♜▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|ρ є r ѕ σ η α ℓ • ∂ α т α|├▬♜ ♞Full Name: Tetsuhiko Hanzō (Hanzō Tetsuhiko) (半蔵 鉄彦) ♞Nickname: The Iron Prince ♞Age: 19 ♞Birthdate: November 8th ♞Gender: Male
♞Height: 5' 7" | 170 cm ♞Weight: 140 lbs | 64 kg
♞Nindo: "Be the dark of night to ensure the village's light of day." ♞Personality: Tetsuhiko is polite, mannered, and adheres to strict protocol and order in terms of general conduct. He faces the world with a gentle smile and is polite rather than brash, but can appear as pretentious because of his wealthy and isolated upbringing. He is a high-minded and creative young man who is often quite and reflective in his thoughts. A strategist, a general, but also a performer and an artist, Tetsuhiko has a wide range of interests. He admires cleanliness, beauty, and order in all aspects of his life and feels trapped by the world that he views as naturally filthy, ugly, and chaotic. As a result of this neuroticism, he is an immense neat freak who spends hours cleaning himself and his surroundings until spotless. He fears filth and ugliness because it indicates a lack of personal control.
Tetsuhiko is a traditionalist who always wears the ornate clothing of his clan as well as his signature cravat tied perfectly around his neck. He has a strong sense of nationalism and pride in Sunagakure and believes that a shinobi's chief duty is to protect the village at all costs. Because of his deep fear of outside threats he is an extremist who believes in neutralizing all threats through execution, assassination, and war. His militarist beliefs live in contrast to his high nobility and dignity. When it comes to the good of the village the ends always justify the means. His ambition is to become the Kazekage and consolidate the power of all of the militaries of the world under his control to achieve a lasting peace.
Hobbies: Strategy games, bunraku puppet shows, puppet crafting, music performances, and reading. Favorite Food and Drink: Sweets and sugary tea. Wants to Fight: He wants to surpass his mother, Tetsuotome, in battle. Favorite Word: Checkmate
♞Village: Sunagakure ☼ ♞Title: Genin ♞Rank: D-Rank ♞First Class: Puppeteer ____Architect → The user has a fantastic creative mind, able to make more custom puppets (+2) as well as construct them and prepare them easier. For each rank the user increases, they gain a [-1] bonus to preparation time. . Additionally, the user is so good at creating and planning, that human puppets only cost 1 custom puppet slot. ♞Second Class: Performer ____Grand Performance → The user can perform both types of arts (ninjutsu and genjutsu) through their performance or instrument, often casting them at the same time (must pay for both techniques). Can perform D rank techniques through instrument at D - rank, C and C - rank, B at B - rank, A at A - rank, and S at S - rank. By selecting this discipline, increase the total number of Genjutsu and Ninjutsu gained per rank, including D - rank, by one [+1].
♜▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|c σ м в α т • ∂ α т α|├▬♜ ♞Bloodline: Jiton | Magnet Release | Iron Sand
♞Chakra Pool: 460 ♞Stamina Pool: 35 ♞Chakra Element: Raiton | Doton ♞Chakra Color:Indigo ♞Chakra Materialization: His indigo chakra materializes as multiple chess pieces floating around him which pulsate like musical soundwaves.
♞Passive Status Increases: • Strength ► {Total Bonus} →→ {Where does this come from?} • Speed ► {Total Bonus} →→ {Where does this come from?} • Reflex ► {Total Bonus} →→ {Where does this come from?} • Fortitude ► {Total Bonus} →→ {Where does this come from?}
♞Strengths: • Strategy • Puppetry • Performing • Magnetism • Illusion • Cunning/Intelligence ♞Weaknesses: • Close Combat • Low Physical Strength • Small Size • Physically Frail ♞Fears: • Outside threats to his village • Filth • Ugliness
♞Reductions: • Learn Raiton 1 post faster (Jiton Bloodline) • Learn Doton 1 post faster (Jiton Bloodline) • Learn Kugutsu 1 post faster (Puppeteer Class) • Learn Ninjutsu 1 post faster (Performer Class) • Learn Genjutsu 1 post faster (Performer Class) ♞Personal Attributes: • Master Artisan | Tetsuhiko has an additional two custom puppet slots. • Puppet Master | Tetsuhiko can use the chakra mechanisms within custom puppets for half cost at a minimum of five chakra. ♜▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|c α r є є r • ∂ α т α|├▬♜ ♞Ryo: 両{Money} 0 ♞AC: {Advancement credit} 0
♞Missions Complete: 0 D Rank :: 0 C Rank :: 0 B Rank :: 0 A Rank :: 0 S Rank :: 0
♞Crafting Trees • {First Tree Here} || → {Current Title} • {Second Tree Here} || → {Current Title} • {Third Tree Here} || → {Current Title} • {Fourth Tree Here} || → {Current Title}
♞Crafting Jobs Complete: D Rank :: 0 C Rank :: 0 B Rank :: 0 A Rank :: 0 S Rank :: 0
♜▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|ω є α ρ σ η • ∂ α т α|├▬♜ ♞Weapon Type: Katana ♞Weapon Range: 20 inches ♞Weapon Weight: 3 lbs ♞Weapon Size: 20 inches by 2 inches wide, 8 inch handle ♞Weapon Location: Left Hip
♜▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|ι η ν є η т σ r у|├▬♜ • 8 Kunai • 7 Shuriken • Wooden training puppet • Sunagakure forehead protector as belt buckle • Ornate, traditional clothing of the Hanzō clan • Metal concerto flute • Small cherrywood violin • Small gourd of iron sand • Small cleaning kit • Miniature chess and shogi set
♜▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|т є c н η ι q υ є ѕ|├▬ ▬▬♜┤|N i n j u t s u Maruton: • Henge no Jutsu [ Transformation Technique ] • Kawarimi no Jutsu [ Substitution Technique ] • Bushin no Jutsu [ Clone Technique ] • Suimen Hokou no Waza [ Act of Water Surface Walking ] • Kinobori no Waza [ Act of Tree Climbing ] • Kai [ Release ]
Kugutsu • • • • •
Jiton • • • • •
Raiton • • • • •
Doton • • • • • ▬▬┤|G e n j u t s u Enchantment • • • • •
Illusory • • • • • ♜▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|н ι ѕ т σ r у|├▬♜ Tetsuhiko was born into one of the oldest noble clans of Sunagakure, clan Hanzō. Magnet release and the use of iron sand are the signature kekkei genkai of the main branch of the clan. The leader of the clan is the patriarch and/or matriarch who must be from the main line of the clan and possess the Jiton kekkei genkai. Tetsuhiko's father, Hachiro Hanzō, is the eighth and current patriarch of the Hanzō clan and Tetsuhiko's mother, Tetsuotome Hanzō, is the eighth and current matriarch. Hachiro was the eighth son of the seventh patriarch, Jin Hanzō, and inherited the leadership of the clan because his seven older siblings did not possess the Jiton kekkei genkai. This event almost brought the clan to ruin because for a long time there was no heir and Jin Hanzō was a generally ineffective clan leader who mismanaged clan resources. Hachiro's siblings were greatly jealous of him because of how favored he was over them. This caused a civil war between the siblings when Jin died prematurely and a ten-year-old Hachiro inherited the throne. Hachiro used his power in the village to banish his siblings and end the civil war and swore that his authority would never be questioned again.
Eight years later Hachiro married his same age cousin Tetsuotome who also possessed the kekkei genkai to ensure that Hachiro would have a proper heir of pure bloodline. Tetsuotome graduated from the academy at the age of seven and became a chunin at the age of eight and was considered a prodigious kunoichi and one of the most powerful ninja the Hanzō clan ever produced. By age sixteen she became a jonin ANBU and one of its highest-ranking members. She was known as the Iron Maiden of Sungakure because of her name and her powerful use of iron sand to encase her foes in torturous coffins before lacerating them to death with iron blades. She would also use her skill in bukijutsu for sword combat and heavy samurai armor to protect herself and charge into battle on the front lines with great ferocity.
After nine months of marriage and ruling the Hanzō clan the couple had Tetsuhiko, a boy who inherited Jiton and in line to become the ninth patriarch. His birth was celebrated greatly by the clan and he was spoiled by his parents, aunts, and uncles. Hachiro, a great clan head, was a good father to Tetsuhiko growing up and had high expectations that he would one day become his greater successor and perhaps the Kazekage. Tetsuotome, a once ruthless ANBU, retired from service during Tetsuhiko's childhood so that she could ensure that she would survive to see him grow up. Tetsuhiko was named after his mother and Tetsuotome often affectionately called him her little prince in reference to her naming him the iron prince.
Tetsuhiko had a content but sheltered childhood within the large estate of House Hanzō. As a child, he always had a crippling fear of those outside the village's walls coming into his home which has manifested over time. In his spare time, he would play a lot of board games such as chess and shogi with his family before far surpassing them with experience. He also took a liking to music and learned multiple instruments, namely the organ, piano, flute, and violin. His father taught him how to be a genteel, mannered gentleman and nearly overwhelmed him with etiquette lessons. Tetsuhiko also frequented many formal parties during his childhood to rub elbows with high society in Sunagakure. His mother was a caring figure, but a strict disciplinarian, likely trying to suppress her violent tendencies from her ANBU training. Tetsuhiko was also close with his maternal grandfather, Kazama Hanzō, a retired oinin and puppeteer who worked in a small puppet shop. Tetsuhiko would spend his weekends visiting his grandparents and helping Kazama keep up his puppet shop. Puppetry was always a respected tradition in the Hanzō clan.
Tetsuhiko was a great student in the academy who applied himself and always made good grades. His favorite extracurricular was to put on puppet performances and piano recitals for his teachers and classmates. Tetsuhiko was popular among his peers, although some students were jealous of him for being a rich kid. Some of Tetsuhiko's personality quirks stood out to his classmates and he was picked on, although not too severely. He has high aspirations for his future.
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▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|ρ є r ѕ σ η α ℓ • ∂ α т α|├▬ Full Name: Sachiko Nickname: Chīsana onēchan {little Ogress} Chīsana Oni futago{little Ogre twin} Age: 13 Birthdate: Aug 6 Gender: Female
Height: 4ft 11in Weight: How Dare you ask my weight scream
Nindo: "Whats life without a little fun to go with it." Personality: Sachiko temperature will vary from extreme to extreme. Usually she is a very laid back lady that often doesn't give much to concern about the world around her as long as she is happy and enjoying herself. She also a little bit mischievous and likes to pull pranks but only for fun. If someone disturbs her happy times though, they should be ready, as Sachiko will change from her sweet cheerful attitude to that of a monster and will do everything in her power to demolish those that would make her angry. Also talking about her chest area tends to anger her as well.
Village: Otagakure Title: Genin Rank: D-Rank Shinobi First Class: Bloodline ____Discipline → Blood Bender Second Class: Medical ____Discipline → Specialist=Healing
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|c σ м в α т • ∂ α т α|├▬ Bloodline: Oni clan
Chakra Pool:330 Stamina Pool: 170 Chakra Element: Suiton and Katon Chakra Color: Smoky green Chakra Materialization: It usually materializes looking like spirits circling Sachiko.
