Regarding the Majora's Kid PA on Luna that was initially denied.
Original - • Majora's Kid - After generations separated from ninja influence, the descendants of the Majora line of the Uzumaki clan have lost their ability to use elemental ninjutsu. Their chakra is spread thinly over the five base elements, instead of focusing in the usual two or three, and as a result, they do not have an elemental chakra nature. In return, however, they possess greater talent for fuuinjutsu, an art that they've practiced extensively. Thanks to her Majora blood, Luna can create and use all fuuinjutsu up to their rank in the time it would take most others to use one technique (1 activation), the creation of the seal happening at the same time that the handsigns needed to use the fuuinjutsu are being done. Additionally, all fuuinjutsu and Uzumaki bloodline techniques count as ninjutsu of their rank for the sake of Mystic Hero PA. Fuuinjutsu, for the purposes of this PA includes the Kuchiyose techniques. When creating the seals for a fuuinjutsu, at least one seal must be no more than 1 meter away from the Uzumaki. Additional seals required for the technique can be located as far away as 50 meters at D-rank and an additional 50 meters for every body rank advanced, barring any customs that extend this range.
Edited - • Majora's Kid - The Majora line of the Uzumaki clan have no elemental chakra nature and are unable to use elemental ninjutsu. Instead, they possess greater talent for Fuuinjutsu. Thanks to her Majora blood, Luna's chakra materialization can rearrange to form seals for Fuuinjutsu techniques anywhere within 1 meter of her body in the same activation that she uses to use the seal being created by her chakra. Luna's chakra aura becomes visible for the duration of the technique. Excluding the requirements related to writing the seal, she must fulfill all other activation requirements for any Fuuinjutsu, including requirements like the technique taking more than one activation to use. For the purposes of this PA, Fuuinjutsu includes the Kuchiyose techniques.
Will that fix do? Still too much? Did I go too far? Something else wrong?
Posted: Sat Aug 12, 2017 1:59 pm
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|ρ є r ѕ σ η α ℓ • ∂ α т α|├▬ Full Name: Shion Moro Nickname: n/a Age: 14 Birthdate: Aug 5 Gender: Female
Height: 4'9" Weight: 98lbs
Nindo: still searching Personality: Shion can best be summed by the phrase "high functioning neurotic". Bordering somewhere between overly anxious and overly talkative, she is the perfect blend of awkward for any social setting. She is pretty outgoing, but due to her otherworldly need to make her point clear at any cost, she is prone to long winded fits of babbling.
Description : Shion is of a rather small stature, standing much shorter than her peers. Her petite build is topped with a round baby-face, lightly sprinkled with freckles, and embedded with 2 large hazel eyes, all capped off with a mess of short, auburn hair.
Village: Kumo Title: Genin Rank: D-rank First Class: Genjutsu ____Discipline → Inception Second Class: Medic ____Discipline → Specialist [Azriel said i could pick which specialization when i discover it IRP]
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|c σ м в α т • ∂ α т α|├▬ Bloodline: Wisdom: +1 PA, +2 custom techs, 10 jutsu slots
Chakra Pool: 435 Stamina Pool: 65 Chakra Element: Water/Fire Chakra Color: Yellow Chakra Materialization: Shion's chakra shape reflects her mental state and is always in contant flux. During times of high stress, it fluctuates more sporadically.
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|ω є α ρ σ η • ∂ α т α|├▬ Weapon Type: n/a Weapon Range: n/a Weapon Weight: n/a Weapon Size: n/a Weapon Location: • n/a
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|ι η ν є η т σ r у|├▬ • shurikan x10 • kunai x5 • Current Outfit x1 - Current Dress: Dark blue spring hoodie over a grey tank top with black legging under a pair of shorts. Projectile/scroll pouch on right arm and a sick a** pair of navy blue high tops.
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|т є c н η ι q υ є ѕ|├▬ ▬▬┤|N i n j u t s u Maruton: • Henge no Jutsu [ Transformation Technique ] • Kawarimi no Jutsu [ Substitution Technique ] • Bushin no Jutsu [ Clone Technique ] • Suimen Hokou no Waza [ Act of Water Surface Walking ] • Kinobori no Waza [ Act of Tree Climbing ] • Kai [ Release ]
Katon •
Suiton •
Eiseijutsu • ▬▬┤|G e n j u t s u Illusory •
Enchantment • ▬▬┤|T a i j u t s u n/a • n/a ▬▬┤|B u k i j u t s u n/a • n/a
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|н ι ѕ т σ r у|├▬ Shion's story is nothing special. She didn't come from a noble family or an honored clan, nor does she have any heavy motivations for becoming a ninja. Her family wasn't slain in the dead of night, nor does she owe any sort of life debts. She simply became a ninja because its what she wanted to do. Her past might not be anything special, but who knows what the future holds?
Regarding the Majora's Kid PA on Luna that was initially denied.
Original - • Majora's Kid - After generations separated from ninja influence, the descendants of the Majora line of the Uzumaki clan have lost their ability to use elemental ninjutsu. Their chakra is spread thinly over the five base elements, instead of focusing in the usual two or three, and as a result, they do not have an elemental chakra nature. In return, however, they possess greater talent for fuuinjutsu, an art that they've practiced extensively. Thanks to her Majora blood, Luna can create and use all fuuinjutsu up to their rank in the time it would take most others to use one technique (1 activation), the creation of the seal happening at the same time that the handsigns needed to use the fuuinjutsu are being done. Additionally, all fuuinjutsu and Uzumaki bloodline techniques count as ninjutsu of their rank for the sake of Mystic Hero PA. Fuuinjutsu, for the purposes of this PA includes the Kuchiyose techniques. When creating the seals for a fuuinjutsu, at least one seal must be no more than 1 meter away from the Uzumaki. Additional seals required for the technique can be located as far away as 50 meters at D-rank and an additional 50 meters for every body rank advanced, barring any customs that extend this range.
