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Pawn of Calamity

Feral Genius

PostPosted: Wed Jun 17, 2015 6:08 pm
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Full Name: Masumi Nara
Nickname: Masa, Kokuei (birth name)

Age: 16
Birthdate: December 18
Gender: Female

Height: 5'6"
Weight: 120 lbs

Nindo: "Knowledge is not only power, but the pathway to truth."
Personality: Upon a first impression, Masumi's perceived as a silent, ominous, introverted, and secretive intellectual. She's stern, blunt, and shrewd, analyzing things to the very last detail. Gaining more experience and knowledge will always come first, despite her intellect being quite vast compared to many of her peers. She's always reading, writing, or studying whenever she has the chance. Is very careful of the people she chooses to trust, but those she finds worthy are rewarded with her loyalty. Her own self-motivation and unwavering drive keep her busy, and while she can be lazy, it is highly unlikely she'll do so in front of others. Around other 'geniuses' she keeps quiet, preferring to point out flaws in their strategies and hurt their pride, showing a subtle arrogant side to her personality. Dark by nature, pissing her off would not be advised. She's quick to put those who step up to her wrong back in their place, whether its physically, verbally, or a bit of both, and is not above doing some of the most gruesome things to your body without a hint of remorse. It's generally hard to rouse her anger, but not impossible. While this personality may be overbearing for some, Masumi has freely expressed herself around individuals she is close with, showing a witty, perverted, and overall friendly side. Lacks the sense of personal space around close friends, simply because she can and enjoys making people uncomfortable.

Notes: Three piercings in left ear, four on the right, a single bottom lip piercing, Japanese themed tattoo sleeve (right arm; covered), scars around lower back and hips (barely visible).

Village: Konohagakure
Rank: Genin
First Class: Ninjutsu
Second Class: Bukijutsu

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Bloodline: Kageton [ Nara Clan ]

Chakra Pool: 360
Stamina Pool: 150
Chakra Element: Doton & Katon
Chakra Color: Black
Chakra Materialization: Raises up from her shadow as a shroud of darkness, surrounding the body in the form of smoke.

Strengths:
• Intelligence
• Close Combat
Weaknesses:
• Kageton is weak against light
• Lacking in physical endurance
Fears:
• Brainwashing
• Octopus Tentacles

Class Disciplines :
• [ Elemental Dual Wielder ] Your maximum chakra pool is increased by {10} points. The Ninjutsu limit provided by this class is split among both of your chosen elements.

• [ Mystic Hero ] The user is much like a hybrid warrior, focusing on mixing ninjutsu into their personal arsenal. Through their great devotion to this path the user can cast ninjutsu without hand seals while wielding a weapon, D at Genin, C at Chuunin, B at Jounin, A at Konin, and S at Sannin. These techniques maintain the same description and criteria to use, as well as require the same amount of time to mold the chakra through the weapon as would be needed to perform hand seals, meaning the techniques are not instantaneously cast. The user’s spirit is so strong, that they can utilize their physical bukijutsu techniques to negate Ninjutsu techniques of the same rank or below.

Reductions:
• Learns Ninjutsu two [2] posts faster. (Ninjutsu Class + Bloodline Trait)
• Learns Bukijutsu one [1] post faster.

Personal Attributes:
• [ Selective Studies ] With the goal of expanding her knowledge, Masumi has spent time studying the art of Fuuinjutsu, allowing her to learn it at Chuunin rank.
• [ Punisher ] Gains one additional Taijutsu style.

Bloodline Traits:
• The Nara learn ninjutsu one [1] post faster.
• When dealing with typical life tasks, the Nara show little passion.
• Adversely, in serious situations, the Nara can show extreme dedication.
• Some Nara abilities are referred to as Kageton, or Shadow Release.
• Used within the Ino-Shika-Cho formation, Nara Clan jutsu abilities are considered higher by 2 ranks. If used within Ino-Shika or Shika-Cho formations, Nara Clan jutsu abilities are considered higher by 1 rank.
• Can stop the Akimichi Clan's Three Colored Pills' poison without Eiseijutsu assistance.
• Shadows are required to use most Nara abilities.
• Nearly any form of light will dispel Nara shadow imitation abilities. (not physicals)

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Ryo: 両0
AC: 0

Missions Complete:
D Rank :: 0
C Rank :: 0
B Rank :: 0
A Rank :: 0
S Rank :: 0

Jobs Complete:
D Rank :: 0
C Rank :: 0
B Rank :: 0
A Rank :: 0
S Rank :: 0

Smithing Type(s):
Titles:
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Limitations:
• Ninjutsu : : 00 / 06 (per element) +1 (from Bukijutsu Class)
• Genjutsu : : 00 / 01
• Taijutsu Styles: : 00 / 01
• Bukijutsu Styles: : 00 / 02

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Weapon Type: Kodachi Swords
Weapon Range: 50 cm each
Weapon Weight: 0.5 kg
Weapon Location: On back, hilt facing left shoulder; lower back hilt facing right.

