Right... so I am afraid I don't see the problem. I have elemental specialist and so I get +2 off the bat, then I get 6 ninjutsu slots for genin at a ninjutsu class + 1 ninjutsu slot for the convert genjutsu. Thats a total of 9. Then I get 4 more ninjutsu slots for sensor class, and an additional 4 ninjutsu for convert genjutsu for the sensor class. that's 8+9=17, which is what I said? a 1-1 conversion. my shinobi is genin ranked right?
Posted: Thu Jun 25, 2015 10:04 am
ken-faita
It was a misunderstanding on my part, which is why I came forward after you explained and stated that I accepted your profile. You're good to go man.
{Been approved to rebuild this character and resubmit it for re-approval}
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|ρ є r ѕ σ η α ℓ • ∂ α т α|├▬ Full Name: Minato Hatake Nickname: None given to her yet
Age: 15 Birthdate: October Gender: Female
Height: 62 inches Weight: 115 lbs
Nindo: "Feed the fire..." Personality: She's laconic and believes that her actions do far more to define her than her words ever would.
Village: Konohagakure Rank: Genin First Class: Bukijutsu Second Class: Taijutsu
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|c σ м в α т • ∂ α т α|├▬ Bloodline: Jiongu
Chakra Pool: 215 Stamina Pool: 325 Chakra Element: Suiton Chakra Color: White Chakra Materialization: Currently Unknown
Strengths: • Close combat • Survival
Weaknesses: • Long range combat • Fighting without armor
Fears: • Losing the rest of her sanity • Someone finding out what she is now
Class Disciplines : • Brawler • Mystic Hero
Reductions: • Bukijutsu is learned one post faster • Taijutsu is learned one post faster • Ninjutsu is learned one post faster
Personal Attributes: • Ninjutsu specialist: Able to perform jutsu with one hand. • A Knight's Soul: She's able to wear and fight in heavy armor with ease. • Fooling Death: If a killing blow is struck, a spare heart is expanded and used as a replacement. • Organic Alteration: Able to rearrange internal organs on a whim, though this takes a small amount of time.
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|c α r є є r • ∂ α т α|├▬ Ryo: 両0 AC: 0
Missions Complete: D Rank :: 0 C Rank :: 0 B Rank :: 0 A Rank :: 0 S Rank :: 0
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|ω є α ρ σ η • ∂ α т α|├▬ Weapon Type: None Weapon Range: None Weapon Weight: None Weapon Location: None
Summoning Type: None Summon Sage: No Pacts: None
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|ι η ν є η т σ r у|├▬ • None • None
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|т є c н η ι q υ є ѕ|├▬ ▬▬┤|N i n j u t s u Maruton: • Henge no Jutsu [ Transformation Technique ] • Kawarimi no Jutsu [ Substitution Technique ] • Bushin no Jutsu [ Clone Technique ] • Suimen Hokou no Waza [ Act of Water Surface Walking ] • Kinobori no Waza [ Act of Tree Climbing ] • Kai [ Release ]
{Suiton} •
{Heart Jutsu} •
{Jiongu} • ▬▬┤|T a i j u t s u {Style name here} • {Stage progression / techniques learned}
▬▬┤|B u k i j u t s u {Style name here} • {Stage progression / techniques learned}
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|н ι ѕ т σ r у|├▬ *In the process of writing it. Shall be revealed through the rp overtime however*
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|ρ є r ѕ σ η α ℓ • ∂ α т α|├▬ Full Name: Ydarihan Malakzdar Nickname: -
Age: 15 {1/2} Birthdate: October 31st Gender: Male
Height: 5 foot, 3 inches Weight: 132 lbs
Nindo: "To Bring Justice Pure to the Wicked. To Judge Without Mercy. All Things Are True, All Things Are Permitted." Personality: Ydar, as his shortened name happens to be, is something akin to a force of nature, and an abstract one at that. Given his history, the boy has a spectacular obsession with bringing justice to everything, though what is truly "Justice" is defined by a series of codes he possesses. Each code represents an aspect of his personality and belief structure, and are by no means allowed to be broken. These codes culminate in the Calling, which holds the Codes and the Justice parts. In the case of a code being broken, a valuable punishment must be dealt to ensure balance of soul.