Strengths: • Healing jutsu- Raised in a family that got hurt a lot, Sachiko had to learn how to fix all sorts of ailments. • Ranged combat- Not very strong, Sachiko relies on her throwing prowls for attacking. Weaknesses: • Close combat- Sachiko never learned how to fight in close proximity • Weak strength- Sachiko is not very strong compared to the rest of the oni members. She struggles to wield anything larger then a short sword Fears: • Doesn't like spiders- Spiders. eek To many legs • Fear of Losing her brother
Reductions: • Learn bloodline techniques one (1) post faster. • Learn Medical techniques one (1) post faster Personal Attributes: • Oni resilience- able to take more attacks, as well as resistant to fire attacks[bloodline] • Nomadic foraging- If a dice roll is required to determine the Job's reward, an additional die is rolled and the final result is the better of the rolls. • Little Oni- Sachiko size allows for her to move quicker then most oni and humans. 1 speed increase
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|c α r є є r • ∂ α т α|├▬ Ryo: 両{Money} {Start at zero} AC: {Advancement credit} {Start at zero}
Missions Complete: D Rank :: 0 {All start at zero} C Rank :: 0 B Rank :: 0 A Rank :: 0 S Rank :: 0
Crafting Trees • {First Tree Here} || → {Current Title} • {Second Tree Here} || → {Current Title} • {Third Tree Here} || → {Current Title} • {Fourth Tree Here} || → {Current Title}
Crafting Jobs Complete: D Rank :: 0 {All start at zero} C Rank :: 0 B Rank :: 0 A Rank :: 0 S Rank :: 0
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|ω є α ρ σ η • ∂ α т α|├▬ Weapon Type: {Meteor Hammer Weapon Range: 10 ft long chain. Each orb is half a foot across. Weapon Weight: Each head weights about five pounds Weapon Size: Meteors are half a foot radius with a 10 ft chain between them. Weapon Location: Wrapped around her waist like a belt, covered by an obi-age
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|ι η ν є η т σ r у|├▬ On my person • red furisode kimono top • Black and red Obi-age sash with belt underneath with lots of hooks. [Used to hid most of her weaponry{kunai, glass bottles, meteor hammers}] • red skirt with black stockings • white undershirt and black biker shorts underneath kimono and skirt • Undergarments • two hair ties with small gourd shaped stones with the kanji 酒"Sake" on them [From my mother] • Bag of infinite capacity/ regalar bag for holding many objects • shoes Hidden among my clothes • 10 glass bottles, attached to clips under Obi-age • 5 kunai, attached to clips under Obi-age • small gourd filled with Amazake/ Weak alcohol content sake [carried by hand or attached to a clip under obi-age] • Several secret stashes of ginger candy, hidden in her Kimono sleeves Bag of infinite capacity Never know what you'll need.
• First-aid kit
•2 scalpels •sterile gauze pads of different sizes •adhesive tape •adhesive bandages in several sizes •elastic bandage •antiseptic wipes •soap •tweezers •sharp scissors •safety pins •thermometer •Ice pack •plastic non-latex gloves (at least 2 pairs)
• Hairbrush • sewing needle and thread • Small gourd filled with honey and herbs • little red book with pen for keeping information • little green book with plant information • Little kettle • Small frying pan • Flint and steel • Hunting knife • small bag of tea-leaves • dried meats and vegetables • spoon and fork • paper fan [good for cooling down oneself in hot weather, and for slapping people without much damage] • bag of Cookies • five feet of wire • eight feet of rope • six square feet of red cloth [folded down to a single square foot] • one square foot of white cloth • Small lantern • two folded up parka • two towels, Large and small • Tiny pillow • blanket [folded down] • two blank scrolls • jar of peanut butter • Compact tent • Large bag of Rice • butter
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|т є c н η ι q υ є ѕ|├▬ ▬▬┤|N i n j u t s u Maruton: • Henge no Jutsu [ Transformation Technique ] • Kawarimi no Jutsu [ Substitution Technique ] • Bushin no Jutsu [ Clone Technique ] • Suimen Hokou no Waza [ Act of Water Surface Walking ] • Kinobori no Waza [ Act of Tree Climbing ] • Kai [ Release ]
Suiton •
Katon •
Saketon • ▬▬┤|G e n j u t s u Enchantment •
Instance •
▬▬┤|B u k i j u t s u {Baiken no Kusari} • {Stage progression / techniques learned} ▬▬┤|F o r m l e s s S t y l e s Current Slots Available → 00 // 00 {Find in Formless Style and Class information} Locked Formless • {Training Links} Slots Used • _______ → || [X] {Please include links for training}
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|н ι ѕ т σ r у|├▬ Born seconds after her brother, Sachiko is the younger of the Oni twins. Being fraternal twins they take on much different looks and personality. Where her brother is much more serious nature, Sachiko takes on the more quiet and relaxed nature. Being part of the Oni clan, their family was nomadic and would settle in a spot that seemed well, only for their family to decided that a new spot was better served the clan. From a young age, she and her brother where raised much differently. Where her brother had been taught how to fight and hunt with a weapon and learn how to defend the traveling caravans from raiders, Sachiko was taught how to gather plants and herbs from the wilds for eating and medicine that would be used to treat any ailments that affected the caravans. She was also taught needlework for repairing clothes that would be damaged from the male oni's battling each other, as well as how to brew alcohol as any oni child learns at a young age, though her brews tended to be far weaker in strength. But even though she took on the ladylike role in the clan, she was not without weapons training of her own. Having to forage, she would often come across wild animals that would need to be slain. The one weapon she took particularity interesting in, was a meteor hammer which she could wrap around her waist and keep it hidden from sight, only to whip it out very quickly to strike at her opponent with the blunt weapon.
Around their thirteenth birthday, her brother had grown restless with the clan. To often they had left a good place to settle and it bothered him greatly. They would oftentimes pass through villages that large clan families would stay in one spot for generations. She knew that her brother was growing envious of this fact and wished to stop traveling and settle in one of the villages. So on their thirteenth birthday, he announced to the clan that it was his wish to leave the clan, to find his own spot in the world. Being that they where twins, Sachiko wished to follow her brother, as they had always been close, even though her brother tried his hardest not to show it to her. At first, he told her that she didn't need to follow him, but she replied that it was her own wish to follow her brother in the world. His reply was only a grumble, but Sachiko knew that he was slightly happy that she did follow him. Leaving out on their own, the approached a village.
Ergo War
The Froggy Girl
Made nomadic foraging into something more similar to what its name is and made for a reroll mechanic for foraging.
Posted: Tue May 16, 2017 9:01 pm
XSK Ambrosia
"Hero of Sunlight" sounds like you're going for a Chakra Manifestation thing, but that covers just making it so non-sensors can see your manifestation. As written, it sounds more like a Jutsu. Perhaps another sunlight-based boost is appropriate?
I'm having a bit of trouble understanding what "A Happy Drunk" does. Is it allowing you to use Drunken Master while not intoxicated?
Kumurai
With reference to your PA "Puppet Master", the standard cost reduction for techniques is -5 Chakra or Stamina, with a +5 elsewhere necessary for every increment past that (so -10 Chakra would need +5 somewhere else).
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Your nomadic foraging PA should be rewritten, I'm told. I'd suggest something along the lines of this, tweaked for botany:
"If a dice roll is required to determine the Job's reward, an additional die is rolled and the final result is the better of the rolls."
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♜▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|ρ є r ѕ σ η α ℓ • ∂ α т α|├▬♜ ♞Full Name: Tetsuhiko Hanzō (Hanzō Tetsuhiko) (半蔵 鉄彦) ♞Nickname: The Iron Prince ♞Age: 13 ♞Birthdate: November 8th ♞Gender: Male
♞Height: 5' 3" | 162 cm ♞Weight: 104 lbs | 47 kg
♞Nindo: "Be the dark of night to ensure the village's light of day." ♞Personality: Tetsuhiko is polite, mannered, and adheres to strict protocol and order in terms of general conduct. He faces the world with a gentle smile and is polite rather than brash, but can appear as pretentious because of his wealthy and isolated upbringing. He is a high-minded and creative young man who is often quite and reflective in his thoughts. A strategist, a general, but also a performer and an artist, Tetsuhiko has a wide range of interests. He admires cleanliness, beauty, and order in all aspects of his life and feels trapped by the world that he views as naturally filthy, ugly, and chaotic. As a result of this neuroticism, he is an immense neat freak who spends hours cleaning himself and his surroundings until spotless. He fears filth and ugliness because it indicates a lack of personal control.
Tetsuhiko is a traditionalist who always wears the ornate clothing of his clan as well as his signature cravat tied perfectly around his neck. He has a strong sense of nationalism and pride in Sunagakure and believes that a shinobi's chief duty is to protect the village at all costs. Because of his deep fear of outside threats he is an extremist who believes in neutralizing all threats through execution, assassination, and war. His militarist beliefs live in contrast to his high nobility and dignity. When it comes to the good of the village the ends always justify the means. His ambition is to become the Kazekage and consolidate the power of all of the militaries of the world under his control to achieve a lasting peace.
Hobbies: Strategy games, bunraku puppet shows, puppet crafting, music performances, and reading. Favorite Food and Drink: Sweets and sugary tea. Wants to Fight: He wants to surpass his mother, Tetsuotome, in battle. Favorite Word: Checkmate
♞Village: Sunagakure ☼ ♞Title: Genin ♞Rank: D-Rank ♞First Class: Puppeteer ____Architect → The user has a fantastic creative mind, able to make more custom puppets (+2) as well as construct them and prepare them easier. For each rank the user increases, they gain a [-1] bonus to preparation time. . Additionally, the user is so good at creating and planning, that human puppets only cost 1 custom puppet slot. ♞Second Class: Performer ____Grand Performance → The user can perform both types of arts (ninjutsu and genjutsu) through their performance or instrument, often casting them at the same time (must pay for both techniques). Can perform D rank techniques through instrument at D - rank, C and C - rank, B at B - rank, A at A - rank, and S at S - rank. By selecting this discipline, increase the total number of Genjutsu and Ninjutsu gained per rank, including D - rank, by one [+1].
♜▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|c σ м в α т • ∂ α т α|├▬♜ ♞Bloodline: Jiton | Magnet Release | Iron Sand
♞Chakra Pool: 460 ♞Stamina Pool: 35 ♞Chakra Element: Raiton | Doton ♞Chakra Color:Indigo ♞Chakra Materialization: His indigo chakra materializes as multiple chess pieces floating around him which pulsate like musical soundwaves.
♞Passive Status Increases: • Strength ► {Total Bonus} →→ {Where does this come from?} • Speed ► {Total Bonus} →→ {Where does this come from?} • Reflex ► {Total Bonus} →→ {Where does this come from?} • Fortitude ► {Total Bonus} →→ {Where does this come from?}
♞Strengths: • Strategy • Puppetry • Performing • Magnetism • Illusion • Cunning/Intelligence ♞Weaknesses: • Close Combat • Low Physical Strength • Small Size • Physically Frail ♞Fears: • Outside threats to his village • Filth • Ugliness
♞Reductions: • Learn Raiton 1 post faster (Jiton Bloodline) • Learn Doton 1 post faster (Jiton Bloodline) • Learn Kugutsu 1 post faster (Puppeteer Class) • Learn Ninjutsu 1 post faster (Performer Class) • Learn Genjutsu 1 post faster (Performer Class) ♞Personal Attributes: • Master Artisan | Tetsuhiko has an additional two custom puppet slots. • Puppet Master | Tetsuhiko can use the chakra mechanisms within custom puppets for five less chakra at a minimum of five chakra. ♜▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|c α r є є r • ∂ α т α|├▬♜ ♞Ryo: 両{Money} 0 ♞AC: {Advancement credit} 0
♞Missions Complete: 0 D Rank :: 0 C Rank :: 0 B Rank :: 0 A Rank :: 0 S Rank :: 0
♞Crafting Trees • {First Tree Here} || → {Current Title} • {Second Tree Here} || → {Current Title} • {Third Tree Here} || → {Current Title} • {Fourth Tree Here} || → {Current Title}
♞Crafting Jobs Complete: D Rank :: 0 C Rank :: 0 B Rank :: 0 A Rank :: 0 S Rank :: 0
♜▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|ω є α ρ σ η • ∂ α т α|├▬♜ ♞Weapon Type: Katana ♞Weapon Range: 20 inches ♞Weapon Weight: 3 lbs ♞Weapon Size: 20 inches by 2 inches wide, 8 inch handle ♞Weapon Location: Left Hip
♜▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|ι η ν є η т σ r у|├▬♜ • 8 Kunai • 7 Shuriken • Wooden training puppet • Sunagakure forehead protector as belt buckle • Ornate, traditional clothing of the Hanzō clan • Metal concerto flute • Small cherrywood violin • Small gourd of iron sand • Small cleaning kit • Miniature chess and shogi set
♜▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|т є c н η ι q υ є ѕ|├▬ ▬▬♜┤|N i n j u t s u Maruton: • Henge no Jutsu [ Transformation Technique ] • Kawarimi no Jutsu [ Substitution Technique ] • Bushin no Jutsu [ Clone Technique ] • Suimen Hokou no Waza [ Act of Water Surface Walking ] • Kinobori no Waza [ Act of Tree Climbing ] • Kai [ Release ]
Kugutsu • • • • •
Jiton • • • • •
Raiton • • • • •
Doton • • • • • ▬▬┤|G e n j u t s u Enchantment • • • • •
Illusory • • • • • ♜▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|н ι ѕ т σ r у|├▬♜ Tetsuhiko was born into one of the oldest noble clans of Sunagakure, clan Hanzō. Magnet release and the use of iron sand are the signature kekkei genkai of the main branch of the clan. The leader of the clan is the patriarch and/or matriarch who must be from the main line of the clan and possess the Jiton kekkei genkai. Tetsuhiko's father, Hachiro Hanzō, is the eighth and current patriarch of the Hanzō clan and Tetsuhiko's mother, Tetsuotome Hanzō, is the eighth and current matriarch. Hachiro was the eighth son of the seventh patriarch, Jin Hanzō, and inherited the leadership of the clan because his seven older siblings did not possess the Jiton kekkei genkai. This event almost brought the clan to ruin because for a long time there was no heir and Jin Hanzō was a generally ineffective clan leader who mismanaged clan resources. Hachiro's siblings were greatly jealous of him because of how favored he was over them. This caused a civil war between the siblings when Jin died prematurely and a ten-year-old Hachiro inherited the throne. Hachiro used his power in the village to banish his siblings and end the civil war and swore that his authority would never be questioned again.