Summoning Type: N/A
Summon Sage: N/A
Pacts: N/A

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• 5 Kunai
• 5 Shuriken
• 5 Fuuma Shuriken

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Maruton
{ E Rank }
• Henge no Jutsu [ Transformation Technique ]
• Kawarimi no Jutsu [ Substitution Technique ]
• Bushin no Jutsu [ Clone Technique ]
• Suimen Hokou no Waza [ Act of Water Surface Walking ]
• Kinobori no Waza [ Act of Tree Climbing ]
• Kai [ Release ]
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Doton
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Katon
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Kageton
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• {C-rank} + {Training Link}
• {B-rank} + {Training Link}
• {A-rank} + {Training Link}
• {S-rank} + {Training Link}
• {S+rank} + {Training Link}
{D-rank Slots}
• {Stage progression / technique learned} + {Training Link}
• {Stage progression / technique learned} + {Training Link}
{C-rank Slots}
• {Stage progression / technique learned} + {Training Link}
• {Stage progression / technique learned} + {Training Link}
{B-rank Slots}
• {Stage progression / technique learned} + {Training Link}
• {Stage progression / technique learned} + {Training Link}
{A-rank Slots}
• {Stage progression / technique learned} + {Training Link}
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{S-rank Slots}
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[ Chapter One ] Yakuza Blood
Masumi was born into the Nara clan due to her mother's heritage, but the other half of her birth held a secret darker than the very shadows they could manipulate. Once a very loyal Kunoichi to the Village Hidden in the Leaves, soon found herself going rogue, and starting a new life in Gimangakure, Sasagi City. The story behind her defection is unknown to all but her, a story that has yet to be revealed even after seventeen years of her child's birth. Her identity was wiped as a whole, starting anew, taking up work within a local club to provide for herself. Financially, the woman still struggled, barely being able to afford the basic necessities to sustain a decent living, however she blended in well with her surroundings.

Or so she thought.

Despite her change of lifestyle, her thought process was still Ninja. In fact, the very act of keeping up a disguise to 'blend in' was an art of the Ninja. Yet, who would be able to perceive such a thing through a believable guise? A client whom she had become close with was also a member of one of the two biggest gangs in the city: The Yakuza. He saw through her act without even obtaining so little as a hint to her hidden lifestyle. He proved this thought to be correct after ambushing the woman, forcing her to resort to her Ninja abilities and Kekkei Genkai to survive, as well as taking a number of his men. This only attracted him to her more, offering her a chance to work with the gang, and the freedom to use her abilities to help the Yakuza gain territorial control. The agreement was made, and she was brought to the Shinjiro Factory.

Her status among the gang quickly rose, as she proved to be an invaluable asset to the Yakuza. Not only because of her ninja talents, but her intelligence, having increased the Yakuza's teritory by 25% since she offered her service. Those who knew of her Kekkei Genkai were usually targets, and never lived to tell its tale, and she kept it a secret from the Yakuza gang. The darkness of which surrounded Sasagi City was expertly used to her advantage, earning her the nickname "Bloody Shadow". She became a feared adversary of the Mafia, and earned the top spot on their bounty list. Although highly respected, no one was aware of the plot that was being constructed right under their noses, for she had other motives to joining this gang. The relationship between her and the fellow Yakuza member continued to grow stronger, giving birth to a child a few months later. This child was named Kokuei, and now her story begins.

[ Chapter Two ] Split Paths
Kokuei's birth remained a secret only for a short while, and things were expected to turn for the worse once word got to the gang leader. Instead, the idea of breeding Yakuza-born Ninja appealed to him. Especially those of her mother's skill level. Kokuei being her first born, she was observed heavily growing up, and at the tender age of seven years old, she began her training to become a full-fledged Yakuza. Kokuei was already showing signs of highly favored traits to be inherited from her mother, one of which, was intelligence. Learning and comprehending certain skills and instructions came almost natural to the girl, and though many of their weapons were too heavy for Kokuei to handle, her skill with a short sword was phenomenal for someone of her age. Her training however, was unable to go any further than that, as they did not have the necessary equipment to teach her the skills of the Ninja. Her mother taught her what she could, but the child's chakra level was, currently, too low to learn anything other than the most basic of techniques.

Gimangakure quickly became the child's playground, growing fairly familiar with it over time. It was the last place anyone would want their child to be, but this child was far from ordinary. Her status as a Yakuza member kept muggers and other common city threats from laying a single finger on her, but attracted the Mafia like bees and honey. Their many attempts to kidnap the girl, only ended in failure, and the loss of more men. Some by her own doing, the majority done by her parents. The young Nara was starting to create quite the reputation for herself; almost catching up to her mother as far as fame was concerned. Yet, Kokuei was unsatisfied. As she grew older, her intelligence only increased along with it, and she was starting to question whether this lifestyle was something she really wanted. Her interest was leaning towards the Shinobi arts and how chakra worked, something she could barely learn about in a place like Gimanagakure. Looking towards the Five Great Shinobi Nations, there was no doubt in her mind, she could get the knowledge she desired.

Her parents became busier over time with duties handed to them by the leader, often leaving her on her own, harassing the Mafia or completing bounty board missions. One particular mission required an escort to Takumi, which was in the center of all the hidden villages. It was here that she and her client were ambushed by Mafia members, leaving both of them unconscious, and the good obtained for delivery, stolen. When she woke up, she was staring into a blank white space - the ceiling of a hospital room. She was now in the Village Hidden in the Leaves, Konohagakure. How she got here, it is still unknown to her.

"I see you are awake. Are you feeling better..." She paused, looking down at the female, examining the tattoo sleeve on her arm. "What's your name, ma'am?"

Kokuei looked at the woman, deep within her own thoughts. She was now in a village, a Shinobi village, where she could fulfill her desire for education. Knowledge. Going back to Gimangakure was no option for her now, she wouldn't be able to handle the shame of a failed mission. Taking this opportunity as a chance for a life change, she decided to put her bloody past behind her and start anew. Kokuei died in Takumi, as far she was concerned.

"My name is Masumi Nara."

