Welcome to Gaia! ::

Shinobi Nations ( Naruto Rp Guild )

Back to Guilds

Gaia's most ambitious guild. Now updating! 

Tags: Naruto, Boruto, Villages, Ninja, Shinobi 

Reply ☆[3} Approval Area :: Post Requests Here
★ Profile and Negotiable PAs Section Goto Page: [] [<<] [<<] [<] 1 2 3 ... 331 332 333 334 335 336 ... 361 362 363 364 [>] [>>] [»|]

Quick Reply

Enter both words below, separated by a space:

Can't read the text? Click here

Submit

Jubellation

Genius

PostPosted: Tue Oct 24, 2017 8:45 am
Resubmitting because I wanted to fix my Custom PA.
Also don’t I have another PA since the Heat Resistant is passive from my bloodline?


User Image
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|ρ є r ѕ σ η α ℓ • ∂ α т α|├▬
Full Name: Taiyō Hageshī
Nickname: Tai
Age: 14
Birthdate: The 13th of November
Gender: Male

Height: 5'3
Weight: 102 lbs.

Nindo:
Personality: Taiyo is pragmatic, with an amoral philosophy for life.
Village: Konohagakure
Title: Genin
Rank: D - Rank
First Class: Bloodline
____Discipline Blood Knight
Second Class: Bloodline
____Discipline Thoroughbred

▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|c σ м в α т • ∂ α т α|├▬
Bloodline: Shakuton | Scorch Release

Chakra Pool: 270
Stamina Pool: 250
Chakra Element: Fuuton | Katon | Shakuton
Chakra Color: White Gold
Chakra Materialization: Fiery Aura

Passive Status Increases:
• Strength ► {Total Bonus}
→ {Where does this come from?}
• Speed ► {Total Bonus}
→ {Where does this come from?}
• Reflex ► {Total Bonus}
→ {Where does this come from?}
• Fortitude ► {Total Bonus}
→ {Where does this come from?}

Strengths:
• Close Combat
• Bloodline Techniques
Weaknesses:
• Too smart for his own good
• Lack of empathy/sympathy
Fears:
• Not living up to his family's expectations
• Falling in love

Reductions:
• Additionally, the cost to perform bloodline techniques is reduced by 10 chakra, to a minimum of 5. [ Bloodline Specialization ]
• Learn bloodline techniques one (1) post faster. [ Bloodline Class ]
Personal Attributes:
• Heat Resistant: Shakuton users are accustomed to heat and humidity, and thus are not offset by such climates or Katon techniques.
( Refers to actual heat; not damage dealt by fire or fire techniques. )
• Truly Blessed: Granted +20 to Chakra Pool. ( increases with rank)

▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|c α r є є r • ∂ α т α|├▬
Ryo: 両0
AC: 0

Missions Complete:
D Rank :: 0
C Rank :: 0
B Rank :: 0
A Rank :: 0
S Rank :: 0

Crafting Trees
• {First Tree Here} || → {Current Title}
• {Second Tree Here} || → {Current Title}
• {Third Tree Here} || → {Current Title}
• {Fourth Tree Here} || → {Current Title}

Crafting Jobs Complete:
D Rank :: 0
C Rank :: 0
B Rank :: 0
A Rank :: 0
S Rank :: 0

Job Titles
• {Job} || → {Current Title}
• {Job} || → {Current Title}

Job Missions Complete:
D Rank :: 0
C Rank :: 0
B Rank :: 0
A Rank :: 0
S Rank :: 0

Limitations: {How many of each technique you can learn. Refer to class info}
• Ninjutsu : : 00 / 04
• Genjutsu : : 00 / 02
• Taijutsu Styles: : 00 / 01
• Bukijutsu Styles: : 00 / 01

▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|ω є α ρ σ η • ∂ α т α|├▬
Weapon Type: Bo Staff
Weapon Range: 71 in.
Weapon Weight: 30 lbs.
Weapon Size: Long
Weapon Location: On back when not carried


▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|ι η ν є η т σ r у|├▬
• x10 Shuriken, x5 Smoke Pellets, 5 Kunai

▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|т є c н η ι q υ є ѕ|├▬
▬▬┤|N i n j u t s u

Maruton:
• Henge no Jutsu [ Transformation Technique ]
• Kawarimi no Jutsu [ Substitution Technique ]
• Bushin no Jutsu [ Clone Technique ]
• Suimen Hokou no Waza [ Act of Water Surface Walking ]
• Kinobori no Waza [ Act of Tree Climbing ]
• Kai [ Release ]

Katon {Katon, Suiton, Raiton, Doton, Fuuton}


Fuuton {Katon, Suiton, Raiton, Doton, Fuuton} {If only one element, remove section}


Shakuton


▬▬┤|G e n j u t s u

{Your first Type's name} {Illusory, Enchantment, Chained, or Instance}


{Your second Type's name} {Illusory, Enchantment, Chained, or Instance}


▬▬┤|T a i j u t s u

Sazanami


▬▬┤|B u k i j u t s u

{Style name here}
• {Stage progression / techniques learned}

▬▬┤|F o r m l e s s S t y l e s

Current Slots Available → 02 // 02
Locked Formless
• {Training Links}
Slots Used
• _______ → || [X] {Please include links for training}

▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|н ι ѕ т σ r у|├▬
From birth there was certain expectations of Taiyo being born into the Hageshi Clan, a prominent family of the Scorch Release Kekkei Genkai. The youngest of 3, an older brother and sister. Taiyo was special though. Every so few generations of the Hageshi Clan, a child presents itself bearing the mark of the dragon. The bearer of this mark is said to have been blessed by the Sun God, and is expected to be prodigious. At an early age, Taiyo was trained by his family to ensure his natural skill and talents did not waste away. This title, did not come without issues however. Taiyo was respected by others in his clan, but they harbored envy in secret. This lead to an attempt on his life, which ended in both failure and misery. Taiyo's older brother gave his life to protect his little brother, succumbing to multiple injuries obtained during the attempt. Thereafter, it was decided that he would go to live with his sister in Konohagakure, until things blew over.
 
PostPosted: Tue Oct 24, 2017 12:55 pm
Resubmitting/Respec of Classes.

User Image
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|ρ є r ѕ σ η α ℓ • ∂ α т α|├▬
Full Name: Ayame Araki
Nickname: -
Age: 18
Birthdate: 4-13
Gender: Female

Height: 5'6''
Weight: 118lbs

Nindo: --
Personality: Disciplined through her beliefs and her upbringing, Ayame has a lot of self-control with herself and her habits to do what she must and not what she shouldn't. She's the living opposite of a lazy person, always taking the initiative over her own desires. Expressing interest in different cultures, it's become a guilty pleasure of her's to experience something new in the world.

As someone who is intrigued by the unknown, she is also well interested in knowledge and information no matter how mundane or useless it may seem - for it is that knowledge that keeps history going. She's always interested in the stories of scholars, minstrels and even a religious devout, always seeking to learn new tales of the world and other views opposite of her own. With others she's not afraid to ask another person what they may have seen or heard, be it rumor or an elaborate tale to factual knowledge and topics worthy of study. Sometimes however, it's the factual inaccuracies that irk her the most if she feels confident in knowing what may be true.

She is a proud woman and is not afraid to admit as such, yet this often cuts both ways - not always in the right ways. As a person she holds great pride in knowledge and any feats she may accomplish yet criticism is one thing she remains sensitive to. Ayame is constantly striving for a sense of bettering herself and sometimes when she feels she has done something right it may very well not seem as such to others. For her proud stance, she's quite conscious of other's opinions as well.

Village: Leaf
Title: Genin
Rank: D-Rank
First Class: Bukijutsu X
____DisciplineSamurai
Samurai: You follow Bushidō, the "Way of the Warrior." Due to the physical control a samurai must display, you have a moderate resistance to Touch-based Genjutsu you physically come in contact with, and your tempered body allows you to wear thick armor that a ninja would otherwise be dragged to their knees by. Samurai suffer no drawbacks from wearing armor. Additionally, you start with the following four (4) techniques, rather than the six (6) most ninja do; Bushi Ken no Jutsu [ Samurai Sabre Technique, ] Shunshin no Jutsu [ Body Flicker Technique, ] Kai [ Release, ] and Kawarimi no Jutsu [ Substitution Technique. ].

Second Class: Performer X
____DisciplineEmotional Content - Singing & Dancing
Emotional Content: The user is able to make fantastic illusions appear by performing on their instrument. This ability comes at the cost of not being able to perform ninjutsu through use of performance or instrument. Can perform B rank genjutsu and lower at D - rank, A rank at C - rank, and S rank at B - rank. At A - rank, all illusions cost 5 less chakra to perform if performed through a instrument or performance. at S - rank, illusions cost 10 less chakra if performed through instrument or performance. Allowed to convert Genjutsu slots into Style slots at a rate of 10 to 1. By selecting this discipline, increase the total number of Genjutsu gained per rank, including D - rank, by two [+2].

▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|c σ м в α т • ∂ α т α|├▬
Bloodline: The Raigyo Clan, the Kihakugan
XXXXSource: X

Chakra Pool: 350
Stamina Pool: 140
Chakra Element: Wind, Fire
Chakra Color: White (Base) | Pink, Red, Purple to Violet (Visual Change)
Chakra Materialization: Ayame's Chakra fluctuates when used in jutsu of any sort, it takes a visual appearance of a white fog when released outside of any specialized technique. The chakra fog is harmless when released and only proves to be a visual effect. Yet, when she uses her Kekkei Genkai to influence it, it acts as a medium for her Emotives and follows the PA: Enchanting Aura. Her chakra visibly ebbs and flows with her usual movement when she chooses to create a visual flair with a translucent trail flowing with her shifting between blue, red, violet and pink. Ayame's eyes also change slightly when exerting her chakra relating to her bloodline or elemental techniques with hues of violet and pink.

Passive Status Increases:
• Strength ► 0
→ N/A
• Speed ► Greatly increased (+4)
Hagane no Shunkan Stage 4
• Reflex ► 0
→ N/A
• Fortitude ► 0
→ N/A

Strengths:
• Adaptable and diverse combat -- from blade to jutsu and illusions.
• Potent manipulation techniques, emotives and illusions to those in eyesight.
Weaknesses:
• Extensive physical combat & exertion.
• Overspecialized opponents, her strengths can be offset by a more focused opponent.
• While her element is Fire, her Flowers are still naturally weak to Flames (both chakra and mundane).
Fears:
• Arachnophobia & Other similar creatures. (Scorpions, Bugs, Etc)
• Achievemephobia. (Fear of Failure)

Reductions:
• Learn Ninjutsu & Genjutsu [1] post faster. (Bloodline)
• Learn Genjutsu one [1] post faster. (Performer)
• Learn Ninjutsu one [1] post faster. (Performer)
• Learn Bukijutsu one [1] post faster. (Bukijutsu)

Personal Attributes:
• Natural Flexibility -> Ayame specializes in a wide variety of techniques, and has become quite adept with her way of the sword. +1 Bukijutsu Slot

• Enchanting Aura -> In addition to the Pheromones and Scents of the Raigyo Clan, Ayame's chakra nature is intoxicating to others even without a medium. When manifesting chakra, the aura can be used as a catalyst for Raigyo Emotives that would otherwise require a medium of flowers. Using it in this matter becomes a Complex cost, taking Stamina as well as Chakra. It cannot affect further than Fifty feet, beyond this range the aura lacks any effect. Use of Emotives and Floral jutsu outside of the Chakra Manifestation's effect are independent of one another. This doesn't create or utilize any floral jutsu on its own, only acting as a medium for Emotives.

• Dojutsu usage allows for Eyesight based Ninjutsu for 50% extra the cost, additionally the user's sight's unable to be picked up by another Dojutsu such as the Sharingan. (Bloodline Perk)


▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|c α r є є r • ∂ α т α|├▬
Ryo: 0両
AC: 0

Missions Complete:
D Rank :: 0
C Rank :: 0
B Rank :: 0
A Rank :: 0
S Rank :: 0

Crafting Trees
• {First Tree Here} || → {Current Title}
• {Second Tree Here} || → {Current Title}
• {Third Tree Here} || → {Current Title}
• {Fourth Tree Here} || → {Current Title}

Crafting Jobs Complete:
D Rank :: 0
C Rank :: 0
B Rank :: 0
A Rank :: 0
S Rank :: 0

Job Titles
• {Job} || → {Current Title}
• {Job} || → {Current Title}

Job Missions Complete:
D Rank :: 0
C Rank :: 0
B Rank :: 0
A Rank :: 0
S Rank :: 0

Limitations:
• Ninjutsu [Null] : : 00 / 04
• Ninjutsu [Fire] : : 00 / 04
• Ninjutsu [Wind] : : 00 / 04
• Ninjutsu [Buki] : : 00 / 02
• Genjutsu [Style] : : 00 / 06
• Genjutsu [Style] : : 00 / 06

• Bukijutsu Styles: : 00 / 02


▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|ω є α ρ σ η • ∂ α т α|├▬
Weapon Type: Katana
Weapon Range: 63 cm
Weapon Weight: 1.2 kg
Weapon Size: Medium
Weapon Location: Hip
• Generic & Basic Katana

▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|ι η ν є η т σ r у|├▬
• Basic Clothing & Personal Jewelry
• 10 Shuriken
• 5 Caltrops
• Utility Knife

▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|т є c н η ι q υ є ѕ|├▬
▬▬┤|N i n j u t s u

Null ✦ Maruton
    E Rank

    D Rank
      Shunshin no Jutsu [Body Flicker Technique]
      Japanese Name [English Name] X

    C Rank
      Japanese Name [English Name] X
      Japanese Name [English Name] X

    B Rank
      Japanese Name [English Name] X
      Japanese Name [English Name] X

    A Rank
      Japanese Name [English Name] X
      Japanese Name [English Name] X

    S Rank
      Japanese Name [English Name] X
      Japanese Name [English Name] X


Wind ✦ Fuuton
    E Rank
      Japanese Name [English Name] X
      Japanese Name [English Name] X

    D Rank
      Japanese Name [English Name] X
      Japanese Name [English Name] X

    C Rank
      Japanese Name [English Name] X
      Japanese Name [English Name] X

    B Rank
      Japanese Name [English Name] X
      Japanese Name [English Name] X

    A Rank
      Japanese Name [English Name] X
      Japanese Name [English Name] X

    S Rank
      Japanese Name [English Name] X
      Japanese Name [English Name] X


Fire ✦ Katon
    E Rank
      Japanese Name [English Name] X
      Japanese Name [English Name] X

    D Rank
      Japanese Name [English Name] X
      Japanese Name [English Name] X

    C Rank
      Japanese Name [English Name] X
      Japanese Name [English Name] X

    B Rank
      Japanese Name [English Name] X
      Japanese Name [English Name] X

    A Rank
      Japanese Name [English Name] X
      Japanese Name [English Name] X

    S Rank
      Japanese Name [English Name] X
      Japanese Name [English Name] X


Flower Jutsu ✦ Kekkei Genkai
    E Rank
      Japanese Name [English Name] X
      Japanese Name [English Name] X

    D Rank
      Japanese Name [English Name] X
      Japanese Name [English Name] X

    C Rank
      Japanese Name [English Name] X
      Japanese Name [English Name] X

    B Rank
      Japanese Name [English Name] X
      Japanese Name [English Name] X

    A Rank
      Japanese Name [English Name] X
      Japanese Name [English Name] X

    S Rank
      Japanese Name [English Name] X
      Japanese Name [English Name] X


Emotives ✦ Kekkei Genkai
    E Rank
      Eizou Kihaku no Jutsu [The Art of Reflecting the Soul] X
      Japanese Name [English Name] X
      Japanese Name [English Name] X

    D Rank
      Japanese Name [English Name] X
      Japanese Name [English Name] X

    C Rank
      Japanese Name [English Name] X
      Japanese Name [English Name] X

    B Rank
      Japanese Name [English Name] X
      Japanese Name [English Name] X

    A Rank
      Japanese Name [English Name] X
      Japanese Name [English Name] X

    S Rank
      Japanese Name [English Name] X
      Japanese Name [English Name] X



▬▬┤|G e n j u t s u

Genjutsu ✦ Enchantment
    E Rank
      Japanese Name [English Name] X
      Japanese Name [English Name] X

    D Rank
      Japanese Name [English Name] X
      Japanese Name [English Name] X

    C Rank
      Japanese Name [English Name] X
      Japanese Name [English Name] X

    B Rank
      Japanese Name [English Name] X
      Japanese Name [English Name] X

    A Rank
      Japanese Name [English Name] X
      Japanese Name [English Name] X

    S Rank
      Japanese Name [English Name] X
      Japanese Name [English Name] X


Genjutsu ✦ Chained
    E Rank
      Japanese Name [English Name] X
      Japanese Name [English Name] X

