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PostPosted: Mon Jun 27, 2016 9:18 pm
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Full Name: Tamiko Ketsueki
Nickname: Tammy

Age: 20
Birthdate: June 3rd
Gender: Female

Height: 62 inches
Weight: 175 lbs

Nindo: "To bring chaos a breakneck pace and bring the world to devastation."
Personality: She is generally a very labile person in personality, demanding at times as she will request of those around her to meet her standards, yet then there will be times where she is the sweetest person, considerate of each and every person who comes her way. She has a nasty habit of speaking in an ill tone when she wishes to speak positive things such as stating in a harsh tone some item is adorable as well as she will say in a pleasant tone for someone to kiss her a**. She is a person to make things confusing and chaotic just as it being her nature because of her desire to bring the world to devastation. She is not very humble unless she is speaking more positively; however, with her habit of speaking in an ill manner, her humbleness may be taken as insincere. She is very chaotic when it comes to speaking in general, muttering to herself and speaking in third person as well. Sometime within her childhood she developed an alternative personality which will result under deep amounts of stress in the personality coming out. This personality will be more psychotic and denying any emotion to be felt, even anger or hatred. She becomes such as a berserker type of person who loses all touch in reality. All she can think of at this point is to kill and consume who she kills, maybe keeping parts for later consumption.

Village: Gimangakure
Title: Wanderer
Rank: D-Rank
First Class: Ninjutsu
Second Class: Bloodline

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Bloodline: Saiketsu

Chakra Pool: 225+130 = 355
Stamina Pool: 25+120=145
Chakra Element: Water
Chakra Color: Black
Chakra Materialization: Forms around the body like a black ectoplasm-like dripping blood going upwards from the body.

Strengths:
• Excellent in close combat, especially with weapons.
• Excellent with Suiton jutsu and techniques.
Weaknesses:
• Mindless when it comes to psychotic breaks
• Elemental weakness to Doton.
Fears:
• Theophobia: Fear of gods or religion
• Psychophobia: Fear of mind
• Cypridophobia: Fear of prostitutes or venereal disease

Class Disciplines :
• Elemental Specialist: You are only able to have one (1) chosen chakra element. Your elemental ninjutsu possess greater power, allowing them to overwhelm techniques of the same element and rank, and preventing them from succumbing to elemental weaknesses. You begin with two (2) additional ninjutsu slots, and earn an additional three (3) ninjutsu slots whenever you rank up.
• Blood Knight: Your bloodline techniques possess greater power, allowing them to overwhelm techniques of the same rank, and preventing them from succumbing to elemental weaknesses of techniques the same rank. Can cast bloodline techniques through one-handed seals.

Reductions:
• Learn ninjutsu one (1) post faster.
• Learn bloodline techniques one (1) post faster.
Personal Attributes:
• Umbra Eyes: Her eyes have a black sclera and bright crimson red iris, due to a congenital injury in the womb. She is unable to see and is generally considered blind, but she developed a blood vision where she is able to see blood, any structure or person splashed with blood, and just in generally using anything blood related to see. She can use water to see as well, but vaporized water or misty water will cause a cloudy vision. She can use water to see because water, to some degree, is a part of blood.
• Expert Thief: Able to do missions or steal money with 1.5x money gained.


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Ryo: 両 0
AC: 0

Missions Complete:
D Rank :: 0 {All start at zero}
C Rank :: 0
B Rank :: 0
A Rank :: 0
S Rank :: 0

Crafting Jobs Complete:
D Rank :: 0 {All start at zero}
C Rank :: 0
B Rank :: 0
A Rank :: 0
S Rank :: 0

Limitations:
• Ninjutsu : : 00 / 10
• Genjutsu : : 00 / 03
• Taijutsu Styles: : 00 / 01
• Bukijutsu Styles: : 00 / 00

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Weapon Type: Serrated Sickle
Weapon Range: Blade Length is 10 inches
Weapon Weight: 5-7 lbs
Weapon Location: Her belt

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• Shuriken x10
• 5 Pouches on a belt
• 5 Kunai
• A small bottle filled with red liquid

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Maruton: {Start with the following six only}
• Henge no Jutsu [ Transformation Technique ]
• Kawarimi no Jutsu [ Substitution Technique ]
• Bushin no Jutsu [ Clone Technique ]
• Suimen Hokou no Waza [ Act of Water Surface Walking ]
• Kinobori no Waza [ Act of Tree Climbing ]
• Kai [ Release ]

Suiton



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▬▬┤|T a i j u t s u

{Formless}


▬▬┤|B u k i j u t s u

{Kamakiri no Tsume }


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Born into a world where she could not see due to a complication in birth and in the womb, Tamiko had to slowly show the world she was not one to trifle with as she worked with the eyes she was born with to begin able to see through the use of blood or water like substances because of her vision. She even nicknamed her eyes Umbra Shisen as they were black like the blackest part of the darkness around her except for the red lines of blood veins from others she could see. Her parents at a young age were clear about teaching her the standards of Saiketsu and the ideals of the clan, but Tamiko soon met with a day where she would eventually destroy her potential future as a shinobi.

One such day of her bullying was just a year after she had started the training of Saiketsu and a group of boys felt the need to start calling her names, such as a blood demon as she had the eyes of one might assume was demonic. She also could not see and these boys knew this. The movements of the boys were more thuggish than uniform nor did they flow with the technique of experienced warriors. One quick movement during a struggle as Tamiko could make out the blood veins of the boys resulted in one boy's jugular being cut and blood flowing from the wound as well as splash against the surface beneath their feets. Tamiko smiled, looking up at the boys and took a cup of her hand with the blood within it, splashing it upon the boys to get a better look at them. through the blood splatter.

Tamiko took to summoning up her own courage to focus her energy towards pulling blood from her pours, directing her hand at one boy and launched 15 crimson needles from her hand at the boy and hitting him within his chest as the boy stood stunned after his friend's throat was slashed. The other boys shook their head and one began to run as the other went forward with an attack. The one who went forward for the attack met with a crimson blade right through his neck and Tamiko groaned as she felt the dehydration of her hand. Her hand seemed to shrivel through the draining of blood from her hand to form a sharpened katana like blade, sharp enough to slice through the boy's neck. The next and last boy who had started to run, met his end by the blade slice through his chest as he stopped in the middle of the road over from where his friends just died. Tamiko took each of these boys to an abandon building and began to drain their bodies of blood, saving what she had done for use later on in her days if someone attempted to bully her again.

Sadly, there were witnesses and eventually Tamiko was exiled from Kirigakure to wander at just the mere age of 16. That was four years ago and now Tamiko is known as a blood demon even now as she kills and consumes those she does, draining their blood for her use of vision and eventual techniques should she develop any.



Bloodline Approval  
PostPosted: Mon Jun 27, 2016 9:27 pm
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Full Name: Tamiko Ketsueki
Nickname: Tammy

Age: 20
Birthdate: June 3rd
Gender: Female

Height: 62 inches
Weight: 175 lbs

Nindo: "To bring chaos a breakneck pace and bring the world to devastation."
Personality: She is generally a very labile person in personality, demanding at times as she will request of those around her to meet her standards, yet then there will be times where she is the sweetest person, considerate of each and every person who comes her way. She has a nasty habit of speaking in an ill tone when she wishes to speak positive things such as stating in a harsh tone some item is adorable as well as she will say in a pleasant tone for someone to kiss her a**. She is a person to make things confusing and chaotic just as it being her nature because of her desire to bring the world to devastation. She is not very humble unless she is speaking more positively; however, with her habit of speaking in an ill manner, her humbleness may be taken as insincere. She is very chaotic when it comes to speaking in general, muttering to herself and speaking in third person as well. Sometime within her childhood she developed an alternative personality which will result under deep amounts of stress in the personality coming out. This personality will be more psychotic and denying any emotion to be felt, even anger or hatred. She becomes such as a berserker type of person who loses all touch in reality. All she can think of at this point is to kill and consume who she kills, maybe keeping parts for later consumption.

Village: Gimangakure
Title: Wanderer
Rank: D-Rank
First Class: Ninjutsu
Second Class: Bloodline

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Bloodline: Saiketsu

Chakra Pool: 225+130 = 355
Stamina Pool: 25+120=145
Chakra Element: Water
Chakra Color: Black
Chakra Materialization: Forms around the body like a black ectoplasm-like dripping blood going upwards from the body.

Strengths:
• Excellent in close combat, especially with weapons.
• Excellent with Suiton jutsu and techniques.
Weaknesses:
• Mindless when it comes to psychotic breaks
• Elemental weakness to Doton.
Fears:
• Theophobia: Fear of gods or religion
• Psychophobia: Fear of mind
• Cypridophobia: Fear of prostitutes or venereal disease

Class Disciplines :
• Elemental Specialist: You are only able to have one (1) chosen chakra element. Your elemental ninjutsu possess greater power, allowing them to overwhelm techniques of the same element and rank, and preventing them from succumbing to elemental weaknesses. You begin with two (2) additional ninjutsu slots, and earn an additional three (3) ninjutsu slots whenever you rank up.
• Blood Knight: Your bloodline techniques possess greater power, allowing them to overwhelm techniques of the same rank, and preventing them from succumbing to elemental weaknesses of techniques the same rank. Can cast bloodline techniques through one-handed seals.

Reductions:
• Learn ninjutsu one (1) post faster.
• Learn bloodline techniques one (1) post faster.
Personal Attributes:
• Umbra Eyes: Her eyes have a black sclera and bright crimson red iris, due to a congenital injury in the womb. She is unable to see and is generally considered blind, but she developed a blood vision where she is able to see blood, any structure or person splashed with blood, and just in generally using anything blood related to see. She can use water to see as well, but vaporized water or misty water will cause a cloudy vision. She can use water to see because water, to some degree, is a part of blood.
• Expert Thief: Able to do missions or steal money with 1.5x money gained.


