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 Posted: Sat May 07, 2016 4:38 pm
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[ Removing Nylathria Uzumaki ]
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Full Name: Sayuri Yamanaka
Nickname:
Age: 15
Birthdate: May 13th
Gender: Female
Height: 5'7"
Weight: 134lbs
Physical Appearance: Many had called Sayuri beautiful but sometimes, she does not see that. Along with her natural pink hair which was waves of light and darkness that reached to her hips if she had it free from any binding. Her eyes are stormy grey in color with tiny green speckles that could only be seen if you were right at her face. Slender with hourglass figure, her chest was a simple firm B-cup with firm round butt, Sayuri was obviously not well for any kind of strength but she was in fact, flexible and practiced yoga along with Pilates every day. High cheek bones with feminine jawline, she sometimes wears her lip piercing and does not have her ears pierced, at least, until she becomes chuunin and receive her earrings. As of right now, Sayuri has three piercings. One on the lip and the other two not exactly visible. Sayuri always, ALWAYS have a black choker on.
Nindo: "Never forget."
Personality: Calm and confidence with herself, Sayuri was usually very respectful to anyone she met even if they disrespected her. Usually motherly, she cares for those close to her and give strangers a cold heart. It takes several tries for Sayuri to ever warm up to someone. As of now, she still had not shown or expressed anger.
Village: Sungakure
Title: Genin
Rank: D-Rank
First Class: Genjutsu
Second Class: Genjutsu
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Bloodline: Yamanaka
Chakra Pool: 470
Stamina Pool: 30
Chakra Element: Raiton and Katon
Chakra Color: Sunset pink
Chakra Materialization: Warm soft glow in flames around her.
Strengths:
• Genjutsu
• Medium range
Weaknesses:
• Taijutsu
• Bukijutsu
Fears:
• Extremely Clastophobic
• Slow torture
Class Disciplines :
• Inception: The user's genjutsu prowess has increased the sheer power of the genjutsu, making them act a rank higher then they are (up to S rank). This increases the Kai cost for an opponent.
• Mental Defenses: The user is more aware of how a genjutsu affects the mind, making them more aware and able to detect genjutsu and are thus more resistant to it. Increases genjutsu detection, and reduces Kai cost by 1 rank.
Reductions:
• Learn Genjutsu 3 posts faster
• Learn Eiseijutsu 1 post faster
• Learn Ninjutsu 2 posts faster
• Learn Bukijutsu 1 post slower
Personal Attributes:
• Physically Weak - Sayuri is able to learn ninjutsu 2 post faster, but must learn Bukijutsu one post slower.
• Mind over Matter - Can retrain Bloodline techniques as if an A-rank to become X-rank Techniques
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Ryo: 両0
AC: 0
Missions Complete:
D Rank :: 0
C Rank :: 0
B Rank :: 0
A Rank :: 0
S Rank :: 0
Crafting Jobs Complete:
D Rank :: 0
C Rank :: 0
B Rank :: 0
A Rank :: 0
S Rank :: 0
Limitations:
• Ninjutsu : : 00 / 10
• Genjutsu : : 00 / 24
• Taijutsu Styles: : 00 / 00
• Bukijutsu Styles: : 00 / 00
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Weapon Type:
Weapon Range:
Weapon Weight:
Weapon Location:
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Maruton:
• Henge no Jutsu [ Transformation Technique ]
• Kawarimi no Jutsu [ Substitution Technique ]
• Bushin no Jutsu [ Clone Technique ]
• Suimen Hokou no Waza [ Act of Water Surface Walking ]
• Kinobori no Waza [ Act of Tree Climbing ]
• Kai [ Release ]
Raiton
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Katon
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Yamanaka
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Born and slightly raised in the beautiful Land of Flowers, her parents felt bored and decided that moving Sunagakure would give them the adventure they would need. Not to mention, the flowers that purely grow in the desert, they could care for it. Sure enough, when she was 10 years old, they moved from the Land of Flowers to Sungakure. Her parents retired from the shinobi life while Sayuri struggled with the academy for quite some time. The children were close to each other since birth and she had no one. Isolated and an outcast from another village, Sayuri had made no friends. She still graduated with excellent marks for genjutsu and her own bloodline, Yamanaka, but not so much for other things.
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Posted: Mon May 09, 2016 1:59 pm
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Submitting for approval on Mana's behalf. Work has him swamped but he wanted to get this in for consideration. She will be replacing Rakuin Sanmiitai as Mana's third character but will go to Kumogakure. His current character there, Kinpaku, will be leaving Kumogakure.
Mana_ecl Zetsuya  ▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|ρ є r ѕ σ η α ℓ • ∂ α т α|├▬
Full Name: Himito Nagadera-Saitomo Umekikane
Nickname: Hitoare (a teasing name from her trainer, Kozuki), Himi (commonly), Mito (on permission)
Age: 13
Birthdate: 3/15/XxxX
Gender: Female
Height: 5' 9"
Weight: 137 lbs
Nindo: "No others shall sleep before me."
Personality: Never the fan of people, it's always a surprise to herself to step up and say something. Maybe not the right thing, but what she has to say must obviously be important! To undermine her (whether or not she's right) is an insult to her. A sense of humor akin to her sister's, Himito often finds herself laughing at things that most people would find distasteful, not quite the princess she should be sometimes. Often when pressured, Himi boils down to a simple fight or flight mechanic.
Only in controlled environments does Himi attempt to show off her soft side, or as her fatigue continues to grow.
