I think Lily was just explaining the purpose. The attribute just means she only needs one hand to cast medical techniques and has no other real effects. But if for whatever reason one hand is unusable, she can still use jutsu. And I guess from a roleplay perspective, it could be considered 'faster'. It just doesn't affect any sort of stats.
Paris_Decay
We're well beyond the Iron Age in this guild, so starting with a steel weapon is fine. Other than being a harder metal, it doesn't actually give any difference in strength here, unlike most games. Most weapons bought in the guild are made of steel rather than iron anyway.
That aside, your PAs are denied. I'll start with the first one.
The Way of the Blade: Without a +1 to another category of techniques (something that you actually have slots for), you cannot have a -2 to learning any techniques. So you'll have to choose either -1 to Bukijutsu or -2/+1 to something else.
Free Custom Armor Slot: Please reword to explain that you are starting with the armor. You'll also need to provide information on said armor in your inventory, such as weight and perhaps a description or picture. Because you are sacrificing a PA for it, you may start with both the armor and your weapon
Jovian's Shell: This is fine.
Strength and Defense Increase: You may have a 'slight' increase to both, but you may not have a descriptive rank per body rank. The most you can get out of any PA is 'mild', which is the equivalent of two 'slight' increases.
Please quote me or Lanfaer when you're done editing.
Posted: Wed Dec 28, 2016 5:40 pm
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|ρ є r ѕ σ η α ℓ • ∂ α т α|├▬ Full Name: Misaki Uchiha Nickname: Missy
Age: 18 Birthdate: February 14th Gender: Female
Height: 5'4" Weight: 125lbs
Nindo: "Never tell the same lie twice." Personality: Misaki is playful and friendly to people she likes. She is very much capable of being serious and focused when she needs to be. This playfulness expresses itself in a number of ways, chief of these being her habit of pretending to be things she isn't. Whether it be a cat, a traveling merchant or even a member of Konoha's Uchiha clan. This has made her very experienced at acting and bluffing her way through situations that most other people would have issues with. Also as a result, she is a skilled poker player. Beyond this, she is also a very intelligent person in general. Having a background and interest in medicine. If she could, she would spend most of her time researching and tinkering to find new ways to do things.
Village: Gimangakure Title: Bandit Rank: D First Class: Medical Second Class: Worker
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|c σ м в α т • ∂ α т α|├▬ Bloodline: Aburame
Chakra Pool: 275 Stamina Pool: 125 Chakra Element: Doton, Raiton Chakra Color: Red Chakra Materialization: Whispy like aura
Class Disciplines : • Balanced Master: This discipline mimics one of the user's other class's non-chosen disciplines. (i.e. non-Worker Class) The Double Specialization perk for said class is not available for gaining. In addition, any jutsu learned can be paid for with either chakra, stamina, or a mix of the two. Any further chakra types are also subject to this. Recovery amounts for chakra and stamina are doubled while working, and working counts as relaxing. Worker: • Surrogate class: Efficiency Expert: For every rank the user increases, they can choose 1 medical technique and perform it at half the cost, to a minimum of 5 chakra. Gennin can only choose techniques D rank and lower, Chuunin C rank and lower, Jounin B rank and lower, and Konin is A rank and lower. You may only at one time, only have 1 half cost technique per rank. To clarify, you may only have 1 D, 1 C, 1 B, 1 A. Can retrain into a different (or the same) jutsu if desired. • Specialist: The user, choosing to specialize in either healing or harmful medical techniques, gains a great boost to their chakra control in that area. At Chunnin, they gain a -5 chakra reduction to perform techniques in their specialty. at Jounin, -10, at Konin -15 at Sannin -20. To clarify, they they gain a -5 chakra reduction every rank, to a maximum of -20 at sannin. All medical jutsu are still learnable by both sides, but the chakra control only applies to the chosen side. Reductions: • Learn Medical techniques one (1) post faster. • Personal Attributes: • Takes slightly less physical damage from attacks. • The chakra cost of healing medical jutsu is reduced by 1 rank.
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|c α r є є r • ∂ α т α|├▬ Ryo: 0 AC: 0
Missions Complete: D Rank :: 0 C Rank :: 0 B Rank :: 0 A Rank :: 0 S Rank :: 0
Crafting Jobs Complete: D Rank :: 0 C Rank :: 0 B Rank :: 0 A Rank :: 0 S Rank :: 0
Limitations: {How many of each technique you can learn. Refer to class info} • Ninjutsu : : 00 / 06 • Genjutsu : : 00 / 06 • Eiseijutsu : : 00 / 010 • Taijutsu Styles: : 00 / 00 • Bukijutsu Styles: : 00 / 00
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|ω є α ρ σ η • ∂ α т α|├▬ Weapon Type: N/A Weapon Range: N/A Weapon Weight: N/A Weapon Location: N/A • N/A
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|ι η ν є η т σ r у|├▬ • 5 Kunai, 10 Shuriken •
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|т є c н η ι q υ є ѕ|├▬ ▬▬┤|N i n j u t s u Maruton: • Henge no Jutsu [ Transformation Technique ] • Kawarimi no Jutsu [ Substitution Technique ] • Bushin no Jutsu [ Clone Technique ] • Suimen Hokou no Waza [ Act of Water Surface Walking ] • Kinobori no Waza [ Act of Tree Climbing ] • Kai [ Release ]
{Your first element's name} Doton •
{Your second element's name} Raiton •
{Other jutsu type's name} Eiseijutsu • ▬▬┤|G e n j u t s u • ▬▬┤|T a i j u t s u {Style name here} • ▬▬┤|B u k i j u t s u {Style name here} •
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|н ι ѕ т σ r у|├▬ Misaki is a young woman from the village of Giman. She was born into the Uchiha family. No, not that Uchiha family. Another family who merely happened to have the same name. It had to happen eventually, right? She had originally been studying at the hospital there but was eventually kicked out. This was due to her requesting that she be advanced a year ahead in her studies, as she found the work she was being given too easy. They refused, and the lack of a challenge caused her to quickly become bored and fall behind with her work. Effectively homeless and with nowhere to go, she ended up turning to a life of less reputable work in order to sustain herself. It is after all rather impressive how quickly a person can learn to do something well when their life depends upon it. She became what most people would call a con artist. Learning the skills needed to pretend to be whatever would be most advantageous to her at the time to survive. Whether that be a beggar, a traveling merchant, or even in some of the more impressive cases, a member of a more prestigious clan. She has spent her life since living in the village, building contacts and making friends. All the while being very, very careful not to make any enemies.
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▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|ρ є r ѕ σ η α ℓ • ∂ α т α|├▬ Full Name: Jovian [[ Self Given ]] Nickname:
Age: Fourteen Birthdate: Summer // June 13th Gender: Female
Height: Five Feet // Five Inches Weight: One-Twenty Five
Nindo:
Personal: " I can live without heart, without love ... But I do need a name "
Favorite Prayer: " Blessed are they who stand before The corrupt and the wicked and do not falter. Blessed are the peacekeepers, the champions of the just.
Personality:
Though Jovian had to raise herself as a girl homeless in the ninja world, she is devout to her Goddess Avarice "Queen of the True Blade". She believes that her belief will make her a better shinobi, she is resolute in becoming her own woman and achieving her own dream... a name.
Besides having a great sense of Right, Wrong and defending those who cannot defend themselves; she is a warm and kind girl... if you can get past the silence. Shes never had people surround her before, she has had to live her life working for food and shelter.