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Ryo: 両 0
AC: 0

Missions Complete:
D Rank :: 0 {All start at zero}
C Rank :: 0
B Rank :: 0
A Rank :: 0
S Rank :: 0

Crafting Jobs Complete:
D Rank :: 0 {All start at zero}
C Rank :: 0
B Rank :: 0
A Rank :: 0
S Rank :: 0

Limitations:
• Ninjutsu : : 00 / 10
• Genjutsu : : 00 / 03
• Taijutsu Styles: : 00 / 01
• Bukijutsu Styles: : 00 / 00

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Weapon Type: Serrated Sickle
Weapon Range: Blade Length is 10 inches
Weapon Weight: 5-7 lbs
Weapon Location: Her belt

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• Shuriken x10
• 5 Pouches on a belt
• 5 Kunai
• A small bottle filled with red liquid

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▬▬┤|N i n j u t s u

Maruton: {Start with the following six only}
• Henge no Jutsu [ Transformation Technique ]
• Kawarimi no Jutsu [ Substitution Technique ]
• Bushin no Jutsu [ Clone Technique ]
• Suimen Hokou no Waza [ Act of Water Surface Walking ]
• Kinobori no Waza [ Act of Tree Climbing ]
• Kai [ Release ]

Suiton



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▬▬┤|T a i j u t s u

{Formless}


▬▬┤|B u k i j u t s u

{Kamakiri no Tsume }


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Born into a world where she could not see due to a complication in birth and in the womb, Tamiko had to slowly show the world she was not one to trifle with as she worked with the eyes she was born with to begin able to see through the use of blood or water like substances because of her vision. She even nicknamed her eyes Umbra Shisen as they were black like the blackest part of the darkness around her except for the red lines of blood veins from others she could see. Her parents at a young age were clear about teaching her the standards of Saiketsu and the ideals of the clan, but Tamiko soon met with a day where she would eventually destroy her potential future as a shinobi.

One such day of her bullying was just a year after she had started the training of Saiketsu and a group of boys felt the need to start calling her names, such as a blood demon as she had the eyes of one might assume was demonic. She also could not see and these boys knew this. The movements of the boys were more thuggish than uniform nor did they flow with the technique of experienced warriors. One quick movement during a struggle as Tamiko could make out the blood veins of the boys resulted in one boy's jugular being cut and blood flowing from the wound as well as splash against the surface beneath their feets. Tamiko smiled, looking up at the boys and took a cup of her hand with the blood within it, splashing it upon the boys to get a better look at them. through the blood splatter.

Tamiko took to summoning up her own courage to focus her energy towards pulling blood from her pours, directing her hand at one boy and launched 15 crimson needles from her hand at the boy and hitting him within his chest as the boy stood stunned after his friend's throat was slashed. The other boys shook their head and one began to run as the other went forward with an attack. The one who went forward for the attack met with a crimson blade right through his neck and Tamiko groaned as she felt the dehydration of her hand. Her hand seemed to shrivel through the draining of blood from her hand to form a sharpened katana like blade, sharp enough to slice through the boy's neck. The next and last boy who had started to run, met his end by the blade slice through his chest as he stopped in the middle of the road over from where his friends just died. Tamiko took each of these boys to an abandon building and began to drain their bodies of blood, saving what she had done for use later on in her days if someone attempted to bully her again.

Sadly, there were witnesses and eventually Tamiko was exiled from Kirigakure to wander at just the mere age of 16. That was four years ago and now Tamiko is known as a blood demon even now as she kills and consumes those she does, draining their blood for her use of vision and eventual techniques should she develop any.



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PostPosted: Tue Jun 28, 2016 2:38 am
Wolfe Whitehorn

~Main Changes~
((Integrity Package Lost, -15 Ch/Stam, -2 Custom Techniques, -1 Pa))
((P.A's Added, [Eyes of Enlightenment] & [Heroes Will], P.A's Replaced/Removed, [Dazzling Display], [Volatile Passion], and [Narcissist]))
((Added the ability to treat Aka-Teien as a conduit as if it were one flower and administering an emotive on strike. If necessary I'll put it back up in custom weapons with this change))

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Full Name: Nakichō Genshukuna (Translates into a combination of Solemn Weeping and Butterfly)
Nickname: {Nakibro}

Age: 21
Birthdate: Feb 17
Gender: Male

Height: 6'3, 72 in, 182.88 cent
Weight: 156/70.7 kg

Nindo: "The world revolves solely around the strong and charismatic."
Personality: Nakichō upon achieving his Chunin entitlement has become a more responsible yet semi-paranoid individual. Unsure of how to handle his current position he's devoted himself to taking the positive route invigorating route...cutting down on the theatric just a pinch. His promotion has produced a physical streak. In other words he is no longer afraid to sully his name with a firm hand should someone become mouthy or disrespectful. His egotism has decreased several fold as he has now become a more team oriented individual seeking to better anyone under his authority. Nakichō is very eccentric and flamboyant almost borderline excessive typically rhyming or accentuating his speech for a greater impact as if to garner more attention though this has been reserved for unprofessional gatherings. Nakichō is well aware of the fact he is well endowed across the entirety of his body physically unfortunately his mentality could still use a little sharpening. Despite his now semi-pompous attitude he is loyal to authority and is often revered for his chivalry.

Village: Konohakagure
Body Rank: Chunin
Title Rank: Chunin
First Class: Bukijutsu
Second Class: Bukijutsu

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Bloodline:
Raigyo


Chakra Pool:340
Stamina Pool: 340
Chakra Affinity: Earth,Wind
Chakra Materialization: On a minor release it appears as a simple pinkish aura. An excessive release reveals a blooming rose.

Strengths:
• Elegant Egotist: Nakichō's combat approach is particularly morale based. His strength lies in his self confidence. The more his self confidence increases the greater his combat efficiency. However, legitimate insults do the vise versa until he reaches a breaking point where nothing but pure unadulterated rage is behind each swing.
• Charismatic Combatant: Diplomacy and Bluffing come to him as second nature in addition to this he's highly proficient at picking up an individual's mental weakness and exploiting it in combat.
Weaknesses:
• Disheartening Dissonance: As much a strength as it is a weakness if Nakichō is consistently berated by an ally or an enemy and their insults hold viable ground his attacks will grow more sloppy, pathetic, and lacking any impact. If the berating gets too excessive however he will go into a fit of rage showing lack of temper.
• Chivalrous Reluctance: When fighting the opposite sex if the individual has not instigated any form of mental or physical hostility toward Nakichō directly he cannot perform at his full capacity.
• Honor bound: He cannot harm another member of the Raigyo clan that carries the eyes or holds a higher branch position which is to say all Raigyo clan members aside from his own family.
• Well of Emotion: Despite the Raigyo's well known working with emotions Nakicho can considered easily dissuaded himself as he is an emotional creature to his very core.
Fears:
• Utterly Worthless: Dying a pointless death and not living up to expectations
• Global Vilification: To be hated by everyone for everything you do despite how hard one tries to achieve acceptance.
• Raving Responsibility: Having a member of a unit he is in charge of suffer and or die.

Class Disciplines :
• Weapon Specialist:The user Gains a free custom weapon slot, while forsaking the ability to learn ninjutsu for the ability to learn more than 1 rigorous style (styles still count for 2 slots). With their inability to learn ninjutsu, they get to learn [1] additional bukijutsu style for every 10 ninjutsu slots their were supposed to acquire. Their depth and devotion to the weapon arts allows their skill to increase with every rank allowing their weapons to cut through defensive bukijutsu techniques of the same rank.
•Mystic Hero: The user is much like a hybrid warrior, focusing on mixing ninjutsu into their personal arsenal. Through their great devotion to this path the user can cast ninjutsu without hand seals while wielding a weapon, D at gennin, C at chunnin, B at Jounin, A at Konin, and S at Sannin. These techniques maintain the same description and criteria to use, as well as require the same amount of time to mold the chakra through the weapon as would be needed to perform hand seals, meaning the techniques are not instantaneously cast. The user’s spirit is so strong, that they can utilize their physical bukijutsu techniques to negate ninjutsu techniques of the same rank or below.
• Specialization: the user starts with one [1] additional Bukijutsu slot. Superior conditioning allows the user to choose a specific energy cost (stamina or chakra) and reduce the costs of technique activation by 5, to a minimum activation cost of 5. Every time the user ranks up, they repeat this process. Energy Cost Reductions must be shown on the profile.

