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xNew York Slavex

Greedy Prophet

PostPosted: Tue Oct 14, 2014 11:26 am
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Full Name: Lady Jane Brande
Nickname: LJ // Lady
Partner: Desert Panther // Mountain Lion // Hiro

Age: 13
Birthdate: June 16th
Gender: Female

Height: 5 ' 5 // 13.97
Weight: 125 // 555.6

Nindo: " You'll never take my will to live... "
Personality: This bright and fun girl loves to be social and meeting new people. She's known for the fact that she is witty and bright. Though she is fiercely loyal to her friends, she is someone that her trust is extremely hard to earn.

Village: Sunagakure -- Village Hidden in the Sand
Rank: Genin
First Class: Tamer -- Eternal Partners
Second Class: Sensor -- Zoom


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Full Name: Hiro // Mountain Lion
Nickname: " Poppa " // " Bubba " // " Bubs "

Age: 42
Birthdate: December 2nd
Gender: Male

Height // Length: 7 ' 9
Weight: 195

Chakra Pool: 325
Stamina Pool: 150
Chakra Element: Lightning // Wind
Chakra Color: Tan
Chakra Materialization: Like Heatwaves off of hot pavement

Strengths:
• " Stalking " // " Hunting "
• Working with Lady
Weaknesses:
• Elemental Opposites
• Large Snakes
Fears:
• Losing Lady
• Losing his tail

Limitations:
• Ninjutsu : : 00 / 06
• Genjutsu : : 00 / 04
• Taijutsu Styles: : 00 / 01
• Bukijutsu Styles: : 00 / 00

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Bloodline: Katei no Nekko

Chakra Pool: 325
Stamina Pool: 150
Chakra Element: Raiton (( Lightning )) // Fuuton (( Wind ))
Chakra Color: Ivory White
Chakra Materialization: Materializes on Ladys skin like tiger-like stripes

Strengths:
• Speed Based Taijutsu
• " Stalking " // Hunting
Weaknesses:
• Wind Based Ninjutsu
• Ocular Genjutsu
Fears:
• Losing her partner
• Overwhelming Water

Class Disciplines :
Eternal Partners: The user is able to nurture, grow, and bond with a single animal, almost becoming an animal themselves with traits, characteristics, and natural weaponry. This single animal will be exactly the same at the user's level in chakra and stamina pool, and able to manipulate any two elements, perform 3 activations a post (max of 2 offensive), and gaining +8 jutsu slots a rank.. For every rank the user increases, they can claim a trait associated with their chosen animal (communicate with species, natural weaponry, senses, ect) to be approved in the custom jutsu thread, and add it to their character.
Zoom: The user has a vast eye, able to quadruple the range of a given sensory technique, often allowing them to sense things even outside of the given area (across threads). This vast range, however, makes it difficult to detect fine details. The user is only able to know that chakra is there, or that chakra is being activated. Things like type of technique, rank, element, ect, are unknown to the user.
Reductions:
• Learn Ninjutsu 1 (( One )) post faster
• Learn Genjutsu 1 (( One )) Post faster
Personal Attributes:
• Learns Sensory Techniques One (( 1 )) post faster
• Learns Taijutsu One (( 1 )) post faster.

▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|c α r є є r • ∂ α т α|├▬
Ryo: 両{Money} 00
AC: {00

Missions Complete:
D Rank :: 0
C Rank :: 0
B Rank :: 0
A Rank :: 0
S Rank :: 0

Limitations:

• Ninjutsu : : 00 // 06
• Genjutsu : : 00 // 04
• Taijutsu Styles: : 00 // 01
• Bukijutsu Styles: : 00 // 00

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Weapon Type: Melee
Weapon Range: .5m - Close
Weapon Weight: 5 lbs
Weapon Location: Strapped her her hip
" Cats Claw "

Summoning Type:
Pacts:

▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|ι η ν є η т σ r у|├▬
• Senbon x15

▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|т є c н η ι q υ є ѕ|├▬
▬▬┤|N i n j u t s u

Maruton: {Start with the following six only}
• Henge no Jutsu [ Transformation Technique ]
• Kawarimi no Jutsu [ Substitution Technique ]
• Bushin no Jutsu [ Clone Technique ]
• Suimen Hokou no Waza [ Act of Water Surface Walking ]
• Kinobori no Waza [ Act of Tree Climbing ]
• Kai [ Release ]

Raiton no Jutsu! - Lightning Release Ninjutsu


Fuuton no Jutsu! - Wind Release Ninjutsu!


Katei No Neko! -- The Bond Between Human and Animal


▬▬┤|G e n j u t s u

Sand Genjutsu! -- The Power of the Mirage


▬▬┤|T a i j u t s u

Haraise -- The ravaging beast within


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" The Capture of the Beast "

Ladys life was hard as a child; abandoned as a young girl all she knew was the heat of the Red Sands. One day while being chased by curious shinobi of Suna, she fell from a massive rock formation. After being knocked out for a few hours, she found herself within a den. In attempt to leave this underground hollow she was confronted by a large cat... thwarted by the cat. she retreated back into the dark hole. The Panther stayed with her while nursing her wounds at the same. Lady knew that she wouldn't be hurt by this old and emaciated cat, they started to work together in each other survival. The bond grew until Lady started to feel weird when the panther was gone; she would also discover that just cause you have someone traveling at your side that survival isn't always guaranteed.

Lady one day was walking within the desert and was attacked by 2 bandits, she fought against them but to no avail. She decided then that she needed to be able to protect herself better. She decided that she was going to go to the Suna Academy and try to learn, though the Panther wasn't happy about going to civilization it knew that it was something that she needed.


