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PostPosted: Thu Apr 07, 2016 5:27 pm
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Full Name: Kaz Mugen
Nickname: Kaz, Tiger Eye, Pokey

Age: 20
Birthdate: July
Gender: Male

Height: 5'11"
Weight: 180 lbs

Nindo: "{Way of life}"
Personality: Kaz often tends to be a bit on the cocky side. His family and vision abilities always put him a bit above the average shinobi.

Village: Sunagakure
Title: Genin
Rank: D
First Class: Bukijutsu
Second Class: Tamer


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Full Name: Tsume
Nickname: N/A

Age: 7 Years Old
Birthdate: October
Gender: Female

Height: 4 1/2 feet tall at the shoulder
Weight: 100 lbs

Chakra Pool: 250
Stamina Pool: 250
Chakra Element: Doton (Earth) Katon (Fire)
Chakra Color: Color of Fire
Chakra Materialization: Dancing flames around her body

Strengths:
• Close combat
• Tracking
Weaknesses:
• Being without her 'Pack' (Kaz)
• Suiton (Water)
Fears:
• Leaving Kaz alone when he needs her
• Dislikes cats.

Limitations:
• Ninjutsu : : 00 / 08

Maruton:
• Henge no Jutsu [ Transformation Technique ]
• Kawarimi no Jutsu [ Substitution Technique ]
• Bushin no Jutsu [ Clone Technique ]
• Suimen Hokou no Waza [ Act of Water Surface Walking ]
• Kinobori no Waza [ Act of Tree Climbing ]
• Kai [ Release ]







Doton







Katon









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Bloodline: Kinmukugan X (awaiting approval)

Chakra Pool: 250
Stamina Pool: 250
Chakra Element: Raiton, Fuuton
Chakra Color: Golden
Chakra Materialization: Aura that surrounds the user like sparks.

Strengths:
• His Vision
• Ability to keep hand to hand opponents out of effective range.
Weaknesses:
• Other Dojutsu users
• Blinding techniques
Fears:
• Being truly alone, Solitary
• Getting very old.

Class Disciplines :
• Mystic Hero: The user is much like a hybrid warrior, focusing on mixing ninjutsu into their personal arsenal. Through their great devotion to this path the user can cast ninjutsu without hand seals while wielding a weapon, D at gennin, C at chunnin, B at Jounin, A at Konin, and S at Sannin. These techniques maintain the same description and criteria to use, as well as require the same amount of time to mold the chakra through the weapon as would be needed to perform hand seals, meaning the techniques are not instantaneously cast. The user’s spirit is so strong, that they can utilize their physical bukijutsu techniques to negate ninjutsu techniques of the same rank or below.
• Eternal Partners: The user is able to nurture, grow, and bond with a single animal, almost becoming an animal themselves with traits, characteristics, and natural weaponry. This single animal will be exactly the same at the user's level in chakra and stamina pool, and able to manipulate any two elements, and perform 3 activations a post (max of 2 offensive) For every rank the user increases, they can claim a trait associated with their chosen animal (communicate with species, natural weaponry, senses, ect) to be approved in the custom jutsu thread, and add it to their character.
Reductions:
• Learns Bukijutsu 1 post faster
• Learns Taijutsu 1 post faster
Personal Attributes:
• Mindful Awareness: Gains an additional 10 Genjutsu
• Honest Eyes: With his natural skill, Kaz can detect Genjutsu of one stage higher than his Doujutsu would normally allow. Detection does not affect ability to Self-Kai.

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Ryo: 両0
AC: 0

Missions Complete:
D Rank :: 0
C Rank :: 0
B Rank :: 0
A Rank :: 0
S Rank :: 0

Crafting Jobs Complete:
D Rank :: 0
C Rank :: 0
B Rank :: 0
A Rank :: 0
S Rank :: 0

Limitations:
• Ninjutsu : : 00 / 14
• Genjutsu : : 00 / 15
• Taijutsu Styles: : 00 / 00
• Bukijutsu Styles: : 00 / 00

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Weapon Type: Spear
Weapon Range: 108" maximum thrust range
Weapon Weight: 10 lbs
Weapon Location: Usually on his back. If not being held.

Summoning Type: N/A
Summon Sage: N/A
Pacts: N/A

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• x10 Senbon
• x5 Kunai

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Maruton:
• Henge no Jutsu [ Transformation Technique ]
• Kawarimi no Jutsu [ Substitution Technique ]
• Bushin no Jutsu [ Clone Technique ]
• Suimen Hokou no Waza [ Act of Water Surface Walking ]
• Kinobori no Waza [ Act of Tree Climbing ]
• Kai [ Release ]







Raiton







Fuuton







Golden Eyes of Clarity Bloodline







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{Style name here}
• {Stage progression / techniques learned}







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{Style name here}
• {Stage progression / techniques learned}







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Being left at the age of 15 to fend for himself. He took on a bit of a rough personality growing up. He was mildly picked on in the village by other children aspiring to become shinobi. He has had numerious girlfriends over his time in the village but they always seem to leave due to his inability to open up to them. Always keeping them at a distance before getting to know him too well. After some time he ended up meeting a Bukijutsu master that passed through the village. Strangely enough this man took an odd interest in Kaz. He told him that he reminded him of his son who had died off in some war. Making a temporary residence in the village he stayed for a while teaching Kaz the way of the spear. He became fascinated with the arts of weapons and physical training but like all good things he had to venture out into the world again, Leaving him to train on his own after that. Kaz has dealt with abandonment most of his life, which is why he is usually reluctant to involve himself with someone new, regardless of how bad he wants to.

Obtaining his companion Tsume was piratically a godsend. She saved him from the solitude he was experiencing. She was given to him from his sensei as a gift knowing he would put a battle pet to good use as well as have a friend that was so close.


With standing approval of the Guild Captain [AandOE], Vice-Captain [Ergo War] and Myself, this attribute is respectable and thus this profile is approved.  
PostPosted: Sat Apr 09, 2016 1:01 pm
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Full Name: Gen Uchiha
Nickname: Gen

Age: 16
Birthdate: Jan 26
Gender: Male

Height: 71 inch / 180 cm
Weight: 127 lbs / 57 kg

Nindo: "You're Beneath Me."
Personality: He always seems serene and apathetic towards other people, even while actually deeply conflicted. Due to the desire to prove himself over his father Gen is normally seen training even when it may be considered not needed. It's that desire that causes him to seem distant from others but in reality this desire brings out a strong emotion in him. Wanting to actually believe the stories that his father told him when he was younger. Gen wants to keep the village of Konohagakure safe unlike his father did.
He is notably calm, even in battle. He generally acts indifferent, bordering on arrogance, to most situations he is faced with, and rarely views his opponent as being worth his time. Despite consistently stating himself to be far stronger than opponents Gen tries to retain a formal tone.