Edited - • Majora's Kid - The Majora line of the Uzumaki clan have no elemental chakra nature and are unable to use elemental ninjutsu. Instead, they possess greater talent for Fuuinjutsu. Thanks to her Majora blood, Luna's chakra materialization can rearrange to form seals for Fuuinjutsu techniques anywhere within 1 meter of her body in the same activation that she uses to use the seal being created by her chakra. Luna's chakra aura becomes visible for the duration of the technique. Excluding the requirements related to writing the seal, she must fulfill all other activation requirements for any Fuuinjutsu, including requirements like the technique taking more than one activation to use. For the purposes of this PA, Fuuinjutsu includes the Kuchiyose techniques.
Will that fix do? Still too much? Did I go too far? Something else wrong?
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|ρ є r ѕ σ η α ℓ • ∂ α т α|├▬ Full Name: Hanna Nickname: none yet
Age: 19 Birthdate: June 11th Gender: Female
Height: 64inches Weight: 120
Nindo: "Diamonds may be a girl's best friend, but I have something better." Personality: Hanna is a little insane due to the way she was raised, but she keeps that at bay.......most of the time. She is oddly happy sometimes and smiles at the weirdest things.
Village: Kumogakure Rank: Genin First Class: Bloodline Second Class: Bloodline
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|c σ м в α т • ∂ α т α|├▬ Bloodline:Shōton
Chakra Pool: 280 Stamina Pool: 260 Chakra Element: Doton, Suiton Chakra Color: Pink Chakra Materialization: looks likes crystals that sparkle around her.
Strengths: • Bloodline Techniques • Her ability to shut off her emotions....sometimes Weaknesses: • Certain sound frequencies • Small animals Fears: • Purple rats • Dying alone
Class Disciplines : • Thoroughbred • Blood Knight Reductions: • Learn Bloodline Techniques 1 post faster • Learns Doton and Suiton jutsu 1 post faster • Bloodline techs take 10 less chakra Personal Attributes: • Fighter's Will: -5 Stamina to simple tai and buki and -5 chakra to complex and spiritual tai and buki • A Sense of Normalcy: 10 Extra nin slots
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|c α r є є r • ∂ α т α|├▬ Ryo:0 AC: 2625 Missions Complete: D Rank :: 0 C Rank :: 0 B Rank :: 0 A Rank :: 0 S Rank :: 0
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|ω є α ρ σ η • ∂ α т α|├▬ Weapon Type: Katana Weapon Range: 60cm Weapon Weight: 3lbs Weapon Location: Across her back
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|ι η ν є η т σ r у|├▬ • 8 Kunai • 7 Shuriken
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|т є c н η ι q υ є ѕ|├▬ ▬▬┤|N i n j u t s u Maruton: {Start with the following six only} • Henge no Jutsu [ Transformation Technique ] • Kawarimi no Jutsu [ Substitution Technique ] • Bushin no Jutsu [ Clone Technique ] • Suimen Hokou no Waza [ Act of Water Surface Walking ] • Kinobori no Waza [ Act of Tree Climbing ] • Kai [ Release ]
Bloodline •Shining Judgment of a Thousand Stones [ Unnamed ] •Crimson Fruit •Hexagonal Shuriken •Giant Hexagonal Shuriken •Jade Crystal Mirror •Jade Crystal Blade •Crystal NeedlesLast6here •Crystal Encampment Wall ▬▬┤|G e n j u t s u • ▬▬┤|T a i j u t s u {Style name here} • {Stage progression / techniques learned} ▬▬┤|B u k i j u t s u {Style name here} • {Stage progression / techniques learned}
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|н ι ѕ т σ r у|├▬ Hanna doesn't know who she was born to, she only knows the family that raised her, was not her own. She was raised at an early age to be a weapon, taking out any of those that her family said to. Not long after killing those in her father's way she was forced into confinement, in the courtyard of the home. With nothing but the fish for company she started to lose it. She sings a lot to calm herself, and to keep her from going into an abyss. Eventually after being confined for years she killed her foster family. She then set out to make her own way around Kumo and decided to join the ranks of the shinobi there.
Posted: Mon Aug 14, 2017 11:09 am
BlackFruity
updated background
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|ρ є r ѕ σ η α ℓ • ∂ α т α|├▬ Full Name: Tokogami Nara Nickname: Toko Age: 16 Birthdate: 8/6 Gender: Female
Height: 5' 4" Weight: 120
Nindo: N/A Personality: Lazy and passive when there is nothing to do. When there is a job to do or something that must be accomplished she switches to a more serious and deadly personality. Clever and complicated.
Village: Kiri Title: Genin Rank: D-Rank Shinobi First Class: Bukijutsu ____Discipline → Mystic Hero: Second Class: Ninjutsu ____Discipline → Elemental Dual Wielder
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|c σ м в α т • ∂ α т α|├▬ Bloodline: Nara
Chakra Pool: 360 Stamina Pool: 150 Chakra Element: Raiton, Doton Chakra Color: Dark Purple Chakra Materialization: Aura
Passive Status Increases: • Strength ► {Total Bonus} →→ {Where does this come from?} • Speed ► {Total Bonus} →→ {Where does this come from?} • Reflex ► {Total Bonus} →→ {Where does this come from?} • Fortitude ► {Total Bonus} →→ {Where does this come from?}
Strengths: • Archery • Knives Weaknesses: • Bright Lights • Work Fears: • Running out of supplies • Running out of food
Reductions: • Learn Ninjutsu one (2) post faster. • Learn Bukijutsu techniques one [1] post faster. Personal Attributes: • Armory: Learn 1 Additional Buki Style • I Have You Now: Take another post before Shadow Immitation Jutsu can be broken by force.