    D Rank
      Japanese Name [English Name] X
      Japanese Name [English Name] X

    C Rank
      Japanese Name [English Name] X
      Japanese Name [English Name] X

    B Rank
      Japanese Name [English Name] X
      Japanese Name [English Name] X

    A Rank
      Japanese Name [English Name] X
      Japanese Name [English Name] X

    S Rank
      Japanese Name [English Name] X
      Japanese Name [English Name] X



▬▬┤|T a i j u t s u


Style Here X
    Stage 1 X




    Stage 2 X




    Stage 3 X






    Stage 4 X







    Stage 5




    Stage 6






▬▬┤|B u k i j u t s u


Hagane no Shunkan X
    Stage 1 X
      ▹Basic Stab ~ X [Simple]
      ▹Linear Step ~ E [Simple]
      ▹Reinforcement ~ X [Spirit]

    Stage 2 X
      ▹Deflection ~ X [Spirit]
      ▹Forward Grind ~ X [Simple]
      ▹Pivot Block ~ X [Simple]

    Stage 3 X
      ▹Calligraphy ~ C [Simple]
      ▹Extension ~ C [Spirit]
      ▹Solid Footing ~ C [Complex]
      ▹Twin Blade ~ C [Spirit]
      ▹Thread Walking ~ C [Training]

    Stage 4 X
      ▹Advance of Steel ~ B [Simple]
      ▹Brush Stroke ~ B [Spirit]
      ▹Disarming ~ X [Simple]
      ▹Hydra Strike ~ B [Spirit]
      ▹Illusory Double ~ B [Complex]
      ▹Swordslinger ~ B [Simple]

    Stage 5




    Stage 6





▬▬┤|F o r m l e s s S t y l e s

XXXXXXSlots Total: 02 // 02

Locked Formless
° Katana
    • D Rank - Base - Body Rank
    • C Rank - Trained/Pre-Level X
    • B Rank - Trained/Pre-Level X
    • A Rank - Not Trained
    • S Rank - Not Trained


Formless Slots

° Style Here
    • D Rank - Not Trained
    • C Rank - Not Trained
    • B Rank - Not Trained
    • A Rank - Not Trained
    • S Rank - Not Trained

° Style Here
    • D Rank - Not Trained
    • C Rank - Not Trained
    • B Rank - Not Trained
    • A Rank - Not Trained
    • S Rank - Not Trained

° Style Here
    • D Rank - Not Trained
    • C Rank - Not Trained
    • B Rank - Not Trained
    • A Rank - Not Trained
    • S Rank - Not Trained


▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|н ι ѕ т σ r у|├▬

The history of Ayame is one with the Araki family, a once apart of the Raigyo clan from the Tea Country. The Araki name instead has settled and has more roots in the Land of Fire than it does the home country of the bloodline. Few in the family have the lineage, often it skipping a generation as it had with Ayame's parents while her power awakened with its fullest. A family of medics, merchants and craftsmen, the Araki are a peculiar mix of all walks of life for the civilian while few become shinobi -- usually those who have the kekkei genkai in their blood. Much of the family were botanists and religious devouts with the minority actually trained soldiers and shinobi.

Ayame had lived an austere lifestyle for much of her childhood all the way up to her early admission to the academy to become a full fledged genin. She recieved the basic classes for education, tactics and ninjutsu arts while later in the years she learned more specialized knowledge such as illusionary arts, her bloodline and basic swordsmanship. After graduation from the academy, Ayame had gone on her way to become an official genin of the Leaf Village.
 

Lewd Samaritan

Timid Sleuth


Somnus Aeternam

Adorable Trendsetter

11,875 Points
  • Angelic Alliance 100
  • Party Animal 100
  • Ultimate Player 200
PostPosted: Tue Oct 24, 2017 1:58 pm
User Image - Blocked by "Display Image" Settings. Click to show.
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|ρ є r ѕ σ η α ℓ • ∂ α т α|├▬
Full Name: Shoko Yukimura
Nickname: Shosho

Age: 15
Birthdate: 9/1
Gender: Male

Height: 70 inches
Weight: 170 lb

Nindo: "Who needs Jutsu when you got Fists"
Personality: He punches things he doesn't like. He doesn't like much.
Slow-witted
Loyal to a fault
Courageous

Village: Konoha
Title: Genin
Rank: D-Rank
First Class: Taijutsu
Second Class: Taijutsu

▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|c σ м в α т • ∂ α т α|├▬
Bloodline: None - Power: +2 PA, +25 chakra/stamina a rank}

Chakra Pool: 175
Stamina Pool: 375
Chakra Element: Fire and Earth
Chakra Color: Dark blue
Chakra Materialization: A solid outer skin

Passive Status Increases:
• Strength ► {Total Bonus}

• Speed ► 3
→ Class
• Reflex ► 3
→ Class
• Fortitude ► {Total Bonus}


Strengths:
• Experienced Fighter
• Teamwork
Weaknesses:
• No ninjutsu (he can't even)
• Has to get close to do damage
Fears:
• Bugs
• Heights

Class Disciplines :
• Brawler
• Monk
Reductions:
• Learns Taijutsu 2 (+1 more from PA for a total of 3) post faster

Personal Attributes:
• What's Chakra? - As Shoko is all but hopeless in Ninjutsu and Genjutsu, these slots are transformed into Formless.
• A Natural Born Fighter - Shoko learns Taijutsu one post faster (minimum 1 post)
• Muscle Memory - Preforming and using the same repetitive moves allows Shoko to preform all Taijutsu related techs for 10 less stamina but all other techniques cost 5 more chakra to preform.
• Master of Many Styles - Shoko gains access to a second Locked Formless Style

▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|c α r є є r • ∂ α т α|├▬
Ryo: 両0
AC: 0

Missions Complete:
D Rank :: 0
C Rank :: 0
B Rank :: 0
A Rank :: 0
S Rank :: 0

Crafting Jobs Complete:
D Rank :: 0
C Rank :: 0
B Rank :: 0
A Rank :: 0
S Rank :: 0

Limitations:
• Ninjutsu : : 00 / 00
• Genjutsu : : 00 / 00
• Taijutsu Styles: : 00 / 02
• Bukijutsu Styles: : 00 / 00
• Formless Styles: : 00 / 02
• Formless Slots: : 00 / 04


▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|ω є α ρ σ η • ∂ α т α|├▬
Weapon Type: boot knife
Weapon Range: 5in
Weapon Weight: 2lb
Weapon Location: Boot

▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|ι η ν є η т σ r у|├▬
• 15 generic kunai

▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|т є c н η ι q υ є ѕ|├▬
▬▬┤|N i n j u t s u

Maruton:
• Henge no Jutsu [ Transformation Technique ]
• Kawarimi no Jutsu [ Substitution Technique ]
• Bushin no Jutsu [ Clone Technique ]
• Suimen Hokou no Waza [ Act of Water Surface Walking ]
• Kinobori no Waza [ Act of Tree Climbing ]
• Kai [ Release ]
• [Cultivation] (cultivation is a conversion of stamina to chakra, at a 10 chakra to 10 stamina conversion in any increment of 10.)



▬▬┤|T a i j u t s u

{Style name here}
• {Stage progression / techniques learned}
▬▬┤|F o r m l e s s S t y l e s

Current Slots Available → 00 // 04 {Find in Formless Style and Class information}
Locked Formless
• {Training Links}
Slots Used
• _______ → || [X] {Please include links for training}


▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|н ι ѕ т σ r у|├▬
Shoko was born to a poor dirt farmer, and honed his muscles working in the field to harvest mud cakes that he would sell every weekend in the nearby market. This made him strong, but not to smart. To quote a local village elder:
"He no smart but he strong like tractor." Through-out his youth and his early ninja training, Shoko continued to invest all of his time into strength and fighting, forgoing more advanced studies like "ninjutsu", whatever that was.
If he couldn't solve a problem, he simply smashed it with his fists.
BlackFruity
 
PostPosted: Wed Oct 25, 2017 8:24 am
PA Respec
RPC: Kaneo Mugen [ Profile ]

Original PA - Hard to Hit: Kaneo has mildly better Reflexes, but slightly worse Fortitude

New PA - Dedicated to the Sword: Kaneo gains one additional Bukijutsu style immediately, in addition he gains a Bukijutsu slot in place of the Bukijutsu class' Taijutsu slot when he meets the requirements to earn it.

Justification: Kaneo hasn't reached a rank or bukijutsu proficiency in which his stats increases came into effect. The bukijutsu slot falls in line with the 10 techs or 1 style rule, and the second part of that PA is just a slot for slot trade.
 

Rocket Punches

Dapper Hunter

2,775 Points
  • Hygienic 200
  • Treasure Hunter 100
  • Launch Party 100

Ergo War
Vice Captain

Enduring Guildsman

PostPosted: Thu Oct 26, 2017 12:47 am
Jubellation: You are correct, the Heat Resistant attribute is automatically given to Shakuton users, so you have an extra PA to fill. Apologies for not catching that earlier! The +20 Chakra Pool increase in Truly Blessed would have to be a flat bonus that doesn't scale with rank.

