First Aid for: Lea Florens

[lea florens]

Headshots:I'm bad at drawing hats.
 

[lea florens]

Freebie:
 

[lea florens]

Art trade.
 

[thug to the limit]

All of your comfort zone seems to be graphic anatomical,, and graphic children. I was wondering have you tried any other category or styles (organic, anatomical, mix, and heroic, realistic, or animal?)?  

[lea florens]

thug to the limit

All of your comfort zone seems to be graphic anatomical,, and graphic children. I was wondering have you tried any other category or styles (organic, anatomical, mix, and heroic, realistic, or animal?)?

I'm not sure I understand what you mean. Can you explain, or give some examples?  

[Umbra Tiger]

The hair on the freebie one is awesome, very detailed and nice, but the head is a little to long? (I believe that's the word I'm looking for)
This is what I mean;

The face just looks a little far over c:
And of course the neck would need to be a big bigger to compensate~

But other than that, the rest of your headshots look great :]

 

[Errol McGillivray]

Lea Florens

thug to the limit

All of your comfort zone seems to be graphic anatomical,, and graphic children. I was wondering have you tried any other category or styles (organic, anatomical, mix, and heroic, realistic, or animal?)?

I'm not sure I understand what you mean. Can you explain, or give some examples?

Pick something you've never drawn and draw it.

I agree with him. No one can get very far without leaving home (comfort zone).  

[thug to the limit]

Errol McGillivray

Lea Florens

thug to the limit

All of your comfort zone seems to be graphic anatomical,, and graphic children. I was wondering have you tried any other category or styles (organic, anatomical, mix, and heroic, realistic, or animal?)?

I'm not sure I understand what you mean. Can you explain, or give some examples?

Pick something you've never drawn and draw it.

I agree with him. No one can get very far without leaving home (comfort zone).

This sums it up without me explaining majority of the aspects of concept art lol XD  

[lea florens]

Woah, lots of replies. Haven't checked back in ages, thanks muchly for the comments!

@Errol McGillivray: I understand what you're saying...will think about it. I draw for fun, and would rather prefer the drawing process be relaxing rather than stress-inducing, if you know what I mean.

@thug to the limit: Yes, it makes sense now, thank you.

@Umbra Tiger: Aha...I see what you're getting at. Thanks for the helpful pic!




 

[NotchYourProblem]

d shiny contest entry is just awesome
u shudstep out of ur comfort zone more  

[lea florens]

hinata1618

d shiny contest entry is just awesome
u shudstep out of ur comfort zone more

Thanks. Will keep your advice in mind. smile  

[lea florens]

The not-so-daily drawings.


 

[Errol McGillivray]

Nice, strong, silhouettes on these. Especially the first one.

From the top of her head, draw a line straight down. This is called a "plumb line". Where it hits the floor is where her foot needs to be in order for her to balance herself.

The second is cute, but cut the coat back a little where it crosses the sword. When you black it all in, we should see that he's holding the sword. The coat would cover that up. I would also suggest keeping the floor flat in perspective. This will bring him off the page a little.  

[lea florens]

Errol McGillivray

Nice, strong, silhouettes on these. Especially the first one.

From the top of her head, draw a line straight down. This is called a "plumb line". Where it hits the floor is where her foot needs to be in order for her to balance herself.

The second is cute, but cut the coat back a little where it crosses the sword. When you black it all in, we should see that he's holding the sword. The coat would cover that up. I would also suggest keeping the floor flat in perspective. This will bring him off the page a little.

Hiya Errol, thanks for the detailed crit! (and explanatory diagrams, too!)
I get what you mean by the first - she doesn't look so balanced.
The second threw me completely on a loop though...I'm guessing you mean the right foot should be bigger than the left, as it is closer to the 'front'.
I could be wrong.  

[lea florens]

Trying out semi-realism. Click for image.