Is this good? I'm also changing that 1 extra buki style PA to the second one listed here. The entire edited profile is in the spoiler below.
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|ρ є r ѕ σ η α ℓ • ∂ α т α|├▬ Full Name: Kaolin Satetsu Nickname: Kao
Age: 18 Birthdate: Jan. 1 Gender: Male
Height: 6ft 0in Weight: 177lbs
Nindo: "If it won't fill your stomach or your pockets it isn't worth it." Personality: Hard-working and reliable, the kind of guy you'd trust to get the job done no matter what, as long as it fills his stomach and pays his bills. One could accuse him of being too simple, of being only after money and food in life and they would be half-correct. His goals in life do include becoming someone wealthy enough to stuff himself obese everyday, but he also does his work due to a sense of love and loyalty for his village and everyone in it.
Matched by his greed and hunger is his being competitive. He makes competitions and rivals out of nearly everything and everyone and this is what makes him constantly strive to better himself, to always be ten steps ahead of other people's ten steps ahead. This is partly due to him being a bit of an attention seeker, also because of it, he can be quite flashy for a ninja (often going overboard in combat, using techniques with the most "wow" factor). He isn't an idiot though, and in serious situations can curb this part of him. Village: Sunagakure Rank: Genin First Class: Bukijutsu Second Class: Bukijutsu
Chakra Pool: 250 / 250 Stamina Pool: 250 / 250 Chakra Element: Doton | Raiton | Jiton Chakra Color: Varies Chakra Materialization: Varies
Strengths: • Expert in close quarters combat • Natural fighting instincts Weaknesses: • Over-confidence • One sided means of fighting (Little bloodline ninjutsu, littler normal ninjutsu, absolutely no genjutsu, all kung-fu and pew-pew) Fears: • Growing old • Being powerless
Class Disciplines : • Mystic Hero: The user is much like a hybrid warrior, focusing on mixing ninjutsu into their personal arsenal. Through their great devotion to this path the user can cast ninjutsu without hand seals while wielding a weapon, D at gennin, C at chunnin, B at Jounin, A at Konin, and S at Sannin. These techniques maintain the same description and criteria to use, as well as require the same amount of time to mold the chakra through the weapon as would be needed to perform hand seals, meaning the techniques are not instantaneously cast. The user’s spirit is so strong, that they can utilize their physical bukijutsu techniques to negate ninjutsu techniques of the same rank or below. • Samurai: You follow Bushidō, the "Way of the Warrior." Your serene mind allows you to detect genjutsu you are trapped within that are two or more ranks below your own status rank, and your tempered body allows you to wear thick armor that a ninja would otherwise be dragged to their knees by. Additionally, you start with the following four (4) techniques, rather than the six (6) most ninja do; Bushi Ken no Jutsu [ Samurai Sabre Technique, ] Shunshin no Jutsu [ Body Flicker Technique, ] Kai [ Release, ] and Kawarimi no Jutsu [ Substitution Technique. ] • Specialization: If this class is chosen as the first and second class, then the user starts with one [1] additional taijutsu and Bukijutsu slot. Superior conditioning allows the user to choose a specific energy cost (stamina or chakra) and reduce the costs of technique activation by 5, to a minimum activation cost of 5. Every time the user ranks up, they repeat this process. Chakra costs reduced by 5.
Reductions: • Learns bukijutsu techniques two [2] posts faster. • Satetsu users learn taijutsu and bukijutsu techniques one [1] post slower. Personal Attributes: • Naturally buff : Was born with genes that easily let him build up muscle, and all those years of tough exercises in the academy ended up benefiting him way more than other ninja, giving him a very muscular body. Moderate boost to strength. • A friggin' titan : In an attempt to go above and beyond, Kaolin has done all those tough exercises in incredibly heavy samurai armor. Moderate boost to strength.
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|c α r є є r • ∂ α т α|├▬ Ryo: 両0 AC: 0
Missions Complete: D Rank :: 0 C Rank :: 0 B Rank :: 0 A Rank :: 0 S Rank :: 0
Limitations: {How many of each technique you can learn. Refer to class info} • Ninjutsu : : 00 / 02 • Genjutsu : : 00 / 00 • Taijutsu Styles: : 00 / 01 • Bukijutsu Styles: : 00 / 05
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|ω є α ρ σ η • ∂ α т α|├▬ Weapon Type: Wakizashi Weapon Range: Hilt: 7.5in | Blade: 17.5in Weapon Weight: 1.5lbs Weapon Location: Back
Summoning Type: -- Summon Sage: -- Pacts: --
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|ι η ν є η т σ r у|├▬ • 10 Shuriken (Back pouch) • 5 Kunai (Other back pouch)
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|т є c н η ι q υ є ѕ|├▬ ▬▬┤|N i n j u t s u Maruton: • Bushi Ken no Jutsu [ Samurai Sabre Technique ] • Shunshin no Jutsu [ Body Flicker Technique ] • Kai [ Release ] • Kawarimi no Jutsu [ Substitution Technique ]
• •
Doton •
Raiton •
Bloodline - Jiton • • •
• • • • • • • • • • • • • •
▬▬┤|T a i j u t s u -- • • • • ▬▬┤|B u k i j u t s u -- • • • • -- • • • • -- • • • • -- • • • • -- • • • •
▬▬┤|F o r m l e s s S t y l e Hard Physical • {D-rank} + {Training Link} • {C-rank} + {Training Link} • {B-rank} + {Training Link} • {A-rank} + {Training Link} • {S-rank} + {Training Link} • {S+rank} + {Training Link} {D-rank Slots} • {Stage progression / technique learned} + {Training Link} • {Stage progression / technique learned} + {Training Link} {C-rank Slots} • {Stage progression / technique learned} + {Training Link} • {Stage progression / technique learned} + {Training Link} {B-rank Slots} • {Stage progression / technique learned} + {Training Link} • {Stage progression / technique learned} + {Training Link} {A-rank Slots} • {Stage progression / technique learned} + {Training Link} • {Stage progression / technique learned} + {Training Link} {S-rank Slots} • {Stage progression / technique learned} + {Training Link} • {Stage progression / technique learned} + {Training Link} ▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|н ι ѕ т σ r у|├▬ Born and raised in Sunagakure to parents both under the employ of the Kazekage, it was no surprise that he would choose to follow in their footsteps. As soon as he could walk and talk he's been immersing himself in the shinobi world trying to rise to the top. So far his efforts have been fruitful, and he has become one of the new, promising genin likely to ascend the ranks fast.
• Naturally buff : Was born with genes that easily let him build up muscle, and all those years of tough exercises in the academy ended up benefiting him way more than other ninja, giving him a very muscular body. Moderate boost to strength.
• A friggin' titan : In an attempt to go above and beyond, Kaolin has done all those tough exercises in incredibly heavy samurai armor. Moderate boost to strength.
Posted: Wed Nov 05, 2014 10:20 pm
Desin Slight
Kazuraii
Is this good? I'm also changing that 1 extra buki style PA to the second one listed here. The entire edited profile is in the spoiler below.
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|ρ є r ѕ σ η α ℓ • ∂ α т α|├▬ Full Name: Kaolin Satetsu Nickname: Kao
Age: 18 Birthdate: Jan. 1 Gender: Male
Height: 6ft 0in Weight: 177lbs
Nindo: "If it won't fill your stomach or your pockets it isn't worth it." Personality: Hard-working and reliable, the kind of guy you'd trust to get the job done no matter what, as long as it fills his stomach and pays his bills. One could accuse him of being too simple, of being only after money and food in life and they would be half-correct. His goals in life do include becoming someone wealthy enough to stuff himself obese everyday, but he also does his work due to a sense of love and loyalty for his village and everyone in it.