Katina: Approved.

Aaron: Currently asking about your PAs. Should hopefully have an answer soon.

Rocket Punches: Approved.


Jubellation

Sinful Katina

Underappreciated Aaron

Rocket Punches
 
PostPosted: Thu Oct 26, 2017 12:59 am
Approved.

Underappreciated Aaron
 

Ergo War
Vice Captain

Enduring Guildsman


Hurrak

Eternal Lop

PostPosted: Thu Oct 26, 2017 8:23 am
Jubellation
Resubmitting because I wanted to fix my Custom PA.
Also don’t I have another PA since the Heat Resistant is passive from my bloodline?



Let me help you there, i'm not approving anything just pointing you in the right direction;
I have a shakuton nin too, this is what I did for mine to clarify:

Bloodline Trait & Attribute:
• Shakuton users cannot be dehydrated by their own techniques, but can still be burnt.
• Heat Resistant: Shakuton users are accustomed to heat and humidity, and thus are not offset by such climates or Katon techniques. ( Refers to actual heat; not damage dealt by fire or fire techniques. )

Personal Attributes: (What you come up with)
• Clever Attribute Name: Adds [10] Ninjutsu Slots
• A Mermaid of Aya Town: Years of diving has increased Unki's length of holding her breath. While underwater, Unki may maintain stability for 3 Posts. If Unki is in combat, 2 posts only.  
PostPosted: Thu Oct 26, 2017 5:09 pm
User Image
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|ρ є r ѕ σ η α ℓ • ∂ α т α|├▬
Full Name: Noragnir Barith Wolfsttag
Nickname: Nor
Age: 16
Birthdate: January, 23
Gender: Male

Height: 6'8
Weight: 250 lbs

Nindo: "I walk the path of the hammer both creation, and destruction."
Personality: Noragnir is a rather quiet person most of the time often hidden in his thoughts giving him the appearance of someone who wants little to do with other. He is in truth simply thinking of his next crafting project, or a mission he must perform. He doesn't show this trait however when he has neither of these things to do, and is instead a joyful person always quick with a joke when the time comes. That said he is the kind of person who takes his jobs very seriously, and will put his life on the line for his fellow shinobi, and village.

Village: Sunagakure
Title: Genin
Rank: D-rank
First Class: Bukijutsu
____DisciplineMystic Hero: The user is much like a hybrid warrior, focusing on mixing ninjutsu into their personal arsenal. Through their great devotion to this path the user can cast ninjutsu without hand seals while wielding a weapon, D at D-rank, C at C-rank, B at B-rank, A at A-rank, and S at S-rank. These techniques maintain the same description and criteria to use, as well as require the same amount of time to mold the chakra through the weapon as would be needed to perform hand seals, meaning the techniques are not instantaneously cast. The user’s spirit is so strong, that they can utilize their physical bukijutsu techniques to negate ninjutsu techniques of the same rank or below.
Second Class: Worker
____DisciplineLegendary Worker: The user is able to gain a 5th title rank from every applicable Job tree. 'Training' for Legendary takes 10 posts of Job work, provides an additional 1 post off of job missions, and gives a Grandmaster NPC (of the same area) for usage. In addition, any item solo crafted (without an npc helper) is non-reproducible by non-Legendary titled crafters.

▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|c σ м в α т • ∂ α т α|├▬
Bloodline: None - Power: +2 PA, +25 chakra/stamina a rank}

Chakra Pool: 225
Stamina Pool: 225
Chakra Element: Katon, Doton
Chakra Color: A deep crimson
Chakra Materialization: His chakra take the form of a steady flame like a forge with the occasional sparks that fly off him like hammering metal on an anvil.

Passive Status Increases:
• Strength ► {Total Bonus}
→ {Where does this come from?}
• Speed ► {Total Bonus}
→ {Where does this come from?}
• Reflex ► {Total Bonus}
→ {Where does this come from?}
• Fortitude ► {Total Bonus}
→ {Where does this come from?}

Strengths:
• Weapons based closed combat
• Smithing
Weaknesses:
• Genjutsu
• Suiton
Fears:
• Snakes he is terrified of snakes.
• Not succeeding at the crafts of the Forge

Reductions:
• Learn Bukijutsu techniques one [1] post faster.

Personal Attributes:
• Forge Hardened - Years of helping his mother has made him more resilient to Heat hazards. (Takes +1 post for dehydration to start taking effect.)
• Metal in the blood - Crafting takes one less post
• Raised with the Blade - Learns Bukijutsu One post faster
• Spirit of the Forge - Reduces Chakra cost Katon by 5.

▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|c α r є є r • ∂ α т α|├▬
Ryo: 両{Money} {Start at zero}
AC: {Advancement credit} {Start at zero} {Additional information in mission board subforum}

Missions Complete:
D Rank :: 0 {All start at zero}
C Rank :: 0
B Rank :: 0
A Rank :: 0
S Rank :: 0

Crafting Trees
• Blacksmithing || → Apprentice (Class bonus)
• {Second Tree Here} || → {Current Title}
• {Third Tree Here} || → {Current Title}
• {Fourth Tree Here} || → {Current Title}

Crafting Jobs Complete:
D Rank :: 0 {All start at zero}
C Rank :: 0
B Rank :: 0
A Rank :: 0
S Rank :: 0

Job Titles
• {Job} || → {Current Title}
• {Job} || → {Current Title}

Job Missions Complete:
D Rank :: 0 {All start at zero}
C Rank :: 0
B Rank :: 0
A Rank :: 0
S Rank :: 0

Limitations: {How many of each technique you can learn. Refer to class info}
• Ninjutsu : : 00 / 03
• Genjutsu : : 00 / 01
• Taijutsu Styles: : 00 / 00
• Bukijutsu Styles: : 00 / 01

▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|ω є α ρ σ η • ∂ α т α|├▬
Weapon Type: two-handed Maul
Weapon Range: 24 inches
Weapon Weight: 12 lbs
Weapon Size: 5ft long the heavy maul head two hands across of heavy steel shaped for maximum impact.
Weapon Location: It is carried on the back.


▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|ι η ν є η т σ r у|├▬
• 10 Kunai
• 5 Shurakin
His Glasses
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|т є c н η ι q υ є ѕ|├▬
▬▬┤|N i n j u t s u

Maruton:
• Henge no Jutsu [ Transformation Technique ]
• Kawarimi no Jutsu [ Substitution Technique ]
• Bushin no Jutsu [ Clone Technique ]
• Suimen Hokou no Waza [ Act of Water Surface Walking ]
• Kinobori no Waza [ Act of Tree Climbing ]
• Kai [ Release ]

Katon


Doton




▬▬┤|G e n j u t s u

{Your first Type's name} {Illusory, Enchantment, Chained, or Instance}


{Your second Type's name} {Illusory, Enchantment, Chained, or Instance}


▬▬┤|T a i j u t s u

{Style name here}
• {Stage progression / techniques learned}

▬▬┤|B u k i j u t s u

{Style name here}
• {Stage progression / techniques learned}

▬▬┤|F o r m l e s s S t y l e s

Current Slots Available → 00 // 00 {Find in Formless Style and Class information}
Locked Formless
• {Training Links}
Slots Used
• _______ → || [X] {Please include links for training}

▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|н ι ѕ т σ r у|├▬
Noragnir was born to ninja parents one a crafteswoman of some note specializing in the making of weapons, and the other a man of skill with weapons. His parents taught him from a young age to respect the weapons of the world for even the smallest of knives could be a true weapon. He was also taught the basics of working the forge spending hours growing up helping his mother in her forge when not at the academy, or working with his father in the dojo. They both lit a fire in the young man a drive to show that one could be a skill fighter with weapons, and a crafter of them as well. He formed a craving to forge, and then use on of the greatest blades the villages have ever seen. This is where he stands now a newly graduated ninja the start of his journey to make his dream a reality.
 

Thelaos


Ergo War
Vice Captain

Enduring Guildsman

PostPosted: Thu Oct 26, 2017 7:39 pm
• Forge Hardened - Years of helping his mother has made him more resilient to Heat hazards.

This should be quantified in some way. I'd suggest something like one of the examples in the "poison" section of the PA Guide:

"• Poison: Resistance gain or delay rate by 1 encounter. Or, fully immune to 1 hazard, non-overwritable by the resistance factors."


Thelaos
 
PostPosted: Thu Oct 26, 2017 8:10 pm
Ergo War

Edited as requested hopefully it makes more sense now.  

