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Posted: Tue Aug 14, 2007 8:38 pm
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*reads all of the new poems* nice nice nice smile heart
Phil and i werent to gether on aur two month aniversery, we both had other plans, work and the like...he wound up wrighting me a poem that day..........and this is the final coppy.
My Love My depression builds, the distance is great. My heart cries out in solemn pain, but my soul distends in difference reminding me we are closer than it may appear. The moon hanging over head seems to smile back a familiar face, you are there too looking through and right back at me with the light of this moon. We reach out our hands as we stand outside, and hold tight remembering we are both there. Even if you can not be seen through my eyes, my heart now shows different in spirit. Forever we will be together, distance or, wait no there is no distance between us.
I love this poem so much, you wouldnt belive
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Posted: Thu Aug 16, 2007 11:04 pm
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Posted: Thu Aug 16, 2007 11:07 pm
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Posted: Thu Aug 16, 2007 11:16 pm
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aciddwolff Damn it! Yeah, I'm starting this poem with a curse Don't over-react, it could be worse I could have started with the stereotypically loneliness The feeling that no one cares, tear-filled eyes out of focus Could have started with a beaten girl Described her soulless eyes and golden curls Said that she hated boys, hated her parents, hated the mean people at Micky D's Told of her trails, teasing, crying, being out of whip cream That she hated herself so much she took out a knife No- not to slice vegetables- but to end her life I could have talked about her loving heart Or her horrible up bringing, or her rocky start But I could have also started in a dark alley Told about a blood soaked rally Reminisced about vampires and their ability to bite Good God, that would surely cause you a fright! Perhaps I could say that love really sucks But I don't care, your sugar outta luck I could have told you how she put the gun to her head Oops she pulled the trigger, now she's dead It amuses me when poets just kill everyone off Guess they had nothing better to do *cough*cough Too many suicidal poems and kids shooting to kill Lets go for the good stuff, straight to the thrill Lets talk about nature- oh how fun! Or how a madman chased me during a morning run Lets add some undying devotion, throw in some tears Holy crap, this poem could go on for years! I could add a character that we all hate And then kill them off in some horrible fate Hmm, vampires, werewolves, death, tears and ghost This will surely be on highest rated, lets give a toast! But no, I won't be like all the rest Can't take anymore unoriginal poems, I gotta confess Tired of reading the same damn thing Tired of suicide ad jealousy's sting Go to the most popular, the 'best' But they are all like the rest! Lets get some new ideas flowing Instead of the same claptrap blowing I'm not going to tirade about how boys are hosers Don't want to be another predictable poser Okay, its over, rant done Hopefully a new era of poems has just begun ok I finished this one, its more of a really LONG poem then anything..
HA! This one's my favorite of yours. It has a great hook! And yeah, not suicidal. My ex was/is suicidal. I don't know anymore. That crap just brings down everyone along w/you. To me its not a funny subject and the way you talk about it is true. People make suicide look so luxurious in poems and songs. I think that that just gives people ideas in their heads and they think its so spectacular. The cold truth is that its not.
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Posted: Sun Aug 19, 2007 1:50 pm
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Posted: Thu Aug 23, 2007 8:54 am
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Posted: Sat Aug 25, 2007 11:05 pm
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Posted: Sat Aug 25, 2007 11:08 pm
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Posted: Mon Aug 27, 2007 3:05 pm
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Gneo The craving for you... Is something to shun... YAY!!!! Poetry!!! <3
Please stop lying By Mike Deller (Gneo)
I had believed every word you said, I thought as I lay awake in bed. I thought there was no way it could be true, I had fallen so deeply in love with you. To you, I had always been so true. For you, I don't know what you wanted of me
Please stop lying I know that you're crying I wipe away the tears Remembering our love over the years I want it to last forever You want to throw it all away
Please stop lying I see through your crying You're back to your old self Back to your old games You deal a bad hand of love 23 BUST You throw them all away
Please stop lying I can't stand your crying Again I wipe away the tears, Seeing you calms me fears Every day i dread our love will go, Our bond shattered, Lost to the flow
Please stop lying I'm sick of your crying No longer can I wipe the tears My hand soaked through all these years I've given up all hope I have to move on I can't stand the tears I can't stand the silver tongue I have to put a stop to my madness Before my life is done
Anyone likey? x.x
Thinking is bad... It spoils the fun! woot! me likey this! keep up the awsome poems! ^.^
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Posted: Mon Aug 27, 2007 3:07 pm
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Posted: Tue Aug 28, 2007 5:46 pm
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I made this one at the end of the school year...
Well, my childhood is almost over, my friends are going away, only thing I can do is try and maybe pray. I wonder why its gotta be this way, can't we disband some other day? But deep down I know this is the way it's gotta be, sometimes I wish I wasn't getting some crappy degree. My heart hurts beyond compare, my sanity is hanging on by a hair. The world looks at us unaware, I'm sorry but this damage is something I cannot repair. People say life is unfair, that one second its happy, and the next its full of despair. Calm Air; it can sooth the soul, even for a person like me who's got a heart of coal. Memories are something that we eventually forget, I can't come to terms without becoming upset. As the end of our friendship draws near, I can't even muster up a weak cheer, I wish there was a way for all of us to disappear, or maybe start again this academic year? Well we'll be forced to preserver, perhaps one day you'll see me reappear, that or get swallowed up by my pitiful fear. Well, alls been said and done, and guys it was really fun. But all good things must come to an end, and even if I forget, your still a helluva friend.
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Posted: Tue Aug 28, 2007 5:47 pm
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Oh...and this other one I made xp Its more of a classic kinda oldschool blues song gonk
I gave my heart to a woman, but she threw it right back, Said I gave my heart to a woman, but she threw it right back. Now it feels like the pretty girl, just stabbed me in the back.
I'd rather go through hell, than live that day again, Said I'd rather go through hell, than live that day again. The pain is abnormal, like a bullet to the brain.
I gave my heart to a woman, but she threw it right back, Said I gave my heart to a woman, but she threw it right back. Now it feels like the pretty girl, just stabbed me in the back.
Now I'm standing at crossroads, don't know which way to go. Said I'm standing at crossroads, don't know which way to go. My heart was pointing one way, my head said take it slow.
I gave my heart to a woman, but she threw it right back, Said I gave my heart to a woman, but she threw it right back. Now it feels like the pretty girl, just stabbed me in the back.
The devils way baby, thats the path I'll take. I say the devils way baby, thats the path I'll take. Because for you girl you know, I'd drive my heart in with a stake.
I gave my heart to a woman, but she threw it right back, Said I gave my heart to a woman, but she threw it right back. Now it feels like the pretty girl, just stabbed me in the back.
If your watching god, you'd better listen up. Said if your watching god, you'd better listen up. You've made my life miserable, and ******** my days up.
I gave my heart to a woman, but she threw it right back, Said I gave my heart to a woman, but she threw it right back. Now it feels like the pretty girl, just stabbed me in the back.
Well this is the end of my story, thats all there is to tell. Said this is the end of the story, thats all there is to tell. Heaven knows I'll meet my dream girl, before I go down in hell.
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Posted: Thu Aug 30, 2007 3:01 pm
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Posted: Thu Aug 30, 2007 4:34 pm
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