Village: Kumogakure
Title: Genin
Rank: D-Rank
First Class: Ninjutsu
Second Class: Taijutsu
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Bloodline: Kōton [Light Release]
Chakra Pool: 225 + 75 + 60 + 10 = 370
Stamina Pool: 25 + 175= 200
Chakra Element: Katon & Raiton
Chakra Color: White like light!
Chakra Materialization: It appears like shimmering stars flecked about her.
Strengths:
• Street brawls
• High stakes brawling!
Weaknesses:
• Easily provoked
• Often is easily distracted due to her minimized sleep.
Fears:
• Anatidaephobia [The fear of being watched by ducks]
• Somniphobia [The fear of falling asleep]
Class Disciplines :
• Elemental Dual Wielder: Your maximum chakra pool is increased by {10} points. The ninjutsu limit provided by this class is split amongst both of your chosen elements. ( At genin rank, rather than having a total of [ 06 ] ninjutsu slots for Katon or Suiton techniques, this class provides you with [ 06 ] slots for both Katon and Suiton techniques. Any ninjutsu slots received from other sources are filled at your discretion. )
• Brawler: Your taijutsu is just one side of your skill, as you are also versed in utilizing ninjutsu as well. Your taijutsu body greatly increases your flexibility and reflexes, while at the same time granting you an additional 2 ninjutsu techniques per level, then an extra 4 ninjutsu per rank after jounin.
Reductions:
• Learn taijutsu {1} post faster
• Learn Ninjutsu {1} post faster
• Learn Katon techniques {1} post faster
• Learn Raiton techniques {1} post faster
Personal Attributes:
• Brawl in the Streets! -- Additional taijutsu slot is awarded.
• Blinding Brawl! -- Koton techniques performed cost 10 less chakra to use.
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Ryo: 両 0
AC: 0
Missions Complete:
D Rank :: 0
C Rank :: 0
B Rank :: 0
A Rank :: 0
S Rank :: 0
Crafting Jobs Complete:
D Rank :: 0
C Rank :: 0
B Rank :: 0
A Rank :: 0
S Rank :: 0
Limitations:
• Ninjutsu : :
---- Katon : : 00 / 06
---- Raiton : : 00 / 06
• Genjutsu : : 00 / 01
• Taijutsu Styles: : 00 / 02
• Bukijutsu Styles: : 00 / 00
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Weapon Type: Gauntlets
Weapon Range: (No bonus range)
Weapon Weight: 4 lbs
Weapon Location: Hangs on her right hip when not secured out of the village.
Summoning Type:
Summon Sage:
Pacts:
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• 5x throwing knives
• 10x kunai
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Maruton: {Start with the following six only}
• Henge no Jutsu [ Transformation Technique ]
• Kawarimi no Jutsu [ Substitution Technique ]
• Bushin no Jutsu [ Clone Technique ]
• Suimen Hokou no Waza [ Act of Water Surface Walking ]
• Kinobori no Waza [ Act of Tree Climbing ]
• Kai [ Release ]
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Katon
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• {Stage progression / techniques learned}
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A Void and a Light. Two bloodlines that shouldn't have mixed. Despite that, when their parent's met, Honsho and HImito's parents decided to marry. It wasn't a love at first sight. But it didn't stop them from deciding to throw it in the faces of their respective families. They took refuge from the general disapproval with an uncle and took his last name for their own, Umekikana.
Shortly after that, their mother became pregnant with twin girls, Honsho and Himito, who were born in early spring. Himito was born first while Honsho was born a few minutes later and with a low pigment count. She's not albino but her hair, eyes and skin are very pale, her blonde hair more white and her blue eyes more pearl colored than blue. As they grew and were trained, their parents grew less and less interested in the village as a whole, spending more and more time in the towns and open spaces around the village.
Eventually, the girls were given a choice: to remain in the village and become shinobi or go live in the mountains with their parents who had chosen to retire there. Himito had gone out with her sister, unwittingly shadowed by her trainer that their father had selected, considering Himi's natural affinity to wrestling in the most undignified of fashions. A basic education in etiquette, so to speak. Unfortunately, being in the wrong place at the wrong time is a cruel thing. Her sister with less practice in hand to hand combat practice than herself found herself wounded, and Himi was stuck treading water.
The girls likely would have died, if not for the interference of the trainer, Kozuki. It was a preventable loss, were it not for the fact that it was three on one. In the end, it left the girl bruised and battered, in the midst two bleeding bodies. Ignorant of what it meant, Kozuki informed the child that he'd be fine. He was going to close his eyes and rest for a bit, and that she should apply pressure to her wounded sister.
Hon was saved, but Kozuki never woke.
She'd wanted to leave and wander, her sister merely obliged. Always did. Her sister became a reminder of her naivety, despite the fact that it likely would always have ended that way, outside of taking a completely different route. Years of beating herself up, in endless cycles of fatigue and brawling have defined her path as a shinobi yet, pent up rage guiding her way down the road. She would never be so powerless again.
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Posted: Thu May 12, 2016 6:01 pm
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Reason for resubmission I'm wanting to change the following: A previous PA listed in my character's profile from learning Jutsu 1 post early to something applicable to my character.
Switching one of my chakra elements, that I realize now I won't be using. Each of these are highlighted in red.