Thelaos


Ergo War
Vice Captain

Enduring Guildsman

PostPosted: Thu Oct 26, 2017 8:42 pm
Approved.

Thelaos
User Image
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|ρ є r ѕ σ η α ℓ • ∂ α т α|├▬
Full Name: Noragnir Barith Wolfsttag
Nickname: Nor
Age: 16
Birthdate: January, 23
Gender: Male

Height: 6'8
Weight: 250 lbs

Nindo: "I walk the path of the hammer both creation, and destruction."
Personality: Noragnir is a rather quiet person most of the time often hidden in his thoughts giving him the appearance of someone who wants little to do with other. He is in truth simply thinking of his next crafting project, or a mission he must perform. He doesn't show this trait however when he has neither of these things to do, and is instead a joyful person always quick with a joke when the time comes. That said he is the kind of person who takes his jobs very seriously, and will put his life on the line for his fellow shinobi, and village.

Village: Sunagakure
Title: Genin
Rank: D-rank
First Class: Bukijutsu
____DisciplineMystic Hero: The user is much like a hybrid warrior, focusing on mixing ninjutsu into their personal arsenal. Through their great devotion to this path the user can cast ninjutsu without hand seals while wielding a weapon, D at D-rank, C at C-rank, B at B-rank, A at A-rank, and S at S-rank. These techniques maintain the same description and criteria to use, as well as require the same amount of time to mold the chakra through the weapon as would be needed to perform hand seals, meaning the techniques are not instantaneously cast. The user’s spirit is so strong, that they can utilize their physical bukijutsu techniques to negate ninjutsu techniques of the same rank or below.
Second Class: Worker
____DisciplineLegendary Worker: The user is able to gain a 5th title rank from every applicable Job tree. 'Training' for Legendary takes 10 posts of Job work, provides an additional 1 post off of job missions, and gives a Grandmaster NPC (of the same area) for usage. In addition, any item solo crafted (without an npc helper) is non-reproducible by non-Legendary titled crafters.

▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|c σ м в α т • ∂ α т α|├▬
Bloodline: None - Power: +2 PA, +25 chakra/stamina a rank}

Chakra Pool: 225
Stamina Pool: 225
Chakra Element: Katon, Doton
Chakra Color: A deep crimson
Chakra Materialization: His chakra take the form of a steady flame like a forge with the occasional sparks that fly off him like hammering metal on an anvil.

Passive Status Increases:
• Strength ► {Total Bonus}
→ {Where does this come from?}
• Speed ► {Total Bonus}
→ {Where does this come from?}
• Reflex ► {Total Bonus}
→ {Where does this come from?}
• Fortitude ► {Total Bonus}
→ {Where does this come from?}

Strengths:
• Weapons based closed combat
• Smithing
Weaknesses:
• Genjutsu
• Suiton
Fears:
• Snakes he is terrified of snakes.
• Not succeeding at the crafts of the Forge

Reductions:
• Learn Bukijutsu techniques one [1] post faster.

Personal Attributes:
• Forge Hardened - Years of helping his mother has made him more resilient to Heat hazards. (Takes +1 post for dehydration to start taking effect.)
• Metal in the blood - Crafting takes one less post
• Raised with the Blade - Learns Bukijutsu One post faster
• Spirit of the Forge - Reduces Chakra cost Katon by 5.

▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|c α r є є r • ∂ α т α|├▬
Ryo: 両{Money} {Start at zero}
AC: {Advancement credit} {Start at zero} {Additional information in mission board subforum}

Missions Complete:
D Rank :: 0 {All start at zero}
C Rank :: 0
B Rank :: 0
A Rank :: 0
S Rank :: 0

Crafting Trees
• Blacksmithing || → Apprentice (Class bonus)
• {Second Tree Here} || → {Current Title}
• {Third Tree Here} || → {Current Title}
• {Fourth Tree Here} || → {Current Title}

Crafting Jobs Complete:
D Rank :: 0 {All start at zero}
C Rank :: 0
B Rank :: 0
A Rank :: 0
S Rank :: 0

Job Titles
• {Job} || → {Current Title}
• {Job} || → {Current Title}

Job Missions Complete:
D Rank :: 0 {All start at zero}
C Rank :: 0
B Rank :: 0
A Rank :: 0
S Rank :: 0

Limitations: {How many of each technique you can learn. Refer to class info}
• Ninjutsu : : 00 / 03
• Genjutsu : : 00 / 01
• Taijutsu Styles: : 00 / 00
• Bukijutsu Styles: : 00 / 01

▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|ω є α ρ σ η • ∂ α т α|├▬
Weapon Type: two-handed Maul
Weapon Range: 24 inches
Weapon Weight: 12 lbs
Weapon Size: 5ft long the heavy maul head two hands across of heavy steel shaped for maximum impact.
Weapon Location: It is carried on the back.


▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|ι η ν є η т σ r у|├▬
• 10 Kunai
• 5 Shurakin
His Glasses
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|т є c н η ι q υ є ѕ|├▬
▬▬┤|N i n j u t s u

Maruton:
• Henge no Jutsu [ Transformation Technique ]
• Kawarimi no Jutsu [ Substitution Technique ]
• Bushin no Jutsu [ Clone Technique ]
• Suimen Hokou no Waza [ Act of Water Surface Walking ]
• Kinobori no Waza [ Act of Tree Climbing ]
• Kai [ Release ]

Katon


Doton




▬▬┤|G e n j u t s u

{Your first Type's name} {Illusory, Enchantment, Chained, or Instance}


{Your second Type's name} {Illusory, Enchantment, Chained, or Instance}


▬▬┤|T a i j u t s u

{Style name here}
• {Stage progression / techniques learned}

▬▬┤|B u k i j u t s u

{Style name here}
• {Stage progression / techniques learned}

▬▬┤|F o r m l e s s S t y l e s

Current Slots Available → 00 // 00 {Find in Formless Style and Class information}
Locked Formless
• {Training Links}
Slots Used
• _______ → || [X] {Please include links for training}

▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|н ι ѕ т σ r у|├▬
Noragnir was born to ninja parents one a crafteswoman of some note specializing in the making of weapons, and the other a man of skill with weapons. His parents taught him from a young age to respect the weapons of the world for even the smallest of knives could be a true weapon. He was also taught the basics of working the forge spending hours growing up helping his mother in her forge when not at the academy, or working with his father in the dojo. They both lit a fire in the young man a drive to show that one could be a skill fighter with weapons, and a crafter of them as well. He formed a craving to forge, and then use on of the greatest blades the villages have ever seen. This is where he stands now a newly graduated ninja the start of his journey to make his dream a reality.
 
PostPosted: Thu Oct 26, 2017 9:34 pm
It does seem you've fixed things in accordance to Fruity's suggestions. Approved.

Gilden Belecos

[Image needs to be fixed, Photobucket is being weird]
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|ρ є r ѕ σ η α ℓ • ∂ α т α|├▬
Full Name: Hotaru Gin
Nickname: Little Firefly
Age: 19
Birthdate: March 16
Gender: Female

Height: 4' 10"
Weight: 90 Pounds

Nindo: "Hammer every nail and tighten every screw!"
Personality: Caring, attentive, and busy. Hotaru is a hard working person, with plenty of resilience for someone of her clan. She takes care of others, to the best of her abilities, and will often grant mercy to a helpless foe.

Village: Sunagakure -> Konohagakure
Title: Genin
Rank: D
First Class: Worker
____Legendary SmithThe user is able to gain a 5th title rank from every applicable smithing tree. 'Training' for Legendary takes 10 posts of crafting work, provides an additional 1 post off of crafting times, and gives a Grandmaster NPC (of the same area) for usage. In addition, any item solo crafted (without an npc helper) is non-reproducible by non-Legendary titled smiths.
Second Class: Worker Specialization
____Balanced MasterThis discipline mimics one of the user's other class's non-chosen disciplines. (i.e. non-Worker Class) The Double Specialization perk for said class is not available for gaining. In addition, any jutsu learned can be paid for with either chakra, stamina, or a mix of the two. Any further chakra types are also subject to this. Recovery amounts for chakra and stamina are doubled while working, and working counts as relaxing.
____Lifetime DiscipleThis discipline is for those wishing to gain from a lifetime master, never to be one themselves until their master is deceased. Gaining knowledge from over the course of their studies, the disciple will receive twice the benefits from each of their master's smithing trees (up to their completed titles), while in the living presence of them. After their master's death, they will successfully pass on a permanent, one-quarter of the benefit to their own Lifetime Disciple, if any. (round up to the nearest applicable number, as designated in the smithing thread)

▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|c σ м в α т • ∂ α т α|├▬
Bloodline: Jinton : : Speed Release