Village: Konohagakure
Title: Genin
Rank: D - Rank
First Class: Genjutsu
Second Class: Bloodline

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Bloodline: Sharingan

Chakra Pool: 375
Stamina Pool: 145
Chakra Element: Fire / Katon
Chakra Color: Black
Chakra Materialization: Flows like water upwards before dissipating.

Strengths:
• Genjutsu
• Bloodline
• Determination
Weaknesses:
• Suiton / Water Jutsu
• Physical Strength
• Doesn't actually like fighting.
• Gets angry when someone mentions that Konoha is weak.
Fears:
• The Fall of Konohagakure
• Being seen as someone like his father. (Someone that isn't a Shinobi.)

Class Disciplines :
Inception: The user's genjutsu prowess has increased the sheer power of the genjutsu, making them act a rank higher then they are (up to S rank). This increases the Kai cost for an opponent.
Thoroughbred: Your maximum chakra pool and maximum stamina pool are both increased by {10} points, and you receive an additional {05} points to each pool whenever you rank up. Additionally, when you perform bloodline techniques above Rank D, you are refunded {05} chakra or {05} stamina, depending on which energy was used. ( If chakra was used, you recover chakra; if stamina was used, you recover stamina; if both were used, you recover both. )
Reductions:
• Learn genjutsu one (1) post faster.
• Learn bloodline techniques one (1) post faster.
Personal Attributes:
• Gen has found himself more adept to Genjutsu. Thus allowing him to receive a (-5) to any Genjutsu above D rank.
• Flame Proficiency: Katon [ Fire ] ninjutsu cost [50%] less chakra to perform. (Bloodline)
Sharigan Abilities
• To Copy
• To Hypnotize


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Ryo: 両 0
AC: 0

Missions Complete:
D Rank :: 0 {All start at zero}
C Rank :: 0
B Rank :: 0
A Rank :: 0
S Rank :: 0

Crafting Jobs Complete:
D Rank :: 0 {All start at zero}
C Rank :: 0
B Rank :: 0
A Rank :: 0
S Rank :: 0

Limitations: {How many of each technique you can learn. Refer to class info}
• Ninjutsu : : 00 / 09
• Genjutsu : : 00 / 14
• Taijutsu Styles: : 00 / 00
• Bukijutsu Styles: : 00 / 01

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Weapon Type: {Sword, spear, etc.}
Weapon Range: {Its reach. In inches/centimeters please}
Weapon Weight: {How heavy it is. In pounds/kilograms please}
Weapon Location: {Where it is stored}
• {When you create your profile, you may have any one basic weapon.)

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• 5x Kunai
• 10x Shuriken

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Maruton: {Start with the following six only}
• Henge no Jutsu [ Transformation Technique ]
• Kawarimi no Jutsu [ Substitution Technique ]
• Bushin no Jutsu [ Clone Technique ]
• Suimen Hokou no Waza [ Act of Water Surface Walking ]
• Kinobori no Waza [ Act of Tree Climbing ]
• Kai [ Release ]

Katon


Bloodline


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• {If none, remove section}

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{Style name here}
• {Stage progression / techniques learned}

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• {Stage progression / techniques learned}

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Gen was born into the Uchiha clan and from that grew into a young boy. Both of his parents cared greatly for him, and for the most part were always around. Under his father Gen began to learn the basic's of the shinobi. This was even before being enrolled in the academy and was merely words no actual training took place. Much like his father Gen wanted to become a shinobi for the village of Konoha. It was due to the stories that his father would tell him from time to time. That ninja of the village were to protect the village. Or so he thought. Right before it was time that Gen was to be enrolled into the academy a shocking truth came forth. Etched into his mind Gen was surprised that when Anbu ninja's showed up at his families house. They were looking for his father. Gen not really sure what was going on led them to where he was. Assuming that he made have been needed he was shocked to find his dads worried expression along his face especially when the Anbu grabbed him and subdued his arms behind his back. The Anbu would go on to speak about the impersonation of a Shinobi from the village of Konohagakure, and that his sentence was imprisonment.

Having watched his father being hauled off by actual ninja Gen began to question the things that his father had told him. Losing faith in him over time Gen would continue to ask his mother questions to which she would attempt to change the subject. But gen would quickly get mad when she refused to answer him eventually growing into him telling her that he would be better than he ever was. That one day he;d actually be a ninja of the village and that he'd exceed the stories that his father told him. It was something that he felt he had to do. An upon entering the academy his personal beliefs toiled within himself. He wanted to be better than his dad so that he could be a ninja, so he could actually keep the village safe. One could call it an obsession of sorts. Wanting to graduate and become better than someone that was never truly a ninja. But such desires began to make Gen believe that he had to also be better than everyone else.

This time in his life shaped a little as he went through the academy. Beliefs of following the rules became an almost absolute, and for anyone else that didn't how could they be considered shinobi.

 

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PostPosted: Sat Apr 09, 2016 1:33 pm
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Full Name: Saeko Nakoi Hyuuga
Nickname: Sae, Koi

Age: 16 [Youthful in appearance]
Birthdate: August 18th
Gender: Female

Height: 68''
Weight: 165 lbs

Nindo: "My Nindo is to grow and never stop growing. I will become strong to defend my friends, my clan, and my village!"
Personality: Sometimes courteous towards others, Saeko can be rather humble and quiet as she feels her abilities are lacking; however, she does take risks when it comes to building her skills. She is dedicated and ambitious to her training as well as her ability to control the Byakugan. Usually self controlled in her emotions and her thoughts, she develops mutual relationships with people very easily through her calm and almost poise appearance. She can be nurturing to those she holds dear, but usually forms more mutual relationships with others which stay at an acquaintance level. She is generally trusting, but only at a superficial level as she has developed issues with trusting others who attempt to get closer to her. She will show deep affection to those who are closer to her and if she is attempting to do anything nurturing such as attempting to mend wounds or cook a meal.

Village: Konohagakure
Title: Genin
Rank: D-Rank
First Class: Medical
Second Class: Bloodline



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Bloodline: Hyuuga

Chakra Pool:200 + 130 = 330
Stamina Pool: 50 + 120 = 170
Chakra Element: Fire + Wind
Chakra Color: Steel Blue
Chakra Materialization: It extends out like flickering fire from the body.