[Speak No Untruth, Unless Permitted] → While times might call for an untruth, such as in a mission where success balances on a fulcrum and a truth would break its precarious perch, all attempts must be made to keep the lying tongue of the Oni from one's mouth. In all things must truth be done, until the Calling requires otherwise. [Justice Without Mercy] → Mercy is a weakness that cannot be allowed to bend the will of one's blade or path. Justice is not served by the heart, for by the heart is evil spread. When acting upon Judgment, fulfill the Calling, and bring swift justice without fail. [Judge Not Lest Ye Be Judged] → Consider in all things the laws of the Calling. If one is judged guilty, one must submit themselves to punishment fitting the guilt of the breach. [All Things Are Permissible] → In the pursuit of Justice Pure, all things are permissible. If murder required, show no mercy. If theft required, give in kind. Tempt not the paths of Justice Wroth, lest one be dragged into it. [Belief is Law] → Let the Calling and one's conscience be one's guide in the pursuit of Justice Pure.
Ydar is also a boy who knows how to show proper decorum when the time calls for it. He is respectful in all things, and treats all with respect, yet can change his personal attitude seemingly at will, without notice. He hides well his codes and the meanings behind them, and to the world, and to Otogakure no Sato itself, he is a mild mannered child with barely any promise as a Shinobi. He is quiet, thoughtful, but with no real sense of purpose other than to be as valuable a shinobi as possible. He goes to extremes to ensure that no one knows just how good he can be by being the solid worst shinobi anyone can be, and so that is what the village sees him as. And that's how it is meant to be.
Village: Otogakure no Sato Rank: Genin First Class: Bukijutsu Second Class: Bloodline
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|c σ м в α т • ∂ α т α|├▬ Bloodline: Seiton [ Rust Release ]
Chakra Pool: 255 Stamina Pool: 245 Chakra Element: Earth || Wind Chakra Color: Green // Blue, which ranges between the two depending on emotions Chakra Materialization: A paladin like figure, fully armored and enormous, the personification of Justice Pure.
Strengths: • Keeping all emotions bottled up inside, so much so that a near split personality seems to have been formed. This comes even to hiding the truth, with his facial expressions and body language being absolutely under his control, nothing comes out that is not meant to. • Fighting from all directions and in a maelstrom of chaos. Training with the Justicars taught Ydar that enemies can come from any side, and all sides. Because of this, fighting one enemy, or a thousand, does not induce a panic, and he will fight just as well no matter how chaotic the battle becomes. • Is able to use his tail as an extra hand, a gift of the curse inflicted upon him. With this tail comes slightly bushier side burns, some light dusting of fur on knuckles and chest, and slightly sharper teeth and elongated fingers for extra gripping. Except for the tail, all other signs are too minimal for anyone to notice as odd or out of place. Weaknesses: • Is rigid in following the Calling. Breaking the Calling is a sin that must instantly be punished, without Mercy. If that requires his death, Ydar would do it, but such a punishment requires the highest of transgressions. • Is unable to accept anything but his point of view. Justice must come from the hand of a Justicar, for it is only they which truly know Justice Pure. Thus, for anyone to tell him that his point is wrong, they must challenge his beliefs with a contest, be it fighting or otherwise. As long as he believes the competition fair, the winner's beliefs will be accepted, unless it is the exact opposite of his beliefs. Fears: • Fears falling into Justice Wroth. Such a crime would require punishments quite extreme, up to and including his own life becoming forfeit. • Fears being unable to equate his soul. Falling into Justice Wroth is bad enough, but being unable to purify his soul, to make up for the crimes he committed? That is the worst fear of his soul, for it would mean a death that ends in obliteration, an absolute end.
Class Disciplines : • Blood Bender • Mystic Warrior Reductions: • Bukijutsu → -1 • Bloodline → -1 Personal Attributes: • Essence of Rot and Decay → During his studies at the archives hidden beneath the temple he found, Ydar discovered a special book that told of a method of Seiton use that went beyond simple oxidization. No, it tapped into an energy and chakra source that none had seen before: Rot//Decay. After studying it, and investing must time into the training of it, Ydar is able to utilize Rot and Decay jutsu, which will be listed as variances from Seiton as well as custom jutsu. This attribute will also allow Ydar to alter any Seiton technique he has into the Rot//Decay element. • Essence of Truth → Ydar has as extreme, near-otherworldly connection with the scions of Justice in the universe. His Calling allows a connections to Hajist, the Scion of Justice and the Scales, and through this connection he is able to manifest an odd ability: he always knows when someone is lying, telling a half-truth, or is trying to hide something. This comes as an absolute certainty, though in no way will this tell Ydar what the actual truth is. This can only manifest as long as Ydar remains in good standing of his Calling, and at any time the Calling is broken he must undergo a form of ritual to come under grace. Until such a time, Ydar cannot use this Attribute.
