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PostPosted: Tue Nov 17, 2015 7:07 pm
Ummm... So here is Manny as promised!
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Full Name: Manfread, Amamiya (Hyuuga) Bogojlanskist
Nickname: Suna's Black Knight (yup I'll bite your ankles off to punch you in the face blaugh ), Head of the Hyuuga Clan (Suna)

Age: 18
Birthdate: January 13
Gender: Male

Height: 5 foot 11 inches / 5'11”
Weight: 169.5 lbs
Eye colour: Tinted Storm blue/ white
Hair colour: Ash Blondie (silver blonde), Yup I'm a Blondie.

Nindo: (Through new experiences Manny has lightned up... or as much as a warmonger can sweatdrop ) > 'What is best in life? To crush your enemies! See them driven before you and hear the lamentation of Noobs (their fallen) scream '

Personality: There is a fine grey line between Genius and Insanity. A line Manfread walks perfectly. Completely ruled by his emotions, an unnatural hunger and a weird herculean life style. Preferring to do what his 'gut' tell him, it is difficult to understand his true motives. Seemingly lacking in manners, Manfread is crude, rude and savage in nature. He is the first to jump into a fight and the last to leave. Choosing close combat with his fists or the usage of his Massive great sword Ka-chan or Necromancer he if a battle fiend. He uses 'Armour Piercing Fist' or Haiken, a style of his own devising, and is eager to utilize it for battle.

Village: Sand Village
Rank: Chunin
Class: Bukijutsu
Sub-Class: Taijutsu


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Bloodline: Hyuuga
Chakra Pool:125+20+50+15= C ) +60+10=280
Stamina Pool: 200+25+125+20=370
Chakra Color: Sickly dark Green, with Black hues
Chakra Element: Earth and Fire
Chakra Materialization: Intense, heavy pressure with eyes and jaws randomly forming then dissipating in the seemingly chaotic release of energy.


Strengths:
• Close combat,
Armour Piercing Fist,
Weaknesses:
• Long range,
hot women,

Fears:
•White horses,
Deep water,
and eating mushrooms.

Attributes:
• Armour Piercing Fist Style -> Haiken *(see below, sorry if the translation is wrong)
• Sacred Footing -> possesses greatly increased speed

* The Armour Piercing Fist style is was created by Manfread in place of the Gentle Fist. Which he never fully learned form his mother. Unlike Gentle fist, this style disrupts the nerves, breaking and destroying muscles, leaving internal bleeding, and crippling the body. Although Chakra systems are unaffected by the damage dealt, it can pass through most armour and defences. (NOTE-> for purposes of Game play new gentle fist techniques must be learnt then converted over. Then the Gentle fist technique is lost. Conversion takes 1 post for B rank techniques and lower, and 3 for A rank and up.)

choices
Class Attribute:
•Learn Taijutsu three [2] post faster.
• learn Bukijutsu one [2] post faster.
Bloodline Reductions:
•Learn Taijutsu one [1] post faster
•Learn maruton one [1] post faster
Class Disciplines :
• Berserker
• Weapon specialist

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Ryo: 両money: 12500
AC: Advancement credit: 23550
Missions Complete:
D Rank :: 2
C Rank :: 0
B Rank :: 3
A Rank :: 7
S Rank :: 4

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Weapon Type: Bladed bracers
Weapon Range: 4 and 1/2 inched parallel to the forearm.
Weapon Weight: 3 lbs, each
Weapon Location: On the forearm

Name: Necromancer, Ka-chan Proof of Forging
Weapon Type: Guillotine Sword
Weapon Range: Blade: 5 foot1 inch, Handle: 27 inches.
Weapon Weight: 75 lbs, sounds about right.... i think
Weapon Location: on the back
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MY LEG!!!!!!
Name: Stompa
Weapon Type: Blunt: Akane's leg (yes his leg... from the knee down)
Weapon Range: Its a leg guess the range....
Weapon Weight: ummmm not heavy
Weapon Location: on the back, beside the sword
Headband location: pinned to the centre of the chest
Colour: black

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• projectiles-> 14 kuni and explosive tages
One ton of Iron-Based Metal Matrix Composite x (Forged into swordPoF )


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• projectiles-> 13 kuni and explosive tages

Limitations: {How many of each technique you can learn. Refer to class info}
• Ninjutsu : : 03 / 04
• Genjutsu : : 00 / 00
• Taijutsu Styles: : 02 / 02
• Bukijutsu Styles: : 01 / 02


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Maruton
• Henge no Jutsu [Transformation Technique]
• Kawarimi no Jutsu [Substitution Technique]
• Bushin no Jutsu [Clone Technique]
• Suimen Hokou no Waza [Act of Water Surface Walking]
• Kinobori no Waza [Act of Tree Climbing]
• Kai [Release]
•Body Flicker (Shunshin no Jutsu)X
•CollaborationD-rank

{Your first element's name} Doton
• Earth Military Movement (Tsuchi Gunjikoudou no Jutsu)X

{Your second element's name} Katon
•Great Fire ball (Goukakyuu no Jutsu) X

Fuuin:
Chakra Calligraphy(15 chakra) - The world is my paper, Ctm 1

Customs:

Hyuuga Gentle Fist (Haiken)
• Gentle Fist (Haiken)->Gentle Fist (Haiken) learnt20/20)
•Empty Palm (Void Fist)->learntEmpty Palm(Void Fist)
•Heavenly Spin (Unholy Rotation)Rotation Spar
•Sixty-four Palms->learnt X

*Grandfathered in to Body of Stone and Kaiser Fist XD*

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Kaiser Fist


Iwagakure no Taijutsu (Body of stone)
• Pick Axe Elbow (Tsuruhashihijishou )X
• Rising Knee (Shoushitsu) X
•Hourakushou (Cave-in Palm) X
•Hasai Houyou (Crushing Hug) X
• Axe Kick X
•Kuma Kobushi (Bear Fist) X
•Kannyuu Tanima [ Collapsing Valley ] X
•Maruton: Goryu Dango [ Null Release: Mud Beachball ] X
•Maruton: Gurabo [ Null Release: Stone Gloves ] X
• Mountain Rising X
•Hasai Houyou (Crushing Hug) X
•Double Rock Swing X
•Tokken [ Tackle Charge ] X
•Banjin Houru [ Savage Throw ]
•Stone Floor Sweep X
•Jagged Armor of Dust X
•Banjin Houru [ Savage Throw ] X
•Hishoumaruish [ Flying Boulder ] X
•Steady Mountain Palm X
•Meteor Drop X
•Gangeki [ Boulder Strike ] X
•Rising Earth Fragments X
•Ishi Suji [ Stone Muscle ] X
•Saido Nadare [ Second Avalanche ] X


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•Hakyoku-ken no Kata
Stage one
-Ju suto [heavy smash]learnt +1
-Sion (Sweep) learnt +1
• Sasu [ Stab ] X
•Houyou no Yochi [ Earth's Embrace ] X
•Saidai Shinpuku [ Upwards Swing ] X
•Hiki [ Saw ] X
•Taikutsuna Sutoraiki [ Dull Blade ] X

• {Stage progression / techniques learned}



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His mother, before she died, had been the kind of person who fought for what she believed in. She defected to the Sand Village and married Bjorn, so he is unique in the fact that he does not posses the branch family curse placed on all members of the Hyuuga clan. Manfread also has blonde hair and storm blue eyes, that shift white in strange ever changing patterns. If he had not learned how to use the Byakugan before his mother, Lilyan, died it would be almost impossible to tell that he is Hyuuga.
His father Bjorn, is an aristocrat who shy’s away from combat and follows a strict non-aggression code. A code which lead to the death of his wife. After secretly witnessing her untimely demise at a young age, something in Manfread snapped, and he began to hear a strange voice that came from his gut. Asking him if he were strong enough to know the name of his mother's killers, Manfread started to listen to the advise of his gut. Perhaps this is why he is ruled completely by his emotions, his hunger, and a ridiculous almost herculean life style.
Unlike normal Hyuuga, Manfread only learned the very basics of the Gentle fist, but with the firm belief that corruption would lead him to power he created a new fighting style he calls 'Armour Piercing Fist' or 'Haiken'. Disrupting nerves, breaking and deteriorating muscles, inflicting large internal damage to create internal bleeding, he has made incredible progress.
Manfread respects two things, strength and food. He also has an unnaturally high metabolism and is constantly trying to gain weight with no success.

Manfread is currently the head of the Hyuuga Clan in Suna (being the oldest and one of the only Hyuuga in the Villiage). Although he is not one to use the title on a regular bases, nor does he attend meeting concerning the matter, he takes pride in his heritage and is quietly searching for Clan members with in the Village, a task he has yet to succeed in.

Theme songs:
I owe you one <3
 
PostPosted: Wed Nov 18, 2015 8:55 pm
It has been a few years since the last time I brought these guys in for evaluation. As the guild has changed a bit, I will submit them for re-evaluation. Due to the length of both characters, only the link to their profile page will be provided. Any and all issues should be brought to me via PM or Skype, as I do not wish for them to be discussed here. Thank you.



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PostPosted: Thu Nov 19, 2015 1:13 am
Still need to finish the history but I also need to sleep so I'm going to post this now.

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Full Name: Baiko Yanagi
Nickname: Bai-Bai (nickname his mother called him by as a child, and still does to his displeasure)

Age: 19
Birthdate: March 18
Gender: Male

Height: 5'7''
Weight: 160 lbs

Nindo: "Trusting people just isn't worth it. As shinobi it's just asking to be stabbed in the back. My father-the trusting fool-learned that the hard way."
Personality: Due to childhood trauma related to his father Baiko finds it difficult-heck sometimes impossible-to put his trust in others. As a result he finds it difficult to grasp the concept of teamwork and makes it a point to distance himself both physically and emotionally away from his peers. Nevertheless he does value the company of those few he could consider friends and when he is able to form an emotional connection to somebody he becomes one of the most loyal friends a person could ask for. It seems, however, that it might require another trauma in Baiko's career as a shinobi for him to get over his paranoia of trusting others.