Strengths:
• Close combat for Saeko is exceptionally well off in her strengths. She trains herself daily with taijutsu in regards to simple taijutsu techiniques as well as Gentle Fist.
• Her amount of self-dedication is important as she will avoid distractions, motivate herself to continuously work hard, setting goals, and controlling her emotions. She is very self-discipline and it would be out of her character to act out.
• Teamwork is important for Saeko as she will effectively communicate, or attempt to, with her team members, listening to them as well as encourage them. She holds respect for her team and attempts to hold them close to her in terms of relationships. These people would be considered more her friends than the regular person off the street.
• She is consistently hard working, attempting to maintain good quality work and usually does more than just the required.
• Medical techniques are very easy for Saeko to perform as she has spent most of her Academy days with her head in the books, when she had an allow break from training her Gentle Fist.

Weaknesses:
• Elemental weakness to Water and Lightning as a part of general information.
• Ninjutsu is a weakness for Saeko though she will train herself to be consistent and precise in her ability to use ninjutsu.
• Impatience can be an issue with Saeko, even though she is caring and nurturing of her team members; however, she can be impatient with regards to her standards of performance. If she feels someone is slacking or she might be slacking, she will be hard on the other person or herself, passively aggressive in her tone.

Fears:
• Herpetophobia: Fear of reptiles or creepy, crawly things
• Aeroacrophobia: Fear of open high places.

Class Disciplines :
Blood Knight: Your bloodline techniques possess greater power, allowing them to overwhelm techniques of the same rank, and preventing them from succumbing to elemental weaknesses of techniques the same rank. Can cast bloodline techniques through one-handed seals.
Medical license: The user is much more adept at utilizing items during combat. The user gains 2 free custom items, one at Chunnin and one at jounin. These items must be associated with and utilize, medical abilities. Additionally, they gain a -5 chakra cost to all medical techniques, and gain an extra 2 medical techniques per shinobi title beyond Academy.

Reductions:
• Learn Taijutsu one post faster.
• Learn Maruton ninjutsu one post faster.
• Learn Medical techniques one post faster.
• Learn Bloodline techniques one post faster.

Personal Attributes:
• Medical Knowledge: Knowing what she knows from treating her own injuries and others as well as her nurturing nature, Saeko is able to use her medical techniques more efficiently. By this, she is able to use medical techniques with -5 Chakra points.
• Infused Physical Attacks: Can cast Ninjutsu with her physical attacks, taijutsu or formless, without consuming an activation at 1.5x chakra cost.


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Ryo: 両 0
AC: 0

Missions Complete:
D Rank :: 0
C Rank :: 0
B Rank :: 0
A Rank :: 0
S Rank :: 0

Crafting Jobs Complete:
D Rank :: 0
C Rank :: 0
B Rank :: 0
A Rank :: 0
S Rank :: 0

Limitations: {How many of each technique you can learn. Refer to class info}
• Ninjutsu : : 00 / 09
• Genjutsu : : 00 / 07
• Taijutsu Styles: : 00 / 01
• Bukijutsu Styles: : 00 / 00
• Eiseijutsu: : 00 / 10


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Weapon Type: Recurve Bow
Weapon Range: 45 yards; Damage decreased the further the target
Weapon Weight: 0.8 lbs
Weapon Location: Carries on her back, putting the string around her torso

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• Five Kunai
• 10 Shuriken
• [Will add inventory when achieved Chuunin for Medical License]


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Maruton: {Start with the following six only}
• Henge no Jutsu [ Transformation Technique ]
• Kawarimi no Jutsu [ Substitution Technique ]
• Bushin no Jutsu [ Clone Technique ]
• Suimen Hokou no Waza [ Act of Water Surface Walking ]
• Kinobori no Waza [ Act of Tree Climbing ]
• Kai [ Release ]

Katon


Fuuton


Bloodline


Eiseijutsu


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Gentle Fist


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Kyoukan Ya



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Being born into the Hyuuga clan has its perks and consequences and Saeko is no stranger to either. Held with high esteem within Konohagakure, the Hyuuga name is one to live up to with complete dedication, regardless of what side of the clan you might be on. Saeko was born to a generation of Hyuuga members who were basically a watered down bloodline from the main branch. Her grand parent, her maternal mother's mother, was a sibling of the main branch and choose to marry someone outside of her class and clan. Saeko's mother followed suit and married a man who was outside of the clan, giving birth to Saeko as well as any siblings who would come afterward if they decided to copulate further.

[Childhood and Academy Life]
Growing up within a clan whose very name could shake the boots of those around, Saeko was not given much choice in the matter of how she lived. A diluted bloodline to a child who had promise, yet struggled with her own Byakugan at a young age was discouraging to both the clan elders, her immediate family, and herself. She was shut in from the outside walls of the clan as her mentors belittled the children of other names and families, claiming they would only further delude her mental capabilities and tarnish the Hyuuga name. Some days Saeko would climb out of her home which was established in the main branch's estate and play with the children from houses nearby. She would learn to braid hair, to play with other kids in little games they created, and just let loose to be a child. It never failed that her mentor would find her outside the estate, dirtied and muddled from the exciting games the children played with her, and he would demand she return to her studies so she could excel as a Hyuuga.

Her mentors, as she had several through the years as each seem to give up on her until her last and recent one, believed she was a failed attempt to keep the bloodline strong, blaming her grand mother and her mother for diluting the line by seeking outside affection. That is until she met her last mentor, who had master the bloodline and maintained the Hyuuga traditions. He was a kind man, almost like her late father who had died when Saeko was young. The age she met this man was just before she went to study in the Academy, leaving an impression in the young ninja which carried through to her graduation and on from that point. He still maintained his mentor-ship over her, even after her graduation, yet he kept his distance and did not interfere with her training other than to give her advice when she sought it.

Now she stands as a graduated student, dedicated to her training and ready to excel in whatever she puts her mind to. She wishes to fight for her village, nurturing those who need her aid and keeping up with her battles she faces as a 'weaker generation'.
 
PostPosted: Mon Apr 11, 2016 11:54 am
Metal Trsu


Hello! Lanfaer here to look over your profile. Now, I will start with a disclaimer: I'm pretty tough on profiles, and as such I might come across as an a**. I am sorry for this, it is not intentional. However, I am up for discussing anything I turn down!

♠ Personality and Fears
Starting off, I take issue with the combination of these two. Firstly, your character is apathetic. Apathy means you literally give two craps about anything regarding most of what others think. If your personality is one of arrogance, not giving a care to feeling his opponent is in any way worthy of facing him...he won't care at all that he isn't known. Fears are meant to be something that influences your personality, either strongly or weakly, but always able to effect them. A fear of seeing Konoha weak, as an example, at the very least I expect this character to take any suggestion that Konoha is less than the best as a personal insult that he'll fight people over. That, or have an anxiety attack. As far as not being known, that means you're likely going to be in everyone's face, trying to prove yourself in order to not only be "known", but "recognized". They sound the same, but it really isn't. So being a "lone wolf" would be an impossibility without extreme anxiety lest people not recognize you. A suggestion of different fears that would change things is "Fears a lack of recognition for acts performed", which would mean you brag about what you do, and "Fear of the fall of Konohagakure", which would mean you'd do anything to protect your village.