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Full Name: Tanaka Hiro Yuu
Nickname:
Age: 17
Birthdate: 8 August
Gender: Male
Height: 73 inches, 185 centimeters
Weight: 167 pounds, 76 kilograms
Appearance: Hiro Yuu Tanaka has his father's chiseled chin, with a somewhat gruff complexion from a very small five-o'clock shadow. While acne has already passed through this teenager, it left him with a rough-looking face along his left jawline. This, coupled with a rather generic nose, and deep sockets leading to his brown iris eyes give him a rather rugged appearance. he has small ears which sit close to his head, and a crop top of faded brown hair which twirls slightly after a good hard day's sweat. Very little of his face is taken care of with any excess, minus a shave in the morning with his usual routine.
To compliment his stone-like face, Hiro has a modestly toned figure of a man that works a lot with his hands. Large arms and wide shoulders frame the man. He also sports a modest tan, giving him a slightly olive pigment to the waistline. On hot summer days, he often goes shirtless during work, where if one sees him from behind will notice several lashing scars, many cris-crossing others. He doesn't talk about them. Most lead further down along his a** and legs, both of which are far paler in skin tone than his upper body.
Hiro doesn't have many clothes. Just about everything in his wardrobe is used for work. His wardrobe includes: Seven pairs of underwear
Five different T-shirts
Four different pairs of jeans (one in black, three in blue)
Three different pairs of socks
Two different coveralls
Two pairs of work boots
One pair of dress shoes
The one thing Hiro does tend to have at his disposal are tools. However, since an incident at a shop, he's now without several key tools as well as his tool belt, currently confiscated by the local dumpling shop until either repairs are completed, the brats are caught, or until Hiro himself pays for the damage caused. No good punks!
Nindo: Whatever, someone's gotta do it.
Personality: Hiro tends to not give a damn about personal feelings. He doesn't particularly like the people who call themselves "Ninja". What he's seen is they tend to leave a wake of destruction in their path, rather than help to rebuild for the common man. Most of them he finds disgusting, war-mongering cretinous ingrates who couldn't swing a hammer unless it was to bash somebody's face. While the rest of his village celebrated ninja to the point of worship, in his opinion, he was one of the few who settled into cleaning up the mess.
This is where Hiro thrives. He takes a lot of pride in his work, rather than the magics of chakra. Unfortunately, as it turns out, he's actually got a decent amount of the magical stuff within him. Hence why he was forced to undergo the trivial training of the Ninja Academy in Kohona and learn the ways of what he typically refers to as "ninja bullshit". For whatever it's worth, it has helped his ability to do good work, at the price of exhaustion at the end of the day.
Village: Kohonakagure
Title: Genin
Rank: D
First Class: Worker
Second Class: Worker
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Bloodline: {If none you may pick one of the following packages:
Wisdom: +1 PA, +2 custom techs, 10 jutsu slots
Chakra Pool: 150
Stamina Pool: 150
Chakra Element: Earth, Lightning
Chakra Color: White
Chakra Materialization: Mild Wisps
Strengths:
• Good at menial jobs.
• Good at deciphering Ninja techniques.
Weaknesses:
• Cannot fight fire with fire (aka match up with Ninja techniques)
• Gets pissed off easy
Fears:
• Working for an idiot
• If Ninja ruin the village he's trying to piece together.
Class Disciplines :
• Legendary Smith: The user is able to gain a 5th title rank from every applicable smithing tree. 'Training' for Legendary takes 10 posts of crafting work, provides an additional 1 post off of crafting times, and gives a Grandmaster NPC (of the same area) for usage. In addition, any item solo crafted (without an npc helper) is non-reproducible by non-Legendary titled smiths.
• Balanced Master: This discipline mimics one of the user's other class's non-chosen disciplines. (i.e. non-Worker Class) The Double Specialization perk for said class is not available for gaining. In addition, any jutsu learned can be paid for with either chakra, stamina, or a mix of the two. Any further chakra types are also subject to this. Recovery amounts for chakra and stamina are doubled while working, and working counts as relaxing.
• Lifetime Disciple: This discipline is for those wishing to gain from a lifetime master, never to be one themselves until their master is deceased. Gaining knowledge from over the course of their studies, the disciple will receive twice the benefits from each of their master's smithing trees (up to their completed titles), while in the living presence of them. After their master's death, they will successfully pass on a permanent, one-quarter of the benefit to their own Lifetime Disciple, if any. (round up to the nearest applicable number, as designated in the smithing thread)
Reductions:
• Apprentice Glass-Blowing
• Apprentice Woodsmithing
Personal Attributes:
• Dusk To Dawn: Sacrifices 10 starting Jutsu slots to complete any job 2 posts faster.
• Overtime All The Time: Earns 1.5 times the standard rate of Ryo for job and mission completion.
• Jack Of All Trades: For every different style job title achieved, reduce the required amount of jobs required to finish to achieve the next rank by one. Minimum requirement: 3 Jobs per rank.
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Ryo: 両8900
AC: 1500
Missions Complete:
D Rank :: 8
C Rank :: 0
B Rank :: 0
A Rank :: 0
S Rank :: 0
Crafting Jobs Complete:
D Rank :: 4 2/10 Apprentice Blacksmith
2/10 Apprentice Botanist C Rank :: 0
B Rank :: 0
A Rank :: 0
S Rank :: 0
Limitations:
• Ninjutsu : : 01 / 04
• Genjutsu : : 00 / 00
• Taijutsu Styles: : 00 / 00
• Bukijutsu Styles: : 00 / 00
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• x1 Blunt-tipped Kunai
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• x1 Scroll: -Kage Bunshin-
• x1 Scroll: -Jounin-Level Sealing-
• x1 Missive: -Learn a Jutsu-
• x1 Directive: -Scribes and Scrap:
Mechanic's Manual: Volume One: 200 Ryo.