Reductions:
• Bukijutsu post reduction +3
• Bloodline post reduction +2
• Taijutsu post reduction +1
• Bloodline Ninjutsu post reduction +1
• Bloodline Genjutsu post reduction +1
• Specialization Cost Reduction -5 Stamina
• Specialization Cost Reduction -5 Chakra
• Gobblemonster Parade: 10 free training/missions posts x/10 Used
• Christmas 2015: 10 free training/missions posts x/10 Used >(See Table for most Recent Usages)

Personal Attributes:
• Enlightened Eyes: Nakicho gains bloodline technique reductions as if her were multi-classed as Buki/Bloodline however, he loses the current reductions of being considered Buki/Buki.
• Heroes Will : Still unable to use Genjutsu to its fullest extent despite awakening his eyes. Nakicho is unable to use any Genjutsu unless it's under his bloodlines capabilities. In exchange, his pursuit of heroism confers [2] Extra Taijutsu Styles.
•Mashed Ninja-tatoes: +1 Tai Slot, +50 Chakra and Stamina
•Christmas 2015: Selected: 2000 Ryo: 10 Free Mission/Training Posts
•Santa's Knowledge #2: -1 Taijutsu, -1 Bukijutsu

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Ryo: 両 (See Most Recent Total Table)
AC: (See Most Recent Total Table)
Missions Complete: (See Most Recent Total Table)
D Rank :: 0
C Rank :: 0
B Rank :: 0
A Rank :: 0
S Rank :: 0

Limitations: {How many of each technique you can learn. Refer to class info}
• Ninjutsu : : 00 / 06 (Nil)
• Genjutsu : : 00 / 00
• Taijutsu Styles: : 01 / 03
• Bukijutsu Styles: : 03/ 05
• Bonus Formless Slots +4

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Weapon Name:Aka-Teien 赤庭園 (Red Garden)

Weapon Type: Odachi
Weapon Location: Strapped to back
Weapon Height: 150cm, 60in, 5ft
Weapon Weight: 6.5lbs

Description: The Aka-Teien 赤庭園 (Red Garden) was a gift given to Nakichō by the Raigyo clan for his service in the lower branch. The weapon much like the clans style is reliant on emotion fluctuating between four states depending on the certain circumstances and the emotions of it's wielder. Nakicho can apply the Raigyo's emotives into Aka-Teien to force the labeled emotive unto an opponent. Aka-Teien in treated as a conduit for use of Raigyo techniques however, it cannot execute techniques that would otherwise require multiple conduits.

Ability Summary:
• First Form: Shidareyanagi シダレヤナギ (Weeping Willow)
The first form is a result that originates from a lack of will and self confidence in the user. The blade detects this lack of confidence and turns a dull grey. In this state is literally no stronger than a basic Odachi in fact one could say it's equivalent to a rusted Odachi. The Current Rank of the Style used in conjunction with the blade in this state is decreased by one down to a minimum of E. Shidareyanagi stacks with itself if the state does not change by the end of the two post duration. When Shidareyanagi is active the user can only use style techniques reflective of the current rank deduction. I.e. Naki is trained in B rank techniques those techniques would usually be weakened to C rank efficiency. However, he cannot use them at all. In addition The C Rank Skills he does have access to would be dropped to D Rank Efficiency.

•Second Form: Baranotsubomi バラのつぼみ (Rosebud)
The second form is the neutral state of the blade. The blade is a typical steel silver. However upon attacks self inflicted or otherwise it absorbs the blood of the injured location eventually until the blade grows red. Upon becoming red the blade becomes entirely serrated making injuries susceptible to cause hemorrhaging and muscle tearing. It takes a blood draw from the base of the blade to the tip before becoming red. This can be executed by the user as if performing a blood summoning by running a finger from the end to tip or causing a significant enough wound on the opponent. When red the blade can null jutsu one rank lower than the corresponding styles Rank. Up to 3 times before a new blood draw is required. Each Blood Draw costs 20 Stamina and 20 Chakra if self inflicted.

•Third Form: Tora yuri 虎ユリ (Tiger Lily)
The third form comes from extreme self confidence brought upon by reassurance, compliments, and praise from someone other than oneself and taking said words to heart. The blade begins to radiate becoming a vibrant yellow. It begins to buzz wildly and emanate white hot heat. The Blade is treated as one rank higher when used in conjunction with an associated style in this state up to the max rank applicable for the current wielder. The blades heat can cut through thin metals and foliage with ease. The blade can 'cut' through ninjutsu of it's level or below and or nullify ninjutsu of the same rank or lower entirely.(Fuuinjutsu included.)

•Fourth Form: Hōzuki ホオズキ (NightShade)
The fourth form is spawned from intense anger and self loathing. A thorny root sprouts from the blade injecting itself into the user's vein in their arm the blade turns a dark red with tinges of black. The user loses most reasoning and is filled with profound bloodlust. The blade then begins rapidly depleting it's hosts Chakra and Stamina as if a parasite. At 120 per post which can't be reduced unless the state changes. In exchange the host becomes heavily empowered in strength and speed but becomes heavily impaired in reflex,perception, and reasoning. In this State the blade cannot be damaged by any means and can 'cut' any Ninjutsu above the known styles rank by one up to the max rank applicable, it still however remains on par with Bukijutsu of it's rank. When either the users chakra or stamina is completely drained they immediately faint. All styles in this state are treated as hard formless.

Errata: A state excluding aesthetic states remains for a duration of two posts within those two posts if the user's emotion fluctuates the blade will respond to the emotional state from the last post made.

*Aesthetic States:States that have no combat implementation and are merely for show obviously correlating with mood.
The blade emits hues and scents in accordance with what would be a mood ring some other examples include;
Elated: The blade produces a constant sparkling effect.
Depressed: The blade emanates a solemn purple hue.
Embarrassment: The blade emits a pinkish hue.
Arousal: The blade emits a pleasing scent.

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• Ornate Coat: Looks nice, minimal protection, contains multiple pockets.
• Steel Arm Guards x2 (Thanksgiving Event, Cost 500 Ryo)
• Chunnin Flak Jacket (Thanksgiving Event, Cost 250 Ryo)
• Smoke Bombs x3 (Thanksgiving Event, Cost 100 Ryo)
• Wire 10 Yards x1 (Thanksgiving Event, Cost 100 Ryo)
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Maruton: {Start with the following six only}
• Henge no Jutsu [ Transformation Technique ]
• Kawarimi no Jutsu [ Substitution Technique ]
• Bushin no Jutsu [ Clone Technique ]
• Suimen Hokou no Waza [ Act of Water Surface Walking ]
• Kinobori no Waza [ Act of Tree Climbing ]
• Kai [ Release ]




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•Locked Formless: Large Swords: Oodachi: B
•Formless Style: Soft Physical: X

Slots used: 01 :: 08
Locked Style:Oodachi
• {D-rank} + {Gained at Genin]
• {C-rank} + {Gained at Chunnin}
• {B-rank} + {Pre-leveled}
• {A-rank} + {X}
• {S-rank} + {X}
• {S+rank} + {X}

Formless Style:Soft Physical
• {D-rank} + {X}
• {C-rank} + {X}
• {B-rank} + {X}
• {A-rank} + {X}
• {S-rank} + {X}
• {S+rank} + {X}

Hard Physical
• {D-rank} + {X}
• {C-rank} + {X}
• {B-rank} + {X}
• {A-rank} + {X}
• {S-rank} + {X}
• {S+rank} + {X}

{Bonus Slots}
• {Soft Physical B} + {X}
• {Soft Physical A} + {X}
• {Hard Physical D} + {X}
• {Hard Physical C} + {X}

{D-rank Slots}
• {Oodachi B} + {Pre-Leveled}
• {Oodachi A} + {X}
{C-rank Slots}
• {Soft Physical D} + {X}
• {Soft Physical C} + {X}
{B-rank Slots}
• {Z} + {X}
• {Z} + {X}
{A-rank Slots}
• {Z} + {X}
• {Z} + {X}
{S-rank Slots}
• {Z} + {X}
• {Z} + {X}

Technique Name:Honzon Sutansu [ Idol Stance ]
Rank: B: Spiritual
Type: Taijutsu
Element: Null
Description:Nakichō's style of combat revolves around garnering attention. To do so Nakichō developed the Honzon Sutansu. The Idol stance suppresses pain entirely through will power and false bravado showing complete control over ones mental state of mind. Any pain caused by C rank or lower skills is completely suppressed for the duration of the stance. Suppressing pain caused by a higher ranking skill would require that skills rank in chakra to be expended. I.e B rank requires expenditure of B rank Chakra. While the stance has no sustain cost it ends if the users mental state is compromised and not countered (Genjutsu). Honzon Sutansu Can be used to counteract Genjutsu with sheer Narcissism expending the Genjutsu's rank in Chakra costing a rank higher than a typical Kai.


Kyouzou ((Mastered))
• Stage 1
♠Sidestep
Rank: E :: Complex
♠Ghost Strike
Rank: X :: Spiritual

• Stage 2 ((Mastered))
♠Radial Split X
Rank: X :: Complex
♠Fake Strike X
Rank: X :: Complex

• Stage 3
♠Multistrike X [2- Free Training Posts Used]
Rank: X :: Complex
♠Delayed Strike
Rank: X :: Complex
♠Multiple Arms
Rank: C :: Spiritual

• Stage 4
♠Rising Barrage
Rank: X :: Complex
♠Cicada Shell
Rank: X :: Spiritual

• Stage 5
♠False Cyclone
Rank: X :: Complex
♠Stampede
Rank: X :: Spiritual

• Stage 6
♠Mirror Image
Rank: X :: Spiritual
♠Spider’s Fury
Rank: X :: Spiritual

▬▬┤|B u k i j u t s u

Kasai
• Stage 1 (Mastered)
♠Simple Step
Physical :: E
♠Simple Stance
Physical :: E
♠Inside Footsweep
Physical :: E

• Stage 2 ((Mastered)
♠Pivoting block X
Physical :: D
♠Deflecting X
Physical :: D
♠Locking X
Physical:: D
♠Forward Stabbing slash X
Physical :: D

• Stage 3 ((Mastered))
♠Shogun Slash X
Physical :: C
♠Shogun Crash X
Physical :: C
♠Shogun’s rise X
Complex :: C
♠Solid Shogun Stance X
Training :: C

• Stage 4 ((Mastered))
♠Strike Disarm X
Physical :: B
♠Deflection Flurry X
Physical :: B
♠Bravery X
Physical :: B
♠Fluid transition X
Training :: B

• Stage 5


• Stage 6


Kiss of Flesh and Steel
• Stage 1
♠Shikyuu Koushin [ Pressing Lips ]
Rank: E :: Simple
♠Iori Seppun [ Retreating Kiss ]
Rank: E :: Simple
♠Seppun no Hoppeta [ Kiss on the Cheek ]
Rank: E :: Simple

• Stage 2


• Stage 3


• Stage 4


• Stage 5


• Stage 6


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Nakichō Genshukuna was born in the lowest branch of the Raigyo clan. He attained the villages notorious charm, silver tongue, and good looks but unfortunately he was not born with the Doujutsu the clan was most known for, or any proficiency with Genjutsu or Ninjustu for that matter. Being of the lower branch and lacking the eyes Nakicho dedicated his life in servitude to the higher branch submitting to the most menial of tasks even when it became being one of the higher branches play things. Needless to say a life of servitude grew dull over the course of time. It was only when a colorful neighboring clan from the land of Tea known as the Hojo shared their brilliantly colored and flashy paintings that Nakicho was inspired to want to leave home. However, this involved a little coercing but if anything the Raigyo was incredibly understanding. So long as he Nakicho maintained his oath to serving the higher branch and those blessed with the gift he may leave. The clans upper branch in honor of his service bestowed upon Nakicho a hand crafted Odachi. While they knew he wasn't good at jutsu they bore witness to him physically honing his body each and every day.

