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Lanfaer

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PostPosted: Thu Apr 06, 2017 1:13 pm
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Can you please further explain Chakra Suppression - masking one's chakra signature has, so far, been met with the limitation of saying you can't use chakra while masking.

Also, in regards to Bowcaster, the rules for such things are saying you can use your bow as a means of firing jutsu. If you want to limit it to when your character's focused, that's your decision. This does not alter the effects of the jutsu, just allowing you to cast jutsu with a bow in place of handsigns.

Any questions or want to discuss something, just contact myself or Lan!


Edited the profile with the fixes. I think I interpreted what you said correctly.


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PostPosted: Thu Apr 06, 2017 8:47 pm
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Full Name: Kotone
Nickname: Uzumaki
Age: Sixteen
Birthdate: March 1st
Gender: Female

Height: Five feet and four inches
Weight: One hundred and twelve pounds

Nindo: " Unknown "
Personality:
Lady-like is not a term one would use to describe Kotone. She's bold, loud, and takes risks that would make any normal girl quake in her boots. Whatever pops into her head instantly comes out of her mouth regardless of what the repercussions might be. Curious is another word one might use when speaking about Kotone. If something catches her attention, like a shiny object, odds are Kotone's standing right beside it poking it with a stick. She's the very definition of what a tom-boy might be. She is not afraid to jump into the middle of a fight, but this doesn't mean she goes in without thinking. Kotone is surprisingly thoughtful about fighting. Preferring to end a fight without spilling her opponent's blood. It often comes as a surprise to people just how caring she can be towards her loved ones or even complete strangers. She is the kind of person who goes out of her way to help stranger's in need.

If she's caused a problem Kotone is the type to insist on fixing it herself or taking part in fixing at least. Guilt can keep her awake all night if she isn't careful. Kotone is also prone to panicking about her sealing jutsus. Always afraid of sealing an innocent person or even herself on accident can keep her awake for several days. Regardless of her inner state of mind though, Kotone always tries to show an happy face whenever she's around other people. Her creativity knows no bounds, but flourishes when it comes to cloths. Often whenever she is home she can be found pouring over ideas for new sealing techniques. Or creating new styles of clothes and masks to use in sealing techniques.

Lastly Kotone is a laid back person. She might be loud and curious, but she can be loud and curious from that nice, cool, shaded bench with her eyes shut. If there's a good place to nap or mull over her own thoughts Kotone is sure to be there.

Village: Sunagakure
Title: Genin
Rank: D-Rank Shinobi
First Class: Bloodline
____DisciplineBlood Knight
Your bloodline techniques possess greater power, allowing them to overwhelm techniques of the same rank, and preventing them from succumbing to elemental weaknesses of techniques the same rank. Can cast bloodline techniques through one-handed seals.
Second Class: Medical
____DisciplineSpecialist
The user, choosing to specialize in either healing, offensive, or supplementary medical techniques, gains a great boost to their chakra control in that area. At C-rank, they gain a -5 chakra reduction to perform techniques in their specialty. At B-rank, -10, at A-rank, -15, and at S-rank, -20. To clarify, they they gain a -5 chakra reduction every rank, to a maximum of -20 at S-rank. All medical jutsu can still be learned by both sides, but the chakra control only applies to the chosen side.


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Bloodline: Uzumaki

Chakra Pool: 350
Stamina Pool: 170
Chakra Element: Water [ Suiton ], Earth [ Doton ]
Chakra Color: Sunshine yellow
Chakra Materialization: Flows from the top of her head down to her feet, flowing like a veil.

Passive Status Increases:
• Strength ►

• Speed ►

• Reflex ►

• Fortitude ►


Strengths:
• Versatile - In both body and mind Kotone bends, but never snaps. Insults don't effect her and it's near impossible to catch her.
• Silver tongue - Words are her specialty. Kotone likes to talk in circles when she needs time to think of a new plan when the first one has obviously failed, but in reality she likes to talk a lot.
Weaknesses:
• Chickens - They're evil.
• Doesn't listen - Kotone doesn't always follow orders. She does things by her way if she sees an opening.
• Panics - While she likes to play that she is calm and composed Kotone is prone to panic when rushed. Causing her to make mistakes if she loose her focus.
Fears:
• Sealed away - Kotone is always afraid of sealing herself in a mask or something on accident. That leads to nightmares, which disrupt her sleeping.
• Chickens - They're evil. Wasn't that mentioned before?
Reductions:
• The Uzumaki learn Ninjutsu one [1] post faster.
• Learn bloodline techniques one (1) post faster.
• Learn Medical techniques one (1) post faster.
Personal Attributes:
• Stitching in Seals - Kotone has the unique ability to 'weave' seals into, not just masks, but cloth material. Such as shirts and scarves. One item may be sealed in one piece of clothing at any given time. It's a one use per piece of cloth as well. Once an item or jutsu is released the seal disappears and the cloth reverts to just a plain old shirt (for example).
• Bursting at the seams - Kotone's chakra levels reflect her lively personality. Giving her +20 chakra.