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|c α r є є r • ∂ α т α|├▬ Ryo: 0 AC: 0
Missions Complete: D Rank :: 0 C Rank :: 0 B Rank :: 0 A Rank :: 0 S Rank :: 0
Crafting Trees • {First Tree Here} || → {Current Title} • {Second Tree Here} || → {Current Title} • {Third Tree Here} || → {Current Title} • {Fourth Tree Here} || → {Current Title}
Crafting Jobs Complete: D Rank :: 0 C Rank :: 0 B Rank :: 0 A Rank :: 0 S Rank :: 0
Job Missions Complete: D Rank :: 0 C Rank :: 0 B Rank :: 0 A Rank :: 0 S Rank :: 0
Limitations: {How many of each technique you can learn. Refer to class info} • Ninjutsu : : 00 / 08 • Genjutsu : : 00 / 01 • Taijutsu Styles: : 00 / 00 • Bukijutsu Styles: : 00 / 02
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|ω є α ρ σ η • ∂ α т α|├▬ Weapon Type: Bow Weapon Range: Long? Weapon Weight: Small Weapon Size: Short bow Weapon Location: Back
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|ι η ν є η т σ r у|├▬ • 10 Arrows • 5 Kunai • Basic Clothes
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|т є c н η ι q υ є ѕ|├▬ ▬▬┤|N i n j u t s u Maruton: {Start with the following six only unless otherwise specified.} • Henge no Jutsu [ Transformation Technique ] • Kawarimi no Jutsu [ Substitution Technique ] • Bushin no Jutsu [ Clone Technique ] • Suimen Hokou no Waza [ Act of Water Surface Walking ] • Kinobori no Waza [ Act of Tree Climbing ] • Kai [ Release ]
{Raiton} •
{Doton} •
{Nara} • ▬▬┤|G e n j u t s u {Your first Type's name} {Illusory, Enchantment, Chained, or Instance} •
{Your second Type's name} {Illusory, Enchantment, Chained, or Instance} • ▬▬┤|T a i j u t s u {Style name here} • {Stage progression / techniques learned} ▬▬┤|B u k i j u t s u {Style name here} • {Stage progression / techniques learned} ▬▬┤|F o r m l e s s S t y l e s Current Slots Available → 00 // 06 {Find in Formless Style and Class information} Locked Formless • {Training Links} Slots Used • _______ → || [X] {Please include links for training}
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|н ι ѕ т σ r у|├▬
Toko originally lived in Konoha as part of the Nara clan. Her parents were drunks and gamblers, wasting whatever time and money they had on that. Toko hunted in the Nara forest selling the hides, antlers, and foliage to a Water Country Merchant she would meet at the ocean. She horded the money she made to try and make it on her own.
One day before she headed out to hunt. She checked on her stash and found her parents had taken it all. Furious, she went out hunting and instead of accepting ryo. She asked for a ride to Mist and all the paper work to go with it. With that she left her home behind to start a new life.
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|ρ є r ѕ σ η α ℓ ∂ α т α|├▬ Full Name: Yomigaeri Hua Nickname: Yomi Age: Eleven Birthdate: December 12th Gender: Girl
Height: Five feet even. Weight: One hundred and thirty seven pounds.
Nindo: None at the moment. Personality: If there was one word that could describe Yomigaeri Hua, it would be “awkward”. Perhaps stemming from her odd name – something rather long and unheard of at times --, or the way she carries herself. Of course, no singular word could ever describe a presumably multi-faceted individual. Like everyone else, Yomi has certain aspirations and expectations that drive who she is – as well as influences that manifest how she reacts to various situations.
On a regular day when she isn’t pressed by certain factors, she tends to be introvertedly adventurous. Always reticent for one reason or another, there is never a time when Yomi isn’t completely dipping into a book. Although most of the books she reads are high fantasy, her palate is rather eclectic; for the sake of her studies, she often read chapter books pertaining to her courses for the sake of maintaining her knowledge. This didn’t make her a genius at all; after all, there was onlyso much a person could learn at any given time.
Nothing about Yomi is terrifying or eccentric; although she tends to become irate and irascible due to certain proceedings (such as interrupting her reading or intentionally being rude or crass), she has no significant spikes in anger that could seriously, haphazardly, and perhaps comically impinge someone with fear. Being corrected by someone other than her intellectual superior or elders certainly dredges up that kind of trait from her as well, and she isn’t one to take too kindly to being proven wrong.
Even then, she still has very little idea of what she’s doing.
Although her smarts are genuine, applying them to real world situations had always been frustrating and difficult for her. And, as such, ever having to seriously apply what she has learned through her years of studying had always been one of her largest fears. To be evinced as a fool and seen as unworthy tags along with such as well, although the three are definitely mutually exclusive. Just thinking about it flushes her very soul and makes her break into an anxious cold sweat – although she tends to hide it very well, as she thinks about it often.
Aside from these many traits, she isn’t a difficult person to get along with; not so much due to needing to warm up to a person, but more along the lines that she has very little idea how to begin a conversation. She tends to communicate with people older than her better, however, and not her peers or juniors.