♠ Personal Attribute {1}
This is denied. Stamina is the reflection of a person's given physical capability, quite literally physical exhaustion. Ninjutsu utilize the force of your spirit, which is a separate force, and in truth the two don't equate. You cannot use your body's physical endurance to generate a force of spirit, not enough to directly summon a Ninjutsu or Genjutsu. An alternative to do something similar is to make a technique, a Custom one, that allows you to convert Stamina into Chakra. Same thing, but a technique.

♠ Personal Attribute {2}
Unfortunately, also denied. Per the Personal Attribute Guide no Personal Attribute may, at any time, allow a person to obtain more than 20 Chakra//Stamina. You can utilize a PA to have 20 [period], or anything below that.

♠ History
Other than the Hyuuga, there is no support at all for a "noble" family of the Uchiha. To have one, you will need to go to AandOE and get the idea approved, then go to every member of the Uchiha bloodline and work with them to create family households. Keeping in mind, of course, that such an act still would not guarantee you the Noble house unless everyone agreed to it. A suggestion for depth: explain the clash. Go into detail regarding Hiro. This is an important experience in your life. Your history defines your actions and personality as a person. What made you apathetic? What made you arrogant? Work more here.


iDerz

As above, so below. I can be harsh.

♠ Personal Attribute → Combat Matching
This is an extremely vague Attribute, and in fact, I cannot approve or deny it without simply knowing more. What do you mean by this? What does this do for you? How would it effect combat?
 

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PostPosted: Mon Apr 11, 2016 1:32 pm
Was told to post this here for reapproval.

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Full Name: Ryoku Nara
Nickname: Ryo

Age: 25
Birthdate: September 20th
Gender: Male

Height: 5' 11"
Weight: 145

Nindo: "Death is only a shadow away"

Personality: Ryoku normally does not care for a whole lot. He a bit of a desire to appeal to his parents. He has a slight bit of an over confidence to him once he starts learning his clan techniques. He has not yet taken an interest in girls and often enjoys just relaxing in trees and by water sources. He later assumes his responsibility but only after experiencing a dangerous situation. Ryoku can be over confident at times due to all the work he put into pleasing his parent. Knowing when he actually applies himself he could be very dangerous. He has recently become Kage after a bit of a journey through Konaha. His attitudes have grown a bit more dedicated with his duties and has grown up to the point where he actually does care about what happens in the village and even wants to improve upon it. He also has started taking a notice in girls (Late bloomer) partially due to the amount of attractive girls now part of Konaha although has not taken a singular interest in one yet.

Village: Konohagakure
Rank: Kage Konin
First Class: Tamer
Second Class: Bloodline













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【Full Name】 Chloe
【Nickname】 none

【Age】 11
【Birthdate】 January 8th
【Gender】 Female

【Species】 Red tailed Hawk
【Height】 20"
【Length】 20" Wingspawn: 40"
【Weight】 4 lbs

【Nindo】 "I will proove that I am not just a pet"

【Personality】
Chloe has always acted as a guide for Ryoku, always watching over him from above but never the two are unique to their own. They usually keep a bit of distance from each other but always within calls reach. Chloe watches from overhead 80% of the time keeping a sharp eye on Ryoku. Usually has a slight distaste for Ryoku's constant lazy attitude.

【Village】 Konohagakure
【Rank】 Jounin
【Owner】 Ryoku Nara


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Bloodline: The Nara Clan Approval


Chakra Pool:
855 (Shinobi-mas applied)
Stamina Pool: 875 (Shinobi-mas applied)
Chakra Element: Katon (fire), Suiton (water)
Chakra Color: Dark blackish flames
Chakra Materialization: As a fire

Training Missions


Strengths:
• Extremely fast thinker
• Very fast, nimble.
• Always able to have a plan for whatever the situation.
Weaknesses:
• Very bright lights
• Weakness to treats
• Not very motivated to do tasks
Fears:
• Loosing his home
• Misguiding his team (when assigned)
• Being outsmarted

Class Disciplines :
• Eternal Partners: The user is able to nurture, grow, and bond with a single animal, almost becoming an animal themselves with traits, characteristics, and natural weaponry. This single animal will be exactly the same at the user's level in chakra and stamina pool, and able to manipulate any two elements, perform 3 activation a post (max of 2 offensive), and gaining +8 jutsu slots a rank.. For every rank the user increases, they can claim a trait associated with their chosen animal (communicate with species, natural weaponry, senses, ect) to be approved in the custom jutsu thread, and add it to their character.

• Blood Bender: User receives and additional 3 custom bloodline techniques. To clarify, these are custom techniques that must involve and utilize the characters bloodline.

Reductions:
• Learn bloodline techniques five [5] post faster. [With PA]
• Learn Ninjutsu in two [2] posts faster. [Shinobi-mas]
• Learn taijutsu two [2] post faster.

Personal Attributes:
• Clan Loyalist: Can learn bloodline techniques in 2 less posts but cost one extra post for Bukijutsu
• Clan Extremist: Bloodline Techniques cost -10 chakra in addition to Taijutsu costing +5 more stamina for simple and +5 stam/chakra for complex and +5 chakra to spiritual taijutsu.
• Santa's Knowledge: one post reduction to Buki and Ninjutsu



【Tamer Partner】 : Chloe

【Chakra Pool】 855
【Stamina Pool】 875
【Chakra Element】 Fuuton [Wind], Raiton [Lightning]
【Chakra Color】 White
【Chakra Materialization】 As if smoke was waving in the wind.