Eight years later Hachiro married his same age cousin Tetsuotome who also possessed the kekkei genkai to ensure that Hachiro would have a proper heir of pure bloodline. Tetsuotome graduated from the academy at the age of seven and became a chunin at the age of eight and was considered a prodigious kunoichi and one of the most powerful ninja the Hanzō clan ever produced. By age sixteen she became a jonin ANBU and one of its highest-ranking members. She was known as the Iron Maiden of Sungakure because of her name and her powerful use of iron sand to encase her foes in torturous coffins before lacerating them to death with iron blades. She would also use her skill in bukijutsu for sword combat and heavy samurai armor to protect herself and charge into battle on the front lines with great ferocity.
After nine months of marriage and ruling the Hanzō clan the couple had Tetsuhiko, a boy who inherited Jiton and in line to become the ninth patriarch. His birth was celebrated greatly by the clan and he was spoiled by his parents, aunts, and uncles. Hachiro, a great clan head, was a good father to Tetsuhiko growing up and had high expectations that he would one day become his greater successor and perhaps the Kazekage. Tetsuotome, a once ruthless ANBU, retired from service during Tetsuhiko's childhood so that she could ensure that she would survive to see him grow up. Tetsuhiko was named after his mother and Tetsuotome often affectionately called him her little prince in reference to her naming him the iron prince.
Tetsuhiko had a content but sheltered childhood within the large estate of House Hanzō. As a child, he always had a crippling fear of those outside the village's walls coming into his home which has manifested over time. In his spare time, he would play a lot of board games such as chess and shogi with his family before far surpassing them with experience. He also took a liking to music and learned multiple instruments, namely the organ, piano, flute, and violin. His father taught him how to be a genteel, mannered gentleman and nearly overwhelmed him with etiquette lessons. Tetsuhiko also frequented many formal parties during his childhood to rub elbows with high society in Sunagakure. His mother was a caring figure, but a strict disciplinarian, likely trying to suppress her violent tendencies from her ANBU training. Tetsuhiko was also close with his maternal grandfather, Kazama Hanzō, a retired oinin and puppeteer who worked in a small puppet shop. Tetsuhiko would spend his weekends visiting his grandparents and helping Kazama keep up his puppet shop. Puppetry was always a respected tradition in the Hanzō clan.
Tetsuhiko was a great student in the academy who applied himself and always made good grades. His favorite extracurricular was to put on puppet performances and piano recitals for his teachers and classmates. Tetsuhiko was popular among his peers, although some students were jealous of him for being a rich kid. Some of Tetsuhiko's personality quirks stood out to his classmates and he was picked on, although not too severely. He has high aspirations for his future.
Posted: Tue May 16, 2017 11:15 pm
Kumurai
Ergo War
♜▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|ρ є r ѕ σ η α ℓ • ∂ α т α|├▬♜ ♞Full Name: Tetsuhiko Hanzō (Hanzō Tetsuhiko) (半蔵 鉄彦) ♞Nickname: The Iron Prince ♞Age: 19 ♞Birthdate: November 8th ♞Gender: Male
♞Height: 5' 7" | 170 cm ♞Weight: 140 lbs | 64 kg
♞Nindo: "Be the dark of night to ensure the village's light of day." ♞Personality: Tetsuhiko is polite, mannered, and adheres to strict protocol and order in terms of general conduct. He faces the world with a gentle smile and is polite rather than brash, but can appear as pretentious because of his wealthy and isolated upbringing. He is a high-minded and creative young man who is often quite and reflective in his thoughts. A strategist, a general, but also a performer and an artist, Tetsuhiko has a wide range of interests. He admires cleanliness, beauty, and order in all aspects of his life and feels trapped by the world that he views as naturally filthy, ugly, and chaotic. As a result of this neuroticism, he is an immense neat freak who spends hours cleaning himself and his surroundings until spotless. He fears filth and ugliness because it indicates a lack of personal control.
Tetsuhiko is a traditionalist who always wears the ornate clothing of his clan as well as his signature cravat tied perfectly around his neck. He has a strong sense of nationalism and pride in Sunagakure and believes that a shinobi's chief duty is to protect the village at all costs. Because of his deep fear of outside threats he is an extremist who believes in neutralizing all threats through execution, assassination, and war. His militarist beliefs live in contrast to his high nobility and dignity. When it comes to the good of the village the ends always justify the means. His ambition is to become the Kazekage and consolidate the power of all of the militaries of the world under his control to achieve a lasting peace.
Hobbies: Strategy games, bunraku puppet shows, puppet crafting, music performances, and reading. Favorite Food and Drink: Sweets and sugary tea. Wants to Fight: He wants to surpass his mother, Tetsuotome, in battle. Favorite Word: Checkmate
♞Village: Sunagakure ☼ ♞Title: Genin ♞Rank: D-Rank ♞First Class: Puppeteer ____Architect → The user has a fantastic creative mind, able to make more custom puppets (+2) as well as construct them and prepare them easier. For each rank the user increases, they gain a [-1] bonus to preparation time. . Additionally, the user is so good at creating and planning, that human puppets only cost 1 custom puppet slot. ♞Second Class: Performer ____Grand Performance → The user can perform both types of arts (ninjutsu and genjutsu) through their performance or instrument, often casting them at the same time (must pay for both techniques). Can perform D rank techniques through instrument at D - rank, C and C - rank, B at B - rank, A at A - rank, and S at S - rank. By selecting this discipline, increase the total number of Genjutsu and Ninjutsu gained per rank, including D - rank, by one [+1].
♜▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|c σ м в α т • ∂ α т α|├▬♜ ♞Bloodline: Jiton | Magnet Release | Iron Sand
♞Chakra Pool: 460 ♞Stamina Pool: 35 ♞Chakra Element: Raiton | Doton ♞Chakra Color:Indigo ♞Chakra Materialization: His indigo chakra materializes as multiple chess pieces floating around him which pulsate like musical soundwaves.
♞Passive Status Increases: • Strength ► {Total Bonus} →→ {Where does this come from?} • Speed ► {Total Bonus} →→ {Where does this come from?} • Reflex ► {Total Bonus} →→ {Where does this come from?} • Fortitude ► {Total Bonus} →→ {Where does this come from?}
♞Strengths: • Strategy • Puppetry • Performing • Magnetism • Illusion • Cunning/Intelligence ♞Weaknesses: • Close Combat • Low Physical Strength • Small Size • Physically Frail ♞Fears: • Outside threats to his village • Filth • Ugliness
♞Reductions: • Learn Raiton 1 post faster (Jiton Bloodline) • Learn Doton 1 post faster (Jiton Bloodline) • Learn Kugutsu 1 post faster (Puppeteer Class) • Learn Ninjutsu 1 post faster (Performer Class) • Learn Genjutsu 1 post faster (Performer Class) ♞Personal Attributes: • Master Artisan | Tetsuhiko has an additional two custom puppet slots. • Puppet Master | Tetsuhiko can use the chakra mechanisms within custom puppets for five less chakra at a minimum of five chakra. ♜▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|c α r є є r • ∂ α т α|├▬♜ ♞Ryo: 両{Money} 0 ♞AC: {Advancement credit} 0
♞Missions Complete: 0 D Rank :: 0 C Rank :: 0 B Rank :: 0 A Rank :: 0 S Rank :: 0
♞Crafting Trees • {First Tree Here} || → {Current Title} • {Second Tree Here} || → {Current Title} • {Third Tree Here} || → {Current Title} • {Fourth Tree Here} || → {Current Title}
♞Crafting Jobs Complete: D Rank :: 0 C Rank :: 0 B Rank :: 0 A Rank :: 0 S Rank :: 0
♜▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|ω є α ρ σ η • ∂ α т α|├▬♜ ♞Weapon Type: Katana ♞Weapon Range: 20 inches ♞Weapon Weight: 3 lbs ♞Weapon Size: 20 inches by 2 inches wide, 8 inch handle ♞Weapon Location: Left Hip
♜▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|ι η ν є η т σ r у|├▬♜ • 8 Kunai • 7 Shuriken • Wooden training puppet • Sunagakure forehead protector as belt buckle • Ornate, traditional clothing of the Hanzō clan • Metal concerto flute • Small cherrywood violin • Small gourd of iron sand • Small cleaning kit • Miniature chess and shogi set
♜▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|т є c н η ι q υ є ѕ|├▬ ▬▬♜┤|N i n j u t s u Maruton: • Henge no Jutsu [ Transformation Technique ] • Kawarimi no Jutsu [ Substitution Technique ] • Bushin no Jutsu [ Clone Technique ] • Suimen Hokou no Waza [ Act of Water Surface Walking ] • Kinobori no Waza [ Act of Tree Climbing ] • Kai [ Release ]
Kugutsu • • • • •
Jiton • • • • •
Raiton • • • • •
Doton • • • • • ▬▬┤|G e n j u t s u Enchantment • • • • •
Illusory • • • • • ♜▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|н ι ѕ т σ r у|├▬♜ Tetsuhiko was born into one of the oldest noble clans of Sunagakure, clan Hanzō. Magnet release and the use of iron sand are the signature kekkei genkai of the main branch of the clan. The leader of the clan is the patriarch and/or matriarch who must be from the main line of the clan and possess the Jiton kekkei genkai. Tetsuhiko's father, Hachiro Hanzō, is the eighth and current patriarch of the Hanzō clan and Tetsuhiko's mother, Tetsuotome Hanzō, is the eighth and current matriarch. Hachiro was the eighth son of the seventh patriarch, Jin Hanzō, and inherited the leadership of the clan because his seven older siblings did not possess the Jiton kekkei genkai. This event almost brought the clan to ruin because for a long time there was no heir and Jin Hanzō was a generally ineffective clan leader who mismanaged clan resources. Hachiro's siblings were greatly jealous of him because of how favored he was over them. This caused a civil war between the siblings when Jin died prematurely and a ten-year-old Hachiro inherited the throne. Hachiro used his power in the village to banish his siblings and end the civil war and swore that his authority would never be questioned again.
Eight years later Hachiro married his same age cousin Tetsuotome who also possessed the kekkei genkai to ensure that Hachiro would have a proper heir of pure bloodline. Tetsuotome graduated from the academy at the age of seven and became a chunin at the age of eight and was considered a prodigious kunoichi and one of the most powerful ninja the Hanzō clan ever produced. By age sixteen she became a jonin ANBU and one of its highest-ranking members. She was known as the Iron Maiden of Sungakure because of her name and her powerful use of iron sand to encase her foes in torturous coffins before lacerating them to death with iron blades. She would also use her skill in bukijutsu for sword combat and heavy samurai armor to protect herself and charge into battle on the front lines with great ferocity.
After nine months of marriage and ruling the Hanzō clan the couple had Tetsuhiko, a boy who inherited Jiton and in line to become the ninth patriarch. His birth was celebrated greatly by the clan and he was spoiled by his parents, aunts, and uncles. Hachiro, a great clan head, was a good father to Tetsuhiko growing up and had high expectations that he would one day become his greater successor and perhaps the Kazekage. Tetsuotome, a once ruthless ANBU, retired from service during Tetsuhiko's childhood so that she could ensure that she would survive to see him grow up. Tetsuhiko was named after his mother and Tetsuotome often affectionately called him her little prince in reference to her naming him the iron prince.