[ Chapter Three ] Rebirth of a Genius
Masumi sealed the deal by cutting her hair short and changing her pysical appearance, hopefully to keep outsiders from recognizing her. She knew that no matter what she did, her past would always be with her. However, the future has yet to come, and through that, she could make a difference in her life. Enrolling herself into the academy, she studied harder than she should have of someone with her intellect, learning about some of the more difficult skills to master, such as Fuuinjutsu. Scoring high marks on her test with relative ease, she was one of the top students of her class, surpassing even those who had studied longer than herself. Her skill with weapons came naturally due to her background, and with her devotion to the Ninjutsu arts and the theory of chakra, she was considered a potential Ninjutsu specialist. This was expected from a Nara, natural tacticians as they were, yet Masumi hoped to expand her knowledge of chakra and continued to study even after she graduated.
 
PostPosted: Fri Jun 19, 2015 2:35 pm
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Full Name: Urufu Hiken
Nickname: Uri

Age: 14
Birthdate: September 10th
Gender: Male

Height: 5'8"
Weight: 126 lbs

Nindo: Be true to yourself.
Personality: Uri is very open and welcoming. Rather than the normal cold-hearted people of his clan, he has a very warm heart and is rarely seen without a smile.

Village: Kirigakure
Rank: Genin
First Class: Ninjutsu
Second Class: Bloodline

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Bloodline: Hyouton [Ice Release]

Chakra Pool:{365}
Stamina Pool: {145}
Chakra Element: Suiton [Water], Fuuton [Wind], Hyouton [Ice]
Chakra Color: Pale Blue
Chakra Materialization: Undiscovered

Strengths:
• Ninjustu
• Speed and Relfexes
Weaknesses:
• Not Very Bright
• Easliy Distracted
Fears:
• Large bodies of water
• Heights

Class Disciplines :
• Elemental Dual Wielder [Ninjutsu]
• Blood Knight [Bloodline]
Reductions:
• Learn Ninjustu One [1] Post Faster
• Learn Bloodline One [1] Post Faster
Personal Attributes:
• Speed Slightly Increased
• Learns Bukijustu One [1] Post Faster

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Ryo: 両0
AC: 0

Missions Complete:
D Rank :: 0
C Rank :: 0
B Rank :: 0
A Rank :: 0
S Rank :: 0

Limitations:
• Ninjutsu : : 00 / 10
• Genjutsu : : 00 / 03
• Taijutsu Styles: : 00 / 01
• Bukijutsu Styles: : 00 / 01

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Weapon Type: Twin Double-Edged Tantos
Weapon Range: 11"
Weapon Weight: 3 lbs total
Weapon Location: Back Sheath

Summoning Type:
Summon Sage:
Pacts:


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• Flak Jacket [Fathers]
• Senbon x 10

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Maruton: {Start with the following six only}
• Henge no Jutsu [ Transformation Technique ]
• Kawarimi no Jutsu [ Substitution Technique ]
• Bushin no Jutsu [ Clone Technique ]
• Suimen Hokou no Waza [ Act of Water Surface Walking ]
• Kinobori no Waza [ Act of Tree Climbing ]
• Kai [ Release ]

Suiton


Fuuton


Hyouton


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Uri started off living pretty simple. The only strange thing about him was his father was rarely ever around. At a young age, his mother knew that he had been gifted with the Hyouton kekkai genkai, something that had skipped her generation. He went through the academy fairly easily, giving no reason to draw attention to himself.

One day after he had come home, some of the village ninja showed up to their house carrying a note. His father had been killed on a mission. He has stricken with grief, never getting the chance to even know his father. He only knew he was a renowned swordsman. After going through his father's belongs, he found many notes speaking of the seven swords. His father had been trying to find the items of myth and legend. Uri has since decided to dedicate himself to picking up where his father left off, making sure his death was not in vain.
 

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PostPosted: Fri Jun 19, 2015 7:17 pm
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Full Name: Ydarihan Malakzdar
Nickname: -

Age: 15 {1/2}
Birthdate: October 31st
Gender: Male

Height: 5 foot, 3 inches
Weight: 132 lbs

Nindo: "To Bring Justice Pure to the Wicked. To Judge Without Mercy. All Things Are True, All Things Are Permitted."
Personality: Ydar, as his shortened name happens to be, is something akin to a force of nature, and an abstract one at that. Given his history, the boy has a spectacular obsession with bringing justice to everything, though what is truly "Justice" is defined by a series of codes he possesses. Each code represents an aspect of his personality and belief structure, and are by no means allowed to be broken. These codes culminate in the Calling, which holds the Codes and the Justice parts. In the case of a code being broken, a valuable punishment must be dealt to ensure balance of soul.

[Speak No Untruth, Unless Permitted] → While times might call for an untruth, such as in a mission where success balances on a fulcrum and a truth would break its precarious perch, all attempts must be made to keep the lying tongue of the Oni from one's mouth. In all things must truth be done, until the Calling requires otherwise.
[Justice Without Mercy] → Mercy is a weakness that cannot be allowed to bend the will of one's blade or path. Justice is not served by the heart, for by the heart is evil spread. When acting upon Judgment, fulfill the Calling, and bring swift justice without fail.
[Judge Not Lest Ye Be Judged] → Consider in all things the laws of the Calling. If one is judged guilty, one must submit themselves to punishment fitting the guilt of the breach.
[All Things Are Permissible] → In the pursuit of Justice Pure, all things are permissible. If murder required, show no mercy. If theft required, give in kind. Tempt not the paths of Justice Wroth, lest one be dragged into it.
[Belief is Law] → Let the Calling and one's conscience be one's guide in the pursuit of Justice Pure.