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Ryo: 両 000
AC: 000

Missions Complete:
D Rank :: 0
C Rank :: 0
B Rank :: 0
A Rank :: 0
S Rank :: 0

Crafting Trees
• {First Tree Here} || →
• {Second Tree Here} || →
• {Third Tree Here} || →
• {Fourth Tree Here} || →

Crafting Jobs Complete:
D Rank :: 0
C Rank :: 0
B Rank :: 0
A Rank :: 0
S Rank :: 0

Job Titles
• {Job} || →
• {Job} || →

Job Missions Complete:
D Rank :: 0
C Rank :: 0
B Rank :: 0
A Rank :: 0
S Rank :: 0

Limitations:
• Ninjutsu : : 00 / 00
• Genjutsu : : 00 / 00
• Taijutsu Styles: : 00 / 00
• Bukijutsu Styles: : 00 / 00


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Weapon Type:
Weapon Range:
Weapon Weight:
Weapon Size:
Weapon Location:


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• A belt to attach up two masks to at her waist.
• x1 small pair of scissors [ attached to neck piece ]
• Fabric Bundle [ contains 10 pieces of 2x2 fabric ]
• Sewing Kit [ x3 Sewing Needles, x5 Pins, x12 spools of colored thread ]
• Medium sized hip pouch [ contains x1 brush, x1 small ink bottle, fabric bundle, x1 Sewing kit ]
• x1 Medical Kit [ x2 3 foot rolls of bandages, x2 1 foot rolls of medical tape ]
• x2 sets of arm bracers
• x1 Shawl
• x1 Pair of pants
• x1 Shirt
• x1 pair of shoes

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▬▬┤|N i n j u t s u

Maruton:
• Henge no Jutsu [ Transformation Technique ]
• Kawarimi no Jutsu [ Substitution Technique ]
• Bushin no Jutsu [ Clone Technique ]
• Suimen Hokou no Waza [ Act of Water Surface Walking ]
• Kinobori no Waza [ Act of Tree Climbing ]
• Kai [ Release ]

Dotone [ Earth ]


Suiton [ Water ]


Eiseijutsu [ Medical ]


▬▬┤|G e n j u t s u

{Your first Type's name}


{Your second Type's name}



▬▬┤|T a i j u t s u

{Style name here}
• {Stage progression / techniques learned}


▬▬┤|B u k i j u t s u

{Style name here}
• {Stage progression / techniques learned}


▬▬┤|F o r m l e s s S t y l e s


Current Slots Available → 00 // 00 {Find in Formless Style and Class information}
Locked Formless
• {Training Links}
Slots Used
• _______ → || [X] {Please include links for training}


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The child of Chunin and a Jounin of the Sunagakure, Kotone's history is pretty basic. Kotone's mother was just an ordinary kunoichi, coming from a clan with no Kekkai Genkai. Her father, however, was obviously from a particular clan. If his shock of red head and stunning deep, almost navy, blue eyes was of any note. When Kotone was born she they found she had her mother's face and hair, but her father's eyes. Much to her mother's delight. Her parents retired, in a sense, from the shinobi life when Kotone was born. They opened a tea house within Sunagakure. It wasn't the best, but neither was it the worst. Their little business did well enough to support the little family. As a child Kotone was always a boisterous kid and that didn't change one bit going into the academy to follow her own dreams. It didn't take long for her to take an interest into one of the boys that was close to her own age. The kid was just as loud as she was and had an extremely odd weapon. The name of which Kotone has never pronounced correctly to this day. Once during their academy days Kotone found out that he had proclaimed they were rivals. She didn't really care for it, but like everything else about him it made her curious to see what the outcome would be. That same curiosity still fuels her even after she had graduated from the Academy. Now a genin, whenever she is not working Kotone can be found at her family's tea house. Unless it's closed, then she can be found studying jutsus, sewing, or napping.


 

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PostPosted: Sat Apr 08, 2017 6:02 pm
Lady Caprinet

[ Denied ]
→→• I will be investing about Stitching Seals, but Bursting at the Seams is definitely denied. Per our P.A. Rules, no Personal Attributes cannot increase anything by "rank", and as such the PA is denied. At most, one may be used to increase Chakra by twenty [20] points, but that's once, and not by rank.
 
PostPosted: Sat Apr 08, 2017 8:13 pm
        Whoopsie, sorry I guess I read that rule wrong. I fixed the PA, got rid of the 'per rank' part. If you're wonderin' about the other one though it would be something similar to how Sai does his jutsu. But instead of drawing on paper she's stitching/weaving (or embroidering may have been a better word) the seals into the cloth. It's a lot slower and I'd probably never use it in combat.

        Lanfaer
 

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PostPosted: Tue Apr 11, 2017 2:01 pm
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Full Name: Hideo Anzai Hyuuga
Nickname: N/A
Age: 15
Birthdate: 4/8
Gender: Male

Height: 5'10
Weight: 140lbs

Nindo: "Seek truth through duty."

Personality:

Hideo is confident and intelligent. In that respect, he isn't fond of keeping things to himself if and when he wants to speak his mind. At most times Hideo seems relaxed and almost overly so, however when it comes to shinobi training when the time comes for it, he has been described as relentless in his pursuit of perfecting his skill. It could be said his relaxed nature comes from confidence.