Tetsuhiko had a content but sheltered childhood within the large estate of House Hanzō. As a child, he always had a crippling fear of those outside the village's walls coming into his home which has manifested over time. In his spare time, he would play a lot of board games such as chess and shogi with his family before far surpassing them with experience. He also took a liking to music and learned multiple instruments, namely the organ, piano, flute, and violin. His father taught him how to be a genteel, mannered gentleman and nearly overwhelmed him with etiquette lessons. Tetsuhiko also frequented many formal parties during his childhood to rub elbows with high society in Sunagakure. His mother was a caring figure, but a strict disciplinarian, likely trying to suppress her violent tendencies from her ANBU training. Tetsuhiko was also close with his maternal grandfather, Kazama Hanzō, a retired oinin and puppeteer who worked in a small puppet shop. Tetsuhiko would spend his weekends visiting his grandparents and helping Kazama keep up his puppet shop. Puppetry was always a respected tradition in the Hanzō clan.
Tetsuhiko was a great student in the academy who applied himself and always made good grades. His favorite extracurricular was to put on puppet performances and piano recitals for his teachers and classmates. Tetsuhiko was popular among his peers, although some students were jealous of him for being a rich kid. Some of Tetsuhiko's personality quirks stood out to his classmates and he was picked on, although not too severely. He has high aspirations for his future.
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Enduring Guildsman
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The Froggy Girl
Hilarious Prophet
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Posted: Wed May 17, 2017 12:48 pm
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|ρ є r ѕ σ η α ℓ • ∂ α т α|├▬ Full Name: Sachiko Nickname: Chīsana onēchan {little Ogress} Chīsana Oni futago{little Ogre twin} Age: 13 Birthdate: Aug 6 Gender: Female
Height: 4ft 11in Weight: How Dare you ask my weight scream
Nindo: "Whats life without a little fun to go with it." Personality: Sachiko temperature will vary from extreme to extreme. Usually she is a very laid back lady that often doesn't give much to concern about the world around her as long as she is happy and enjoying herself. She also a little bit mischievous and likes to pull pranks but only for fun. If someone disturbs her happy times though, they should be ready, as Sachiko will change from her sweet cheerful attitude to that of a monster and will do everything in her power to demolish those that would make her angry. Also talking about her chest area tends to anger her as well.
Village: Otagakure Title: Genin Rank: D-Rank Shinobi First Class: Bloodline ____Discipline → Blood Bender Second Class: Medical ____Discipline → Specialist=Healing
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|c σ м в α т • ∂ α т α|├▬ Bloodline: Oni clan
Chakra Pool:330 Stamina Pool: 170 Chakra Element: Suiton and Katon Chakra Color: Smoky green Chakra Materialization: It usually materializes looking like spirits circling Sachiko.
Strengths: • Healing jutsu- Raised in a family that got hurt a lot, Sachiko had to learn how to fix all sorts of ailments. • Ranged combat- Not very strong, Sachiko relies on her throwing prowls for attacking. Weaknesses: • Close combat- Sachiko never learned how to fight in close proximity • Weak strength- Sachiko is not very strong compared to the rest of the oni members. She struggles to wield anything larger then a short sword Fears: • Doesn't like spiders- Spiders. eek To many legs • Fear of Losing her brother
Reductions: • Learn bloodline techniques one (1) post faster. • Learn Medical techniques one (1) post faster Personal Attributes: • Oni resilience- able to take more attacks, as well as resistant to fire attacks[bloodline] • Nomadic foraging- If a dice roll is required to determine the Job's reward, an additional die is rolled and the final result is the better of the rolls. • Little Oni- Sachiko size allows for her to move quicker then most oni and humans. 1 speed increase
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|c α r є є r • ∂ α т α|├▬ Ryo: 両{Money} {Start at zero} AC: {Advancement credit} {Start at zero}
Missions Complete: D Rank :: 0 {All start at zero} C Rank :: 0 B Rank :: 0 A Rank :: 0 S Rank :: 0
Crafting Trees • {First Tree Here} || → {Current Title} • {Second Tree Here} || → {Current Title} • {Third Tree Here} || → {Current Title} • {Fourth Tree Here} || → {Current Title}
Crafting Jobs Complete: D Rank :: 0 {All start at zero} C Rank :: 0 B Rank :: 0 A Rank :: 0 S Rank :: 0
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|ω є α ρ σ η • ∂ α т α|├▬ Weapon Type: {Meteor Hammer Weapon Range: 10 ft long chain. Each orb is half a foot across. Weapon Weight: Each head weights about five pounds Weapon Size: Meteors are half a foot radius with a 10 ft chain between them. Weapon Location: Wrapped around her waist like a belt, covered by an obi-age
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|ι η ν є η т σ r у|├▬ On my person • red furisode kimono top • Black and red Obi-age sash with belt underneath with lots of hooks. [Used to hid most of her weaponry{kunai, glass bottles, meteor hammers}] • red skirt with black stockings • white undershirt and black biker shorts underneath kimono and skirt • Undergarments • two hair ties with small gourd shaped stones with the kanji 酒"Sake" on them [From my mother] • Bag of infinite capacity/ regalar bag for holding many objects • shoes Hidden among my clothes • 10 glass bottles, attached to clips under Obi-age • 5 kunai, attached to clips under Obi-age • small gourd filled with Amazake/ Weak alcohol content sake [carried by hand or attached to a clip under obi-age] • Several secret stashes of ginger candy, hidden in her Kimono sleeves Bag of infinite capacity Never know what you'll need.
• First-aid kit
•2 scalpels •sterile gauze pads of different sizes •adhesive tape •adhesive bandages in several sizes •elastic bandage •antiseptic wipes •soap •tweezers •sharp scissors •safety pins •thermometer •Ice pack •plastic non-latex gloves (at least 2 pairs)
• Hairbrush • sewing needle and thread • Small gourd filled with honey and herbs • little red book with pen for keeping information • little green book with plant information • Little kettle • Small frying pan • Flint and steel • Hunting knife • small bag of tea-leaves • dried meats and vegetables • spoon and fork • paper fan [good for cooling down oneself in hot weather, and for slapping people without much damage] • bag of Cookies • five feet of wire • eight feet of rope • six square feet of red cloth [folded down to a single square foot] • one square foot of white cloth • Small lantern • two folded up parka • two towels, Large and small • Tiny pillow • blanket [folded down] • two blank scrolls • jar of peanut butter • Compact tent • Large bag of Rice • butter
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|т є c н η ι q υ є ѕ|├▬ ▬▬┤|N i n j u t s u Maruton: • Henge no Jutsu [ Transformation Technique ] • Kawarimi no Jutsu [ Substitution Technique ] • Bushin no Jutsu [ Clone Technique ] • Suimen Hokou no Waza [ Act of Water Surface Walking ] • Kinobori no Waza [ Act of Tree Climbing ] • Kai [ Release ]
Suiton •
Katon •
Saketon • ▬▬┤|G e n j u t s u Enchantment •
Instance •
▬▬┤|B u k i j u t s u {Baiken no Kusari} • {Stage progression / techniques learned} ▬▬┤|F o r m l e s s S t y l e s Current Slots Available → 00 // 00 {Find in Formless Style and Class information} Locked Formless • {Training Links} Slots Used • _______ → || [X] {Please include links for training}
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|н ι ѕ т σ r у|├▬ Born seconds after her brother, Sachiko is the younger of the Oni twins. Being fraternal twins they take on much different looks and personality. Where her brother is much more serious nature, Sachiko takes on the more quiet and relaxed nature. Being part of the Oni clan, their family was nomadic and would settle in a spot that seemed well, only for their family to decided that a new spot was better served the clan. From a young age, she and her brother where raised much differently. Where her brother had been taught how to fight and hunt with a weapon and learn how to defend the traveling caravans from raiders, Sachiko was taught how to gather plants and herbs from the wilds for eating and medicine that would be used to treat any ailments that affected the caravans. She was also taught needlework for repairing clothes that would be damaged from the male oni's battling each other, as well as how to brew alcohol as any oni child learns at a young age, though her brews tended to be far weaker in strength. But even though she took on the ladylike role in the clan, she was not without weapons training of her own. Having to forage, she would often come across wild animals that would need to be slain. The one weapon she took particularity interesting in, was a meteor hammer which she could wrap around her waist and keep it hidden from sight, only to whip it out very quickly to strike at her opponent with the blunt weapon.
Around their thirteenth birthday, her brother had grown restless with the clan. To often they had left a good place to settle and it bothered him greatly. They would oftentimes pass through villages that large clan families would stay in one spot for generations. She knew that her brother was growing envious of this fact and wished to stop traveling and settle in one of the villages. So on their thirteenth birthday, he announced to the clan that it was his wish to leave the clan, to find his own spot in the world. Being that they where twins, Sachiko wished to follow her brother, as they had always been close, even though her brother tried his hardest not to show it to her. At first, he told her that she didn't need to follow him, but she replied that it was her own wish to follow her brother in the world. His reply was only a grumble, but Sachiko knew that he was slightly happy that she did follow him. Leaving out on their own, the approached a village.
Ergo War
The Froggy Girl
Made nomadic foraging into something more similar to what its name is and made for a reroll mechanic for foraging.
Posted: Wed May 17, 2017 7:24 pm
The Froggy Girl
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|ρ є r ѕ σ η α ℓ • ∂ α т α|├▬ Full Name: Sachiko Nickname: Chīsana onēchan {little Ogress} Chīsana Oni futago{little Ogre twin} Age: 13 Birthdate: Aug 6 Gender: Female
Height: 4ft 11in Weight: How Dare you ask my weight scream
Nindo: "Whats life without a little fun to go with it." Personality: Sachiko temperature will vary from extreme to extreme. Usually she is a very laid back lady that often doesn't give much to concern about the world around her as long as she is happy and enjoying herself. She also a little bit mischievous and likes to pull pranks but only for fun. If someone disturbs her happy times though, they should be ready, as Sachiko will change from her sweet cheerful attitude to that of a monster and will do everything in her power to demolish those that would make her angry. Also talking about her chest area tends to anger her as well.
Village: Otagakure Title: Genin Rank: D-Rank Shinobi First Class: Bloodline ____Discipline → Blood Bender Second Class: Medical ____Discipline → Specialist=Healing
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|c σ м в α т • ∂ α т α|├▬ Bloodline: Oni clan
Chakra Pool:330 Stamina Pool: 170 Chakra Element: Suiton and Katon Chakra Color: Smoky green Chakra Materialization: It usually materializes looking like spirits circling Sachiko.
Strengths: • Healing jutsu- Raised in a family that got hurt a lot, Sachiko had to learn how to fix all sorts of ailments. • Ranged combat- Not very strong, Sachiko relies on her throwing prowls for attacking. Weaknesses: • Close combat- Sachiko never learned how to fight in close proximity • Weak strength- Sachiko is not very strong compared to the rest of the oni members. She struggles to wield anything larger then a short sword Fears: • Doesn't like spiders- Spiders. eek To many legs • Fear of Losing her brother
Reductions: • Learn bloodline techniques one (1) post faster. • Learn Medical techniques one (1) post faster Personal Attributes: • Oni resilience- able to take more attacks, as well as resistant to fire attacks[bloodline] • Nomadic foraging- If a dice roll is required to determine the Job's reward, an additional die is rolled and the final result is the better of the rolls. • Little Oni- Sachiko size allows for her to move quicker then most oni and humans. 1 speed increase
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|c α r є є r • ∂ α т α|├▬ Ryo: 両{Money} {Start at zero} AC: {Advancement credit} {Start at zero}
Missions Complete: D Rank :: 0 {All start at zero} C Rank :: 0 B Rank :: 0 A Rank :: 0 S Rank :: 0
Crafting Trees • {First Tree Here} || → {Current Title} • {Second Tree Here} || → {Current Title} • {Third Tree Here} || → {Current Title} • {Fourth Tree Here} || → {Current Title}
Crafting Jobs Complete: D Rank :: 0 {All start at zero} C Rank :: 0 B Rank :: 0 A Rank :: 0 S Rank :: 0
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|ω є α ρ σ η • ∂ α т α|├▬ Weapon Type: {Meteor Hammer Weapon Range: 10 ft long chain. Each orb is half a foot across. Weapon Weight: Each head weights about five pounds Weapon Size: Meteors are half a foot radius with a 10 ft chain between them. Weapon Location: Wrapped around her waist like a belt, covered by an obi-age
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|ι η ν є η т σ r у|├▬ On my person • red furisode kimono top • Black and red Obi-age sash with belt underneath with lots of hooks. [Used to hid most of her weaponry{kunai, glass bottles, meteor hammers}] • red skirt with black stockings • white undershirt and black biker shorts underneath kimono and skirt • Undergarments • two hair ties with small gourd shaped stones with the kanji 酒"Sake" on them [From my mother] • Bag of infinite capacity/ regalar bag for holding many objects • shoes Hidden among my clothes • 10 glass bottles, attached to clips under Obi-age • 5 kunai, attached to clips under Obi-age • small gourd filled with Amazake/ Weak alcohol content sake [carried by hand or attached to a clip under obi-age] • Several secret stashes of ginger candy, hidden in her Kimono sleeves Bag of infinite capacity Never know what you'll need.