Even then, truly expounding upon her personality would be impossible; as an impressionable, yet intelligent young Genin still trying to understanding multiple facets of her life, all things could change. Some traits she harbors are entrenched within her, while others are ephemeral. Eventually, her character will be re-shapened, and hopefully for the better. Village: Konohagakure Title: Genin Rank: D-Rank First Class: Sensory ____Discipline → Oracle Second Class: Medic ____Discipline → Specialist
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|c σ м в α т ∂ α т α|├▬ Bloodline: Wisdom: +1 PA, +2 custom techs, 10 jutsu slots
Chakra Pool: 425 Stamina Pool: 75 Chakra Element: Water/Water Chakra Color: Tyrian Purple Chakra Materialization: Like most chakra, Yomi’s chakra-shape is quotidian; it appears as wisps and tendrils, seemingly uncontrolled. It tends to wrap around her or her target of choosing. Definitely not inherently malicious despite the description, and most people tend to not be surprised when they see how it materializes. In fact, there is some elegance to it, although unconsciously so. Passive Status Increases: Strength ► N/A →→ N/A Speed ► N/A →→ N/A Reflex ► N/A →→ N/A Fortitude ► N/A →→ N/A
Strengths:
Chakra Sensory – Being a Sensory-nin, she is capable of sensing Chakra at admissible degrees and distances. This allows her to pin-point certain things, for whatever admissible reasons. Book smarts – An avid reader and loquacious with her mind, she is capable of understanding complex concepts due to her literary intellectuality. Doesn’t do her much good when it comes to real-world matters though, since she is usually afraid to do so at the risk of failure. Novice Eisei – As a Medical-nin, her strengths and knowledge also lies in the anatomy of a person, as well as molding her chakra for healing. This is rather base, though; she knows what to do and how to do it, but it doesn’t mean she can do it well all the time. The Splasher – Not having much of a propensity for other elements, she tends to gravitate to understand water and liquid substances quite well.
Weaknesses: Awkward – Although her mind is always racing with quick comebacks and witty remarks, she isn’t very good at applying them all too well. She isn’t a very good speaker, either; unless she has gotten to know the person well enough. Unworldly – Always living in fantasy worlds and gleaning knowledge from books, she fails to apply such skills in practicality. Definitely something she works on, although at a lesser scope. The Crasher – She tends to trip a lot, which also contributes to her weakness for Doton, for some reason. . . Condescending – Although not seen as a weakness, she doesn’t take too kindly to her peers looking down on her – and thus she tends to be condescending whenever they try to educate her. This is the only instance when her awkward personality turns into something more brusque, although it typically gets her into trouble. She claims she’s working on it, but that might not be true.
Fears:
Failure – Yomi likes to think that she’s smart, especially due to her perceived specialties that are not exactly too common. Her consistent reading and education has gained her somewhat of a superiority complex. Her peers mocking her, embarrassing her, and twisting her reputation into that of an incompetent idiot holds her back from making true social connections. As such, Yomi tends to keep away, so that she is never too close to failure. This, however, has never applied to her elders, nor her juniors – although seeming like a sophomore in front of her juniors would certainly trigger her fear of failure without too egging. Perhaps, to put simply, proving her wrong gets the better of her, and the ultimate scenario would be in front of a classroom or before all her peers, being berated and harshly corrected for her failure to understand and apply. Cut-Off – Yomi has always been able to sense others’ Chakra, and although at first this has been extremely uncomfortable, the years had trained her being not to feel like so any longer. At this point in her life, Yomi has grown to love being able to sense Chakra, and as such, never being able to again would disorient her. Cutting off her sensory abilities would likely blind her, although in a more figurative sense than literal. Relying on feeling Chakra also allows her to practice her Eiseijutsu more efficiently, and without being able to do so, her confidence dwindles severely. This ties into her fear of failure, as her nightmare scenario would be incapable of sensing Chakra to the point of not being able to save lives. Amputation – Losing a hand is one thing, but losing both hands is terrifying. Yomi’s hands are important, and not only for handseals; she needs them to heal others. As her mother is a respectable Medical-nin, Yomi believes her hands to be her second greatest attributes. Losing her hands would certainly affect her just as much as her fear of failure, as not being able to apply her specialty would practically leave her catatonic. Reductions:
-1 Post to learn Eisei Techs. -1 Post to learn Sensory Techs.
Personal Attributes:
Eisei Prowess – Due to not learning another element, her Eisei prowess is increased moderately. Chakra Increase +20 – Due to practicing Eiseijutsu and sensing Chakra, her understanding of such has garnered her a slight increase in Chakra.
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|c α r є є r ∂ α т α|├▬ Ryo: 両{Money} 0 AC: {Advancement credit} 0
Missions Complete: D Rank :: 0 C Rank :: 0 B Rank :: 0 A Rank :: 0 S Rank :: 0
Crafting Trees N/A (0/4)
Crafting Jobs Complete: D Rank :: 0 C Rank :: 0 B Rank :: 0 A Rank :: 0 S Rank :: 0
Job Titles N/A
Job Missions Complete: D Rank :: 0 C Rank :: 0 B Rank :: 0 A Rank :: 0 S Rank :: 0
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|ω є α ρ σ η ∂ α т α|├▬ Weapon Type: Kunai Knife Weapon Range: 60 centimeters, or 23 inches, from fingertip to end of knife. Variable from executor to target, depending on reflexive prowess and Chakra infusion for the sake of throwing. Weapon Weight: One pound, or 0.4 Kilograms Weapon Size: 2 Inches in Width, 23 Inches in Height, Weapon Location: On her right thigh, within a Kunai holster.
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|ι η ν є η т σ r у|├▬
A bag to keep all her incidentals and clothes. Senbon x15 Braid and Hair Ties. Green turtleneck sweater. Light-weight tights and green shorts. Standard Kunoichi 1 inch heeled gladiator flats. A change of clothes, exact as the others, and bathing clothes. Glasses container.
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|т є c н η ι q υ є ѕ|├▬ ▬▬┤|N i n j u t s u Eisejutsu:
Henge no Jutsu [ Transformation Technique ] Kawarimi no Jutsu [ Substitution Technique ] Bushin no Jutsu [ Clone Technique ] Suimen Hokou no Waza [ Act of Water Surface Walking ] Kinobori no Waza [ Act of Tree Climbing ] Kai [ Release ]
▬▬┤|G e n j u t s u
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|н ι ѕ т σ r у|├▬ Not much about Yomigaeri Hua was extraordinary, nor any part of her family was particularly abnormal. Although she was born with a primary predilection for sensing chakra, this did not define her as an immediate prodigy of any kind. Born to a Medical-nin mother and an unknown father, presumed to have died at war at some point in history, Yomigaeri had always remained as a kind of enigma to many of her peers. Her mother knows her best, however, and even claims that Yomigaeri had always been rather similar to her father – especially in appearance. Only adopting her mother’s hair consistency and eye-shape, every other feature she harbored – from her green eye and complexion to her stance and body-type – mimicked her father. Although, she did not take any specific pride in this – the man was unknown to Yomigaeri.