【Strengths】
• Eye sight, Long distance vision
• Swiftness
• Strength (ability to fly with greater weights)

【Weaknesses】
• Fire
• Under water
• Having to rely on people other than Ryoku

【Fears】
• Loosing Ryoku altogether
• Large cats
• Open sea with no land in sight


【Partner: Chloe Jutsu's 】

▬▬┤Ninjutsu 9/22

Maruton:
Kirigakure no Jutsu [Hidden Mist Technique]
Oiroke no Jutsu [Sexy Technique]

Fuuton
Kaze no Bouseki Tate [Spinning Shield of Winds]
Kouryuu [Wind Release Stream]

Raiton
Rakurai no Jutsu [Lightning Bolt Technique]
Raikou Bunshin no Jutsu [Lightning Clone Technique]
Touei no Jutsu [Flickering Light Technique]
Chidori [Thousand Birds]
Hachidori no Mure no Jutsu [Swarm of Hummingbirds Technique]





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Ryo: 両 20888
AC: 66300

Missions Complete:
D Rank :: 15
C Rank :: 3
B Rank :: 8
A Rank :: 2
S Rank :: 0

Limitations:
• Ninjutsu : : 06 / 18
• Genjutsu : : 00 / 05
• Taijutsu Styles: : 01 / 04
• Bukijutsu Styles: : 00 / 02
• Customs : : 05 / 13 (3 must be used for bloodline abilities.)(Shinobi mas applied)

Ryoku's Design (Custom Jutsu)
Ab
• Shadow Oil
Learned
Technique Name: Shadow Oil
Rank: X
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Kageton
Description: Allows the user to cast any of his Nara clan techniques for an additional 35 chakra cost per use. In doing so laces them with a dark flammable substance that is easily masked in the shadows. Once this is done the path of the shadows it had taken and is currently can now be caught fire. Although the fire will dispel the shadow jutsu due to the light it will emit. Any form of fire can catch the shadow or path on fire streaming to wherever the shadow has reached even on a person. Once done the fire burns in that locations or locations for the duration of one post after being caught.

• Deep Shadow Evasion
Learned

Technique Name: Deep Shadow Evasion
Rank: B
Type: Bloodline
Element: Kageton
Description: The Nara clan user can enter his own shadow as a means to quickly escape or advance on a target near a local shadow in the immediate area (Half mile range, within thread) This is an alternative to the elemental or non elemental body flicker technique. The reason for the higher chakra rank is the user is able to stay hidden in the local shadows for one additional post after entering before having to emerge in one of the local shadows. This is also to prevent being auto killed if all shadows are expelled in the area. The user has the ability to use some clan ability while hidden in the shadows.

Restrictions
Follows all rules explained by the body flicker explanation.
Limit to one use of nara clan jutsu while hidden inside this jutsu per battle.

• Spontaneous Shadow
Learned

Technique Name: Spontaneous Shadow [Jihatsu-tekina kage]
Rank: X
Type: Bloodline
Element: Kageton
Description: Much like the shadow sewing technique. This allows the user of the jutsu to use other shadows beside his own to use a shorter range of the sewing technique. To create shadow spikes or many spikes that can reach approximately six feet in distance. This is limited to shadows as small or as large as the user could notice with their vision. Multiple spikes can be created if the chakra is payed. One spike created within a 10 foot radius of the user will cost a C rank to perform. 11 - 30 foot radius of the user will cost a B rank to perform, 31- 50 foot radius of the user will cost an A rank to perform (per spike and if rank permits) and 51-100 foot radius of the user will cost an S rank to perform (IF the user can see the shadow this far and rank permits its use)

Restrictions
1) The member of the Nara clan cannot use the shadow of another person for this ability.
2) The member of the Nara clan cannot create an animate object close enough to another target to simply launch an attack so close it is unavoidable.
3) Once used if the shadow hits or misses it returns to the shadow it came quickly unable to reuse the jutsu again for 2 posts.
4) Each spike has a 6 foot max length

Spacifics of cost
for clarification the costs are per spike, for example each spike in a 30 foot radius would cost B rank chakra PER spike. Also the spikes are all consistent. If the shadow is the size of a dime the spike will only be as wide as a dime to 6 feet long. If the shadow is the size of a house then the spike will only be several inches thick to 6 feet long. It does not increase exponentially because of its source. So each spike can only ever be several inches thick to as thin as the users eye can notice.

• Abyssal Leviathan
Not Learned

Technique Name: Abyssal Leviathan
Rank: S
Type: Bloodline
Element: Kageton/Suiton
Description: The user uses their mastery over the water element and the shadow element creating a enormous creature on par with the size that of a major summon from many of the animal contracts. It summons forth a water serpent so large it has the name Leviathan. As black as night it is built of both water and shadows. This monster then attacks the users target upon request or instruction. It is able to bite with S rank damage or body slam with A rank damage. The The Water Leviathan can be destroyed like most jutsu
same rank or its weakness element one rank lower. The Leviathan being a large serpent is able to slither very quickly on land and bend its body in many ways to avoid attacks. Under water it moves twice as fast and can spear enemies with its sharp nose submerged in larger bodies of water like a torpedo with S rank damage. The size and abilities of this creature are strong enough to give a tailed beast a small run for its money in combat.

Restrictions and weaknesses:
• The Abyssal leviathans weaknesses, Waters weakness of Earth (Doton) one rank lower can greatly Injure the the beast, two to destroy it. Equal rank can destroy it.
• Other Ninjutsu or Taijutsu or Bukijutsu of equal rank can Greatly Injure the beast, two can destroy it. One rank higher can Destroy it.
• Bright sunlight will annoy the creature and cause it to fight close to the ground, Brilliant light will injure the creature allowing it to become vulnerable.
•Can only be cast once per battle due to the amount of energy and focus used to create it.
•Takes two posts to launch the jutsu, to bring both Kageton and Suiton chakra into it.
•The Leviathan is able to stay out for 5 posts of duration, Any longer would force the user to remain in a non moving state pushing chakra into the beast to keep it alive. Costing S rank chakra per post past 5 to sustain.
• The Leviathan gets 2 activation per post.

The Shadow Leviathan uses both elements to strengthen its existence, the Kageton depends on the suiton side to prevent it from being completely expelled by light.

The Shadow Leviathan's Attacks
• Body Slam (A rank damage) - drains from users stamina
• Sharp bite (A rank damage) - drains from the users stamina
• The Leviathan is able to use Jutsu that is currently known by the user of Kageton and Suiton at the cost of the users chakra and stamina depending the techniques cost.

((Edited, changed the name of jutsu))

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• Shadow Web
Learned

Technique Name: Shadow Web [Shadow web]
Rank: B
Type: Bloodline
Element: Kageton
Description: The nara performing the jutsu would cast out thread like strands of shadows along the ground spanning from his own shadow to adjacent shadows making a web of threads stringing many local shadows together until most of the local area is trapped. When an opponent, or ally's shadow gets caught in the web they become bound. A lot like the shadow possession but without the ability to control the target, Only binding them from being able to move, but also preventing handsigns causing most jutsu to fail. This jutsu requires B Rank chakra to perform, but also costs an additional C rank chakra to sustain per post. B rank chakra to sustain per post with someone captured.