Village: Konohagakure (( Village Hidden in the Leaves )) Title: Genin Rank: D - Ranked Shinobi First Class: Bukijutsu Second Class: Taijutsu
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|c σ м в α т • ∂ α т α|├▬ Bloodline: Power: +2 PA, +25 chakra/stamina a rank
Chakra Pool: 225 Stamina Pool: 325 Chakra Element: Fuuton - Wind Style Chakra Color: Faint Gold Chakra Materialization: Glittering Gold that seems to raise from the area that is channeling chakra
Strengths: • Bukijutsu • Close to Mid Ranged Combat Weaknesses: • Long Ranged Combat • Elemental Weakness Fears: • Overwhelming Fire • Ocular Genjutsu
Class Disciplines : • Mystic Hero: The user is much like a hybrid warrior, focusing on mixing ninjutsu into their personal arsenal. Through their great devotion to this path the user can cast ninjutsu without hand seals while wielding a weapon, D at gennin, C at chunnin, B at Jounin, A at Konin, and S at Sannin. These techniques maintain the same description and criteria to use, as well as require the same amount of time to mold the chakra through the weapon as would be needed to perform hand seals, meaning the techniques are not instantaneously cast. The user’s spirit is so strong, that they can utilize their physical bukijutsu techniques to negate ninjutsu techniques of the same rank or below. • Brawler: Your taijutsu is just one side of your skill, as you are also versed in utilizing ninjutsu as well. Your taijutsu body greatly increases your flexibility and reflexes, while at the same time granting you an additional 2 ninjutsu techniques per level, then an extra 4 ninjutsu per rank after jounin. Reductions: • Learns Bukijtusu [ 2 ] post faster (( Total )) • Learns Taijutsu [ 2 ] post faster (( Total )) • Learns Ninjutsu [ 1 ] post faster (( P.A Santa )) Personal Attributes: • The Way of the Blade - Due to Jovians determination to be a better shinobi and swordswoman, she has dedicated herself to being the best swordswoman she could be - Learns Bukijutsu [ 1 ] post faster • [ 1 ] Free Custom Armor Slot • Jovians Shell: Jovian has tirelessly pampered her armor, she is in it everyday and making sure that it fits flawlessly. Her knowledge of how armor fits to her body is quite remarkable. - Jovian suffers no mobility or speed reductions while in her armor • Physical Strength and Defense is increased slightly • 10 free training/missions posts (( Santa )) • 1 extra Locked Formless Style (( Santa )) • Santa's Knowledge #3: -1 post in Learning Taijutsu
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|c α r є є r • ∂ α т α|├▬ Ryo: 両 AC:
Missions Complete: D Rank :: 0 C Rank :: 0 B Rank :: 0 A Rank :: 0 S Rank :: 0
Crafting Jobs Complete: D Rank :: 0 C Rank :: 0 B Rank :: 0 A Rank :: 0 S Rank :: 0
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|ω є α ρ σ η • ∂ α т α|├▬ Weapon Type:Roman Legion Iron Gladius Weapon Range: 2.5 feet Weapon Weight: 2.2 pounds Weapon Location: Strapped to her hip and never leaves her side • This Symbol is engraved into the side of her blade: xx
Armor Type: Medium Armor Materials: Distressed Leather & Steel - Top - boots - Full look
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|ι η ν є η т σ r у|├▬ • 10 kunai
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|т є c н η ι q υ є ѕ|├▬ ▬▬┤|N i n j u t s u Maruton: {Start with the following six only} • Henge no Jutsu [ Transformation Technique ] • Kawarimi no Jutsu [ Substitution Technique ] • Bushin no Jutsu [ Clone Technique ] • Suimen Hokou no Waza [ Act of Water Surface Walking ] • Kinobori no Waza [ Act of Tree Climbing ] • Kai [ Release ]
Fuuton no jutsu! - Wind Style Ninjutsu •
▬▬┤|T a i j u t s u Nigirikobushi no Shintou • ▬▬┤|B u k i j u t s u - Kasai - • ▬▬┤|F o r m l e s s S t y l e
Jovians start in life was a rough one, she was abandoned by her birth parents in the middle of the Fire Country. Afraid and scared, she started to wonder looking for a sign of life and comfort. She stumbled across a caravan of traveling merchants from across the Ocean. They saw the dehydrated and starving child and took her in as one of their own. One her sixth birthday, she was given a tattered book detailing someone named " Avarice ". This woman was a powerful swordswoman, Jovian sought inspiration in these writings. She read the tattered book page for page... she took in every word and promised to live through its teachings.
As she grew older, the caravan knew that she was craving something else... her heart started to wonder. She was always scanning the horizon and testing her own abilities... as weak as she was she knew her own strength. As a group, the caravan decided to make a stop in Konohagakure.
" We are not leaving you Jovie... we all know that you deserve and want better " they told her as they said their farewells. She knew that she would have to show them that she was going to become the woman in the book. She enrolled herself into the academy where she flourished.
• Fun Facts: - Jovian is a practitioner of " The Way of the True Blade " a religion that is based in the thought that the sword is an extension of the soul. It's major deity is a woman named "Avarice" whom was seen as a sovereign protector of Women and Children. - She believes in formalities and respect but... can cut loose just like everyone else.
Royal Burrito
I made the edits:
I provided a small description on what the armor was made of and provided links to the appearance.
The PA was corrected? I made sure that I went over the Classes and the PAs so I can get the calculations were correct.
I also changed the increase to strength and defense
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|ρ є r ѕ σ η α ℓ • ∂ α т α|├▬ Full Name: Yin Asada Nickname: The Huntress of Konoha
Age: Fifteen Birthdate: September 23rd Gender: Female
Height: 5'0" Weight: 90lbs
Nindo: "There are very few prey as cunning as the Shinobi." Personality: Yin is very silent and calculating person. She is very introverted and is almost never seen talking to anyone for long period of time. The closes she has to a friend is her falcon, Fenris who accompanies her anywhere she goes. Also due to her slight paranoia, Yin doesn't let to many people actually get close to her and will often try to do things on her own, even if advised to seek help.
Village: Konohagakure Title: Genin Rank: D-Rank Shinobi First Class: Tamer Second Class: Bukijutsu
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|c σ м в α т • ∂ α т α|├▬ Bloodline: Shounin no Gouzoku
Chakra Pool: 225 Stamina Pool: 250 Chakra Element: Fuuton, Raiton Chakra Color:Dark Magenta Chakra Materialization:
Strengths: • Skilled Tactician • Excellent tracker • Long Ranged Combat Weaknesses: • Genjutsu • Armed close range combat • Isn't much of a team player Fears: • Losing her partner, Fenris • Losing her ability to draw her bow
Reductions: • Learn Bukijutsu techniques one [1] post faster • • Class Disciplines: • Eternal Partners: The user is able to nurture, grow, and bond with a single animal, almost becoming an animal themselves with traits, characteristics, and natural weaponry. This single animal will be exactly the same at the user's level in chakra and stamina pool, and able to manipulate any two elements, perform 3 activations a post (max of 2 offensive), and gaining +8 jutsu slots a rank.. For every rank the user increases, they can claim a trait associated with their chosen animal (communicate with species, natural weaponry, senses, ect) to be approved in the custom jutsu thread, and add it to their character. • Mystic Hero: The user is much like a hybrid warrior, focusing on mixing ninjutsu into their personal arsenal. Through their great devotion to this path the user can cast ninjutsu without hand seals while wielding a weapon, D at gennin, C at chunnin, B at Jounin, A at Konin, and S at Sannin. These techniques maintain the same description and criteria to use, as well as require the same amount of time to mold the chakra through the weapon as would be needed to perform hand seals, meaning the techniques are not instantaneously cast. The user’s spirit is so strong, that they can utilize their physical bukijutsu techniques to negate ninjutsu techniques of the same rank or below. Personal Attributes: • Jinton Attribute - Genin: Slightly increased movements • Hunter's Cloak: As a hunter Yin has learned how to hide herself from her prey. She has the ability to completely suppress her chakra, making her undetectable by sensory techniques. But it has a drawback, while her chakra is suppressed she cannot preform any chakra consuming jutsu. Bloodline Attributes: • Merchants are gifted at complex writings, & are thusly able to learn applicable Fuuinjutsu at genin rank • Tamer Attributes: • • ▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|c α r є є r • ∂ α т α|├▬ Ryo: 両500 AC: 00
Missions Complete: D Rank :: 0 C Rank :: 0 B Rank :: 0 A Rank :: 0 S Rank :: 0
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|ω є α ρ σ η • ∂ α т α|├▬ Weapon Type: Collapsible bow Weapon Range: Varies Weapon Weight: 10lbs Weapon Location: Stored on upper portion of her gauntlet. Weapon properties: The bow is collapsible and sturdy, allowing the user to carry it vertically anywhere. Also do the material both the bow and the gauntlet can be used as a conductor, charging anything it comes in contact with from bolts to people.
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|ι η ν є η т σ r у|├▬ ▬▬┤|W є α ρ σ η r y • Arrow x 30 • • • ▬▬┤|C ℓ σ т h ι η g • • • • ▬▬┤|м ι s c є ℓ ℓ α η є σ υ s • Steel Wire • • • •
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|P e t s|├▬ Pet name: Fenris Pet Gender: Male Pet Species: Albino Falco peregrinus Pet Age: 2 years Pet Weight: 1.5lbs Pet Height: 16in Pet Element: Katon, Doton Techniques: • • •
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|т є c н η ι q υ є ѕ|├▬ ▬▬┤|N i n j u t s u Maruton: • Henge no Jutsu [ Transformation Technique ] • Kawarimi no Jutsu [ Substitution Technique ] • Bushin no Jutsu [ Clone Technique ] • Suimen Hokou no Waza [ Act of Water Surface Walking ] • Kinobori no Waza [ Act of Tree Climbing ] • Kai [ Release ] •
Fuuton • • •
Raiton • • •
▬▬┤|Shounin no Gouzoku Technique: • • • • • • • ▬▬┤|T a i j u t s u Kyuuten no Kumori • • • • • ▬▬┤|B u k i j u t s u Kyoukan Ya • • • Uwame • • •
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|н ι ѕ т σ r у|├▬ ⇥ Born into a clan known of well known Merchants, Yin was thought to be somewhat of a regular child. Her parents were very sparatic and would constantly move from area to area selling goods such as animal pelts, various herbs and anything else that could earn them a decent amount of Ryo. Because of this nomadic behavior, Yin wasn't granted the same privileges, such as friendship or even having a permanent home. But being on the move constantly did give one advantage over a few others, because of what her parents sold, they would often wander into the wilderness that many wouldn't dare in order to do one thing; hunt.