Not one to miss out on life, although Hideo isn't a troublemaker he certainly wouldn't give up the chance to observe personally the trouble that was caused, his curiosity often drives him. Pensive around strangers, Hideo is known to open up fairly easy in the company of his friends and peers when the time calls for it. The combination of him being open yet relaxed, leads often to people believing him aloof in some respects and mistaken for seeming bored of his surroundings. He takes pride in his work as a shinobi however, and usually is the first to volunteer for something if it's out in the field. His zeal for seeing new places, new things, and facing new challenges knows no bounds.

His sense of self is strong, and his sense of duty high as well. His fellow shinobi and teammates are important to him, he'd risk life in limb to stand side-by-side with them on the field.

Village: Sunagakure
Title: Genin
Rank: D-Rank Shinobi
First Class: Bukijutsu
____DisciplineMystic Hero
Second Class: Ninjutsu
____DisciplineElemental Dual Wielder

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Bloodline: Byakugan

Chakra Pool: 360
Stamina Pool: 150
Chakra Element: Suiton [Water] / Fuuton [Wind]
Chakra Color: Dark Cerulean
Chakra Materialization: Hideo's chakra appears as a whispy fumes escaping his pours.
Passive Status Increases:
• Strength ►

• Speed ►

• Reflex ► Mildly Increased [1] / Moderately Increased [2] with active Byakugan
→ True Hyuuga P.A.
• Fortitude ►


Strengths:
• Close quarters combat
• Tracking
• Chakra Manipulation
• Reflexive Speed
Weaknesses:
• Doton
• Stealth - Hideo being trained in close combat and ninjutsu hasn't seen much need for stealth, therefore doesn't exactly have a knack for it.
Fears:
• Dying without honor. Hideo fears failure to such an extent, he views the ultimate failure to be dying in the field without completing his mission successfully. He'd do anything to prevent that from happening.
• Losing a limb
Reductions:
• Learn Bukijutsu techniques one [2] posts faster. (Class/P.A. Bonuses)
• Learn ninjutsu one (1) post faster.
• All Hyuuga learn taijutsu one [1] post faster.
• All Hyuuga learn maruton ninjutsu [1] one post faster.
Personal Attributes:
• One with the blade - Learns all bladed bukijutsu in [1] less post.
• True Hyuuga - Being granted a dojutsu that grants near perfect all around vision, Hyuuga have always been thought of as observant and therefore more apt to react quickly to any circumstance. It is said however, that some possess a Byakugan of true reactionary skill. Reflexes are mildly increased, however moderately increased when dojutsu is activated.

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Ryo: 両{Money} 0
AC: 0

Missions Complete:
D Rank :: 0
C Rank :: 0
B Rank :: 0
A Rank :: 0
S Rank :: 0

Crafting Trees
• {First Tree Here} || →
• {Second Tree Here} || →
• {Third Tree Here} || →
• {Fourth Tree Here} || →

Crafting Jobs Complete:
D Rank :: 0
C Rank :: 0
B Rank :: 0
A Rank :: 0
S Rank :: 0

Job Titles
• {Job} || →
• {Job} || →

Job Missions Complete:
D Rank :: 0
C Rank :: 0
B Rank :: 0
A Rank :: 0
S Rank :: 0

Limitations:
• Ninjutsu : : 00 / 08
• Genjutsu : : 00 / 01
• Taijutsu Styles: : 00 / 00
• Bukijutsu Styles: : 00 / 01

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Weapon Type: Katana
Weapon Range: Arms reach plus length of katana. Roughly 4ft.
Weapon Weight: 1.1kg
Weapon Size: 26 inches
Weapon Location: Diagonal across back.


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• 2 Kunai
• 8 Senbon
• Fingerless Gloves with small metal plates on the back with Suna's Insignia.
• White zip-up tunic with short sleeves.
• Form fitting black high collar shirt with forehead protector sewn into chest.
• Silver sphere gauge earrings.
• Right thigh kunai pouch.
• Hip pouch on back
• Black boots

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▬▬┤|N i n j u t s u

Maruton:
• Henge no Jutsu [ Transformation Technique ]
• Kawarimi no Jutsu [ Substitution Technique ]
• Bushin no Jutsu [ Clone Technique ]
• Suimen Hokou no Waza [ Act of Water Surface Walking ]
• Kinobori no Waza [ Act of Tree Climbing ]
• Kai [ Release ]

Suiton


Fuuton


Bloodline: Byakugan


▬▬┤|G e n j u t s u

Enchantment


Instance


▬▬┤|T a i j u t s u

{Style name here}
• {Stage progression / techniques learned}

▬▬┤|B u k i j u t s u

Hagane no Shunkan
• {Stage progression / techniques learned}

▬▬┤|F o r m l e s s S t y l e s

Current Slots Available → 00 // 02
Medium Weapons

Slots Used
• _______ → || [X]

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Hideo was somewhat of an oddity in his village given his family name. There were rarely if ever Hyuuga found out in the deser, however it was there his father met his mother, both shinobi at the time as Hideki Hyuuga had been paired with her for a three year mission. When they came back to her home of Suna to report what had transpired, Hideki Hyuuga decided to stay with his desert flower. He parlayed his position in Konoha into diplomatic liason to Konohagakure, coordinating joint missions and filing them directly in Sunagakure. Two years later, Hideo Anzai Hyuuga was born.