Mechanic's Manual: Volume Two: 1000 Ryo.
Genin's Scroll x 2: 800 Ryo.
Probe Set x 2: 1000 Ryo
Wood and Iron:
Book of Gelel: 1000Ryo
The Forge:
160 Iron Ore Bundles: 4000Ryo
100 Charoal 'Ore' Bundles: 1000Ryo-
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Maruton
• Henge no Jutsu [ Transformation Technique ]
• Kawarimi no Jutsu [ Substitution Technique ]
• Bushin no Jutsu [ Clone Technique ]
• Suimen Hokou no Waza [ Act of Water Surface Walking ]
• Kinobori no Waza [ Act of Tree Climbing ]
• Kai [ Release ]
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Formless
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Hiro's work ethic was instilled in him almost from birth. Borh to a man who slaved over a blacksmith's furnace for fourteen hours a day, seven days a week, Hiro Tanaka only saw his father sweat and work his fingers to the bone. Meanwhile, his mother often sat lazily by until going out to buy dinner, rather than cook it herself. Needless to say, there was a lot of strife between the couple in the Tanaka house.
Hiro himself was the oldest of three children, a testament to the father's strength and stamina. There was very little love, and most of the time growing up in Konohakagure, very little positivism from the house. The grandfather survived the third and fourth ninja wars, and instilled in his sons the disgust for the ninja way of life. The father in turn passed that disgust to Hiro. However, as he lived in a ninja village, everything business and work related went through the path of the ninja. Thus, sometime after being sick and tired of being sick and tired of his family, Hiro Tanaka joined the academy in order to get more work and be rid of them once and for all.
Having no natural skills in ninjutsu, taijutsu, or genjutsu, Hiro struggled greatly in his studies. His saving grace was the fact he was without question the hardest working man in show-business the academy. Through pure effort, and a modest understanding of the science behind the magical techniques all ninja performed, he was able to use what little chakra he had of his own to do some of the most rudimentary jutsu, and pass as one of the lowest ranks in the history of the academy. Take that society!
Theme Song For Home Life: You Know You Wanna Click It
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Posted: Fri May 13, 2016 11:19 am
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Posted: Fri May 13, 2016 6:44 pm
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Full Name: Hanako Hide
Nickname: Hana
Age: 17
Birthdate: April 24
Gender: Female
Height: 5' 4"
Weight: 125 lbs
Nindo: "Find Beauty in all Things."
Personality: At first glance, it's no secret that she is of the Raigyo Bloodline. To her friends, she is loving, caring, and would do anything for them. To her enemies, she is sadistic and often times a beautifully terrifying sight. Hanako is generally friendly and an overall nice girl. She speaks her mind about things and often times gives very solid advice. However, Hanako is somewhat fragile when it comes to ways of the heart, which is why she keeps others at a distance. If you can get to open herself up to you, you have a solid friend for life.
Village:Konoha
Title: Genin
Rank: D-rank
First Class: Bloodline
Second Class: Ninjutsu
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Bloodline:Raigyo
Chakra Pool:365
Stamina Pool: 145
Chakra Element: Wind and Fire
Chakra Color: Bright Crystal blue with purple swirls
Chakra Materialization: Hanako's chakra materializes in the form of flower petals breezing off of her, fluttering in a whirlwind around her.
Strengths:
• Fast analytical and deductive reasoning
• Stealthy
• Close Combat
• Expert homemaker
• Skilled Negotiator
• Adaptive
Weaknesses:
• Friends- Will do anything for them
• Children and cute animals
• Initially, comes off as closed off to people trying to befriend her.
• Not experienced in the ways of love
• Pretty eyes
• Rarely trusts anyone
Fears:
• Spiders
• Losing loved ones
Class Disciplines :
• Elemental Dual Wielder
• Blood Knight
Reductions:
• Learns ninjutsu 1 post faster
• Learns Bloodline techniques 1 post faster
• Reduction in Genjutsu/Ninjutsu learning bonuses of one [1] post.
Personal Attributes:
• Avid Enthusiast: 10 additional ninjutsu slots
• Multitasker: The ability to cast ninjutsu with one hand
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Ryo:0両
AC: 0
Missions Complete:
D Rank :: 0
C Rank :: 0
B Rank :: 0
A Rank :: 0
S Rank :: 0
Crafting Jobs Complete:
D Rank :: 0
C Rank :: 0
B Rank :: 0
A Rank :: 0
S Rank :: 0
Limitations:
• Ninjutsu : : 00 / 26
• Genjutsu : : 00 / 03
• Taijutsu Styles: : 00 / 01
• Bukijutsu Styles: : 00 / 00
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Weapon Type: Bladed Fan
Weapon Range: 14 inches
Weapon Weight: 0.5 lb
Weapon Location: Hidden on her person at all times, depending on what she is wearing.
Summoning Type: n/a yet
Summon Sage: N/A yet
Pacts:
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Maruton:
• Henge no Jutsu [ Transformation Technique ]
• Kawarimi no Jutsu [ Substitution Technique ]
• Bushin no Jutsu [ Clone Technique ]
• Suimen Hokou no Waza [ Act of Water Surface Walking ]
• Kinobori no Waza [ Act of Tree Climbing ]
• Kai [ Release ]
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Being a direct descendant of Kioko Hide, Hanako was born and raised by others to be proper and excel in all things as a child. She was raised by beauty, with beauty, surrounded by all things beautiful. Being a Raigyo, and a direct descendant, it was guaranteed that she would grow in beauty. However, being raised in that way didn't give her much in the ways of friendships and real connections. Sure, she felt empathy and what she was trained to do, but she never actually made personal ones. When she was old enough, she went through the academy fairly smoothly. She was kind of a loner, not knowing quite how to make a connection from herself to another person. When she does make a connection, she will cherish it. However, she shows no mercy when it comes to foes.
