▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|ρ є r ѕ σ η α ℓ • ∂ α т α|├▬ Full Name: Kai Leon Nickname: Kai / Crater
Age: 16 Birthdate: 12/28 Gender: Male
Height: 5"8' Weight: 140lbs
Nindo: "Anything can be made better with imagination" Personality: Kai tends to be more socially awkward. He is not afraid to say the truth, but more he is afraid of what people think of him. He normally sits outside of the conversation listening rather than joining in himself. He values those close to him, but he rarely let's anyone that close to begin with. He is easy to talk to and smooth with his words. He walks with a confident but not cocky gait.
Village: None Title: Genin Rank: D First Class: Genjutsu Second Class: Tamer
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Full Name: Fenris Leon Nickname: Devil Wolf
Age: 1 Birthdate: 02/12 Gender: Male
Height: 2ft Weight: 175lbs
Chakra Pool: 180 Stamina Pool: 70 Chakra Element: Lightning Chakra Color: Blue Chakra Materialization: Larger version of Fenris. He uses this to scare other animals in the wild away when he is in danger.
Strengths: • Strength • Swiftness Weaknesses: • Bulky, unable to stealth well. • Fuuton Element Fears: • Losing Kai • Being alone.
Limitations: • Ninjutsu : : 00 / 06
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|c σ м в α т • ∂ α т α|├▬ Bloodline: Bakuton
Chakra Pool: 360 Stamina Pool: 140 Chakra Element: Lightning / Water Chakra Color: Silver Chakra Materialization: The chakra appears as an angry aura constantly flickering upwards as his chakra pool deepens.
Class Disciplines : • Inception: The user's genjutsu prowess has increased the sheer power of the genjutsu, making them act a rank higher then they are (up to S rank). This increases the Kai cost for an opponent. • Beast Master: The user is able to nurture grow, and bond with up to 3 animals, of various shapes and sizes (one lizard, one canine, one feline, ect), with the user being able to receive similar traits to their animals(must submit to customs). These animals will be close to the users level, though still requiring the leader for nurturing, growth, ect. The animals can only reach jounin level. They have 1/2 the user's chakra and stamina pool, able to manipulate a single element, and perform 2 activations a post (1 offensive max). At genin, the user can choose a single trait associated with their animal companion. At chuunin, when the user gains their second animal companion, the user may choose another trait associated with this single companion. At jounin, when the user gains their third companion, they may choose another trait associated with that animal. Each trait must be submitted to the custom jutsu thread. Reductions: • Learn taijutsu one [1] post faster. • Learn genjutsu one (1) post faster. Personal Attributes: • Studious: From an early stage on in life, Kai has had earl chances to study Genjutsu and see it done first hand. He has studied it relentlessly, finding it easier to learn and use than others his own age. Kai learns all Genjutsu [1] post faster. • Teachings Kai had a teacher to show him the ways of his ninjutsu from the day he was old enough to cast a jutsu. Through this teacher he had the ability to get scrolls and learn first hand the ninjutsu. Kai learns Ninjutsu [1] post faster. • Nose of the Wild: Through his bond with Fenris, Kai has developed a more wolf like nose. Causing his sense of smell to slightly increase.
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|c α r є є r • ∂ α т α|├▬ Ryo: 両 0 AC: 0
Missions Complete: D Rank :: 0 C Rank :: 0 B Rank :: 0 A Rank :: 0 S Rank :: 0
Crafting Jobs Complete: D Rank :: 0 C Rank :: 0 B Rank :: 0 A Rank :: 0 S Rank :: 0
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|ω є α ρ σ η • ∂ α т α|├▬ Weapon Type: Katana Weapon Range: 4ft Weapon Weight: 20lbs Weapon Location: Across his back. • Katana
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|ι η ν є η т σ r у|├▬ • Shuriken x10 • Kunai x5
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|т є c н η ι q υ є ѕ|├▬ ▬▬┤|N i n j u t s u Maruton: {Start with the following six only} • Henge no Jutsu [ Transformation Technique ] • Kawarimi no Jutsu [ Substitution Technique ] • Bushin no Jutsu [ Clone Technique ] • Suimen Hokou no Waza [ Act of Water Surface Walking ] • Kinobori no Waza [ Act of Tree Climbing ] • Kai [ Release ]
Raiton •
Suiton •
Bakuton • ▬▬┤|G e n j u t s u • ▬▬┤|T a i j u t s u None • ▬▬┤|B u k i j u t s u None •
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|н ι ѕ т σ r у|├▬ Kai is royalty. Born into it from a mother who died at birth and a father who was assassinated before he turned one. The royal adviser, his father's brother took him in and ran away with him. Kai grew up running from one place to another, never making friends, never having the chance to get to know anyone. Kai never complained, nor did he want too. His uncle was kind, if not strict. Kai knew it was for his own benefit and safety that his uncle did what he had too. As Kai grew older and more adept, Zale, his uncle, taught him how to fight, to survive in the wilds. Zale was an adept smith and in return, he taught Kai his craft. A year before Zale's death at an uncurable disease, he taught Kai everything he could about the Clay method of Bakuton users, like himself. Even doing so much as obtaining some scrolls for him to study. But Kai never had the chance to properly use his jutsu before his uncle became very sick and died. Now Kai roams from country to country at the young age of 16, doing his best to learn to fight. Just recently Kai learned he had a bond with some of the animals of the woods. Fenris the wolf was his first companion after Zale.
I'm going to have to deny both of your PAs, unfortunately.
"Learning bonuses must target one specific section of jutsu such as: Ninjutsu, Bukijutsu, Taijutsu, or Genjutsu. They may only be allowed a -1 bonus with one exception: -2 may only be obtained if another section suffers a loss of +1. No higher than -2 can ever be obtained via 1 Personal Attribute. "
This is hard-locked and non-negotiable. You can have up to -1 on each, or -2 when adding +1 to something else. This other category has to be something that you actually get slots for or it will not be accepted. If you need help coming up with some creative PAs, I would recommend messaging Lanfaer. Otherwise, fix these and quote me when you're done!