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Weapon Type: Whip
Weapon Range: 15 Feet
Weapon Weight: 1.5 lbs
Weapon Location: On the back of his belt
• Black Whip

Custom Weapon

Weapon Name: (Not too confident in the name, Might change name if its ok)
Weapon Type: Custom Chain Whip

Weapon Height: Retracted: 16" Extended 240"
Weapon Weight: 30 lbs
Description: This is a shadow clan ancient weapon architect designed to support Nara's Kageton. A wrapped handle with a sharp steel spike on the bottom of the hilt for very close quarters combat. The chain with spikes along its lengthy chain extends and retracts from the use of a button on the hilt that is crafted through the weapon with tiny gears that works its way through the weapon. Its design can be infused with Kageton chakra and be wielded by the control over the shadow along the whip. This allows the user of the whip to wield the shadow which in turn wields the whip in the direction of the users choice. In doing so in this way causes a drain of chakra a bit higher then that of a shadow possession jutsu from the Nara clan. This particular design also allows Katon chakra to be infused with it. Causing the whip itself to become extremely hot.

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Ability Summary:
• Allows the user to infuse his or her chakra into the weapon Kageton (shadow element) or Katon (Fire element) or both.
• Can extend the weapon into a whip reaching 20 feet length and retract at the push of a geared button. The speed of which it Extends is speed up depending on the user swinging the weapon while doing so or thrusting it out while doing so.
• Two spikes on the chain every other link
• Upon the user infusing Katon chakra with the whip, causing the extended part of the whip to be smoldering hot, causing burns to anyone it hits or wraps around. Costing B rank chakra to perform. C rank chakra per post to sustain
• Upon the user infusing Kageton chakra with the whip, the extended part of the whip will be able to be controlled by the users shadow possession following the whip through the shadow it emits below because it is coming from the users shadow as a source. The direction of the whip can only be slightly altered just like the shadow possession. A rank chakra to perform per use.
• Requires Mechanical Manuel 1&2
• Small hook accessory to latch onto belt

Restrictions:
• If there is no shadow casting under the whip then the kageton side of the ability will be useless, much like regular Nara techniques in these conditions.
• The retraction of the whip can be stopped and overpowered. The mechanic has a bit of a force to the retracting and extending but not that of a great force.
• The weight of the whip is about 30 lbs




Summoning Type:
Summon Sage:
Pacts:

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• Long string
• 8 Kunai
• 7 Shuriken
• 1 lbs dried beef (hawk food)

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▬▬┤|N i n j u t s u

Maruton: {Start with the following six only}
• Henge no Jutsu [ Transformation Technique ]
• Kawarimi no Jutsu [ Substitution Technique ]
• Bushin no Jutsu [ Clone Technique ]
• Suimen Hokou no Waza [ Act of Water Surface Walking ]
• Kinobori no Waza [ Act of Tree Climbing ]
• Kai [ Release ]
• Soushuriken no Jutsu [ Manipulate Shuriken Technique ] x
• Enbu: Ni no Dan [ Dance Performance: Second Step ] x
• Shuriken Kage Bunshin no Jutsu [ Shuriken Shadow Clone Technique ] x

Suiton
Kiri Shakaku no Jutsu [Mist Vision Technique]
Mizu Kamikiri [Rising Water Cutter]
Takitsubo no Jutsu [ Waterfall Basin Technique ]
Suikusari no Jutsu [ Water Chains Technique ]

Katon
Endan [Fireball]
Flame Spread Technique


Way of the shadows, Nara
(Kage Benkyou Shiru [ Shadow Studying ]
(Kageton: Endai Yami [ Shadow Release: Far Reaching Darkness ]
(Kage Nui no Jutsu [ Shadow Sewing Technique ]
(Kuro Higanbana [ Black Spider Lily ]
Kage Bunshin no Jutsu [ Shadow Clone Technique ]
Kage no Gugen [Shadow Release: Embodiment of Shadows]
Oiru Kage [Oil Shadow]


Strategic Demise (Customs)
Kagetaka no me [Eyes of the Shadow Hawk]
Oiru Kage [Oil Shadow]




▬▬┤|G e n j u t s u



▬▬┤|T a i j u t s u

{Style name here}


▬▬┤|B u k i j u t s u

{Style name here}


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Ryoku was born and raised in the leaf village with his two parents who always seemed to be over achievers. He normally tried to achieve their attention but after so many attempts and no matter how hard he tried, it seemed to no avail. He soon started to not care much about how his parents felt and began slacking off. Mostly just enjoying himself on his day to day endeavors.

He has a older brother in the Anbu, but due to this he has not seen him even once since he was recruited. It weighs some on his consciences not knowing weather he is alive or dead, and not being able to inquire about it ether. In his mind once given the chance he would like to join Anbu at some point himself to possibly find his brother. (they were close) Ryoku also has a younger brother Shimo, Ryoku and Shimo were somewhat distant growing up but as Ryoku steadily grew out of his overachiever tendencies, the two became closer as brothers. One day, Ryoku came home with a hawk and was forced to decide whether or not to keep it. He decided to keep it, making Shimo jealous as Ryoku now had someone else to talk to. Shrugging it off and not holding it against him, Shimo still maintains contact with Ryoku whenever he wants to talk.

Being young and touching a baby hawk while still in the nest, not knowing that it would be disowned by its mother carried it home to his parents. They quickly scolded him and were forced to take it in or otherwise condemn it to death. Since then Chloe the hawk (what Ryoku named it) was one of his best friends growing up. Between the ages of 9-16.
 
PostPosted: Mon Apr 11, 2016 1:38 pm
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Alright Changed things around.  

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PostPosted: Mon Apr 11, 2016 2:11 pm
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I changed it.  
PostPosted: Mon Apr 11, 2016 3:17 pm
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Full Name: Kazumi Senju
Nickname:

Age: 18
Birthdate: Oct 23
Gender: Female

Height: 5'1"
Weight: 115 lbs

Nindo: "To abandon your allies is deplorable, to abandon your friends is dispicable, but to abandon your family? None can stoop lower."
Personality: Kazumi is often very sarcastic, but she is optimistic. She tends to plan for the worst, but hope for the best, and would do anything, even go agaisnt standing orders, to help her family. As far as she is concerned, her family comes first in her heart and mind. She is loving, but not above putting her family in their place if she feels they are being ridiculous.