His father instilled in him a strong sense of family, a man coming from such a large one no doubt had it instilled in him. Here and there in fact, Hideo met cousin's or uncles who stayed with them during coordinated missions with the Sand. As a Hyuuga, the kids were taught to move carefully, mind their surroundings. And although Hideki took care to wait until he felt it time to truly train his son, he gathered the boy would take up a station as a shinobi as Hideo poked and proded his Hyuuga visitors and even his father about what they did.

At first in the academy he felt somewhat separated from the others despite making a handful of friends. There were the usual childhood jeers about his eyes, but nothing more. He'd learned to quip back quickly however, growing quite comfortable trading verbal jabs in class. As he grew into his own during the academy, he kept confident pace with the others in terms of training. After graduating, his father decided to take them on a trip to visit his side of the family in Konoha. One year later, Hideo Anzai Hyuuga returns to Sunagakure to begin his career as a shinobi.

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PostPosted: Tue Apr 11, 2017 3:13 pm
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Full Name: Kohana Kinmukugan
Nickname: Hana
Age: 15 (&2/3s)
Birthdate: December 12th
Gender: Female

Height: 5'9
Weight: 150 lbs

Nindo:
Personality: Blunt, edging on abrasive. She doesn't know how to take social cues or filter her words. If she has a question, she asks it. Heart of gold, she has good intentions and wants to help everyone she can. She walks old ladies across the street whenever she can. Easily amused, she can be mistaken as childish or flat out silly because of everything that makes her laugh. She can giggle at clouds for days on end. Passionate, she falls in love with anything she does long enough and does what she's fallen in love with. She tends to gush about the smallest things like a cute bird she saw or a bouquet that looked absolutely stunning. Impulsive, she chases adventures whenever the opportunity arises. She can go on excursions at midnight and not return to the academy until noon the next day with scratches and a brand new story to tell everyone. Pushy, she likes to get her way and refuses to give up until she gets it. She is also rather nosy with her questions and doesn't like being ignored or lied to. She can be very vocal about her issues with someone, although she does so to make sure they get solved right then, not out of a desire to embarrass or shame someone. She loves the freedom of being a ninja and wouldn't sacrifice it for the world; she doesn't feel any need to compete with her fellow shinobi, although she loves to see how they've grown since she last saw them, and is forthcoming with her praises. She comes off as motherly to her classmates. She takes defense and security very seriously, hoping to prevent others from feeling unsafe in their own homes after theft like she did as a child; she will be particularly rough on thieves as a shinobi. She is also a bit obtuse, and isn't tuned in on how others feel all the time. Although she means well, she tends to misread people and annoy them.

Village: Sunagakure
Title: Genin
Rank: D-Rank Shinobi
First Class: Bloodline
____DisciplineThoroughbred
Second Class: Bloodline
____DisciplineBlood Bender

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Bloodline: Kinmukugan

Chakra Pool: 270
Stamina Pool: 250
Chakra Element: Fuuton, Katon
Chakra Color: Gold
Chakra Materialization: Typically generate at her eyes (like black rock shooter).

Passive Status Increases:
• Strength ► {Total Bonus}
→ {Where does this come from?}
• Speed ► {Total Bonus}
→ {Where does this come from?}
• Reflex ► {Total Bonus}
→ {Where does this come from?}
• Fortitude ► {Total Bonus}
→ {Where does this come from?}


Strengths:
• Spontaneous
• Well-rounded
Weaknesses:
• Not focused
• Won't kill
Fears:
• Bleeding out [ specifically through cuts, makes her nervous around swordsmen and anyone touching her neck or wrists ]
• Plague/Wide-spread disease

Reductions:
• -1 Fuuton ninjutsu
• -1 Bloodline
• -2 Buki
Personal Attributes:
Archer's Achievement: -2 Buki posts but +1 Bloodline post
Matter over Mind: -2 Ninjutsu posts but +1 Genjutsu post

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Ryo: 両0
AC: 0

Missions Complete:
D Rank :: 0
C Rank :: 0
B Rank :: 0
A Rank :: 0
S Rank :: 0

Crafting Trees
• {First Tree Here} || → {Current Title}
• {Second Tree Here} || → {Current Title}
• {Third Tree Here} || → {Current Title}
• {Fourth Tree Here} || → {Current Title}

Crafting Jobs Complete:
D Rank :: 0
C Rank :: 0
B Rank :: 0
A Rank :: 0
S Rank :: 0

Job Titles
• {Job} || → {Current Title}
• {Job} || → {Current Title}

Job Missions Complete:
D Rank :: 0
C Rank :: 0
B Rank :: 0
A Rank :: 0
S Rank :: 0