Matched by his greed and hunger is his being competitive. He makes competitions and rivals out of nearly everything and everyone and this is what makes him constantly strive to better himself, to always be ten steps ahead of other people's ten steps ahead. This is partly due to him being a bit of an attention seeker, also because of it, he can be quite flashy for a ninja (often going overboard in combat, using techniques with the most "wow" factor). He isn't an idiot though, and in serious situations can curb this part of him. Village: Sunagakure Rank: Genin First Class: Bukijutsu Second Class: Bukijutsu
Chakra Pool: 250 / 250 Stamina Pool: 250 / 250 Chakra Element: Doton | Raiton | Jiton Chakra Color: Varies Chakra Materialization: Varies
Strengths: • Expert in close quarters combat • Natural fighting instincts Weaknesses: • Over-confidence • One sided means of fighting (Little bloodline ninjutsu, littler normal ninjutsu, absolutely no genjutsu, all kung-fu and pew-pew) Fears: • Growing old • Being powerless
Class Disciplines : • Mystic Hero: The user is much like a hybrid warrior, focusing on mixing ninjutsu into their personal arsenal. Through their great devotion to this path the user can cast ninjutsu without hand seals while wielding a weapon, D at gennin, C at chunnin, B at Jounin, A at Konin, and S at Sannin. These techniques maintain the same description and criteria to use, as well as require the same amount of time to mold the chakra through the weapon as would be needed to perform hand seals, meaning the techniques are not instantaneously cast. The user’s spirit is so strong, that they can utilize their physical bukijutsu techniques to negate ninjutsu techniques of the same rank or below. • Samurai: You follow Bushidō, the "Way of the Warrior." Your serene mind allows you to detect genjutsu you are trapped within that are two or more ranks below your own status rank, and your tempered body allows you to wear thick armor that a ninja would otherwise be dragged to their knees by. Additionally, you start with the following four (4) techniques, rather than the six (6) most ninja do; Bushi Ken no Jutsu [ Samurai Sabre Technique, ] Shunshin no Jutsu [ Body Flicker Technique, ] Kai [ Release, ] and Kawarimi no Jutsu [ Substitution Technique. ] • Specialization: If this class is chosen as the first and second class, then the user starts with one [1] additional taijutsu and Bukijutsu slot. Superior conditioning allows the user to choose a specific energy cost (stamina or chakra) and reduce the costs of technique activation by 5, to a minimum activation cost of 5. Every time the user ranks up, they repeat this process. Chakra costs reduced by 5.
Reductions: • Learns bukijutsu techniques two [2] posts faster. • Satetsu users learn taijutsu and bukijutsu techniques one [1] post slower. Personal Attributes: • Naturally buff : Was born with genes that easily let him build up muscle, and all those years of tough exercises in the academy ended up benefiting him way more than other ninja, giving him a very muscular body. Moderate boost to strength. • A friggin' titan : In an attempt to go above and beyond, Kaolin has done all those tough exercises in incredibly heavy samurai armor. Moderate boost to strength.
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|c α r є є r • ∂ α т α|├▬ Ryo: 両0 AC: 0
Missions Complete: D Rank :: 0 C Rank :: 0 B Rank :: 0 A Rank :: 0 S Rank :: 0
Limitations: {How many of each technique you can learn. Refer to class info} • Ninjutsu : : 00 / 02 • Genjutsu : : 00 / 00 • Taijutsu Styles: : 00 / 01 • Bukijutsu Styles: : 00 / 05
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|ω є α ρ σ η • ∂ α т α|├▬ Weapon Type: Wakizashi Weapon Range: Hilt: 7.5in | Blade: 17.5in Weapon Weight: 1.5lbs Weapon Location: Back
Summoning Type: -- Summon Sage: -- Pacts: --
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|ι η ν є η т σ r у|├▬ • 10 Shuriken (Back pouch) • 5 Kunai (Other back pouch)
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|т є c н η ι q υ є ѕ|├▬ ▬▬┤|N i n j u t s u Maruton: • Bushi Ken no Jutsu [ Samurai Sabre Technique ] • Shunshin no Jutsu [ Body Flicker Technique ] • Kai [ Release ] • Kawarimi no Jutsu [ Substitution Technique ]
• •
Doton •
Raiton •
Bloodline - Jiton • • •
• • • • • • • • • • • • • •
▬▬┤|T a i j u t s u -- • • • • ▬▬┤|B u k i j u t s u -- • • • • -- • • • • -- • • • • -- • • • • -- • • • •
▬▬┤|F o r m l e s s S t y l e Hard Physical • {D-rank} + {Training Link} • {C-rank} + {Training Link} • {B-rank} + {Training Link} • {A-rank} + {Training Link} • {S-rank} + {Training Link} • {S+rank} + {Training Link} {D-rank Slots} • {Stage progression / technique learned} + {Training Link} • {Stage progression / technique learned} + {Training Link} {C-rank Slots} • {Stage progression / technique learned} + {Training Link} • {Stage progression / technique learned} + {Training Link} {B-rank Slots} • {Stage progression / technique learned} + {Training Link} • {Stage progression / technique learned} + {Training Link} {A-rank Slots} • {Stage progression / technique learned} + {Training Link} • {Stage progression / technique learned} + {Training Link} {S-rank Slots} • {Stage progression / technique learned} + {Training Link} • {Stage progression / technique learned} + {Training Link} ▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|н ι ѕ т σ r у|├▬ Born and raised in Sunagakure to parents both under the employ of the Kazekage, it was no surprise that he would choose to follow in their footsteps. As soon as he could walk and talk he's been immersing himself in the shinobi world trying to rise to the top. So far his efforts have been fruitful, and he has become one of the new, promising genin likely to ascend the ranks fast.
• Naturally buff : Was born with genes that easily let him build up muscle, and all those years of tough exercises in the academy ended up benefiting him way more than other ninja, giving him a very muscular body. Moderate boost to strength.
• A friggin' titan : In an attempt to go above and beyond, Kaolin has done all those tough exercises in incredibly heavy samurai armor. Moderate boost to strength.
Approved, but do make mention of his prior training when it comes to his strength. Physical attributes that are increased 'moderately' must have a valid reason for being so, otherwise another physical attribute must take a 'slightly' penalty.
If any other mods have any objections with this feel free, but otherwise approved.
Put in for reapproval, Bio is added to, One PA changed.
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|ρ є r ѕ σ η α ℓ • ∂ α т α|├▬ Full Name: Okabe To-to Jaeger Nickname: Okabe-san, Koga, The Patient Hunter, Sujibori
Age: 18 Birthdate: March 14th Gender: Male
Height: 5'11" Weight: 161 lbs
Nindo: "Killing people is a crime, but it is also the only way correct things." Personality: Okabe is a very mysterious, blunt, honest and dark person, combined with his heavy use of sarcasm and mocking politeness, make it very difficult to discern his thoughts. Many find his demeanour and appearance rather unsettling and there are very few who were willing to trust him at first meeting. Okabe holds a dark belief that no matter who you are, what you've done and what you do, you will always have blood on your hands, this is one of the main reasons he treats people the way he does. He is a heavy pessimist and will always look to the negatives. But, Okabe is increasingly misunderstood for his negativity and is many people usually throw him in the category of threat or enemy, someone who bathes in the thing he know's. Okabe think's of these people as narrow-minded and blind to the real world around them; he nicknames these people "Day Dreamers". Okabe sees only the reality of this world he lives in, and is driven to change it. He is determined to move onto greater things, he is driven to move forwards and create a better world, a world that his mentor Suoh could never create because of his blindness to reality.
Village: Missing Nin Rank: Chuunin First Class: Bloodline Second Class: Bloodline
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|c σ м в α т • ∂ α т α|├▬ Bloodline: Bakuton, Clay Method
Chakra Pool: 310 cP Stamina Pool: 280 sP Chakra Element: Raiton & Fuuton Chakra Color: White Chakra Materialization: Okabe's chakra is never seen to be very big or powerful, as it materializes in a very odd way. His chakra is pure white, and opaque, meaning you can see through it, but whatever is on the other side of the chakra is distorted or blurred. If Okabe allows for his emotions to control him, especially anger, tinges of red and brown will ride through and flicker in and out of view. If he is molding some of his clay while it's visible, it will crackle, as if it is trying to ignite the clay, it will never do so though.
Class Disciplines : Bloodline Specialization • Blood Bender: User receives and additional 3 custom bloodline techniques. To clarify, these are custom techniques that must involve and utilize the characters bloodline. • Blood Knight: Your bloodline techniques possess greater power, allowing them to overwhelm techniques of the same rank, and preventing them from succumbing to elemental weaknesses of techniques the same rank. • Additionally, the cost to perform bloodline techniques is reduced by 10 chakra, to a minimum of 5. Reductions: • Class: Learn bloodline techniques [2] post faster.