Having dressed for success using the remainder of his funds Nakicho initially didn't know where to begin. He'd only heard of the villages and each one was unique in their own. "I'll go to someplace bland and barren a place where a star to be can truly shine! Then finally I'll have some peace of mind!" He got what he wished for after a long days travel and vague descriptions he found the barren sand covered wastes of the the village hidden within it. Now initially this was good everything was the same color. Brown. Walking into the village confidently Nakicho began receiving peculiar stares and unwarranted pointing. In retaliation he began to send quips at these people who seemed to quick to judge. He eventually became somewhat infamous for his...attitude and since his arrival has always been concerned with his self image.

Eventually...after about half a month...he was rather slow picking things up back then, He discovered that to become truly recognized in one of these villages you had to become a ninja and work under or eventually become the kage. This was great news except...he had to go to an academy filled with ages 13-16 and here he was 20 going on 21. Still he knew it was a necessary evil on his ride to fame. So he endured the taunting, the questioning, the childish name calling. Slowly drawing more and more into himself and becoming reclusive when it came to thoughts about others. Now that he's graduated the Academy he's become slightly more immature than he was in the Land of Tea. Due to the lack of what he deemed progress until now the man has proven to be more elated than usual.

With his recent transition from Sunagakure to Konohagakure Nakicho has assumed the position of Chunin. Upon achieving said title from Masahiro and later discovering his eyes awakening when tending to his wounds at the hospital Nakicho has since been overwhelmed with emotions. On said say he made vow to become the Hero of the Leaf. With all things said the exclamation doesn't seem as empty and showboaty as it once was before.
 
PostPosted: Wed Jun 29, 2016 8:41 am
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Wolfe Whitehorn

~Main Changes~
((Integrity Package Lost, -15 Ch/Stam, -2 Custom Techniques, -1 Pa))
((P.A's Added, [Eyes of Enlightenment] & [Heroes Will], P.A's Replaced/Removed, [Dazzling Display], [Volatile Passion], and [Narcissist]))
((Added the ability to treat Aka-Teien as a conduit as if it were one flower and administering an emotive on strike. If necessary I'll put it back up in custom weapons with this change))

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Full Name: Nakichō Genshukuna (Translates into a combination of Solemn Weeping and Butterfly)
Nickname: {Nakibro}

Age: 21
Birthdate: Feb 17
Gender: Male

Height: 6'3, 72 in, 182.88 cent
Weight: 156/70.7 kg

Nindo: "The world revolves solely around the strong and charismatic."
Personality: Nakichō upon achieving his Chunin entitlement has become a more responsible yet semi-paranoid individual. Unsure of how to handle his current position he's devoted himself to taking the positive route invigorating route...cutting down on the theatric just a pinch. His promotion has produced a physical streak. In other words he is no longer afraid to sully his name with a firm hand should someone become mouthy or disrespectful. His egotism has decreased several fold as he has now become a more team oriented individual seeking to better anyone under his authority. Nakichō is very eccentric and flamboyant almost borderline excessive typically rhyming or accentuating his speech for a greater impact as if to garner more attention though this has been reserved for unprofessional gatherings. Nakichō is well aware of the fact he is well endowed across the entirety of his body physically unfortunately his mentality could still use a little sharpening. Despite his now semi-pompous attitude he is loyal to authority and is often revered for his chivalry.

Village: Konohakagure
Body Rank: Chunin
Title Rank: Chunin
First Class: Bukijutsu
Second Class: Bukijutsu

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Bloodline:
Raigyo


Chakra Pool:340
Stamina Pool: 340
Chakra Affinity: Earth,Wind
Chakra Materialization: On a minor release it appears as a simple pinkish aura. An excessive release reveals a blooming rose.

Strengths:
• Elegant Egotist: Nakichō's combat approach is particularly morale based. His strength lies in his self confidence. The more his self confidence increases the greater his combat efficiency. However, legitimate insults do the vise versa until he reaches a breaking point where nothing but pure unadulterated rage is behind each swing.
• Charismatic Combatant: Diplomacy and Bluffing come to him as second nature in addition to this he's highly proficient at picking up an individual's mental weakness and exploiting it in combat.
Weaknesses:
• Disheartening Dissonance: As much a strength as it is a weakness if Nakichō is consistently berated by an ally or an enemy and their insults hold viable ground his attacks will grow more sloppy, pathetic, and lacking any impact. If the berating gets too excessive however he will go into a fit of rage showing lack of temper.
• Chivalrous Reluctance: When fighting the opposite sex if the individual has not instigated any form of mental or physical hostility toward Nakichō directly he cannot perform at his full capacity.
• Honor bound: He cannot harm another member of the Raigyo clan that carries the eyes or holds a higher branch position which is to say all Raigyo clan members aside from his own family.
• Well of Emotion: Despite the Raigyo's well known working with emotions Nakicho can considered easily dissuaded himself as he is an emotional creature to his very core.
Fears:
• Utterly Worthless: Dying a pointless death and not living up to expectations
• Global Vilification: To be hated by everyone for everything you do despite how hard one tries to achieve acceptance.
• Raving Responsibility: Having a member of a unit he is in charge of suffer and or die.

Class Disciplines :
• Weapon Specialist:The user Gains a free custom weapon slot, while forsaking the ability to learn ninjutsu for the ability to learn more than 1 rigorous style (styles still count for 2 slots). With their inability to learn ninjutsu, they get to learn [1] additional bukijutsu style for every 10 ninjutsu slots their were supposed to acquire. Their depth and devotion to the weapon arts allows their skill to increase with every rank allowing their weapons to cut through defensive bukijutsu techniques of the same rank.
•Mystic Hero: The user is much like a hybrid warrior, focusing on mixing ninjutsu into their personal arsenal. Through their great devotion to this path the user can cast ninjutsu without hand seals while wielding a weapon, D at gennin, C at chunnin, B at Jounin, A at Konin, and S at Sannin. These techniques maintain the same description and criteria to use, as well as require the same amount of time to mold the chakra through the weapon as would be needed to perform hand seals, meaning the techniques are not instantaneously cast. The user’s spirit is so strong, that they can utilize their physical bukijutsu techniques to negate ninjutsu techniques of the same rank or below.
• Specialization: the user starts with one [1] additional Bukijutsu slot. Superior conditioning allows the user to choose a specific energy cost (stamina or chakra) and reduce the costs of technique activation by 5, to a minimum activation cost of 5. Every time the user ranks up, they repeat this process. Energy Cost Reductions must be shown on the profile.

Reductions:
• Bukijutsu post reduction +3
• Bloodline post reduction +2
• Taijutsu post reduction +1
• Bloodline Ninjutsu post reduction +1
• Bloodline Genjutsu post reduction +1
• Specialization Cost Reduction -5 Stamina
• Specialization Cost Reduction -5 Chakra
• Gobblemonster Parade: 10 free training/missions posts x/10 Used
• Christmas 2015: 10 free training/missions posts x/10 Used >(See Table for most Recent Usages)

Personal Attributes:
• Enlightened Eyes: Nakicho gains bloodline technique reductions as if her were multi-classed as Buki/Bloodline however, he loses the current reductions of being considered Buki/Buki.
• Heroes Will : Still unable to use Genjutsu to its fullest extent despite awakening his eyes. Nakicho is unable to use any Genjutsu unless it's under his bloodlines capabilities. In exchange, his pursuit of heroism confers [2] Extra Taijutsu Styles.
•Mashed Ninja-tatoes: +1 Tai Slot, +50 Chakra and Stamina
•Christmas 2015: Selected: 2000 Ryo: 10 Free Mission/Training Posts
•Santa's Knowledge #2: -1 Taijutsu, -1 Bukijutsu

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Ryo: 両 (See Most Recent Total Table)
AC: (See Most Recent Total Table)
Missions Complete: (See Most Recent Total Table)
D Rank :: 0
C Rank :: 0
B Rank :: 0
A Rank :: 0
S Rank :: 0

Limitations: {How many of each technique you can learn. Refer to class info}
• Ninjutsu : : 00 / 06 (Nil)
• Genjutsu : : 00 / 00
• Taijutsu Styles: : 01 / 03
• Bukijutsu Styles: : 03/ 05
• Bonus Formless Slots +4

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Weapon Name:Aka-Teien 赤庭園 (Red Garden)

Weapon Type: Odachi
Weapon Location: Strapped to back
Weapon Height: 150cm, 60in, 5ft
Weapon Weight: 6.5lbs

Description: The Aka-Teien 赤庭園 (Red Garden) was a gift given to Nakichō by the Raigyo clan for his service in the lower branch. The weapon much like the clans style is reliant on emotion fluctuating between four states depending on the certain circumstances and the emotions of it's wielder. Nakicho can apply the Raigyo's emotives into Aka-Teien to force the labeled emotive unto an opponent. Aka-Teien in treated as a conduit for use of Raigyo techniques however, it cannot execute techniques that would otherwise require multiple conduits.