Baiko has little patience for what he refers to as "self-righteous assholes." This includes but is not limited to bullies egotistical clan members. They are the main targets of his ire though. Putting up with these people sometimes causes him to lose his patience. So he will antagonize them, finding those buttons he could press to hit them right where it hurts. More often then not though this just simply causes him to get into trouble. He's... been in more fights than one could consider healthy. Especially with his rather fragile body. It seems that even with his genius level intellect he is completely helpless when it comes to social interactions.

Baiko's intelligence has a recorded IQ of 200 and has been noted to be on par with members of the Nara clan. This has caused him to develop into more of a planner than a fighter, although he would never hesitate to fight in order to protect those he consider his friends.

Village: Sunagakure
Rank: Genin
First Class: Puppeteer
Second Class: Puppeteer

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Bloodline: Courage: +2 PA, 5 jutsu slots

Chakra Pool: 450
Stamina Pool: 50
Chakra Element:
Chakra Color: Purple
Chakra Materialization: Wisps of smoke coming out of the pores of his skin.

Strengths:
• Mid-long range combat
• Using everything at his disposal, even things that others would overlook and view as useless.
Weaknesses:
• Inability to trust others leaves his teamwork lacking and causes him to be wary of respecting any kind of authority. In short: he is a paranoid mess.
• Close-range combat
Fears:
• Betrayal. He wants to be able to trust others, but is terrified of his trust being betrayed the same way his father's was.
• All social interactions. Especially with those of the opposite gender.

Class Disciplines :
• Army of One: The user makes use of their puppetry skills to become a one man army, increasing the overall output potential that their signature weapons can dish out by allowing them to control 2 weapon mechanisms per finger. To maximize this potential, the users puppets gain a +3 weapon mechanism per puppet. Additionally, their chakra strings are significantly tougher than other puppet user's, making any chakra string technique act a rank higher. For Gennin, this bonus only works for techniques D rank and lower, Chunnin C rank and lower, Jounin B rank and lower, Konin A rank and lower, Sannin S rank and lower.
• Architect: The user has a fantastic creative mind, able to make more custom puppets (+2) as well as construct them and prepare them easier. For each rank the user increases, they gain a [-1] bonus to preparation time. . Additionally, the user is so good at creating and planning, that human puppets only cost 1 custom puppet slot.
Reductions:


Personal Attributes:
• Genius: Baiko analytical abilities and ability to process information is almost superhuman; allowing him to come up with seemingly random plans on the fly and notice even the smallest of details that others would miss completely.
• Invisible chakra threads: As a master puppeteer Baiko is capable of making his threads so incredibly thing they will always be invisible to the naked eye. The only ones capable of actually seeing his chakra threads are those who possess a sharingan, byakugan, or another similar doujutsu.
• Null specialist: Baiko has neglected his elemental training in favor of focusing in on his ability to use maruton jutsu. By giving up the ability to use elements his maruton jutsu is 1.5 ranks stronger (I think 1.5 is fair for maruton but if not then I can lower it to 1 rank).
• More jutsu!: Gains an addition 10 ninjutsu slots.


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Ryo: 両0
AC: 0

Missions Complete:
D Rank :: 0
C Rank :: 0
B Rank :: 0
A Rank :: 0
S Rank :: 0

Limitations:
• Kugutsu : : 00 / 13
• Ninjutsu : : 00 / 14
• Genjutsu : : 00 / 10
• Bukijutsu Styles: : 00 / 00

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Weapon Type: {Sword, spear, etc.}
Weapon Range: {Its reach. In inches/centimeters please}
Weapon Weight: {How heavy it is. In pounds/kilograms please}
Weapon Location: {Where it is stored}
• {When you create your profile, you may have any one basic weapon.)

Summoning Type: {Ex. Dogs, Bears, Slugs, etc.} {If none, remove summon section}
Summon Sage: {Yes or No}
Pacts: {Ex. Dogs: Pakkun, etc. Sages do not need to list pacts}

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• Kunai x15


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Maruton:
• Henge no Jutsu [ Transformation Technique ]
• Kawarimi no Jutsu [ Substitution Technique ]
• Bushin no Jutsu [ Clone Technique ]
• Suimen Hokou no Waza [ Act of Water Surface Walking ]
• Kinobori no Waza [ Act of Tree Climbing ]
• Kai [ Release ]

Kugutsu


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{Style name here}
• {Stage progression / techniques learned}

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PostPosted: Thu Nov 19, 2015 3:53 pm
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Full Name: Lucas Benito Miyamoto
Nickname: lucas

Age: unknown
Birthdate: unknown
Gender: Male

Height: 6'1"
Weight: 173lb

Nindo: "Beauty in knowledge. Grace in wisdom."
Personality: secretive to those who haven't earned his trust. loves to go down memory lane.