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|c α r є є r • ∂ α т α|├▬ Ryo: 両0 AC: 00,000
Missions Complete: D Rank :: 0 {All start at zero} C Rank :: 0 B Rank :: 0 A Rank :: 0 S Rank :: 0
Limitations: {How many of each technique you can learn. Refer to class info} • Ninjutsu : : 00 // 05 • Genjutsu : : 00 // 02 • Taijutsu Styles: : 00 // 01 • Custom Jutsu : : 00 // 10 • Custom Bloodline Jutsu : : 00 // 03 • Bukijutsu Styles: : 00 / 03
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|ω є α ρ σ η • ∂ α т α|├▬ Weapon Type: Short Sword, Straight Edge Weapon Range: 2 feet, 8 inches length Weapon Weight: 2 pounds Weapon Location: Horizontal on back of waist
Summoning Type: - Summon Sage: - Pacts: -
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|ι η ν є η т σ r у|├▬ • One Scroll [Seiton] → Kept within his robes by a strap. • 8 Kunai • 7 Paper Bombs • Temple Robes and Breastplate • Silver Dagger and Scales → Religious Use
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|т є c н η ι q υ є ѕ|├▬ ▬▬┤|N i n j u t s u Maruton: • Henge no Jutsu [ Transformation Technique ] • Kawarimi no Jutsu [ Substitution Technique ] • Bushin no Jutsu [ Clone Technique ] • Suimen Hokou no Waza [ Act of Water Surface Walking ] • Kinobori no Waza [ Act of Tree Climbing ] • Kai [ Release ]
Fuuton
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Doton
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Seiton
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Custom Ninjutsu
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▬▬┤|G e n j u t s u
▬▬┤|T a i j u t s u
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→ Stage T w o {2}
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→ Stage T h r e e {3}
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→ Stage F o u r {4}
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→ Stage F i v e {5}
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▬▬┤|B u k i j u t s u
• {Style 1} → Stage O n e {1}
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▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|н ι ѕ т σ r у|├▬ Ydarihan Malakzdar was born on the night of All Hallows Eve in a land so far away from this one that few, if any, had heard of it. There strange practices were common that this side of the world had never seen, and one was the ability to attach manifestations of life to an individual, in a similar method to the Jashin Cult, though not entirely. This bonded the individual with a sort of "guardian angel" that subtly influenced their personality and actions to ensure they follow the path of their guardian spirit's laws. This is defined as "the Calling", and the name of the spirit bonded to Ydar is Justice. This has caused the young boy's life to alter considerably, and would have ended with a life as a Justicar had not fate intervened.
Ydar was raised in a land upon the edge of a great ocean, within a temple dedicated to the god known as Delesca, a spirit of Justice Pure. There he learned the art of a peacekeeper, a Justicar, from the young age of two years till the age of seven. At the age of seven, a visitor to the temple caught Ydar’s interest: a man from the other side of the world, dressed in odd fatigues and walking in the manner of a trained warrior. Even at this age, Ydar knew of such things, trained for violence in the manner of an executioner and frontline fighter. He had come to speak to the high priest, known as the Paladin, for something that was kept secret from Ydar, as he was the youngest and unworthy of such important information at his age and stage of training. However, he was not above a bit of investigation, and whilst rousting through the strangers gear in his visiting room, the young Justicar discovered a box that, when opened, awakened an odd change. Black tendrils leached into his flesh, changing him, altering him…freeing him. When he awakened, it was to a very, very angry Paladin. Whatever had happened, whatever had been in that box, Ydar found himself bearing the able table of a monkey, with limbs and body more limber than originally intended for the average human. Worse, the natural energies he had been learning had been altered, tainted, to the point that now his life would be changed forever. The strange man that had come to visit stood behind the Paladin, and when the news clearly crushed the boy, the figure spoke. “You have been touched by an entity that I captured, a creature of rot and ruin. With it, you have gained something that others are born to: the power to oxidize. From what the Paladin says, your life here in this temple is now over, but I would have you with me, then, when I return home. There, I am known as the Lord of the Land of Sound, and there it is that I will take you to learn the art of Shinobi, if you wish it.”