Ydar is also a boy who knows how to show proper decorum when the time calls for it. He is respectful in all things, and treats all with respect, yet can change his personal attitude seemingly at will, without notice. He hides well his codes and the meanings behind them, and to the world, and to Otogakure no Sato itself, he is a mild mannered child with barely any promise as a Shinobi. He is quiet, thoughtful, but with no real sense of purpose other than to be as valuable a shinobi as possible. He goes to extremes to ensure that no one knows just how good he can be by being the solid worst shinobi anyone can be, and so that is what the village sees him as. And that's how it is meant to be.

Village: Otogakure no Sato
Rank: Genin
First Class: Bukijutsu
Second Class: Bloodline

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Bloodline: Seiton [ Rust Release ]

Chakra Pool: 255
Stamina Pool: 245
Chakra Element: Earth || Wind
Chakra Color: Green // Blue, which ranges between the two depending on emotions
Chakra Materialization: A paladin like figure, fully armored and enormous, the personification of Justice Pure.

Strengths:
• Keeping all emotions bottled up inside, so much so that a near split personality seems to have been formed. This comes even to hiding the truth, with his facial expressions and body language being absolutely under his control, nothing comes out that is not meant to.
• Fighting from all directions and in a maelstrom of chaos. Training with the Justicars taught Ydar that enemies can come from any side, and all sides. Because of this, fighting one enemy, or a thousand, does not induce a panic, and he will fight just as well no matter how chaotic the battle becomes.
• Is able to use his tail as an extra hand, a gift of the curse inflicted upon him. With this tail comes slightly bushier side burns, some light dusting of fur on knuckles and chest, and slightly sharper teeth and elongated fingers for extra gripping. Except for the tail, all other signs are too minimal for anyone to notice as odd or out of place.
Weaknesses:
• Is rigid in following the Calling. Breaking the Calling is a sin that must instantly be punished, without Mercy. If that requires his death, Ydar would do it, but such a punishment requires the highest of transgressions.
• Is unable to accept anything but his point of view. Justice must come from the hand of a Justicar, for it is only they which truly know Justice Pure. Thus, for anyone to tell him that his point is wrong, they must challenge his beliefs with a contest, be it fighting or otherwise. As long as he believes the competition fair, the winner's beliefs will be accepted, unless it is the exact opposite of his beliefs.
Fears:
• Fears falling into Justice Wroth. Such a crime would require punishments quite extreme, up to and including his own life becoming forfeit.
• Fears being unable to equate his soul. Falling into Justice Wroth is bad enough, but being unable to purify his soul, to make up for the crimes he committed? That is the worst fear of his soul, for it would mean a death that ends in obliteration, an absolute end.

Class Disciplines :
• Blood Bender
• Mystic Warrior
Reductions:
• Bukijutsu → -1
• Bloodline → -1
Personal Attributes:
• Essence of Rot and Decay → During his studies at the archives hidden beneath the temple he found, Ydar discovered a special book that told of a method of Seiton use that went beyond simple oxidization. No, it tapped into an energy and chakra source that none had seen before: Rot//Decay. After studying it, and investing must time into the training of it, Ydar is able to utilize Rot and Decay jutsu, which will be listed as variances from Seiton as well as custom jutsu.
• Scales of Justice → Justice has no alignment, no favorite to the paths of Good and Evil, but shimmies down the center, the road of Neutrality. However, the path between Justice Pure and Justice Wroth is not so easily seen. This duality is represented in Ydar as well, through the spirit bonded to his soul, in the manifestation of both extremes. Due to the infection of his bloodline, however, the Scales have been altered, forming a kind of separation in spirit, between his powers over Seiton and his mastery of Bukijutsu. In a form of "Karma Points", each major action that Ydar takes will influence him between these two extremes, and each side has its own rewards and penalties, depending on just how far down, or up, the chain he goes. They are described below, along with the number of "Justice Counters" required for each to occur. Any time a contrary action is taken to the extreme currently manifested within Ydar the "Counters" earned will subtract from the current extreme's "Counter Pool", until the other extreme begins. At the center, known as "Justice Balanced", there will be no rewards or penalties.
• Each time a rank of Justice Pure is attained, there is a flash of silver light in a lattice across Ydar's flesh, and a sense of divinity pervades his form. The Chakra Materialization becomes more Paladinesque in appearance, with an aura of awe-inspiring authority to come with it. The personality changes, as well as the Materialization effects, occur gradually and only change when a new stage is attained.
• Each time a rank of Justice Wroth is attained, there is a flash of black light in a lattice across Ydar's flesh, and a sense of animosity and cruelty begins to pervade his form. The Chakra Materialization becomes less Paladinesque in appearance, with bones beginning to fill in where armor once lay. Animal skins and rotted flesh, along with chains jangling with every movement, the materialization brings with it a sense of damnation on the horizon, imminent death to strike with each breath. The personality changes, as well as the Materialization effects, occur gradually and only change when a new stage is attained.