Posted: Wed Dec 21, 2016 4:41 pm
Royal Burrito
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I'm going to have to deny both of your PAs, unfortunately.
"Learning bonuses must target one specific section of jutsu such as: Ninjutsu, Bukijutsu, Taijutsu, or Genjutsu. They may only be allowed a -1 bonus with one exception: -2 may only be obtained if another section suffers a loss of +1. No higher than -2 can ever be obtained via 1 Personal Attribute. "
This is hard-locked and non-negotiable. You can have up to -1 on each, or -2 when adding +1 to something else. This other category has to be something that you actually get slots for or it will not be accepted. If you need help coming up with some creative PAs, I would recommend messaging Lanfaer. Otherwise, fix these and quote me when you're done!
So could I just make them -1 to each then? Because they each target their specific types. Like you said, the first one is Genjutsu. Otherwise for the bloodlines, do you count those as ninjutsu then? If so, I can just say ninjutsu then.
I'm going to have to deny both of your PAs, unfortunately.
"Learning bonuses must target one specific section of jutsu such as: Ninjutsu, Bukijutsu, Taijutsu, or Genjutsu. They may only be allowed a -1 bonus with one exception: -2 may only be obtained if another section suffers a loss of +1. No higher than -2 can ever be obtained via 1 Personal Attribute. "
This is hard-locked and non-negotiable. You can have up to -1 on each, or -2 when adding +1 to something else. This other category has to be something that you actually get slots for or it will not be accepted. If you need help coming up with some creative PAs, I would recommend messaging Lanfaer. Otherwise, fix these and quote me when you're done!
So could I just make them -1 to each then? Because they each target their specific types. Like you said, the first one is Genjutsu. Otherwise for the bloodlines, do you count those as ninjutsu then? If so, I can just say ninjutsu then.
If you want to get more out of it, I would suggest changing it to Ninjutsu. Bakuton techniques are considered Ninjutsu, so the reduction would apply. Plus you could still use it on the rest of your Ninjutsu. So yes, you could do that as well as just change it to -1. =)
Posted: Thu Dec 22, 2016 1:13 pm
Royal Burrito
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Royal Burrito
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I'm going to have to deny both of your PAs, unfortunately.
"Learning bonuses must target one specific section of jutsu such as: Ninjutsu, Bukijutsu, Taijutsu, or Genjutsu. They may only be allowed a -1 bonus with one exception: -2 may only be obtained if another section suffers a loss of +1. No higher than -2 can ever be obtained via 1 Personal Attribute. "
This is hard-locked and non-negotiable. You can have up to -1 on each, or -2 when adding +1 to something else. This other category has to be something that you actually get slots for or it will not be accepted. If you need help coming up with some creative PAs, I would recommend messaging Lanfaer. Otherwise, fix these and quote me when you're done!
So could I just make them -1 to each then? Because they each target their specific types. Like you said, the first one is Genjutsu. Otherwise for the bloodlines, do you count those as ninjutsu then? If so, I can just say ninjutsu then.
If you want to get more out of it, I would suggest changing it to Ninjutsu. Bakuton techniques are considered Ninjutsu, so the reduction would apply. Plus you could still use it on the rest of your Ninjutsu. So yes, you could do that as well as just change it to -1. =)
Alright, I found a couple other issues when I did the math (sorry for not catching them sooner = u =')
From your Genjutsu class you get:
4 Ninjutsu 8 Genjutsu per style
And from your Tamer class you get:
20 Ninjutsu 1 Taijutsu style
The totals then would be:
24 Ninjutsu 8 Genjutsu per style 1 Taijutsu style
Because of the Tamer class, any slots received from Tamer class can be distributed to your companion.
Now, where the trouble comes in. Your profile has 25 Ninjutsu and 12 Genjutsu slots, whereas total you should have 24 Ninjutsu, and a multiple of 8 for Genjutsu (there are 5 Genjutsu styles). On top of this, your companion has 6 Ninjutsu slots listed. If you would like him to have the 6 Ninjutsu slots, then that would leave you with 19 Ninjutsu slots total, because they are divided between the characters.
This aside, one other small error was that half of your 140 Stamina is 70, so your companion should have 70 Stamina, not 62. =)
Posted: Thu Dec 22, 2016 4:24 pm
Royal Burrito
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Alright, I found a couple other issues when I did the math (sorry for not catching them sooner = u =')
From your Genjutsu class you get:
4 Ninjutsu 8 Genjutsu per style
And from your Tamer class you get:
20 Ninjutsu 1 Taijutsu style
The totals then would be:
24 Ninjutsu 8 Genjutsu per style 1 Taijutsu style
Because of the Tamer class, any slots received from Tamer class can be distributed to your companion.
Now, where the trouble comes in. Your profile has 25 Ninjutsu and 12 Genjutsu slots, whereas total you should have 24 Ninjutsu, and a multiple of 8 for Genjutsu (there are 5 Genjutsu styles). On top of this, your companion has 6 Ninjutsu slots listed. If you would like him to have the 6 Ninjutsu slots, then that would leave you with 19 Ninjutsu slots total, because they are divided between the characters.
This aside, one other small error was that half of your 140 Stamina is 70, so your companion should have 70 Stamina, not 62. =)
1. I just looked at the classes again. Genjutsu gets 5 Ninjutsu, not 4. It also gets 12 Genjutsu, not 8. Otherwise I do not understand what you mean by style because the class doesn't mention this unless I am being dumb and over looking it.
2. All animals start with 6, not divided from my original ninjutsu amount. At least that's how it reads. Otherwise, can you explain how it differs?
