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[Archaon Lord Darkness]

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wahmbulance INTRUDER ALERT! wahmbulance INTRUDER ALERT! wahmbulance INTRUDER ALERT! wahmbulance

"Computer turn off the alarms, I can see her."

"You want maybe Computer subdue intruder?"

"I highly doubt you have the capabilities to take out that order."

"Okay GC...."  

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The alarms come on again.

"Another intruder!"

GC runs to his war room grabs his shotgun and some ammo. He returns to his previous location.

GC cocks his gun

"What the ____ do y'all want?"  

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"Answer me ____ it! I demand a response, you just can't stand there. FACE ME!"

GC put his double barrell shotgun to the back of the ladies' head. He wrapped his arm around her stomach area. He gently tugged her backwards.

"I want answers and I want them now."  

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"If I have to kill, I will bcause I've killed before. You don't want to end up sleeping with the fishes now do ya'?"

GC became tired with the intruders. He pulled the woman up and lifted her on to his shoulders. He morphed into Collosus, the X-man. GC continued walking until he reached a room labeled "Brig".

"Here's your stop."  

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GC throws the girl in there. He then morphs into Wolverine, an X-man also, and tracks and finds the male intruder. He recieved the same fate as the female. Imprisonment.  

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.:~GC's Laboratory~:.

"What am I to do with these... these.... simpletons!?!? I am absolutely outraged about the fact that they got into this high security facility!"  

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GC broke into a pace. He morphed into great minds such as, Professer Charles Xavier, Magneto, Gahndi, Albert Einstien, Steven Hawking, Jean-Luc Picard. He believed these transformations would give him some great wisdom that could solve this problem immediately.  

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"Thaddeus!"

A short man with gaping muscles enters the room. He is wearing the attire of the Sandman with slight variations. He has a red shirt with white stripes (long-sleeved) and some khaki pants.

"Yes, sire?"  

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"What shall I do with the prisoners?"

Thaddeus began to look puzzled. He made a weird face then plummeted to the ground.

"Thaddeus!"  

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"Computer, what is going on?"

"S-S-S-S-Som-Someone is is is tam-tamp-tamp-tampering w-w-w-with...."

Computer shut off along with all the power in Facility X.  

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GC morphs into Wolverine and exits his laboratory.

"More intruders, I suspect."


GC couldn't shake this omnious feeling he had, like...  

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End of story.

I will not post anymore of that story. You guys can gladly give me some feedback. I think it was good, but it would've been better if my intruders were to do somethings on their own. I was going to have you guys break out without my intrusion (until the end) that's why the power went out. But I don't want to continue so....