Village: Konohagakure
Title: Genin
Rank: D Rank
First Class: Ninjutsu
Second Class: Ninjutsu

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Bloodline: Senju

Chakra Pool: 550
Stamina Pool: 50
Chakra Element: Suiton, Doton, Fuuton
Chakra Color: Teal Green/Blue
Chakra Materialization: A whirlwind of petals, like a tornado around Kazumi

Strengths:
• Ninjutsu
• Ninjutsu
Weaknesses:
• Close Quarters Combat
• Katon
Fears:
• Losing her Family
• Being Alone

Class Disciplines :
• Elemental Dual Wielder: Your maximum chakra pool is increased by {10} points. The ninjutsu limit provided by this class is split amongst both of your chosen elements. ( At genin rank, rather than having a total of [ 06 ] ninjutsu slots for Katon or Suiton techniques, this class provides you with [ 06 ] slots for both Katon and Suiton techniques. Any ninjutsu slots received from other sources are filled at your discretion. )
• Ninjutsu Specialist: Extra 10 chakra, one (1) extra element (Chose Wind)
Reductions:
• Learns elemental jutsu three (3) posts faster
• Learns Bloodline jutsu one (2) post faster
Personal Attributes:
• Ninjutsu Genius: -2 post reduction on all ninjutsu (elemental and bloodline) at the cost of a +1 post to all genjutsu (if it takes 1 post to learn an E rank, Kazumi takes 2 posts to learn the same genjutsu)
• Nuke it from Space: Kazumi is such a specialist with ninjutsu that she has more range than the average shinobi with her ninjutsu. Her ninjutsu range is doubled, for maximum sniper ability.


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Ryo 両: 0
AC: 0

Missions Complete:
D Rank :: 0
C Rank :: 0
B Rank :: 0
A Rank :: 0
S Rank :: 0

Crafting Jobs Complete:
D Rank :: 0
C Rank :: 0
B Rank :: 0
A Rank :: 0
S Rank :: 0

Limitations:
• Ninjutsu : : 00 / 48
• Genjutsu : : 00 / 02
• Taijutsu Styles: : 00 / 00
• Bukijutsu Styles: : 00 / 00

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Weapon Type: Twin Gunsen (Bladed folding fans)
Weapon Range: Arm length + 8 inches
Weapon Weight: 4 lbs each (8 lbs total)
Weapon Location: Tucked in her belt at the small of her back, like daggers

Summoning Type: N/A
Summon Sage: N/A
Pacts: N/A

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• N/A
• Given up for second fan

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▬▬┤|N i n j u t s u

Maruton: 00/12
• Henge no Jutsu [ Transformation Technique ]
• Kawarimi no Jutsu [ Substitution Technique ]
• Bushin no Jutsu [ Clone Technique ]
• Suimen Hokou no Waza [ Act of Water Surface Walking ]
• Kinobori no Waza [ Act of Tree Climbing ]
• Kai [ Release ]

Suiton: 00/12


Doton: 00/12


Fuuton: 00/12


Mokuton: Bloodline


Customs: 00/08



▬▬┤|G e n j u t s u: 00/02




▬▬┤|T a i j u t s u

{Style name here}
• {Stage progression / techniques learned}

▬▬┤|B u k i j u t s u

{Style name here}
• {Stage progression / techniques learned}

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Kazumi was the middle child of her family, and loved her siblings above all others. So much so that when the UHV attacked the village; when her parents died and her older brother Ryouichi went missing, she went in search of him. Kazumi let her little sister Hozuki know that she was going to look for Ryouichi, and promised to come back for her with their older brother. Before she left in search of her village, she had graduated at the top of her class for Ninjutsu, be was only just average in genjutsu, and could only perform basic atacks with taijutsu or bukijutsu. She had received her headband, and prepaired to go off to train, when the village was attacked, and her parents were killed, she couldn't resist the need to find her older brother, so she left; after begging her little sister Hozuki to remain safe in the village.





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Village: Konoha ❧ Rank: D ❧ Title: Genin ❧ Class: Ninjutsu Specialist ❧ Chakra: 550 ❧ Stamina: 50

The woods are lovely, dark and deep. But I have promises to keep, and miles to go before I sleep.


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The family is one of nature's masterpieces.



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PostPosted: Mon Apr 11, 2016 6:03 pm
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Approved


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♠ Personal Attribute → Infused Physical Attacks:
I will approve this with a few stipulations. Firstly, the technique used must be of the same rank as the Taijutsu movement or lower. That part is non-negotiable. Secondly, you have the choice of either maintaining the increased cost, utilizing techniques with an increased cost of chakra, or you may limit yourself to this only being able to occur one time per post, without any cost increase except the original cost of the ninjutsu being utilized with the taijutsu. Does this make sense?
 
PostPosted: Mon Apr 11, 2016 6:16 pm
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♠ Personal Attribute → Infused Physical Attacks:
I will approve this with a few stipulations. Firstly, the technique used must be of the same rank as the Taijutsu movement or lower. That part is non-negotiable. Secondly, you have the choice of either maintaining the increased cost, utilizing techniques with an increased cost of chakra, or you may limit yourself to this only being able to occur one time per post, without any cost increase except the original cost of the ninjutsu being utilized with the taijutsu. Does this make sense?


Do I need to edit the PA to mirror what youve stated?  

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PostPosted: Mon Apr 11, 2016 6:21 pm
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Approved. I like the doubling of ranges.


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Approved, welcome back to duty.
 
PostPosted: Mon Apr 11, 2016 7:47 pm
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♠ Personal Attribute → Infused Physical Attacks:
I will approve this with a few stipulations. Firstly, the technique used must be of the same rank as the Taijutsu movement or lower. That part is non-negotiable. Secondly, you have the choice of either maintaining the increased cost, utilizing techniques with an increased cost of chakra, or you may limit yourself to this only being able to occur one time per post, without any cost increase except the original cost of the ninjutsu being utilized with the taijutsu. Does this make sense?


Do I need to edit the PA to mirror what youve stated?



You choose which of the underlined two options you want, and then can mirror it, yes.  

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Full Name: Saeko Nakoi Hyuuga
Nickname: Sae, Koi

Age: 16 [Youthful in appearance]
Birthdate: August 18th
Gender: Female

Height: 68''
Weight: 165 lbs

Nindo: "My Nindo is to grow and never stop growing. I will become strong to defend my friends, my clan, and my village!"
Personality: Sometimes courteous towards others, Saeko can be rather humble and quiet as she feels her abilities are lacking; however, she does take risks when it comes to building her skills. She is dedicated and ambitious to her training as well as her ability to control the Byakugan. Usually self controlled in her emotions and her thoughts, she develops mutual relationships with people very easily through her calm and almost poise appearance. She can be nurturing to those she holds dear, but usually forms more mutual relationships with others which stay at an acquaintance level. She is generally trusting, but only at a superficial level as she has developed issues with trusting others who attempt to get closer to her. She will show deep affection to those who are closer to her and if she is attempting to do anything nurturing such as attempting to mend wounds or cook a meal.

Village: Konohagakure
Title: Genin
Rank: D-Rank
First Class: Medical
Second Class: Bloodline



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Bloodline: Hyuuga

Chakra Pool:200 + 130 = 330
Stamina Pool: 50 + 120 = 170
Chakra Element: Fire + Wind
Chakra Color: Steel Blue
Chakra Materialization: It extends out like flickering fire from the body.