Limitations:
• Ninjutsu : : 00 / 08
• Genjutsu : : 00 / 04
• Taijutsu Styles: : 00 / 01
• Bukijutsu Styles: : 00 / 01

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Weapon Type: Yew Longbow
Weapon Range: 6' (?)
Weapon Weight: 20 lbs
Weapon Size: 6'
Weapon Location: Attached to back diagonal bc its taller than she is


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• x15 arrows
• Leather quiver
• Yellow dress (two pockets, front)
• Net body suit
• Yellow sandals
• Gold piercing, bottom lip

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▬▬┤|N i n j u t s u

Maruton:
• Henge no Jutsu [ Transformation Technique ]
• Kawarimi no Jutsu [ Substitution Technique ]
• Bushin no Jutsu [ Clone Technique ]
• Suimen Hokou no Waza [ Act of Water Surface Walking ]
• Kinobori no Waza [ Act of Tree Climbing ]
• Kai [ Release ]

Fuuton


Bloodline: Kinmukugan


▬▬┤|G e n j u t s u

Illusory


Enchantment


▬▬┤|T a i j u t s u

Jiyūgata Senpū
• {Stage progression / techniques learned}

▬▬┤|B u k i j u t s u

Uwame


▬▬┤|F o r m l e s s S t y l e s

Current Slots Available → 00 // 02
Soft Physical Formless
• {Training Links}
Slots Used
• _______ → || [X] {Please include links for training}

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Kohana was born in Sunagakure, killing her mother in childbirth. She was raised by her dad in the outskirts as farming folk. She was very happy to help out with the rice fields as a kid. On her eighth birthday, their home was broken into. No one was hurt in the theft (or awake, due to a genjutsu) but a lot of money and precious items were missing. The duo had to move back into the city with her grandparents, who were very warm and helped her dad raise her. Kohana expressed a big interest in genjutsu and martial arts afterwards out of a desire to protect. Since her dad had a debilitating knee injury for decades ago, it would be up to her to defend her family. It took quite some convincing, but Kohana was allowed to join the ninja academy once she was of age.
 

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PostPosted: Wed Apr 12, 2017 7:56 am
Lady Caprinet
        Whoopsie, sorry I guess I read that rule wrong. I fixed the PA, got rid of the 'per rank' part. If you're wonderin' about the other one though it would be something similar to how Sai does his jutsu. But instead of drawing on paper she's stitching/weaving (or embroidering may have been a better word) the seals into the cloth. It's a lot slower and I'd probably never use it in combat.

        Lanfaer



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PostPosted: Wed Apr 12, 2017 10:52 pm

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Full Name: Shinji Badname Gami
Nickname: Faker
Age: 17
Birthdate: July 5th
Gender: Male (Usually)

Height: 5'9
Weight: 130 lbs

Appearance**: Shinji has a high tendency to change his appearance depending on the mission or situation quite often, meaning that even those close to him might not recognize him at first glance.

Nindo: Creation
Personality: Creative, Spuratic, Hyper, Determined.

Village: Sound
Title: Genin
Rank: D
First Class: Taijustu
____DisciplineBrawler
Second Class: Taijutsu
____DisciplineBerserker

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Bloodline: Bakuton

Chakra Pool: 190
Stamina Pool: 350
Chakra Element: Earth, Lightning
Chakra Color: Blue
Chakra Materialization: A samurai like figure cloaked in a wreath of fire.

Passive Status Increases:
• Strength ► 2 | Moderately Increased

• Speed ► 4 | Greatly Increased
→ (Class Discipline)
• Reflex ► 2 | Moderately Increased
→ (Class Discipline)
• Fortitude ► 2 | Moderately Increased


Strengths:
• Creativity
• Manipulation
• Strategy
• One Hit Kills
Weaknesses:
• Working on teams
• Precise destruction

Fears:
• Losing ones close to him
• Deep water

Reductions:
• Learn taijutsu two post faster (Class)
Personal Attributes:
• Able to learn bloodline techniques one rank above rank limits. (Genin can learn A for example)
• Speed is moderately increased

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Ryo: 両{Money} 0
AC: 0

Missions Complete:
D Rank :: 0 {All start at zero}
C Rank :: 0
B Rank :: 0
A Rank :: 0
S Rank :: 0

Crafting Trees
• {First Tree Here} || → {Current Title}
• {Second Tree Here} || → {Current Title}
• {Third Tree Here} || → {Current Title}
• {Fourth Tree Here} || → {Current Title}

Crafting Jobs Complete:
D Rank :: 0 {All start at zero}
C Rank :: 0
B Rank :: 0
A Rank :: 0
S Rank :: 0

Job Titles
• {Job} || → {Current Title}
• {Job} || → {Current Title}

Job Missions Complete:
D Rank :: 0 {All start at zero}
C Rank :: 0
B Rank :: 0
A Rank :: 0
S Rank :: 0

Limitations: {How many of each technique you can learn. Refer to class info}
• Ninjutsu : : 00 / 06
• Genjutsu : : 00 / 02
• Taijutsu Styles: : 00 / 00
• Bukijutsu Styles: : 00 / 00

▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|ω є α ρ σ η • ∂ α т α|├▬
Weapon Type: Katana
Weapon Range: 20 inches
Weapon Weight: 3 lbs
Weapon Size: 20 inches by 2 inches wide, 8 inch handle
Weapon Location: Rarely used but typically on his right hip

▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|ι η ν є η т σ r у|├▬
• 15x Kunai
• Molding Clay
• Back Satchel
• Hip Holsters
• Standard Uniform
• Head Band
• Katana
• Make Up
• Fingerless Gloves
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|т є c н η ι q υ є ѕ|├▬
▬▬┤|N i n j u t s u

Maruton: {Start with the following six only unless otherwise specified.}
• Henge no Jutsu [ Transformation Technique ]
• Kawarimi no Jutsu [ Substitution Technique ]
• Bushin no Jutsu [ Clone Technique ]
• Suimen Hokou no Waza [ Act of Water Surface Walking ]
• Kinobori no Waza [ Act of Tree Climbing ]
• Kai [ Release ]

Earth


Lightning


Explosive


▬▬┤|G e n j u t s u

Illusion

Instant


▬▬┤|T a i j u t s u

{Style name here}
• {Stage progression / techniques learned}

▬▬┤|B u k i j u t s u

{Style name here}
• {Stage progression / techniques learned}

▬▬┤|F o r m l e s s S t y l e s

Current Slots Available → 00 // 00 {
Locked Formless

Slots Used
• _______ → || [X] {Please include links for training}

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To be filled in later. Nothing politically fueled just minorly tragic.
 

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PostPosted: Thu Apr 13, 2017 7:00 am
Odoeb

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Full Name: Shinji Badname Gami
Nickname: Faker
Age: 17
Birthdate: July 5th
Gender: Male (Usually)

Height: 5'9
Weight: 130 lbs

Appearance**: Shinji has a high tendency to change his appearance depending on the mission or situation quite often, meaning that even those close to him might not recognize him at first glance.

Nindo: Creation
Personality: Creative, Spuratic, Hyper, Determined.

Village: Sound
Title: Genin
Rank: D
First Class: Taijustu
____DisciplineBrawler
Second Class: Blood Line
____DisciplineBlood Bender

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Bloodline: Bakuton

Chakra Pool: 205
Stamina Pool: 295
Chakra Element: Earth, Lightning
Chakra Color: Blue
Chakra Materialization: A samurai like figure cloaked in a wreath of fire.

Passive Status Increases:
• Strength ►

• Speed ► Moderately Increased + Moderately Increased (+4?)
→ (Class Discipline)
• Reflex ► Moderately Increased
→ (Class Discipline)
• Fortitude ►


Strengths:
• Creativity
• Manipulation
• Strategy
• One Hit Kills
Weaknesses:
• Working on teams
• Precise destruction

Fears:
• Losing ones close to him
• Deep water

Reductions:
• Learn taijutsu one post faster (Class)
• Learn bloodline techniques one post faster (Class)
Personal Attributes:
• Able to learn bloodline techniques one rank above rank limits. (Genin can learn A for example)
• Speed is moderately increased

▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|c α r є є r • ∂ α т α|├▬
Ryo: 両{Money} 0
AC: 0

Missions Complete:
D Rank :: 0 {All start at zero}
C Rank :: 0
B Rank :: 0
A Rank :: 0
S Rank :: 0

Crafting Trees
• {First Tree Here} || → {Current Title}
• {Second Tree Here} || → {Current Title}
• {Third Tree Here} || → {Current Title}
• {Fourth Tree Here} || → {Current Title}

Crafting Jobs Complete:
D Rank :: 0 {All start at zero}
C Rank :: 0
B Rank :: 0
A Rank :: 0
S Rank :: 0

Job Titles
• {Job} || → {Current Title}
• {Job} || → {Current Title}

Job Missions Complete:
D Rank :: 0 {All start at zero}
C Rank :: 0
B Rank :: 0
A Rank :: 0
S Rank :: 0

Limitations: {How many of each technique you can learn. Refer to class info}
• Ninjutsu : : 00 / 08
• Genjutsu : : 00 / 02
• Taijutsu Styles: : 00 / 02
• Bukijutsu Styles: : 00 / 00

▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|ω є α ρ σ η • ∂ α т α|├▬
Weapon Type: Katana
Weapon Range: 20 inches
Weapon Weight: 3 lbs
Weapon Size: 20 inches by 2 inches wide, 8 inch handle
Weapon Location: Rarely used but typically on his right hip

▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|ι η ν є η т σ r у|├▬
• 15x Kunai
• Molding Clay
• Back Satchel
• Hip Holsters
• Standard Uniform
• Head Band
• Katana
• Make Up
• Fingerless Gloves
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|т є c н η ι q υ є ѕ|├▬
▬▬┤|N i n j u t s u