[Justice P u r e]
► 20 Justice Counters
→ +50 Temporary Chakra
→ Endurance Mildly Increased
← Personality Change :: (Craving to Seek Out the Wicked and Punish)
← Bloodline Costs Increased by fifty percent [50%]
[Justice C a l l e d]
► 15 Justice Counters
→ +25 Temporary Stamina
→ -1 to Learning Bukijutsu
→ +1 Rank to All Bukijutsu
← +1 to Learning Bloodline
← -1 Rank to Bloodline
← Personality Change (Inability to Feel Emotion)
[Justice R a i s e d]
► 10 Justice Counters
→ +15 Temporary Stamina
→ -1 to Learning Bukijutsu
← Personality Change (Inability to Understand Absolute Loyalty)
← +1 to Learning Bloodline
[Justice C l a i m e d]
► 5 Justice Counters
→ +10 Temporary Stamina
→ Supernatural Ability to Sense Half-truths and Lies
← Personality Change (Inability to Tell Lies)
← Bloodline Techniques Cost Two Activations
[Justice B a l a n c e d]
► 0 Justice Counters
→ No Bonuses
[Justice B r o u g h t]
► -5 Justice Counters
→ +10 Temporary Chakra,
→ -1 to Learning Bloodline,
← Personality Change (Lack of Integrity)
← Bukijutsu Techniques Cost Two Activations
[Justice F o u g h t]
► -10 Justice Counters
→ +15 Temporary Chakra
→ +1 Rank to Bloodline
← Personality Change (Lack of Care for Others)
← +1 to Learning Bukijutsu
[Justice R a g e d]
► -15 Justice Counters
→ +25 Temporary Chakra
→ Strength Mildly Increased
→ -1 to Learning Bloodline
← Personality Change (Craving to Destroy)
← +1 to Learning Bukijutsu
← -1 Rank to Bukijutsu
[Justice W r o t h]
► -20 Justice Counters
→ +50 Temporary Chakra
→ Speed Mildly Increased
→ Corruption Time Reduced by Half
← Personality Change (Driven to Murder)
← Bukijutsu Costs Increased by fifty percent [50%]
← Once Justice Wroth is attained, Ydar finds himself driven to murder, as written above. A further downside is that it is far harder to pull oneself out of Justice Wroth than Justice Pure. In this stage, it takes a sound defeat in the name of Justice to reduce Ydar back to Justice Raged, at which time he may continue on to return to Justice Balanced.


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Ryo: 両0
AC: 00,000

Missions Complete:
D Rank :: 0 {All start at zero}
C Rank :: 0
B Rank :: 0
A Rank :: 0
S Rank :: 0

Limitations: {How many of each technique you can learn. Refer to class info}
• Ninjutsu : : 00 // 05
• Genjutsu : : 00 // 02
• Taijutsu Styles: : 00 // 01
• Custom Jutsu : : 00 // 10
• Custom Bloodline Jutsu : : 00 // 03
• Bukijutsu Styles: : 00 / 03

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Weapon Type: Short Sword, Straight Edge
Weapon Range: 2 feet, 8 inches length
Weapon Weight: 2 pounds
Weapon Location: Horizontal on back of waist

Summoning Type: -
Summon Sage: -
Pacts: -

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• One Scroll [Seiton] → Kept within his robes by a strap.
• 8 Kunai
• 7 Paper Bombs
• Temple Robes and Breastplate
• Silver Dagger and Scales → Religious Use

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▬▬┤|N i n j u t s u

Maruton:
• Henge no Jutsu [ Transformation Technique ]
• Kawarimi no Jutsu [ Substitution Technique ]
• Bushin no Jutsu [ Clone Technique ]
• Suimen Hokou no Waza [ Act of Water Surface Walking ]
• Kinobori no Waza [ Act of Tree Climbing ]
• Kai [ Release ]

Fuuton




Doton




Seiton




Custom Ninjutsu




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▬▬┤|T a i j u t s u

• {Style 1}
Stage O n e {1}




Stage T w o {2}




Stage T h r e e {3}




Stage F o u r {4}




Stage F i v e {5}






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• {Style 1}
Stage O n e {1}




Stage T w o {2}




Stage T h r e e {3}




Stage F o u r {4}




Stage F i v e {5}






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Ydarihan Malakzdar was born on the night of All Hallows Eve in a land so far away from this one that few, if any, had heard of it. There strange practices were common that this side of the world had never seen, and one was the ability to attach manifestations of life to an individual, in a similar method to the Jashin Cult, though not entirely. This bonded the individual with a sort of "guardian angel" that subtly influenced their personality and actions to ensure they follow the path of their guardian spirit's laws. This is defined as "the Calling", and the name of the spirit bonded to Ydar is Justice. This has caused the young boy's life to alter considerably, and would have ended with a life as a Justicar had not fate intervened.

Ydar was raised in a land upon the edge of a great ocean, within a temple dedicated to the god known as Delesca, a spirit of Justice Pure. There he learned the art of a peacekeeper, a Justicar, from the young age of two years till the age of seven. At the age of seven, a visitor to the temple caught Ydar’s interest: a man from the other side of the world, dressed in odd fatigues and walking in the manner of a trained warrior. Even at this age, Ydar knew of such things, trained for violence in the manner of an executioner and frontline fighter. He had come to speak to the high priest, known as the Paladin, for something that was kept secret from Ydar, as he was the youngest and unworthy of such important information at his age and stage of training. However, he was not above a bit of investigation, and whilst rousting through the strangers gear in his visiting room, the young Justicar discovered a box that, when opened, awakened an odd change. Black tendrils leached into his flesh, changing him, altering him…freeing him.
When he awakened, it was to a very, very angry Paladin. Whatever had happened, whatever had been in that box, Ydar found himself bearing the able table of a monkey, with limbs and body more limber than originally intended for the average human. Worse, the natural energies he had been learning had been altered, tainted, to the point that now his life would be changed forever. The strange man that had come to visit stood behind the Paladin, and when the news clearly crushed the boy, the figure spoke. “You have been touched by an entity that I captured, a creature of rot and ruin. With it, you have gained something that others are born to: the power to oxidize. From what the Paladin says, your life here in this temple is now over, but I would have you with me, then, when I return home. There, I am known as the Lord of the Land of Sound, and there it is that I will take you to learn the art of Shinobi, if you wish it.”

