue Jan 31, 2012 3:11 pm
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Posted: Tue Jan 31, 2012 5:32 pm
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Posted: Tue Jan 31, 2012 5:44 pm
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Posted: Tue Jan 31, 2012 5:57 pm
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Lady Aeducan Uncle Haijin I had to edit this freshman English major's stupid as ******** little romance story that she submitted to the newspaper, and it's stupid as ********. Like, I would understand purple prose because it would at least mean she's trying, but her prose is beige in the worst way with random words like "orbs" tossed in that you know she cribbed from RP, she has no concept of conflict or pacing or anything that would actually make her stories interesting, her plots mostly consist of, "straight Britons become childhood friends, have chaste romance, woman dies of old age and the other is sort of sad about that, I guess" or "child in a third-world-country has a horrific life, meets a missionary, converts to Christianity and moves to US, everything is awesome now."
And I'm not allowed to do anything about it except to correct her grammar because we have to accept anything and I'm not allowed to scare authors with ~*~delicate feelings~*~ away. Why the hell is a newspaper expected to run stories anyway? That sounds like the most boring piece of trash ever. Of course, I can't say much since I'm not very good at writing. |D Maybe the newspaper just needs something to fill space?
Yeah, we need the filler, but still, her stories make me die on the inside just a tiny little bit. crying
Also, does anyone know who you're supposed to report items not showing up on the inventory search to? I'm not even sure there's a person for it, tbh.
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Posted: Tue Jan 31, 2012 6:10 pm
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Diavolica Magnificent Moonbeam Should I report the Angelbow cutting into the Valhalla armor's hair? A friend said I should. eek How is it cutting into my hair? The wing in the bulk of the hair does cut into it a little oddly. Up to you if you'd want to report it, but be prepared to wait quite a bit for any sort of fix of course. xd Okay.
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Posted: Tue Jan 31, 2012 6:14 pm
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Posted: Tue Jan 31, 2012 6:45 pm
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Posted: Tue Jan 31, 2012 6:54 pm
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Posted: Tue Jan 31, 2012 6:56 pm
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Posted: Tue Jan 31, 2012 7:09 pm
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Posted: Tue Jan 31, 2012 7:22 pm
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