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Submitted with Edits smile
 
PostPosted: Tue Oct 14, 2014 2:15 pm

xNew York Slavex
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Full Name: Lady Jane Brande
Nickname: LJ // Lady
Partner: Desert Panther // Mountain Lion // Hiro

Age: 13
Birthdate: June 16th
Gender: Female

Height: 5 ' 5 // 13.97
Weight: 125 // 555.6

Nindo: " You'll never take my will to live... "
Personality: This bright and fun girl loves to be social and meeting new people. She's known for the fact that she is witty and bright. Though she is fiercely loyal to her friends, she is someone that her trust is extremely hard to earn.

Village: Sunagakure -- Village Hidden in the Sand
Rank: Genin
First Class: Tamer -- Eternal Partners
Second Class: Sensor -- Zoom


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Full Name: Hiro // Mountain Lion
Nickname: " Poppa " // " Bubba " // " Bubs "

Age: 42
Birthdate: December 2nd
Gender: Male

Height // Length: 7 ' 9
Weight: 195

Chakra Pool: 325
Stamina Pool: 150
Chakra Element: Lightning // Wind
Chakra Color: Tan
Chakra Materialization: Like Heatwaves off of hot pavement

Strengths:
• " Stalking " // " Hunting "
• Working with Lady
Weaknesses:
• Elemental Opposites
• Large Snakes
Fears:
• Losing Lady
• Losing his tail

Limitations:
• Ninjutsu : : 00 / 06
• Genjutsu : : 00 / 04
• Taijutsu Styles: : 00 / 01
• Bukijutsu Styles: : 00 / 00

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Bloodline: Katei no Nekko

Chakra Pool: 325
Stamina Pool: 150
Chakra Element: Raiton (( Lightning )) // Fuuton (( Wind ))
Chakra Color: Ivory White
Chakra Materialization: Materializes on Ladys skin like tiger-like stripes

Strengths:
• Speed Based Taijutsu
• " Stalking " // Hunting
Weaknesses:
• Wind Based Ninjutsu
• Ocular Genjutsu
Fears:
• Losing her partner
• Overwhelming Water

Class Disciplines :
Eternal Partners: The user is able to nurture, grow, and bond with a single animal, almost becoming an animal themselves with traits, characteristics, and natural weaponry. This single animal will be exactly the same at the user's level in chakra and stamina pool, and able to manipulate any two elements, perform 3 activations a post (max of 2 offensive), and gaining +8 jutsu slots a rank.. For every rank the user increases, they can claim a trait associated with their chosen animal (communicate with species, natural weaponry, senses, ect) to be approved in the custom jutsu thread, and add it to their character.
Zoom: The user has a vast eye, able to quadruple the range of a given sensory technique, often allowing them to sense things even outside of the given area (across threads). This vast range, however, makes it difficult to detect fine details. The user is only able to know that chakra is there, or that chakra is being activated. Things like type of technique, rank, element, ect, are unknown to the user.
Reductions:
• Learn Ninjutsu 1 (( One )) post faster
• Learn Genjutsu 1 (( One )) Post faster
Personal Attributes:
• Learns Sensory Techniques One (( 1 )) post faster
• Learns Taijutsu One (( 1 )) post faster.

▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|c α r є є r • ∂ α т α|├▬
Ryo: 両{Money} 00
AC: {00

Missions Complete:
D Rank :: 0
C Rank :: 0
B Rank :: 0
A Rank :: 0
S Rank :: 0

Limitations:

• Ninjutsu : : 00 // 06
• Genjutsu : : 00 // 04
• Taijutsu Styles: : 00 // 01
• Bukijutsu Styles: : 00 // 00

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Weapon Type: Melee
Weapon Range: .5m - Close
Weapon Weight: 5 lbs
Weapon Location: Strapped her her hip
" Cats Claw "

Summoning Type:
Pacts:

▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|ι η ν є η т σ r у|├▬
• Senbon x15

▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|т є c н η ι q υ є ѕ|├▬
▬▬┤|N i n j u t s u

Maruton: {Start with the following six only}
• Henge no Jutsu [ Transformation Technique ]
• Kawarimi no Jutsu [ Substitution Technique ]
• Bushin no Jutsu [ Clone Technique ]
• Suimen Hokou no Waza [ Act of Water Surface Walking ]
• Kinobori no Waza [ Act of Tree Climbing ]
• Kai [ Release ]

Raiton no Jutsu! - Lightning Release Ninjutsu


Fuuton no Jutsu! - Wind Release Ninjutsu!


Katei No Neko! -- The Bond Between Human and Animal


▬▬┤|G e n j u t s u

Sand Genjutsu! -- The Power of the Mirage


▬▬┤|T a i j u t s u

Haraise -- The ravaging beast within


▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|н ι ѕ т σ r у|├▬


" The Capture of the Beast "

Ladys life was hard as a child; abandoned as a young girl all she knew was the heat of the Red Sands. One day while being chased by curious shinobi of Suna, she fell from a massive rock formation. After being knocked out for a few hours, she found herself within a den. In attempt to leave this underground hollow she was confronted by a large cat... thwarted by the cat. she retreated back into the dark hole. The Panther stayed with her while nursing her wounds at the same. Lady knew that she wouldn't be hurt by this old and emaciated cat, they started to work together in each other survival. The bond grew until Lady started to feel weird when the panther was gone; she would also discover that just cause you have someone traveling at your side that survival isn't always guaranteed.

Lady one day was walking within the desert and was attacked by 2 bandits, she fought against them but to no avail. She decided then that she needed to be able to protect herself better. She decided that she was going to go to the Suna Academy and try to learn, though the Panther wasn't happy about going to civilization it knew that it was something that she needed.