The last time Christmas/New Years came around, I just submitted my PA for approval here. I'm going to do the same this year. Even the PA is identical to one I already have, but I just wanted to make sure it was something I could use repeatedly.
The following PA is for Kagerou Uchiha. It was gained from the Santa List event. Mind and Body II - A sound soul resides in a sound mind and a sound body. To ensure the health of all three, Kagerou must master every aspect of medicine. Kagerou gains an additional medical field type. The additional type needs to be trained separately from the first.
I also had a question related to this PA that I hope no one minds me asking in the profile thread. How do I calculate job post reductions from titles when I have multiple specializations? Do they all stack for any medical job I do or does a title's post reductions only apply when I'm performing a medical job towards the advancement of that title's specialization?
Posted: Tue Jan 03, 2017 3:16 pm
Yukiko Masaki
→Tamer Class || → Jutsu Slots ► I wanted to make you aware that the slots for Tamers has changed. We haven't quite yet put it up, as it's coming out with a "guild patch" in the works. I am requesting the numbers currently from the mod who keeps records, and will give them to you when I can. Thank you. →Personal Attributes || → Jinton Attribute ► The First List, which you've chosen, is actually a free attribute you already get. The two lists written after would take up slots. As such, you actually have one more Personal Attribute to use! You need to list "Jinton Attribute" under "Bloodline Attributes", as you have Merchants written. →Starting Amount || → Ryo ► Unless I missed something, all characters start with no Ryo. →Pet || → Jutsu Slots ► Just also noticed you never put in the amount given to your pet. →Starting Equipment || → Weapon Data ► All weapons, when starting out, must be simple. It cannot collapsible, and it cannot conduct electricity. It can only be a simple bow. These bows can me modified, or constructed, later on but cannot be automatically had at the start without giving up a P.A. for it.
HeadlessKoko
→All of It || → [Approved] ► As for your question, I'll go ahead and say that the reductions you earn will go towards both Specializations. Just a matter of you mastered one, it makes it easier to learn the other.
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|ρ є r ѕ σ η α ℓ • ∂ α т α|├▬ Full Name: Chosokabe Shiro (family name, given name) Nickname: None. Age: 22 Birthdate: 01JULXXXX Gender: Male
Height: 6'1" Weight: 190lbs
Nindo: "Those with the power to protect others, have the responsibility to protect them." "I will never leave a fallen comrade to fall into the hands of the enemy." "There is a very fine line between a soldier/shinobi and a murderer. Take care to remember which one you are."
Personality: Shiro has a loose, devil-may-care attitude. He can be serious when the situation calls for it, but still maintains an overall laid-back demeanor during tense situations, and is never without a witty taunt or comeback. Although seemingly shown at times to be uncaring or callous, Shiro maintains a very strong sense of justice like his sensei, and prefers to fight fairly, never fighting people without chakra. He also prefers not to fight opponents weaker than him. He can be counted on to do the right thing, even if he makes humorously cynical quips about it the entire time.
Unusually, while he has displayed discomfort with his own faults and vices, only coming to accept it quite recently, Shiro has little qualms about accepting them in those that that choose the path of "honor"and admires their desire to be better. Though he is quite familiar with just how unspeakable people can be and is quoted as believing that "Humans are often worse than demons or nightmares" Despite this he refuses to kill a defenseless person or someone without chakra for any reason, believing it would make him no better than a murderer. In addition,Shiro values family and friends very highly. He cares deeply for his comrades, despite any moral differences and conflicting ideals they may have.
Shiro also enjoys fighting, as such he restrains himself from using his full potential. Though he often gets bored with fighting weak opponents and only finds entertainment in fighting strong opponents who will give him a challenge. Despite Shiro's handsome appearance, he often has terrible luck with women, a condition he ironically reflects upon every time he gets shot down.
Village: Kumogakure Title: Gennin Rank: C-Rank First Class: Medical Second Class: Medical
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|c σ м в α т • ∂ α т α|├▬ Bloodline: None Package: Power: +2 PA, +25 chakra/stamina a rank}
Chakra Pool: 520 Stamina Pool: 200 Chakra Element: Katon, Doton Chakra Materialization: When Shiro's chakra activates his eyes glow bright blue and a visible aura of orange chakra forms on his skin. During higher ranking jutsu his chakra gives off an incredibly warm soothing aura. The air is also filled with the smell of oranges. The closer and stronger the chakra, the stronger the scent. (cannot be used for jutsu purely aesthetic.)
Strengths: • Relentless: Shiro has an unending resolve and will never give up on a task once he has set his mind to it. In some cases this is a good thing as it can push him forward. • Archery: Being literally raised in a Kyujutsu dojo from birth does have its advantages.
Weaknesses: • Relentless Pt2: While it can be a good thing it can also be a bad thing. Hes somewhat predictable when it comes to chasing an enemy. Once he sets his mind to killing an enemy he will do it regardless of how far he has to go to do it. • Multifaceted: Due to the multifaceted nature of his personality it can take him some time to make major decisions as he has to wade through the facade and the truth of his personality.
Fears: • Expensive Self Failures: Shiro doesnt mind failure from others, while he doesn't like it from himself he can accept it at times. However the one thing that he cannot accept from himself is when he makes a mistake that costs lives. • Treason and Cowardice: Shiro holds himself to a pretty high moral standard. As such the very idea of being called a traitor, or a coward, terrifies him. So much so that he can sometimes lean towards fanatic loyalty and almost reckless bravery.
Class Disciplines : Specialist: (Healing ) The user, choosing to specialize in either healing or harmful medical techniques, gains a great boost to their chakra control in that area. At Chunnin, they gain a -5 chakra reduction to perform techniques in their specialty. at Jounin, -10, at Konin -15 at Sannin -20. To clarify, they they gain a -5 chakra reduction every rank, to a maximum of -20 at sannin. All medical jutsu are still learnable by both sides, but the chakra control only applies to the chosen side.
Medical license: The user is much more adept at utilizing items during combat. The user gains 2 free custom items, one at Chunnin and one at jounin. These items must be associated with and utilize, medical abilities. Additionally, they gain a -5 chakra cost to all medical techniques, and gain an extra 2 medical techniques per shinobi title beyond Academy.
• If this class is chosen as the first class and second class then they may choose 2 disciplines from this class. Additional medical technique slots can be converted from ninjutsu/genjutsu slots, 1 for 1. For 10 slots converted, they may learn [1] taijutsu or bukijutsu slot.
Reductions: • Learn Medical techniques four (4) post(s) faster.
Personal Attributes: • Combat Medic: Shiro gains an additional Taijutsu slot.
• Papa Bear: When a patient in danger, all stats receive moderate increase till that patient is out of danger per patient. May designate up to 2 patients at any one time.