Village: Suna
Rank: genin
First Class: ninjutsu
Second Class: bloodline

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Bloodline: douka

Chakra Pool: 650
Stamina Pool: 215
Chakra Element: katon, fuuton
Chakra Color: bright pink
Chakra Materialization: has no set form

chakra increase due to time skip=150

Strengths:
• speedy reactions
• tactical and quick analysis
Weaknesses:
• alcoholic
• weak against stength based taijutsu
Fears:
• being tickled
• bugs bigger than his thumbnail

Class Disciplines :
• elemental dual wielder
• thoroughbred

Reductions:
• ninjutsu 6 post reduction
• bloodline 4 post reduction

Personal Attributes:
• body of the void: highly flexible and durable. able to redirect taijutsu attacks slightly easier than normal. (10 less stamina to redirect a tai)
• mind of the void: able to recognize when in a genjutsu and how to get out of it easier. (10 less chakra to kai)

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Ryo: 両 0
AC: 32,600

Missions Complete:
D Rank :: 1
C Rank :: 0
B Rank :: 5
A Rank :: 10
S Rank :: 7

Limitations: {How many of each technique you can learn. Refer to class info}
• Ninjutsu : : 12x2 / 08
• Genjutsu : : 03 / 04
• Taijutsu Styles: : 00 / 01
• Bukijutsu Styles: : 00 / 01

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Weapon Type: knife
Weapon Range: 1'5"
Weapon Weight: 5lb
Weapon Location: on his back at his waist

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• 10 kunai
• 10 smoke bombs
• 10 explosive tags
- enhanced antidote 4
- small combat animal (inland taipan - snake)
- vocal C. training
- gesture training
- barks yelps whines
- basic ninja training
- typical ninja training for all above
- det-tech manual
- mechanics manual
- library expansion atlas all above
- mokujin personal trainer x3
- blood increasing pills x5
- injection shot sniper all above

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Maruton: {Start with the following six only}
• Henge no Jutsu [ Transformation Technique ]
• Kawarimi no Jutsu [ Substitution Technique ]
• Bushin no Jutsu [ Clone Technique ]
• Suimen Hokou no Waza [ Act of Water Surface Walking ]
• Kinobori no Waza [ Act of Tree Climbing ]
• Kai [ Release ]
- shunshin no jutsu (body flicker technique) (arc bonus)
- astral projection skill linksy
- temporary body paralisis time skip

Katon
- fire release: flare technique
- mist waltz technique
- fire resistance linksy
- great fireball technique linksy
- mythical fire flower technique linksy
- fire prison technique linksy
- incendiary technique linksy
- incineration technique linksy
- arial explosion technique linksy
- bed of fire linksy

Fuuton
- retrieving wind technique
- wind clone
- wind explosion
- propelling winds +5 (S+)
- low air pressure technique (learned to A)
- high air pressure technique time skip

Douka
- solid assimilation (learnt here)
- multy-particle manipulation (learnt here)
- motion manipulation (learnt here)
- size manipulation linksy


▬▬┤|G e n j u t s u

- false strike techninque time skip
- demonic illusion: hell fire technique time skip
- demonic illusion: false surrounding technique time skip
- demonic illusion: double false surrounding technique time skip
- mist technique time skip


▬▬┤|T a i j u t s u

xinyi liuhe quan
- lion paw
- tiger fist
- dragon fang

▬▬┤|B u k i j u t s u

none yet


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A descendant of Lomegela Slanji Miyamoto, Lucas has an affinity to foods and excessive drinking.a travelling man Lucas likes to research everything and anything he can. in his travels he stopped at suna while it was suffering from the effects of what seemed like a mission gone wrong. he decided to stay and help with what he could.
After spending time within Sunagakure, Lucas felt a draw to return to his home and show what he'd learned under his extended family. he trained a bit more developing differently than before so as to become accustomed to the changing state of the world so he could maintain himself. he was made to train in the void where he was able to improve his physical form as well as his mental form. he also became more attuned to the use of the douka bloodline he was gifted with. eventually he was told that he'd lazed about to much and was kicked out to go find work. it was then that he decided to return and see how Suna had gotten along without him.
 

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PostPosted: Thu Nov 19, 2015 6:08 pm
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Approved
BarronVonManfreadGreed

Approved as agreed upon by Mam  
PostPosted: Thu Nov 19, 2015 6:54 pm
Lanfaer
It has been a few years since the last time I brought these guys in for evaluation. As the guild has changed a bit, I will submit them for re-evaluation. Due to the length of both characters, only the link to their profile page will be provided. Any and all issues should be brought to me via PM or Skype, as I do not wish for them to be discussed here. Thank you.



Jack Harren Snipe

Wanryoku Jingi Horobusu

XAyame_HatakeX


Re-approved for the 4th time. To anyone else, whenever in doubt about your profile, please ask.  


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PostPosted: Sun Nov 22, 2015 7:53 pm
Third Character: Ok'd by Mam
This: Will be a RPC without access to shinobi skills due to young age. Also Ok'd by Mam.
Image to come later....I'm tired. Don't want to edit photo.