1. I just looked at the classes again. Genjutsu gets 5 Ninjutsu, not 4. It also gets 12 Genjutsu, not 8. Otherwise I do not understand what you mean by style because the class doesn't mention this unless I am being dumb and over looking it.
2. All animals start with 6, not divided from my original ninjutsu amount. At least that's how it reads. Otherwise, can you explain how it differs?
3. Fixed the stamina.
I don't know what I was looking at for the first bit so I apologize about that, but the second one I'll have to get clarified because I think something wasn't fixed when we updated it last. Sorry for the confusion. I guess that's what I get for trying to do it during work. xD
As far as styles, each post in the Genjutsu section, Leaf, Mist, Sound, etc. is considered a style so you'd get twelve slots for each one, which is a little extreme and why I thought the number seemed wrong.
Both Genjutsu and Tamer will be receiving updates in an overhaul we'll be having over the next couple months, so keep an eye out for those. Otherwise you're approved. Sorry again for the confusion. = u ='
Oh, and don't forget to do a bloodline application if you haven't already! =)
Posted: Thu Dec 22, 2016 6:14 pm
Royal Burrito
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1. I just looked at the classes again. Genjutsu gets 5 Ninjutsu, not 4. It also gets 12 Genjutsu, not 8. Otherwise I do not understand what you mean by style because the class doesn't mention this unless I am being dumb and over looking it.
2. All animals start with 6, not divided from my original ninjutsu amount. At least that's how it reads. Otherwise, can you explain how it differs?
3. Fixed the stamina.
I don't know what I was looking at for the first bit so I apologize about that, but the second one I'll have to get clarified because I think something wasn't fixed when we updated it last. Sorry for the confusion. I guess that's what I get for trying to do it during work. xD
As far as styles, each post in the Genjutsu section, Leaf, Mist, Sound, etc. is considered a style so you'd get twelve slots for each one, which is a little extreme and why I thought the number seemed wrong.
Both Genjutsu and Tamer will be receiving updates in an overhaul we'll be having over the next couple months, so keep an eye out for those. Otherwise you're approved. Sorry again for the confusion. = u ='
Oh, and don't forget to do a bloodline application if you haven't already! =)
Nindo: "Next time, try to leave a dent!" Personality: Nymeria is a natural born leader; calm, quiet and cool in most situations but becomes easily flustered. While not physically powerful she makes up for being steadfast.
Village: Kirigakure Title: Knight Rank: E First Class: Bukijutsu Second Class: Medic
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|c σ м в α т • ∂ α т α|├▬ Bloodline: Power: +2 PA, +25 chakra/stamina a rank
Chakra Pool: 345 Stamina Pool: 260 Chakra Element: Earth, Water Chakra Color: Dark Blue
Strengths: • Defensive Techniques • Healing
Weaknesses: • Long range technique • Genjutsu • Being offensive in a battle
Fears: • Pitch Darkness; darkness is the opposite to light, and chakra is light. • Bugs in general, roaches in particular. Not a crippling fear for bugs in general just grossed out, but a paralyzing fear of roaches
Class Disciplines : • Mystic Hero: The user is much like a hybrid warrior, focusing on mixing ninjutsu into their personal arsenal. Through their great devotion to this path the user can cast ninjutsu without hand seals while wielding a weapon, D at gennin, C at chunnin, B at Jounin, A at Konin, and S at Sannin. These techniques maintain the same description and criteria to use, as well as require the same amount of time to mold the chakra through the weapon as would be needed to perform hand seals, meaning the techniques are not instantaneously cast. The user’s spirit is so strong, that they can utilize their physical bukijutsu techniques to negate ninjutsu techniques of the same rank or below.
• Specialist - Healing: The user, choosing to specialize in either healing or harmful medical techniques, gains a great boost to their chakra control in that area. At Chunnin, they gain a -5 chakra reduction to perform techniques in their specialty. at Jounin, -10, at Konin -15 at Sannin -20. To clarify, they they gain a -5 chakra reduction every rank, to a maximum of -20 at sannin. All medical jutsu are still learnable by both sides, but the chakra control only applies to the chosen side.
Reductions: • Learns Bukijutsu 1 Post faster • Learns Medical Jutsu 1 Post faster
Personal Attributes:
• Knight's Vow: While engaging in combat in order to defend an ally or civilian, Nymeria's defensive descriptive bonuses cannot be lowered.
• Pure Defender: Nymeria gains a slight increase to her defensive techniques for every opponent she is facing, up to a cap of 6 opponents (or a supreme boost).
• War General: Although straight up combat is not Nymeria's strong suit, she is well versed in strategic planning and understands the importance backup and support, increasing the range of her aura techniques by 5 meters.
• Shield in the Mist: Nymeria's chakra and stamina regen are always treated as if she were out of combat {+15 chakra and stamina per post}, but she receives a supreme reduction to her offensive abilities.