Quote:


Submitted with Edits smile



Ok all seems to be well but the pet information is a bit off, Sorry if we might have misled you. The eternal partner pet that is part of your RPC gets a designated amount of jutsu per rank up.
"gaining +8 jutsu slots a rank.. For every rank the user increases, they can claim a trait associated with their chosen animal (communicate with species, natural weaponry, senses, ect) to be approved in the custom jutsu thread, and add it to their character. " They also are not able to learn genjutsu. Tai and Buki are a bit tricky.

As for the elements they do not have to be the same as yourself, just pointing that out if you wanted other ones. (Optional)

The only other thing your mountain lion is 42... years? old? In cat years I guess that's okay. About 8 years old or so. But mountain lions usually live between 13-20 years of age. (Optional)

Adjust the jutsu for the pet to 8 Ninjutsu and you will be Approved. I will get back to you in regards of Tai and Buki for it  

Kazuraii

Romantic Raider


Codekasu

Fashionable Prophet

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PostPosted: Wed Oct 15, 2014 10:07 am
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Full Name: Yukari Konan Mitsiyo
Nickname: Yuka,Airi

Age: 16
Birthdate: March 21st
Gender: Female

Height: 5'5
Weight: 109 Lbs

Nindo: "Fight for a better future "
Personality: To put in words Yukari is a very kindhearted girl to the point where she would take on a loved ones suffering or strangers leaving her a bit gullible. She's a bookworm among all and is always seen reading a book whether it be on her free time or during a mission that's not to busy. Despite her peaceful demeanor Yukari is nervous around large groups, crowds and men that try to get to close leaving the teen to hide behind someone she's close too or flee the area. With her rough childhood she still finds time to keep a smile on her face.
Village: Kumo
Rank: Genin
First Class: Bukijutsu
Second Class: Sensor

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Bloodline: Konan (Origami no Dara) x

Chakra Pool: 350
Stamina Pool: 150
Chakra Element: Suiton
Chakra Color: Pinkish pearl
Chakra Materialization: Forms pink butterflies around her.

Strengths:
• All ranged Combat
• reflects
Weaknesses:
• Fire
• Fragile
Fears:
• Jail's, cages
• Large crowds

Class Disciplines :
• Mystic Hero:
The user is much like a hybrid warrior, focusing on mixing ninjutsu into their personal arsenal. Through their great devotion to this path the user can cast ninjutsu without hand seals while wielding a weapon, D at gennin, C at chunnin, B at Jounin, A at Konin, and S at Sannin. These techniques maintain the same description and criteria to use, as well as require the same amount of time to mold the chakra through the weapon as would be needed to perform hand seals, meaning the techniques are not instantaneously cast. The user’s spirit is so strong, that they can utilize their physical bukijutsu techniques to negate ninjutsu techniques of the same rank or below.



• Oracle: The character, through a special talent given at birth, can naturally sense chakra around them. The user can sense chakra around them up to a 5 yard radius without the use of a sensory technique. This radius is increased by 5 yards every time the user ranks up. Additionally, sensory techniques do not take up ninjutsu technique slots.
Reductions:
• Learn ninjutsu one [1] post faster.
• Learn genjutsu one [1] post faster
• Learn Taijutsu one (1) post faster.
Personal Attributes:
• Art Show : +1 custom bloodline technique
• Dream drop: 5% More Ryo and AC

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Ryo: 両 0
AC: 0

Missions Complete:
D Rank :: 0
C Rank :: 0
B Rank :: 0
A Rank :: 0
S Rank :: 0

Limitations:
• Ninjutsu : : 00 / 05
• Genjutsu : : 00 / 04
• Taijutsu Styles: : 00 / 00
• Bukijutsu Styles: : 00 / 02

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Weapon Type: Tanto
Weapon Range: 4 inchs
Weapon Weight: 5 lb
Weapon Location: Side waist

Weapon Type: paper
Weapon Range: 0
Weapon Weight: 1"lb
Weapon Location: Inside her jacket


▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|ι η ν є η т σ r у|├▬
• Basic Medical kit x 1
• Smoke bomb's x 4
• pokie
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|т є c н η ι q υ є ѕ|├▬
▬▬┤|N i n j u t s u

Maruton:
• Henge no Jutsu [ Transformation Technique ]
• Kawarimi no Jutsu [ Substitution Technique ]
• Bushin no Jutsu [ Clone Technique ]
• Suimen Hokou no Waza [ Act of Water Surface Walking ]
• Kinobori no Waza [ Act of Tree Climbing ]
• Kai [ Release ]

Suiton


Origami no Dara





▬▬┤|G e n j u t s u



▬▬┤|T a i j u t s u


• {Stage progression / techniques learned}

▬▬┤|B u k i j u t s u




▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|н ι ѕ т σ r у|├▬
Yukari was raised outside kiri with in a small village that had been filled with gambling and unfriendly like people. As a little girl her father Fujitara never payed much attention to her and was quick to sell any scrap of her belongings for money. Her mother Yuuki was somewhat the same but she would tell her all kinds of stories like of their first daughter they had left behind and promised it wouldn't happen to her. When Yukari turned eight things went down hill with the loss of her mother due to a illness her father couldn't come up with money to pay off his debt to a bandit lord outside the land of water so he sold Yukari to them which lead to more problems. She spent seven years serving under rouge's, bandits .On one fatal night herself and a group of other broke free of their cages and tried to escape only Yukari made it out but with the cost of losing her right arm. She fainted due to a large amount of blood loss and when she came too, the teen awakened five months later inside a hospital. The nurse that took care of her in formed Yukari that she was with in Kumogakure. safety but under watch. Yukari spent a year under watch as she attended the villages ninja academy after learning her older sibling lived here. Wanting to prove herself to this sibling Yukari passed and became a Genin.