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Full Name: Minowa Jaeger
Nickname: Min-min, Min

Age: 7-8yrs old
Birthdate: 12/6
Gender:

Height: 5'0"
Weight: 98lbs

Nindo: "Kill what tries to eat you. Kill what chases you. Kill what hurts you."
Personality: Minowa went feral after witnessing the impalement of his father, Sypher Senju, during the fall of Kirigakure when Sero became active. He escaped, at his father's urging, and ran wild in the underground of Kirigakure for over three weeks, escaping the mutated Anbu and other changed wildlife. His body grew when he accidentally drank some of the water, leaving his child mind in an older body. He doesn't speak very well, most of his language forgotten by the trauma, and is severally stunted in accessing or using his chakra to perform jutsu. He also has no interest in using them due to some of the violence used on him by the mutated Anbu. His actions are erratic, can be violent and he is often moving. Twitching hands or moving from one foot to the other, his fear of being trapped is a constant burden on his fragile psyche.

Village: Kirigakure
Rank: N/A for the moment.
First Class: Bukijutsu
First Discipline: Mystic Hero
Second Class: Tamer
Second Discipline: Eternal Partners


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Full Name: Itoko
Nickname: Ito

Age: 1yr, 2wks
Birthdate: 11/22
Species: Binturong :The body of the binturong is long and heavy, and low on the legs. It has a thick fur of strong black hair. The bushy and prehensile tail is thick at the root, gradually diminishing in size to the extremity, where it curls inwards. The muzzle is short and pointed, somewhat turned up at the nose, and is covered with bristly hairs, brown at the points, which lengthen as they diverge, and form a peculiar radiated circle round the face. The eyes are large, black and prominent. The ears are short, rounded, edged with white, and terminated by tufts of black hair. There are six short rounded incisors in each jaw, two canines, which are long and sharp, and six molars on each side. The hair on the legs is short and of a yellowish tinge. The feet are five-toed, with large strong claws; the soles are bare, and applied to the ground throughout the whole of their length; the hind ones are longer than the fore and are double jointed to allow it to better grip trees.
Gender: Male

Height: 3ft, 6in
Weight: 37lbs

Chakra Pool: 125+100+25
Stamina Pool: 125+125+25
Chakra Element: Earth, Water
Chakra Color: Black, inky and swirls
Chakra Materialization: Cloaks it in small puffs of smoke that rise off it's tail

Strengths:
• Keeping Minowa calm
• Attacking at close range
Weaknesses:
• Tends to sleep during the day
• Forgets to turn his back ankles the right way around and gets stuck trying to walk
Fears:
• Being cornered
• Getting eaten

Limitations: {How many of each technique it can learn. Refer to class info}
• Ninjutsu : : 08 / 00



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Package:
Power: +2 PA, +25 chakra/stamina a rank

Chakra Pool: 125+100+25= 250
Stamina Pool: 125+125+25= 275
Chakra Element: Wind, Lightning
Chakra Color: Brilliant white, painfully so.
Chakra Materialization: clings to his skin like an oil

Strengths:
• Fighting dirty.
• Dissociating his actions from himself.
Weaknesses:
• Anti-social, doesn't work well with others so he doesn't have many or any friends.
• Unsteady, poor control of his chakra means he doesn't always use everything he has.
Fears:
• Being trapped in a small space.
• Finding the body of his father.

Class Disciplines :
• Mystic Hero: The user is much like a hybrid warrior, focusing on mixing ninjutsu into their personal arsenal. Through their great devotion to this path the user can cast ninjutsu without hand seals while wielding a weapon, D at gennin, C at chunnin, B at Jounin, A at Konin, and S at Sannin. These techniques maintain the same description and criteria to use, as well as require the same amount of time to mold the chakra through the weapon as would be needed to perform hand seals, meaning the techniques are not instantaneously cast. The user’s spirit is so strong, that they can utilize their physical bukijutsu techniques to negate ninjutsu techniques of the same rank or below.

•Eternal Partners: The user is able to nurture, grow, and bond with a single animal, almost becoming an animal themselves with traits, characteristics, and natural weaponry. This single animal will be exactly the same at the user's level in chakra and stamina pool, and able to manipulate any two elements, perform 3 activations a post (max of 2 offensive), and gaining +8 jutsu slots a rank.. For every rank the user increases, they can claim a trait associated with their chosen animal (communicate with species, natural weaponry, senses, ect) to be approved in the custom jutsu thread, and add it to their character.

Reductions:
• learn Bukijutsu techniques one [1] post faster.


Personal Attributes:
• Feral Child Defense: +10 stamina due to his time in the Sero entombed Kirigakure, Minowa is physically stronger than he should be.
• Defiant Mind: Not affected by Genjutsu of rank E.
• Broken Tongue: Using sign language, he adds +2 chakra to his ninjutsu attacks allowing him to overpower ninjutsu of the same rank.
• Killer Instinct: Learns Bukijutsu one [1] additional post faster


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Ryo: 両0
AC: 0

Missions Complete:
D Rank :: 0
C Rank :: 0
B Rank :: 0
A Rank :: 0
S Rank :: 0

Limitations: First/Second
• Ninjutsu : : 01 / 02
• Genjutsu : : 00 / 00
• Taijutsu Styles: : 00 / 01
• Bukijutsu Styles: : 02 / 00

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Weapon Type: {Sword, spear, etc.}
Weapon Range: {Its reach. In inches/centimeters please}
Weapon Weight: {How heavy it is. In pounds/kilograms please}
Weapon Location: {Where it is stored}
• {When you create your profile, you may have any one basic weapon.)