Personal Attribute: • Realist Sealer: Able to Learn Fuuinjutsu at Chuunin Rank • [+10] Ninjutsu Slots
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|c α r є є r • ∂ α т α|├▬ Ryo: 両 500 AC: 2,650 AC
Missions Complete: D Rank :: 3 C Rank :: 5 B Rank :: 0 A Rank :: 0 S Rank :: 0
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|ω є α ρ σ η • ∂ α т α|├▬ Weapon Type: Sword :: Spoken Word Weapon Range: 73 centimetres Weapon Weight: 12 pounds Weapon Location: Oh his belt in a sheathe
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|ι η ν є η т σ r у|├▬ • Suoh's Puppet :: Thantas • Letter to Sanshi Satetsu • Letter to Sypher Yokai • Letter to Miyamoto Mamoru • Black Letter to The President • 10x Serrated Kunai • 2x Shuriken • 3x Senbon • 3x Small Jingle-bells • 2x Pouches of Clay left/right • Toxic Powder [x3] • Enhanced Antidote [x2] • Pain-killers [x10] • Explosive Tags [x6] • Wire [x1] (10yards)
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|т є c н η ι q υ є ѕ|├▬ ▬▬┤|N i n j u t s u
Maruton: • Henge no Jutsu [ Transformation Technique ] • Kawarimi no Jutsu [ Substitution Technique ] • Bushin no Jutsu [ Clone Technique ] • Suimen Hokou no Waza [ Act of Water Surface Walking ] • Kinobori no Waza [ Act of Tree Climbing ] • Kai [ Release ] Rank E • Rank D • Kirigakure no Jutsu [ Hidden Mist Technique ] [x] • Soushuriken no Jutsu [ Manipulate Shuriken Technique ] [x] • Shunshin no Jutsu [ Body Flicker Technique ] [x] • Ryouken [ Hunting Dog ], Sensory Technique [x] Rank C • Soushuuha [ Manipulate Advancing Blades ] [x] Rank B • Kage Bunshin no Jutsu [ Shadow Clone Technique ] [x] Rank A
Rank S [LOCKED]
Raiton Rank E • Teikou no Kuntou [ Electrical Resistance Training ] [x] Rank D • Rank C • Hikuhiku Eda no Jutsu [ Twitching Limb Technique ] [x] • Seishuu Sonshitsu no Jutsu [ Control Loss Technique ] [x] Rank B • Ayatsuri Raikou no Jutsu [ Manipulated Lightning Technique ] [x] Rank A
Rank S [LOCKED]
Fuuton Rank E • Kaze Fuuchuufuyuu [ Wind Levitation ] [x] • Tobidougu Soujuu no Jutsu [ Projectile Control Technique ] [x] Rank D • Rank C • Teikiatsu no Jutsu [ Low Air Pressure Technique ] [x] Rank B • Rank A
Rank S [LOCKED]
Fuuinjutsu [LOCKED UNTIL JOUNIN] Rank E [LOCKED] • Rank D [LOCKED] • Rank C [LOCKED] • Rank B [LOCKED] • Rank A [LOCKED]
Rank S [LOCKED]
Bakuton :: Clay Method Bakuton: Kure-Hoshuu Kuchi [ Explosive Release: Clay Mending Mouths ] (Passive) [x] Rank E • Bakuton: Baku Tama [ Explosive Release: Explosive Bullets ] [x] Rank D • Rank C • Bakuton: Tekidan Sanjaku [ Explosive Release: Grenade Belt ] [x] • Shī Wan [ C1 ] [x] Rank B • Bakuton: Hedoro [ Explosive Release: Sludge ] [x] Rank A • Nendo Bunshin no Jutsu [ Clay Clone Technique ] [x] Rank S [LOCKED]
Bakuton :: General Method Rank E • Rank D • Rank C • Itoguruma [ Spinning Wheel ] [x] Rank B • Rank A
Rank S [LOCKED]
Blood Bender Discipline Custom Slots:[x] • Kunai no Hensō o Bakuhatsu [ Exploding Kunai Disguise ] Rank: C Element: Bakuton & Maruton Description: Okabe will feed clay to one of his mouths and give the clay explosive chakra, he will then mold it into the shape of a kunai. After the clay is formed, he will form a handsign and the clay kunai will transform into an exact duplicate of any other of Okabe's kunai's. This clay kunai is considered to work like any other projectile and is treated as a kunai. Once thrown, Okabe can bring up his handsign and make the kunai explode at any point of it's travel, or after. Okabe takes [1] post to produce one kunai, he must know [ C1 ] and if the kunai comes into contact with fire or any Katon jutsu, of C rank or higher it will immediately explode.
• Shī Sīs [ C6 ] Rank: B Element: Bakuton Description: C6 is unlike any other of the clays that the Bakuton produce. First thought of as a smaller version of C3, the clay was supposed to melded and portrayed to always be in the form of a ball that has a sense of inertia. C6 is stretchy and elastic, however it does not stick or is able to be ripped in half, it is no larger than a volleyball. What makes this clay so special is that, when it is ignited it is a very calm explosion and instead it explodes outwards, the stretchy material expanding at a fast rate. If coming into contact with something, or someone during the expansion process, the clay will form around the object and then harden to the strength of rock. The explosion radius of the ball is only 4 ft, and are mainly used to create defenses, cover, and capturing targets.
• Kyarijji bakuhatsu [ Exploding Carriage ] Rank: C-A Element: Bakuton & Fuuton Description: After creating a clay model, Okabe will drop the model, and form the ox handsign, he must hold this handsign for the first post of the jutsu. A small gust of wind will pick up the model and carry it around Okabe in a orbit for [2] two posts, the model is moving at a quick pace and Okabe can position the orbit of the model while he is paying attention to fuuton chakra. Okabe can fire off the model with centripetal force, however it is not very accurate. Wit extra chakra added to the jutsu, the wind will pick up carrying the model almost at a speed to leave it in a blur for the naked eye, the accuracy of the jutsu also increases greatly.
{Style name here} Rank E • Rank D • Rank C • Rank B • Rank A
Rank S [LOCKED]
{Style name here} •Rank E • Rank D • Rank C • Rank B • Rank A
Rank S [LOCKED]
▬▬┤|B u k i j u t s u
{Style name here} •Rank E • Rank D • Rank C • Rank B • Rank A
Rank S [LOCKED] {Style name here} • Rank E • Rank D • Rank C • Rank B • Rank A
Rank S [LOCKED]
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|н ι ѕ т σ r у|├▬ Koga was a young man living in the swamps of what is now called Otogakure no Sato. When Suoh Kuroh, the first Otokage came to the lands, he found this small boy living in the trees of the forest, Suoh found interest in his bloodline and took him away, locking him deep within the confines of the Sound HQ. His mouths on his hands were put in muzzles and the mouth along his chest was sealed shut. But Koga showed potential greater than any other, Suoh saw himself in the boy. Suoh named him Okabe Jaeger, the Patient Hunter. Okabe showed great pleasure in the name and kept it fro himself. He was there as Suoh built the village and watched it rise, he was 14 at the time. Okay was released from his confines and was brought to be Suoh's heir, the true heir to the Otokage thrown, spoken in secret, Okabe was told all of this, all of Suoh's plans, and all of his beliefs.
Okabe could not believe how much of an idiot he was... After Suoh left, Okabe went into the Academy to train himself. Suoh disappeared for a long time, he did not come back for Okabes graduation and something horrible happened. Apollo, Suoh's partner left him, and disappeared; then the UHV came. The president took the seat as Otokage and Okabe grew furious, inheritin his fathers will to end the UHV, under their own cover. But there was still one thing that had to be done.
Finally, after long last, Suoh returned. In the end, the mortality that Suoh was looking or was his downfall. Suoh wanted to create a dream world to escape this reality, when he found out that wouldn't work, he fought to seal away all the evil in the world, no one could have that type of power, no one should. Suoh promised Okabe power as well, but not the same type, he told him things that others would never understand, and he was given three letters that he would have to deliver. On each there was a seal that would detonate if anyone else, other than the people they were for opened it. They were for; Sanshi Satetsu, Sypher Tsukai, and Miyamoto Mamoru. There was one more though, one for someone Okabe knew; The President. Suoh told him he would know when to give him the letter. Delivering those letters would be the last wish Suoh had for Okabe. Okabe was different, Okabe thought of Suoh's beliefs and decided he would be more than just his heir, he would also be his answer.
Suoh trusted the boy to much, and Okabe, being the Patient Hunter he was, killed him in cold blood. Little is known how he did it, but the last words he spoke to his mentor were "Your weakness Suoh, your greatest weakness was your dream in the end... it blinded you from the reality." He then locked away all of Suoh's puppets except for Thantas, his greatest creation, his first. It was part of one of the letters. Okabe left sound with the four letters and Thantas in his coffin on his back.
"Ideals, religion, freedom, truth, grudges, love, or just because. Your reasons don't matter at all. Any trivial thing that motivates people to action, will eventually breed war."
