Poetry Contest

[Panda--Chan]

...or make it a tie again xD  

[Sir naphalatha]

for third place, its going to tie! we'll have to have a tie breaker vote...i know! in that instance. patchstar could choose who gets it.  

[Panda--Chan]

it's not a tie now.

i think we have a winner moonflower~when can we start submitting for the next contest?  

[little_moon_girl]

Sorry I'm so late! I guess there won't be a Jan. contest (I'll explain everthing later). But we can start submition for Feb.'s contest! 3nodding  

[Currently Dead Account]

Hedgehog908

oh oh oh oh!!!! ok I'll get it this time (thanks Bearclaw blaugh )
ah-h-h-h-hem

silently dripping
cat claws sheath around me
forest quiet. . . .snow
THERE I DID IT!!!!!
POINT FOR CINDERSTAR OH YA!!!!

thats a little wrong 2nd line needs seven not six srry  

[Akiko-infinity]

okay, here's my submission!

it's a free-verse, cuz it sounds strained when I try to rhyme.

Every Action
tugs on that eternal web,
shifting the strings near it.

Ripples are created,
that grow into waves
churning in that eternal sea.

The waves crash on the shore,
eating away at forever.
Slowly it crumbles.

Forever fades away,
leaving only nothingness.

nothingness gradually slips away,
revealing a future
that reflects only the past-
the past forever that faded away.

An eternal cycle.
It never stops turning.
Not for us,
not for anything.  

[little_moon_girl]

Ankiko, what's your warrior name?  

[Currently Dead Account]

im writing a poem about my life, it happened not to long ago and i never saw him again well here it is:

my love, my love for you and your warmth
when i feel you im under your spell
the spell of your love
your always there
and you always were but now that will change
you'll be gone, out of my reach
like a bird above the treetops

my love for you is gone
and it may never come back
i hope to see you again
for i feel so warm when your with me
warm from your love an comfort
come back and meet me

ill be waiting
ill be waiting for you to come back
i will always wait for you
but i must say goodbye




my warrior name is Dewpool/Lushkit  

[Currently Dead Account]

little_moon_girl

Ankiko, what's your warrior name?

i no it her warrior name is Firesong  

[Akiko-infinity]

Yup! I'm Firesong!  

[tryingtoescapereality]

I know it sounds depressing- but it's not about me! It's about Zoe 3nodding

Zoe Nightshade

I do not trust you
Neither do I them
In this dark, sinister world
all must end

If the light were to flicker on
the black seeping away
what could happen to my sorrowful song
can night possibly fade to day

Perhaps there is hope for thee
Perhaps you contain the sun
yet i shall remain me
the darkness I become

 

[little_moon_girl]

Isn't Zoe from the Percy Jackson and the Olympians series???  

[Winterstorm loves you]

WHO WINS!?  

[Panda--Chan]

I'm not the one to say on this but i would think Dewpool won --Two votes to one for firesong and bearclaw.

Ne, Moonflower?

can we start submitting for March?  

[Winterstorm loves you]

hmmmmmm......i wanted Bearclaw to win

Hey sorry Dewpool i may no u in real life but i liked her poem better. Your not the best at poetry.