 
PostPosted: Wed Oct 15, 2014 10:50 am

Codekasu
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Full Name: Yukari Konan Mitsiyo
Nickname: Yuka,Airi

Age: 16
Birthdate: March 21st
Gender: Female

Height: 5'5
Weight: 109 Lbs

Nindo: "Fight for a better future "
Personality: To put in words Yukari is a very kindhearted girl to the point where she would take on a loved ones suffering or strangers leaving her a bit gullible. She's a bookworm among all and is always seen reading a book whether it be on her free time or during a mission that's not to busy. Despite her peaceful demeanor Yukari is nervous around large groups, crowds and men that try to get to close leaving the teen to hide behind someone she's close too or flee the area. With her rough childhood she still finds time to keep a smile on her face.
Village: Kumo
Rank: Genin
First Class: Bukijutsu
Second Class: Sensor

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Bloodline: Konan (Origami no Dara) x

Chakra Pool: 350
Stamina Pool: 150
Chakra Element: Suiton
Chakra Color: Pinkish pearl
Chakra Materialization: Forms pink butterflies around her.

Strengths:
• All ranged Combat
• reflects
Weaknesses:
• Fire
• Fragile
Fears:
• Jail's, cages
• Large crowds

Class Disciplines :
• Mystic Hero:
The user is much like a hybrid warrior, focusing on mixing ninjutsu into their personal arsenal. Through their great devotion to this path the user can cast ninjutsu without hand seals while wielding a weapon, D at gennin, C at chunnin, B at Jounin, A at Konin, and S at Sannin. These techniques maintain the same description and criteria to use, as well as require the same amount of time to mold the chakra through the weapon as would be needed to perform hand seals, meaning the techniques are not instantaneously cast. The user’s spirit is so strong, that they can utilize their physical bukijutsu techniques to negate ninjutsu techniques of the same rank or below.



• Oracle: The character, through a special talent given at birth, can naturally sense chakra around them. The user can sense chakra around them up to a 5 yard radius without the use of a sensory technique. This radius is increased by 5 yards every time the user ranks up. Additionally, sensory techniques do not take up ninjutsu technique slots.
Reductions:
• Learn ninjutsu one [1] post faster.
• Learn genjutsu one [1] post faster
• Learn Taijutsu one (1) post faster.
Personal Attributes:
• Art Show : +1 custom bloodline technique
• Dream drop: 5% More Ryo and AC

▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|c α r є є r • ∂ α т α|├▬
Ryo: 両 0
AC: 0

Missions Complete:
D Rank :: 0
C Rank :: 0
B Rank :: 0
A Rank :: 0
S Rank :: 0

Limitations:
• Ninjutsu : : 00 / 05
• Genjutsu : : 00 / 04
• Taijutsu Styles: : 00 / 00
• Bukijutsu Styles: : 00 / 02

▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|ω є α ρ σ η • ∂ α т α|├▬
Weapon Type: Tanto
Weapon Range: 4 inchs
Weapon Weight: 5 lb
Weapon Location: Side waist

Weapon Type: paper
Weapon Range: 0
Weapon Weight: 1"lb
Weapon Location: Inside her jacket


▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|ι η ν є η т σ r у|├▬
• Basic Medical kit x 1
• Smoke bomb's x 4
• pokie
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|т є c н η ι q υ є ѕ|├▬
▬▬┤|N i n j u t s u

Maruton:
• Henge no Jutsu [ Transformation Technique ]
• Kawarimi no Jutsu [ Substitution Technique ]
• Bushin no Jutsu [ Clone Technique ]
• Suimen Hokou no Waza [ Act of Water Surface Walking ]
• Kinobori no Waza [ Act of Tree Climbing ]
• Kai [ Release ]

Suiton


Origami no Dara





▬▬┤|G e n j u t s u



▬▬┤|T a i j u t s u


• {Stage progression / techniques learned}

▬▬┤|B u k i j u t s u




▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|н ι ѕ т σ r у|├▬
Yukari was raised outside kiri with in a small village that had been filled with gambling and unfriendly like people. As a little girl her father Fujitara never payed much attention to her and was quick to sell any scrap of her belongings for money. Her mother Yuuki was somewhat the same but she would tell her all kinds of stories like of their first daughter they had left behind and promised it wouldn't happen to her. When Yukari turned eight things went down hill with the loss of her mother due to a illness her father couldn't come up with money to pay off his debt to a bandit lord outside the land of water so he sold Yukari to them which lead to more problems. She spent seven years serving under rouge's, bandits .On one fatal night herself and a group of other broke free of their cages and tried to escape only Yukari made it out but with the cost of losing her right arm. She fainted due to a large amount of blood loss and when she came too, the teen awakened five months later inside a hospital. The nurse that took care of her in formed Yukari that she was with in Kumogakure. safety but under watch. Yukari spent a year under watch as she attended the villages ninja academy after learning her older sibling lived here. Wanting to prove herself to this sibling Yukari passed and became a Genin.




(Needed)
The inventory you are allowed to have consists of natural ninja projectiles, Senbon, Kunai, Shurikens. Up to 15. The Pocky? Would be allowed if its that Japanese cracker sticks. But the rest would not be allowed.

The weapon of paper you can also add to your Inventory.

The PA

• Dream drop: 5% More Ryo and AC
AC is not allowed to be increased via PA's but ryo is. Up to a 1.5x rate. (50% increase) Please edit or recreate a new PA.

