Renredlinedokay first off for clothing creases i suggest you try putting a blanket over something like a couch or a chair and drawing it you'll really get a feel for where creases and folds should go if you do this a couple of times
as for coloring ahehe
sweatdrop sorry im still a newb at coloring so i dont really have any expert tips
and now onto corrections:
these are the areas i focused on
hair~ there was way too much volume up front and not enough in the back and it looked really odd so i took off some from the front and added it to the back
chest~ the chest area look thin so i widened the area a bit
feet~ the feet not sure if you finished but it looked too erm well thin
so i thickened them up a bit O uO
Faustfirst oneokay if cropped out the other ones and just did the sketch cause
well all the other stuff were purtified and i didnt wanna mess with them XD
uhm i basically explained what was wrong in the redlining
but these are the things i really want you to see
hand~ it looked all messed up the pinky is not the same length as other fingers if youre unsure about hands stop for a minute and look at your hands O uO their the best references you could have
distancing: things further back should be placed different as things in the back, like that bent left arm the elbow should be a bit higher than the right one O uO
right leg: the knee was placed wrong and it just made the whole thing look like it was broken DX so i fixed that for you O uO
2ndthis one i really liked not that many anatomy mistakes here!! good job!! ;D
~the only thing that really made my eyes go grawrr
was the boobs XD haha im no expert on boobs but when i see
un even ones i go crazy
xd left foot~ was too big and its further back so it should look smaller than the one up front ^^
