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bamboowitch

PostPosted: Mon Jan 16, 2006 11:40 am


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PostPosted: Mon Jan 16, 2006 11:41 am


dbzx
Sildrag
There was a song from long ago,
that my mother used to sing for me.
it gave me peace, love, and hope
-of the good person i could be......
I can remember her voice like yesterday,
her voice as smooth as the sea.
When she left, she took my love away-
and never returned it back to me.
I've long forgot how the song went.
I've long forgot what love is like.
I only remember that my heart was rent-
as if I've been stabbed by a pike.
I'm no longer the loving child I was before,
I'm seldom happy anymore.

I never laugh,
i never cry,
I never smile,
I never sigh.
I never show my true emotions,
-I keep it all inside.
My mind's in a constant motion,
-my thoughts, a swirling tide.

It's during these times that I will hear-
Hear a song I used to know.
A song sang to take away fear,
-a song sang from long ago.

thats an awsome poem
3nodding 3nodding

lil azn angel 12


Seijin

PostPosted: Mon Jan 16, 2006 12:48 pm


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PostPosted: Mon Jan 16, 2006 1:10 pm


DreamWalker0
I miss poetry.. I wrote about 5 poems last year.. But now i cant find it!! .... sweatdrop confused

"I stand infront of a great mountain
Where at its front gushes down
A never endling flow of silk
That comes right out of the clouds"

Nice?? did it when i was infront of a waterfall.. forgot the name of the falls..


that's such a beautiful description. ;____;

Panda Got No Game


anothermeanotherperson

PostPosted: Mon Jan 16, 2006 3:55 pm


i'm not a poet. so whenever i write it is always short but i don't really care because i like my short poems anyways. here goes.

ME

i peel my skin
and bleed new blood
to wash away my colors
i left behind my sanity
and i found a new idenity
i feel relief
and a sense of being free
i am happy of finally being me
PostPosted: Thu Jan 19, 2006 10:55 am


no one have any more poems?

Sildrag


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PostPosted: Thu Jan 19, 2006 12:56 pm


umm...no tnx..not in the mood tnx for the pol anyway
PostPosted: Thu Jan 19, 2006 1:45 pm


I wrote this piece just this past summer. I had a cousin who went into rehab because he was an alchoholic. Well, he's doing much better now. Thats how I was inspired to write this piece, but instead of making it deep like so many of my other's, I decided to make it kind of comedic. biggrin

Addiction


One hit, and I slip in a dark realm of depression.
Do I have a problem? That isn't the question.
I DO have a problem..... The 1st step to recovery.
Im in love with a substance, that isn't in love wit me.
Sudden rush to my viens, 1st pain and then pleasure.
My temporary fullfilment, is to great to measure.
I shake when I lack it. I quiver. I foam.
When my brain gets distracted. This gives her a home.
But how to make this craving, no longer a need.
I cant fight this damn thing. I'ts stronger than ME.
Day 2, keep it cool, get rid of my stash
place that crap in the garbage, then take out the trash.
WAIT. I just heard my name.... and some laughin and s**t.
Am I going insane, or just imaginin this??
Day 3, tyme to breathe, create a diversion
A distraction, Im feeling the NEED re~emergin
Write a rhyme? read a book? join a group of some sort??
Thats it!!! I'll find others, it's off to day four.
Day 5, I confide into those seeming equivalant
Who face the same fear, who's coping, to live wit it.
Day 6, I feel sick, but my temps ordinary
Day 7 seein visions, that are much more than scary
Can't concentrate on day 8, and day 9... LOST MY MIND
10th day to my dismay was the last 4 ALL COMBINED
Day 11 I tried finding strength in a friend.
Day 12, I gave up.
now Im addicted
AGAIN.

