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Posted: Sat Jan 05, 2008 6:45 pm
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Posted: Sun Jan 06, 2008 9:56 pm
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Posted: Sun Jan 06, 2008 11:57 pm
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Posted: Mon Jan 07, 2008 7:15 pm
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Posted: Sat Jan 19, 2008 12:45 am
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Okay...this is my first time actually commenting here, but I couldn't help but make some pointers for you.
First of all - the black section of the closure in front where it passes over the top of the chest is very distracting from the actual lines of the top. I think perhaps, if you moved them slightly and curved them more so they follow the line of the body and not look like stray lines. To me it looks very odd and draws from the natural line of the figure.
Second - the belly button needs to be moved up, it should be below the natural waist line.
Third - you should define a little musculature along the abdomen so it appears a little less flat, if you want to put it that way. O_o;
Other than that, you are on the right track. Your shading could use some more depth, especially on the metal pieces, but it's still looking pretty awesome. 8D When you start on your next piece, be sure to keep in mind the length of the neck, the perspective of the body, and the direction of your light source, as well as the color, brightness, and expanse of the source. Take care for now~. Keep up the good work.
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Posted: Sat Jan 19, 2008 11:15 am
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Posted: Tue Jan 22, 2008 5:05 pm
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Tweaked it a bit, but I didn't add everything 'cause I was a little uncertain.
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Also, new sketch:
![User Image](https://img.photobucket.com/albums/v634/Ishrie/upsidedown.png) Sorry that her fingers got chopped off at the end of the page like that... I didn't fix it in MS before I posted it because I'll probably end up reworking the sketch in pencil a lot anyway, and I'd rather finish the hand in the final edition of the sketch.
@Xyirii: Thanks for commenting! I put the belly button up higher -tried- messing with the shading on her skin, but I don't think that it's very visible. What do you think I should do to add more depth? As for the lines on the chest... you mean the black part of the Solar Headdress, right? Pomato Soup already mentioned it, but I guess they look a lot worse than I originally thought. I'll start on them.
@Phoonty: Thanks for stopping by. I added a little more white and messed with the shading a bit, do you think it looks better? As for the breasts... It was a little intentional, because when the shoulder raises it also pulls up the breast attached to it, but I might have overdone it... I'll lower it a bit.
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Posted: Wed Jan 23, 2008 9:58 pm
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