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Posted: Fri May 13, 2016 6:58 pm
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Full Name: Bunji Uzumaki
Nickname: {Nicknames or Aliases}
Age: 17
Birthdate: December
Gender: Male
Height: 70in / 177.80cm
Weight: 134Ilbs / 60.78 Kilo
Nindo: "Peace can be Obtained by any means."
Personality: Bunji is a care free individual and can at most times be found training or reading. His laid back attitude doesn't hinder his ability to focus on his work (missions) or his duties as a shinobi. Though it must be noted he isn't really that fond of battle. Bunji will try to talk his way out of battles, though he does not wish to insult opponents by refusing to fight. Bunji always treats those around him with respect, even those who are weaker. He refuses to give up when he believes something is wrong and will break a rule to do what is right. He is at other times interested in the women of the village, and can often be found giving them nicknames. Regardless whether or not they like or approve of such.
Village: Rogue - Giman
Title: Genin
Rank: D - Rank
First Class: Bukijutsu
Second Class: Ninjutsu
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Bloodline:: Uzumaki
Chakra Pool: 360
Stamina Pool: 190
Chakra Element: Suiton, Doton
Chakra Color: Orange
Chakra Materialization: Chains floating along behind him. They sweep through the air and wrap around the torso and arms of Bunji before dangling off his wrist.
Strengths:
• Bukijutsu/Close Combat
• Disciplined
Weaknesses:
• Long Ranged Combat
• Honorable Towards Everyone
Fears:
• Dying Alone
• Not being remembered by his Accomplishments
Class Disciplines :
• Elemental Dual Wielder: Your maximum chakra pool is increased by {10} points. The ninjutsu limit provided by this class is split amongst both of your chosen elements. ( At genin rank, rather than having a total of [ 06 ] ninjutsu slots for Katon or Suiton techniques, this class provides you with [ 06 ] slots for both Katon and Suiton techniques. Any ninjutsu slots received from other sources are filled at your discretion. )
• Mystic Hero: The user is much like a hybrid warrior, focusing on mixing ninjutsu into their personal arsenal. Through their great devotion to this path the user can cast ninjutsu without hand seals while wielding a weapon, D at gennin, C at chunnin, B at Jounin, A at Konin, and S at Sannin. These techniques maintain the same description and criteria to use, as well as require the same amount of time to mold the chakra through the weapon as would be needed to perform hand seals, meaning the techniques are not instantaneously cast. The user’s spirit is so strong, that they can utilize their physical bukijutsu techniques to negate ninjutsu techniques of the same rank or below.
Reductions:
• Learn ninjutsu one (2) post faster.
• Learn Bukijutsu techniques one [1] post faster.
Personal Attributes:
• [+10] Ninjutsu Slots
• Receives a -20 stamina cost to Bukijutsu Techniques (Formless as Well), in return Genjutsu cost for bunji require +15 more chakra to use.
• The Uzumaki have deep chakra pools: +40 Chakra or +40 Stamina.
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Ryo: 両{Money} {Start at zero}
AC: {Advancement credit} {Start at zero} {Additional information in mission board subforum}
Missions Complete:
D Rank :: 0 {All start at zero}
C Rank :: 0
B Rank :: 0
A Rank :: 0
S Rank :: 0
Crafting Jobs Complete:
D Rank :: 0 {All start at zero}
C Rank :: 0
B Rank :: 0
A Rank :: 0
S Rank :: 0
Limitations: {How many of each technique you can learn. Refer to class info}
• Ninjutsu : : 00 / 08/Element + 10 Nin Allotment (34 Altogether)
• Genjutsu : : 00 / 01
• Taijutsu Styles: : 00 / 00
• Bukijutsu Styles: : 00 / 01
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Weapon Type: {Sword, spear, etc.}
Weapon Range: {Its reach. In inches/centimeters please}
Weapon Weight: {How heavy it is. In pounds/kilograms please}
Weapon Location: {Where it is stored}
• {When you create your profile, you may have any one basic weapon.)
Summoning Type: {Ex. Dogs, Bears, Slugs, etc.} {If none, remove summon section}
Summon Sage: {Yes or No}
Pacts: {Ex. Dogs: Pakkun, etc. Sages do not need to list pacts}
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• {List any projectiles/items you've obtained here. Ex. Shuriken x15, Flak jacket, etc.}
• {When you create your profile, you may have any combination of 15 projectiles. Bombs and explosive tags are not projectiles!}
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Maruton: {Start with the following six only}
• Henge no Jutsu [ Transformation Technique ]
• Kawarimi no Jutsu [ Substitution Technique ]
• Bushin no Jutsu [ Clone Technique ]
• Suimen Hokou no Waza [ Act of Water Surface Walking ]
• Kinobori no Waza [ Act of Tree Climbing ]
• Kai [ Release ]
Suiton
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Doton
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Bloodline - Uzumaki
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{Style name here}
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{Style name here}
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Being born into the world of the Shinobi land, Bunji was brought up in a care free mentality with the emphasis of reading and training being expressed in a free spirited ideology. His parents brought him up to keep a laid back attitude through out everything he did and not stress upon things which could trouble him to the point of exhaustion. And so he kept this mentality, even through his academy days. He worked enough upon his training and any mission given to him during his academy days with poise and a relaxed manner. He learned to talk his way through his battles with a clear mind through his attitude he obtained in his upbringing. Eventually through his academy days, he learned to pick and choose his battles, never refusing if it meant insulting the opponent if he did such a thing.