To say the boy was unhappy was an understatement, but his training, his upbringing, and the spirit bonded with him, gave him no other options. The law was simple, and Justice Pure required that he give himself up for the crimes he had committed, lest he fall into Justice Wroth. And so, accepting his due, the young Ydarihan Malakzdar went with the Lord of the Land of Sound to the Shinobi lands on the other side of the world. Unfortunately the travel did not go as planned, as the power within Ydar began to spread to his own body. Without release, it began to eat away at his form, and the Lord was forced to place the child under a jutsu that forced him into a state of suspended animation, freezing his mind but allowing his body to progress. Somehow, this stopped, and even reversed, the spread.
Ydar awoke a mere three years ago within the Village Hidden in the Sound, finding it a very, very different place. The Lord he knew was gone, and in its place lay the President, as he was known. In this new world, he quickly discovered that his powers needed to be hidden, but his purpose? His purpose was to help, to bring the world to Justice Pure, but to do that he needed to lay low, and learn. And so he entered the Shinobi Academy, as he was meant to, to learn what he needed to bring this strange world to Justice.
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|ρ є r ѕ σ η α ℓ • ∂ α т α|├▬ Full Name: Shin Satoru Yasuhiro Nickname: None Given
Age: 9 Birthdate: December 25 Gender: Male
Height: 4' 5" Weight: 70.5 lbs.
Nindo: Shin has yet to discover his Ninja Way or purpose in life. Personality: Although young, Shin's past experiences have forced him to grow up much more than any child should have. His desire for friendship and affection are nearly at a desperate level, but his timidness and uncertainty of others often prevents bonds from being established. He's naive, which is to be expected of someone his age, but his intellect should not be underestimated. He finds solace surrounded by wildlife and nature, the very two things he has spent a majority of his life connecting with since he was orphaned. [More to be added as the story progresses.]
Village: Otogakure Rank: Genin First Class: Ninjutsu Second Class: Ninjutsu Specialist
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|c σ м в α т • ∂ α т α|├▬ Bloodline: Kekkei Touta: Mokuton / Hyōton
Chakra Pool: 790 Stamina Pool: 50 Chakra Element: Doton | Suiton | Fuuton Chakra Color: Currently unknown. Chakra Materialization: Currently unknown.
Strengths: • Ninjutsu • Terrain Control Weaknesses: • Low Endurance • Naivety Fears: • The Dark • Never making a friend or being forgotten by one.
Class Disciplines : • [ Elemental Dual Wielder ] Your maximum chakra pool is increased by 10 points. The ninjutsu limit provided by this class is split among both of your chosen elements. • [ Specialization ] Your chakra pool is increased by 10, and you gain an additional 10 chakra each rank up. Additionally, you gain one [1] additional element to the chosen discipline, maintain the bonuses/limitations of the discipline's description. Jutsu given by this class are now per element.
Reductions: • Learns Ninjutsu two [2] post faster. • Learns Suiton and Fuuton jutsu one [1] post faster. (Hyouton Trait) • Learns Doton and Suiton jutsu one [1] post faster. (Mokuton Trait)
Personal Attributes: • [ Physical Training Vol. 1 ] Gains one additional Taijutsu style. • [ Physical Training Vol. 2 ] Gains one additional Bukijutsu style.
Traits:
• All Mokuton users have Doton [ Earth ] and Suiton [ Water ] as chakra elements. • All Mokuton users are able to learn Doton [ Earth ] and Suiton [ Water ] ninjutsu one [1] post faster. • All Mokuton have incredibly deep chakra pools. [ Chakra pool maximum +320 ] • All Mokuton techniques have a weakness to Katon [ Fire ], & grow uncontrollably when around the Nine-Tails Chakra. • The Senju Clan is highly susceptible to the Moulding Mushroom and its effects. • No handsigns are needed for Eiseijutsu usage if of that class.