Maruton: {Start with the following six only unless otherwise specified.}
• Henge no Jutsu [ Transformation Technique ]
• Kawarimi no Jutsu [ Substitution Technique ]
• Bushin no Jutsu [ Clone Technique ]
• Suimen Hokou no Waza [ Act of Water Surface Walking ]
• Kinobori no Waza [ Act of Tree Climbing ]
• Kai [ Release ]

Earth


Lightning


Explosive


▬▬┤|G e n j u t s u

Illusion

Instant


▬▬┤|T a i j u t s u

{Style name here}
• {Stage progression / techniques learned}

▬▬┤|B u k i j u t s u

{Style name here}
• {Stage progression / techniques learned}

▬▬┤|F o r m l e s s S t y l e s

Current Slots Available → 00 // 00 {
Locked Formless

Slots Used
• _______ → || [X] {Please include links for training}

▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|н ι ѕ т σ r у|├▬
To be filled in later. Nothing politically fueled just minorly tragic.



Approved  
PostPosted: Thu Apr 13, 2017 9:11 am
『 ♔ 』
"The Half-Blood Prince"


Luo1304


Approved with the following edits: you actually have 360 chakra, not 350. Elemental Duel Wielder discipline gives you an extra 10 chakra. Remember you have 6 jutsu slots each for your two elements as well! I would also say you should change your character's fear of 'dying without honour' as everyone fears death. Make your character unique; deep water, heights, cats! Give your character that x-factor that other people will enjoy learning about your character! Oh! And you start off with two formless slots as well.
Have fun!

kiwis poet


Recomended edits: one of your PAs is useless to you - it gives you access to Katon chakra but you only have two elements listed. All shinobi (except for those who take a discipline saying otherwise) start with two elements. Your character's fear of dying isn't all that unique - everyone fears to die. Going further with the bleeding out fear, however, you could extend it to give your character more dimension - fear of hands anywhere near the neck/shoulder area. An instinctual, unrelenting, non-ignorable urge to always have their wrists securely covered/protected. Etc. Also, we ask that you actually list your clothing. Pointing to a picture does not count, sorry!

 


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PostPosted: Thu Apr 13, 2017 9:42 am
BlackFruity
『 ♔ 』
"The Half-Blood Prince"


Thanks, I'll edit what needs to be fixed and outline exactly what that fear means because it goes much deeper than just dying. But I appreciate the input!  
PostPosted: Thu Apr 13, 2017 9:48 am
Holy Rinaku
Odoeb



『 ♔ 』
"The Half-Blood Prince"


Apologies, guys! But I can't allow this profile to be approved until the following are addressed!

____ • the appearance is not satisfactory. This character is a genin - a kid in all regards, including skill. Until they rank up and learn, they will have recognizable traits.

____ • This is more nitpicking than anything 'deny' worthy - the nindo doesn't make much sense. It is just a word. If personality or history was filled in, I may be more understanding of it.

____ • Personality needs to be expanded upon in detail. It tells us very little and this is something I feel a profile can be denied upon.

____ • Not denying, just letting you know that the personal attribute to let your character learn techniques one rank above their actual limit will be made useless upon hitting Jounin.

____ • You cannot increase any descriptive rank by moderate. You can see it in our rules under; "• Descriptives: Physical Attributes, such as speed or strength, may only be increased slightly or mildly. Physical attributes that are increased 'mildly' must take a 'slightly' penalty." The second PA is denied.

____ • 'Standard uniform' needs to be described. Pockets? Zips?

____ • How much modelling clay do you have? Need weight. You will also have to purchase clay to replace what is used, just so you are aware.

____ • What type of Bakuton clan member are you? This needs to be decided and stated somewhere on your profile as it changes your state and chakra pool.
• Physical Method users are accustomed to absorbing close-range blasts. ( Damage received from explosions moderately reduced, physical defense slightly increased. )
• Clay Method users are born with molding mouths on their body, and deep chakra pools. ( Chakra pool maximum +40. )

____ • You start with 2 formless style slots plus one locked formless style.

____ • You will not be approved until your history is filled in.
 


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PostPosted: Thu Apr 13, 2017 12:47 pm
BlackFruity
Edited.


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Full Name: Kohana Kinmukugan
Nickname: Hana
Age: 15 (&2/3s)
Birthdate: December 12th
Gender: Female

Height: 5'9
Weight: 150 lbs

Nindo:
Personality: Blunt, edging on abrasive. She doesn't know how to take social cues or filter her words. If she has a question, she asks it. Heart of gold, she has good intentions and wants to help everyone she can. She walks old ladies across the street whenever she can. Easily amused, she can be mistaken as childish or flat out silly because of everything that makes her laugh. She can giggle at clouds for days on end. Passionate, she falls in love with anything she does long enough and does what she's fallen in love with. She tends to gush about the smallest things like a cute bird she saw or a bouquet that looked absolutely stunning. Impulsive, she chases adventures whenever the opportunity arises. She can go on excursions at midnight and not return to the academy until noon the next day with scratches and a brand new story to tell everyone. Pushy, she likes to get her way and refuses to give up until she gets it. She is also rather nosy with her questions and doesn't like being ignored or lied to. She can be very vocal about her issues with someone, although she does so to make sure they get solved right then, not out of a desire to embarrass or shame someone. She loves the freedom of being a ninja and wouldn't sacrifice it for the world; she doesn't feel any need to compete with her fellow shinobi, although she loves to see how they've grown since she last saw them, and is forthcoming with her praises. She comes off as motherly to her classmates. She takes defense and security very seriously, hoping to prevent others from feeling unsafe in their own homes after theft like she did as a child; she will be particularly rough on thieves as a shinobi. She is also a bit obtuse, and isn't tuned in on how others feel all the time. Although she means well, she tends to misread people and annoy them.