Ability Summary:
• First Form: Shidareyanagi シダレヤナギ (Weeping Willow)
The first form is a result that originates from a lack of will and self confidence in the user. The blade detects this lack of confidence and turns a dull grey. In this state is literally no stronger than a basic Odachi in fact one could say it's equivalent to a rusted Odachi. The Current Rank of the Style used in conjunction with the blade in this state is decreased by one down to a minimum of E. Shidareyanagi stacks with itself if the state does not change by the end of the two post duration. When Shidareyanagi is active the user can only use style techniques reflective of the current rank deduction. I.e. Naki is trained in B rank techniques those techniques would usually be weakened to C rank efficiency. However, he cannot use them at all. In addition The C Rank Skills he does have access to would be dropped to D Rank Efficiency.

•Second Form: Baranotsubomi バラのつぼみ (Rosebud)
The second form is the neutral state of the blade. The blade is a typical steel silver. However upon attacks self inflicted or otherwise it absorbs the blood of the injured location eventually until the blade grows red. Upon becoming red the blade becomes entirely serrated making injuries susceptible to cause hemorrhaging and muscle tearing. It takes a blood draw from the base of the blade to the tip before becoming red. This can be executed by the user as if performing a blood summoning by running a finger from the end to tip or causing a significant enough wound on the opponent. When red the blade can null jutsu one rank lower than the corresponding styles Rank. Up to 3 times before a new blood draw is required. Each Blood Draw costs 20 Stamina and 20 Chakra if self inflicted.

•Third Form: Tora yuri 虎ユリ (Tiger Lily)
The third form comes from extreme self confidence brought upon by reassurance, compliments, and praise from someone other than oneself and taking said words to heart. The blade begins to radiate becoming a vibrant yellow. It begins to buzz wildly and emanate white hot heat. The Blade is treated as one rank higher when used in conjunction with an associated style in this state up to the max rank applicable for the current wielder. The blades heat can cut through thin metals and foliage with ease. The blade can 'cut' through ninjutsu of it's level or below and or nullify ninjutsu of the same rank or lower entirely.(Fuuinjutsu included.)

•Fourth Form: Hōzuki ホオズキ (NightShade)
The fourth form is spawned from intense anger and self loathing. A thorny root sprouts from the blade injecting itself into the user's vein in their arm the blade turns a dark red with tinges of black. The user loses most reasoning and is filled with profound bloodlust. The blade then begins rapidly depleting it's hosts Chakra and Stamina as if a parasite. At 120 per post which can't be reduced unless the state changes. In exchange the host becomes heavily empowered in strength and speed but becomes heavily impaired in reflex,perception, and reasoning. In this State the blade cannot be damaged by any means and can 'cut' any Ninjutsu above the known styles rank by one up to the max rank applicable, it still however remains on par with Bukijutsu of it's rank. When either the users chakra or stamina is completely drained they immediately faint. All styles in this state are treated as hard formless.

Errata: A state excluding aesthetic states remains for a duration of two posts within those two posts if the user's emotion fluctuates the blade will respond to the emotional state from the last post made.

*Aesthetic States:States that have no combat implementation and are merely for show obviously correlating with mood.
The blade emits hues and scents in accordance with what would be a mood ring some other examples include;
Elated: The blade produces a constant sparkling effect.
Depressed: The blade emanates a solemn purple hue.
Embarrassment: The blade emits a pinkish hue.
Arousal: The blade emits a pleasing scent.

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• Ornate Coat: Looks nice, minimal protection, contains multiple pockets.
• Steel Arm Guards x2 (Thanksgiving Event, Cost 500 Ryo)
• Chunnin Flak Jacket (Thanksgiving Event, Cost 250 Ryo)
• Smoke Bombs x3 (Thanksgiving Event, Cost 100 Ryo)
• Wire 10 Yards x1 (Thanksgiving Event, Cost 100 Ryo)
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▬▬┤|N i n j u t s u

Maruton: {Start with the following six only}
• Henge no Jutsu [ Transformation Technique ]
• Kawarimi no Jutsu [ Substitution Technique ]
• Bushin no Jutsu [ Clone Technique ]
• Suimen Hokou no Waza [ Act of Water Surface Walking ]
• Kinobori no Waza [ Act of Tree Climbing ]
• Kai [ Release ]




▬▬┤|T a i j u t s u

•Locked Formless: Large Swords: Oodachi: B
•Formless Style: Soft Physical: X

Slots used: 01 :: 08
Locked Style:Oodachi
• {D-rank} + {Gained at Genin]
• {C-rank} + {Gained at Chunnin}
• {B-rank} + {Pre-leveled}
• {A-rank} + {X}
• {S-rank} + {X}
• {S+rank} + {X}

Formless Style:Soft Physical
• {D-rank} + {X}
• {C-rank} + {X}
• {B-rank} + {X}
• {A-rank} + {X}
• {S-rank} + {X}
• {S+rank} + {X}

Hard Physical
• {D-rank} + {X}
• {C-rank} + {X}
• {B-rank} + {X}
• {A-rank} + {X}
• {S-rank} + {X}
• {S+rank} + {X}

{Bonus Slots}
• {Soft Physical B} + {X}
• {Soft Physical A} + {X}
• {Hard Physical D} + {X}
• {Hard Physical C} + {X}

{D-rank Slots}
• {Oodachi B} + {Pre-Leveled}
• {Oodachi A} + {X}
{C-rank Slots}
• {Soft Physical D} + {X}
• {Soft Physical C} + {X}
{B-rank Slots}
• {Z} + {X}
• {Z} + {X}
{A-rank Slots}
• {Z} + {X}
• {Z} + {X}
{S-rank Slots}
• {Z} + {X}
• {Z} + {X}

Technique Name:Honzon Sutansu [ Idol Stance ]
Rank: B: Spiritual
Type: Taijutsu
Element: Null
Description:Nakichō's style of combat revolves around garnering attention. To do so Nakichō developed the Honzon Sutansu. The Idol stance suppresses pain entirely through will power and false bravado showing complete control over ones mental state of mind. Any pain caused by C rank or lower skills is completely suppressed for the duration of the stance. Suppressing pain caused by a higher ranking skill would require that skills rank in chakra to be expended. I.e B rank requires expenditure of B rank Chakra. While the stance has no sustain cost it ends if the users mental state is compromised and not countered (Genjutsu). Honzon Sutansu Can be used to counteract Genjutsu with sheer Narcissism expending the Genjutsu's rank in Chakra costing a rank higher than a typical Kai.


Kyouzou ((Mastered))
• Stage 1
♠Sidestep
Rank: E :: Complex
♠Ghost Strike
Rank: X :: Spiritual

• Stage 2 ((Mastered))
♠Radial Split X
Rank: X :: Complex
♠Fake Strike X
Rank: X :: Complex

• Stage 3
♠Multistrike X [2- Free Training Posts Used]
Rank: X :: Complex
♠Delayed Strike
Rank: X :: Complex
♠Multiple Arms
Rank: C :: Spiritual

• Stage 4
♠Rising Barrage
Rank: X :: Complex
♠Cicada Shell
Rank: X :: Spiritual

• Stage 5
♠False Cyclone
Rank: X :: Complex
♠Stampede
Rank: X :: Spiritual

• Stage 6
♠Mirror Image
Rank: X :: Spiritual
♠Spider’s Fury
Rank: X :: Spiritual

▬▬┤|B u k i j u t s u

Kasai
• Stage 1 (Mastered)
♠Simple Step
Physical :: E
♠Simple Stance
Physical :: E
♠Inside Footsweep
Physical :: E

• Stage 2 ((Mastered)
♠Pivoting block X
Physical :: D
♠Deflecting X
Physical :: D
♠Locking X
Physical:: D
♠Forward Stabbing slash X
Physical :: D

• Stage 3 ((Mastered))
♠Shogun Slash X
Physical :: C
♠Shogun Crash X
Physical :: C
♠Shogun’s rise X
Complex :: C
♠Solid Shogun Stance X
Training :: C

• Stage 4 ((Mastered))
♠Strike Disarm X
Physical :: B
♠Deflection Flurry X
Physical :: B
♠Bravery X
Physical :: B
♠Fluid transition X
Training :: B

• Stage 5


• Stage 6


Kiss of Flesh and Steel
• Stage 1
♠Shikyuu Koushin [ Pressing Lips ]
Rank: E :: Simple
♠Iori Seppun [ Retreating Kiss ]
Rank: E :: Simple
♠Seppun no Hoppeta [ Kiss on the Cheek ]
Rank: E :: Simple

• Stage 2


• Stage 3


• Stage 4


• Stage 5


• Stage 6


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Nakichō Genshukuna was born in the lowest branch of the Raigyo clan. He attained the villages notorious charm, silver tongue, and good looks but unfortunately he was not born with the Doujutsu the clan was most known for, or any proficiency with Genjutsu or Ninjustu for that matter. Being of the lower branch and lacking the eyes Nakicho dedicated his life in servitude to the higher branch submitting to the most menial of tasks even when it became being one of the higher branches play things. Needless to say a life of servitude grew dull over the course of time. It was only when a colorful neighboring clan from the land of Tea known as the Hojo shared their brilliantly colored and flashy paintings that Nakicho was inspired to want to leave home. However, this involved a little coercing but if anything the Raigyo was incredibly understanding. So long as he Nakicho maintained his oath to serving the higher branch and those blessed with the gift he may leave. The clans upper branch in honor of his service bestowed upon Nakicho a hand crafted Odachi. While they knew he wasn't good at jutsu they bore witness to him physically honing his body each and every day.