After Souh's he became confined to his own mind, with the fresh image of his death in his own mind, he was left alone with the man he did not want to see anymore. Okabe got through his hunt without any problem, no one suspected Souh to be dead, and the President had taken refuge into the Sound Village. However this added a lot of extra problems, and solutions to Okabe's predicament. First and foremost, Okabe shared his mentor's views about the President, he needed to die. To many people had died for this man whom had not justification into the power he had. So he would die after the letter was given.
However, it also made it tough to do so, with the UHV now all around him, with all of the Advisors also stopping by for routine meetings; all of them looking for Souh, or someone who could help them find him. So Okabe went dormant again, he would stay quiet for as long as possible until it was time to strike, patience was a virtue, and Okabe had an endless amount of it. The president would die, and Okabe would take part in his death, maybe even be the hand to do it. However it was time to make a much more safer nest, and also deal with other minor missions in his part.
He had killed his mentor Souh, but there was a hidden reason for it. It would save him from who he was also; 'also' meant Akane, the insane consciousness... it was Okabe's mentor as well, its ever present in Okabe now, and so Okabe much like Suoh, gave the insanity a name; Sujibori, an outline of what is, commonly indicated by a glowing redness to his eye, only one. Okabe always tries to obey the law of Suoh though, Souh was a calm man... unlike Akane. Akane was the reason both of them had to die.
"Insanity has two halves, the one that is screaming and telling you the truth, and the one that is holding it's hand over the others mouth; laughing."
Okabe went quiet, he was quickly recognized as a skilled ninja in Sound, so the President began to put on special missions. His first of which being going to Kirigakure for some special ops and picking up some other men from the UHV. They were grunts, however getting a close look at them was to real to bare, they were all normal people, none of them seemed to be ninja, and yet these men were being slaughtered. It was unjust, and Okabe's goal became evermore tougher, he wanted to see the President die for what he did to these men, what he had fated them too, an unjust end and for what? A petty score to settle with a few people he had never met. Okabe became enraged, he blew the mission out of proportion and made a small village look like Hiroshima, he left no building standing, and no enemy left standing, which brought the attention of the Mist Village.
Sypher was among the Oinin group to search the area and although Okabe never saw him or his face, he could feel the pressure that his chakra alone was holding, it was so familiar, it was so much like Souh's... The pressure as it was exerted, drew him down, and then Okabe realized something, he could still learn, he didn't have to be alone. Even as Sypher declared he'd kill him if he came to Kiri again, Okabe and Sujibori both, had an aligned goal. To be with Sypher. and to learn his way of doing things, he was the same like Souh, he was misunderstood, powerful, in control... Okabe needed to know, even if it did mean his life.
After the close call with the Mist, Okabe went into solitude, hiding around the border until the UHV would also think he was dead, along with the rest of the grunts. It would be better that way, with him out of the frame, like a director Okabe could finally call the shots over the person in his camera... the star being the President; Mr. Horace would die.
"A Misty perception in life, only found by a single light shining through it."
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|ρ є r ѕ σ η α ℓ • ∂ α т α|├▬ Full Name: Persephone Rayes Nickname: Penelope, Seph/Seth
Age: 24 Birthdate: June 2nd Gender: Genderfluid between the binary genders (m/f)
Height: 5'7 Weight: 135lbs // 61 kilo
Nindo: "Opportunities and tragedies are hand-in-hand; if you want to have the opportunity to be strong, you must wear your tragedies as armor." Personality: Many people may think she is confused or diagnosed with multiple personality disorder. These people base these ideas off the fact she is fluid with her identification. In reality, she is the contrary: she is a reliable and consistent person, a creature of habit. She rises early and sleeps early. She lacks an ill temper, and rarely gets angry beyond control. She is careful about holding her tongue to avoid problems with others. She tries to make well with everyone, though not out of good will as people may assume. She is motivated by personal goals and money; she doesn't do anything that puts either at risk.
Village: Kirigakure Rank: Genin First Class: Ninjutsu Second Class: Bloodline
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|c σ м в α т • ∂ α т α|├▬ Bloodline: Jiongu x
Chakra Pool: 395 Stamina Pool: 145 Chakra Element: Earth, Fire (second heart the comes w/ bloodline acceptance) Chakra Color: Orange Chakra Materialization: Her chakra naturally acts aggressively; it climbs up her body without hesitation or apology. It almost always starts as a small spiral near the left-side of her chest (heart) and then devours the rest of her skin.
Fears: • Sexual Assault • Being abused by someone trusted • Moths
Class Disciplines : • Elemental Specialist [You are only able to have one (1) chosen chakra element. Your elemental ninjutsu possess greater power, allowing them to overwhelm techniques of the same element and rank, and preventing them from succumbing to elemental weaknesses. You begin with two (2) additional ninjutsu slots, and earn an additional three (3) ninjutsu slots whenever you rank up.] • Blood Knight [Your bloodline techniques possess greater power, allowing them to overwhelm techniques of the same rank, and preventing them from succumbing to elemental weaknesses of techniques the same rank. ]
Reductions: • Bloodline techniques [1] post faster • Learns ninjutsu [1] post faster (bloodline) • Elemental Specialist ( +[2] Ninjutsu slots and don't succumb to elemental weakness)
Personal Attributes: • Earns 50% more Ryo [missions only] • Takes [1] less post to train anywhere in home village (Kiri)
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|c α r є є r • ∂ α т α|├▬ Ryo: 両{Money} 0 AC: 0
Missions Complete: D Rank :: 0 C Rank :: 0 B Rank :: 0 A Rank :: 0 S Rank :: 0
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|ω є α ρ σ η • ∂ α т α|├▬ Weapon Type: Knife Weapon Range: Five inches Weapon Weight: 3lbs // 1.3 kilograms Weapon Location: Left thigh pouch
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|ι η ν є η т σ r у|├▬ • Kunai x 10 • Senbon x 5
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|т є c н η ι q υ є ѕ|├▬ ▬▬┤|N i n j u t s u Maruton: • Henge no Jutsu [ Transformation Technique ] • Kawarimi no Jutsu [ Substitution Technique ] • Bushin no Jutsu [ Clone Technique ] • Suimen Hokou no Waza [ Act of Water Surface Walking ] • Kinobori no Waza [ Act of Tree Climbing ] • Kai [ Release ]
Doton •
Katon •
Bloodline • ▬▬┤|G e n j u t s u • ▬▬┤|B u k i j u t s u {Style name here} • {Stage progression / techniques learned}
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|н ι ѕ т σ r у|├▬ Persephone grew up with both her parents, and they were very supportive of her ambitions about ninjutsu. Only her mother was a shinobi, but she was retired after becoming deaf in one ear. Her mom still taught her coordination with her threads and her father, knowledgeable in all kinds of history and their bloodline, taught her about the hearts and famous ninja that shared their blood. Persephone loved the stories and soon desired to become one of the famous ninja that were always in stories. She wanted to be the most important Jiongu to ever step foot in the Nations of the Shinobi.
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|ρ є r ѕ σ η α ℓ • ∂ α т α|├▬ Full Name: Unknown for she doesn't speak Nickname: Kaiju
Age: Assumed to be Seventeen Birthdate: Doesn't know Gender: Female
Height: 5'4" Weight: 118 lbs
Nindo: "Sometimes the world doesn't need another hero, sometimes what it needs is a monster."
Personality: Kaiju, as her enemy has named her, is a very complicated individual as she's currently a shadow of her former self. Her personality has shifted drastically as of recently in order to deal with her PTSD. She has become an extremely strong willed individual as she'll see anything through to the end. Once she sets her mind to something there's not a single person that can deter her from her objective. Her sheer determination will push her through the mission no matter how stacked the odds are against her. No matter how strong the enemy is... No matter how numerous the enemy is... No matter how hurt she is... She will always prevail no matter the cost. She has recently become a lone wolf as well as feeling that if she were to require anyone's help she would be a burden to her comrades. That is if she had enough trust to call a comrade within the first place. As for her kindness that was previously her best trait its not known if it still exists. However what could be said about the past is that she had the purest of hearts. Going out of her way to help anyone that was in need regardless of whether or not she knew them. She didn't like to see others in pain and would try and help them however possible. Going to the point of staying with a child on his death bed until he actually passed. No matter how small it seemed to the individual or how large she would always try to help. With her strong will comes the other side of the coin as well... her depression. Her sorrow that which consumes her to the point where she just despises herself. For she feels responsible for what happened to the people whom she cared for. If someone could get close enough to her to get her to talk. They could have a chance at changing her back into the sweet, kind, loving, and dutiful person who she once was in the land of rivers. As for her choice with the name Kaiju it was given to her by the enemy upon defeating them. For when she fought against them she appeared to be a true demon. Being far more vicious and merciless than even the jashinists pursuing her.