(Optional)
Nothing prevents you from choosing a second element, so there is no need to gimp yourself unless wanted. Just a recommendation, I would add Fuuton (wind) to aid the usage of paper.

Until the things listed above are adjusted I cannot approve at this time.  

Kazuraii

Romantic Raider


Codekasu

Fashionable Prophet

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PostPosted: Thu Oct 16, 2014 8:03 am
User Image
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Full Name: Yukari Konan Mitsiyo
Nickname: Yuka,Airi

Age: 16
Birthdate: March 21st
Gender: Female

Height: 5'5
Weight: 109 Lbs

Nindo: "Fight for a better future "
Personality: To put in words Yukari is a very kindhearted girl to the point where she would take on a loved ones suffering or strangers leaving her a bit gullible. She's a bookworm among all and is always seen reading a book whether it be on her free time or during a mission that's not to busy. Despite her peaceful demeanor Yukari is nervous around large groups, crowds and men that try to get to close leaving the teen to hide behind someone she's close too or flee the area. With her rough childhood she still finds time to keep a smile on her face.
Village: Kumo
Rank: Genin
First Class: Bukijutsu
Second Class: Sensor

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Bloodline: Konan (Origami no Dara) x

Chakra Pool: 350
Stamina Pool: 150
Chakra Element: Suiton, Fuuton
Chakra Color: Pinkish pearl
Chakra Materialization: Forms pink butterflies around her.

Strengths:
• All ranged Combat
• reflects
Weaknesses:
• Fire
• Fragile
Fears:
• Jail's, cages
• Large crowds

Class Disciplines :
• Mystic Hero:
The user is much like a hybrid warrior, focusing on mixing ninjutsu into their personal arsenal. Through their great devotion to this path the user can cast ninjutsu without hand seals while wielding a weapon, D at gennin, C at chunnin, B at Jounin, A at Konin, and S at Sannin.


• Oracle: The character, through a special talent given at birth, can naturally sense chakra around them. The user can sense chakra around them up to a 5 yard radius without the use of a sensory technique. This radius is increased by 5 yards every time the user ranks up. Additionally, sensory techniques do not take up ninjutsu technique slots.
Reductions:
• Learn ninjutsu one [1] post faster.
• Learn genjutsu one [1] post faster
• Learn Bukijutsu one (1) post faster.
Personal Attributes:
• Art Show : +1 custom bloodline technique
• Swift step: slight increase reflex's


▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|c α r є є r • ∂ α т α|├▬
Ryo: 両 0
AC: 0

Missions Complete:
D Rank :: 0
C Rank :: 0
B Rank :: 0
A Rank :: 0
S Rank :: 0

Limitations:
• Ninjutsu : : 00 / 05
• Genjutsu : : 00 / 04
• Taijutsu Styles: : 00 / 00
• Bukijutsu Styles: : 00 / 02

▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|ω є α ρ σ η • ∂ α т α|├▬
Weapon Type: Tanto
Weapon Range: 4 inchs
Weapon Weight: 5 lb
Weapon Location: Side waist

▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|ι η ν є η т σ r у|├▬
• Basic Medical kit x 1
• Smoke bomb's x 4
• Kunai x 4
• Explosive tags x 6
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|т є c н η ι q υ є ѕ|├▬
▬▬┤|N i n j u t s u

Maruton:
• Henge no Jutsu [ Transformation Technique ]
• Kawarimi no Jutsu [ Substitution Technique ]
• Bushin no Jutsu [ Clone Technique ]
• Suimen Hokou no Waza [ Act of Water Surface Walking ]
• Kinobori no Waza [ Act of Tree Climbing ]
• Kai [ Release ]

Suiton


Fuuton


Origami no Dara


▬▬┤|G e n j u t s u



▬▬┤|T a i j u t s u


• {Stage progression / techniques learned}

▬▬┤|B u k i j u t s u




▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|н ι ѕ т σ r у|├▬
Yukari was raised outside kiri with in a small village that had been filled with gambling and unfriendly like people. As a little girl her father Fujitara never payed much attention to her and was quick to sell any scrap of her belongings for money. Her mother Yuuki was somewhat the same but she would tell her all kinds of stories like of their first daughter they had left behind and promised it wouldn't happen to her. When Yukari turned eight things went down hill with the loss of her mother due to a illness her father couldn't come up with money to pay off his debt to a bandit lord outside the land of water so he sold Yukari to them which lead to more problems. She spent seven years serving under rouge's, bandits .On one fatal night herself and a group of other broke free of their cages and tried to escape only Yukari made it out but with the cost of losing her right arm. She fainted due to a large amount of blood loss and when she came too, the teen awakened five months later inside a hospital. The nurse that took care of her in formed Yukari that she was with in Kumogakure. safety but under watch. Yukari spent a year under watch as she attended the villages ninja academy after learning her older sibling lived here. Wanting to prove herself to this sibling Yukari passed and became a Genin.


Kazuraii

Is now edited ^-^
 
PostPosted: Thu Oct 16, 2014 2:22 pm

Codekasu
User Image
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Full Name: Yukari Konan Mitsiyo
Nickname: Yuka,Airi

Age: 16
Birthdate: March 21st
Gender: Female

Height: 5'5
Weight: 109 Lbs

Nindo: "Fight for a better future "
Personality: To put in words Yukari is a very kindhearted girl to the point where she would take on a loved ones suffering or strangers leaving her a bit gullible. She's a bookworm among all and is always seen reading a book whether it be on her free time or during a mission that's not to busy. Despite her peaceful demeanor Yukari is nervous around large groups, crowds and men that try to get to close leaving the teen to hide behind someone she's close too or flee the area. With her rough childhood she still finds time to keep a smile on her face.
Village: Kumo
Rank: Genin
First Class: Bukijutsu
Second Class: Sensor

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Bloodline: Konan (Origami no Dara) x

Chakra Pool: 350
Stamina Pool: 150
Chakra Element: Suiton, Fuuton
Chakra Color: Pinkish pearl
Chakra Materialization: Forms pink butterflies around her.