Yomigaeri’s name derived from the meaning of ‘resurrection’, one that her mother took great pride in choosing due to the new life breathed into her by Yomigaeri’s birth. Likewise, her mother had explained, it had plenty to do with her mother’s career of choice. Knowing that her mother could not only give birth to a new life and even save lives truly boasted her ego, although not in a crass way. Yomigaeri took pride in her name as well, and she soon began to emulate her mother when it came to ninjutsu. Her mother’s prowess certainly rubbed off on the young girl at a very nubile age, especially since her mother was Yomigaeri’s primary role model throughout most of her life.
Due to her father’s absence, however, Yomigaeri had an especially difficult time seeing men and derivatives as role models, and she tended to gravitate towards women and derivatives when it came to emulating certain aspects of her personality. Therefore, when her love of reading high fantasy came to light, she almost always preferred titular heroines as opposed to male heroes, and was always blasé when it came to male protagonists in general. This further permeated her own social relationships with male peers, and although her relationships with other girls were not strained, she tended to keep to herself. Most of her peers had two parents, so Yomigaeri never felt like she fully fit in. She did not have a paucity of friends, however, but during her academy years, she never made any genuine connections that kept her tethered to them. At times, they would all study together to make certain they passed their exams to graduate to Genin level. Often times, Yomigaeri was the tutor, and sometimes she herself was tutored – which often times set her off, as she did not like learning from her peers, and opted to learn from her seniors.
Her mother always inculcated to her that, as a developing Medical-nin, she needed to always safeguard her own values and intelligence. Her acute precision when it came to treating others was imperative, and her mother was never one to be sweet when it came down to it. Her mother always expressed that her hands were her greatest aids, coupled with her ability to sense Chakra when it came to locating those who needed help. Failure was never an option when it came to Yomigaeri’s mother, and since the very day Yomigaeri could actually use Chakra and discovered her abilities, this was entrenched within her. Eventually, her mother soon discovered that Yomigaeri had a major propensity for Suiton-based ninjutsu as well, which further elevated Yomigaeri’s instruction. As such, Yomigaeri developed a slight superiority complex that only applied to her peers – especially her male ones. It is not incorrect to say that this contributed to her moderately loner tendencies, although quite a few people still like her due to her knowledge.
Even so, her fear of failure did hold her back – at least when it came to practical uses of ninjutsu. Great at exams and participation, Yomigaeri was never too keen on applying ninjutsu in practice – and she almost always rejected the notion of doing so. Knowing herself, though, she always made it through – mostly just barely. Somewhat of a paradox, Yomigaeri knew that she had to work hard and get over it, but she also wished not to make a fool of herself. Throughout her academy years, she used the aspirations of her favorite book heroines to motivate her to keep going – and although her mother was brutal when it came to assuming perfection for the sake of saving lives, this somewhat motivated her as well.
Even it contributed to her overall flaws.
Graduating from the Academy and gaining the rank of Genin allowed her to flourish a bit more, although her mother did become more austere when it came down to it. More freedom, however small, allowed her to crackle from her semi-self-imposed shell. Her training continues, and she hopes to be a great assistance to Konohagakure someday. . . For now, though, she has plenty to work on.
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Posted: Wed Aug 16, 2017 3:05 pm
4th of July Event PA
Flower Power: Tetsuhiko is so naturally gifted in the art of botany that he begins his career as an apprentice.
Azeiel the Risen
Posted: Thu Aug 17, 2017 10:13 am
Snuffins
3 day bump
BlackFruity
I took an extra look at this, aside from to-be-discovered PAs everything else does look fine.
This is technically my third respec for the character. I'd like it to go on record that the first was only done to change out a PA that granted access to bukijutsu. The second was required of my by moderators because of different PA that was approved but went against guild regulations. This time, I am only changing the second discipline gained from the character's specialized class for another. I interacted with a couple mods to see if this was allowed and they said "It should be fine" so I hope there isn't any issue.
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|ρ є r ѕ σ η α ℓ • ∂ α т α|├▬ Full Name: Zhi Zenshin Nickname: Zippy Age: 12 Birthdate: June 7th Gender: Female
Height: 127cm Weight: 24kg
Nindo: "Quickly and correctly; mostly quickly, though!" Personality: Zhi is mostly known as a hyperactive girl who likes to keep on the move. On the other hand, she is also know for her impulsive actions as well as tendency to speak her mind. Being the honest little knucklehead she is, Zhi has an arguably bad habit of being unnecessarily blunt with her opinions and observations. The little go-getter can't help but keep herself busy in one way or another simply because she feels that doing things faster leaves more time for other experiences in the paltry amount of hours in a day. Despite this habit of hers, Zhi is actually quite attentive to detail because she has learned to loath repeating tasks because she got them wrong the last time it was attempted. At least she can bare to hang tight and focus if something she's doing is interesting or important. Overall, she's a pretty positive and eccentric resident of the Hidden Sand Village.
Village: Sunagakure Title: Genin Rank: D-Rank First Class:Sensor ____Discipline → Zoom: The user has a vast eye, able to quadruple the range of a given sensory technique, often allowing them to sense things even outside of the given area (across threads). This vast range, however, makes it difficult to detect fine details. The user is only able to know that chakra is there, or that chakra is being activated. Things like type of technique, rank, element, ect, are unknown to the user. ____Discipline → Resolution: The user is more determined to get fine details from his sensory techniques, but in order to get this type of clarity the user's range of the technique is reduced by half. The user is able to discover type of technique that is about to be active (fuuin, genjutsu, ninjutsu, custom jutsu, complex tai and buki), even specifics such as Bloodline type and rank. Additionally, the user can gain similar information about any chakra source in their sensory technique's range, including what bloodline the person possesses, assuming the user has seen the bloodline before, and approximately how large their chakra pool is. • "Additionally, if the user chooses zoom and resolution, then limitations are overwritten for their strengths."