Having dressed for success using the remainder of his funds Nakicho initially didn't know where to begin. He'd only heard of the villages and each one was unique in their own. "I'll go to someplace bland and barren a place where a star to be can truly shine! Then finally I'll have some peace of mind!" He got what he wished for after a long days travel and vague descriptions he found the barren sand covered wastes of the the village hidden within it. Now initially this was good everything was the same color. Brown. Walking into the village confidently Nakicho began receiving peculiar stares and unwarranted pointing. In retaliation he began to send quips at these people who seemed to quick to judge. He eventually became somewhat infamous for his...attitude and since his arrival has always been concerned with his self image.

Eventually...after about half a month...he was rather slow picking things up back then, He discovered that to become truly recognized in one of these villages you had to become a ninja and work under or eventually become the kage. This was great news except...he had to go to an academy filled with ages 13-16 and here he was 20 going on 21. Still he knew it was a necessary evil on his ride to fame. So he endured the taunting, the questioning, the childish name calling. Slowly drawing more and more into himself and becoming reclusive when it came to thoughts about others. Now that he's graduated the Academy he's become slightly more immature than he was in the Land of Tea. Due to the lack of what he deemed progress until now the man has proven to be more elated than usual.

With his recent transition from Sunagakure to Konohagakure Nakicho has assumed the position of Chunin. Upon achieving said title from Masahiro and later discovering his eyes awakening when tending to his wounds at the hospital Nakicho has since been overwhelmed with emotions. On said say he made vow to become the Hero of the Leaf. With all things said the exclamation doesn't seem as empty and showboaty as it once was before.


[Accepted]  

Lanfaer

Aged Genius

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Ergo War
Vice Captain

Enduring Guildsman

PostPosted: Tue Jul 05, 2016 6:49 pm
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From the 4th of July update:
1. 1 [Jobs] [PA], and 2k ryou

PA submission:
• Consummate Professional: Can convert AC rewards from Jobs missions to Ryou.
 
PostPosted: Tue Jul 05, 2016 8:24 pm
Ergo War
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From the 4th of July update:
1. 1 [Jobs] [PA], and 2k ryou

PA submission:
• Consummate Professional: Can convert AC rewards from Jobs missions to Ryou.


Seems fine to me. Approved.  

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GalagaHero

Ice-Cold Combatant

PostPosted: Wed Jul 06, 2016 6:51 am
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Full Name: Hatsu Yuki Hattori
Nickname: Hatsu-chan

Age: 15
Birthdate: December 21
Gender: Female

Height: 5ft. 3in.
Weight: 106 Lbs.

Nindo: "Live life to its fullest."
Personality: Having matured quite a bit after the plight of her village from the invading shinobi, Hatsu has a much more serious look about her. She fights her hardest, but prefers to keep her enemies alive. Because of this, she uses blunt force over blades or spears. She resents killing in all forms, even if a quick death would be less painful than a slow, imminent one. She is a front-line fighter, and can usually get a few heads to turn her way with a quick jab or roundhouse.

Village: Kumogakure
Title: Chuunin
Rank: C
First Class: Taijutsu
Second Class: Taijutsu Specialist

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Bloodline: Shinsetsu [Approval Post]
Chakra Pool:405
Stamina Pool: 620
Chakra Element: Suiton (water), and Fuuton (wind)
Chakra Color: Aqua colored chakra
Chakra Materialization: It gently flows like a stream spiraling around her, dissipating at the top.

Strengths:
• Close combat
• Taking hits
Weaknesses:
• Kugutsu
• Ranged battle
Fears:
• Puppets (creep her out)
• Death of those around her.

Class Disciplines :
Monk: A more internal martial artist, this user focuses on the ability to utilize chakra to increase their power and techniques due to their smaller body frame. Gains a -2 learning reduction to Pi Qua Quan, Hsing-I Pakua, and Xinyi liuhe Quan. Complex techniques cost 10 less chakra and stamina to perform. Starts with extra technique [Cultivation](cultivation is a conversion of stamina to chakra, at a 10 chakra to 10 stamina conversion in any increment of 10.)
Berserker: Your external training and devotion to taijutsu has allowed your attacks to have great strength, speed, and power behind them, making them overwhelm physical taijutsu techniques of the same rank or lower. Additionally, your hardened body allows you to defend against ninjutsu attacks 2 ranks lower than a physical taijutsu defensive technique, taking little to no damage from it, and defend against ninjutsu attacks 1 rank below a complex taijutsu defensive technique unharmed.
Specialization:
• If this class is taken as the First and second class, then the user takes 2 disciplines from this class, as well as start with 1 additional taijutsu style. Additionally, all Locked Formless is treated as Complex in regards to interactions with other techniques.
Reductions:
• -6 learning reduction to Taijutsu.
• -2 learning reduction to Bukijutsu.
• -2 learning reduction to Pi Qua Quan, Hsing-I Pakua, and Xinyi liuhe Quan Taijutsus.
Personal Attributes:
• Studious Pugilist: As a devoted martial artist, Hatsu gains an extra Taijutsu style.
• Rigorous Training: Rigorous styles only take 1 style slot.
• Santa's Library: Hatsu has been a good girl, and has gained an extra Taijutsu style.
• Santa's Knowledge I: Hatsu has been a good girl, and has gained a -2 post reduction to Taijutsu.
• Santa's Knowledge II: Hatsu has been a good girl, and has gained a -2 post reduction to Bukijutsu.
• +1 Locked Formless Style
• 10 free training/missions posts
• Gobblemonster Parade: 10 free training/missions posts, PA: Mashed Ninja-tatoes (+1 buki-style), +50 chakra and stamina.

Training/Mission posts Left:20/20

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Ryo: 両1150
AC: 2875

Missions Complete:
D Rank :: 1
C Rank :: 0
B Rank :: 0
A Rank :: 0
S Rank :: 0

Limitations: {How many of each technique you can learn. Refer to class info}
• Ninjutsu : : 06 / 06
----- Free : : 06 / 06
• Genjutsu : : 00 / 02
• Taijutsu Styles: : 03 / 06
• Bukijutsu Styles: : 00 / 01
• Formless Slots : : 04 / 06

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Weapon Type: Steel Hand Gloves
Weapon Range: Arm length
Weapon Weight: N/A
Weapon Location: N/A
Post Obtained: Raikage Office

Summon Sage: No
Pacts: None

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• Kunai x5
• Shuriken x10
• Carved Lion Figurine

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Maruton:
• Henge no Jutsu [ Transformation Technique ]
• Kawarimi no Jutsu [ Substitution Technique ]
• Bushin no Jutsu [ Clone Technique ]
• Suimen Hokou no Waza [ Act of Water Surface Walking ]
• Kinobori no Waza [ Act of Tree Climbing ]
• Kai [ Release ]

Suiton (Water)
• Kiri Shikaku no Jutsu [ Mist Vision Technique ] [x]
• Mizu Shuriken no Jutsu [ Water Shuriken Technique ] [x]
• Suimenka no Kisoku [ Breathing Underwater Technique ] [x]
• Suikusari no Jutsu [ Water Chains Technique ] [x]

Fuuton (Wind)
• Suiyaku Kaze [ Propelling Winds ] [x]
• Zankyokukuuha [ Extreme Decapitating Air Waves ] [x]

Shinsetsu (Bloodline)
• Hatsuyuki [ First Snow ] [x]
• Yukimari [ Snowball ] [x]
• Kousetsu [ Snowfall ] [x]
• Yukibakudan [ Snowbomb ] [x]
• Fuyu no Ibuki [ Breath of Winter ] [x]
• Fuyu no Unari [ Winter's Howl ] [x]
• Fubuki Hira no Jutsu [ Snowstorm Palm Technique ] [x]
• Boufuusetsu no Unari [ Blizzard's Bellow ] [x]
• Hanpou Kousetsu [ Rampant Snowfall ] [x]

• Winter's Mercy (Custom) [x]

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▬▬┤|T a i j u t s u
Pi Qua Quan
• Seiryu Kasho [x]
• Bokuho [x]
• Pi (Trained as B Rank) [x]
• Basic Endurance Training [x]
• Fukanro [x]
• Teishitsu-Jouhai-Sho [x]
• Qua (Trained as B Rank) [x]
• Extreme Climate Resistance Training [x]
• Kasui-Sho [x]
• Advanced Endurance Training [x]
• Tenshin-Bansa [x]
• Koran [x]
4 Stages Completed

Hsing-I Pakua
• Fire: Bursting [x]
• Earth: Crossing [x]
• Metal: Splitting (Trained as B Rank) [x]
• Water: Drilling [x]
• Wood: Smothering [x]
1 Stage Completed

Kiss of Flesh and Steel
• Iori Seppun [ Retreating Kiss ] [x]
• Seppun no Hoppeta [ Kiss on the Cheek ] [x]

▬▬┤|B u k i j u t s u
[Style 1]


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Soft Physical (Locked Style)
• D Rank [Locked]
• C Rank [Locked]
• B Rank aquired through training [x]
• A Rank aquired through training [x]
• S Rank not acquired yet

Hard Physical (Locked Style)
• D Rank [Locked]
• C Rank [Locked]
• B Rank not acquired yet
• A Rank not acquired yet
• S Rank not acquired yet


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G e n i n
• Meditate - 1/2 [x]
• Meditate - 2/2 [x]
• Performance - 1/2 [x]
• Spar - Lost [x]

C h u u n i n
• Intermediate Training: Teach - 1/3 [x]
• Intermediate Training: Teach - 2/3 [x]

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From the land of mist came a man, who met a beautiful woman in the highest reaches of the land of thunder. There they settled down together and had two children, twins Hatsu and Samui. Hatsu grew up alongside her twin brother and her mother and father, but now lives with her extended family as well. Although she doesn't get along with Seiji, she loves all of her family, especially Samui, who she is quite close to and follows around almost everywhere. Hatsu trained hard to be in the Kumogakure military, hoping to be of some use to Samui.