Strengths:
• All ranged Combat
• reflects
Weaknesses:
• Fire
• Fragile
Fears:
• Jail's, cages
• Large crowds

Class Disciplines :
• Mystic Hero:
The user is much like a hybrid warrior, focusing on mixing ninjutsu into their personal arsenal. Through their great devotion to this path the user can cast ninjutsu without hand seals while wielding a weapon, D at gennin, C at chunnin, B at Jounin, A at Konin, and S at Sannin.


• Oracle: The character, through a special talent given at birth, can naturally sense chakra around them. The user can sense chakra around them up to a 5 yard radius without the use of a sensory technique. This radius is increased by 5 yards every time the user ranks up. Additionally, sensory techniques do not take up ninjutsu technique slots.
Reductions:
• Learn ninjutsu one [1] post faster.
• Learn genjutsu one [1] post faster
• Learn Bukijutsu one (1) post faster.
Personal Attributes:
• Art Show : +1 custom bloodline technique
• Swift step: slight increase reflex's


▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|c α r є є r • ∂ α т α|├▬
Ryo: 両 0
AC: 0

Missions Complete:
D Rank :: 0
C Rank :: 0
B Rank :: 0
A Rank :: 0
S Rank :: 0

Limitations:
• Ninjutsu : : 00 / 05
• Genjutsu : : 00 / 04
• Taijutsu Styles: : 00 / 00
• Bukijutsu Styles: : 00 / 02

▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|ω є α ρ σ η • ∂ α т α|├▬
Weapon Type: Tanto
Weapon Range: 4 inchs
Weapon Weight: 5 lb
Weapon Location: Side waist

▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|ι η ν є η т σ r у|├▬
• Basic Medical kit x 1
• Smoke bomb's x 4
• Kunai x 4
• Explosive tags x 6
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|т є c н η ι q υ є ѕ|├▬
▬▬┤|N i n j u t s u

Maruton:
• Henge no Jutsu [ Transformation Technique ]
• Kawarimi no Jutsu [ Substitution Technique ]
• Bushin no Jutsu [ Clone Technique ]
• Suimen Hokou no Waza [ Act of Water Surface Walking ]
• Kinobori no Waza [ Act of Tree Climbing ]
• Kai [ Release ]

Suiton


Fuuton


Origami no Dara


▬▬┤|G e n j u t s u



▬▬┤|T a i j u t s u


• {Stage progression / techniques learned}

▬▬┤|B u k i j u t s u




▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|н ι ѕ т σ r у|├▬
Yukari was raised outside kiri with in a small village that had been filled with gambling and unfriendly like people. As a little girl her father Fujitara never payed much attention to her and was quick to sell any scrap of her belongings for money. Her mother Yuuki was somewhat the same but she would tell her all kinds of stories like of their first daughter they had left behind and promised it wouldn't happen to her. When Yukari turned eight things went down hill with the loss of her mother due to a illness her father couldn't come up with money to pay off his debt to a bandit lord outside the land of water so he sold Yukari to them which lead to more problems. She spent seven years serving under rouge's, bandits .On one fatal night herself and a group of other broke free of their cages and tried to escape only Yukari made it out but with the cost of losing her right arm. She fainted due to a large amount of blood loss and when she came too, the teen awakened five months later inside a hospital. The nurse that took care of her in formed Yukari that she was with in Kumogakure. safety but under watch. Yukari spent a year under watch as she attended the villages ninja academy after learning her older sibling lived here. Wanting to prove herself to this sibling Yukari passed and became a Genin.


Kazuraii

Is now edited ^-^



You can only have up to 15 of either Kunai, Senbon or Shuriken or you can have a mix of them adding up to 15. The medical kit, Explosive Notes and smoke bombs are not allowed when starting off. Please fix this and resubmit

You can earn them during your adventures with Ryo.  

Kazuraii

Romantic Raider


Codekasu

Fashionable Prophet

4,150 Points
  • Signature Look 250
  • Tycoon 200
  • Dressed Up 200
PostPosted: Thu Oct 16, 2014 4:44 pm
User Image
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|ρ є r ѕ σ η α ℓ • ∂ α т α|├▬
Full Name: Yukari Konan Mitsiyo
Nickname: Yuka,Airi

Age: 16
Birthdate: March 21st
Gender: Female

Height: 5'5
Weight: 109 Lbs

Nindo: "Fight for a better future "
Personality: To put in words Yukari is a very kindhearted girl to the point where she would take on a loved ones suffering or strangers leaving her a bit gullible. She's a bookworm among all and is always seen reading a book whether it be on her free time or during a mission that's not to busy. Despite her peaceful demeanor Yukari is nervous around large groups, crowds and men that try to get to close leaving the teen to hide behind someone she's close too or flee the area. With her rough childhood she still finds time to keep a smile on her face.
Village: Kumo
Rank: Genin
First Class: Bukijutsu
Second Class: Sensor

▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|c σ м в α т • ∂ α т α|├▬
Bloodline: Konan (Origami no Dara) x

Chakra Pool: 350
Stamina Pool: 150
Chakra Element: Suiton, Fuuton
Chakra Color: Pinkish pearl
Chakra Materialization: Forms pink butterflies around her.