To say the boy was unhappy was an understatement, but his training, his upbringing, and the spirit bonded with him, gave him no other options. The law was simple, and Justice Pure required that he give himself up for the crimes he had committed, lest he fall into Justice Wroth. And so, accepting his due, the young Ydarihan Malakzdar went with the Lord of the Land of Sound to the Shinobi lands on the other side of the world. Unfortunately the travel did not go as planned, as the power within Ydar began to spread to his own body. Without release, it began to eat away at his form, and the Lord was forced to place the child under a jutsu that forced him into a state of suspended animation, freezing his mind but allowing his body to progress. Somehow, this stopped, and even reversed, the spread.

Ydar awoke a mere three years ago within the Village Hidden in the Sound, finding it a very, very different place. The Lord he knew was gone, and in its place lay the President, as he was known. In this new world, he quickly discovered that his powers needed to be hidden, but his purpose? His purpose was to help, to bring the world to Justice Pure, but to do that he needed to lay low, and learn. And so he entered the Shinobi Academy, as he was meant to, to learn what he needed to bring this strange world to Justice.


 
PostPosted: Sat Jun 20, 2015 12:06 am
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Full Name: Haven Haruma Hachikozi
Nickname: Haven, The Empty Child

Age: Seven
Birthdate: July 13th
Gender: Male

Height: Four Foot One Inch [4'1"]
Weight: Seventy Nine Pounds[79 lbs]

Nindo: "Control the Myself, Dominate the Battle, Defeat my Enemies."
Personality: Haven is quiet, cold, and emotionless as it seems. He does not necessarily speak without needing to speak, while he remains polite in a sense as well. His voice is monotone showing more of his emotionless state, and his eyes seem empty.

Village: Konohagakure
Rank: Genin
First Class: Bukijutsu Class
Second Class: Genjutsu Class

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Bloodline: Kemuriton

Chakra Pool: 360
Stamina Pool: 140
Chakra Element: Fire, Wind
Chakra Color: White
Chakra Materialization: Smoke

Strengths:
• Defensive Fighting
• Use of Bloodline
Weaknesses:
• Wind Jutsu
• Defensive Piercing
Fears:
• Being smashed by a boulder.
• Age Regression

Class Disciplines :
• Samurai: You follow Bushidō, the "Way of the Warrior." Your serene mind allows you to detect genjutsu you are trapped within that are two or more ranks below your own status rank, and your tempered body allows you to wear thick armor that a ninja would otherwise be dragged to their knees by. Additionally, you start with the following four (4) techniques, rather than the six (6) most ninja do; Bushi Ken no Jutsu [ Samurai Sabre Technique, ] Shunshin no Jutsu [ Body Flicker Technique, ] Kai [ Release, ] and Kawarimi no Jutsu [ Substitution Technique. ]
• Mental Defenses: The user is more aware of how a genjutsu affects the mind, making them more aware and able to detect genjutsu and thus more resistant to it. Increases genjutsu detection, and reduces Kai cost by 1 rank.
Reductions:
• Learn Bukijutsu techniques one [2] post faster.
• Learn Genjutsu techniques one [1] post faster.
Personal Attributes:
• Formless!: 2 Extra Formless Style Slots
• Painless: Haven is incapable of feeling pain. This does not mean he is not hurt by things.

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Ryo: 両0
AC: 0

Missions Complete:
D Rank :: 0
C Rank :: 0
B Rank :: 0
A Rank :: 0
S Rank :: 0

Limitations:
• Ninjutsu : : 00 / 05
• Genjutsu : : 00 / 08
• Taijutsu Styles: : 00 / 00
• Bukijutsu Styles: : 00 / 02

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Weapon Type: Katana
Weapon Range: 48 Inches
Weapon Weight: 100 lbs
Weapon Location: Right Hip

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• 15 Shuriken

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▬▬┤|N i n j u t s u

Maruton:
• Bushi Ken no Jutsu [ Samurai Sabre Technique ]
• Kawarimi no Jutsu [ Substitution Technique ]
• Shunshin no Jutsu [ Body Flicker Technique ]
• Kai [ Release ]

Katon


Fuuton


Kemuriton


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▬▬┤|B u k i j u t s u

{Style name here}
• {Stage progression / techniques learned}

▬▬┤|B u k i j u t s u

{Style name here}
• {Stage progression / techniques learned}

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When Haven was born, he was experimented on by his father. The experiment went wrong and caused Haven to grow up emotionless and painless. Haven realized this at the age of five, and found out it was his fathers fault. He murdered his father, and now is a member of Konohagakure.
 

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PostPosted: Sat Jun 20, 2015 10:06 pm
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Full Name: Minato Hatake
Nickname: None given to her yet

Age: 15
Birthdate: October
Gender: Female

Height: 62 inches
Weight: 115 lbs

Nindo: "Feed the fire..."
Personality: She's laconic and believes that her actions do far more to define her than her words ever would.