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• 5x Throwing stars
• 5x Throwing knives
• 2x Grappling hooks
• 2x shrapnel pellets
• 1x steel throwing fan

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Maruton:
• Henge no Jutsu [ Transformation Technique ]
• Kawarimi no Jutsu [ Substitution Technique ]
• Bushin no Jutsu [ Clone Technique ]
• Suimen Hokou no Waza [ Act of Water Surface Walking ]
• Kinobori no Waza [ Act of Tree Climbing ]
• Kai [ Release ]

Wind


Lightning


{Other jutsu type's name}




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{Style name here}




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{Style name here}


{Style name here}




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Taken from the womb of a corpse, Minowa has been the son of Sypher Senju since his father took him from a the coffin of his first love. He was a young, bright and sweet little boy for many years, loved by Sypher and Sypher's lover, until the day his father attempted to seal the village to protect it from an attack. Something went wrong and in the ensuing chaos, he was separated from his father briefly. When he found Sypher, Minowas was horrified to discover his father had been impaled by a fragment of Sero, piercing him to the ground. At his father's agonized urging, Minowa attempted to escape the underground but was quickly attacked by several mutated monsters. He was rescued by a kindly female one but discovered it had been his daycare nurse turned into a monster. Fleeing her after she as murdered by one of the males, he lived in the village, alone, until he met a strange, buttery smelling creature that took him into the trees and defended him from the monsters along with her on small creature. Bonding with the baby, Minowa named it Itoko and, when the mother was killed, they protected each other. They roam the village now, together, Minowa is now nearly feral.
 
PostPosted: Mon Nov 23, 2015 10:07 am
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Just for your Pa's everything else is good. Instead of wasting a PA on the chakra threads just make your chakra non-visible you can also get this with a mechanism slot on the puppet. Your Null specialist: AandOE says that anything with rank in it is a no go so change it to a descriptive. After you've done this quote me again and I'll look it over.
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Body of the Void: Does this just mean he can use less stamina to maneuver around the tai? Less chakra?
Mind of the Void: Less chakra for kai? more descriptive please

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PostPosted: Mon Nov 23, 2015 2:59 pm
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provided a mechanical description of the personal attributes.
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Full Name: Lucas Benito Miyamoto
Nickname: lucas

Age: unknown
Birthdate: unknown
Gender: Male

Height: 6'1"
Weight: 173lb

Nindo: "Beauty in knowledge. Grace in wisdom."
Personality: secretive to those who haven't earned his trust. loves to go down memory lane.

Village: Suna
Rank: genin
First Class: ninjutsu
Second Class: bloodline

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Bloodline: douka

Chakra Pool: 650
Stamina Pool: 215
Chakra Element: katon, fuuton
Chakra Color: bright pink
Chakra Materialization: has no set form

chakra increase due to time skip=150

Strengths:
• speedy reactions
• tactical and quick analysis
Weaknesses:
• alcoholic
• weak against stength based taijutsu
Fears:
• being tickled
• bugs bigger than his thumbnail

Class Disciplines :
• elemental dual wielder
• thoroughbred

Reductions:
• ninjutsu 6 post reduction
• bloodline 4 post reduction

Personal Attributes:
• body of the void: highly flexible and durable. able to redirect taijutsu attacks slightly easier than normal. (10 less stamina to redirect a tai)
• mind of the void: able to recognize when in a genjutsu and how to get out of it easier. (10 less chakra to kai)

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Ryo: 両 0
AC: 32,600

Missions Complete:
D Rank :: 1
C Rank :: 0
B Rank :: 5
A Rank :: 10
S Rank :: 7

Limitations: {How many of each technique you can learn. Refer to class info}
• Ninjutsu : : 12x2 / 08
• Genjutsu : : 03 / 04
• Taijutsu Styles: : 00 / 01
• Bukijutsu Styles: : 00 / 01

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Weapon Type: knife
Weapon Range: 1'5"
Weapon Weight: 5lb
Weapon Location: on his back at his waist

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• 10 kunai
• 10 smoke bombs
• 10 explosive tags
- enhanced antidote 4
- small combat animal (inland taipan - snake)
- vocal C. training
- gesture training
- barks yelps whines
- basic ninja training
- typical ninja training for all above
- det-tech manual
- mechanics manual
- library expansion atlas all above
- mokujin personal trainer x3
- blood increasing pills x5
- injection shot sniper all above

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Maruton: {Start with the following six only}
• Henge no Jutsu [ Transformation Technique ]
• Kawarimi no Jutsu [ Substitution Technique ]
• Bushin no Jutsu [ Clone Technique ]
• Suimen Hokou no Waza [ Act of Water Surface Walking ]
• Kinobori no Waza [ Act of Tree Climbing ]
• Kai [ Release ]
- shunshin no jutsu (body flicker technique) (arc bonus)
- astral projection skill linksy
- temporary body paralisis time skip