•Prayer Made Manifest: Shiro is a faith healer, one who follows the will of their god as an instrument of their work upon the world. One of the greatest blessing this faith brings is the ability to perform acts of healing through prayer and religious ritual, with stronger healings requiring full rituals to accomplish. Due to the nature of these healings, every post made in prayer to perform an Eisejutsu counts towards the completion of a Religious Job, to a maximum of one above Shiro's Body Rank. Prayers can only be used to cast Support and Healing techniques, and cannot be used to harm another living creature
• Musculoskeletal Mastery: By using his in depth knowledge of how the human body moves and functions shiro can apply his medical learning reductions to taijutsu. However all bukijutsu and genjutsu require one half of the reduction applied to taijutsu in extra posts to learn. • Santa's Library #3: 1 Buki-style •
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|c α r є є r • ∂ α т α|├▬ Ryo: 両001600 AC: 0002650
Missions Complete: E Rank :: 0 D Rank :: 12 C Rank :: 0 B Rank :: 0 A Rank :: 0 S Rank :: 0
Crafting Jobs Complete: E Rank :: 0 D Rank :: 0 C Rank :: 0 B Rank :: 0 A Rank :: 0 S Rank :: 0
Jobs Complete: E Rank :: 2 D Rank :: 2 C Rank :: 0 B Rank :: 0 A Rank :: 0 S Rank :: 0
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|ω є α ρ σ η • ∂ α т α|├▬ Weapon Type:Steel Recurve Bow. Maximum Range: 320 Yds Maximum Effective Range: 120 Yds Weapon Weight: 2.4 Lbs Weapon Location: Clipped to the quiver which is strapped over his right shoulder. Draw Weight: 80 Lbs • Slight x2 increase to bow related attacks. (uwame draw weight system)
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|ι η ν є η т σ r у|├▬ • 2 Kunai • 9 Harpoon Tip Arrows • 9 Bullet Tip Arrows • 1 Leather Quiver • 1 free title (not a title tree, is untrained) (event reward) • 1 Variable Marble (500 ryo or less) (event reward) • 1 Library Expansion Atlas (5 techniques) (event reward) • 3 Explosive Tags (Christmas day one) • 10 Yards of Steel Wire (Christmas day two) • 1 Stamina Coupon (recover stamina 2x faster even in combat for 5 posts) (Christmas thingy)
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|т є c н η ι q υ є ѕ|├▬ ▬▬┤|N i n j u t s u Maruton: • Henge no Jutsu [ Transformation Technique ] • Kawarimi no Jutsu [ Substitution Technique ] • Bushin no Jutsu [ Clone Technique ] • Suimen Hokou no Waza [ Act of Water Surface Walking ] • Kinobori no Waza [ Act of Tree Climbing ] • Kai [ Release ] •
Katon • • • • • • • • • • •
Doton • • •
▬▬┤|G e n j u t s u • • • • • • •
▬▬┤|T a i j u t s u Kyuuten no Kumori Stage One: • Wall Scaling Technique Rank: X :: Simple [x] • Fall Breaker Rank: X :: Simple [x]
▬▬┤|B u k i j u t s u Uwame Stage One: • Stance of Drawing Rank: E :: Simple [x] • Full Draw Rank: X :: Complex [x] • Tracer Rank: E :: Spiritual [x]
Stage Two: • Quick Knock Rank: D :: Complex [x] • Hawk's Eye Rank: D :: Spiritual [x] • Arrow Creation Rank: X :: Spiritual [x]
Stage Three: • • • • •
Stage Four: • • • • •
▬▬┤|F o r m l e s s S t y l e Formless Slots: 04 /04 Locked Style: Projectile Weapon: Recurve Bow • {D-rank} - Gained At D-Rank • {C-rank} - Gained At C-Rank • {B-rank} - Preleveled • {A-rank} + Preleveled • {S-rank} + {Training Link} • {S+rank} + {Training Link}
Shiro grew up in the very small, but prosperous, village of Shion within the northern territories of the land of Frost. Specifically his village sat nearly on the northern border to the land of lightning and the village of Kumogakure within it. While the village of Shion wasnt known for much it was known for the utterly exceptional archers that the Kyujutsu dojo there created. It was here that Shiro spent the vast majority of his life. Being orphaned just months after his birth and taken in by the instructors and students who literally became his new family.
Despite being raised in a strictly militant environment he did not have a hard life growing up. In fact, he actually had quite a good life. He wanted for nothing but never hungered for anything out of the ordinary. He would wake up for prayers first thing, eat, then train most of the day and spend the rest of his day in meditation. This cycle while boring at times, was contenting for him and he was quite happy.
Though like all things, his happiness would soon come to an end. Due to the Land of Frosts location, and its nature as a minor village situated directly between two major villages. When the UHV began occupying villages to the east of the land of sound his land was the second to fall. Though it was for the most part a peaceful occupation, he was nevertheless tasked with providing an escort for the villagers in Shion to keep them safe on their journey to the land of Lightning and the safety of Kumogakure within it.
Being a man of duty he accepted the orders of his adopted father but with great hesitation knowing that those who had become his family had every intention of apposing the UHV by force. Though he still, to this day does not know exactly what happened to them. Having fulfilled his task to escort the Shion refugees to Kumogakure, he decided to stay in the village and do what he could. Despite being an official citizen of Kumogakure, he has nevertheless decided to enlist in its defense by appealing to the Raikage to join his forces
Though time can only tell if he will be able to leave the past behind him or not.
Thank you for the help, Lanfaer. I made the changes you mentioned; I also applied the gifts recieved from the Santa List event, if they need to be removed for now I will take them off.
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|ρ є r ѕ σ η α ℓ • ∂ α т α|├▬ Full Name: Yin Asada Nickname: The Huntress of Konoha
Age: Fifteen Birthdate: September 23rd Gender: Female
Height: 5'0" Weight: 90lbs
Nindo: "There are very few prey as cunning as the Shinobi." Personality: Yin is very silent and calculating person. She is very introverted and is almost never seen talking to anyone for long period of time. The closes she has to a friend is her falcon, Fenris who accompanies her anywhere she goes. Also due to her slight paranoia, Yin doesn't let to many people actually get close to her and will often try to do things on her own, even if advised to seek help.
Village: Konohagakure Title: Genin Rank: D-Rank Shinobi First Class: Tamer Second Class: Bukijutsu
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|c σ м в α т • ∂ α т α|├▬ Bloodline: Shounin no Gouzoku
Chakra Pool: 300 Stamina Pool: 300 Chakra Element: Fuuton, Raiton Chakra Color:Dark Magenta Chakra Materialization:
Strengths: • Skilled Tactician • Excellent tracker • Long Ranged Combat Weaknesses: • Genjutsu • Armed close range combat • Isn't much of a team player Fears: • Losing her partner, Fenris • Losing her ability to draw her bow Reductions: • Learn Bukijutsu techniques one [1] post faster • Learn taijutsu one [1] post faster • Class Disciplines: • Eternal Partners: The user is able to nurture, grow, and bond with a single animal, almost becoming an animal themselves with traits, characteristics, and natural weaponry. This single animal will be exactly the same at the user's level in chakra and stamina pool, and able to manipulate any two elements, perform 3 activations a post (max of 2 offensive), and gaining +8 jutsu slots a rank.. For every rank the user increases, they can claim a trait associated with their chosen animal (communicate with species, natural weaponry, senses, ect) to be approved in the custom jutsu thread, and add it to their character. • Mystic Hero: The user is much like a hybrid warrior, focusing on mixing ninjutsu into their personal arsenal. Through their great devotion to this path the user can cast ninjutsu without hand seals while wielding a weapon, D at gennin, C at chunnin, B at Jounin, A at Konin, and S at Sannin. These techniques maintain the same description and criteria to use, as well as require the same amount of time to mold the chakra through the weapon as would be needed to perform hand seals, meaning the techniques are not instantaneously cast. The user’s spirit is so strong, that they can utilize their physical bukijutsu techniques to negate ninjutsu techniques of the same rank or below. Personal Attributes: • Uncanny Reflex: Throughout her years Yin has been honing her reflexes to near a heightened level. As such her perception of the world around her is much faster. This gives her a faster response times to enemies of any species ( Human included ) as well as sudden an adept understanding of body language which is universal to all species. • Hunter's Cloak: As a hunter Yin has learned how to hide herself from her prey. She has the ability to completely suppress her chakra, making her undetectable by sensory techniques. But it has a drawback, while her chakra is suppressed she cannot preform any chakra consuming jutsu. • The Hunter's Instinct: Can always find 1 type of Monster or Creature's general direction from your location. ( The Obsidian Hydra ) Bloodline Attributes: • Merchants are gifted at complex writings, & are thusly able to learn applicable Fuuinjutsu at genin rank • Slightly increased movements Tamer Attributes: • •
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|c α r є є r • ∂ α т α|├▬ Ryo: 両00 AC: 00
Missions Complete: D Rank :: 0 C Rank :: 0 B Rank :: 0 A Rank :: 0 S Rank :: 0
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|ω є α ρ σ η • ∂ α т α|├▬ Weapon Type: Compound Bow Weapon Range: Varies Weapon Weight: 10lbs Weapon Location: Clipped to quiver Weapon properties: None
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|ι η ν є η т σ r у|├▬ ▬▬┤|W є α ρ σ η r y • Arrow x 30 • • • ▬▬┤|C ℓ σ т h ι η g • • • • ▬▬┤|м ι s c є ℓ ℓ α η є σ υ s • Steel Wire • • • •
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|P e t s|├▬ Pet name: Fenris Pet Gender: Male Pet Species: Albino Falco peregrinus Pet Age: 2 years Pet Weight: 1.5lbs Pet Height: 16in Pet Element: Katon, Doton Limitations: • Ninjutsu : : 00 / 06 ▬▬┤|N i n j u t s u Technique: • • • • • • ▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|т є c н η ι q υ є ѕ|├▬ ▬▬┤|N i n j u t s u Maruton: • Henge no Jutsu [ Transformation Technique ] • Kawarimi no Jutsu [ Substitution Technique ] • Bushin no Jutsu [ Clone Technique ] • Suimen Hokou no Waza [ Act of Water Surface Walking ] • Kinobori no Waza [ Act of Tree Climbing ] • Kai [ Release ] •
Fuuton • • •
Raiton • • •
▬▬┤|Shounin no Gouzoku Technique: • • • • • • • ▬▬┤|T a i j u t s u Kyuuten no Kumori • • • • • ▬▬┤|B u k i j u t s u Kyoukan Ya • • •
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|н ι ѕ т σ r у|├▬ ⇥ Born into a clan known of well known Merchants, Yin was thought to be somewhat of a regular child. Her parents were very sparatic and would constantly move from area to area selling goods such as animal pelts, various herbs and anything else that could earn them a decent amount of Ryo. Because of this nomadic behavior, Yin wasn't granted the same privileges, such as friendship or even having a permanent home. But being on the move constantly did give one advantage over a few others, because of what her parents sold, they would often wander into the wilderness that many wouldn't dare in order to do one thing; hunt. She was given an egg from her father's Eagle which she kept closely with her at all times even after. The egg hatched a year before she made the decided to enter the Shinobi Academy. The egg was of a very rare Albino Falco peregrinus; the two became inseparable.