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Posted: Fri May 13, 2016 7:32 pm
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Posted: Fri May 13, 2016 8:14 pm
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Posted: Sat May 14, 2016 1:42 am
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Full Name: Makoto Uzumaki
Nickname: Mako, "Little Pervert" and "Makoto The Mischievous" (aliases)
Age: Twelve
Birthdate: August 23
Gender: Male
Height: 5'1"
Weight: 103 lbs
Nindo: "Live by your own rules."
Personality:
The Mischief Maker
From the moment you see that signature Cheshire Cat grin on his face, you'll know something bad is about to go down... if it hasn't already. Makoto is famous for causing all sorts of trouble wherever he goes; although usually harmless, the frequency of these shenanigans is enough to drive anybody mad. It may possibly be his way of attracting attention to himself, but whatever the case, he enjoys doing it nonetheless. Thanks to his no good older brother, he has developed a very unhealthy habit of various perverted tendencies, including spying on females and groping their body parts. His overall free-spirited personality makes him a bit of a rebel at times, and he's never afraid to speak his mind. Getting what he wants and making sure things go his way is all apart of the job when you decide to become a constant troublemaker. Makoto is surprisingly intelligent for his age, showing to possess wits to outsmart individuals with various tactics. Even as the cunning trickster that he is, his fearlessness and strong will make him a formidable individual in the face of adversity. He's always confident in himself, and sometimes arrogantly so, but by no means to put others down. He lives for the thrills in life, as they are the one thing that keeps life from going stale.
Village: Konohagakure - Hidden Leaf Village
Title: Genin
Rank: D-Rank Shinobi Troublemaker
First Class: Ninjutsu
Second Class: Bukijutsu
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Bloodline: Uzumaki Clan
Chakra Pool: 360
Stamina Pool: 185
Chakra Element: Katon
Chakra Color: Azure
Chakra Materialization: An unremarkable aura of Azure colour.
Strengths:
• Ninjutsu :: Despite only being born with one elemental chakra nature, Makoto excels with using various ninjutsu of the null element. Thanks to his Uzumaki lineage, he shows much promise with the Fuuinjutsu arts, which is his main style of Ninjutsu in terms of combat.
• Omni-Range Combat :: His capability to fight at all ranges stems from his proficiency with both swords, and basic ninja tools, such as Kunai and Shuriken.
• Tricks and Distractions :: With his 'career' as a full-time troublemaker, it's pretty obvious that he's more than capable of performing feats meant to annoy, distract, or outright drive people mad, and this is the same for combat.
• Dauntlessness :: Makoto's biggest strength lies in his determination, strong will, and fearlessness. He will stand firm in the face of adversity no matter who, or what it is. Often times he may even seek danger out, just for the thrill.
Weaknesses:
• Squishy :: His small size makes him quite vulnerable to heavy attacks.
• Rebellious :: As expected of any troublemaker, he's not very fond of authority, or being bossed around. While he is capable of following orders, often times he will choose not to, in favor of doing things the way he wants to.
• Joker :: Makoto's playful personality often distracts him from realizing the seriousness of dire situations.
• Overzealous :: As if he wasn't as troublesome as they come, Makoto eagerly hunts down trouble just for the fun of it. This may lead to several occasions where he bites more than he can chew.
Fears:
• Growing Up :: Both physically and mentally speaking. Makoto believes that as one gets older, they become dull and bossy due to lost hopes or dreams.
• Confinement :: Being locked up, as many victims of his little pranks have often wished upon him or threaten to have the ANBU do to him.
Class Disciplines :
• Elemental Dual Wielder - Your maximum chakra pool is increased by 10 points. The ninjutsu limit provided by this class is split amongst both of your chosen elements. (In Makoto's case, this is Katon and Maruton/Fuuinjutsu.)
• Mystic Hero - The user is much like a hybrid warrior, focusing on mixing ninjutsu into their personal arsenal. Through their great devotion to this path the user can cast ninjutsu without hand seals while wielding a weapon, D at gennin, C at chunnin, B at Jounin, A at Konin, and S at Sannin. These techniques maintain the same description and criteria to use, as well as require the same amount of time to mold the chakra through the weapon as would be needed to perform hand seals, meaning the techniques are not instantaneously cast. The user’s spirit is so strong, that they can utilize their physical bukijutsu techniques to negate ninjutsu techniques of the same rank or below.
Reductions:
• Ninjutsu Class :: One (1) post reduction to Ninjutsu techniques.
• Bukijutsu Class :: One (1) post reduction to Bukijutsu techniques.
• Uzumaki Clan :: One (1) post reduction to Ninjutsu techniques.
Personal Attributes:
• Power of Youth! :: Makoto starts with one additional Taijutsu style.
• Trickster's Veil :: Fuuin created by Makoto are invisible, unable to be detected by normal sight, and sensory or Dojutsu until the moment they activate.
• Uzumaki Clan :: Makoto's great life force reduces effects of all life-sapping jutsu to one-quarter their normal effects, and gains +40 stamina.