Chakra Pool: 200
Stamina Pool: 200
Chakra Element: Fire, Lightning
Chakra Color: Silver
Chakra Materialization: Flame-Like Aura

Passive Status Increases:
• Strength ► 0
→ {Where does this come from?}
• Speed ► 0
→ {Where does this come from?}
• Reflex ► 0
→ {Where does this come from?}
• Fortitude ► 0
→ {Where does this come from?}

Strengths:
• Working (Mining, Smithing, etc.)
• Caring
Weaknesses:
• Close Combat
• Merciful
Fears:
• The slaughter of innocents
• Close Quarter Combat

Reductions:
• Mission -1 to -4 Posts (See Mission Expert PA)
• Mission -2 Posts
• Mission -2 Posts
• Blacksmithing E rank -1 Post
• Whitesmithing E rank -1 Post
Personal Attributes:
• Mission Expert (Bloodline Passive)

D ranked missions: -1 post to complete, +25 ryo
C ranked missions: -1 post to complete, +50 ryo
B ranked missions: -2 posts to complete, +100 ryo
A ranked missions: -2 posts to complete, +200 ryo
S ranked missions: -3 posts to complete, +400 ryo
S+ ranked missions: -4 posts to complete, +800 ryo

• Not Just a Worker: +1 Bukijutsu Style
• Regular Thursday: Mission -2 Posts, +50 chakra, +50 stamina.
• Santa's Library II: Mission -2 Posts
• Omni: Good for 1 custom weapon, armor, item, or technique. Can be sold for 2000 ryo, or traded to others like normal. Please post in the custom app thread(s) whenever you decide. [x]
• +1 Custom Jutsu Slot [x]

▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|c α r є є r • ∂ α т α|├▬
Ryo: 両2275 (A rank mission 1600 + event ryo[600] + event bonus [500] + PA bonus [200] - Unknown [see below, 625])
AC: 6400 (A rank mission [1600] + event AC [300 + 4000] + Bonus AC [500])

Missions Complete:
D Rank :: 0
C Rank :: 0
B Rank :: 0
A Rank :: 1 [x]
S Rank :: 0

Crafting Trees
• Blacksmithing || → Apprentice
• Whitesmithing || → Apprentice
• Armorsmithing || → No Title
• Gearsmithing || → No Title

Crafting Jobs Complete:
D Rank :: 0
C Rank :: 0
B Rank :: 0
A Rank :: 0
S Rank :: 0

Job Titles
• No Job || → No Title
• No Job || → No Title

Job Missions Complete:
D Rank :: 0
C Rank :: 0
B Rank :: 0
A Rank :: 0
S Rank :: 0

Limitations: {How many of each technique you can learn. Refer to class info}
• Ninjutsu : : 02 / 02
• Genjutsu : : 00 / 02
• Taijutsu Styles : : 00 / 00
• Bukijutsu Styles : : 00 / 01
• Bonus Custom Jutsu : : 00 / 01

▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|ω є α ρ σ η • ∂ α т α|├▬
Weapon Type: Greathammer
Weapon Range: 4' Maximum
Weapon Weight: 8 Pounds
Weapon Size: {What ar ethe dimensions?}
Weapon Location: Strapped to back

▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|ι η ν є η т σ r у|├▬
• 15 Kunai
• Tool Bag
• Mechanic's Goggles [x]
• Clothing

▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|т є c н η ι q υ є ѕ|├▬
▬▬┤|N i n j u t s u

Maruton: {Start with the following six only unless otherwise specified.}
• Henge no Jutsu [ Transformation Technique ]
• Kawarimi no Jutsu [ Substitution Technique ]
• Bushin no Jutsu [ Clone Technique ]
• Suimen Hokou no Waza [ Act of Water Surface Walking ]
• Kinobori no Waza [ Act of Tree Climbing ]
• Kai [ Release ]
• Tensou no Jutsu [ Heavenly Transmission Technique ] (Trained as B Rank) [x]

Katon


Raiton


Jinton
• Shuriken no Jutsu [ Speed Release: Shuriken Technique ] [x]
• Senkakusha no Inzou [ Enlightened Person's Handsigns ] [x]

▬▬┤|G e n j u t s u

Chained


Illusory {Illusory, Enchantment, Chained, or Instance}


▬▬┤|T a i j u t s u

{Style name here}
• {Stage progression / techniques learned}

▬▬┤|B u k i j u t s u

{Style name here}
• {Stage progression / techniques learned}

▬▬┤|F o r m l e s s S t y l e s

Current Slots Available → 00 // 02/b] {Find in Formless Style and Class information}
Soft Physical
• E (Locked)
• D (Locked)
Slots Used
• _______ → || [X] {Please include links for training}

▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|н ι ѕ т σ r у|├▬
Hailing from Takumi, Hotaru started later than most would since she moved to Sunagakure with her family when they had decided to settle down somewhere else. Her parents were weary from peddling and just wanted to live in a safer place. Seeing no other alternative to chase her dreams of being a master smith, Hotaru enlisted herself in the village's ninja academy. She found it somewhat difficult in her time at the academy, but through hard work and determination she found herself on her way to graduation. Hotaru knew it was only going to get harder from here, but she'd press on through no matter the resistance.

Forwards in time a few months, Hotaru took a break from being a shinobi and stayed with her family as they traveled across the land in search of those to trade with. Her family would be settled in Konohagakure as a disaster would hit, however. Wanting to protect her family and the lives of others, Hotaru mobilized....


Notes:
• The first two PAs are my starting PAs (Mission Expert and Not Just A Worker). All the others are either PAs or other bonuses from events. The Santa's Library is obviously from christmas, and the Regular Thrusday from Thanksgiving. Omni is from a random chance game during a festival, and the custom jutsu slot is from the announcement rewards.
• Fixed status, at one point she was C rank, downgraded her from that.
• Fixed Locked Formless,
• Removed 2 marbles. I don't remember where I had gotten them, and I don't really feel like searching.
• AC increased by 200, because I had forgotten to add a few bonuses from the announcement. D ranked missions from before are not factored in, just the announcement.


BlackFruity

Fixed the reductions, added reductions for Crafting Titles. Apologies for misunderstanding.

Had fixed the chakra and stamina already, though I forgot to add in the +50 to each. Thanks for catching that for me. The extra 30 was from body rank C before the increase in the prerequisites for it. I'm choosing not to try and grandfather that in.

The other 8 weren't on the profile because they're a limit shared across all characters. Added the word "Bonus" to avoid future confusion.

Already fixed the crafting titles. The two marked no title I had when I was C in body rank, and I plan to go back into those fields once able.

Bloodline application is still not done, though I'll be working on it right after I submit this post, so expect it soon!~
 

Ergo War
Vice Captain

Enduring Guildsman


Jubellation

Genius

PostPosted: Thu Oct 26, 2017 9:46 pm
User Image▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|ρ є r ѕ σ η α ℓ • ∂ α т α|├▬
Full Name: Taiyō Hageshī
Nickname: Tai
Age: 14
Birthdate: The 13th of November
Gender: Male

Height: 5'3
Weight: 102 lbs.

Nindo:
Personality: Taiyo is pragmatic, with an amoral philosophy for life.
Village: Konohagakure
Title: Genin
Rank: D - Rank
First Class: Bloodline
____Discipline Blood Knight
Second Class: Bloodline
____Discipline Thoroughbred

▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|c σ м в α т • ∂ α т α|├▬
Bloodline: Shakuton | Scorch Release

Chakra Pool: 290
Stamina Pool: 250
Chakra Element: Fuuton | Katon | Shakuton
Chakra Color: White Gold
Chakra Materialization: Fiery Aura

Passive Status Increases:
• Strength ► {Total Bonus}
→ {Where does this come from?}
• Speed ► {Total Bonus}
→ {Where does this come from?}
• Reflex ► {Total Bonus}
→ {Where does this come from?}
• Fortitude ► {Total Bonus}
→ {Where does this come from?}

Strengths:
• Close Combat
• Bloodline Techniques
Weaknesses:
• Too smart for his own good
• Lack of empathy/sympathy
Fears:
• Not living up to his family's expectations
• Falling in love

Reductions:
• Additionally, the cost to perform bloodline techniques is reduced by 10 chakra, to a minimum of 5. [ Bloodline Specialization ]
• Learn bloodline techniques one (1) post faster. [ Bloodline Class ]
Personal Attributes:

Bloodline Trait & Attribute:
• Shakuton users cannot be dehydrated by their own techniques, but can still be burnt.
• Heat Resistant: Shakuton users are accustomed to heat and humidity, and thus are not offset by such climates or Katon techniques. ( Refers to actual heat; not damage dealt by fire or fire techniques. )