Strengths:
• Close combat for Saeko is exceptionally well off in her strengths. She trains herself daily with taijutsu in regards to simple taijutsu techiniques as well as Gentle Fist.
• Her amount of self-dedication is important as she will avoid distractions, motivate herself to continuously work hard, setting goals, and controlling her emotions. She is very self-discipline and it would be out of her character to act out.
• Teamwork is important for Saeko as she will effectively communicate, or attempt to, with her team members, listening to them as well as encourage them. She holds respect for her team and attempts to hold them close to her in terms of relationships. These people would be considered more her friends than the regular person off the street.
• She is consistently hard working, attempting to maintain good quality work and usually does more than just the required.
• Medical techniques are very easy for Saeko to perform as she has spent most of her Academy days with her head in the books, when she had an allow break from training her Gentle Fist.

Weaknesses:
• Elemental weakness to Water and Lightning as a part of general information.
• Ninjutsu is a weakness for Saeko though she will train herself to be consistent and precise in her ability to use ninjutsu.
• Impatience can be an issue with Saeko, even though she is caring and nurturing of her team members; however, she can be impatient with regards to her standards of performance. If she feels someone is slacking or she might be slacking, she will be hard on the other person or herself, passively aggressive in her tone.

Fears:
• Herpetophobia: Fear of reptiles or creepy, crawly things
• Aeroacrophobia: Fear of open high places.

Class Disciplines :
Blood Knight: Your bloodline techniques possess greater power, allowing them to overwhelm techniques of the same rank, and preventing them from succumbing to elemental weaknesses of techniques the same rank. Can cast bloodline techniques through one-handed seals.
Medical license: The user is much more adept at utilizing items during combat. The user gains 2 free custom items, one at Chunnin and one at jounin. These items must be associated with and utilize, medical abilities. Additionally, they gain a -5 chakra cost to all medical techniques, and gain an extra 2 medical techniques per shinobi title beyond Academy.

Reductions:
• Learn Taijutsu one post faster.
• Learn Maruton ninjutsu one post faster.
• Learn Medical techniques one post faster.
• Learn Bloodline techniques one post faster.

Personal Attributes:
• Medical Knowledge: Knowing what she knows from treating her own injuries and others as well as her nurturing nature, Saeko is able to use her medical techniques more efficiently. By this, she is able to use medical techniques with -5 Chakra points.
• Infused Physical Attacks: Can cast Ninjutsu with her physical attacks, taijutsu or formless, without consuming an activation with a limit of only being able to use this once per post. The physical attack used must be at the same rank or lower.


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Ryo: 両 0
AC: 0

Missions Complete:
D Rank :: 0
C Rank :: 0
B Rank :: 0
A Rank :: 0
S Rank :: 0

Crafting Jobs Complete:
D Rank :: 0
C Rank :: 0
B Rank :: 0
A Rank :: 0
S Rank :: 0

Limitations: {How many of each technique you can learn. Refer to class info}
• Ninjutsu : : 00 / 09
• Genjutsu : : 00 / 07
• Taijutsu Styles: : 00 / 01
• Bukijutsu Styles: : 00 / 00
• Eiseijutsu: : 00 / 10


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Weapon Type: Recurve Bow
Weapon Range: 45 yards; Damage decreased the further the target
Weapon Weight: 0.8 lbs
Weapon Location: Carries on her back, putting the string around her torso

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• Five Kunai
• 10 Shuriken
• [Will add inventory when achieved Chuunin for Medical License]


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▬▬┤|N i n j u t s u

Maruton: {Start with the following six only}
• Henge no Jutsu [ Transformation Technique ]
• Kawarimi no Jutsu [ Substitution Technique ]
• Bushin no Jutsu [ Clone Technique ]
• Suimen Hokou no Waza [ Act of Water Surface Walking ]
• Kinobori no Waza [ Act of Tree Climbing ]
• Kai [ Release ]

Katon


Fuuton


Bloodline


Eiseijutsu


▬▬┤|G e n j u t s u



▬▬┤|T a i j u t s u

Gentle Fist


▬▬┤|B u k i j u t s u

Kyoukan Ya



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Being born into the Hyuuga clan has its perks and consequences and Saeko is no stranger to either. Held with high esteem within Konohagakure, the Hyuuga name is one to live up to with complete dedication, regardless of what side of the clan you might be on. Saeko was born to a generation of Hyuuga members who were basically a watered down bloodline from the main branch. Her grand parent, her maternal mother's mother, was a sibling of the main branch and choose to marry someone outside of her class and clan. Saeko's mother followed suit and married a man who was outside of the clan, giving birth to Saeko as well as any siblings who would come afterward if they decided to copulate further.

[Childhood and Academy Life]
Growing up within a clan whose very name could shake the boots of those around, Saeko was not given much choice in the matter of how she lived. A diluted bloodline to a child who had promise, yet struggled with her own Byakugan at a young age was discouraging to both the clan elders, her immediate family, and herself. She was shut in from the outside walls of the clan as her mentors belittled the children of other names and families, claiming they would only further delude her mental capabilities and tarnish the Hyuuga name. Some days Saeko would climb out of her home which was established in the main branch's estate and play with the children from houses nearby. She would learn to braid hair, to play with other kids in little games they created, and just let loose to be a child. It never failed that her mentor would find her outside the estate, dirtied and muddled from the exciting games the children played with her, and he would demand she return to her studies so she could excel as a Hyuuga.

Her mentors, as she had several through the years as each seem to give up on her until her last and recent one, believed she was a failed attempt to keep the bloodline strong, blaming her grand mother and her mother for diluting the line by seeking outside affection. That is until she met her last mentor, who had master the bloodline and maintained the Hyuuga traditions. He was a kind man, almost like her late father who had died when Saeko was young. The age she met this man was just before she went to study in the Academy, leaving an impression in the young ninja which carried through to her graduation and on from that point. He still maintained his mentor-ship over her, even after her graduation, yet he kept his distance and did not interfere with her training other than to give her advice when she sought it.

Now she stands as a graduated student, dedicated to her training and ready to excel in whatever she puts her mind to. She wishes to fight for her village, nurturing those who need her aid and keeping up with her battles she faces as a 'weaker generation'.
 
PostPosted: Mon Apr 11, 2016 7:58 pm
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You really didn't have to underline it as I understood it was a choice between those two. I was only asking if I needed to edit it.

It's edited, again.  

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PostPosted: Mon Apr 11, 2016 8:21 pm
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Lanfaer


You really didn't have to underline it as I understood it was a choice between those two. I was only asking if I needed to edit it.

It's edited, again.


Yeah just copy it. Just make sure you have it's limited to the same rank as the taijutsu you used.


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