• All Hyōton users have Suiton [ Water ] and Fuuton [ Wind ] as chakra elements. • All Hyōton users learn Suiton [ Water ] and Fuuton [ Wind ] jutsu one [1] post faster. • All Hyōton users are capable of performing techniques with a single hand. • Hyōton ice is very difficult to melt. ( More in [ Hyouton ] technique description. ) • Hyōton users are often seen as cold hearted, though this is for different reasons. • Hyōton users typically have a cold and distant personality, letting few get close. • Ice Release users have a natural curiosity towards ice-type jutsus not of their clan, learning them as if they were. Currently known ice-type or related jutsu are listed down below, after the main bloodline jutsu. (Shinsetsu Clan excluded) • Hyouton techniques pared up with those from the Shinsetsu Clan are treated as 2 ranks higher in ability--rather than 1--for collaboration efforts.
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|c α r є є r • ∂ α т α|├▬ Ryo: 両 0 AC: 0
Missions Complete: D Rank :: 0 C Rank :: 0 B Rank :: 0 A Rank :: 0 S Rank :: 0
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|ω є α ρ σ η • ∂ α т α|├▬ Weapon Type: Bow Weapon Range: (Will figure out later.) Weapon Weight: ^ Weapon Location: Back w/ Quiver •
Summoning Type: N/A Summon Sage: N/A Pacts: N/A
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|ι η ν є η т σ r у|├▬ • 15 Shuriken
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|т є c н η ι q υ є ѕ|├▬ ▬▬┤|N i n j u t s u Maruton
{ E Rank } • Henge no Jutsu [ Transformation Technique ] • Kawarimi no Jutsu [ Substitution Technique ] • Bushin no Jutsu [ Clone Technique ] • Suimen Hokou no Waza [ Act of Water Surface Walking ] • Kinobori no Waza [ Act of Tree Climbing ] • Kai [ Release ] { D Rank } • { C Rank } • { B Rank } • { A Rank } • { S Rank } •
Doton
{ E Rank } • { D Rank } • { C Rank } • { B Rank } • { A Rank } • { S Rank } •
Suiton
{ E Rank } • { D Rank } • { C Rank } • { B Rank } • { A Rank } • { S Rank } •
Fuuton
{ E Rank } • { D Rank } • { C Rank } • { B Rank } • { A Rank } • { S Rank } •
Kekkei Touta
Mokuton • • • • •
Hyōton • • • • •
▬▬┤|G e n j u t s u
{ E Rank } • { D Rank } • { C Rank } • { B Rank } • { A Rank } • { S Rank } •
▬▬┤|T a i j u t s u {Style name here}
{ Stage One } • { Stage Two } • { Stage Three } • { Stage Four } • { Stage Five } • { Stage Six } •
▬▬┤|B u k i j u t s u {Style name here}
{ Stage One } • { Stage Two } • { Stage Three } • { Stage Four } • { Stage Five } • { Stage Six } •
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|н ι ѕ т σ r у|├▬ Shin was born in Yukigakure shortly before its destruction and the UHV's conquest. He was the oldest of two, and also inheriting each of his parents' Kekkei Genkai, Mokuton and Hyouton. Life was good for the newly formed family until the UHV appeared, resulting in the death of his parents and the separation of his younger sibling. Alone, in an ocean of snow, Shin wandered aimlessly forward, and soon the terrain, climate, everything would start to transform from what he was used to seeing. Along the way Shin encountered many hardships, as fending for himself, finding food, and creating shelter became his primary duties every single day. Once he reached the jungles and swamps of Otogakure by a sheer stroke of luck, living became moderately easier, other than hiding away from the armored men that often scouted the area. A few more years passed before he was spotted, and instead of being considered a trespasser, he was enrolled into the academy so that he would be of use to the village.
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|ρ є r ѕ σ η α ℓ • ∂ α т α|├▬ Full Name: Misato Shizumu Nickname:
Age: 19 Birthdate: June 4 Gender: F Height: 67 inches Weight: 125
Nindo: "Work hard and persevere, and there is nothing that can stop you" Personality: Hard Working, Doesn't Quit or give up on friends
Village: Kumogakure Rank: Genin First Class: Worker Second Class: Bukijutsu
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|c σ м в α т • ∂ α т α|├▬ Bloodline: Koton
Chakra Pool:200 Stamina Pool: 200 Chakra Element: Doton Chakra Color: Grey Chakra Materialization: A faint glowing aura
Strengths: • Close Combat • Weapon Usage Weaknesses: • Raiton - considering she can turn into metal, might as well be a lightning rod • Limited long range attacks Fears: • Being trapped and locked in a cage • Swimming
Class Disciplines : • Legendary Smith • Mystic Hero Reductions: • Learn Bukijutsu techniques one [1] post faster. • 1 Post reduction on Crafting Personal Attributes: • [Into the Fire] Long hours of working in a hot forge crafting weapons has given Misato a natural resistance to fire, reducing any Katon techniques used against her by 1 rank. • [5 Minute Rock Hard Abs] An intense personal training regime (with diet and workout plan for 19.99) has increased Misato's natural abilities, granting her another Taijutsu Slot.