• First-aid kit
•2 scalpels •sterile gauze pads of different sizes •adhesive tape •adhesive bandages in several sizes •elastic bandage •antiseptic wipes •soap •tweezers •sharp scissors •safety pins •thermometer •Ice pack •plastic non-latex gloves (at least 2 pairs)
• Hairbrush • sewing needle and thread • Small gourd filled with honey and herbs • little red book with pen for keeping information • little green book with plant information • Little kettle • Small frying pan • Flint and steel • Hunting knife • small bag of tea-leaves • dried meats and vegetables • spoon and fork • paper fan [good for cooling down oneself in hot weather, and for slapping people without much damage] • bag of Cookies • five feet of wire • eight feet of rope • six square feet of red cloth [folded down to a single square foot] • one square foot of white cloth • Small lantern • two folded up parka • two towels, Large and small • Tiny pillow • blanket [folded down] • two blank scrolls • jar of peanut butter • Compact tent • Large bag of Rice • butter
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|т є c н η ι q υ є ѕ|├▬ ▬▬┤|N i n j u t s u Maruton: • Henge no Jutsu [ Transformation Technique ] • Kawarimi no Jutsu [ Substitution Technique ] • Bushin no Jutsu [ Clone Technique ] • Suimen Hokou no Waza [ Act of Water Surface Walking ] • Kinobori no Waza [ Act of Tree Climbing ] • Kai [ Release ]
Suiton •
Katon •
Saketon • ▬▬┤|G e n j u t s u Enchantment •
Instance •
▬▬┤|B u k i j u t s u {Baiken no Kusari} • {Stage progression / techniques learned} ▬▬┤|F o r m l e s s S t y l e s Current Slots Available → 00 // 00 {Find in Formless Style and Class information} Locked Formless • {Training Links} Slots Used • _______ → || [X] {Please include links for training}
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|н ι ѕ т σ r у|├▬ Born seconds after her brother, Sachiko is the younger of the Oni twins. Being fraternal twins they take on much different looks and personality. Where her brother is much more serious nature, Sachiko takes on the more quiet and relaxed nature. Being part of the Oni clan, their family was nomadic and would settle in a spot that seemed well, only for their family to decided that a new spot was better served the clan. From a young age, she and her brother where raised much differently. Where her brother had been taught how to fight and hunt with a weapon and learn how to defend the traveling caravans from raiders, Sachiko was taught how to gather plants and herbs from the wilds for eating and medicine that would be used to treat any ailments that affected the caravans. She was also taught needlework for repairing clothes that would be damaged from the male oni's battling each other, as well as how to brew alcohol as any oni child learns at a young age, though her brews tended to be far weaker in strength. But even though she took on the ladylike role in the clan, she was not without weapons training of her own. Having to forage, she would often come across wild animals that would need to be slain. The one weapon she took particularity interesting in, was a meteor hammer which she could wrap around her waist and keep it hidden from sight, only to whip it out very quickly to strike at her opponent with the blunt weapon.
Around their thirteenth birthday, her brother had grown restless with the clan. To often they had left a good place to settle and it bothered him greatly. They would oftentimes pass through villages that large clan families would stay in one spot for generations. She knew that her brother was growing envious of this fact and wished to stop traveling and settle in one of the villages. So on their thirteenth birthday, he announced to the clan that it was his wish to leave the clan, to find his own spot in the world. Being that they where twins, Sachiko wished to follow her brother, as they had always been close, even though her brother tried his hardest not to show it to her. At first, he told her that she didn't need to follow him, but she replied that it was her own wish to follow her brother in the world. His reply was only a grumble, but Sachiko knew that he was slightly happy that she did follow him. Leaving out on their own, the approached a village.
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Made nomadic foraging into something more similar to what its name is and made for a reroll mechanic for foraging.
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▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|ρ є r ѕ σ η α ℓ • ∂ α т α|├▬ Full Name: Aves Gran Brevis Nickname: Avvy/Avi Age: 15 Birthdate: December 14th Gender: Female
Height: 5’2 (162.5cm) Weight: 90lbs (40.8kg)
Nindo: "{The codes by which you live by. This section might well be left blank at first, and discovered through roleplay.}" Personality: Aves is usually polite and cheerful. During the daytime, she usually spends it sleeping whether it’s full-on sleeping for hours or being half-asleep to where her mentality can be very faulty. This makes her look very lazy, but she’s just not programmed to operate during the daytime hours. At night, however, she’s more alert and active because she’s nocturnal. Despite the amount of energy she has whether she’s alert or half asleep, she’s very likely to get sick whether it’s catching a cold or coughing up blood from another sickness. Against all odds though, she still acts chipper when she’s sick.
Village: Sound Title: Genin Rank: D-Rank First Class: Genjutsu ____Discipline → Inception Second Class: Medical ____Discipline → Specialist
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|c σ м в α т • ∂ α т α|├▬ Bloodline: Sakkakugan
Chakra Pool: 435 Stamina Pool: 65 Chakra Element: Fire, lightning Chakra Color: Yellow/black Chakra Materialization: Depending on how she’s feeling, it can flicker like a flame or it manifests as sparks
Passive Status Increases: • Strength ► {Total Bonus} →→ {Where does this come from?} • Speed ► {Total Bonus} →→ {Where does this come from?} • Reflex ► {Total Bonus} →→ {Where does this come from?} • Fortitude ► {Total Bonus} →→ {Where does this come from?}
Strengths: • Nocturnal • Hiding Weaknesses: • Highly sedentary during the day • Frail to the point of being prone to sickness • Can be clingy Fears: • Abandonment/Being alone for too long • Rejection
Reductions: • Sakkakugan owners cannot learn any taijutsu or bukijutsu. •
Personal Attributes: • Learn genjutsu one (1) post faster. • Learn Medical techniques one (1) post faster.
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|c α r є є r • ∂ α т α|├▬ Ryo: 両 0 AC: 0
Missions Complete: D Rank :: 0 C Rank :: 0 B Rank :: 0 A Rank :: 0 S Rank :: 0
Crafting Trees • {First Tree Here} || → {Current Title} • {Second Tree Here} || → {Current Title} • {Third Tree Here} || → {Current Title} • {Fourth Tree Here} || → {Current Title}
Crafting Jobs Complete: D Rank :: 0 {All start at zero} C Rank :: 0 B Rank :: 0 A Rank :: 0 S Rank :: 0
Job Missions Complete: D Rank :: 0 {All start at zero} C Rank :: 0 B Rank :: 0 A Rank :: 0 S Rank :: 0
Limitations: {How many of each technique you can learn. Refer to class info} • Ninjutsu : : 00 / 10 • Genjutsu : : 00 / 17 • Eiseijutsu : : 00 / 10 • Taijutsu Styles: : 00 / 00 • Bukijutsu Styles: : 00 / 00
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|ω є α ρ σ η • ∂ α т α|├▬ Weapon Type: Two blade folding Knife Weapon Range: 2.5in Weapon Weight: 5.6 ounces Weapon Size: 3in x 1in x .5in when folded/6in length when unfolded Weapon Location: pocket
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|ι η ν є η т σ r у|├▬ • Kunai bag • Kunai x15 • jacket with hidden pockets • bandaids • gauze • 2 pairs of scissors • pocket notebook • writing implements (pen, pencil, marker, etc) • eraser • hair tie or two on wrist • barrettes • 2 handkerchiefs
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|т є c н η ι q υ є ѕ|├▬ ▬▬┤|N i n j u t s u Maruton: • Henge no Jutsu [ Transformation Technique ] • Kawarimi no Jutsu [ Substitution Technique ] • Bushin no Jutsu [ Clone Technique ] • Suimen Hokou no Waza [ Act of Water Surface Walking ] • Kinobori no Waza [ Act of Tree Climbing ] • Kai [ Release ]
{Your first element's name} •Katon
{Your second element's name} •Raiton
{Other jutsu type's name} • Sakkakugan ▬▬┤|G e n j u t s u {Your first Type's name} {Illusory, Enchantment, Chained, or Instance} * Enchantment
{Your second Type's name} {Illusory, Enchantment, Chained, or Instance} * Illusory ▬▬┤|T a i j u t s u {Style name here} • {Stage progression / techniques learned} ▬▬┤|B u k i j u t s u {Style name here} • {Stage progression / techniques learned} ▬▬┤|F o r m l e s s S t y l e s Current Slots Available → 00 // 00 {Find in Formless Style and Class information} Locked Formless • {Training Links} Slots Used • _______ → || [X] {Please include links for training}
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|н ι ѕ т σ r у|├▬ The early life of Aves was normal in every sense of the word. The parents, the house, etc. Her health wasn’t always at it’s best as she always caught whatever sickness that would be going around or sometimes she would be fine for the most part, but still have the sniffles sometimes accompanied by a stray cough here and there. Her parents were normal and caring. She wasn’t neglected or any of that. Her life changed one day as on that fateful day her parents had left to run a quick errand outside the house and never came back. She was worried, but kept telling herself they would be back. A few days later, a family friend went to visit and saw Aves was all alone. Asking her about her parents, she told them she wasn’t sure where they were, but that they should have returned. She proceeded to make excuses as to why her parents weren’t home and was in denial. This made the family friend suspicious and they went to investigate. It turned out her parents were killed not too far from their home. As Aves never left the house from knowing she should always be with an adult when going into town, she never saw them. To spare her the gruesome details, they told her her parents were gone. Aves took the word “gone” as in leaving her. Her reaction was thought of as suspicious behavior and rumors spread she might have killed her parents despite evidence showing otherwise. With the rejection of the people she knew, she put on a front of being independent and tough as she went through with her classes.
Posted: Mon Jun 05, 2017 12:36 pm
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▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|ρ є r ѕ σ η α ℓ • ∂ α т α|├▬ Full Name: Aves Gran Brevis Nickname: Avvy/Avi Age: 15 Birthdate: December 14th Gender: Female
Height: 5’2 (162.5cm) Weight: 90lbs (40.8kg)
Nindo: "{The codes by which you live by. This section might well be left blank at first, and discovered through roleplay.}" Personality: Aves is usually polite and cheerful. During the daytime, she usually spends it sleeping whether it’s full-on sleeping for hours or being half-asleep to where her mentality can be very faulty. This makes her look very lazy, but she’s just not programmed to operate during the daytime hours. At night, however, she’s more alert and active because she’s nocturnal. Despite the amount of energy she has whether she’s alert or half asleep, she’s very likely to get sick whether it’s catching a cold or coughing up blood from another sickness. Against all odds though, she still acts chipper when she’s sick.
Village: Sound Title: Genin Rank: D-Rank First Class: Genjutsu ____Discipline → Inception Second Class: Medical ____Discipline → Specialist
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|c σ м в α т • ∂ α т α|├▬ Bloodline: Sakkakugan
Chakra Pool: 435 Stamina Pool: 65 Chakra Element: Fire, lightning Chakra Color: Yellow/black Chakra Materialization: Depending on how she’s feeling, it can flicker like a flame or it manifests as sparks
Passive Status Increases: • Strength ► {Total Bonus} →→ {Where does this come from?} • Speed ► {Total Bonus} →→ {Where does this come from?} • Reflex ► {Total Bonus} →→ {Where does this come from?} • Fortitude ► {Total Bonus} →→ {Where does this come from?}
Strengths: • Nocturnal • Hiding Weaknesses: • Highly sedentary during the day • Frail to the point of being prone to sickness • Can be clingy Fears: • Abandonment/Being alone for too long • Rejection
Reductions: • Sakkakugan owners cannot learn any taijutsu or bukijutsu. •
Personal Attributes: • Learn genjutsu one (1) post faster. • Learn Medical techniques one (1) post faster.