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Ryo: 両 0
AC: 0
Missions Complete:
D Rank :: 0
C Rank :: 0
B Rank :: 0
A Rank :: 0
S Rank :: 0
Crafting Jobs Complete:
D Rank :: 0
C Rank :: 0
B Rank :: 0
A Rank :: 0
S Rank :: 0
Limitations:
• Ninjutsu : : 00 / 14
• Genjutsu : : 00 / 01
• Taijutsu Styles: : 00 / 01
• Bukijutsu Styles: : 00 / 01
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Weapon Type: Chinese Broadsword
Weapon Range: Arm length + 26"
Weapon Weight: 1.3 lbs
Weapon Location: Strapped horizontally upon the back.
Summoning Type: N/A
Summon Sage: N/A
Pacts: N/A
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• 10 Shuriken
• 5 Kunai
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Maruton:
• Henge no Jutsu [ Transformation Technique ]
• Kawarimi no Jutsu [ Substitution Technique ]
• Bushin no Jutsu [ Clone Technique ]
• Suimen Hokou no Waza [ Act of Water Surface Walking ]
• Kinobori no Waza [ Act of Tree Climbing ]
• Kai [ Release ]
Katon
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Fuuinjutsu
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Uzumaki Clan
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• {If none, remove section}
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{Style name here}
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{Style name here}
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{Locked Style name here}
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• {C-rank} + {Training Link}
• {B-rank} + {Training Link}
• {A-rank} + {Training Link}
• {S-rank} + {Training Link}
• {S+rank} + {Training Link}
{D-rank Slots}
• {Stage progression / technique learned} + {Training Link}
• {Stage progression / technique learned} + {Training Link}
{C-rank Slots}
• {Stage progression / technique learned} + {Training Link}
• {Stage progression / technique learned} + {Training Link}
{B-rank Slots}
• {Stage progression / technique learned} + {Training Link}
• {Stage progression / technique learned} + {Training Link}
{A-rank Slots}
• {Stage progression / technique learned} + {Training Link}
• {Stage progression / technique learned} + {Training Link}
{S-rank Slots}
• {Stage progression / technique learned} + {Training Link}
• {Stage progression / technique learned} + {Training Link}
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After Makoto's parents died at the age of seven, he was raised... looked after... barely supervised by his older brother who was just starting his Shinobi career. He quickly grew to following in his brother's actions, as that was the only person he was able to look up to, taking on some of his more unlikable traits such as perversion. However, the time they did spend together wasn't always so bad. Often times he'd come back with amazing stories to tell of his Shinobi experiences, and encounters with monsters that he fought. It was this, that inspired Makoto to pursue his goal in becoming a Shinobi, and someday soon, a famous monster hunter. After enrolling into the Academy, he was widely known for being a class clown, and because of his focus on causing trouble with his teachers and entertaining his classmates, his scores never truly reflected what he was capable of. With the encouragement of his classmates, and the lack of proper discipline and guidance outside of the Academy, the terror of his mischief quickly spread around the village. Very rarely was he ever caught in the act, but the few times he was, caused him to despise authority, and older people in general. And all the while, interaction between him and his older brother became lessened over time, before Makoto was completely unsure of his whereabouts. Despite that, he graduated the Academy with slightly below average scores... now one step closer to his dream. |
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Posted: Sat May 14, 2016 2:38 am
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Posted: Sat May 14, 2016 11:28 am
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Full Name: Taylor Aburame
Nickname: Bug girl, Swarm, Weaver
Age: 17
Birthdate: June 8th
Gender: Female
Height: 5 ft 2
Weight: 135 pounds, runners build
Nindo: "even the chaff has it's place"
Personality: Shy and somewhat awkward but loyal to the point of being called blind. Taylor is mute happy around her bugs than engaging in social activity with more than two additional people. She's a hard worker and started running in the mornings to get a sense of freedom in her life.
Village: kirigakure
Title: genin
Rank: genin
First Class: ninjutsu
Second Class: tamer
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Bloodline: aburame
Chakra Pool: 350
Stamina Pool: 150
Chakra Element: wind, earth, fire
Chakra Color: mottled grey
Chakra Materialization: unsettling and almost crawling.
Strengths:
• highly adaptive
• advanced strategy in combat
Weaknesses:
• finite resources
• Bullying victim
Fears:
• Stupid people in large numbers having access to important decisions
• Politicians
Class Disciplines :
• Pack Leader: The user can bond with up to 7 animals, though they must all be of the same type. Due to the large number of animals they can bond with, the animals receive very little individual attention hindering their growth, never allowing them above chuunin level. They can only manipulate 1 of the user's elements, have 1/3 the users chakra and stamina pool, and perform 1 activation a post. At genin, the user can select one trait associated with their animal style, and submit it to the custom jutsu thread. The user starts, at genin, with 2 companions. At chuunin, they may have up to 4 companions. At jounin, they may have 6 companions. At konin, they may have 7 companions.
• Elemental Brandish: You are able to have three (3) chosen chakra elements. Your elemental ninjutsu possess less power, causing them to be overwhelmed by techniques of the same element and rank; however, your wide range of elemental prowess allows you to exploit elemental weaknesses. The ninjutsu limit provided by this class is split amongst all of your chosen elements. Additionally, you begin with three (3) less ninjutsu slots, and earn two (2) less ninjutsu slots whenever you rank up
Reductions:
• Learn ninjutsu one (1) post faster.
• Learn taijutsu one [1] post faster.
Personal Attributes:
• Science!: Supercontraction of silken clothing only occurs upon complete moisture absorption, meaning fully damp from rain, submerged, or from direct Suiton
• Arthopodaudiance: Ability to understand and speak with arachnids
Pet bonus attributes:
Gained at genin: Weaver: Cloth items she produces through crafting have the property of steel but are as light as silk.