Posted: Wed Jan 04, 2017 10:14 pm
Alright submitting my profile for its [1] refresh. Changed one of her personal abilities and altered her personality slightly.
Major Replacement:
Makin' it RAIN!: Due to being raised by a very business aggressive father, she learned the tools of the trade at a young age. As such she just naturally comes into money easier than most. Any 両Ryo that she earns, whether from a mission or from gambling, is increased by 25%. This applies to anyone in her squad she is with when the reward is handed out. If she herself is not present when the reward is being handed this will not applied. ↓
Strength of the Hive: Due to her body being able to adapt to even the most brutal of training methods, Noémi is able to utilize any style no matter the frame it requires.
Tai Focus changed from Monk to Berserker
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|ρ є r ѕ σ η α ℓ • ∂ α т α|├▬ Full Name: Noémi Clementine Lelièvre Nickname: Mimi or Nene, but she only allows her sister to call her them.
Nindo: "It is easier to lure in a fly with honey than vinegar." Personality: Noémi has always been a walking ball of sunshine, no matter how bad the day was going she could muster up some positivity. She pretty much had to if she wanted to survive the pressure her father always put on the twins. From the moment they could walk and talk they were expected to follow in his footsteps. It has led to her drastic difference in social temperance compared to her fellow Aburame clansmen. Where most are dark and broody confining themselves to being social pariah's with only their bugs to keep them company... she's instead is outgoing always ready to be the center of attention, with the added bonus of her bugs to keep her company if others refuse which is the best of both worlds in her mind. The ball of positivity that is herself always seems to have a smile plastered across her face, the only exception being during a fight. The smile, no matter its size, just tends to be infectious bringing up the mood of the room her mother always said it was a gift to always be able to cheer her twin up no matter how hard the day had been for her. Its probably the only reason she continues to hold onto that positivity like a life line, because it gives her a sense of normality in such a foreign world. Beyond all of her bubbly energy is the quick tongue she is so ready to unleash on any unsuspecting victims. She is a self proclaimed queen of puns, in her mind no one can dish them out like her. She doesn't know what it is about puns that appeals to her so much, or why she always seems to be able to fire them off without even thinking about it. You can usually tell if Noémi enjoys your company based on how often shes uses puns when communicating with you or how often shes just flat out sarcastic. This is the easiest way to tell if she either has no opinion of you or a low one, because she'll remain friendly to you no matter how low on her s**t list you are. She has a little internalized racism left in her system from being raised by her father, no matter who hard she works on changing herself the small seed of hate remains ever present. Keeping her from forming meaningful bonds with most Aburame. All of this gets thrown out the window during combat, as mentioned before. During combat she her cheery smile is replaced by a small frown. In her mind combat is an ends to a means, one of the two people in the fight are likely not making it out and to carry on that smile would be an insult to her opponent. For the same reason she ends fights as quickly as she can, the longer the fight the more likely Noémi could slip up and she still has things she needs to do on this mortal plane.
Village: Kirigakure Title: Genin Rank: D First Class: Taijutsu [ Berserker ] Second Class: Bloodline [ Blood Bender ]
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|c σ м в α т • ∂ α т α|├▬ Bloodline: Aburame, Walking Hive ◇ Members must establish bonds and breed new insects to counter weaknesses. ◇ Must not take opponents lightly, lest one dishonors their clan. ◇ It takes Chakra and available insects to do Clan Jutsu. ◇ The Aburame train their own to be observant and silent, leading to a somewhat 'antisocial' attitude. ◇ The Aburame typically have dark colored hair, always wear shades and generally clothing that hides their true appearance. ◇ Aburame techniques that mention chakra draining/absorption restore 1/2 of the potentially destroyed insects used for the technique, upon success. Also upon success, 1/2 of the chakra from a defeated technique is absorbed back into the regenerated insects. ◇ Kikaichu have an average life expectancy of 3-4 hours. Thus hoarding them all in a gourd and keeping them there overnight will not prove beneficial. This rapid death and birth rate is justifiably what gives the Kikaichu the potential to evolve at a rapidly increased pace.
Chakra Pool: 205 Stamina Pool: 395 Chakra Element: Doton & Suiton Chakra Color: Honey Yellow Chakra Materialization: Erratically shifting between a normal outline to wings and antennae, each shift the shape turns to a blob before reforming. Occasionally it will look like she has additional arms for a few seconds before it shape changes again.
Strengths: ◇ Omni-Range, despite her small frame she is more than fit when in comes to close quarters combat and with the hive present inside her body they help control the flow of battle from any range onward. ◇ Perceptive, able to notice even minute changes in someones expressions or a shift in the tone of their voice. ◇ Multi-Lingual, being raised by a business mogul had some perks. From an early age she was taught both her native tongue and the language commonly used in the shinobi nations. She isn't restricted to vocal languages however; she got her mother to teacher sign language so she could more easily speak with her mute twin, she had to be the voice for both of them when it came to family matters. Due to her pre-disposition she will have a much easier time learning addition langues. ◇ Being that her Kikaichu more closely resemble bees than any other insect breed, anyone with melissophobia [fear of bees] will typically be more on edge when fighting her. /straight stolen from Necro's Abarume 100% Weaknesses: ◇ The cold, while she herself is fine with the chill of lower temperatures her bugs struggle to maintain peak effectiveness. When fighting a Hyōton or Shinsetsu user all Kikaichu based techniques will take an additional 1/5th the bugs compared to what the costs call for. ◇ Fighting against people who use mirrors. While shes fine throwing a punch at herself, some part in the back of her brain links her reflection with her sister causing her attacks to be hesitant no matter how illogical she knows it is. When fighting a Hari clansmen or anyone else who uses reflective surfaces in an attack, her attacks will be treated as [1] rank lower for the first [2] reaction posts before she gets used to it. Even in her daily life she avoids looking at her reflection, anywhere she lives has a noticeable lack of mirrors. ◇ Fighting children, has some hesitation about beating the snot out of people under the age of 14. Fears: ◇ Astraphobia or fear of thunder. Just something she never grew out of from childhood. ◇ Loosing one of her senses, she knows how hard it was for her sister to deal with being mute... and her sister was the strong one, so she doesn't think she'd be able to handle losing one so well. ◇ Never finding her twin, despite the odds she wholeheartedly believes her sister still lives.
Class Disciplines : ◇ Berserker: Berserker: Your external training and devotion to taijutsu has allowed your attacks to have great strength, speed, and power behind them, making them overwhelm physical taijutsu techniques of the same rank or lower. Additionally, your hardened body allows you to defend against ninjutsu attacks 2 ranks lower than a physical taijutsu defensive technique, taking little to no damage from it, and defend against ninjutsu attacks 1 rank below a complex taijutsu defensive technique unharmed. ◇ Blood Bender: User receives an additional 3 custom bloodline techniques. To clarify, these are custom techniques that must involve and utilize the characters bloodline. +1 additional Locked Formless Style.[Does not count towards Locked Style limits] Reductions: ◇ Learn Taijutsu techniques a total [1] post faster. ◇ Learn Bloodline techniques a total [1] post faster.
Event Bonuses: Halloween 2k16 ◇ Chakra Refund Token [10/10 uses remaining] ◇ [10] Free training posts. [00/10 used]
Personal Attributes: ◇ Honey Bee: Her Kikaichu are able to cultivate from her stamina reserves to preform her bloodline techniques, but at the cost of taking an additional rank of Stamina. She prefers not to rely on it because of how quickly it drains her of energy. ◇ Strength of the Hive: Due to her body being able to adapt to even the most brutal of training methods, Noémi is able to utilize any style no matter the frame it requires.