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|c α r є є r • ∂ α т α|├▬ Ryo: 両 0 AC: 0
Missions Complete: D Rank :: 0 C Rank :: 0 B Rank :: 0 A Rank :: 0 S Rank :: 0
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|ω є α ρ σ η • ∂ α т α|├▬ Weapon Type: Smithing Hammer Weapon Range: 36 inches Weapon Weight: 12 pounds Weapon Location: A loop on Misato's belt
Summoning Type: Summon Sage: Pacts:
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|ι η ν є η т σ r у|├▬ • 10 Kunai • 5 Senbon
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|т є c н η ι q υ є ѕ|├▬ ▬▬┤|N i n j u t s u Maruton: {Start with the following six only} • Henge no Jutsu [ Transformation Technique ] • Kawarimi no Jutsu [ Substitution Technique ] • Bushin no Jutsu [ Clone Technique ] • Suimen Hokou no Waza [ Act of Water Surface Walking ] • Kinobori no Waza [ Act of Tree Climbing ] • Kai [ Release ]
Doton •
Bloodline - Koton • ▬▬┤|G e n j u t s u • ▬▬┤|T a i j u t s u {Style name here} • {Stage progression / techniques learned} ▬▬┤|B u k i j u t s u {Style name here} • {Stage progression / techniques learned}
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|н ι ѕ т σ r у|├▬ Misato's story begins as many stories do. She was born to a small family of Koton users who lived in a little village on the border of the Cloud Country. No one in the family was particularly skilled in the usage of Koton techniques and the entire family worked together in a small forge, crafting and repairing farm tools and other day to day items. And so the first several years of her life passed with the same day to day routine of working, eating, and sleeping. That all changed on her first visit to Kumogakure to drop off a load of small knick knacks. It was an extrodinary site, seeing so many people in one place, and all the colors and things to buy in the stores. As soon as he had saved up enough money, she resolved to leave her sleepy village and come to the city.
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▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|ρ є r ѕ σ η α ℓ • ∂ α т α|├▬ Full Name: Rin Setsuko Nickname: Smoke
Age: 16 Birthdate: 07/04 Gender: Male
Height: 6'0" Weight: 150 lbs
Nindo: "Mistakes are made to remind us we aren't perfect, however fixing those mistakes gets us one step closer." Personality: Rin is a rather shy person, he tends to be socially awkward. He avoids fighting when he can and his bloodline helps him do that very well. He makes it his duty to learn as much as possible, placing most of his time in training he is not very popular with others which adds to his social inexperience and makes him even more awkward. He is determined to pull his own weight in the village in order to not be a burden.
Village: Kirigakure Rank: Genin First Class: Bukijutsu Second Class: Tamer
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|c σ м в α т • ∂ α т α|├▬ Bloodline: Kemuriton
Chakra Pool: 225 Stamina Pool: 250 Chakra Element: Water & Fire Chakra Color: Grey Chakra Materialization: Smoke
Strengths: • Swordsman • Determination Weaknesses: • Genjutsu • Social Engagements Fears: • Loosing Bandit (his ferret) • Death
Class Disciplines : • Mystic Hero: The user is much like a hybrid warrior, focusing on mixing ninjutsu into their personal arsenal. Through their great devotion to this path the user can cast ninjutsu without hand seals while wielding a weapon, D at gennin, C at chunnin, B at Jounin, A at Konin, and S at Sannin. These techniques maintain the same description and criteria to use, as well as require the same amount of time to mold the chakra through the weapon as would be needed to perform hand seals, meaning the techniques are not instantaneously cast. The user’s spirit is so strong, that they can utilize their physical bukijutsu techniques to negate ninjutsu techniques of the same rank or below. • Eternal Partners: The user is able to nurture, grow, and bond with a single animal, almost becoming an animal themselves with traits, characteristics, and natural weaponry. This single animal will be exactly the same at the user's level in chakra and stamina pool, and able to manipulate any two elements, perform 3 activations a post (max of 2 offensive), and gaining +8 jutsu slots a rank.. For every rank the user increases, they can claim a trait associated with their chosen animal (communicate with species, natural weaponry, senses, ect) to be approved in the custom jutsu thread, and add it to their character. Reductions: • learn Bukijutsu techniques one [1] post faster. • -1 post for bukijutsu training. (clan) Personal Attributes: • Potent Blood: When his blood is digested by others instead of them losing the Iburi abilities at 50% of his chakra being depleted, they are able to use the techniques till 75% of his chakra is depleted. • Senses: After using his smoke for so long he can see very well in low visibility, and in places he can't rely on his vision his sense of smell and hearing aid in his task to track his target.