Katon
- fire release: flare technique
- mist waltz technique
- fire resistance linksy
- great fireball technique linksy
- mythical fire flower technique linksy
- fire prison technique linksy
- incendiary technique linksy
- incineration technique linksy
- arial explosion technique linksy
- bed of fire linksy

Fuuton
- retrieving wind technique
- wind clone
- wind explosion
- propelling winds +5 (S+)
- low air pressure technique (learned to A)
- high air pressure technique time skip

Douka
- solid assimilation (learnt here)
- multy-particle manipulation (learnt here)
- motion manipulation (learnt here)
- size manipulation linksy


▬▬┤|G e n j u t s u

- false strike techninque time skip
- demonic illusion: hell fire technique time skip
- demonic illusion: false surrounding technique time skip
- demonic illusion: double false surrounding technique time skip
- mist technique time skip


▬▬┤|T a i j u t s u

xinyi liuhe quan
- lion paw
- tiger fist
- dragon fang

▬▬┤|B u k i j u t s u

none yet


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A descendant of Lomegela Slanji Miyamoto, Lucas has an affinity to foods and excessive drinking.a travelling man Lucas likes to research everything and anything he can. in his travels he stopped at suna while it was suffering from the effects of what seemed like a mission gone wrong. he decided to stay and help with what he could.
After spending time within Sunagakure, Lucas felt a draw to return to his home and show what he'd learned under his extended family. he trained a bit more developing differently than before so as to become accustomed to the changing state of the world so he could maintain himself. he was made to train in the void where he was able to improve his physical form as well as his mental form. he also became more attuned to the use of the douka bloodline he was gifted with. eventually he was told that he'd lazed about to much and was kicked out to go find work. it was then that he decided to return and see how Suna had gotten along without him.
 
PostPosted: Tue Nov 24, 2015 5:18 pm
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Seamless combat already exists in system through Self-korrabo, you just have to train the techniques in Korrabo.  

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PostPosted: Tue Nov 24, 2015 6:26 pm
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Oh, I didn't know that...
Thanks!

Edited.
 
PostPosted: Tue Nov 24, 2015 6:46 pm
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As per Moderator discussion:

Approved, pending field evaluation. We like the Piercing Void ability, but if it is found to be too unbalancing upon a later date, we retain the right to ask you to change it.  

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PostPosted: Wed Nov 25, 2015 11:44 am
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Approved - With addendum There is a minimum Kai Cost of 5.  
PostPosted: Wed Nov 25, 2015 8:02 pm
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Full Name: Hakanai Yuki
Nickname: Haka

Age: 18
Birthdate: January 22nd
Gender: Female

Height: 5'9"
Weight: 158lbs
Body appearance: [x]

Nindo: "......"
Personality: Quiet, Hakanai keeps to herself for a reason. Trained herself to make sure to never show her body language, one would have trouble trying to figure out how she feels. Usually stubborn and head strong, Hakanai would find a way to get what she wants if she really wanted it. She usually holds a grudge when severely upset at someone. Keeps to herself and completely distance, yet she's loyal to a fault.

Past Village: Yukigakure
Village: Kumogakure
Rank: Genin
First Class: Tamer
Second Class: Ninjutsu


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Full Name: Lilja
Nickname:

Age: 4
Birthdate: March 13th
Gender: Female

Height: Five feet long including two and half feet long tail. One foot and half tall on all fours.
Weight: 75lbs

Chakra Pool: 325
Stamina Pool: 150
Chakra Element: Raiton and Katon
Chakra Color: Pure white
Chakra Materialization: Can appear as swirling blizzard around her if angry.

Strengths:
• Close combat
• Sharp and strong claws
Weaknesses:
• Weapons
• Genjutsu
Fears:
• Losing Hakanai
• Fleas

Limitations:
• Ninjutsu : : 00 / 13



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Bloodline: Hyōton

Chakra Pool: 325
Stamina Pool: 150
Chakra Element: Suiton and Fuuton
Chakra Color: Ocean blue
Chakra Materialization: Ocean blue and slight aqua would swirl about her. It may remind one of an ocean.

Strengths:
• Weapons
• Close combat
Weaknesses:
• Losing Lilja
• Genjutsu
Fears:
• Become hearing
• Lilja loses her spots

Class Disciplines :
• Eternal Partners - The user is able to nurture, grow, and bond with a single animal, almost becoming an animal themselves with traits, characteristics, and natural weaponry. This single animal will be exactly the same at the user's level in chakra and stamina pool, and able to manipulate any two elements, perform 3 activations a post (max of 2 offensive), and gaining +8 jutsu slots a rank. For every rank the user increases, they can claim a trait associated with their chosen animal (communicate with species, natural weaponry, senses, ect) to be approved in the custom jutsu thread, and add it to their character.
• Elemental Dual Wielder - Your maximum chakra pool is increased by {10} points. The ninjutsu limit provided by this class is split amongst both of your chosen elements. ( At genin rank, rather than having a total of [ 06 ] ninjutsu slots for Katon or Suiton techniques, this class provides you with [ 06 ] slots for both Katon and Suiton techniques. Any ninjutsu slots received from other sources are filled at your discretion.