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|c α r є є r • ∂ α т α|├▬ Ryo: 両 0 AC: 0
Missions Complete: D Rank :: 0 C Rank :: 0 B Rank :: 0 A Rank :: 0 S Rank :: 0
Crafting Trees • {First Tree Here} || → {Current Title} • {Second Tree Here} || → {Current Title} • {Third Tree Here} || → {Current Title} • {Fourth Tree Here} || → {Current Title}
Crafting Jobs Complete: D Rank :: 0 {All start at zero} C Rank :: 0 B Rank :: 0 A Rank :: 0 S Rank :: 0
Job Missions Complete: D Rank :: 0 {All start at zero} C Rank :: 0 B Rank :: 0 A Rank :: 0 S Rank :: 0
Limitations: {How many of each technique you can learn. Refer to class info} • Ninjutsu : : 00 / 10 • Genjutsu : : 00 / 17 • Eiseijutsu : : 00 / 10 • Taijutsu Styles: : 00 / 00 • Bukijutsu Styles: : 00 / 00
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|ω є α ρ σ η • ∂ α т α|├▬ Weapon Type: Two blade folding Knife Weapon Range: 2.5in Weapon Weight: 5.6 ounces Weapon Size: 3in x 1in x .5in when folded/6in length when unfolded Weapon Location: pocket
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|ι η ν є η т σ r у|├▬ • Kunai bag • Kunai x15 • jacket with hidden pockets • bandaids • gauze • 2 pairs of scissors • pocket notebook • writing implements (pen, pencil, marker, etc) • eraser • hair tie or two on wrist • barrettes • 2 handkerchiefs
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|т є c н η ι q υ є ѕ|├▬ ▬▬┤|N i n j u t s u Maruton: • Henge no Jutsu [ Transformation Technique ] • Kawarimi no Jutsu [ Substitution Technique ] • Bushin no Jutsu [ Clone Technique ] • Suimen Hokou no Waza [ Act of Water Surface Walking ] • Kinobori no Waza [ Act of Tree Climbing ] • Kai [ Release ]
{Your first element's name} •Katon
{Your second element's name} •Raiton
{Other jutsu type's name} • Sakkakugan ▬▬┤|G e n j u t s u {Your first Type's name} {Illusory, Enchantment, Chained, or Instance} * Enchantment
{Your second Type's name} {Illusory, Enchantment, Chained, or Instance} * Illusory ▬▬┤|T a i j u t s u {Style name here} • {Stage progression / techniques learned} ▬▬┤|B u k i j u t s u {Style name here} • {Stage progression / techniques learned} ▬▬┤|F o r m l e s s S t y l e s Current Slots Available → 00 // 00 {Find in Formless Style and Class information} Locked Formless • {Training Links} Slots Used • _______ → || [X] {Please include links for training}
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|н ι ѕ т σ r у|├▬ The early life of Aves was normal in every sense of the word. The parents, the house, etc. Her health wasn’t always at it’s best as she always caught whatever sickness that would be going around or sometimes she would be fine for the most part, but still have the sniffles sometimes accompanied by a stray cough here and there. Her parents were normal and caring. She wasn’t neglected or any of that. Her life changed one day as on that fateful day her parents had left to run a quick errand outside the house and never came back. She was worried, but kept telling herself they would be back. A few days later, a family friend went to visit and saw Aves was all alone. Asking her about her parents, she told them she wasn’t sure where they were, but that they should have returned. She proceeded to make excuses as to why her parents weren’t home and was in denial. This made the family friend suspicious and they went to investigate. It turned out her parents were killed not too far from their home. As Aves never left the house from knowing she should always be with an adult when going into town, she never saw them. To spare her the gruesome details, they told her her parents were gone. Aves took the word “gone” as in leaving her. Her reaction was thought of as suspicious behavior and rumors spread she might have killed her parents despite evidence showing otherwise. With the rejection of the people she knew, she put on a front of being independent and tough as she went through with her classes.
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|ρ є r ѕ σ η α ℓ • ∂ α т α|├▬ Full Name: Isora Sakkaku Nickname:~ Age: 15 Birthdate: 3/21 Gender: Male
Height: 5’6 Weight: 105 lbs
Nindo: "There is no limit to what I can do" Personality: perfectionists, with a seemingly endless capacity for improving upon anything that takes my interest. I apply the criterion "Does it work?" to everything from my own research efforts to the prevailing social norms. This in turn produces an unusual independence of mind. possess the unusual trait combination of imagination and reliability. both perfectionism and disregard for authority may come into play, as I can be unsparing of both myself and the others on the team. Anyone considered to be "slacking," including superiors, will lose my respect and will generally be made aware of this. Known to take it upon themselves to implement critical decisions without consulting my supervisors or teammates.A Introvert. Extraverted thinker. Non-emotional. Extraverted Sensing. Slightly depressed at times but feels like I am the brightest in the room at moments. Has a small fear of being abandoned though. Isora has multi personality disorder, The “Other” him comes out when he's angry or in danger usually. Can make brief appearances. The Othwe personality is blunt, harsh and more logical.
Village: Otogakure Title: Genin Rank: D First Class: Genjutsu ____Discipline → Inception: With Genjutsu, realism and the sensory ability of the target factor heavily into the ability of the victim to realize they are in a genjutsu. With practice and discipline, the shinobi may select one [1] genjutsu Sense that may be added as a Secondary sense to any technique, as well as increase one Sense of Choice that will forever act one [1] rank higher in strength. Once these two [2] choices are made, they cannot be switched, so choose wisely. Second Class: Performer Class ____Discipline → Emotional Content: The user is able to make fantastic illusions appear by performing on their instrument. This ability comes at the cost of not being able to perform ninjutsu through use of performance or instrument. Can perform B rank genjutsu and lower at D - rank, A rank at C - rank, and S rank at B - rank. At A - rank, all illusions cost 5 less chakra to perform if performed through a instrument or performance. at S - rank, illusions cost 10 less chakra if performed through instrument or performance. Allowed to convert Genjutsu slots into Style slots at a rate of 10 to 1. By selecting this discipline, increase the total number of Genjutsu gained per rank, including D - rank, by two [+2].
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|c σ м в α т • ∂ α т α|├▬ Bloodline: Sakkakugan • Otherworldly Imagery: Genjutsu performed cannot be mimicked or reversed by any means. ( Genjutsu can still be broken, however. • Life Sense: Within 100 meters, any type of life is able to be seen as a bright glow, when even the Byakugan cannot see it.
Chakra Pool:470 Stamina Pool: 30 Chakra Element: {Pick only two. Fire, water, wind, earth, lightning} Chakra Color: White and Black to create a Hyponotic color sceme Chakra Materialization:Chakra appears to look like a hypnotic trance. When he is the “Other” it's A Purplish red and White.
Passive Status Increases: • Strength ► {Total Bonus} →→ {Where does this come from?} • Speed ► {Total Bonus} →→ {Where does this come from?} • Reflex ► {Total Bonus} →→ {Where does this come from?} • Fortitude ► {Total Bonus} →→ {Where does this come from?}
Strengths: • Genjutsu • Quick Reaction • Strategy • Understanding a person through their actions Weaknesses: • TaiJutsu • Close combat • Deep thinker at moments Fears: • To fail at anything • Dying Alone • Himself • The “Other” taking full control
Reductions: • Learn ninjutsu (1) post faster. ( Performer Class ) • Learn genjutsu (3) post faster ( Performer + Gen Class) • All illusions cost 5 less chakra to perform if performed through a instrument • Sakkakugan users can't learn Tai and Boki
Personal Attributes: • Sixth Sense as the First: With a stationary body, the user can detach his vision and walk around to look at things. Cannot physically move during this. • learn GenJustus [1] post faster
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|c α r є є r • ∂ α т α|├▬ Ryo: 両 0 AC: 0 / 7500 > Chuunin Missions Complete: D Rank :: 0 C Rank :: 0 B Rank :: 0 A Rank :: 0 S Rank :: 0
Crafting
Crafting Trees • {First Tree Here} || → {Current Title} • {Second Tree Here} || → {Current Title} • {Third Tree Here} || → {Current Title} • {Fourth Tree Here} || → {Current Title}
Crafting Jobs Complete: D Rank :: 0 {All start at zero} C Rank :: 0 B Rank :: 0 A Rank :: 0 S Rank :: 0
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|ω є α ρ σ η • ∂ α т α|├▬ Weapon Type: Flute Weapon Range: {Its reach. In inches/centimeters please} Weapon Weight: 1 pound Weapon Size: {What ar ethe dimensions?} Weapon Location: Usually in hand. Stores in holster
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|ι η ν є η т σ r у|├▬ •Shuriken x15 • book: The Art Of War •
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|т є c н η ι q υ є ѕ|├▬ ▬▬┤|N i n j u t s u Maruton: {Start with the following six only unless otherwise specified.} • Henge no Jutsu [ Transformation Technique ] • Kawarimi no Jutsu [ Substitution Technique ] • Bushin no Jutsu [ Clone Technique ] • Suimen Hokou no Waza [ Act of Water Surface Walking ] • Kinobori no Waza [ Act of Tree Climbing ] • Kai [ Release ]
Suiton •
Raiton •
Sakkakugan • ▬▬┤|G e n j u t s u Enchantment •
Illusion • ▬▬┤|F o r m l e s s S t y l e s Current Slots Available → 00 // 00 Locked Formless • {Training Links} Slots Used • _______ → || [X] {Please include links for training}
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|н ι ѕ т σ r у|├▬ ~ Age 0 - Now~ Being diagnosed at the age of 4 for multi personality disorder, violent behavior towards himself, as well as depression. Isora grew up in a mental hospital. During his time there, besides taking his medication to make his “Other” voice go away, Isora spent most of his time reading a plethora of books as well as reading others psychology. Being in Otogakure, being mental disable wasn't all bad for the most part. Good thing he had his “Other” to talk to. The “Other” was another part of him. The more cunning and vile part of him that was needed to keep his sanity when he used to be tortured. What also helped with his sanity would be the flute that he found and would play for his days at the asylum. The rest of his memory is foggy bc if the torture and the “Other” taking over.
At the age of 10 Isora was released from the mental hospital because it was shutting down. So the only thing a 10 year old could really do was to join the ninja academy. For the next 5 years Isora said to himself practicing and honing his skills to one day be looked up to, or feared, depending on what personality would be in control. Now a genin, Isora plans to become a top genjutsu style master.
Posted: Fri Jun 09, 2017 5:12 pm
Important!: Hello! So this is character I made before the genjutsu system was updated. AFterwards I was just to busy but now I'm back so I just refreshed him to match the new system and changed his village. I hope this is okay!
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|ρ є r ѕ σ η α ℓ • ∂ α т α|├▬ Full Name: Rayne Phenax Heloise Nickname: Ray, Storm Age: 20 Birthdate: 6/23 Gender: Male
Height: 5’8” Weight: 145 lbs
Nindo: “I am the master of my fate: I am the captain of my soul.” Personality: Rayne is one of the kindest people some may ever meet. He is concerned about other’s well-being, health, and happiness, and will do anything in his power to make sure the people he is around and close to are happy and doing well. Due to his bleeding heart, however, Rayne will often spread himself too thin. Attempting to help everyone he can and pushing his own needs to the rear, he often overworks himself and can become deeply unhappy. The primary example for this is how he reacts to the will of his parents. In order to keep them happy and satisfy their expectations of him, he has continued to go to the ninja academy even if he does not want to. His overindulgence in helping others and lack of caring for himself, coupled with his powerful bloodline led to the creation of “Storm.” Unlike Rayne, Storm is incredibly selfish and cruel, interested only in his own goals and desires, a large part of which is the advancement of his bloodline as it is the source of his power and existence. The only other individual Storm could be said to care for is Rayne, and only out of necessity: if Rayne dies, then so does Storm. However, due to Rayne’s strong willpower and lack of malice, Storm has grown close to becoming nothing more than the whisper in the back of his mind. It was only when Rayned used genjutsu that Storm could apply any amount of influence, so in order to do what was best for both of them, Storm has manipulated Rayne’s psyche into being unable to perform anything but genjutsu. If Rayne, ever eager to please, wants to become a successful shinobi so that he does not disappoint his parents, then it is inevitable that he uses genjutsu, yet every time he uses genjutsu, Storm’s persona--domineering, selfish, and pretty much the opposite of everything Rayne stands for (for better or for worse)--comes closer to the surface.