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|c α r є є r • ∂ α т α|├▬ Ryo: 両 0 AC: 0
Missions Complete: D Rank :: 0 C Rank :: 0 B Rank :: 0 A Rank :: 0 S Rank :: 0
Crafting Jobs Complete: D Rank :: 0 C Rank :: 0 B Rank :: 0 A Rank :: 0 S Rank :: 0
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|ω є α ρ σ η • ∂ α т α|├▬ Weapon Type: Longsword and Shield Weapon Range: 4 1/2 foot long sword, 4 foot long shield Weapon Weight: 5 lbs sword, 7lbs shield Weapon Location: • Shield on her back, longsword on her hip
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|ι η ν є η т σ r у|├▬ •
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|т є c н η ι q υ є ѕ|├▬ ▬▬┤|N i n j u t s u Maruton: •
Suiton •
Doton •
Customs •
▬▬┤|T a i j u t s u - •
▬▬┤|B u k i j u t s u Madokishi •
▬▬┤|F o r m l e s s Medium Shields [Locked] Longsword [Locked]
▬▬┤| J o b s All-rounder Cook: Home-Styled
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|н ι ѕ т σ r у|├▬ Where did she come from? Not even she knew. According to the monks of the head monk of the Latakia Monastery he was abandoned at the door as a mere babe. For three two days the monk allowed him to rest outside of the massive wooden doors that guarded the entrance, and not once did the babe relent in her cries. So the monks took him in. While at Latakia she was given an education unlike that of most young children; she was taught the arts, literature, politics and the histories of all the known lands. Once she reached the age of eight he was given the option to remain in the temple and be taught the secrets of the religion of the monks or to go and live the life of the layman. Nymeria chose to remain and there he learned the mystery of chakra, how to control it, and its true nature. Upon reaching the age of 16, Nymeria was tasked to leave Latakia and venture to the Village Hidden in the Mist to supplement her intellectual training with physical one in hopes that he one day will return and become the head of Latakia, and lead the righteous in the wars to come.
Posted: Sat Dec 24, 2016 5:09 pm
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|ρ є r ѕ σ η α ℓ • ∂ α т α|├▬ Full Name: Jovian [[ Self Given ]] Nickname:
Age: Fourteen Birthdate: Summer // June 13th Gender: Female
Height: Five Feet // Five Inches Weight: One-Twenty Five
Nindo:
Personal: " I can live without heart, without love ... But I do need a name "
Favorite Prayer: " Blessed are they who stand before The corrupt and the wicked and do not falter. Blessed are the peacekeepers, the champions of the just.
Personality:
Though Jovian had to raise herself as a girl homeless in the ninja world, she is devout to her Goddess Avarice "Queen of the True Blade". She believes that her belief will make her a better shinobi, she is resolute in becoming her own woman and achieving her own dream... a name.
Besides having a great sense of Right, Wrong and defending those who cannot defend themselves; she is a warm and kind girl... if you can get past the silence. Shes never had people surround her before, she has had to live her life working for food and shelter.
Village: Konohagakure (( Village Hidden in the Leaves )) Title: Genin Rank: D - Ranked Shinobi First Class: Bukijutsu Second Class: Taijutsu
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|c σ м в α т • ∂ α т α|├▬ Bloodline: Power: +2 PA, +25 chakra/stamina a rank
Chakra Pool: 225 Stamina Pool: 325 Chakra Element: Fuuton - Wind Style Chakra Color: Faint Gold Chakra Materialization: Glittering Gold that seems to raise from the area that is channeling chakra
Strengths: • Bukijutsu • Close to Mid Ranged Combat Weaknesses: • Long Ranged Combat • Elemental Weakness Fears: • Overwhelming Fire • Ocular Genjutsu
Class Disciplines : • Mystic Hero: The user is much like a hybrid warrior, focusing on mixing ninjutsu into their personal arsenal. Through their great devotion to this path the user can cast ninjutsu without hand seals while wielding a weapon, D at gennin, C at chunnin, B at Jounin, A at Konin, and S at Sannin. These techniques maintain the same description and criteria to use, as well as require the same amount of time to mold the chakra through the weapon as would be needed to perform hand seals, meaning the techniques are not instantaneously cast. The user’s spirit is so strong, that they can utilize their physical bukijutsu techniques to negate ninjutsu techniques of the same rank or below. • Brawler: Your taijutsu is just one side of your skill, as you are also versed in utilizing ninjutsu as well. Your taijutsu body greatly increases your flexibility and reflexes, while at the same time granting you an additional 2 ninjutsu techniques per level, then an extra 4 ninjutsu per rank after jounin. Reductions: • Learns Bukijtusu [ 3 ] post faster (( Total )) • Learns Taijutsu [ 2 ] post faster (( Total )) • Learns Ninjutsu [ 1 ] post faster (( P.A Santa )) Personal Attributes: • The Way of the Blade - Due to Jovians determination to be a better shinobi and swordswoman, she has dedicated herself to being the best swordswoman she could be - Learns Bukijutsu [ 2 ] posts faster • [ 1 ] Free Custom Armor Slot • Jovians Shell: Jovian has tirelessly pampered her armor, she is in it everyday and making sure that it fits flawlessly. Her knowledge of how armor fits to her body is quite remarkable. - Jovian suffers no mobility or speed reductions while in her armor • Physical Strength and Defense is increased by 1 Descriptive Word per rank ( slightly, mildly, moderately, heavily, greatly, supremely ) • 10 free training/missions posts (( Santa )) • 1 extra Locked Formless Style (( Santa )) • Santa's Knowledge #3: -1 post in Learning Taijutsu // Ninjutsu (( Santa ))
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|c α r є є r • ∂ α т α|├▬ Ryo: 両 AC:
Missions Complete: D Rank :: 0 C Rank :: 0 B Rank :: 0 A Rank :: 0 S Rank :: 0
Crafting Jobs Complete: D Rank :: 0 C Rank :: 0 B Rank :: 0 A Rank :: 0 S Rank :: 0
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|ω є α ρ σ η • ∂ α т α|├▬ Weapon Type:Roman Legion Steel Gladius Weapon Range: 2.5 feet Weapon Weight: 2.2 pounds Weapon Location: Strapped to her hip and never leaves her side • This Symbol is engraved into the side of her blade: xx
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|ι η ν є η т σ r у|├▬ • 10 kunai
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|т є c н η ι q υ є ѕ|├▬ ▬▬┤|N i n j u t s u Maruton: {Start with the following six only} • Henge no Jutsu [ Transformation Technique ] • Kawarimi no Jutsu [ Substitution Technique ] • Bushin no Jutsu [ Clone Technique ] • Suimen Hokou no Waza [ Act of Water Surface Walking ] • Kinobori no Waza [ Act of Tree Climbing ] • Kai [ Release ]
Fuuton no jutsu! - Wind Style Ninjutsu •
▬▬┤|T a i j u t s u Nigirikobushi no Shintou • ▬▬┤|B u k i j u t s u - Kasai - • ▬▬┤|F o r m l e s s S t y l e
Jovians start in life was a rough one, she was abandoned by her birth parents in the middle of the Fire Country. Afraid and scared, she started to wonder looking for a sign of life and comfort. She stumbled across a caravan of traveling merchants from across the Ocean. They saw the dehydrated and starving child and took her in as one of their own. One her sixth birthday, she was given a tattered book detailing someone named " Avarice ". This woman was a powerful swordswoman, Jovian sought inspiration in these writings. She read the tattered book page for page... she took in every word and promised to live through its teachings.
