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VicinityObscenity

PostPosted: Sun Aug 12, 2007 6:22 am
True Friends

True friends are there for you
they are the shoulder you cry on
they wipe your tears goodbye
they are the holders of all secrets
they are the the ones who hold you,
durning the bad and good times,
they have all the memories
they got your back
they never leave you behind
they help you in life
they are your life
they are amzing
they are true friends  
PostPosted: Tue Aug 14, 2007 8:38 pm
*reads all of the new poems* nice nice nice smile heart


Phil and i werent to gether on aur two month aniversery, we both had other plans, work and the like...he wound up wrighting me a poem that day..........and this is the final coppy.

My Love
My depression builds, the distance is great.
My heart cries out in solemn pain, but my soul distends in
difference reminding me we are closer than it may appear.
The moon hanging over head seems to smile back a familiar face,
you are there too looking through and right back at me with the
light of this moon. We reach out our hands as we stand outside,
and hold tight remembering we are both there. Even if you can not
be seen through my eyes, my heart now shows different in spirit.
Forever we will be together, distance or, wait no there is no distance
between us.


I love this poem so much, you wouldnt belive  

Keres DarkWolf


PixieofDestruction

PostPosted: Thu Aug 16, 2007 11:04 pm

I wrote this July 5th, 2004



Time comes
It will never be again where it was once
Time changes things
But the things I want it to change
It does not
The things I want static
Are no more
I thought it wouldn't change things so quickly
But the more I wanted them to stay
The more they wanted to change
What was done is now undone
Nothing will change that our hands once touched
Nothing will become what it was
Regrets can not be undone
 
PostPosted: Thu Aug 16, 2007 11:07 pm

I was really angry w/this poem. I loved a friend very much n he led me on till he got the idea in his head to be w/a childhood friend.




I made a mural on the wall with paint of the darkest crimson of her blood.
My face was also a canvas for it.
The knife dropped from my grip and made a high “ding”, which resonated in my head.
I licked off a drop of blood on my lip that used to nourish her body.
She broke my wings and banged me up some.
I was so jealous of her, but she’s nonexistent now.
I am selfish.
You have to suffer for my mistakes.
I did not intend that.
I knew from the start because I know you so well.

Why don’t you trust me?
Why’d you leave me so quick?
You never even gave me a chance to make you happy.
I guess I’ll never know you completely.
What did you see in her?

I walked up to you with a look of innocence.
You noticed the limp wings on my back...
The ruby water droplets falling from my fingertips...
And the foreign blood on my body that smelled like her.
I kissed you while tears ran down your eyes.
I licked them away but they did not stop coming.
It was too late for her.
All that was left was the memory haunting me
And a lonely body I can never contemplate (c)2003
 

PixieofDestruction


PixieofDestruction

PostPosted: Thu Aug 16, 2007 11:16 pm
aciddwolff
Damn it!
Yeah, I'm starting this poem with a curse
Don't over-react, it could be worse
I could have started with the stereotypically loneliness
The feeling that no one cares, tear-filled eyes out of focus
Could have started with a beaten girl
Described her soulless eyes and golden curls
Said that she hated boys, hated her parents, hated the mean people at Micky D's
Told of her trails, teasing, crying, being out of whip cream
That she hated herself so much she took out a knife
No- not to slice vegetables- but to end her life
I could have talked about her loving heart
Or her horrible up bringing, or her rocky start
But I could have also started in a dark alley
Told about a blood soaked rally
Reminisced about vampires and their ability to bite
Good God, that would surely cause you a fright!
Perhaps I could say that love really sucks
But I don't care, your sugar outta luck
I could have told you how she put the gun to her head
Oops she pulled the trigger, now she's dead
It amuses me when poets just kill everyone off
Guess they had nothing better to do *cough*cough
Too many suicidal poems and kids shooting to kill
Lets go for the good stuff, straight to the thrill
Lets talk about nature- oh how fun!
Or how a madman chased me during a morning run
Lets add some undying devotion, throw in some tears
Holy crap, this poem could go on for years!
I could add a character that we all hate
And then kill them off in some horrible fate
Hmm, vampires, werewolves, death, tears and ghost
This will surely be on highest rated, lets give a toast!
But no, I won't be like all the rest
Can't take anymore unoriginal poems, I gotta confess
Tired of reading the same damn thing
Tired of suicide ad jealousy's sting
Go to the most popular, the 'best'
But they are all like the rest!
Lets get some new ideas flowing
Instead of the same claptrap blowing
I'm not going to tirade about how boys are hosers
Don't want to be another predictable poser
Okay, its over, rant done
Hopefully a new era of poems has just begun

ok I finished this one, its more of a really LONG poem then anything..