Village: Kirigakure Title: Genin Rank: D-Rank First/Second Class:Genjutsu ____Discipline → Inception - Chakra Sense added to all genjutsu; Sight sense strengthened (+1 rank) ____Discipline → Mental Defenses - Sight (-1 rank in cost, -1 rank when used against Rayne) ____Discipline → REM sleep - Base Duration of genjutsu increased by 1 post, -5 chakra to upkeep cost of techniques
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|c σ м в α т • ∂ α т α|├▬ Bloodline: Sakkakugan
Chakra Pool:470 Stamina Pool: 30 Chakra Element: None Chakra Color: The right shade of blue Chakra Materialization: For the most part it creates a gentle and smooth pulse, with random notes flickering into existence within the aura. As Rayne's emotional intensity heightens, it resembles a billowing cloud, with streaks of lightning-looking chakra firing off rapidly in different directions.
Strengths: • Teamwork: Preferring to assist and not take the spotlight, Rayne values working closely with one another to accomplish tasks. As such, his skills reverberate around setting things up for his teammates. While performing, teamwork may decrease very quickly. • Genjutsu: With the power of his bloodline and “Storm,” Rayne is a very strong genjutsu user and has much potential if he were to dedicate himself. Weaknesses: • Physically Weak: While his genjutsu are very strong, Rayne is completely incompetent in melee brawls. While he has a good reaction time, he is simply unable to hold up against constant blows and hits. • Overly Passive: Rayne’s wishes for everyone’s betterment conflicts with his will to fight. Often time he pushes off the want to fight or began combat, and while in combat looks to trap or force submission while fighting. While performing this changes and aggression increases.
Fears: • Failing to achieve any of his own wants. Realistically, he fears his inability to live his own life free of the expectations of others. (Rayne) • Rayne’s independance. Rayne’s own insecurities are the essence of Storm’s strength and existence. By magnifying his current thoughts and self flaws, Storm keeps Rayne in the tight grip of his parents. Rayne’s execution of his own free will is the very foundation of what may destroy Storm outright. (Storm) • Running out of pumpkin spice latte. (Both)
Reductions: • Learn genjutsu three [4] posts faster • Genjutsu Rank D – C cost [5] less chakra to perform • Genjutsu Rank B – A cost [10] less chakra to perform • Genjutsu Rank S cost [20] less chakra to perform • Kai costs [10] less chakra to perform
Personal Attributes: • Otherwordly Imagery: Genjutsu performed cannot be mimicked or reversed by any means. ( Genjutsu can still be broken, however. ) - Bloodline •Life Sense: Within 100 meters, any type of life is able to be seen as a bright glow, when even the Byakugan cannot see it. - Bloodline • The Devil’s Noose - Rayne is incapable of using all ninjutsu except for the default starting six, but he has a not often seen mastery over his genjutsu, gaining an extra genjutsu discipline, REM sleep. • Spiral of the Storm: at 75% chakra and above all jutsu are -1 rank in strength, 30-75% chakra all jutsu are normal, and 30% and lower jutsu get a +1 rank in strength
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|c α r є є r • ∂ α т α|├▬ Ryo: 両{Money} 0 AC: {Advancement credit} 0
Missions Complete: D Rank :: 0 C Rank :: 0 B Rank :: 0 A Rank :: 0 S Rank :: 0
Crafting Trees • {First Tree Here} || → • {Second Tree Here} || → • {Third Tree Here} || → • {Fourth Tree Here} || →
Crafting Jobs Complete: D Rank :: 0 C Rank :: 0 B Rank :: 0 A Rank :: 0 S Rank :: 0
Job Missions Complete: D Rank :: 0 {All start at zero} C Rank :: 0 B Rank :: 0 A Rank :: 0 S Rank :: 0
Limitations: {How many of each technique you can learn. Refer to class info} • Ninjutsu : : 00 / 00 • Genjutsu : : 00 / 24 • Taijutsu Styles: : 00 / 00 • Bukijutsu Styles: : 00 / 00
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|ω є α ρ σ η • ∂ α т α|├▬ Weapon Type: Flute Weapon Range: - Weapon Weight: 2 pounds Weapon Size: 18.5 x 6.00 x 6.00 inches Weapon Location: Stays folded up around waste.
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|ι η ν є η т σ r у|├▬ • Flute (Sometimes uses a violin) • 5 Shuriken • 10 Kunai • Standard attire • Staff Paper • Ink set to write on paper
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|т є c н η ι q υ є ѕ|├▬ ▬▬┤|N i n j u t s u Maruton: • Henge no Jutsu [ Transformation Technique ] • Kawarimi no Jutsu [ Substitution Technique ] • Bushin no Jutsu [ Clone Technique ] • Suimen Hokou no Waza [ Act of Water Surface Walking ] • Kinobori no Waza [ Act of Tree Climbing ] • Kai [ Release ]
Bloodline • ▬▬┤|G e n j u t s u • • ▬▬┤|F o r m l e s s S t y l e s Current Slots Available → 00 // 00 {Find in Formless Style and Class information} Locked Formless • {Training Links} Slots Used • _______ → || [X] {Please include links for training}
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|н ι ѕ т σ r у|├▬ Rayne’s family life was always quaint and simply. While growing up he was the youngest in a family of five, with two older brothers and both of his parents still living with him. Throughout his childhood, Rayne watched on as both of his older siblings grew up to graduate the ninja academy and become successful ninja in both the village’s eyes and his parent’s eyes. Yet while his brothers happily grew to become strong ninja, Rayne was entranced by the beauty of music. Begging his parents, they finally gave in and allowed him to take music lessons from a local instructor. Along the way, they both hoped that after playing for a year or two their son would grow out of this curiosity and devote his life to going into the Konoha ninja academy. However, as time progressed, Ray grew to love his craft more and more. Dedicating hours each day to practice and some minor composing. As time passed, his parents grew more concerned and in their heavy handed fashion forced him into the ninja academy. While attending the academy, Ray was constantly overshadowed in many of the subject matter. It was not the concept of them he struggled with however, it was his lack of dedication to the material. Still, he did enough to stay above average and keep his parents sated. Unbeknownst to him, the teachers had picked up on a few of his skills. Even with the small amount of effort they gave, they easily identified his already high level of chakra control. It was a family trait that his brothers possessed and pushed them into studying heavy ninjutsu with a bit of genjutsu. Excited at this prospect, his parents gradually began pushing him harder and harder. While trying to satisfy both sides of his life – his parents and himself – Rayne finally decided to tell them his issues one day on the way to one of his recitals. The results were disastrous, ending with his parents claiming that his rebellious attitude was a result of his musical instructor and that they would go to this performance to save face but he would not be coming back. His life would be dedicated to the ninja academy. Devastated, Rayne tried to hold everything together even while he began playing yet halfway through the performance he could feel himself breaking. Beyond that, everything was a grey blur. What he did see though, was the awakening of the latent bloodline his family carried and a sudden change in caring for him. Insisting that he do what he wants and they would support him. As he slept he met him for the first time, he met Storm. From there it was a constant struggle, the eyes giving him greater power at Storm’s increasing growth and dominance over his mind. A standstill was reached when Rayne agreed to remain in classes at the academy to everyone’s shock as long as his focus was on the right place. Teachers noticed the sudden change in awareness and the steady growth of chakra control as he moved a bit above halfway finally. Not enough to ever be at the top, but enough to finally be important within his class. His personality remained intact, and the kind and caring Rayne remained in the forefront of his mind. With every genjutsu cast though, every performance done there was always that shifting of power and the growing madness. The cunning, cruel Storm and the kind, caring Rayne. Two sides of the same coin in a constant struggle for control. A war still raging in his mind that in time either Rayne or his growing power would lose.
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Your Sixth Sense PA should be a Jutsu, so I'm going to have to deny this one.
I've been informed it is from the bloodline. Approved.
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▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|ρ є r ѕ σ η α ℓ • ∂ α т α|├▬ Full Name: Isora Sakkaku Nickname:~ Age: 15 Birthdate: 3/21 Gender: Male
Height: 5’6 Weight: 105 lbs
Nindo: "There is no limit to what I can do" Personality: perfectionists, with a seemingly endless capacity for improving upon anything that takes my interest. I apply the criterion "Does it work?" to everything from my own research efforts to the prevailing social norms. This in turn produces an unusual independence of mind. possess the unusual trait combination of imagination and reliability. both perfectionism and disregard for authority may come into play, as I can be unsparing of both myself and the others on the team. Anyone considered to be "slacking," including superiors, will lose my respect and will generally be made aware of this. Known to take it upon themselves to implement critical decisions without consulting my supervisors or teammates.A Introvert. Extraverted thinker. Non-emotional. Extraverted Sensing. Slightly depressed at times but feels like I am the brightest in the room at moments. Has a small fear of being abandoned though. Isora has multi personality disorder, The “Other” him comes out when he's angry or in danger usually. Can make brief appearances. The Othwe personality is blunt, harsh and more logical.
Village: Otogakure Title: Genin Rank: D First Class: Genjutsu ____Discipline → Inception: With Genjutsu, realism and the sensory ability of the target factor heavily into the ability of the victim to realize they are in a genjutsu. With practice and discipline, the shinobi may select one [1] genjutsu Sense that may be added as a Secondary sense to any technique, as well as increase one Sense of Choice that will forever act one [1] rank higher in strength. Once these two [2] choices are made, they cannot be switched, so choose wisely. Second Class: Performer Class ____Discipline → Emotional Content: The user is able to make fantastic illusions appear by performing on their instrument. This ability comes at the cost of not being able to perform ninjutsu through use of performance or instrument. Can perform B rank genjutsu and lower at D - rank, A rank at C - rank, and S rank at B - rank. At A - rank, all illusions cost 5 less chakra to perform if performed through a instrument or performance. at S - rank, illusions cost 10 less chakra if performed through instrument or performance. Allowed to convert Genjutsu slots into Style slots at a rate of 10 to 1. By selecting this discipline, increase the total number of Genjutsu gained per rank, including D - rank, by two [+2].
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|c σ м в α т • ∂ α т α|├▬ Bloodline: Sakkakugan • Otherworldly Imagery: Genjutsu performed cannot be mimicked or reversed by any means. ( Genjutsu can still be broken, however. • Life Sense: Within 100 meters, any type of life is able to be seen as a bright glow, when even the Byakugan cannot see it.
Chakra Pool:470 Stamina Pool: 30 Chakra Element: {Pick only two. Fire, water, wind, earth, lightning} Chakra Color: White and Black to create a Hyponotic color sceme Chakra Materialization:Chakra appears to look like a hypnotic trance. When he is the “Other” it's A Purplish red and White.