Strengths:
• All ranged Combat
• reflects
Weaknesses:
• Fire
• Fragile
Fears:
• Jail's, cages
• Large crowds

Class Disciplines :
• Mystic Hero:
The user is much like a hybrid warrior, focusing on mixing ninjutsu into their personal arsenal. Through their great devotion to this path the user can cast ninjutsu without hand seals while wielding a weapon, D at gennin, C at chunnin, B at Jounin, A at Konin, and S at Sannin.


• Oracle: The character, through a special talent given at birth, can naturally sense chakra around them. The user can sense chakra around them up to a 5 yard radius without the use of a sensory technique. This radius is increased by 5 yards every time the user ranks up. Additionally, sensory techniques do not take up ninjutsu technique slots.
Reductions:
• Learn ninjutsu one [1] post faster.
• Learn genjutsu one [1] post faster
• Learn Bukijutsu one (1) post faster.
Personal Attributes:
• Art Show : +1 custom bloodline technique
• Swift step: slight increase reflex's


▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|c α r є є r • ∂ α т α|├▬
Ryo: 両 0
AC: 0

Missions Complete:
D Rank :: 0
C Rank :: 0
B Rank :: 0
A Rank :: 0
S Rank :: 0

Limitations:
• Ninjutsu : : 00 / 05
• Genjutsu : : 00 / 04
• Taijutsu Styles: : 00 / 00
• Bukijutsu Styles: : 00 / 02

▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|ω є α ρ σ η • ∂ α т α|├▬
Weapon Type: Tanto
Weapon Range: 4 inchs
Weapon Weight: 5 lb
Weapon Location: Side waist

▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|ι η ν є η т σ r у|├▬
• Kunai x5
• Senbon x10
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|т є c н η ι q υ є ѕ|├▬
▬▬┤|N i n j u t s u

Maruton:
• Henge no Jutsu [ Transformation Technique ]
• Kawarimi no Jutsu [ Substitution Technique ]
• Bushin no Jutsu [ Clone Technique ]
• Suimen Hokou no Waza [ Act of Water Surface Walking ]
• Kinobori no Waza [ Act of Tree Climbing ]
• Kai [ Release ]

Suiton


Fuuton


Origami no Dara


▬▬┤|G e n j u t s u



▬▬┤|T a i j u t s u


• {Stage progression / techniques learned}

▬▬┤|B u k i j u t s u




▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|н ι ѕ т σ r у|├▬
Yukari was raised outside kiri with in a small village that had been filled with gambling and unfriendly like people. As a little girl her father Fujitara never payed much attention to her and was quick to sell any scrap of her belongings for money. Her mother Yuuki was somewhat the same but she would tell her all kinds of stories like of their first daughter they had left behind and promised it wouldn't happen to her. When Yukari turned eight things went down hill with the loss of her mother due to a illness her father couldn't come up with money to pay off his debt to a bandit lord outside the land of water so he sold Yukari to them which lead to more problems. She spent seven years serving under rouge's, bandits .On one fatal night herself and a group of other broke free of their cages and tried to escape only Yukari made it out but with the cost of losing her right arm. She fainted due to a large amount of blood loss and when she came too, the teen awakened five months later inside a hospital. The nurse that took care of her in formed Yukari that she was with in Kumogakure. safety but under watch. Yukari spent a year under watch as she attended the villages ninja academy after learning her older sibling lived here. Wanting to prove herself to this sibling Yukari passed and became a Genin.
 
PostPosted: Thu Oct 16, 2014 5:42 pm
Codekasu
User Image
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|ρ є r ѕ σ η α ℓ • ∂ α т α|├▬
Full Name: Yukari Konan Mitsiyo
Nickname: Yuka,Airi

Age: 16
Birthdate: March 21st
Gender: Female

Height: 5'5
Weight: 109 Lbs

Nindo: "Fight for a better future "
Personality: To put in words Yukari is a very kindhearted girl to the point where she would take on a loved ones suffering or strangers leaving her a bit gullible. She's a bookworm among all and is always seen reading a book whether it be on her free time or during a mission that's not to busy. Despite her peaceful demeanor Yukari is nervous around large groups, crowds and men that try to get to close leaving the teen to hide behind someone she's close too or flee the area. With her rough childhood she still finds time to keep a smile on her face.
Village: Kumo
Rank: Genin
First Class: Bukijutsu
Second Class: Sensor

▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|c σ м в α т • ∂ α т α|├▬
Bloodline: Konan (Origami no Dara) x

Chakra Pool: 350
Stamina Pool: 150
Chakra Element: Suiton, Fuuton
Chakra Color: Pinkish pearl
Chakra Materialization: Forms pink butterflies around her.

Strengths:
• All ranged Combat
• reflects
Weaknesses:
• Fire
• Fragile
Fears:
• Jail's, cages
• Large crowds

Class Disciplines :
• Mystic Hero:
The user is much like a hybrid warrior, focusing on mixing ninjutsu into their personal arsenal. Through their great devotion to this path the user can cast ninjutsu without hand seals while wielding a weapon, D at gennin, C at chunnin, B at Jounin, A at Konin, and S at Sannin.