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|c σ м в α т • ∂ α т α|├▬ Bloodline: Shounin no Gouzoku Clan | Jinton
Chakra Pool: 450+ Modifiers = 550 Stamina Pool: 50 + Modifiers = 150 Chakra Element: Lightning | Wind Chakra Color:Pumpkin Orange Chakra Materialization: Spherical aura, barely wider than Zhi is tall. It elongates when she moves at high speeds, and it becomes less opaque as her chakra reserves become closer to empty.
Reductions: • Learn ninjutsu one [2] posts faster. • Learn genjutsu one [2] posts faster. • -1 post to E-Rank and B-Rank Botany missions. Personal Attributes: • Own Tempo: Debuffing effects (lowering physical attributes, etc.) on Zhi are moderately less effective effective. • Mastering the Arts: For every additional 5 posts spent practicing a known technique Zhi becomes more efficient in its use, reducing its cost by 5. Cannot lower a techniques cost below 5 and this training must be done for each technique intended to gain the cost reduction. No learning post count reductions may apply whatsoever. Lowered usage costs do not weaken the jutsu whatsoever. • Flower Child: Zhi shows a promising future as a botanist, allowing her to start her career as an apprentice of the job type.
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|c α r є є r • ∂ α т α|├▬ Ryo: 両 2,500 AC: 1,500
Missions Complete: D Rank :: 0 C Rank :: 0 B Rank :: 0 A Rank :: 0 S Rank :: 0
Crafting Trees • {First Tree Here} || → {Current Title} • {Second Tree Here} || → {Current Title} • {Third Tree Here} || → {Current Title} • {Fourth Tree Here} || → {Current Title}
Crafting Jobs Complete: D Rank :: 0 C Rank :: 0 B Rank :: 0 A Rank :: 0 S Rank :: 0
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|ω є α ρ σ η • ∂ α т α|├▬ Weapon Type: Boot Blades Weapon Range: 5cm + Normal Kick Reach Weapon Weight: 1.36kg Weapon Size: 5cm wide (bottom to top) | 10cm long (end to end) Weapon Location: On Zhi's Shoes, arced over front-top side
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|ι η ν є η т σ r у|├▬ • 5 Shuriken (stored in tool pouch on left leg) • 10 Kunai (stored in tool pouch on left leg) • Sunagakure Headband (in the style of a scarf) • Clothes (as depicted in character image) • Enclosing Seal (Right Glove Palm | Linked via Seal Connection) • Unsealing Seal (Left Glove Palm | Linked via Seal Connection) • 1 Single-Use 2x AC Coupon
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|т є c н η ι q υ є ѕ|├▬ ▬▬┤|N i n j u t s u Maruton: ____• Henge no Jutsu [ Transformation Technique ] ____• Kawarimi no Jutsu [ Substitution Technique ] ____• Bushin no Jutsu [ Clone Technique ] ____• Suimen Hokou no Waza [ Act of Water Surface Walking ] ____• Kinobori no Waza [ Act of Tree Climbing ] ____• Kai [ Release ] | [-20 Cost (min. 5 cost)] ____• Kage Bunshin no Jutsu [ Shadow Clone Technique ] | [-10 Cost (min. 5 cost)] | [-1 Nin Slot]
Raiton ____• Teikou no Kuntou [ Electrical Resistance Training ] ____• Raikou Henge no Jutsu [ Lightning Transformation Technique ] | [-1 Nin Slot] ____• Ayatsuri Raikou no Jutsu [ Manipulated Lightning Technique ] | [-1 Nin Slot]
Fuuton ____• Zankuuha [ Decapitating Air Waves ] | [-1 Nin Slot] ____• Zankyokukuuha [ Extreme Decapitating Air Waves ] ____• Hana Chirimai [ Flower Scattering Dance ] | [-1 Nin Slot]
▬▬┤|G e n j u t s u Enchantment • Okuyuki Katawa [ Depth Distortion ] • Kugurinukeru Meikyou [ Through the Looking Glass ] • Youma Tacchi [ Ghost Touch ] • Mougo Shibaku no Jutsu [ False Strike Technique ] • Niseshi no Gijutsu [ Art of Fake Death ] • Chototsu [ Recklessness ] • Meiryou no Hibiki [ Echo of Clarity ] • Ataeru Kanjoo no Jutsu [ Inflict Emotion Technique ]
Instance • Aitou no Hibiki [ Echo of Lament ]
▬▬┤|F o r m l e s s S t y l e s Current Slots Available → 00 // 02 Locked Formless ____• Soft Physical Formless [B-Rank Training] _______○ D-Rank [x] _______○ C-Rank [x] _______○ B-Rank [x] Formless Techniques ____• Oukashou [ Cherry Blossom Collision ] ____• Hien [ Flying Swallow ]
▬▬┤|C u s t o m s Maruton: ____• Piercing the Veil ____• Will of Kagura
____• Ecological no Jutsu [ Speed Release: The Ecological Technique ] (x3 | -15 Usage Cost)
____• Jinton: Takusan Hoshi no Jutsu [ Speed Release: Many, Many Stars Technique ] (x5 | -30 Usage Cost)
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|н ι ѕ т σ r у|├▬ Zhi was born and raised in Sunagakure. Being the sand bumpkin she was raised to be, she rather loves the desert for all of its givings and takings. Her home is what it should be. Her parents noticed her keen awareness of her surroundings from a young age and enrolled her in the village's ninja program as soon as possible. Since then "school" life was full of fun and interesting experiences. Zhi has always given one-hundred and ten percent of her effort toward her lessons and plans, but more than that for her peers and teachers. Although, she'd be well-known by them as the antsy girl who had to hop or jog in place during class because she hated sitting still for the whole time. Now that she's graduated to become a ninja, Zhi expects that things will get even more interesting and definitely more difficult. She won't shy away from the challenge though! No way!