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|c α r є є r • ∂ α т α|├▬ Ryo: 両 00,000 AC: 00,700
Missions Complete: D Rank :: 0 C Rank :: 0 B Rank :: 0 A Rank :: 0 S Rank :: 0
Crafting Jobs Complete: D Rank :: 0 C Rank :: 0 B Rank :: 0 A Rank :: 0 S Rank :: 0
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|ω є α ρ σ η • ∂ α т α|├▬ Weapon Type: Tantō Weapon Range: 1' 2" Weapon Weight: 5 lbs Weapon Location: Sheathed at the small of her back tied into the ribbon around her obi, just above her equipment pouch.
Summoning Type: N/A Summon Sage: N/A Pacts: None
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|ι η ν є η т σ r у|├▬ ◇ [2] Kunai ◇ [3] Shuriken ◇ [10] Senbon
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|т є c н η ι q υ є ѕ|├▬ ▬▬┤|N i n j u t s u Maruton: • Henge no Jutsu [ Transformation Technique ] • Kawarimi no Jutsu [ Substitution Technique ] • Bushin no Jutsu [ Clone Technique ] • Suimen Hokou no Waza [ Act of Water Surface Walking ] • Kinobori no Waza [ Act of Tree Climbing ] • Kai [ Release ]
Doton •
Suiton •
Bloodline • ▬▬┤|G e n j u t s u • ▬▬┤|T a i j u t s u {Style name here} • {Stage progression / techniques learned} ▬▬┤|B u k i j u t s u {Style name here} • {Stage progression / techniques learned}
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|н ι ѕ т σ r у|├▬ Under the stars of Scorpio, Noémi Clementine Lelièvre was brought into this world just a little bit before her twin Ciri Rose Lelièvre. Landing her the honorable title of technically older sister. She had inherited their mothers bloodline, the often feared Amarume Clan... whereas her sister inherited their fathers bloodline, Jiton of the powerful and influential Shounin no Gouzoku Clan. Even at a young age she could tell how hard it was for Ciri living in such a vocal family when she was robbed of her voice. Due to her sister being born mute Noémi stepped up to her technically older sister title and became the voice for both of them while they grew up if only to take some of the weight from Ciri's shoulders for a little bit. Being their family was rather strict with what they perceived to be 'proper' behavior from the girls she was often getting into trouble whenever she would correct someone for her sister. She was fine with it however, in her eyes she figured it was better to be scolded for a few minutes about her 'sass' than let someone assume they knew what her sister was trying to get across because usually it was in said persons best interest. Even then however her sister struggled to maintain the smile her father pressured them into keeping up, so to cope she made sure no matter how she was starting to feel she would remain positive with a bright smile on her face. She probably would have quit the positivity mindset early on as pressure kept adding and adding onto her shoulders but she noticed how easily her smile could infect her sisters face. So instead of allowing herself to crumble she remained strong, not for herself but for her precious sister. Her life, in a way, has been dedicated to Ciri's. She might have developed a little of a sister complex.
Despite their mothers protests she was made to be raised as if she was a Jiton user like her sister. From the moment she could walk and talk she was forced into the Shounin no Gouzoku lifestyle, one so drastically different from how her mother wanted the little Aburame to be raised. Rather than being taught to live life as a shadow: quiet and observant she was instead thrusted into the lifestyle of loud, proud, and cunning. While it might have bothered their mother, Noémi was ecstatic to learn she wasn't going to have to spend time apart from her little sister she was a little afraid of what might happen if she wasn't there to be their voice. It was when their mother saw how happy the older twin was that she stopped her protests. 'It wasn't like she was going to have to try and fit in with other Aburame latter in her life right?' Their father began his grooming of the twins when they were yet little tikes. He had big plans for the them, he was going to need someone to take his spot as head of the business at some point and he couldn't have some lesser clansmen wriggling into his throne. He was determined to have his blood remain on top. Even at the sacrifice of his children's childhoods. He didn't need to groom the both of them, after all only one of them would get his spot, but he decided to anyways in case something happened to one of his little pet projects that would make them less desirable as the face of the company. So he took them both out on any voyages he made from the homestead, made them partake in any meeting he held with his branch of the clan the Lelièvres. He needed his lesser to know he wasn't going to let their grubby hands get his spot if he had any say so, but it was an unwise thing to say aloud so he let his actions speak for him instead. His twin daughters struggling to keep up with the 'big' words they were using as they scribbled down anything important on their notepads. He'd take him on his overly extravagant ship when he needed to take trips away from their homeland. He made sure they where by his heels at all times but if they would stray to explore the behemoth of a vessel he wouldn't bother wasting the effort to keep an eye on them. However he always made time to berate them when they finally returned from whatever shenanigans they would get into.
At first Noémi found it hard to keep her positive attitude up when he would dig into them, but she would notice how her sister would look to her for an idea of what to do and it crushed her heart to see her twin so close to tears. She she swallowed her emotions into her tiny gut and forced that tiny smile onto her lips while she took the lecture. She needed to be brave. This delicate balance of playing fathers little angles would have continued on for the foreseeable feature but Noémi was born with a skin condition by the name of Vitiligo,a skin condition characterized by patches of the skin losing their pigment and becoming white, usually with sharp margins. It didn't start developing in her case until she was six, while they were in a business trip across seas. She didn't notice anything odd during her morning routine until Ciri pointed out a a couple white splotches across her face. She spent time investigating her face in the mirror, poking the skin that had lost its pigment testing to see if ti hurt or not. When there father had arrived to their room to get them before the meeting she could just see the disappointment spread across his face when he saw her skin. From that moment on he pressured her less and less as he trained them to take over, but on the flip side he saw how he piled more and more work onto Ciri's plate. It seemed his daughters skin condition made her the undesirable twin to take over. The first few months with her new condition were the hardest, whenever she was left alone her positive outlook would cracks as tears fell down her cheeks. After a little while she learned to ignore the stinging pain in her heart whenever someones expression would fault when they looked at her, or when her father would look at her in disgust.
When it came for the Lelièvre's big trip to the shinobi nations the twins were seven, a big deal among the clan with their fathers new get even richer plan in motion, and Noémi was being raised as the back up plan. Only to be put in a position of power in the event something happened to the golden goose Ciri. She felt no animosity for her little sister, only concern for all the pressure being put on her tiny shoulders. So she always made sure to brighten her day when they were together. While the ship was preparing for its arrival at Gimangakure the twins were enjoying a break from their fathers workload. Noémi was putting her sisters hair into a fancy bun, using a white bow to hold it in place when the alarms sounded across the ship. It seemed their fathers gaudy boat had attracted trouble. They had been targeted by a group of pirates, who say the boat as their next meal ticket. While she didn't know why the ships alarm was going off at the time she immediately acted, grabbing her sisters hand as she locked their rooms door and hid them in their closet. The twins remained in the the closets dark embrace until their rooms door was kicked in. Instinctively she squeezed Ciri's hand to comfort the girl. But there wasn't much she could do besides that. Their father hadn't started their combat training yet, if they opened the door they would be defenseless. And if like some kind of cosmic joke one of the pirates peered into the closet in search of valuables and instead spotted the twins. The rest of the ship attack is a blur for her, after she was knocked over the head she struggled to keep conscious as the pirate carried her and Ciri to what she assumed was his leader. It seemed they were going to be used as hostages while the pirates backed off from the ship. They didn't say why but it was easy to tell they were being overwhelmed after the Lelièvre family started grouping up for their counter attack on the invaders. When they reached the shore the group decided to relay their ransom to the family but after the message was delivered the ship just sailed off. Their entire family seemingly abandoning them. The twins clung to each other as the leader let his frustration out on a nearby tree. Instead of cutting the girls loose he decided he wasn't going to let his meal ticket just sail off so he decided to move his new 'goods' to his base of operations while he decided on how to extort the Lelièvre. Knowing better than to keep all his eggs in one basket he chose to separate the twins between his two bases. Noémi gripped tighter to her sister when she heard his plan, struggling to keep the younger twin in her arms as the adults pulled them apart. In the struggle she had managed to grab onto the white bow she put in Ciri's hair, a match for the one in her own. So she held onto the fabric as a lifeline as her mind raced on how to get back to her sister.
She did not quietly let the would-be-pirates just carry her off to their base. No she made sure to make a fuss out of it. Her tantrum rewarded when they had crossed into the land of mist. An Aburame clansmen happened upon them with his squad, they were currently on a mission when his Kikaichu sensed Noémi's own in a panicked and agitated state. On a whim he put his mission on hold to check it out. In a flash the pirates were on the ground as thousands of bugs filled the air around the crying girl. The shinobi patiently waited for her to cry it out while he called his bugs back into his gourd. When she finally regained some sliver of composure he asked where she was from. Being that her father had only started teaching them the language her answer was a broken sentence along the lines of 'I dont know.' Knowing he couldn't just leave the girl alone in the middle of nowhere, he ordered his squad to precede with the mission while he delivered her to Kirigakure. It wasn't a long trip but she still doesn't remember much of it. She just knows the only reason she didn't struggle against this transportation was that it was his bugs carrying her rather than the stranger. If he had placed his hands on her it wouldn't have mattered that he saved her from a group of thugs. The Kikaichu seemed to sooth her, soothing her own in the process. Though she still had little to no control over the bugs in her body they still remained impacted by each other if she was upset they would swarm. After the shinobi had gotten the all clear from his Kage on her admittance into the protection of the village she was taken to the Aburame compound.