Village: Sunagakure
Title: Genin
Rank: D-Rank Shinobi
First Class: Bloodline
____DisciplineThoroughbred
Second Class: Bloodline
____DisciplineBlood Bender

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Bloodline: Kinmukugan

Chakra Pool: 270
Stamina Pool: 250
Chakra Element: Fuuton, Katon
Chakra Color: Gold
Chakra Materialization: Typically generate at her eyes (like black rock shooter).

Passive Status Increases:
• Strength ► {Total Bonus}
→ {Where does this come from?}
• Speed ► {Total Bonus}
→ {Where does this come from?}
• Reflex ► {Total Bonus}
→ {Where does this come from?}
• Fortitude ► {Total Bonus}
→ {Where does this come from?}


Strengths:
• Spontaneous
• Well-rounded
Weaknesses:
• Not focused
• Won't kill
Fears:
• Bleeding out [ specifically through cuts, makes her nervous around swordsmen and anyone touching her neck or wrists ]
• Plague/Wide-spread disease

Reductions:
• -1 Fuuton ninjutsu
• -1 Bloodline
• -2 Buki
Personal Attributes:
Archer's Achievement: -2 Buki posts but +1 Bloodline post
Matter over Mind: -2 Ninjutsu posts but +1 Genjutsu post

▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|c α r є є r • ∂ α т α|├▬
Ryo: 両0
AC: 0

Missions Complete:
D Rank :: 0
C Rank :: 0
B Rank :: 0
A Rank :: 0
S Rank :: 0

Crafting Trees
• {First Tree Here} || → {Current Title}
• {Second Tree Here} || → {Current Title}
• {Third Tree Here} || → {Current Title}
• {Fourth Tree Here} || → {Current Title}

Crafting Jobs Complete:
D Rank :: 0
C Rank :: 0
B Rank :: 0
A Rank :: 0
S Rank :: 0

Job Titles
• {Job} || → {Current Title}
• {Job} || → {Current Title}

Job Missions Complete:
D Rank :: 0
C Rank :: 0
B Rank :: 0
A Rank :: 0
S Rank :: 0


Limitations:
• Ninjutsu : : 00 / 08
• Genjutsu : : 00 / 04
• Taijutsu Styles: : 00 / 01
• Bukijutsu Styles: : 00 / 01

▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|ω є α ρ σ η • ∂ α т α|├▬
Weapon Type: Yew Longbow
Weapon Range: 6' (?)
Weapon Weight: 20 lbs
Weapon Size: 6'
Weapon Location: Attached to back diagonal bc its taller than she is


▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|ι η ν є η т σ r у|├▬
• x15 arrows
• Leather quiver
• Yellow dress (two pockets, front)
• Net body suit
• Yellow sandals
• Gold piercing, bottom lip

▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|т є c н η ι q υ є ѕ|├▬
▬▬┤|N i n j u t s u

Maruton:
• Henge no Jutsu [ Transformation Technique ]
• Kawarimi no Jutsu [ Substitution Technique ]
• Bushin no Jutsu [ Clone Technique ]
• Suimen Hokou no Waza [ Act of Water Surface Walking ]
• Kinobori no Waza [ Act of Tree Climbing ]
• Kai [ Release ]

Fuuton


Bloodline: Kinmukugan


▬▬┤|G e n j u t s u

Illusory


Enchantment


▬▬┤|T a i j u t s u

Jiyūgata Senpū
• {Stage progression / techniques learned}

▬▬┤|B u k i j u t s u

Uwame


▬▬┤|F o r m l e s s S t y l e s

Current Slots Available → 00 // 02
Soft Physical Formless
• {Training Links}
Slots Used
• _______ → || [X] {Please include links for training}

▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|н ι ѕ т σ r у|├▬
Kohana was born in Sunagakure, killing her mother in childbirth. She was raised by her dad in the outskirts as farming folk. She was very happy to help out with the rice fields as a kid. On her eighth birthday, their home was broken into. No one was hurt in the theft (or awake, due to a genjutsu) but a lot of money and precious items were missing. The duo had to move back into the city with her grandparents, who were very warm and helped her dad raise her. Kohana expressed a big interest in genjutsu and martial arts afterwards out of a desire to protect. Since her dad had a debilitating knee injury for decades ago, it would be up to her to defend her family. It took quite some convincing, but Kohana was allowed to join the ninja academy once she was of age.
 
PostPosted: Thu Apr 13, 2017 8:58 pm
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"The Half-Blood Prince"


kiwis poet


Good job! Approved - Hope you have fun!
 


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