As she grew older, the caravan knew that she was craving something else... her heart started to wonder. She was always scanning the horizon and testing her own abilities... as weak as she was she knew her own strength. As a group, the caravan decided to make a stop in Konohagakure.
" We are not leaving you Jovie... we all know that you deserve and want better " they told her as they said their farewells. She knew that she would have to show them that she was going to become the woman in the book. She enrolled herself into the academy where she flourished.
• Fun Facts: - Jovian is a practitioner of " The Way of the True Blade " a religion that is based in the thought that the sword is an extension of the soul. It's major deity is a woman named "Avarice" whom was seen as a sovereign protector of Women and Children. - She believes in formalities and respect but... can cut loose just like everyone else.
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|ρ є r ѕ σ η α ℓ • ∂ α т α|├▬ Full Name: Xion Akagami Nickname: {Nicknames or Aliases}
Age: 22 Birthdate: 03/14 Gender: Female
Height: 5' 5" Weight: 111 lbs.
Nindo: "You see more with your eyes closed~" Personality: Despite being a bona fide adult, Xion is whimsical and adventurous. She may be usually quiet, but that's only because she relies on her ears, along with the rest of her body, to "see" the world. Beneath the silence lies an adventurous, fearless, and whimsical fellow who takes life as it comes. Xion has 99 problems but anxiety ain't one. She doesn't have the time for any of that. She's out to "see" as much of the world as she can. If possible, she wants to "see" more of the world than anyone else. She doesn't let being blind drag her down. She doesn't even see being blind as a challenge or an obstacle. Yeah, being blind makes it hard to move around in a world built around those who can see, but when it comes to "seeing" the world, Xion just accepts that she sees the world differently than others. To Xion, she sees the same world as others, just differently.
This sort of unusual world view is a bit of the norm for Xion. To herself, it all makes sense. To others, it might not. What is, is, and what isn't, isn't. For instance, Xion is used to wearing a maid outfit, which she had to wear for work ever since she was seven. Xion is not used to wearing anything else. Therefore, as her maid outfit doesn't get in the way, she has no reason to struggle putting on anything else when she can easily put on a maid outfit. This strange logic combined with a lack tact, ends in a complete disregard for factors that would affect the decisions of others (such as maid outfits being a strange choice for everyday clothing). Furthermore, not only does she not mind changing her mind in a snap, she actually enjoys modifying plans with no warning as soon as new information that supports an unchosen option pops up. Then there's a disturbing lack of fear. Capable of laughing in the face of dangers that would make grown men tremble, Xion is abnormally fearless to a fault, and again, circumstances that might throw others off don't even make Xion flinch. Although, she's known to come to an understanding of why a feared idea is a bad idea after it's been explained to her, so it certainly seems likely that she might just be a lot dense and short-sighted. Everything combined, she often comes off as eccentric and bizarre to others.
For all of her antics, Xion seems the perfect fit for a loudmouth, yet she's surprisingly quiet. She's not one to mince words, but she also doesn't babble unnecessarily. She'll say what she wants to say and that's it. It's because she needs silence to see. As someone blind, sound plays a large part in how Xion senses the world around her. She likes to talk, but she also won't let her talk impede her "vision" when it doesn't need to. Xion does weird things but she's not dumb and she's not looking forward to an early grave, either. Besides, speech isn't the only way to convey ideas. Xion's facial expressions and actions are often more than enough to confound friends and foes alike.
Xion is terrible at reading people. Being blind, she can't rely on facial clues, no duh. However, she never really bothered with learning aural cues, either. She can tell the obvious, but it's all too easy to lie to her. Her preference for having faith rather than distrust in someone only adds to her gullibility. In a way, this also applies to herself. Xion is terrible at lying and she's never learned how to hide her emotions so they're always all out for display right on her face.
Village: Kumogakure Title: Genin Rank: D First Class:Sensor Second Class:Medical
Chakra Pool: 425 Stamina Pool: 75 Chakra Element: Wind, Earth Chakra Color: Red Chakra Materialization: Loosely entwines around her like string
Strengths: • Sees more with her eyes closed. • A pillar of support for others. • Getting dressed in a maid outfit. Weaknesses: • Blinder than a bat, both physically and socially. • Any sort of combat. • A very fragile pillar of support for others. • Putting on anything besides a maid outfit. Fears: • The dark. Well, her dark, which is when she can't sense anything, be it through chakra, touch, smell, hearing, or taste. • Dying forgotten. She doesn't need or particularly want to be famous. She just fears vanishing from the memories of those who once knew her.