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Full Name: Grue
Nickname: N/a
Age: 2 years
Birthdate: june 3rd
Gender: Male
Classification: Darwins Bark Spider
Height: 4.5 feet tall
Weight: 135 pounds
Chakra Pool: 105
Stamina Pool: 50
Chakra Element: Wind
Chakra Color: Mottled grey
Chakra Materialization: Clouds, indistinct
Strengths:
• adaptability
• utility
Weaknesses:
• Less venomous than other species
• Somewhat fragile
Fears:
• Large bodies of water
Limitations: • Ninjutsu : : 00 / 10
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Full Name: Tattletale
Nickname: TT
Age: 2 years
Birthdate: multiple dates
Gender: Both
Classification: Darwin bark spider
Height: 4.5 feet tall
Weight: 135 pounds
Chakra Pool: 105
Stamina Pool: 50
Chakra Element: Fire
Chakra Color: Mottled grey
Chakra Materialization: Clouds, indistinct
Strengths:
• adaptability
• Regeneration over time
Weaknesses:
• Less venomous than others in species
• Somewhat fragile
Fears:
• Large bodies of water
Limitations: • Ninjutsu : : 00 / 10
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Ryo: 両0
AC: 0
Missions Complete:
D Rank :: 0
C Rank :: 0
B Rank :: 0
A Rank :: 0
S Rank :: 0
Crafting Jobs Complete:
D Rank :: 0 {All start at zero}
C Rank :: 0
B Rank :: 0
A Rank :: 0
S Rank :: 0
Limitations: {How many of each technique you can learn. Refer to class info}
• Ninjutsu : : 00 / 03 (9)
• Genjutsu : : 00 / 01
• Taijutsu Styles: : 00 / 01
• Bukijutsu Styles: : 00 / 00
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Weapon Type: miséricorde
Weapon Range: 24inch blade
Weapon Weight: 2 pounds
Weapon Location: Sheath on her hip
Summoning Type:
Summon Sage:
Pacts:
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• 30 caltrops
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Maruton: {Start with the following six only}
• Henge no Jutsu [ Transformation Technique ]
• Kawarimi no Jutsu [ Substitution Technique ]
• Bushin no Jutsu [ Clone Technique ]
• Suimen Hokou no Waza [ Act of Water Surface Walking ]
• Kinobori no Waza [ Act of Tree Climbing ]
• Kai [ Release ]
{Doton}
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Fuuton
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{Katon}
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Aburame Clan Jutsu
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{Style name here}
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{Style name here}
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Growing up in kirigakure as a normal child, Taylor joined the academy a little later in life than most. She came in at about the age of 9, Taking her time in her clases and trying to learn as much as she could. However an issue soon became evident. In every single case of social activity there are those that want to try and usurp and establish there dominance. She was bullied, and bullied alot. She ended up skipping a lot of classes, avoiding school when she could get away with it. However eventually she did graduate, towards the back of the class.
However she didnt go dirrectly into service. She took her knowledge and kept it, trained with it on her own to make sure that she retained the basics the academy taught. She started running to get a sense of freedom away from people. Always staying within the village confines she would run daily, getting up early in the morning to take a run and keep herself in shape. She eventually blossomed into a tall and slender woman, however she still thinks her body has much to be desired. She has her own subtle beauty but it isnt what people usually consider hot or desirable. Finally she joined back into the kirigakure military, shortly after a invasion of demons and monsters took the rest of her family from her. She has nothing left but her own thoughts and free will, so she simply made the decision.
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Posted: Sat May 14, 2016 7:26 pm
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Posted: Sat May 14, 2016 8:15 pm
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NecroPlant Lanfaer The only issue I have so far is with this:
"Arthopodaudiance: She can hear and see what her bugs hear and see with a small amount of concentration at any given time."
This is more of a technique, utilizing chakra to share senses. It isn't something you could do without Chakra, meaning it would count as a technique. An alternative I could suggest is being able to speak to Arachnids, allowing you to understand their speech where others wouldn't.
For future consideration. Mushi Sekkou no Jutsu [ Insect Spying Technique ] Rank: E [ 1 Insect ] Official Description: By linking themselves to an insect, they are able to see and hear what it experiences, providing a long-range and relatively safe and inconspicuous way to gather intel. The user is also able to tell when the bug had been killed. Guild Description: Range of 10 kilometers. Already does this to a lesser scale and is classified as a technique. This is only a single insect. The scale of your P.A isn't mentioned. By that I mean how many insects it affects and how far it can affect. It's main grounds for disapproval is because of this. The average amount of insects an Aburame can hold is 500 but they can produce as many as their regeneration allows them. Creating say 2000 and scattering them and being able to commune with all of them is an overwhelming thought and an incredible power that would put even the highest rank sensor to shame. My suggestion is this, I think it's within reason of allowing you an E-ranked jutsu as a P.A. that can be used for free. When used in conjunction with said E-ranked jutsu you could have up to two insects you can commune with using insect spying technique. But. On the scale that it currently seems to represent which is a communion with all your insects regardless of distance that falls under something close to an S/S+ ranked jutsu. Also Lan's suggestion of speaking to spiders is proposed because Spiders are treated as Arachnids and not insects. This is my suggestion.
Could I compromise by making the attribute as listed above?
Ability to speak to and understand arachnids and insects?
Its kinda an important character to me in certain sentimental respects. |
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