Village: Sunagakure Rank: Genin First Class: Bloodline Second Class: Taijutsu
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|c σ м в α т • ∂ α т α|├▬ Bloodline:Satetsu
Chakra Pool: 180 Stamina Pool: 320 Chakra Element: Raiton and Doton Chakra Color: Purple with a gold outline Chakra Materialization: Depends on her mood
Strengths: • Her strong will • Close range combat
Weaknesses: • Her madness • Long range combat
Fears: • Someone learning of her past • Having nightmares of her past
Class Disciplines : • Blood Knight: Your bloodline techniques possess greater power, allowing them to overwhelm techniques of the same rank, and preventing them from succumbing to elemental weaknesses of techniques the same rank
• Berserker: Your external training and devotion to taijutsu has allowed your attacks to have great strength, speed, and power behind them, making them overwhelm physical taijutsu techniques of the same rank or lower. Additionally, your hardened body allows you to defend against ninjutsu attacks 2 ranks lower than a physical taijutsu defensive technique, taking little to no damage from it, and defend against ninjutsu attacks 1 rank below a complex taijutsu defensive technique unharmed.
Reductions: • Learns bloodline techniques [1] post faster • Learns taijutsu techniques [1] post faster
Personal Attributes: • Soul of a Lion - Due to the immense training she's putting herself through she's been able to learn two additional taijutsu styles at the rank of genin.
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|c α r є є r • ∂ α т α|├▬ Ryo: 両 0 AC: 0
Missions Complete: D Rank :: 0 C Rank :: 0 B Rank :: 0 A Rank :: 0 S Rank :: 0
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|ω є α ρ σ η • ∂ α т α|├▬ Weapon Type: None Weapon Range: None Weapon Weight: None Weapon Location: None
Summoning Type: None Summon Sage: No Pacts: None
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|ι η ν є η т σ r у|├▬ • None • None
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|т є c н η ι q υ є ѕ|├▬ ▬▬┤|N i n j u t s u Maruton: {Start with the following six only} • Henge no Jutsu [ Transformation Technique ] • Kawarimi no Jutsu [ Substitution Technique ] • Bushin no Jutsu [ Clone Technique ] • Suimen Hokou no Waza [ Act of Water Surface Walking ] • Kinobori no Waza [ Act of Tree Climbing ] • Kai [ Release ]
Doton •
Raiton •
Satetsu •
▬▬┤|G e n j u t s u • {If none, remove section}
▬▬┤|T a i j u t s u {Style name here} • {Stage progression / techniques learned}
▬▬┤|B u k i j u t s u {Style name here} • {Stage progression / techniques learned}
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|н ι ѕ т σ r у|├▬ Prologue: A Royal's life Currently unknown however her past shall be revealed through time.
Chapter One: The Beginning of the Madness After a series of unfortunate events she has eventually made her way to the wind country in an attempt to flee her pursuers. They weren't normal shinobi by any means there were more along the lines of mercenaries. It's not known why they were chasing her and its not known how far they have been chasing her for either. All that is known is that they wish to slaughter her.
This seems like it will be an interesting character. Approved only if that PA is by combining both PA's together into one to gain the 2 Taijutsu slots. Also only if this gains 2 taijutsu slots and not any extra further on. Fix to say gains 2 taijutsu slots opposed to (rank of genin)
So long as that was what you were going for, you're all set. Welcome back =p
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Posted: Wed Nov 12, 2014 11:53 pm
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▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|ρ є r ѕ σ η α ℓ • ∂ α т α|├▬ Full Name: Persephone Rayes Nickname: Penelope, Seph/Seth
Age: 24 Birthdate: June 2nd Gender: Genderfluid between the binary genders (m/f)
Height: 5'7 Weight: 135lbs // 61 kilo
Nindo: "Opportunities and tragedies are hand-in-hand; if you want to have the opportunity to be strong, you must wear your tragedies as armor." Personality: Many people may think she is confused or diagnosed with multiple personality disorder. These people base these ideas off the fact she is fluid with her identification. In reality, she is the contrary: she is a reliable and consistent person, a creature of habit. She rises early and sleeps early. She lacks an ill temper, and rarely gets angry beyond control. She is careful about holding her tongue to avoid problems with others. She tries to make well with everyone, though not out of good will as people may assume. She is motivated by personal goals and money; she doesn't do anything that puts either at risk.
Village: Kirigakure Rank: Genin First Class: Ninjutsu Second Class: Bloodline
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|c σ м в α т • ∂ α т α|├▬ Bloodline: Jiongu x
Chakra Pool: 395 Stamina Pool: 145 Chakra Element: Earth, Fire (second heart the comes w/ bloodline acceptance) Chakra Color: Orange Chakra Materialization: Her chakra naturally acts aggressively; it climbs up her body without hesitation or apology. It almost always starts as a small spiral near the left-side of her chest (heart) and then devours the rest of her skin.
Fears: • Sexual Assault • Being abused by someone trusted • Moths
Class Disciplines : • Elemental Specialist [You are only able to have one (1) chosen chakra element. Your elemental ninjutsu possess greater power, allowing them to overwhelm techniques of the same element and rank, and preventing them from succumbing to elemental weaknesses. You begin with two (2) additional ninjutsu slots, and earn an additional three (3) ninjutsu slots whenever you rank up.] • Blood Knight [Your bloodline techniques possess greater power, allowing them to overwhelm techniques of the same rank, and preventing them from succumbing to elemental weaknesses of techniques the same rank. ]
Reductions: • Bloodline techniques [1] post faster • Learns ninjutsu [1] post faster (bloodline) • Elemental Specialist ( +[2] Ninjutsu slots and don't succumb to elemental weakness)
Personal Attributes: • Earns 50% more Ryo [missions only] • Takes [1] less post to train anywhere in home village (Kiri)
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|c α r є є r • ∂ α т α|├▬ Ryo: 両{Money} 0 AC: 0
Missions Complete: D Rank :: 0 C Rank :: 0 B Rank :: 0 A Rank :: 0 S Rank :: 0
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|ω є α ρ σ η • ∂ α т α|├▬ Weapon Type: Knife Weapon Range: Five inches Weapon Weight: 3lbs // 1.3 kilograms Weapon Location: Left thigh pouch
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|ι η ν є η т σ r у|├▬ • Kunai x 10 • Senbon x 5
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|т є c н η ι q υ є ѕ|├▬ ▬▬┤|N i n j u t s u Maruton: • Henge no Jutsu [ Transformation Technique ] • Kawarimi no Jutsu [ Substitution Technique ] • Bushin no Jutsu [ Clone Technique ] • Suimen Hokou no Waza [ Act of Water Surface Walking ] • Kinobori no Waza [ Act of Tree Climbing ] • Kai [ Release ]
Doton •
Katon •
Bloodline • ▬▬┤|G e n j u t s u • ▬▬┤|B u k i j u t s u {Style name here} • {Stage progression / techniques learned}
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|н ι ѕ т σ r у|├▬ Persephone grew up with both her parents, and they were very supportive of her ambitions about ninjutsu. Only her mother was a shinobi, but she was retired after becoming deaf in one ear. Her mom still taught her coordination with her threads and her father, knowledgeable in all kinds of history and their bloodline, taught her about the hearts and famous ninja that shared their blood. Persephone loved the stories and soon desired to become one of the famous ninja that were always in stories. She wanted to be the most important Jiongu to ever step foot in the Nations of the Shinobi.
TERRIBLY SORRY for the delay. For some reason I was under the impression you were taken care of. I take responsibility for that goof. Without further adieu APPROVED That second PA is a bit of a stretch but I'll allow it, especially since you were waiting on me.
Posted: Fri Nov 14, 2014 6:43 pm
I was told to re-post my profile by lanfaer because I've been inactive for a while before i started posting again. Can I post again as I am?
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|ρ є r ѕ σ η α ℓ • ∂ α т α|├▬ Full Name: Kurai Karasu. Nickname: Crow
Age: 15 Birthdate: augusta 15th Gender: Male
Height: 5'7 Weight: 130
Nindo: "Life's to short to be serious" Personality: Rarely serious. Kinda dull.