Village: Konohagakure
Rank: Genin
First Class: Bukijutsu
Second Class: Bukijutsu

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Bloodline: Jiongu

Chakra Pool: 290
Stamina Pool: 250
Chakra Element: Suiton
Chakra Color: White
Chakra Materialization: Currently Unknown

Strengths:
• Close combat
• Survival

Weaknesses:
• Long range combat
• Fighting without armor

Fears:
• Losing the rest of her sanity
• Someone finding out what she is now

Class Disciplines :
• Samurai
• Mystic Hero

Reductions:
• Bukijutsu is learned two posts faster
• Ninjutsu is learned one post faster

Personal Attributes:
• Taijutsu Specialist: Gains an additional tai slot at the rank of genin
• Jutsu Specialist: Is able to use jutsu with one hand.
• Fooling Death: If a killing blow is struck, a spare heart is expanded and used as a replacement.
• Organic Alteration: Able to rearrange internal organs on a whim, though this takes a small amount of time.

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Ryo: 両0
AC: 0

Missions Complete:
D Rank :: 0
C Rank :: 0
B Rank :: 0
A Rank :: 0
S Rank :: 0

Limitations:
• Ninjutsu : : 00 / 02
• Heart Jutsu : : 00 / 08
• Taijutsu Styles: : 00 / 02
• Bukijutsu Styles: : 00 / 05

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Weapon Type: None
Weapon Range: None
Weapon Weight: None
Weapon Location: None

Summoning Type: None
Summon Sage: No
Pacts: None

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• None
• None

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▬▬┤|N i n j u t s u

Maruton:
• Bushi Ken no Jutsu [ Samurai Sabre Technique ]
• Shunshin no Jutsu [ Body Flicker Technique ]
• Kai [ Release ]
• Kawarimi no Jutsu [ Substitution Technique ]


{Suiton}


{Heart Jutsu}


{Jiongu}


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{Style name here}
• {Stage progression / techniques learned}



▬▬┤|B u k i j u t s u

{Style name here}
• {Stage progression / techniques learned}

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*In the process of writing it. Shall be revealed through the rp overtime however*
 
PostPosted: Sat Jun 20, 2015 11:22 pm
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Assuming the bloodline apps are approved, approved, otherwise, please apply for them.  


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PostPosted: Sat Jun 20, 2015 11:28 pm
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Assuming the bloodline apps are approved, approved, otherwise, please apply for them.


I got approved for that yesterday. Thank you! :]  
PostPosted: Sun Jun 21, 2015 11:04 am
Avedis Angelus


If I'm reading this correctly, you're accidently over on 1 genjutsu reduction. Please reduce it to only 1. Other than that minor edit, if your bloodline app is also approved, approved. If not, then it'll be just a few while it's looked over.

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PostPosted: Mon Jun 22, 2015 9:47 am
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Full Name: Suzume [Jiton]
Nickname: n/a

Age: 13
Birthdate: December 19th
Gender: F

Height: 5'2
Weight: 98 lbs

Nindo: "There are many ways to the top of the world, but only one person can be there. You better believe it's gonna be me."
Personality: Suzume is snobby, spoiled, and has a major superiority complex. She lies, humiliates others, and fights her own battles. She can be described as distrusting, shallow, and manipulative. She is also very independent, but she isn't above using impressionable ninja as pawns for her goals. However, she is easily attached and has a history of caring for the people she abuses. She also has an eye for detail. She has a tendency to isolate herself with she feels panicked or troubled. She denies being vulnerable and will sacrifice time and comfort to keep up her perfect persona.

Village: Konohagakure
Rank: Genin
First Class: Genjutsu
Second Class: Genjutsu

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Bloodline: Jiton

Chakra Pool: 480
Stamina Pool: 30
Chakra Element: Lightning, Earth
Chakra Color: Navy
Chakra Materialization: Appears like heavy fog

Strengths:
• Evasion
• Chakra control
Weaknesses:
• Slower hand seals
• Overdoes attacks sometimes
Fears:
• Bleeding out
• Rest of the clan dying out or being massacred

Class Disciplines :
Inception: The user's genjutsu prowess has increased the sheer power of the genjutsu, making them act a rank higher then they are (up to S rank). This increases the Kai cost for an opponent.
Mental Defenses: The user is more aware of how a genjutsu affects the mind, making them more aware and able to detect genjutsu and thus more resistant to it. Increases genjutsu detection, and reduces Kai cost by 1 rank.
Reductions:
• Learns genjutsu [1] posts faster
• Learns Doton and Raiton ninjutsu [1] posts faster
Personal Attributes:
• Movement speed is slightly increased
• All bloodline techniques that require more than one hand sign can be performed by Suzume in one

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Ryo: 両0
AC: 0

Missions Complete:
D Rank :: 0
C Rank :: 0
B Rank :: 0
A Rank :: 0
S Rank :: 0

Limitations:
• Ninjutsu : : 00 / 08
• Genjutsu : : 00 / 16
• Taijutsu Styles: : 00 / 00
• Bukijutsu Styles: : 00 / 00

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Weapon Type: Double bladed pole arm [x]
Weapon Range: 60 in
Weapon Weight: Four lbs
Weapon Location: Back

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• x15 Kunai

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▬▬┤|N i n j u t s u

Maruton: {Start with the following six only}
• Henge no Jutsu [ Transformation Technique ]
• Kawarimi no Jutsu [ Substitution Technique ]
• Bushin no Jutsu [ Clone Technique ]
• Suimen Hokou no Waza [ Act of Water Surface Walking ]
• Kinobori no Waza [ Act of Tree Climbing ]
• Kai [ Release ]

Doton


Raiton


Bloodline [Jiton]