Class Disciplines : • Zoom - The user has a vast eye, able to quadruple the range of a given sensory technique, often allowing them to sense things even outside of the given area (across threads). This vast range, however, makes it difficult to detect fine details. The user is only able to know that chakra is there, or that chakra is being activated. Things like type of technique, rank, element, ect, are unknown to the user. • Specialist - The user, choosing to specialize in healing medical techniques, gains a great boost to their chakra control in that area. At Chunnin, they gain a -5 chakra reduction to perform techniques in their specialty. at Jounin, -10, at Konin -15 at Sannin -20. To clarify, they they gain a -5 chakra reduction every rank, to a maximum of -20 at sannin. All medical jutsu are still learnable by both sides, but the chakra control only applies to the chosen side. Reductions: • Learn ninjutsu two [2] posts faster. • Learn genjutsu two [2] posts faster. • Learn Medical techniques one (1) post faster. Personal Attributes: • Blind Resolution: Xion was born blind, a curse placed upon her for her parents' faults. For that reason, she will never experience sight. No ocular implant can restore her vision and even genjutsu cannot imitate the sensation of sight for her. In exchange, being blind has rewired Xion's brain to enhance her other senses, primarily the ability for her hearing and chakra sensing to pick out minute details (but not necessarily an increase in what both senses pick up) but also her smell and even touch to gather what little details they can. Using very basic echolocation mixed in with other minute details like the feel of the air on her skin, Xion has a rough idea of her surroundings up to 5 meters away; e.g. enough to pick out someone/thing rushing to her but not enough to understand the details of the approach beyond size, general shape, distance, and direction. Furthermore, she gains the Resolution sensor class discipline, overwriting the limits of resolution and zoom (if she has both) for their strengths. • Live to Serve: Even compared to other Miyamoto clan members, Xion has a terrible body for combat. On top of the fortitude decrease from her bloodline, she also has a moderate physical strength decrease. However, where she lacks physically, she makes up for spiritually. All of Xion's Seirei no Hogosha ability increasing techniques are a limit-breaking moderately more potent.
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|c α r є є r • ∂ α т α|├▬ Ryo: 両 0 AC: 0
Missions Complete: D Rank :: 0 C Rank :: 0 B Rank :: 0 A Rank :: 0 S Rank :: 0
Crafting Jobs Complete: D Rank :: 0 C Rank :: 0 B Rank :: 0 A Rank :: 0 S Rank :: 0
Limitations: {How many of each technique you can learn. Refer to class info} • Ninjutsu : : 08 / 00 • Genjutsu : : 08 / 00 • Taijutsu Styles: : 00 / 00 • Bukijutsu Styles: : 00 / 00
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|ω є α ρ σ η • ∂ α т α|├▬ Weapon Type: White cane Weapon Range: 3' Weapon Weight: 2 lbs. Weapon Location: Back • A white cane that stretches from the ground to Xion's sternum. Xion primarily uses this to warn her of any obstacles in her way, but it's sturdy enough to be used as a blunt weapon.
Summoning Type: Not yet at least Summon Sage: No Pacts: No
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▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|т є c н η ι q υ є ѕ|├▬ ▬▬┤|N i n j u t s u Maruton: {Start with the following six only} • Henge no Jutsu [ Transformation Technique ] • Kawarimi no Jutsu [ Substitution Technique ] • Bushin no Jutsu [ Clone Technique ] • Suimen Hokou no Waza [ Act of Water Surface Walking ] • Kinobori no Waza [ Act of Tree Climbing ] • Kai [ Release ]
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Fuuton •
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Seirei no Hogosha • ▬▬┤|G e n j u t s u • {If none, remove section} ▬▬┤|F o r m l e s s S t y l e Projectile Weapons: Throwing Knives [Locked] • {D-rank} + {Training Link} • {C-rank} + {Training Link} • {B-rank} + {Training Link} • {A-rank} + {Training Link} • {S-rank} + {Training Link} • {S+rank} + {Training Link}
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▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|н ι ѕ т σ r у|├▬ Xion's story begins before she was born. Her parents, adventurous folk like her, stumbled upon some ancient Indian burial grounds and may have started a fight there without really thinking too hard about the consequences. For their transgression, their first-born, Xion, was cursed to be blind upon birth.
And that's why Xion is blind.
When she was born blind, as the curse had promised, Xion's family were at a loss of what to do. While irresponsible in many ways, one of the few responsibilities her parents took seriously were their duties to the mercenary group they belonged to. A blind child would only be a burden with no place in what essentially amounted to a group of traveling fighters, so they could not raise her. At the same time, they could not heartlessly abandon her. They weren't quite that terrible at parenting.
However, blind or not, Xion had inherited the Seirei no Hogosha bloodline. As with any bloodline limit, there was power in that potential. Her bloodline revealed itself when she was only six, and with that reveal came people who valued that power even in a blind girl. In the end, the Hiraite family of the Land of Iron adopted her about a year after her powers first revealed themselves. They hoped that they could cultivate her into a support for their son, Musunde, that would magnify his talents rather than eclipsing them.
Musunde was only two years old when the Hiraite family adopted Xion and seven year old Xion had a lot to learn before she could even be relied on to perform the most basic tasks in the Hiraite household. She didn't come completely untrained, but as a six year old, there were still a lot of tricks and shortcuts she had yet to discover and master to help herself along. Luckily, the Hiraite weren't strangers to employing the handicapped. There was another blind servant in their employment, and he served as Xion's mentor in helping her figure out the household without the sight that many others took for granted. He taught Xion how to take care of herself and earn her keep while she matured. After all, for all the myriad hopes in her bloodline, it still needed to mature before it could be trained and honed. Before the first year passed, Xion had already learned how to handle the medley of age appropriate tasks she was given. They were only a little more than the chores other kids her age would have had to deal with. The rest of her time was spent being a kid: learning, training, and playing. Her position was never forgotten but the Hiraite family wasn't cruel. In fact, compared to the always traveling life of mercenary groups, she was arguably better off living as a servant in the Hiraite family.