Village: Suna Rank: Chunin First Class: Ninjutsu Second Class: Bllodline
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|c σ м в α т • ∂ α т α|├▬ Bloodline: Bakuton • Explosive Release - Clay method
Chakra Pool: 415 Stamina Pool: 155 Chakra Element: Earth, Fire Chakra Color: Crimson Chakra Materialization: Swirly Aura
Class Disciplines : • Thoroughbred: Your maximum chakra pool and maximum stamina pool are both increased by {10} points, and you receive an additional {05} points to each pool whenever you rank up. Additionally, when you perform bloodline techniques above Rank D, you are refunded {05} chakra or {05} stamina, depending on which energy was used. ( If chakra was used, you recover chakra; if stamina was used, you recover stamina; if both were used, you recover both. ) • Elemental Dual Wielder: Your maximum chakra pool is increased by {10} points. The ninjutsu limit provided by this class is split amongst both of your chosen elements. ( At genin rank, rather than having a total of [ 06 ] ninjutsu slots for Katon or Suiton techniques, this class provides you with [ 06 ] slots for both Katon and Suiton techniques. Any ninjutsu slots received from other sources are filled at your discretion. ) Reductions: • Learn bloodline techniques one (2) post faster. • Learn ninjutsu (1) post faster. Personal Attributes: • Learn Bloodline techniques (1) post faster. • Learn ninjutsu (1) post faster •Extramly acurate. •Enhanced vision. (Able to see clearly for up to 18 miles {when on flat ground and not obstructed} and 60 miles from up high. {Either atop a high place or flying on a clay creature.} Facts proven from google with a little boost due to enhanced vision)
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|c α r є є r • ∂ α т α|├▬ Ryo:1600 両 AC:3000 Missions Complete: D Rank :: 0 C Rank :: 0 B Rank :: 0 A Rank :: 0 S Rank :: 0
Limitations: {How many of each technique you can learn. Refer to class info} • Ninjutsu : : 00 / 10 (For each Elemental jutsu) • Genjutsu : : 00 / 03 • Taijutsu Styles: : 00 / 01 • Bukijutsu Styles: : 00 / 01 • Bloodline Jutsu: : 03/13
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|ω є α ρ σ η • ∂ α т α|├▬ Weapon Type: (Not sure. It's a set) Weapon Range:4ft for the long ones. 1 ft for the kunai Weapon Weight:5lbs long 1lbs kunai Weapon Location: The blade and bar are held across his lower back. He has one kunai on each hip on the back. •
Summoning Type: Summon Sage: Pacts:
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|ι η ν є η т σ r у|├▬ • Medium size bow • 250x Assorted Arrows in his in Suna for summoning.. (As in regular, bomb.) • 50x assorted arrows in a quiver he keeps with him.. (25x regular, 25x pre-made bomb) • 2x bags of explosive clay on him. • 10x bags of explosive clay he can summon. • His weapon set. (Wakizashi, a bar-type weapon,and two larger kunai's) • trip wire 10ft •30 bombtags ▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|т є c н η ι q υ є ѕ|├▬ ▬▬┤|N i n j u t s u Maruton: • Henge no Jutsu [ Transformation Technique ] • Kawarimi no Jutsu [ Substitution Technique ] • Genso Bushin no Jutsu [ Illusion Clone Technique ] • Suimen Hokou no Waza [ Act of Water Surface Walking ] • Kinobori no Waza [ Act of Tree Climbing ] • Kai [ Release ] • A summoning jutsu for his bow and assorted arrows. {Your first element's name} • Doton •Daisan no Me [ The Third Eye ] •Gou no Doro [ Mud Moat ] •Tsuchi Gunjikoudou no Jutsu [ Earth Military Movement Technique ] •Shinjuu Zanshu no Jutsu [ Double Suicide Decapitation Technique ] •Doton Shuriken no Jutsu [ Stone Shuriken Skill ] (all learned by the time skip. •Doton Bunshin no Jutsu [ Earth Clone Skill ] • • {Your second element's name} • Katon • • • • • • • • {Other jutsu type's name} Bloodline • Bakuton • Explosive Release - Clay style • Bakuton: Kure-Hoshuu Kuchi [ Explosive Release: Clay Mending Mouths ] * •Bakuton: Baku Tama [ Explosive Release: Explosive Bullets ] * •Bakuton: C1 [ Explosive Release: C1 ] * •Nendo Bunshin no Jutsu [ Clay Clone Technique ] * •Bakuton: Jibaku Bunshin [ Explosive Release: Suicide Bombing Clone ] * •Bakuton: Kibaku Mappa [ Explosive Release: Exploding Minion ] * •Bakuton: Tekidan Sanjaku [ Explosive Release: Grenade Belt ] * •Bakuton: C2 [ Explosive Release: C2 ] * • • • • ▬▬┤|G e n j u t s u • {If none, remove section} ▬▬┤|T a i j u t s u Kiss of Flesh and Steel • Shikyuu Koushin [ Pressing Lips ] •Iori Seppun [ Retreating Kiss ] •Seppun no Hoppeta [ Kiss on the Cheek ] •Kowakuteki Nameru [ Alluring Lick ] • • • • • • • ▬▬┤|B u k i j u t s u Kyoukan Ya •Simple Shot •Quick Draw! •Arc Bolt •Rapid Fire •Sidewinder •Heaven's Spear •Trip Wire •Rocket Bolt •Cluster Training •Bomb Arrow • •Pincer Arrows •Restraint Shot • • •
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|н ι ѕ т σ r у|├▬ Kurai was a lonely child, growing up on the streets with no family to take him in. He didn't have any friends to play with so he just trained his skills as a ninja. He was able to join the ninja academy and is now ready to become a genin. One year has passed and Kurai has trained hard and is now able to become a Chunin. He has made it his dream to become a great Suna ninja and serve his village to he best of his abilities.
Nindo: "A small body of determined spirits fired by an unquenchable faith in their mission can alter the course of history." Personality: Just like any other Hatake she is extremely calm and decisive. If in the right conditions she can be rather lighthearted however, these moments only happen once in a blue moon. When it comes to friends and family she is extremely dedicated to them and loyal, willing to do anything for them. When it comes to her Nindo she believes it to be true in every way and will likely become only more dedicated to a fight if someone tells her differently in a battle.
Village: Sunagakure Rank: Genin First Class: Puppeteer Second Class: Bukijutsu
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|c σ м в α т • ∂ α т α|├▬ Bloodline: Hatake [x]
Chakra Pool: 350 Stamina Pool: 150 Chakra Element: Raiton Chakra Color: White Chakra Materialization: It's a white flash that happens continuously.
Strengths: • Long distance combat • Being able to transition from long distance to close distance combat quickly and effectively Weaknesses: • Not a lot of elemental jutsu variety • Lack of physical strength Fears: • Losing Ayame • Being left alone without anyone to watch out after her
Class Disciplines : • Marionette: The user is able to take their puppets, and enable them to be like a "real boy." With a unique mindset, and a great deal of skill, the user is able to take their puppets and utilize physical and complex taijutsu and bukijutsu techniques that they have learned. The techniques cost the user, in chakra, the same rank as the technique would cost stamina. If it is a complex technique, then it takes the cost of the entire regular cost (stamina +chakra) and costs the user that much in chakra to perform. Gennin are only able to perform D rank and lower, Chuunin can perform C rank and lower, Jounin can perform B rank and lower, Konin can perform A rank and lower, and Sannin can perform S rank and lower. • Mystic Hero:The user is much like a hybrid warrior, focusing on mixing ninjutsu into their personal arsenal. Through their great devotion to this path the user can cast ninjutsu without hand seals while wielding a weapon, D at gennin, C at chunnin, B at Jounin, A at Konin, and S at Sannin. These techniques maintain the same description and criteria to use, as well as require the same amount of time to mold the chakra through the weapon as would be needed to perform hand seals, meaning the techniques are not instantaneously cast. The user’s spirit is so strong, that they can utilize their physical bukijutsu techniques to negate ninjutsu techniques of the same rank or below. Reductions: • Learn Bukijutsu techniques one [1] post faster Bukijutsu Class • Learn Raiton techniques one [1] post faster Hatake clan Personal Attributes: • Advanced Puppetry: Hoshi has the ability to control puppets easier than most people do. ○ Genin: 2 fingers for movement ▬ 3 fingers for action ○ Chuunin: 1 finger for movement ▬ 1 finger for action ○ Jounin: 1 finger for movement and action. ○ Konin: Uses the same amount as Jounin. • Hoshi gains an extra 10 ninjutsu. ▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|c α r є є r • ∂ α т α|├▬ Ryo: 両 0 AC: 0
Missions Complete: D Rank :: 0 C Rank :: 0 B Rank :: 0 A Rank :: 0 S Rank :: 0
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|ω є α ρ σ η • ∂ α т α|├▬ Weapon Type: Steel fan Weapon Range: 32 inches Weapon Weight: 1 pound Weapon Location: In a pouch on the left side of body hanging by her waist, very easy to get.