-=Cha^0^s_G3ar=-


theasianjapan

PostPosted: Thu Jan 19, 2006 2:10 pm


I dont write poems but i write lkyrics so i guess that close enough
The never ending love

Thinking all this time
of what you mean to me
it i had the strenghth to tell the words
to know i can't live without you you here by my side
i'd give is all away just to see you smile
i only
i only wish to see you there
in the moonlight thouching your face
hearts racing
it beats fast
i wanna hear
i wanna hear your heart sing
heart sing these words out loud
because i love you
just need one chance to makeit through
before the last beat of my heart
till it all falls apart
to a million pieces it shatters
my love i wish it could be you
wont you say the words i love you
i'd lie and wait
wait and cry
for the day you say these words
i love you
i wanna hear
i wanna hear your heart sing
heart sing these words out loud
because i love you
if i had the strenght to tell the words
to know i can't live without you here by my side
i'd give it all away just to see you smile
i only
i only wish to see you there
in the moonlight touching your face
i wanna hear
i wanna hear your heart sing
heart sing those words out loud
i love you
till the very end
when are hearts stop beating and reach its end
i will still keep loving you
PostPosted: Thu Jan 19, 2006 2:23 pm


@Bamboowitch
Hey, thanks for the comment! I really appreciate it. ^^

@Seijin
Yup, I really suck at French for a citizen in a French area who has been going to a French school ever since kindergarten. gonk I don't have any problems with the "orthographe". But the grammar gets to me often. There wasn't any grammar mistakes in my poem because the sentences were so simple and not complicated. I can understand the language perfectly, it's just I have trouble speaking sometimes. I have no choice but to speak French since the enviroment and the people around me are French.

Night Rain55


Aznprince717

PostPosted: Wed Mar 22, 2006 3:23 pm


hey wat up Bj nice poem every body
PostPosted: Wed Mar 22, 2006 6:47 pm


Um...Yeah. I wrote this a loooong time ago, so the theme isn't quite with the current season. ^-^;;

Snow Angel

You came to me in desolation
As I lay asleep in isolation
Your skin beautiful and aglow
An angel born from snow

You wrapped your arms around my chest
I held your hands fast as I became obsessed
You kissed away my tears
And relinquished all my fears

You once said goodbye,
With tragedy in your eyes
Claiming that you wouldn't believe
When it was really time for you to leave

You kissed me on a warm day
And whispered that you couldn't stay
I cried out if you left me, I would die
And when you melted away, so did I

XShadowMistressX


Liz-DUHpInAy

PostPosted: Mon Feb 26, 2007 7:24 pm


well yeah ive been writing poems for quite a while now, and i love to express myself so yeah here's one i called If We Were To Meet Again. this poem is an inspiration of love and benevolent concern for others. it doesnt have to be about some boy or girl that you love but it could be about someone who u cared deeply about that moved or has passed away.

If Were Were To Meet Again


To believe in love, is not to lose myself.
Praying that you would come back to me.
Deep inside I knew they couldn’t help.
Wondering if this is how it’s suppose to be.
Whenever I look up to the sky,
I want to live a happy life without you.
That’s the only thing I want even if I had to say bye.
Please let there be a place that I can return to.

I want to be your angel enveloping all of your pains.
So you won’t feel alone even if I’m far away.
Maybe one day I’ll search for you even if it rains.
To tell you the words I have to say.
Will I be able to whisper these words?
I might not speak out these overflowing feelings.
My mind is silent, but my heart wants to be heard.
But why is it that these words that I am shielding?

I just hope that you’ll remain the same.
Even if your dreams begin to vanish.
All you have to do is call out my name.
I’ll recreate everything that you wished.
Just like when I was scared, you would always defend.
I’m just not strong enough to ease my tears.
Only if we were to meet again,
these words I have to say, you’ll be able to hear.
PostPosted: Tue Mar 13, 2007 4:05 pm


I wrote this while i was in my emo mood and yea..i wrote wut was happening to me tht night i wrote it.

MY ENDING LIFE. <3

All I feel is pain and burning,
My life is now ending,
Now I here yelling and screaming,
And now Im just fading.



My tears won't make you come,
But maybe my broken heart will,
So we have to do what needs to be done,
There's only one we should kill.



Im starting to here voices in my head,
Thinking of all of those lies,
Do they think Im dead?
I guess I am the one that dies.



As everyone scatters my ashes,
Only one found the knife,
I now start to see flashes,
Here is now the end of my life.<3

XxScreamingxTearsxX

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