• Close Quarters Combatant: Gains +1 Taijutsu Style in place of Genjutsu Slots.
• Truly Blessed: Granted +20 to Chakra Pool. (does not scale with rank)

▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|c α r є є r • ∂ α т α|├▬
Ryo: 両0
AC: 0

Missions Complete:
D Rank :: 0
C Rank :: 0
B Rank :: 0
A Rank :: 0
S Rank :: 0

Crafting Trees
• {First Tree Here} || → {Current Title}
• {Second Tree Here} || → {Current Title}
• {Third Tree Here} || → {Current Title}
• {Fourth Tree Here} || → {Current Title}

Crafting Jobs Complete:
D Rank :: 0
C Rank :: 0
B Rank :: 0
A Rank :: 0
S Rank :: 0

Job Titles
• {Job} || → {Current Title}
• {Job} || → {Current Title}

Job Missions Complete:
D Rank :: 0
C Rank :: 0
B Rank :: 0
A Rank :: 0
S Rank :: 0

Limitations: {How many of each technique you can learn. Refer to class info}
• Ninjutsu : : 00 / 04
• Genjutsu : : 00 / 02
• Taijutsu Styles: : 00 / 01
• Bukijutsu Styles: : 00 / 01

▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|ω є α ρ σ η • ∂ α т α|├▬
Weapon Type: Bo Staff
Weapon Range: 71 in.
Weapon Weight: 30 lbs.
Weapon Size: Long
Weapon Location: On back when not carried


▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|ι η ν є η т σ r у|├▬
• x10 Shuriken, x5 Smoke Pellets, 5 Kunai

▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|т є c н η ι q υ є ѕ|├▬
▬▬┤|N i n j u t s u

Maruton:
• Henge no Jutsu [ Transformation Technique ]
• Kawarimi no Jutsu [ Substitution Technique ]
• Bushin no Jutsu [ Clone Technique ]
• Suimen Hokou no Waza [ Act of Water Surface Walking ]
• Kinobori no Waza [ Act of Tree Climbing ]
• Kai [ Release ]

Katon


Fuuton


Shakuton




▬▬┤|T a i j u t s u

Sazanami


Kyouzou


▬▬┤|B u k i j u t s u

{Style name here}
• {Stage progression / techniques learned}

▬▬┤|F o r m l e s s S t y l e s

Current Slots Available → 02 // 02
Locked Formless
• {Training Links}
Slots Used
• _______ → || [X] {Please include links for training}

▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|н ι ѕ т σ r у|├▬
From birth there was certain expectations of Taiyo being born into the Hageshi Clan, a prominent family of the Scorch Release Kekkei Genkai. The youngest of 3, an older brother and sister. Taiyo was special though. Every so few generations of the Hageshi Clan, a child presents itself bearing the mark of the dragon. The bearer of this mark is said to have been blessed by the Sun God, and is expected to be prodigious. At an early age, Taiyo was trained by his family to ensure his natural skill and talents did not waste away. This title, did not come without issues however. Taiyo was respected by others in his clan, but they harbored envy in secret. This lead to an attempt on his life, which ended in both failure and misery. Taiyo's older brother gave his life to protect his little brother, succumbing to multiple injuries obtained during the attempt. Thereafter, it was decided that he would go to live with his sister in Konohagakure, until things blew over.
 
PostPosted: Thu Oct 26, 2017 11:27 pm
Xaiyou Kageryuu
User Image
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|ρ є r ѕ σ η α ℓ • ∂ α т α|├▬
Full Name: Saizo Hamada
Nickname: Sai-sai
Age: 17
Birthdate: May 31
Gender: Male
Height: 176cm
Weight: 64.4 kg

Nindo:
Personality:
Critical: Saizo will Criticize anything that seems wrong about himself or others.
Inquisitive: Saizo will wonder about everything that he doesn’t get.
Shy: He doesn’t let anyone in. they see a different person than he usually is.
Stubborn: Saizo when he believes something is right will not budge on his decisions to a fault.
Blunt: Saizo can be blunt when he says something mostly due to the fact that he doesn’t get other people’s feelings in matters.

Village: Sunagakure
Title: Genin
Rank: D-Rank
First Class: Ninjutsu
DisciplineElemental Dual Wielder
▬Your maximum chakra pool is increased by {10} points. The ninjutsu limit provided by this class is split amongst both of your chosen elements. ( At genin rank, rather than having a total of [ 06 ] ninjutsu slots for Katon or Suiton techniques, this class provides you with [ 06 ] slots for both Katon and Suiton techniques. Any ninjutsu slots received from other sources are filled at your discretion. )
Second Class: Bukijutsu
DisciplineMystic Hero
▬ The user is much like a hybrid warrior, focusing on mixing ninjutsu into their personal arsenal. Through their great devotion to this path the user can cast ninjutsu without hand seals while wielding a weapon, D at gennin, C at chunnin, B at Jounin, A at Konin, and S at Sannin. These techniques maintain the same description and criteria to use, as well as require the same amount of time to mold the chakra through the weapon as would be needed to perform hand seals, meaning the techniques are not instantaneously cast. The user’s spirit is so strong, that they can utilize their physical bukijutsu techniques to negate ninjutsu techniques of the same rank or below.

▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|c σ м в α т • ∂ α т α|├▬
Bloodline: Courage: +2 PA, 5 jutsu slots

Chakra Pool: 350
Stamina Pool: 150
Chakra Element: Suiton, Doton
Chakra Color: Sky Blue
Chakra Materialization: Wispy wind visuals

Passive Status Increases:
• Strength ► {Total Bonus}

• Speed ► 1

• Reflex ► {Total Bonus}

• Fortitude ► {Total Bonus}


Strengths:
• Ninjutsu
• Close Combat
Weaknesses:
• Rare swords
• Empathy for family bonds
Fears:
• Commitment (close relationships)
• Being abandoned, as a result of another's death
Reductions:
• Learn ninjutsu one (1) post faster.
• Learn ninjutsu one (1) post faster from PA
• Learn Bukijutsu techniques one [1] post faster.
• Learn Medium Blade Buki techniques [1] post faster

Personal Attributes:
•[] -5 stamina cost to Bukijutsu techniques.
• Slight Increase in speed.
• one post reduction from any medium bladed weapon style.
• -1 reductions towards ninjutsu

▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|c α r є є r • ∂ α т α|├▬
Ryo: 両{Money} 0
AC: 0
Missions Complete:
D Rank :: 0
C Rank :: 0
B Rank :: 0
A Rank :: 0
S Rank :: 0

Crafting Trees
• {First Tree Here} || → {Current Title}
• {Second Tree Here} || → {Current Title}
• {Third Tree Here} || → {Current Title}
• {Fourth Tree Here} || → {Current Title}

Crafting Jobs Complete:
D Rank :: 0
C Rank :: 0
B Rank :: 0
A Rank :: 0
S Rank :: 0

Job Titles
• {Job} || → {Current Title}
• {Job} || → {Current Title}
Job Missions Complete:
D Rank :: 0
C Rank :: 0
B Rank :: 0
A Rank :: 0
S Rank :: 0

Limitations:
Limitations: * 5 SLOTS FROM Courage Bloodline*
• Ninjutsu : : 00 / 18

    {] Maruton 00/06
    {]Suiton :: 00/ 06
    {*]Doton :: 00/ 06

• Genjutsu : : 00 / 01
•Alteration Styles : 00/00
• Taijutsu Styles: : 00 / 00
• Bukijutsu Styles: : 00 / 03
2/5 Jutsu slots used

▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|ω є α ρ σ η • ∂ α т α|├▬
Weapon Type: Kanata
Weapon Range: Close range?
Weapon Weight: 1.3 kg
Weapon Size: {What are the dimensions? How long is it?} 73 cm
Weapon Location: Sheathed at hip. Left side.

▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|ι η ν є η т σ r у|├▬
• Kunai x7
• Shuriken x 8

•Elbow length fingerless gloves
• one sassy thin black belt with supply bag over his hip.
calf high ninja shoes
Sleeveless blue shirt that ends with a one sided skirt.
Matching Vest and pants.
Bandages that go up his left arm
Ivory colored leather shoulder pads.

▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|т є c н η ι q υ є ѕ|├▬
▬▬┤|N i n j u t s u

Maruton: {Start with the following six only unless otherwise specified.}
• Henge no Jutsu [ Transformation Technique ]
• Kawarimi no Jutsu [ Substitution Technique ]
• Bushin no Jutsu [ Clone Technique ]
• Suimen Hokou no Waza [ Act of Water Surface Walking ]
• Kinobori no Waza [ Act of Tree Climbing ]
• Kai [ Release ]

Suiton [0/6]


Doton [0/6]


▬▬┤|G e n j u t s u

{Your first Type's name} {Illusory, Enchantment, Chained, or Instance}


{Your second Type's name} {Illusory, Enchantment, Chained, or Instance}


▬▬┤|T a i j u t s u

{Style name here}
• {Stage progression / techniques learned}

▬▬┤|B u k i j u t s u

{Style name here}
• {Stage progression / techniques learned}
{Style name here}
• {Stage progression / techniques learned}


▬▬┤|F o r m l e s s S t y l e s

Current Slots Available → 00 // 02
Locked Formless
• {Training Links}
Slots Used
• ___ → || [X] {Please include links for training}

▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|н ι ѕ т σ r у|├▬
Fear can be a great motivator. Fear of a new place could be a great start as he had to get antiquated with a whole new society that was different than his father’s Village in the land of Iron. At an early age Saizo wouldn’t understand why some people would do something that was completely stupid. This was just walls he would spend tearing down later in life.
Sometimes the best motivator is to try and stride away from his father’s shadow. After learning the mere basics of the katana from his father he would stray away and find a new teacher. This would become a goal that would coincide with becoming a Sunagakure Ninja. Stepping away from his father’s side and more to his Mother’s side. His mother was a Sunagakure Ninja who met his father back in the land of Iron.

This is the tale of Saizo Hamada.


Hurrak
I think i made the changes you asked for.
 

Xaiyou Kageryuu

Fashionable Combatant

4,000 Points
  • Dressed Up 200
  • Money Never Sleeps 200
  • Risky Lifestyle 100

Brooy

Omnipresent Cultist

PostPosted: Fri Oct 27, 2017 2:05 pm
User Image
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|ρ є r ѕ σ η α ℓ • ∂ α т α|├▬
Full Name: Saiko
Nickname: N/A
Age: 19
Birthdate: Feb 12
Gender: Male

Height: 6’0
Weight: 180 lbs

Nindo: "Your word is one of the few things in this world so, you better keep it.”
Personality: Saiko is a mostly quiety individual. However, he will speak when he needs to or when someone speaks to him directly. Saiko will always be one of the first people to volunteer to do something, especially if it has to do with helping/protecting people. He is an extremely loyal person to his friends, family, and home with a code of ethics to protecting those very same people.
Village: Sunagakure
Title: Genin
Rank: D-Rank
First Class: Ninjutsu
____Elemental Dual Wielder You are only able to have one (1) chosen chakra element. Your elemental ninjutsu possess greater power, allowing them to overwhelm techniques of the same element and rank, and preventing them from succumbing to elemental weaknesses. You begin with two (2) additional ninjutsu slots, and earn an additional three (3) ninjutsu slots whenever you rank up. Specialist may still learn Maruton along with their element, and their slots for Maruton are mirrored from their element.
Second Class: Ninjutsu
____

▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|c σ м в α т • ∂ α т α|├▬
Bloodline: Combo Kekkai Genkai → Mokuton, Shoton and Ranton [x]

Chakra Pool: 550
Stamina Pool: 50
Chakra Element: Suiton, Doton, Raiton, Katon, Mokuton, Shoton, and Ranton
Chakra Color: Pyrcochromatic
Chakra Materialization: Saiko’s chakra branches out from his body much like the branches of a tree. However, these branches sparkle much like crystal and a closer look at his aura would show that the branches are embedded with different gems. Occasionally lightning will spread throughout the branches in rhythm of Saiko’s pulse.

Passive Status Increases:
• Strength ► 0

• Speed ► 0

• Reflex ► 0

• Fortitude ► 0


Strengths:
• Extremely strong with Ninjutsu
• Multiple Kekkai Genakai’s
Weaknesses:
• Low Stamina in comparison to others
• Weak in the body with very little taijutsu or bukijutsu knowledge
Fears:
• Not protecting those he has sworn to protect at all costs.
• Fear of being unable to move
• Having his ninjutsus taken away/being unable to use them.

Reductions:
• Learns Ninjutsu 2 posts faster :: Ninjutsu Class

Personal Attributes:
• Additional Element: Raiton
• Able to perform hand seals with one hand.

▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|c α r є є r • ∂ α т α|├▬
Ryo: 両 0
AC: 0

Missions Complete:
D Rank :: 0
C Rank :: 0
B Rank :: 0
A Rank :: 0
S Rank :: 0

Crafting Trees
• {First Tree Here} || → {Current Title}
• {Second Tree Here} || → {Current Title}
• {Third Tree Here} || → {Current Title}
• {Fourth Tree Here} || → {Current Title}

Crafting Jobs Complete:
D Rank :: 0
C Rank :: 0
B Rank :: 0
A Rank :: 0
S Rank :: 0

Job Titles
• {Job} || → {Current Title}
• {Job} || → {Current Title}

Job Missions Complete:
D Rank :: 0
C Rank :: 0
B Rank :: 0
A Rank :: 0
S Rank :: 0

Limitations:
• Ninjutsu : : 00 / 12
• Katon : : 00 / 12
• Genjutsu : : 00 / 02
• Taijutsu Styles: : 00 / 00
• Bukijutsu Styles: : 00 / 00
•Alteration Styles: : 00 / 00

▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|ω є α ρ σ η • ∂ α т α|├▬
Weapon Type: Katana
Weapon Range: 24 inches
Weapon Weight: 2.5 pounds
Weapon Size: Medium
Weapon Location: Stored in a sheath on his right hand side.


▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|ι η ν є η т σ r у|├▬
• Kunai x 10
• Shuriken x 5
• Locket from his parents that contains a picture of his parents and him together

▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|т є c н η ι q υ є ѕ|├▬
▬▬┤|N i n j u t s u

Maruton:
• Henge no Jutsu [ Transformation Technique ]
• Kawarimi no Jutsu [ Substitution Technique ]
• Bushin no Jutsu [ Clone Technique ]
• Suimen Hokou no Waza [ Act of Water Surface Walking ]
• Kinobori no Waza [ Act of Tree Climbing ]
• Kai [ Release ]

Katon
Rank E

Rank D

Rank C

Rank B

Rank A

Rank S

Rank S+



Mokuton
Rank E

Rank D

Rank C

Rank B

Rank A

Rank S

Rank S+


Shoton
Rank E

Rank D

Rank C

Rank B

Rank A

Rank S

Rank S+


Ranton
Rank E

Rank D

Rank C

Rank B

Rank A

Rank S

Rank S+



▬▬┤|G e n j u t s u

{Your first Type's name} {Illusory, Enchantment, Chained, or Instance}


{Your second Type's name} {Illusory, Enchantment, Chained, or Instance}


▬▬┤|T a i j u t s u

{Style name here}
• {Stage progression / techniques learned}

▬▬┤|B u k i j u t s u

{Style name here}
• {Stage progression / techniques learned}

▬▬┤|F o r m l e s s S t y l e s

Current Slots Available → 00 // 00
Locked Formless
• {Training Links}
Slots Used
• _______ → || [X] {Please include links for training}

▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|And So Our Story Begins…|├▬
Saiko was born into a practically normal family in Sunagakure. There wasn’t much unique about them as none of his family were shinobi. They were citizens of the Village and nothing more. His father runs a store within the city and his mother stayed at home to take care of the children. However, from an early age it seemed that Saiko’s life was not going to take the same route as his parents. It seemed at even at an early age he had an affinity for chakra and not only that but, he wanted to be a Shinobi and protect the village just like the Kazekage. His parents didn’t want this for him but, after much protesting from Saiko, they finally agreed to allow him to join the academy. In the academy he flourished and did much better than his parents expected. He wasn’t the best student but, he did well enough to pass the academy. It was in the academy that he discovered he had the potential to use several Kekkai Genkai’s, an ability that was known to be extremely rare. Saiko took this as a sign that he was meant to be a Shinobi after all. His parents were happy but, extremely worried about their son for obvious reasons. It was almost a death sentence to be a shinobi but, they wanted the best for their son. To show they supported him, they gave him a locket with a single picture in it that had him and his parents together.


▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|T r a i n i n g|├▬


▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|M i s s i o n s|├▬

 
Reply
☆[3} Approval Area :: Post Requests Here

Goto Page: [] [<<] [<<] [<] 1 2 3 ... 331 332 333 334 335 336 ... 361 362 363 364 [>] [>>] [»|]
 
Manage Your Items
Other Stuff
Get GCash
Offers
Get Items
More Items
Where Everyone Hangs Out
Other Community Areas
Virtual Spaces
Fun Stuff
Gaia's Games
Mini-Games
Play with GCash
Play with Platinum