This is a reapproval of Hatsu Hattori, changing her from Ninjutsu/Taijutsu to Taijutsu Specialist.
 
PostPosted: Wed Jul 06, 2016 7:14 am
    Sonyo PA addition:

      Fast Learner: Sonyo gains half as much AC from missions to be able to half the overall jobs needed to obtain crafting ranks
 

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PostPosted: Wed Jul 06, 2016 11:18 am
Nathaniel Atlas PA:

[Medical] It's the Destination, not the Journey: When Nathaniel does a medical job in Kumogakure's hospital or residential district, he gets a -2 post reduction, but a job in a different village's hospital or residential district adds 1 post to each mission requirement.  
PostPosted: Wed Jul 06, 2016 12:25 pm
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PostPosted: Thu Jul 07, 2016 5:54 am
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Full Name: Tanaka Hiro Yuu
Nickname:

Age: 17
Birthdate: 8 August
Gender: Male
Height: 73 inches, 185 centimeters
Weight: 167 pounds, 76 kilograms
Appearance: Hiro Yuu Tanaka has his father's chiseled chin, with a somewhat gruff complexion from a very small five-o'clock shadow. While acne has already passed through this teenager, it left him with a rough-looking face along his left jawline. This, coupled with a rather generic nose, and deep sockets leading to his brown iris eyes give him a rather rugged appearance. he has small ears which sit close to his head, and a crop top of faded brown hair which twirls slightly after a good hard day's sweat. Very little of his face is taken care of with any excess, minus a shave in the morning with his usual routine.

To compliment his stone-like face, Hiro has a modestly toned figure of a man that works a lot with his hands. Large arms and wide shoulders frame the man. He also sports a modest tan, giving him a slightly olive pigment to the waistline. On hot summer days, he often goes shirtless during work, where if one sees him from behind will notice several lashing scars, many cris-crossing others. He doesn't talk about them. Most lead further down along his a** and legs, both of which are far paler in skin tone than his upper body.

Hiro doesn't have many clothes. Just about everything in his wardrobe is used for work. His wardrobe includes:
  • Seven pairs of underwear
  • Five different T-shirts
  • Four different pairs of jeans (one in black, three in blue)
  • Three different pairs of socks
  • Two different coveralls
  • Two pairs of work boots
  • One pair of dress shoes

The one thing Hiro does tend to have at his disposal are tools. However, since an incident at a shop, he's now without several key tools as well as his tool belt, currently confiscated by the local dumpling shop until either repairs are completed, the brats are caught, or until Hiro himself pays for the damage caused. No good punks!

Nindo: Whatever, someone's gotta do it.
Personality: Hiro tends to not give a damn about personal feelings. He doesn't particularly like the people who call themselves "Ninja". What he's seen is they tend to leave a wake of destruction in their path, rather than help to rebuild for the common man. Most of them he finds disgusting, war-mongering cretinous ingrates who couldn't swing a hammer unless it was to bash somebody's face. While the rest of his village celebrated ninja to the point of worship, in his opinion, he was one of the few who settled into cleaning up the mess.

This is where Hiro thrives. He takes a lot of pride in his work, rather than the magics of chakra. Unfortunately, as it turns out, he's actually got a decent amount of the magical stuff within him. Hence why he was forced to undergo the trivial training of the Ninja Academy in Kohona and learn the ways of what he typically refers to as "ninja bullshit". For whatever it's worth, it has helped his ability to do good work, at the price of exhaustion at the end of the day.

Village: Kohonakagure
Title: Genin
Rank: D
First Class: Worker
Second Class: Worker

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Bloodline: {If none you may pick one of the following packages:
Wisdom: +1 PA, +2 custom techs, 10 jutsu slots

Chakra Pool: 150
Stamina Pool: 150
Chakra Element: Earth, Lightning
Chakra Color: White
Chakra Materialization: Mild Wisps

Strengths:
• Good at menial jobs.
• Good at deciphering Ninja techniques.
Weaknesses:
• Cannot fight fire with fire (aka match up with Ninja techniques)
• Gets pissed off easy
Fears:
• Working for an idiot
• If Ninja ruin the village he's trying to piece together.

Class Disciplines :
Legendary Smith: The user is able to gain a 5th title rank from every applicable smithing tree. 'Training' for Legendary takes 10 posts of crafting work, provides an additional 1 post off of crafting times, and gives a Grandmaster NPC (of the same area) for usage. In addition, any item solo crafted (without an npc helper) is non-reproducible by non-Legendary titled smiths.
Balanced Master: This discipline mimics one of the user's other class's non-chosen disciplines. (i.e. non-Worker Class) The Double Specialization perk for said class is not available for gaining. In addition, any jutsu learned can be paid for with either chakra, stamina, or a mix of the two. Any further chakra types are also subject to this. Recovery amounts for chakra and stamina are doubled while working, and working counts as relaxing.
Lifetime Disciple: This discipline is for those wishing to gain from a lifetime master, never to be one themselves until their master is deceased. Gaining knowledge from over the course of their studies, the disciple will receive twice the benefits from each of their master's smithing trees (up to their completed titles), while in the living presence of them. After their master's death, they will successfully pass on a permanent, one-quarter of the benefit to their own Lifetime Disciple, if any. (round up to the nearest applicable number, as designated in the smithing thread)
Reductions:
• Apprentice Glass-Blowing
• Apprentice Woodsmithing
Personal Attributes:
• Dusk To Dawn: Sacrifices 10 starting Jutsu slots to complete any job 2 posts faster.
• Overtime All The Time: Earns 1.5 times the standard rate of Ryo for job and mission completion.
• Jack Of All Trades: For every different style job title achieved, reduce the required amount of jobs required to finish to achieve the next rank by one. Minimum requirement: 3 Jobs per rank.
• Practitioner: For every completed job, increase the stamina pool by 10 points.
-Fourth of July grant-

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Ryo: 両13400
AC: 1500

Missions Complete:
D Rank :: 8
C Rank :: 0
B Rank :: 0
A Rank :: 0
S Rank :: 0

Crafting Jobs Complete:
D Rank :: 4
  • 2/8 Apprentice Blacksmith
  • 2/8 Apprentice Botanist
C Rank :: 0
B Rank :: 0
A Rank :: 0
S Rank :: 0

Limitations:
• Ninjutsu : : 01 / 04
• Genjutsu : : 00 / 00
• Taijutsu Styles: : 00 / 00
• Bukijutsu Styles: : 00 / 00

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• x1 Blunt-tipped Kunai

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• x1 Scroll: -Kage Bunshin-
• x1 Scroll: -Jounin-Level Sealing-
• x1 Missive: -Learn a Jutsu-
• x1 Directive: -Scribes and Scrap:
Mechanic's Manual: Volume One: 200 Ryo.
Mechanic's Manual: Volume Two: 1000 Ryo.
Genin's Scroll x 2: 800 Ryo.
Probe Set x 2: 1000 Ryo

Wood and Iron:
Book of Gelel: 1000Ryo

The Forge:
160 Iron Ore Bundles: 4000Ryo
100 Charoal 'Ore' Bundles: 1000Ryo-


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▬▬┤|N i n j u t s u

Maruton
• Henge no Jutsu [ Transformation Technique ]
• Kawarimi no Jutsu [ Substitution Technique ]
• Bushin no Jutsu [ Clone Technique ]
• Suimen Hokou no Waza [ Act of Water Surface Walking ]
• Kinobori no Waza [ Act of Tree Climbing ]
• Kai [ Release ]

Doton


Raiton




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▬▬┤|T a i j u t s u

Formless
• Digit Seal
-Custom Jutsu-


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Hiro's work ethic was instilled in him almost from birth. Borh to a man who slaved over a blacksmith's furnace for fourteen hours a day, seven days a week, Hiro Tanaka only saw his father sweat and work his fingers to the bone. Meanwhile, his mother often sat lazily by until going out to buy dinner, rather than cook it herself. Needless to say, there was a lot of strife between the couple in the Tanaka house.

Hiro himself was the oldest of three children, a testament to the father's strength and stamina. There was very little love, and most of the time growing up in Konohakagure, very little positivism from the house. The grandfather survived the third and fourth ninja wars, and instilled in his sons the disgust for the ninja way of life. The father in turn passed that disgust to Hiro. However, as he lived in a ninja village, everything business and work related went through the path of the ninja. Thus, sometime after being sick and tired of being sick and tired of his family, Hiro Tanaka joined the academy in order to get more work and be rid of them once and for all.

Having no natural skills in ninjutsu, taijutsu, or genjutsu, Hiro struggled greatly in his studies. His saving grace was the fact he was without question the hardest working man in show-business the academy. Through pure effort, and a modest understanding of the science behind the magical techniques all ninja performed, he was able to use what little chakra he had of his own to do some of the most rudimentary jutsu, and pass as one of the lowest ranks in the history of the academy. Take that society!