Passive Status Increases: • Strength ► {Total Bonus} →→ {Where does this come from?} • Speed ► {Total Bonus} →→ {Where does this come from?} • Reflex ► {Total Bonus} →→ {Where does this come from?} • Fortitude ► {Total Bonus} →→ {Where does this come from?}
Strengths: • Genjutsu • Quick Reaction • Strategy • Understanding a person through their actions Weaknesses: • TaiJutsu • Close combat • Deep thinker at moments Fears: • To fail at anything • Dying Alone • Himself • The “Other” taking full control
Reductions: • Learn ninjutsu (1) post faster. ( Performer Class ) • Learn genjutsu (3) post faster ( Performer + Gen Class) • All illusions cost 5 less chakra to perform if performed through a instrument • Sakkakugan users can't learn Tai and Boki
Personal Attributes: • Sixth Sense as the First: With a stationary body, the user can detach his vision and walk around to look at things. Cannot physically move during this. • learn GenJustus [1] post faster
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|c α r є є r • ∂ α т α|├▬ Ryo: 両 0 AC: 0 / 7500 > Chuunin Missions Complete: D Rank :: 0 C Rank :: 0 B Rank :: 0 A Rank :: 0 S Rank :: 0
Crafting
Crafting Trees • {First Tree Here} || → {Current Title} • {Second Tree Here} || → {Current Title} • {Third Tree Here} || → {Current Title} • {Fourth Tree Here} || → {Current Title}
Crafting Jobs Complete: D Rank :: 0 {All start at zero} C Rank :: 0 B Rank :: 0 A Rank :: 0 S Rank :: 0
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|ω є α ρ σ η • ∂ α т α|├▬ Weapon Type: Flute Weapon Range: {Its reach. In inches/centimeters please} Weapon Weight: 1 pound Weapon Size: {What ar ethe dimensions?} Weapon Location: Usually in hand. Stores in holster
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|ι η ν є η т σ r у|├▬ •Shuriken x15 • book: The Art Of War •
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|т є c н η ι q υ є ѕ|├▬ ▬▬┤|N i n j u t s u Maruton: {Start with the following six only unless otherwise specified.} • Henge no Jutsu [ Transformation Technique ] • Kawarimi no Jutsu [ Substitution Technique ] • Bushin no Jutsu [ Clone Technique ] • Suimen Hokou no Waza [ Act of Water Surface Walking ] • Kinobori no Waza [ Act of Tree Climbing ] • Kai [ Release ]
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Sakkakugan • ▬▬┤|G e n j u t s u Enchantment •
Illusion • ▬▬┤|F o r m l e s s S t y l e s Current Slots Available → 00 // 00 Locked Formless • {Training Links} Slots Used • _______ → || [X] {Please include links for training}
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|н ι ѕ т σ r у|├▬ ~ Age 0 - Now~ Being diagnosed at the age of 4 for multi personality disorder, violent behavior towards himself, as well as depression. Isora grew up in a mental hospital. During his time there, besides taking his medication to make his “Other” voice go away, Isora spent most of his time reading a plethora of books as well as reading others psychology. Being in Otogakure, being mental disable wasn't all bad for the most part. Good thing he had his “Other” to talk to. The “Other” was another part of him. The more cunning and vile part of him that was needed to keep his sanity when he used to be tortured. What also helped with his sanity would be the flute that he found and would play for his days at the asylum. The rest of his memory is foggy bc if the torture and the “Other” taking over.
At the age of 10 Isora was released from the mental hospital because it was shutting down. So the only thing a 10 year old could really do was to join the ninja academy. For the next 5 years Isora said to himself practicing and honing his skills to one day be looked up to, or feared, depending on what personality would be in control. Now a genin, Isora plans to become a top genjutsu style master.
Hello! Spiral of the Storm is denied, as it adjusts things based on rank. It is an interesting mechanic, but unless one of the other approval mods has something to say on the matter, it needs replaced.
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Important!: Hello! So this is character I made before the genjutsu system was updated. AFterwards I was just to busy but now I'm back so I just refreshed him to match the new system and changed his village. I hope this is okay!
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|ρ є r ѕ σ η α ℓ • ∂ α т α|├▬ Full Name: Rayne Phenax Heloise Nickname: Ray, Storm Age: 20 Birthdate: 6/23 Gender: Male
Height: 5’8” Weight: 145 lbs
Nindo: “I am the master of my fate: I am the captain of my soul.” Personality: Rayne is one of the kindest people some may ever meet. He is concerned about other’s well-being, health, and happiness, and will do anything in his power to make sure the people he is around and close to are happy and doing well. Due to his bleeding heart, however, Rayne will often spread himself too thin. Attempting to help everyone he can and pushing his own needs to the rear, he often overworks himself and can become deeply unhappy. The primary example for this is how he reacts to the will of his parents. In order to keep them happy and satisfy their expectations of him, he has continued to go to the ninja academy even if he does not want to. His overindulgence in helping others and lack of caring for himself, coupled with his powerful bloodline led to the creation of “Storm.” Unlike Rayne, Storm is incredibly selfish and cruel, interested only in his own goals and desires, a large part of which is the advancement of his bloodline as it is the source of his power and existence. The only other individual Storm could be said to care for is Rayne, and only out of necessity: if Rayne dies, then so does Storm. However, due to Rayne’s strong willpower and lack of malice, Storm has grown close to becoming nothing more than the whisper in the back of his mind. It was only when Rayned used genjutsu that Storm could apply any amount of influence, so in order to do what was best for both of them, Storm has manipulated Rayne’s psyche into being unable to perform anything but genjutsu. If Rayne, ever eager to please, wants to become a successful shinobi so that he does not disappoint his parents, then it is inevitable that he uses genjutsu, yet every time he uses genjutsu, Storm’s persona--domineering, selfish, and pretty much the opposite of everything Rayne stands for (for better or for worse)--comes closer to the surface.
Village: Kirigakure Title: Genin Rank: D-Rank First/Second Class:Genjutsu ____Discipline → Inception - Chakra Sense added to all genjutsu; Sight sense strengthened (+1 rank) ____Discipline → Mental Defenses - Sight (-1 rank in cost, -1 rank when used against Rayne) ____Discipline → REM sleep - Base Duration of genjutsu increased by 1 post, -5 chakra to upkeep cost of techniques
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|c σ м в α т • ∂ α т α|├▬ Bloodline: Sakkakugan
Chakra Pool:470 Stamina Pool: 30 Chakra Element: None Chakra Color: The right shade of blue Chakra Materialization: For the most part it creates a gentle and smooth pulse, with random notes flickering into existence within the aura. As Rayne's emotional intensity heightens, it resembles a billowing cloud, with streaks of lightning-looking chakra firing off rapidly in different directions.
Strengths: • Teamwork: Preferring to assist and not take the spotlight, Rayne values working closely with one another to accomplish tasks. As such, his skills reverberate around setting things up for his teammates. While performing, teamwork may decrease very quickly. • Genjutsu: With the power of his bloodline and “Storm,” Rayne is a very strong genjutsu user and has much potential if he were to dedicate himself. Weaknesses: • Physically Weak: While his genjutsu are very strong, Rayne is completely incompetent in melee brawls. While he has a good reaction time, he is simply unable to hold up against constant blows and hits. • Overly Passive: Rayne’s wishes for everyone’s betterment conflicts with his will to fight. Often time he pushes off the want to fight or began combat, and while in combat looks to trap or force submission while fighting. While performing this changes and aggression increases.
Fears: • Failing to achieve any of his own wants. Realistically, he fears his inability to live his own life free of the expectations of others. (Rayne) • Rayne’s independance. Rayne’s own insecurities are the essence of Storm’s strength and existence. By magnifying his current thoughts and self flaws, Storm keeps Rayne in the tight grip of his parents. Rayne’s execution of his own free will is the very foundation of what may destroy Storm outright. (Storm) • Running out of pumpkin spice latte. (Both)
Reductions: • Learn genjutsu three [4] posts faster • Genjutsu Rank D – C cost [5] less chakra to perform • Genjutsu Rank B – A cost [10] less chakra to perform • Genjutsu Rank S cost [20] less chakra to perform • Kai costs [10] less chakra to perform
Personal Attributes: • Otherwordly Imagery: Genjutsu performed cannot be mimicked or reversed by any means. ( Genjutsu can still be broken, however. ) - Bloodline •Life Sense: Within 100 meters, any type of life is able to be seen as a bright glow, when even the Byakugan cannot see it. - Bloodline • The Devil’s Noose - Rayne is incapable of using all ninjutsu except for the default starting six, but he has a not often seen mastery over his genjutsu, gaining an extra genjutsu discipline, REM sleep. • Spiral of the Storm: at 75% chakra and above all jutsu are -1 rank in strength, 30-75% chakra all jutsu are normal, and 30% and lower jutsu get a +1 rank in strength
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|c α r є є r • ∂ α т α|├▬ Ryo: 両{Money} 0 AC: {Advancement credit} 0
Missions Complete: D Rank :: 0 C Rank :: 0 B Rank :: 0 A Rank :: 0 S Rank :: 0
Crafting Trees • {First Tree Here} || → • {Second Tree Here} || → • {Third Tree Here} || → • {Fourth Tree Here} || →
Crafting Jobs Complete: D Rank :: 0 C Rank :: 0 B Rank :: 0 A Rank :: 0 S Rank :: 0
Job Missions Complete: D Rank :: 0 {All start at zero} C Rank :: 0 B Rank :: 0 A Rank :: 0 S Rank :: 0
Limitations: {How many of each technique you can learn. Refer to class info} • Ninjutsu : : 00 / 00 • Genjutsu : : 00 / 24 • Taijutsu Styles: : 00 / 00 • Bukijutsu Styles: : 00 / 00
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|ω є α ρ σ η • ∂ α т α|├▬ Weapon Type: Flute Weapon Range: - Weapon Weight: 2 pounds Weapon Size: 18.5 x 6.00 x 6.00 inches Weapon Location: Stays folded up around waste.
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|ι η ν є η т σ r у|├▬ • Flute (Sometimes uses a violin) • 5 Shuriken • 10 Kunai • Standard attire • Staff Paper • Ink set to write on paper
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|т є c н η ι q υ є ѕ|├▬ ▬▬┤|N i n j u t s u Maruton: • Henge no Jutsu [ Transformation Technique ] • Kawarimi no Jutsu [ Substitution Technique ] • Bushin no Jutsu [ Clone Technique ] • Suimen Hokou no Waza [ Act of Water Surface Walking ] • Kinobori no Waza [ Act of Tree Climbing ] • Kai [ Release ]
Bloodline • ▬▬┤|G e n j u t s u • • ▬▬┤|F o r m l e s s S t y l e s Current Slots Available → 00 // 00 {Find in Formless Style and Class information} Locked Formless • {Training Links} Slots Used • _______ → || [X] {Please include links for training}
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|н ι ѕ т σ r у|├▬ Rayne’s family life was always quaint and simply. While growing up he was the youngest in a family of five, with two older brothers and both of his parents still living with him. Throughout his childhood, Rayne watched on as both of his older siblings grew up to graduate the ninja academy and become successful ninja in both the village’s eyes and his parent’s eyes. Yet while his brothers happily grew to become strong ninja, Rayne was entranced by the beauty of music. Begging his parents, they finally gave in and allowed him to take music lessons from a local instructor. Along the way, they both hoped that after playing for a year or two their son would grow out of this curiosity and devote his life to going into the Konoha ninja academy. However, as time progressed, Ray grew to love his craft more and more. Dedicating hours each day to practice and some minor composing. As time passed, his parents grew more concerned and in their heavy handed fashion forced him into the ninja academy. While attending the academy, Ray was constantly overshadowed in many of the subject matter. It was not the concept of them he struggled with however, it was his lack of dedication to the material. Still, he did enough to stay above average and keep his parents sated. Unbeknownst to him, the teachers had picked up on a few of his skills. Even with the small amount of effort they gave, they easily identified his already high level of chakra control. It was a family trait that his brothers possessed and pushed them into studying heavy ninjutsu with a bit of genjutsu. Excited at this prospect, his parents gradually began pushing him harder and harder. While trying to satisfy both sides of his life – his parents and himself – Rayne finally decided to tell them his issues one day on the way to one of his recitals. The results were disastrous, ending with his parents claiming that his rebellious attitude was a result of his musical instructor and that they would go to this performance to save face but he would not be coming back. His life would be dedicated to the ninja academy. Devastated, Rayne tried to hold everything together even while he began playing yet halfway through the performance he could feel himself breaking. Beyond that, everything was a grey blur. What he did see though, was the awakening of the latent bloodline his family carried and a sudden change in caring for him. Insisting that he do what he wants and they would support him. As he slept he met him for the first time, he met Storm. From there it was a constant struggle, the eyes giving him greater power at Storm’s increasing growth and dominance over his mind. A standstill was reached when Rayne agreed to remain in classes at the academy to everyone’s shock as long as his focus was on the right place. Teachers noticed the sudden change in awareness and the steady growth of chakra control as he moved a bit above halfway finally. Not enough to ever be at the top, but enough to finally be important within his class. His personality remained intact, and the kind and caring Rayne remained in the forefront of his mind. With every genjutsu cast though, every performance done there was always that shifting of power and the growing madness. The cunning, cruel Storm and the kind, caring Rayne. Two sides of the same coin in a constant struggle for control. A war still raging in his mind that in time either Rayne or his growing power would lose.
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