HA! This one's my favorite of yours. It has a great hook! And yeah, not suicidal. My ex was/is suicidal. I don't know anymore. That crap just brings down everyone along w/you. To me its not a funny subject and the way you talk about it is true. People make suicide look so luxurious in poems and songs. I think that that just gives people ideas in their heads and they think its so spectacular. The cold truth is that its not.  
PostPosted: Sun Aug 19, 2007 1:50 pm
wheeee! more poems! and I love thems all!!! ^.^ I'm writing more right now!  

VicinityObscenity


VicinityObscenity

PostPosted: Thu Aug 23, 2007 8:54 am
Who has the thread that you hang on?
So freely cut from the only string
That kept you alive.

The moon and the stars
Hold no immortality to me
I'm just as dead
As an old man with no dream.

Who's as red as wine?
Who eats
Where the heartless dine?
No one but me and my souless conscious.
No one but me and his 2-way cross face.

Hello! Have you called again?
The recevier held loosely off the end
Of your lie with me
And the lie with Death.

No candle shines true,
The Lovers Have Lied
The essence of Death is Beauty.
No sea runs blue,
This is the tainted gurney.

Who held the sound in your throat?
You carried your own shackles.
To the World of your disease.

Blood runs thick with murder.
Your heart is slick
With torture.
Your cult is your disguise.
All you rely on are the flies.

The Lovers Have Lied.  
PostPosted: Sat Aug 25, 2007 11:05 pm
The craving for you...
Is something to shun...
YAY!!!!
Poetry!!! <3

Please stop lying
By Mike Deller (Gneo)

I had believed every word you said,
I thought as I lay awake in bed.
I thought there was no way it could be true,
I had fallen so deeply in love with you.
To you, I had always been so true.
For you, I don't know what you wanted of me

Please stop lying
I know that you're crying
I wipe away the tears
Remembering our love over the years
I want it to last forever
You want to throw it all away

Please stop lying
I see through your crying
You're back to your old self
Back to your old games
You deal a bad hand of love
23
BUST
You throw them all away

Please stop lying
I can't stand your crying
Again I wipe away the tears,
Seeing you calms me fears
Every day i dread our love will go,
Our bond shattered,
Lost to the flow

Please stop lying
I'm sick of your crying
No longer can I wipe the tears
My hand soaked through all these years
I've given up all hope
I have to move on
I can't stand the tears
I can't stand the silver tongue
I have to put a stop to my madness
Before my life is done



Anyone likey? x.x

Thinking is bad...
It spoils the fun!
 

Gneo


Senfyero

PostPosted: Sat Aug 25, 2007 11:08 pm
I had a poem written down on a sheet paper, but I got hungry, and eated it. ;_;

xd

Anyways, in seriousness, here's my poem:

If I had a dime for everytime I think of you, I would walk forever in a garden.
I would enjoy every breath of my life with you, to protect you from such evil.

Meh, it could use some work. rofl
 
PostPosted: Mon Aug 27, 2007 3:05 pm
Gneo
The craving for you...
Is something to shun...
YAY!!!!
Poetry!!! <3

Please stop lying
By Mike Deller (Gneo)

I had believed every word you said,
I thought as I lay awake in bed.
I thought there was no way it could be true,
I had fallen so deeply in love with you.
To you, I had always been so true.
For you, I don't know what you wanted of me

Please stop lying
I know that you're crying
I wipe away the tears
Remembering our love over the years
I want it to last forever
You want to throw it all away

Please stop lying
I see through your crying
You're back to your old self
Back to your old games
You deal a bad hand of love
23
BUST
You throw them all away

Please stop lying
I can't stand your crying
Again I wipe away the tears,
Seeing you calms me fears
Every day i dread our love will go,
Our bond shattered,
Lost to the flow

Please stop lying
I'm sick of your crying
No longer can I wipe the tears
My hand soaked through all these years
I've given up all hope
I have to move on
I can't stand the tears
I can't stand the silver tongue
I have to put a stop to my madness
Before my life is done



Anyone likey? x.x

Thinking is bad...
It spoils the fun!
woot! me likey this! keep up the awsome poems! ^.^  

VicinityObscenity


VicinityObscenity

PostPosted: Mon Aug 27, 2007 3:07 pm
Senfyero
I had a poem written down on a sheet paper, but I got hungry, and eated it. ;_;

xd

Anyways, in seriousness, here's my poem:

If I had a dime for everytime I think of you, I would walk forever in a garden.
I would enjoy every breath of my life with you, to protect you from such evil.