Bloodline Attributes:
• All Hyōton users have Suiton [ Water ] and Fuuton [ Wind ] as chakra elements.
• All Hyōton users learn Suiton [ Water ] and Fuuton [ Wind ] jutsu one [1] post faster.
• All Hyōton users are capable of performing techniques with a single hand.
• Hyōton ice is very difficult to melt. ( More in [ Hyouton ] technique description. )
• Hyōton users are often seen as cold hearted, though this is for different reasons.
• Hyōton users typically have a cold and distant personality, letting few get close.
• Ice Release users have a natural curiosity towards ice-type jutsus not of their clan, learning them as if they were. Currently known ice-type or related jutsu are listed down below, after the main bloodline jutsu. (Shinsetsu Clan excluded)
• Hyouton techniques pared up with those from the Shinsetsu Clan are treated as 2 ranks higher in ability--rather than 1--for collaboration efforts.
Reductions:
• Learn Bukijutsu techniques one [1] post faster.

Personal Attributes:
• Deaf world

xxxx Being deaf had help her gain slight increases. There are two noticeable ones. Her vision cortex of the brain had expanded and colonize small percentage of where her auditory cortex would be. Because of that, her reaction time is slightly better than the hearing shinobi. Her skin is much more sensitive so she can pick up vibrations. If in a room and someone was talking, her skin would alert her of the weak vocal vibration and let her know someone was talking
• Ninjutsu learner - Hakanai gains +5 ninjutsu slots. Lilja gain +5 ninjutsu as well.
• Cat eyes - She already have sharp canines like a cat however, her nails can retreat as a snow leopard claws and is strong as one. Not easily chipped off like a human nail. When angered, her eye changes into icy blue cat pupils.
• Shared Voices - While Hakanai cannot speak for herself, Lilja had gained human like vocal cords so Lilja can speak like a human and sometimes act as an interpreter for Hakanai. Sometimes.

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Ryo: 両 0
AC: 0

Missions Complete:
D Rank :: 0
C Rank :: 0
B Rank :: 0
A Rank :: 0
S Rank :: 0

Limitations:
• Ninjutsu : : [00 / 07 Ninjutsu] [00 / 06 Suiton] [00 / 06 Fuuton]
• Genjutsu : : 00 / 01
• Taijutsu Styles: : 00 / 01
• Bukijutsu Styles: : 00 / 00

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Weapon Type: Kama
Weapon Range: Handle is 15" The curved blade seven and half inches. It is sharp enough to be able to hook but with enough force and momentum, it can act as a slice.
Weapon Weight: 0.82 pounds
Weapon Location: It is stored as a sheathe on her lower back. Hakanai had created the sheathe herself. The Kama are sheathe separately for easier access when she reaches behind her and grab them. The sheath has a little hole to them in which her Kama had a slight bump, it needs certain twisting to get the Kama out of the sheaths, not so easy for others to grab it away from her.

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• Flak Jacket
• 3 smoke bombs
• 10 Shuriken
• 6 Kunai

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▬▬┤|N i n j u t s u

Maruton:
• Henge no Jutsu [ Transformation Technique ]
• Kawarimi no Jutsu [ Substitution Technique ]
• Bushin no Jutsu [ Clone Technique ]
• Suimen Hokou no Waza [ Act of Water Surface Walking ]
• Kinobori no Waza [ Act of Tree Climbing ]
• Kai [ Release ]

Suiton


Fuuton


Hyōton


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• {Stage progression / techniques learned}

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Born profound deaf in both ears, the parents were worried to how their daughter become a shinobi. At first, they raised her as a normal civilian but when the child had reached to a certain age, she discovered that she wasn't being raised to be a shinobi. Stubborn, she didn't take no as an answer so the parents had simply caved in and trained her in the way of the shinobi. She had learned how to use vibrations around her and quick observant of her eyes to help her aid in becoming of a shinobi.

Four years ago, Hakanai ran from home and escaped the village for a bit. She just wanted to breath. She wanted to be treated like others but it was hard to come by. She felt like something was wrong. The pale female went in search only to find a beautiful Snow Leopard kitten, left there to die. Hakanai heart went out to the kitten as she took it and raised it. She even trained it to remain wild like so the kitten can grow up to be an independent adult, she would be able to free it to the wild. When the snow leopard turned to two years old, Hakanai had tried to abandoned the adult Snow Leopard but she refused to leave Hakanai. It was then she finally named her new best friend, Lilja. They learned together and it was when she realized, Lilja wasn't your ordinary Snow Leopard, she had chakra. Together, they aim to work hard and succeed.

When she was young, after she had found Lilja, her parents and herself went out of the village for a mission and a short get away. Only to find out their entire village was destroyed. Broken hearted, the family had moved to Kumo and switched their loyalty to the Kumogakure. The family was never the same since it was destroyed. Even the young Hakanai and Lilja. They were bitter to what happened and had kept cold hearts since then along with her parents. They soon died of natural causes. Hakanai changed her last name after their deaths to remove the relation to them.
 

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