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Posted: Sun Aug 20, 2017 11:53 pm
Azeiel The Risen
I've completely rewritten the character, so she'll need a closer look. Everything is written with PAs taken into account.
Edit: modified Chakra Manifestation a bit.
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|ρ є r ѕ σ η α ℓ • ∂ α т α|├▬ Full Name: Shion Moro Nickname: n/a Age: 14 Birthdate: Aug 5 Gender: Female
Height: 4'9" Weight: 98lbs
Nindo: still searching Personality: Shion likes to pretend she is cool and aloof, thinking herself as having a level head. Despite how she acts, Shion is one of the first to blow a fuse at the simplest of sleights. She does genuinely try to keep her cool through frequent relaxation and meditation.
Description : Shion is of a rather small stature, standing much shorter than her peers. Her petite build is topped with a round baby-face, lightly sprinkled with freckles, and embedded with 2 large hazel eyes, all capped off with a mess of short, auburn hair.
Village: Kumo Title: Genin Rank: D-rank First Class: Taijutsu ____Discipline → Monk Second Class: Medic ____Discipline → Specialist [Offensive]
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|c σ м в α т • ∂ α т α|├▬ Bloodline: Wisdom: +1 PA, +2 custom techs, 10 jutsu slots
Chakra Pool: 275 Stamina Pool: 225 Chakra Element:Lightning/Water Chakra Color: Yellow Chakra Materialization: In an almost cartoonish contrast to her easy going outward appearance, Shion's chakra manifests itself as bolts of lightning crackling around her body in an endless path, snaking around her torso and limbs.
Strengths: • Agile • Flexible fighting style Weaknesses: • easily tilted • small framed Fears: • losing any sense of worth • large bodies of water
Reductions: • Taijutsu -1 • Eiseijutsu -1
Personal Attributes: • Combative Medic: Shion has little use for genjutsu, preferring to fight up close an personal instead of using what she considers cheap tricks. As such, she has instead focused her studies on physical attacks. This PA modifies the medic class as follows. At D-rank: replace "5 genjutsu and 5 ninjutsu" with "8 ninjutsu". At each rank up, replace "+2 genjutsu" with "+1 formless style" • Balance: through strict meditative practices, Shion has gained the ability to utilize her physical energy as a backup chakra source and visa versa. This PA modifies the Monk Discipline as follows. "Starts with extra technique [Cultivation] (cultivation is a conversion of stamina to chakra [or visa versa], at a 10 chakra to 10 stamina conversion in any increment of 10.)" • Chakra Manifestation - Cloak: Through her study of meditation and energy conversion, Shion has also gained the ability of strengthen her body by circulating chakra throughout herself. This PA grants Shion the following technique. "Chakra Manifestation - Cloak: at the cost of 20 chakra per post, Shion recieves a slight boost to her strength and speed stats. At Jonin rank, this becomes 15 chakra per post for a mild boost to her strength, speed, and reflex stats, and at Sannin this becomes 10 chakra per post for a moderate boost to all stats"
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|c α r є є r • ∂ α т α|├▬ Ryo: 0 Advancement Credit: 0
Missions Complete: D Rank :: 0 C Rank :: 0 B Rank :: 0 A Rank :: 0 S Rank :: 0
Crafting Trees • {First Tree Here} || → n/a • {Second Tree Here} || → n/a • {Third Tree Here} || → n/a • {Fourth Tree Here} || → n/a
Crafting Jobs Complete: D Rank :: 0 C Rank :: 0 B Rank :: 0 A Rank :: 0 S Rank :: 0
Job Titles • {Job} || → n/a • {Job} || → n/a
Job Missions Complete: D Rank :: 0 C Rank :: 0 B Rank :: 0 A Rank :: 0 S Rank :: 0
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|ω є α ρ σ η • ∂ α т α|├▬ Weapon Type: n/a Weapon Range: n/a Weapon Weight: n/a Weapon Size: n/a Weapon Location: • n/a
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|ι η ν є η т σ r у|├▬ • shurikan x10 • kunai x5 • Current Outfit x1 - Current Dress: Dark blue spring hoodie over a grey tank top with black legging under a pair of shorts. Projectile/scroll pouch on right arm and a sick a** pair of navy blue high tops.
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|т є c н η ι q υ є ѕ|├▬ ▬▬┤|N i n j u t s u Maruton: • Henge no Jutsu [ Transformation Technique ] • Kawarimi no Jutsu [ Substitution Technique ] • Bushin no Jutsu [ Clone Technique ] • Suimen Hokou no Waza [ Act of Water Surface Walking ] • Kinobori no Waza [ Act of Tree Climbing ] • Kai [ Release ]
Raiton •
Suiton •
Eiseijutsu • ▬▬┤|T a i j u t s u n/a • n/a ▬▬┤|B u k i j u t s u n/a • n/a
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|н ι ѕ т σ r у|├▬ Shion's story is nothing special. She didn't come from a noble family or an honored clan, nor does she have any heavy motivations for becoming a ninja. Her family wasn't slain in the dead of night, nor does she owe any sort of life debts. She simply became a ninja because its what she wanted to do. Her past might not be anything special, but who knows what the future holds?
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|ρ є r ѕ σ η α ℓ • ∂ α т α|├▬ Full Name: Ada Rio-Kyuri Nickname: N/a Age: 17 Birthdate: September 14th Gender: Female
Height: 168cm Weight: 54kg
Nindo: "True will cannot be defeated." Personality: At times, Ada's insensitivity and strongly focused attitude paint her as the unfriendly sort. However, she is not without heart. While she doesn't openly express herself in commonplace Ada does strongly put energy into helping others in her own way. Where she finds herself personally incapable or shorthanded, she believes it is okay to rely on others for assistance to achieve a goal. When on one of her "achievement warpaths" she lets almost nothing obstruct her from her goal(s). One way or another, she looks for ways to do what she set out to do, often doing so in creative ways that wouldn't be expected of her by those unaware of her talents.