Meh, it could use some work. rofl
hehe! sounds like one of my friends poems! she was thinking about this dime she picked up in the hallway, and randomly came up with a poem! but yeah I like this one as well! =P  
PostPosted: Tue Aug 28, 2007 5:46 pm
I made this one at the end of the school year...


Well, my childhood is almost over,
my friends are going away,
only thing I can do is try and maybe pray.
I wonder why its gotta be this way,
can't we disband some other day?
But deep down I know this is the way it's gotta be,
sometimes I wish I wasn't getting some crappy degree.
My heart hurts beyond compare,
my sanity is hanging on by a hair.
The world looks at us unaware,
I'm sorry but this damage is something I cannot repair.
People say life is unfair,
that one second its happy, and the next its full of despair.
Calm Air; it can sooth the soul,
even for a person like me who's got a heart of coal.
Memories are something that we eventually forget,
I can't come to terms without becoming upset.
As the end of our friendship draws near,
I can't even muster up a weak cheer,
I wish there was a way for all of us to disappear,
or maybe start again this academic year?
Well we'll be forced to preserver,
perhaps one day you'll see me reappear,
that or get swallowed up by my pitiful fear.
Well, alls been said and done,
and guys it was really fun.
But all good things must come to an end,
and even if I forget, your still a helluva friend.
 

Chaotic Vibe


Chaotic Vibe

PostPosted: Tue Aug 28, 2007 5:47 pm
Oh...and this other one I made xp Its more of a classic kinda oldschool blues song gonk


I gave my heart to a woman,
but she threw it right back,
Said I gave my heart to a woman,
but she threw it right back.
Now it feels like the pretty girl, just stabbed me in the back.

I'd rather go through hell,
than live that day again,
Said I'd rather go through hell,
than live that day again.
The pain is abnormal, like a bullet to the brain.

I gave my heart to a woman,
but she threw it right back,
Said I gave my heart to a woman,
but she threw it right back.
Now it feels like the pretty girl, just stabbed me in the back.


Now I'm standing at crossroads,
don't know which way to go.
Said I'm standing at crossroads,
don't know which way to go.
My heart was pointing one way, my head said take it slow.

I gave my heart to a woman,
but she threw it right back,
Said I gave my heart to a woman,
but she threw it right back.
Now it feels like the pretty girl, just stabbed me in the back.

The devils way baby,
thats the path I'll take.
I say the devils way baby,
thats the path I'll take.
Because for you girl you know, I'd drive my heart in with a stake.

I gave my heart to a woman,
but she threw it right back,
Said I gave my heart to a woman,
but she threw it right back.
Now it feels like the pretty girl, just stabbed me in the back.


If your watching god,
you'd better listen up.
Said if your watching god,
you'd better listen up.
You've made my life miserable, and ******** my days up.

I gave my heart to a woman,
but she threw it right back,
Said I gave my heart to a woman,
but she threw it right back.
Now it feels like the pretty girl, just stabbed me in the back.


Well this is the end of my story,
thats all there is to tell.
Said this is the end of the story,
thats all there is to tell.
Heaven knows I'll meet my dream girl, before I go down in hell.
 
PostPosted: Thu Aug 30, 2007 3:01 pm
Ah,
I DO hope you don't plan on flaming.

At least I try.

-Sigh-


Irish Suds


"Untitled"

As clouds rise into the Oceanic Sky,
so do the spirits of our hearts.

As birds awaken to prepare to fly,
so does the Morning Day start.

As people differ in unique ways,
so do thier cultures blend.

As birds fly home under sunset rays,
so does the Evening Day end.


Please don't flame me.

I'm true to heart.

T-2<3
 

Bearstronaut


The Wolfe of YHWH

PostPosted: Thu Aug 30, 2007 4:34 pm
I'm sitting here, lookign over my poems, trying to decide what to post, but it all sounds to cliched to me >< That means it prolly is >< ...Cause Wolfie is incapable of writing happy stuff. He's a;ways pissed off, or incredibly sad...mostly he's pissed off though, so everything sounds retarded ><

Yesh. I refer to myself in the third person. It's fun!
 
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