Theme Song For Home Life: You Know You Wanna Click It
 
PostPosted: Thu Jul 07, 2016 11:37 pm
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Full Name: Lucio Kurokasa
Nickname: The Wolf Prince of Gimangakure

Age: 18
Birthdate: 18 Nov
Gender: Male

Height: 6'3
Weight: "The real world is cold. The real world doesn't care about spirit. You want to be a hero? Then play the part and die like every other hero in history. As for me, I'll do what I do best: lie, steal, cheat and survive."

Nindo: "Freedom is one of the few things worth living and dying to protect."
Personality: Lucio's personality is a mixture between that of a formal gentleman and a ruthless criminal. He emits charm and speaks calmly even in the middle of an armed robbery. Lucio also openly emits hostility towards people he either hates or dislikes.

Lucio also has quite a ruthless streak, more than willing to use lethal force on nearly anyone who can foil his schemes, even going so far as to laugh after cutting them down. In regards to the "Righteous" and the "Just" he often chastises them being blind to the cruelty of the real world. Judging by his elaborate outfit and accessories, Lucio has expensive tastes, a common stereotype of the Mafia dons and princes like himself.

Despite working with traditional shinobi, he has next to no respect for them or authority figures in general, particularly kage. On several occasions he has talked to or about them in a derogatory fashion, referring to them as "dogs of death, tools, and pawns" or "weak and petty tyrants" respectively. He also often takes to mocking, taunting, and insulting his enemies. This quality persists even when he is in very difficult situations.

The biggest indication of the fact that he does have a kind and nice side is his relationship with Ciri. While he is with her, which is almost always, he treats her with the same level of respect he treats himself and his father, which is considerable.

While hidden under layers upon layers of crime, vice and violence there is in fact an ounce of good within Lucio. He pities the masses for the cruelty and suffering of their life. He is normally respectful to anyone he does not deem and enemy, or below himself, and frankly if not for his mafia connections could make a decent shot at being a "hero of the people."

Village: Gimangakure
Title: Mafia Prince (wanderer)
Rank: D-Rank
First Class: Bloodline
Second Class: Bloodline

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Bloodline: Uchiha: Copy, Clarity

Chakra Pool: 260
Stamina Pool: 240
Chakra Element: Katon, Doton
Chakra Color:
❖❖❖❖❖❖❖❖❖❖❖❖
Chakra Materialization: When his chakra becomes visible it takes the form of a cloak over his body resembling a full cloak of wolf fur with the head over his own like a hat. (visual reference. Full body)

Strengths:
• Heavy Offense
• Uchiha Jutsu
Weaknesses:
• Cares very deeply for Ciri, his gang, and his family
• Long range combat (ranges beyond 50 meters)
Fears:
• Ciri Dying
• Loosing his freedom

Class Disciplines :
• Blood Bender: User receives an additional 3 custom bloodline techniques. To clarify, these are custom techniques that must involve and utilize the characters bloodline. +1 additional Locked Formless Style. (does not count towards Locked Style limits)

• Blood Knight: Your bloodline techniques possess greater power, allowing them to overwhelm techniques of the same rank, and preventing them from succumbing to elemental weaknesses of techniques the same rank. Can cast bloodline techniques through one-handed seals.

• If this class is taken as the first and second class, then the user may pick 2 of its disciplines. Additionally, the cost to perform bloodline techniques is reduced by 10 chakra, to a minimum of 5.

Reductions:
• Learn bloodline techniques Two (2) posts faster.
• Learn bloodline techniques Two (2) posts faster.

Personal Attributes:
• Flame Proficiency: Katon [ Fire ] ninjutsu cost [50%] less chakra to perform. (bloodline trait)
• Way of the blood: Can learn bloodline jutsu two posts faster but learns genjutsu one post slower.


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Ryo: 両 0000
AC: 000000

Missions Complete:
E Rank :: 0
D Rank :: 0
C Rank :: 0
B Rank :: 0
A Rank :: 0
S Rank :: 0

Crafting Jobs Complete:
D Rank :: 0
C Rank :: 0
B Rank :: 0
A Rank :: 0
S Rank :: 0

Limitations:
• Ninjutsu : : 00 / 08
• Genjutsu : : 00 / 04
• Taijutsu Styles: : 00 / 00
• Bukijutsu Styles: : 00 / 02


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Weapon Type: Black and Red Daisho
Weapon Range: 2ft plus arm reach (katana) / 1.5ft plus arm reach (wakazashi)
Weapon Weight: 3lbs and 2lbs respectivly
Weapon Location: Stacked on his left hip in his sash. Katana is stored edge down.

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• 2 Kuna
• 10 Shuriken
• 1 Sharpening Stone
• 2 Uchiko Balls
• 1 Oiling Cloth
• 1 quart of choji oil
• 1 Flannel Cloth
• 1 Nuguigami

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▬▬┤|N i n j u t s u

Maruton:
• Henge no Jutsu [ Transformation Technique ]
• Kawarimi no Jutsu [ Substitution Technique ]
• Bushin no Jutsu [ Clone Technique ]
• Suimen Hokou no Waza [ Act of Water Surface Walking ]
• Kinobori no Waza [ Act of Tree Climbing ]
• Kai [ Release ]


Katon





Doton



Uchiha:














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▬▬┤|T a i j u t s u

{Style name here}
• {Stage progression / techniques learned}

▬▬┤|B u k i j u t s u

{Style name here}
• {Stage progression / techniques learned}


▬▬┤|F o r m l e s s S t y l e

Locked Style: Katana
• {D-rank} + Gained at D-Rank
• {C-rank} + Preleveled
• {B-rank} + Preleveled
• {A-rank} + {Training Link}
• {S-rank} + {Training Link}
• {S+rank} + {Training Link}

Locked Style: Wakazashi
• {D-rank} + Gained at D-Rank
• {C-rank} + {Training Link}
• {B-rank} + {Training Link}
• {A-rank} + {Training Link}
• {S-rank} + {Training Link}
• {S+rank} + {Training Link}

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Lucio's life growing up was pretty average honestly, except the fact that his father was the kingpin of the Kurokasa Mafia in Giman. Which, growing up in said environment, contributed greatly to his personality and rather ruthless tendencies. Though his mother wasnt unseen or unknown like most within his criminal family and even still lives to this day. Growing up Lucio was trained by his father in the ways of managing a criminal syndicate, fated to lead it upon his death, and in the ways of combat by his more than amply skilled mother. One major occurrence of his life was that when he turned seventeen his father had arranged for him to have a bodyguard by the name of Ciri Lelièvre. Over the next year the two quickly grew close never leaving each others side, not that he would want to leave her side as his feelings for her are starting to come to the fore.
 

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PostPosted: Fri Jul 08, 2016 7:36 pm
You both look good to go.

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PostPosted: Sat Jul 09, 2016 10:34 am
monkeyboy900



Alright, I apologize for the delay, as we are dealing with last minute wedding details on my side! But, here we go!

As far as Profile Acceptance mods go, I am admittedly one of the tougher when it comes to finer details. As Mizukage, I like to see details in profiles for my village because Profiles aren't just for me to look at, but for you to keep an updated record on as your character constantly grows. It also serves as a vital reference for being able to play your character effectively, and as such I will be pointing out places that need "fluffing up" or details.

PersonalAttributes
• In all honesty, a chakra increase like this would be...useless. It would get you one D-ranked technique. I wouldn't bother with it, but it's your choice. I'm not going to deny you based off of this. Could be replaced by a -1 post reduction to learning Taijutsu techniques, or perhaps "Master Contortionist: Able to break out of grapples by paying just the original cost of the grappling technique".
• Slight Physical Defense Increase. Overall, this won't mean much, as descriptives matter not at all until you get a Supreme increase. A Slight increase is 1/6th of a rank. Personally, I would switch this to something else, such as "Ten free jutsu", "Is able to adjust Taijutsu styles to allow their usage through a spear that has been specially meditated over for 5 posts".
• Slight Speed Increase, as stated above, is 1/6th increase over others. Per guild rules, these don't account for anything until you have reached a Supreme increase (6/6), which increases the speed of a technique by 1 rank. This can be accomplished by learning styles of Taijutsu/Bukijutsu. My suggestion is to use this to add 1 Bukijutsu to your lists, that way you can learn one that increases your speed.
• Are you looking to decrease the amount of time it takes to learn Genjutsu by 1 post? This is unclear.

JutsuLimitations
• 6 * 2 = 12 jutsu. Combined with the 2 from Taijutsu, and 5 from your Bloodling Bonus, you have 19 Ninjutsu slots, not 25. 6 of those slots would be for Earth techniques, 6 for Lightning, and the rest could be whatever you wanted. Suggestion I have is to list them separately on your profile, that way you don't get confused on it.

History
Histories is where I become the hardest.Histories help define a character in details, and allows you quite a bit of tools for referencing in your posts and in roleplay along the way. This isn't something where people go to read and understand, this is for you to know what your own history is. Be detailed! Now, a good point of fact is that there hasn't been a "Great War" in...well...ever, as far as this guild has existed, so that part would need to be removed. Died of polio? Cool. Or not dead at all, and missing? Gives you something to work with in character, a goal to be accomplished. A drive for existence! How about saying your brother was murdered by someone, your father taken, and the only clue was a strange, black eye scrawled on a ryo and left for you to find. No idea of who or what it was, or where your father was, you turned to the village to gain knowledge. You could write that you went through the academy, struggling because you were never talented, and getting out middle of the pack, but with anger issues to keep you going for years. While you're at it, reference your past in your personality, referencing events that made you act this way!

Think outside of the basics. Be detailed, because this is stuff you can reference, and it defines your character. That's my suggestion. The only mandatory required update is telling me what you meant in regards to the attributes above.
 

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