Village: Kumogakure Title: Genin Rank: D-Rank First Class:Puppeteer ____Discipline → Army of One: The user makes use of their puppetry skills to become a one man army, increasing the overall output potential that their signature weapons can dish out by allowing them to control puppets according to one [1] rank above their own. In other words, at D-rank, they can control one puppet per hand, whereas other disciplines require both hands for one puppet. To maximize this potential, the users puppets gain a +3 weapon mechanism per puppet. Additionally, their chakra strings are significantly tougher than other puppet user's, making any chakra string technique act a rank higher. For D-rank, this bonus only works for techniques D rank and lower, C-rank for C rank and lower, B-rank for B rank and lower, A-rank for A rank and lower, and S-rank for S rank and lower. First Class:Bloodline ____Discipline → Blood Knight: Your bloodline techniques possess greater power, allowing them to overwhelm techniques of the same rank, and preventing them from succumbing to elemental weaknesses of techniques the same rank. Can cast bloodline techniques through one-handed seals.
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|c σ м в α т • ∂ α т α|├▬ Bloodline: Satetsu | Jiton
Chakra Pool: 355 - 50 = 305 Stamina Pool: 145 - 50 = 95 Chakra Element: Lightning | Earth Chakra Color:Soft Red Chakra Materialization: A gentle "halo-like" glow radiating from all around her body, brightest at the closest points of herself.
Strengths: • Combative Versatility • Intuitive Creativity • Commanding Personality • Strong-willed Weaknesses: • Headstrong • Socially Overbearing • May fail to show respect toward those who haven't "earned" it Fears: • Personal Stagnation - Almost obsessively keeps self perpetually busy to achieve progression in any available form. • Nonrecognition - More of a minor fear for Ada, but she does take it extremely personal when her "important" achievements are overlooked or outright ignored. So much so that this can, at times, override her strong will to push forward against all other odds.
Reductions: • Learn Bloodline jutsu one [1] post faster. • Learn Kugutsu one [1] post faster. • Learn Taijutsu one [1] post slower. (Satetsu clan Restriction) Personal Attributes: • Magnetic Propulsion: Objects that are magnetically manipulated by Ada move moderately faster and have moderately increased impact strength than if used/wielded normally. However, Ada's chakra and stamina reserves each suffer a permanent -50 decrease (after calculating amounts granted by class or other bonuses). • Mastering the Arts: For every additional 5 posts spent practicing a known technique Ada becomes more efficient in its use, reducing its cost by 5. Cannot lower a techniques cost below 5 and this training must be done for each technique intended to gain the cost reduction. Lowered usage costs do not weaken the jutsu whatsoever.
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|c α r є є r • ∂ α т α|├▬ Ryo: 両 0 AC: 0
Missions Complete: D Rank :: 0 C Rank :: 0 B Rank :: 0 A Rank :: 0 S Rank :: 0
Crafting Trees • {First Tree Here} || → {Current Title} • {Second Tree Here} || → {Current Title} • {Third Tree Here} || → {Current Title} • {Fourth Tree Here} || → {Current Title}
Crafting Jobs Complete: D Rank :: 0 C Rank :: 0 B Rank :: 0 A Rank :: 0 S Rank :: 0
Job Titles • N/a || → N/a
Job Missions Complete: D Rank :: 0 C Rank :: 0 B Rank :: 0 A Rank :: 0 S Rank :: 0
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|ω є α ρ σ η • ∂ α т α|├▬ Weapon Type: Falchion Weapon Range: Close Range Weapon Weight: 3kg Weapon Size: 76cm | 22cm Handle | 54cm Blade Weapon Location: Worn on back via clip-release holster.
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|ι η ν є η т σ r у|├▬ • 5 Shuriken (stored in weapon pouch on left hip) • 10 Kunai (stored in weapon pouch on left hip) • Training Puppet • Clothes (as depicted in character image)
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▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|т є c н η ι q υ є ѕ|├▬ ▬▬┤|N i n j u t s u Maruton: ____• Henge no Jutsu [ Transformation Technique ] ____• Kawarimi no Jutsu [ Substitution Technique ] ____• Bushin no Jutsu [ Clone Technique ] ____• Suimen Hokou no Waza [ Act of Water Surface Walking ] ____• Kinobori no Waza [ Act of Tree Climbing ] ____• Kai [ Release ]
▬▬┤|F o r m l e s s S t y l e s Current Slots Available → 00 // 02 Locked Formless | Strange Weapons [ Metal Dust/Sand ] ____• D-Rank Training | -2 Formless Technique Slots ____• _-Rank Training | [x] Formless Techniques ____•
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|н ι ѕ т σ r у|├▬ Ada was adopted into the Rio family of the Land of Lightning's lower tier nobility at a relatively early age. Her original family was left behind to give her an opportunity where she could prosper rather than suffer in the poor, unstable conditions she was born into of the mountainous outlands. Her adoptive family put the young Ada's curious, and surprisingly innovative mind to best use as they saw fit. She received basic training in various crafts which she showed promise in, but it was decided that she would become a kunoichi when she also displayed the ability to harness chakra as shinobi could. Ada was moved to Kumogakure for proper training and to be enlisted into military service when she graduated the academy. Surprisingly, the paths set before her worked just fine with her developing personal ambitions. Now, Ada strives to not only fulfill the purpose given to her, but also to go beyond them to every capacity she believes she can for her own sake. Testing her own boundaries, achieving greatness akin to or even beyond the legends of ages past, and earning respect and recognition for her feats are the primary motivators which guide her forward one step at a time.