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Suzume is the first and only born of her parents, Taiyo and Ai. They were rich from generations of business in Sunagakure. In Konoha, they made a home of their own for their daughter and made sure it was grand. Without a clan area for them, Suzume was robbed of connections with other Jiton. The guilt of this made her parents spoil her beyond belief. Suzume was forced to play with the strange villagers, almost all of which had their own clans and cousins to play with. Suzume's attitude and personality scared many kids away from her and her inability to make many friends caused her to isolate herself. Since the academy, she has been working extra hard to be better than all the other kids; if not to prove herself, then to prove that you can succeed without an entire clan behind you.  
PostPosted: Wed Jun 24, 2015 11:49 am
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Full Name: Hiroshi Tarou
Nickname: Hiro

Age: 14
Birthdate: September 24
Gender: Male

Height: 5'10"
Weight: 165

Nindo: " To protect and serve the village as my Uncle did. "
Personality: Hiro is a very relaxed and rather happy person. He is most easily described as laid back. He enjoys putting a decent amount of work into tasks at hand, but he would never be one to spend from dawn until dusk in a training grounds without being forced to. He enjoys sparring, and fighting for fun, but he truly dislikes death, and would never want to be a part of it.

Village: Konohagakure
Rank: Genin
First Class: Ninjutsu
Second Class: Sensor

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Bloodline: Koton

Chakra Pool: 450
Stamina Pool: 50
Chakra Element: Earth
Chakra Color: White
Chakra Materialization: Looks almost like a dense steam emanating from Hiro's body.

Strengths:
• Ninjutsu/Long Range Combat
• Ability to Sense/Detect Shinobi
Weaknesses:
• Physical Speed
• Genjutsu
Fears:
• Drowning (His black steel is extremely heavy, and he could easily drown if he were swimming with it active)
• Sharks/Very large fish.

Class Disciplines :
• Elemental Specialist
• Resolution
Reductions:
• Learn Ninjutsu 2 posts Faster
• Learns Genjutsu Ninjutsu 1 post faster
Personal Attributes:
• Chakra Control Expert: Hiro can perform juts with only a single hand sign
• Ninjutsu Specialist: Hiro has absolutely no skill in genjutsu, taijutsu, or bukijutsu, meaning that all perks/techniques that may be devoted to these techniques by his class have been moved to other forms ninjutsu (Maruton, Doton Ninjutsu, of Fuinjutsu).

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Ryo: 両 0
AC: 0

Missions Complete:
D Rank :: 0
C Rank :: 0
B Rank :: 0
A Rank :: 0
S Rank :: 0

Limitations:
• Ninjutsu : : 00 / 017
• Genjutsu : : 00 / 00
• Taijutsu Styles: : 00 / 00
• Bukijutsu Styles: : 00 / 00

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Weapon Type: N/A
Weapon Range: N/A
Weapon Weight: N/A
Weapon Location: N/A

Summoning Type: N/A
Summon Sage: N/A
Pacts: N/A

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▬▬┤|N i n j u t s u

Maruton: {Start with the following six only}
• Henge no Jutsu [ Transformation Technique ]
• Kawarimi no Jutsu [ Substitution Technique ]
• Bushin no Jutsu [ Clone Technique ]
• Suimen Hokou no Waza [ Act of Water Surface Walking ]
• Kinobori no Waza [ Act of Tree Climbing ]
• Kai [ Release ]

Doton


Fuinjutsu



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Hiro's parents passed away when he was very young due to an illness that swept his small village on the outskirts of Konohagakure. When this happened, his father's brother, who lived inside the boundaries of Konohagakure, took him in. Hiro's uncle was once a shinobi for Kirigakure, but had since retired due to the loss of his right hand and his left leg. Hiro lived a fairly comfortable life, and was well loved by his uncle. He has been raised since arriving in Konohagakure to become a shinobi, just as his uncle did, and after graduating the academy is finally ready to begin his journey as such.
 

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PostPosted: Thu Jun 25, 2015 7:47 am
ken-faita

At Genin you only get an Additional 2 with Elemental Specialist, then each rank up following you gain 3 additional jutsu on top of your normal pool. Aside from that, I don't see too much at fault with your character.

Correct the minor error, and Approved.

bird lawyer

I have fault with your First Personal Attribute. If you're looking to increase movement speed or Reflexes, I'd recommend using the PA to increase Movement Speed or Reflexes Slightly.

Our Stats work on a six point system, based on Slight Modifiers Slight being 1/6th.  
PostPosted: Thu Jun 25, 2015 8:42 am
Wolfe Whitehorn
I have fault with your First Personal Attribute. If you're looking to increase movement speed or Reflexes, I'd recommend using the PA to increase Movement Speed or Reflexes Slightly.

Our Stats work on a six point system, based on Slight Modifiers Slight being 1/6th.


Fixed.  

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PostPosted: Thu Jun 25, 2015 9:36 am
Wolfe Whitehorn

I know, the attribute I gave myself allowed me to convert all of the genjutsu slots I would have into ninjutsu slots, thats why I added the +5 to the side. If the attribute is approved, then there is no mistake in the number of jutsu I have.

Edit: I don't really like genjutsu, so I would love to be able to just convert all the genjutsu techniques into ninjutsu/fuinjutsu  
PostPosted: Thu Jun 25, 2015 9:42 am
ken-faita

I don't see a problem with 1-1 Transfer of jutsu like that if you're giving up the ability to learn Genjutsu Period, approved. You'll just receive the extra ninjutsu when you'd normally receive the Genjutsu.

bird lawyer

Alright, approved.  

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