Xion spent her days bustling back and forth with chores and play. As the years passed, she naturally got to knew the few other children in the Hiraite household. Most of the other children were servants like her, but there was also the young master, Musunde. Xion often got in trouble for calling Musunde, "Musubi." All in good fun, of course. She never teased him with it. It was more of an unwanted and frowned upon nickname. In fact, pretty much all of the other children Xion knew got an equally silly nickname (and she would call the adults by their silly nicknames whenever she thought they weren't listening). Of course, she would get in trouble for daring to call the young master something so preposterous but eventually the adults got tired of lecturing her over it and just gave in.
The purpose of Xion's adoption did not change much over the years, though. Her training was coming along at an almost painfully slow rate because of the obstacles presented by her lack of sight and a lack of a teacher to guide her bloodline studies, but she was more than competent in the rest of her studies and work. As a result, when Musunde turned ten, the fifteen year old Xion began working as one of his personal servants. A rather complete lack of ambition and the continued habit of almost completely ignoring the young master's status, of which "Musubi" was one of the most common crimes, kept her from being assigned a more spectacular role for the four or so years she served under him.
Even without any sort of super special, unique position, though, by virtue of their similar-ish ages, the two naturally came to be friends, just like most other kids who were close in age and lived near each other (or literally in the same house as was Xion's and Musubi's case). Xion basically grew up having to be aware of the precious young master's well-being from even when she was just a small kid. Likewise, Musubi grew up either interacting with Xion through play or, as his play time shrunk with the growing of his age, through the care she provided him alongside his other servants.
Despite knowing each other for most of their lives, though, Musunde told Xion none of his plans to escape his house. It just happened one night, and 19 year old Xion happened to taking a nighttime stroll without a light. She caught 14 year old Musunde in the act of running away when he bumped right into her because he hadn't seen her in his rush. Their meeting was mildly comical and ended with Xion laughing loudly. Musunde set back to escaping quite quickly when the laugh started. As he feared, the laugh attracted guards, who Xion distracted in her eccentric fashion. She lost them somewhere in the long convoluted joke she made up on the spot to explain her laughter. The guards were befuddled, but they were none the wiser and shooed Xion, who they knew well after all these years, away. Xion's reasons for the save were, as usual, rather flighty. Musunde may have never trusted Xion enough to share his dreams with her, but Xion could sort of guess that they were probably something like her own goal to one day travel the wide world. She was envious, but to her, that was just more reason to help him.
Xion and the others who focused on caring for the young master were, of course, blamed for his sudden disappearance. They all received minor punishment before being reassigned to different posts until the young master could be found. If the Hiraite family had known what she had done that night, then maybe there would be something to actually punish her for, but no one connected Xion's little but distracting mishaps with Musubi's escape. After all, it wasn't strange for her to be weird.
However, about two years after the young master's disappearance, 19 year old Xion was let go. She displayed no progress in developing, much less improving, her bloodline abilities and her attitude wasn't showing any signs of improving either. She was old enough for the family to let her go without a guilty conscience. Blind as she was, Xion didn't mind being fired at all. She wasn't scared, either. She could still walk and she could still perform small odd jobs to earn her keep while on the road. If anything, this was a great chance. She was raised enough to be self-sufficient. Rather than spending her years cooped up under a family's strict orders, she could travel the world as she pleased. Freedom was great.
For about a year, Xion traveled with no end in sight. Then, one day, she came upon Kumogakure. At first, it was just one of many stops. Although, it did have the novelty of being a ninja village, something Xion had visited before but didn't come across often. She was meandering about it in her usual custom when she heard a familiar and completely unexpected voice: Musubi's. He didn't say much, and it was in a crowd so Xion ultimately lost the trail (or maybe he intentionally fled the scene). However, she did not doubt what she heard and what that meant: Musubi was in the village, and that was kind of interesting. The interesting thought attracted several other reasons to join a ninja village--learning how to use her bloodline, gaining new skills, ninjas probably had lots of opportunities to travel even while earning a steady income. On the spot and mostly on a whim, Xion decided to join Kumogakure.
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Using Christmas Gift on her as well.
Rewards: Smithing title x2 Veterinary Emergency - Life Savior Human Emergency - Life Savior Santa's Library #3 - +5 Eiseijutsu for Astrid +5 ninjutsu for Kran
Wisdom - gains 10 jutsu slots, +5 eisei for Astrid, +5 for Kran
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|ρ є r ѕ σ η α ℓ • ∂ α т α|├▬ Full Name: Astrid Nickname:
Age: 16 Birthdate: September 13th Gender: Female Appearance: Astrid has a slim and slender with slightly long legs which has her adept and skilled in running. Barely toned, Astrid would be unlucky to face physical combat if not trained properly. Narrow chest with slightly wide hips; she has more of a pear figurine. She has freckles on her cheeks [enough to consider if it's more than the starry sky] as well along the bridge of her nose. Her hair is mostly wild fiery orange/red mixture with eyes of emerald green or even oceanic blues
Height: 5'07" Weight: 133lbs
Nindo: N/A [Haven't rp with her enough] Personality: Shy and timid, she usually keeps herself. However, there are few moments, when she would suddenly become very open and would speak her mind. Those moments are very rare and it only happens when Astrid is triggered.
Village: Konohagakure Title: Genin Rank: D-Rank First Class: Medical Second Class: Tamer
Chakra Pool: 325/325 Stamina Pool: 175/175 Chakra Element: Doton and Katon Chakra Color: Black with earthy green Chakra Materialization: Flames around the hoofs and his muzzle.