She didn't like it there. She was an outsider, it didn't mater how many times the shinobi insisted the compound was the best place for her... she saw the way the other clansmen looked at her. Their straight laced mouths and their disproving stares. Who were they to judge her for how she was raised? So she wasn't some shut in, what good was watching life fly past you? How was their lifestyle better than hers? It didn't take long before the stress of being in a foreign place stated setting into her mood. Worse still she was without her sister... all she had left was a single bow. She would start going over the event over and over as she tortured herself with what-if scenarios. The possible ways she could have stopped the man from grabbing them, how she could have saved her sister from being separated from the rest of the family, how she could have fought against her captivators harder to get to her sister when they were trying to take Ciri away from her. Why did she deserve to be protected by some fancy walls? Where was her sister? Was she ok? Why did this happen? Why? For the first time in ages she dropped her smile. She only kept it up for her sisters sake. For all she knew her sister could be dead by now. She was stuck in a mental loop of self hate. She would have bore a hole in the ground how long she spent staring at it in silence. It wasn't broken until she snapped on one of the Aburame that came to check on her. Her hive was swarming like a hornets nest and it was beginning to agitate the other Kikaichu. She made sure to use all the hateful words her father would spew when he was upset about at her mother. She never knew she had such hate for her own bloodline instilled in her until that moment. She was only seven and her father had successfully twisted her against her own kind. She had internalized racism towards the Aburame.
At the end of her fate fueled string of slurs in a broken version of a language she barely knew the Aburame clansmen's emotionless facade was broken. She could see the pain in the older woman's eyes as she backed out of the room... it was the same pain she saw in her sisters eyes whenever their father would berate them. She truly was her fathers daughter. She couldn't stay at the compound anymore. It wasn't healthy for her, it brought out the side of her she wanted to keep buried deep inside, and they would be better off not keeping a ticking time bomb of hate so close to their bosom. So when the shinobi that had 'rescued' her returned from his latest mission she requested he find her a new place to live. She told him everything about what had happened. He could see the disappointment in his body language. She prepared herself for a berating that never came. Instead he just brought the woman she spewed her hate at into the room once more. He politely asked Noémi to apologize. She bit on her tongue to stop herself from speaking without gather her thoughts. She knew in her core what she said was wrong. She regretted the words the moment she saw the look on the woman's face. She took a few minutes but she finally managed to croak out the words 'I sorry,' as she fought back tears. The woman didn't say a word before leaving the room, her shoulders looking a little lighter than when she first arrived. The shinobi asked her one time if she was sure she didn't want to stay in the compound any longer, telling her they could help her with the hatred bottled up inside her. She declined the offer to stay once he was finished talking. With a nod he took her tiny hand and lead her out of the place she saw as a giant prison. The rest of the day was spent meeting up with his contacts as he searched for a place he could trust to let her stay. He had promised to protect her until she could protect herself.
They settled on a small apartment a few blocks from the compound. Far enough to feel free from them but close enough to get them if there was ever trouble. He told her he would be checking in on her once a week so he could work with her on the hate that was instilled in her and help with her speech. 'No one needs that kind of hate, inside or out.' as he would say during each of their sessions. It took a few sessions before she started to smile again. Baby steps. One day he came to visit her to find all the reflective surfaces in the apartment smashed and broken. It turned out she couldn't stand to look in the mirror, it only brought up feelings of guilt when she saw her reflection. All she saw was her sisters dace when she stared into the glass. By the end of her first year in Kirigakure she was able to speak the language like it was her native tongue. Having nothing but free time, she had nothing better to do but study the books the shinobi would leave for her. By the time she was nine she had started collecting any news articles related to what she now knew was where she was kidnapped from 'Gimangakure' and any mention of attacks on ships. She knew the odds that she would find anything pertaining to her sister was almost non existent... but that small insignificant percentage started a flame of hope in her gut. Hope that started burning away the bonds of depression that were still holding her in place. She started to leave her apartment daily to scour the city for abandoned newspapers, or to listen in on conversations between merchants. Every one and a while she would hear faint whispers that matched her vivid memories of how the pirates would dress. By the time she reach the age of ten she had reverted back to her personality from before the traumatic experience and even better she only felt a little disgust when she need to interact with a fellow Aburame. Baby steps.
A few years later he was happy with how far she had progressed, the shinobi offered to take her back to the compound. She declined his offer after a few moments of silence, stating she felt better off living by herself... where she was free to be herself and not be slowly converted into a 'proper' Aburame. Despite his promises that they wouldn't be doing any such thing. She however requested that he enter her into the village academy. To say her request came as a surprise would have been an understatement. She had never mentioned any interest in becoming a Shinobi. When asked why all she told him was that it was a secret. Knowing how hard she had worked to change herself for the better he decided to grant her the request. Though he would have felt better if she at least trained at the compound first to get some control over her hive of Kikaichu. She however was adamant about not stepping foot near the place so he decided not to voice it. The reason she chose not to tell him her reason for wanting to become a shinobi was because he was a realist. He had repeatedly told her not to keep looking into her kidnapping, that he sister was likely dead. She saw how much information was trusted with the shinobi of the village and she saw it as her way to grab hold of anything related to her sister. She would find Ciri. Her sister was strong. She wouldn't have let death take her. At least thats what she always told herself. At first the academy was hard. Children were cruel, she herself was an example of the amount of hate such a small body could hold. At first they would make fun of her for her obvious accent whenever she would speak up in class, which was often. Then they would pick on her for her skin condition. She would always tell herself how often her sister would tell her they made her look prettier with them to endure the nicknames they would call her. Then it came out that she was an Aburame and she was treated for a freak not just because she held a hive of bugs inside her but also because she couldn't even fit in with her own kind. The way she dressed, the way she acted, that ever present smile, and how vocal she was were the exact opposite of all the other 'bug kids'.
Half way through her education her skin condition had started to flair up some more, for a few months she would wake up to find new places where the pigment was noticeably lacking. It didn't bother her much, she knew she couldn't stop it from progressing. She liked how it looked personally. Well most of it. One of the days she was chosen to spar with one of the more cruel of her classmates. The entire taijutsu training session was spent with him pointing out of freakish her fingers looked. Like her flesh was dying. It was during that spar she had had enough and it was when she started to gain her infamous expressionless mask during fights. She had to be dragged off of the poor boy when all was said and done. She had broken his nose as her first mood before pinning him to the ground and slamming her bruised knuckles into his face until he was crying for her to stop... apologizing over and over for making fun of her hands that his face had more than gotten enough close ups of in the last few seconds. She stared at her sensei with a blank face, rather than her usual bright smile, while they lectured her for going overboard during a spar. The bullying seemed to stop after that, infarct most people had started avoiding her all together. She didn't mind it in the least. After all she wasn't there for them. She was there to make her goal a reality.
By the time she was a legal adult the main reason she got up in the morning was her goal. It kept her going. It was why she keeps her hair decorated with two matching bows. Why she she refuses to cover herself like the other Aburame. Its why she worked hard to graduate from the academy. She would find out what happened to her sister, she would find Ciri Rose Lelièvre.
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|ρ є r ѕ σ η α ℓ • ∂ α т α|├▬ Full Name: Hannzah Geirskögul Nickname: Hann
Age: Sixteen Birthdate: March 11th Gender: Female
Height: 5'6 Weight: 125 lbs.
Nindo: "I am not deterred." Personality: Hann is a bit talkative, although most of her speech seems forced and for the most part it is. She grew up isolated so when she came to a city with so many people she didn't want to feel washed away in some crowd, thus she forces herself to speak more. While she's most comfortable just observing the world around her, she doesn't want to let it pass her by. In a way, even she doesn't know her personality as she's still trying to figure out what kind of person she is in the world of a shinobi.
Village: Kumogakure Title: Genin Rank: D-Rank Shinobi First Class: Bukijutsu Second Class: Sensor
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|c σ м в α т • ∂ α т α|├▬ Bloodline: No Bloodline Courage: +2 PA, 5 jutsu slots
Chakra Pool: 350 Stamina Pool: 150 Chakra Element: Water & Lightning Chakra Color: Blue Chakra Materialization: A haze slowly radiating from her body.