Summoning Type: Summon Sage: Pacts:
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|ι η ν є η т σ r у|├▬ • 5x Shuriken • 10x Kunai
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|т є c н η ι q υ є ѕ|├▬ ▬▬┤|N i n j u t s u Maruton: {Start with the following six only} • Henge no Jutsu [ Transformation Technique ] • Kawarimi no Jutsu [ Substitution Technique ] • Bushin no Jutsu [ Clone Technique ] • Suimen Hokou no Waza [ Act of Water Surface Walking ] • Kinobori no Waza [ Act of Tree Climbing ] • Kai [ Release ]
Hatake •
Raiton •
Katon •
Kugutsu • ▬▬┤|G e n j u t s u • ▬▬┤|T a i j u t s u {Style name here} • {Stage progression / techniques learned} ▬▬┤|B u k i j u t s u Akira Style Stage one •
Shunkan no Hagane Stage one •
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|н ι ѕ т σ r у|├▬ Hoshi at a very young age was split from her mother and given to her father, his name being Howaido Hatake. The true reason being that her mother just didn't want her and the burden that came with having a second child. She had a sister by the name of Ayame however, she did not learn of her until later in life. Life with her father would be considered very different compared to a normal child's life. At a very young age she was taken on Shinobi missions with her father because, her father had no where else to keep her. Most time she would be left in a secret spot to her own devices and playing with dolls. There was never a thought in her father's mind that Hoshi should become a Shinobi as she was of a frail and weak body type as she grew. It was around the age of 15 when Hoshi started to ask questions regarding her origin. It came as a disappointment to find out that she was abandoned by her mother and she almost felt like a reject. However, she was excited to find out that she had a sister unfortunately her father didn't think it would be best for the two to meet quite yet. A few years passed when her father became extremely sick. Hoshi tried to find the best treatment that she could in the area that they were around but, unfortunately no doctor was skilled enough to save his life. With his last voice he told Hoshi to find her sister and to never leave her, to always love and cherish her sister. Hoshi made a promise to her father and she set out on a mission to find out exactly who her sister was only to find out that her sister had become the Kazekage for Sunagakure. It was time for her to meet her sister and to become a family once again.
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Posted: Fri Nov 14, 2014 8:25 pm
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▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|ρ є r ѕ σ η α ℓ • ∂ α т α|├▬ Full Name: Hoshi Hatake Nickname: None yet
Nindo: "A small body of determined spirits fired by an unquenchable faith in their mission can alter the course of history." Personality: Just like any other Hatake she is extremely calm and decisive. If in the right conditions she can be rather lighthearted however, these moments only happen once in a blue moon. When it comes to friends and family she is extremely dedicated to them and loyal, willing to do anything for them. When it comes to her Nindo she believes it to be true in every way and will likely become only more dedicated to a fight if someone tells her differently in a battle.
Village: Sunagakure Rank: Genin First Class: Puppeteer Second Class: Bukijutsu
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|c σ м в α т • ∂ α т α|├▬ Bloodline: Hatake [x]
Chakra Pool: 350 Stamina Pool: 150 Chakra Element: Raiton Chakra Color: White Chakra Materialization: It's a white flash that happens continuously.
Strengths: • Long distance combat • Being able to transition from long distance to close distance combat quickly and effectively Weaknesses: • Not a lot of elemental jutsu variety • Lack of physical strength Fears: • Losing Ayame • Being left alone without anyone to watch out after her
Class Disciplines : • Marionette: The user is able to take their puppets, and enable them to be like a "real boy." With a unique mindset, and a great deal of skill, the user is able to take their puppets and utilize physical and complex taijutsu and bukijutsu techniques that they have learned. The techniques cost the user, in chakra, the same rank as the technique would cost stamina. If it is a complex technique, then it takes the cost of the entire regular cost (stamina +chakra) and costs the user that much in chakra to perform. Gennin are only able to perform D rank and lower, Chuunin can perform C rank and lower, Jounin can perform B rank and lower, Konin can perform A rank and lower, and Sannin can perform S rank and lower. • Mystic Hero:The user is much like a hybrid warrior, focusing on mixing ninjutsu into their personal arsenal. Through their great devotion to this path the user can cast ninjutsu without hand seals while wielding a weapon, D at gennin, C at chunnin, B at Jounin, A at Konin, and S at Sannin. These techniques maintain the same description and criteria to use, as well as require the same amount of time to mold the chakra through the weapon as would be needed to perform hand seals, meaning the techniques are not instantaneously cast. The user’s spirit is so strong, that they can utilize their physical bukijutsu techniques to negate ninjutsu techniques of the same rank or below. Reductions: • Learn Bukijutsu techniques one [1] post faster Bukijutsu Class • Learn Raiton techniques one [1] post faster Hatake clan Personal Attributes: • Advanced Puppetry: Hoshi has the ability to control puppets easier than most people do. ○ Genin: 2 fingers for movement ▬ 3 fingers for action ○ Chuunin: 1 finger for movement ▬ 1 finger for action ○ Jounin: 1 finger for movement and action. ○ Konin: Uses the same amount as Jounin. • Hoshi gains an extra 10 ninjutsu. ▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|c α r є є r • ∂ α т α|├▬ Ryo: 両 0 AC: 0
Missions Complete: D Rank :: 0 C Rank :: 0 B Rank :: 0 A Rank :: 0 S Rank :: 0
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|ω є α ρ σ η • ∂ α т α|├▬ Weapon Type: Steel fan Weapon Range: 32 inches Weapon Weight: 1 pound Weapon Location: In a pouch on the left side of body hanging by her waist, very easy to get.
Summoning Type: Summon Sage: Pacts:
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|ι η ν є η т σ r у|├▬ • 5x Shuriken • 10x Kunai
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|т є c н η ι q υ є ѕ|├▬ ▬▬┤|N i n j u t s u Maruton: {Start with the following six only} • Henge no Jutsu [ Transformation Technique ] • Kawarimi no Jutsu [ Substitution Technique ] • Bushin no Jutsu [ Clone Technique ] • Suimen Hokou no Waza [ Act of Water Surface Walking ] • Kinobori no Waza [ Act of Tree Climbing ] • Kai [ Release ]
Hatake •
Raiton •
Katon •
Kugutsu • ▬▬┤|G e n j u t s u • ▬▬┤|T a i j u t s u {Style name here} • {Stage progression / techniques learned} ▬▬┤|B u k i j u t s u Akira Style Stage one •
Shunkan no Hagane Stage one •
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|н ι ѕ т σ r у|├▬ Hoshi at a very young age was split from her mother and given to her father, his name being Howaido Hatake. The true reason being that her mother just didn't want her and the burden that came with having a second child. She had a sister by the name of Ayame however, she did not learn of her until later in life. Life with her father would be considered very different compared to a normal child's life. At a very young age she was taken on Shinobi missions with her father because, her father had no where else to keep her. Most time she would be left in a secret spot to her own devices and playing with dolls. There was never a thought in her father's mind that Hoshi should become a Shinobi as she was of a frail and weak body type as she grew. It was around the age of 15 when Hoshi started to ask questions regarding her origin. It came as a disappointment to find out that she was abandoned by her mother and she almost felt like a reject. However, she was excited to find out that she had a sister unfortunately her father didn't think it would be best for the two to meet quite yet. A few years passed when her father became extremely sick. Hoshi tried to find the best treatment that she could in the area that they were around but, unfortunately no doctor was skilled enough to save his life. With his last voice he told Hoshi to find her sister and to never leave her, to always love and cherish her sister. Hoshi made a promise to her father and she set out on a mission to find out exactly who her sister was only to find out that her sister had become the Kazekage for Sunagakure. It was time for her to meet her sister and to become a family once again.
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Approved! Show me some electrifying puppet techniques!
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|ρ є r ѕ σ η α ℓ • ∂ α т α|├▬ Full Name: Masahiro Hama Hatake Nickname: -None Developed-
Age: 28 Birthdate: 3/27 Gender: Male
Height: 6' Weight: 200lbs
Nindo: "The miracle is in the execution" Personality: Often seen as silent, somber, or pensive. His Way between battle and civil life is vastly different. In battle he is the strategist, the man who thinks first and rushes in later, though he gives little time for philosophy to his opponents. In the ways of civility he is one to strategize nonetheless, yet philosophy comes to him first, and battle or heated nature comes secondary.