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|c α r є є r • ∂ α т α|├▬ Ryo: 両 0 AC: 0
Missions Complete: D Rank :: 0 C Rank :: 0 B Rank :: 0 A Rank :: 0 S Rank :: 0
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|ω є α ρ σ η • ∂ α т α|├▬ Weapon Type: Sword Weapon Range: 4'5" Weapon Weight: 5 lbs. Weapon Location: On his right hip or in his right hand. • Katana
Summoning Type: N/A Summon Sage: N/A Pacts: N/A
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|ι η ν є η т σ r у|├▬ • Kunai x 15, Senbon x 15 • Steel Wire 50 feet, Blood Pills (filled with Rin's blood)
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|т є c н η ι q υ є ѕ|├▬ ▬▬┤|N i n j u t s u Maruton: • Henge no Jutsu [ Transformation Technique ] • Kawarimi no Jutsu [ Substitution Technique ] • Bushin no Jutsu [ Clone Technique ] • Suimen Hokou no Waza [ Act of Water Surface Walking ] • Kinobori no Waza [ Act of Tree Climbing ] • Kai [ Release ]
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Katon •
Kemuri • ▬▬┤|G e n j u t s u • ▬▬┤|T a i j u t s u {Style name here} • {Stage progression / techniques learned} ▬▬┤|B u k i j u t s u {Style name here} • {Stage progression / techniques learned}
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|н ι ѕ т σ r у|├▬ Rin was born into a normal farming family. They would grow rice and popular animals and would slaughter them. Rin got accustomed to killing and preparing meat to sell as well as getting rice ready for sale as well. In off seasons they grew what they could to continue earning money. He was a hard worker from the moment he could walk. A kirigakure Shinobi was badly injured and fell unconscious near a lake Rin visited frequently. Rin found the man and took him back to his home. Rin learned a lot from the healing man, Rin wanted to become a shinobi. He used the farming tools to practice his weapon skills. He was excited to wake up every morning and loved life more than most. He was rather normal and was always talkative.
Rin woke up one morning to the smell of smoke, he tried to save his parents who got trapped under a support beam in their room. He was to weak to move the beam or pull them out. He inhaled a lot of smoke little did he know the smoke he was inhaling was that of a Kemuriton shinobi targeting the small farm village. The passive effect to gain their abilities for a limited time became permanent with Rin. He was now cursed to live with the powers that killed his family. He went out into the woods to try to find a way to survive on his own. He used farming equipment to hunt prey, he wounded a small ferret in his ventures and upon nursing it back to health they formed an unbreakable bond. They went to villages and used their skills to steal in order to survive. While in Kirigakure he was caught by a jonin and was offered not only a home but also a place in their academy. He was excited to start his training but in his years alone he lost most of his social experience and is now very shy. He passed the academy in a class he took alone not helping his awkward social engagements. He is now a genin and wants nothing more than to prove to the village they did not make a mistake in allowing him to join.
Code: ▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|ρ є т • ∂ α т α|├▬ Full Name: Smokey Setsuko Nickname: Smokey the Bandit / Bandit
Age: 2 Birthdate: 04/07 Gender: Male
Height: 24 inches Weight: 5 pounds
Chakra Pool: 225 Stamina Pool: 250 Chakra Element: Water & Fire Chakra Color: Grey Chakra Materialization: Smoke
Strengths: • Fast • Close Combat Weaknesses: • Genjutsu • Fighting without Rin Fears: • Loosing Rin • Disappointing Rin