Class Disciplines : • Mystic Hero: The user is much like a hybrid warrior, focusing on mixing ninjutsu into their personal arsenal. Through their great devotion to this path the user can cast ninjutsu without hand seals while wielding a weapon, D at gennin, C at chunnin, B at Jounin, A at Konin, and S at Sannin. These techniques maintain the same description and criteria to use, as well as require the same amount of time to mold the chakra through the weapon as would be needed to perform hand seals, meaning the techniques are not instantaneously cast. The user’s spirit is so strong, that they can utilize their physical bukijutsu techniques to negate ninjutsu techniques of the same rank or below. • Zoom: The user has a vast eye, able to quadruple the range of a given sensory technique, often allowing them to sense things even outside of the given area (across threads). This vast range, however, makes it difficult to detect fine details. The user is only able to know that chakra is there, or that chakra is being activated. Things like type of technique, rank, element, ect, are unknown to the user. Reductions: • Learn Bukijutsu techniques one [1] post faster. • Learn ninjutsu one [1] post faster. • Learn genjutsu one [1] post faster. Personal Attributes: • Archery Expert: Stamina & Chakra used for bow-based skills reduced [1] Rank in cost. • Strength in Variation: Capable of learning Additional Bukijutsu Style. • Quick Retreat: Speed increased. • Adaption: Capable of learning [10] Additional Ninjutsu.
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|c α r є є r • ∂ α т α|├▬ Ryo: 両 0 AC: 0
Missions Complete: D Rank :: 0 C Rank :: 0 B Rank :: 0 A Rank :: 0 S Rank :: 0
Crafting Jobs Complete: D Rank :: 0 C Rank :: 0 B Rank :: 0 A Rank :: 0 S Rank :: 0
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|ω є α ρ σ η • ∂ α т α|├▬ Weapon Type: Longbow - A double bowstring makes this weapon particularly lethal. Weapon Range: 300 Yards Weapon Weight: 5 ft Long, 17 Pounds Weapon Location: On her back • No Special Traits
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|ι η ν є η т σ r у|├▬ • x15 Basic Wood Arrows
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|т є c н η ι q υ є ѕ|├▬ ▬▬┤|N i n j u t s u Maruton: • Henge no Jutsu [ Transformation Technique ] • Kawarimi no Jutsu [ Substitution Technique ] • Bushin no Jutsu [ Clone Technique ] • Suimen Hokou no Waza [ Act of Water Surface Walking ] • Kinobori no Waza [ Act of Tree Climbing ] • Kai [ Release ]
Suiton •
Raiton •
▬▬┤|G e n j u t s u • ▬▬┤|T a i j u t s u - • - ▬▬┤|B u k i j u t s u - • -
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|н ι ѕ т σ r у|├▬ Hann was born to a fishing family outside of Kumogakure so she didn't really interact with a lot of people her age. While her parents fished, Hann was responsible for sniping Ducks with a long bow passed down to her from her family. Although it was a bit out of tradition for the women to work where she came from, Hann was happy to be doing this. At the age of fifteen her parents went out to sea one day for a typical fishing expenditure and never returned. Not wanting to spend the rest of her life alone, Hann decided to make her way to Kumogakure, vowing to never bring up this part of her past as she didn't want to talk about something so painful, instead, she told the officials she was a traveler with no family. Once she showed them her archery skills, they decided to to make her a shinobi and she was off to the academy where she graduated rather quickly on account of her solid ground with the bow already.
Posted: Fri Jan 13, 2017 9:40 am
Trainer II
Your personal attribute invoking speed increase can only go up to a slight increase in speed. Please place the proper descriptive for this to pass.
Double bowstring on a longbow doesn't really do anything for the bow. Your not adding extra force with it and making it harder to knock your arrows. It's not going to change anything in rp just be aware of this fact.
Also please be aware 300 yards will be your maximum reach and your effective range will be between 100 and 150. Your weight is also extremely heavy even for a steel compound bow. Most longbow with between 2 and 5 pounds in total. This goes for a 5ft span. Weapon itself is fine, it's a bow. Just the details are a little wonky.
Fears: fear of death is extremely common and being edged out as legitimate due to how easy it is to circumvent. Fear of being forgotten has no real effect on a character as well since it won't really come up. Please fix these.
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Posted: Fri Jan 13, 2017 12:26 pm
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|ρ є r ѕ σ η α ℓ • ∂ α т α|├▬ Full Name: Hannzah Geirskögul Nickname: Hann
Age: Sixteen Birthdate: March 11th Gender: Female
Height: 5'6 Weight: 125 lbs.
Nindo: "I am not deterred." Personality: Hann is a bit talkative, although most of her speech seems forced and for the most part it is. She grew up isolated so when she came to a city with so many people she didn't want to feel washed away in some crowd, thus she forces herself to speak more. While she's most comfortable just observing the world around her, she doesn't want to let it pass her by. In a way, even she doesn't know her personality as she's still trying to figure out what kind of person she is in the world of a shinobi.
Village: Kumogakure Title: Genin Rank: D-Rank Shinobi First Class: Bukijutsu Second Class: Sensor
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|c σ м в α т • ∂ α т α|├▬ Bloodline: No Bloodline Courage: +2 PA, 5 jutsu slots
Chakra Pool: 350 Stamina Pool: 150 Chakra Element: Water & Lightning Chakra Color: Blue Chakra Materialization: A haze slowly radiating from her body.
Class Disciplines : • Mystic Hero: The user is much like a hybrid warrior, focusing on mixing ninjutsu into their personal arsenal. Through their great devotion to this path the user can cast ninjutsu without hand seals while wielding a weapon, D at gennin, C at chunnin, B at Jounin, A at Konin, and S at Sannin. These techniques maintain the same description and criteria to use, as well as require the same amount of time to mold the chakra through the weapon as would be needed to perform hand seals, meaning the techniques are not instantaneously cast. The user’s spirit is so strong, that they can utilize their physical bukijutsu techniques to negate ninjutsu techniques of the same rank or below. • Zoom: The user has a vast eye, able to quadruple the range of a given sensory technique, often allowing them to sense things even outside of the given area (across threads). This vast range, however, makes it difficult to detect fine details. The user is only able to know that chakra is there, or that chakra is being activated. Things like type of technique, rank, element, ect, are unknown to the user. Reductions: • Learn Bukijutsu techniques one [1] post faster. • Learn ninjutsu one [1] post faster. • Learn genjutsu one [1] post faster. Personal Attributes: • Archery Expert: Stamina & Chakra used for bow-based skills reduced [1] Rank in cost. • Strength in Variation: Capable of learning Additional Bukijutsu Style. • Quick Retreat: Speed slightly increased. • Adaption: Capable of learning [10] Additional Ninjutsu.
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|c α r є є r • ∂ α т α|├▬ Ryo: 両 0 AC: 0
Missions Complete: D Rank :: 0 C Rank :: 0 B Rank :: 0 A Rank :: 0 S Rank :: 0
Crafting Jobs Complete: D Rank :: 0 C Rank :: 0 B Rank :: 0 A Rank :: 0 S Rank :: 0
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|ω є α ρ σ η • ∂ α т α|├▬ Weapon Type: Longbow - Long bow used to strike enemies from far distances.. Weapon Range: 300 Yards; Most effective at 100-2150 Yards Weapon Weight: 5 ft Long, 5 Pounds Weapon Location: On her back • No Special Traits
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|ι η ν є η т σ r у|├▬ • x15 Basic Wood Arrows
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|т є c н η ι q υ є ѕ|├▬ ▬▬┤|N i n j u t s u Maruton: • Henge no Jutsu [ Transformation Technique ] • Kawarimi no Jutsu [ Substitution Technique ] • Bushin no Jutsu [ Clone Technique ] • Suimen Hokou no Waza [ Act of Water Surface Walking ] • Kinobori no Waza [ Act of Tree Climbing ] • Kai [ Release ]
Suiton •
Raiton •
▬▬┤|G e n j u t s u • ▬▬┤|T a i j u t s u - • - ▬▬┤|B u k i j u t s u - • -
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|н ι ѕ т σ r у|├▬ Hann was born to a fishing family outside of Kumogakure so she didn't really interact with a lot of people her age. While her parents fished, Hann was responsible for sniping Ducks with a long bow passed down to her from her family. Although it was a bit out of tradition for the women to work where she came from, Hann was happy to be doing this. At the age of fifteen her parents went out to sea one day for a typical fishing expenditure and never returned. Not wanting to spend the rest of her life alone, Hann decided to make her way to Kumogakure, vowing to never bring up this part of her past as she didn't want to talk about something so painful, instead, she told the officials she was a traveler with no family. Once she showed them her archery skills, they decided to to make her a shinobi and she was off to the academy where she graduated rather quickly on account of her solid ground with the bow already.