Village:Konohagakure (Leaf) Sunagakure [ Pending Her Lady's Approval ] Rank: Jounin First Class: Mystic Hero Bukijutsu Second Class: Thoroughbred Bloodline
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|c σ м в α т • ∂ α т α|├▬ Bloodline: Hatake
Chakra Pool: 780/260 Stamina Pool: 460 Chakra Element: Lightning, Earth Chakra Color: White Chakra Materialization: Sparks and Lines of silver-white lightning around my frame.
Strengths: • Close Combat • Teamwork Weaknesses: • Elemental Weakness, Fuuton • Quick to make Enemies Fears: • Being Eaten Alive By Locusts • Betraying A Loved One
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|ι η ν є η т σ r у|├▬ • Library Expansion Encyclopedia X • Jounin Scroll X • Konohagakure Flak Jacket • 5 Senbon • 5 Kunai • 5 Shuriken • 5 Fūma Shuriken
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|т є c н η ι q υ є ѕ|├▬ ▬▬┤|N i n j u t s u Maruton:
• Henge no Jutsu [ Transformation Technique ] • Kawarimi no Jutsu [ Substitution Technique ] • Genso Bushin no Jutsu [ Illusion Clone Technique ] • Suimen Hokou no Waza [ Act of Water Surface Walking ] • Kinobori no Waza [ Act of Tree Climbing ] • Kai [ Release ] • Jinteki no Mayu [ Human Cocoon Technique ] Rank E♦ • Rasengan [ Spiral Sphere ] ♦ Rank: A
Fuuinjutsu
•Kemono Fuuin no Jutsu [ Beast Sealing Technique ] ♦ Rank: A •Iruka's Barrier Technique ♦ Rank: S
Raiton
• Teikou no Kuntou [ Electrical Resistance Training ] Rank: E • Seidenki Ito no Jutsu [ Static Strings Technique ] Rank: E • Raikou Henge no Jutsu [ Lightning Transformation Technique ] Rank: D • Raikou Hitofuki no Jutsu [ Lightning Blast Technique ] Rank: C • Dendou Hebi no Jutsu [ Electric Snake Technique ] Rank: B • Chidori Eisou [ Thousand Birds Sharp Spear ] Rank: A • Raiton no Yoroi [ Lightning Armor ] ♦ Rank: S
Doton
• Tsuchi Tou Tou [ Swift Earth ] Rank: E • Daisan no Me [ The Third Eye ] Rank: E • Shinjuu Zanshu no Jutsu [ Double Suicide Decapitation Technique ] Rank: D • Shindoryuudan no Jutsu [ Earth Dragon God Blast ] ♦ Rank: A • Iwa no Doomu [ Earth Dome ] ♦ Rank: A
Hatake Bloodline
• Raiton: Shiroi Yaiba (Lightning Release: White Blade) Rank - D •Raiton: Shiroi Yari (Lightning Release: White Spear) Rank - D •Raiton: Tanto Yaiba (Lightning Release: Tanto Blade) Rank - C •Raiton: Hatake (Lightning Release: Scarecrow) Rank - B •Chidori Sai (One Thousand Birds Cut) Rank - B •Shiroi Chidori (One Thousand White Birds) Rank - A • Chidori Tatsumaki (One Thousand Birds Tornado) ♦ Rank - A
•Hitoshirenu Shikaku no Jutsu [ Hidden Assassin Technique ] ♦ Rank: C — Sound •Anoyo Kiretsu no Jutsu [ World of the Dead Fissure Technique ] ♦ Rank: B - Visual
▬▬┤|T a i j u t s u Mirror Image
___S t a g e O n e [1] Side Image Complex :: Rank E
___S t a g e T w o [2] Delayed Punch Complex :: Rank D
___S t a g e T h r e e [3] Triple Kick Complex :: Rank C Counter Clone Complex :: Rank C Falling Punch Complex :: Rank C
___S t a g e F o u r [4] Rising Barrage Complex :: Rank B Knee Combination Complex :: Rank B After-Wall Complex :: Rank B Shadow’s Dash Complex :: Rank B False Cyclone Complex :: Rank B
___S t a g e F i v e [5] Cyclone Breach Simple :: Rank A Unknown Attacker Complex :: Rank A
Iwagakure no Taijutsu
___S t a g e O n e [1] Tsuruhashihijishou [ Pickaxe Elbow ] ♦ Simple :: Rank E
___S t a g e T w o [2] Shoushitsu [ Rising Knee ] ♦ Simple :: Rank D
___S t a g e T h r e e [3] Axe Kick Simple :: Rank C
Kuma Kobushi [ Bear Fist ] Simple :: Rank C
Kannyuu Tanima [ Collapsing Valley ] Complex :: Rank C
Maruton: Gurabo [ Null Release: Stone Gloves ] Complex :: Rank C
Dōbutsu Kumite [ Animal Kata ]
▬▬┤|B u k i j u t s u Tetsu no Ryu
___S t a g e O n e [1] Iaidō Simple :: Rank E A Decade of Peace Simple :: Rank E Ryūtsuisen [ Dragon Hammer Strike ] Simple :: Rank E
___S t a g e T w o [2] Ryūtsuisen: Zan [ Dragon Hammer Strike: Tragedy ] Simple :: Rank D Turning Swallow Cut Complex :: Rank D Chakra Scabbard Complex :: Rank D (Varies) Twin Dragon Strike Simple :: Rank D Twin Dragon Strike: Lightning Simple :: Rank D
___S t a g e T h r e e [3] Form Manipulation Complex :: Rank C Pressure Wave Complex :: Rank C Drying Pole Complex :: Rank C
___S t a g e F o u r [4] Hachiware [ Helmet Breaker ] Complex :: Rank B Two As One Complex :: Rank B
___S t a g e F i v e [5] Many as One Complex :: Rank A Divine Scabbard Complex :: Rank A
___S t a g e S i x [6] Kamikaze [ Divine Wind ][X] Complex :: Rank S
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|н ι ѕ т σ r у|├▬ Masahiro was born among the Hatake during mass unrest, between not only the Hatake and the Konoha village, but between the members of his own clan. His father was not accepted by the head of the clan, while his mother refused to submit to what her elders said. Many threats of being put up for adoption or being murdered for being a b*****d child to the family followed him, something he took personally and quickly to heart. Believing it was his mother‘s poor education that made the family view him in such a light he took quickly to his own education, and majoring in philosophical arts when not in the base curriculum of the Shinobi way. Despite some of his family‘s wishes he did attend the academy within the Konohagakure, and at the age of graduation faced many further grueling tests as he was picked on by other students who were both afraid of his gifts, as well as jealous of his broad knowledge. The years before had lead him to becoming more of an introvert, focusing solely on his own growth, yet when he was paired up with a new team and a new instructor he found the true value of teamwork.
This change in his life would forever mold him into the kind of man he was to become. While still introverted he respected and knew full-well the value of the team, as well as the joys one could find in putting others before themselves. This lead his growth with his team to fever pitches, until the day they each went their separate ways, still to come in contact with each other on a regular basis. He had never, and would never, have forgotten the lessons he learned with them, and soon found himself wanting to pass this kind of growth onto the students in Konohagakure, even to the point of attempting to patch over his clan reputation with the Kage and the village as a whole. Some didn‘t fully accept his new ideals.
Two years into instruction he found himself quickly at ends with other members of the village, some who went as far as to call him out on daily occurrences, for little reason other than some minor slight. Which as it happens, oftentimes never even existed, but served their purpose of challenging a long time rival. Masahiro did his best to overcome this adversity, yet in due time he found himself being struck in a four-way pincer between old school rivalries, and soon was delivered, in short order, to the Konoha medical center. Spending several months in a critical state and overcoming a bout of temporary amnesia he awoke to the world, attempting to rediscover himself, his footsteps, and his loyalties to the Hokage. After several years back to the world he rediscovered who he was, he took the time and presence of self to venture out, striking 3 years of study outside of the village. To learn the ways and control of a true Shinobi, while centering his mind on the two things he had left, Konohagakure and the Tetsu no Ryu Sword Art. He only returned to the village as he found the proper accord for both.
Posted: Fri Nov 14, 2014 11:15 pm
Submitting for Re-approval as per Ayame Hatake following my exodus of six months, following a move cross country and a very harsh shift of life upon arrival.