Strengths: • Speed • Ninjutsu Weaknesses: • Bukijutsu • Taijutsu Fears: • Astrid's Death • Broken Leg or back
Limitations: • Ninjutsu : : 00 / 20
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|т є c н η ι q υ є ѕ|├▬ ▬▬┤|N i n j u t s u Maruton: • Henge no Jutsu [ Transformation Technique ] • Kawarimi no Jutsu [ Substitution Technique ] • Bushin no Jutsu [ Clone Technique ] • Suimen Hokou no Waza [ Act of Water Surface Walking ] • Kinobori no Waza [ Act of Tree Climbing ] • Kai [ Release ]
Doton •
Katon •
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|c σ м в α т • ∂ α т α|├▬ Bloodline: Wisdom Wisdom: +1 PA, +2 custom techs, 10 jutsu slots
Chakra Pool: 325/325 Stamina Pool: 175/175 Chakra Element: Doton and Fuuton Chakra Color: Mint green with teal blue Chakra Materialization: Gentle wind wisping around her
Strengths: • Healing • Running/Speed Weaknesses: • Taijutsu • Bukijutsu Fears: • Kran's death • Watching someone die and unable to heal/stop it
Class Disciplines : • Healing Specialist: The user, choosing to specialize in either healing or harmful medical techniques, gains a great boost to their chakra control in that area. At Chunnin, they gain a -5 chakra reduction to perform techniques in their specialty. at Jounin, -10, at Konin -15 at Sannin -20. To clarify, they they gain a -5 chakra reduction every rank, to a maximum of -20 at sannin. All medical jutsu are still learnable by both sides, but the chakra control only applies to the chosen side. • Eternal Partners: The user is able to nurture, grow, and bond with a single animal, almost becoming an animal themselves with traits, characteristics, and natural weaponry. This single animal will be exactly the same at the user's level in chakra and stamina pool, and able to manipulate any two elements, and perform 3 activations a post (max of 2 offensive) For every rank the user increases, they can claim a trait associated with their chosen animal (communicate with species, natural weaponry, senses, ect) to be approved in the custom jutsu thread, and add it to their character. Reductions: • Learns Eiseijutsu one post faster • Learns Taijutsu one post faster • Learns Ninjutsu two posts faster • Medical jobs two posts faster • Non-medical jobs one post slower Personal Attributes: • Jutsu Apprentice: Able to learn Ninjutsu two posts quicker but Bukijutsu one post slower • Medic at Work: Any non-medical jobs takes one post slower to finish. Yet for medic job, it's two posts faster to finish. • Fast Thinker: Can do hand signs with one hand instead of two to help quickly perform needed jutsu in emergency to help or get out.
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|c α r є є r • ∂ α т α|├▬ Ryo: 両0 AC: 0
Missions Complete: D Rank :: 0 C Rank :: 0 B Rank :: 0 A Rank :: 0 S Rank :: 0
Veterinary Emergency: Life Saver D Rank :: 0 C Rank :: 0 B Rank :: 0 A Rank :: 0 S Rank :: 0
Human Emergency: Life Saver D Rank :: 0 C Rank :: 0 B Rank :: 0 A Rank :: 0 S Rank :: 0
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|т є c н η ι q υ є ѕ|├▬ ▬▬┤|N i n j u t s u Maruton: • Henge no Jutsu [ Transformation Technique ] • Kawarimi no Jutsu [ Substitution Technique ] • Bushin no Jutsu [ Clone Technique ] • Suimen Hokou no Waza [ Act of Water Surface Walking ] • Kinobori no Waza [ Act of Tree Climbing ] • Kai [ Release ]
Doton •
Fuuton •
Eiseijutsu • ▬▬┤|G e n j u t s u • ▬▬┤|T a i j u t s u {Style name here} • {Stage progression / techniques learned}
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|н ι ѕ т σ r у|├▬ Born somewhere, she was left at the doorstep of the Konohagakure's Orphanage. She showed high Chakra, but even as a child, the young girl would avoid battles and try to hide underneath any objects the tiny petite child could fit into if a fight broke out. Being pushed to go to the academy, she showed amazing skills in Eiseijutsu. They decided to keep her in the academy; while she may never fight or would be unable to fight, at least she could keep the shinobi of the Konohagakure and its civilians, alive. Around the age of 14, Astrid went to the forest to escape from people for a bit and she heard a cry. It was a cry for mom. Tracked down, she found a beautiful baby mammal, unknown of its species, she waited for hours with it for the mom to return. She never did return. The moon went down and the baby cries were getting quieter and quieter, even as Astrid approached it, it didn't move at all. It was so weak from hunger. Astrid figured that the mother must've died, she wouldn't leave her baby alone for days. With little strength the young medic in training had, she picked up the baby deer and somehow, made it back to the village. She placed him in a bush to hide him and ran off to get him some milk and grass, not sure if he was weaned. He wasn't. Gave him milk, as he got older and stronger, he started to eat grass. At the age of one, she tried to get him to go back to the forest, but he wouldn't leave her side. At all. A fellow Shinobi caught them together and explained to the girl that he too, had high chakra levels and thought of them to be tamer and partner. For a really long time, Astrid was able to put off her Academy graduation, until a teacher picked up to what she was doing on purpose. Now, she's a graduated student with the knowledge but she acted like she didn't during the school in hopes to never graduated. Alas, she still graduated and now was a Konohagakure's Solider. Medic. Somewhere around there.
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Posted: Wed Dec 28, 2016 3:47 am
Rexnov
I think your personal attributes are approvable and rather well done. Only issue im seeing is your weapons length but im nitpicky about these things. Completely approachable but when a one handed sword reaches five foot it becomes a two handed b*****d sword. fairly hard to swing and recover safely at the 5 foot mark.
Approved.
Paris_Decay
Approachable after one minor change. I think steel weapons are something we have to upgrade to. Iron is starting stuff. Approved after minor change.
lanfaer
Double check this please? Dont want to delay there posting further.
HeadlessKoko
Approved. Careful with blind characters. Your senses dont increase to superhuman levels like hollywood would have us believe when you remove eyesight.
Lily Platypus
Please clarify your third attribute? If its post reductions for learning id say this is fine. If its time till effect it doesn't make much sense with the offensive ninjutsu needing a charge time for everything; but you could have that if you wanted. Be a major downfall.
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