• Oracle: The character, through a special talent given at birth, can naturally sense chakra around them. The user can sense chakra around them up to a 5 yard radius without the use of a sensory technique. This radius is increased by 5 yards every time the user ranks up. Additionally, sensory techniques do not take up ninjutsu technique slots.
Reductions:
• Learn ninjutsu one [1] post faster.
• Learn genjutsu one [1] post faster
• Learn Bukijutsu one (1) post faster.
Personal Attributes:
• Art Show : +1 custom bloodline technique
• Swift step: slight increase reflex's


▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|c α r є є r • ∂ α т α|├▬
Ryo: 両 0
AC: 0

Missions Complete:
D Rank :: 0
C Rank :: 0
B Rank :: 0
A Rank :: 0
S Rank :: 0

Limitations:
• Ninjutsu : : 00 / 05
• Genjutsu : : 00 / 04
• Taijutsu Styles: : 00 / 00
• Bukijutsu Styles: : 00 / 02

▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|ω є α ρ σ η • ∂ α т α|├▬
Weapon Type: Tanto
Weapon Range: 4 inchs
Weapon Weight: 5 lb
Weapon Location: Side waist

▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|ι η ν є η т σ r у|├▬
• Kunai x5
• Senbon x10
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|т є c н η ι q υ є ѕ|├▬
▬▬┤|N i n j u t s u

Maruton:
• Henge no Jutsu [ Transformation Technique ]
• Kawarimi no Jutsu [ Substitution Technique ]
• Bushin no Jutsu [ Clone Technique ]
• Suimen Hokou no Waza [ Act of Water Surface Walking ]
• Kinobori no Waza [ Act of Tree Climbing ]
• Kai [ Release ]

Suiton


Fuuton


Origami no Dara


▬▬┤|G e n j u t s u



▬▬┤|T a i j u t s u


• {Stage progression / techniques learned}

▬▬┤|B u k i j u t s u




▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|н ι ѕ т σ r у|├▬
Yukari was raised outside kiri with in a small village that had been filled with gambling and unfriendly like people. As a little girl her father Fujitara never payed much attention to her and was quick to sell any scrap of her belongings for money. Her mother Yuuki was somewhat the same but she would tell her all kinds of stories like of their first daughter they had left behind and promised it wouldn't happen to her. When Yukari turned eight things went down hill with the loss of her mother due to a illness her father couldn't come up with money to pay off his debt to a bandit lord outside the land of water so he sold Yukari to them which lead to more problems. She spent seven years serving under rouge's, bandits .On one fatal night herself and a group of other broke free of their cages and tried to escape only Yukari made it out but with the cost of losing her right arm. She fainted due to a large amount of blood loss and when she came too, the teen awakened five months later inside a hospital. The nurse that took care of her in formed Yukari that she was with in Kumogakure. safety but under watch. Yukari spent a year under watch as she attended the villages ninja academy after learning her older sibling lived here. Wanting to prove herself to this sibling Yukari passed and became a Genin.


Kazuraii

Is now reedited ^-^


Approved.  

Blinkkyz

Wealthy Tycoon



Toxic Interior


Noble Rogue

PostPosted: Sun Oct 26, 2014 7:19 pm
User Image
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Full Name: Kohaku Raigyo
Nickname: Ko, Haku

Age: 12
Birthdate: December 30
Gender: Male

Height: 4' 10"
Weight: 88lbs

Nindo: "Iron can be cold, but show it the proper heat and it can be warm, the same is true with me."
Personality: Kohaku is a shy child, not really one for interacting with other people. As a shinobi in training, he tried to get around that, and gradually started to talk to other people, much to his discomfort. He prefers solitude to company but will not argue over the company that he gets if it is someone he knows. He was stunned to find out from his mother that he was not actually born with the gifts as the Raigyo that he was raised to believe. He was actually born with the abilities of his mother, that of the Satetsu.

Village: Sunagakure
Rank: Genin
First Class: Taijutsu
Second Class: Sensor

▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|c σ м в α т • ∂ α т α|├▬
Bloodline: Satetsu [x]

Chakra Pool: 275
Stamina Pool: 225
Chakra Element: Raiton, Doton
Chakra Color: Gray
Chakra Materialization: Aura of steel flecks

Strengths:
• Close Combat
• Enemy Detection
Weaknesses:
• Slow Ninjutsu
• Strong Flames
Fears:
• Claustrophobia - Fear of enclosed/tight spaces
• Hemophobia - Fear of blood (particularly on his own body)

Class Disciplines :
• Oracle: The character, through a special talent given at birth, can naturally sense chakra around them. The user can sense chakra around them up to a 5 yard radius without the use of a sensory technique. This radius is increased by 5 yards every time the user ranks up. Additionally, sensory techniques do not take up ninjutsu technique slots.
• Brawler: Your taijutsu is just one side of your skill, as you are also versed in utilizing ninjutsu as well. Your taijutsu body vastly increases your flexibility and reflexes, while at the same time granting you an additional 2 ninjutsu techniques per level, then an extra 4 ninjutsu per rank after jounin.
Reductions:
• Learn Ninjutsu 1 post faster [Sensor]
• Learn Genjutsu 1 post faster [Sensor]
• Learn Taijutsu 1 post faster [Taijutsu]
• Learn Taijutsu 1 post slower [Bloodline]
• Learn Doton and Raiton Ninjutsu 1 post faster [Bloodline]
• Learn Taijutsu 1 post faster [Personal Attribute]
Personal Attributes:
• Hard Work: Taijutsu is learned at one [1] post faster
• Iron Born: Physical defense is slightly increased

▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|c α r є є r • ∂ α т α|├▬
Ryo: 両0
AC: 0

Missions Complete:
D Rank :: 0
C Rank :: 0
B Rank :: 0
A Rank :: 0
S Rank :: 0

Limitations:
• Ninjutsu : : 00 / 07
• Genjutsu : : 00 / 04
• Taijutsu Styles: : 00 / 02
• Bukijutsu Styles: : 00 / 00

▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|ω є α ρ σ η • ∂ α т α|├▬
Weapon Type: Iron Staff
Weapon Range: 5'
Weapon Weight: 5lbs
Weapon Location: Back

Summoning Type: N/A
Summon Sage: N/A
Pacts: N/A

▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|ι η ν є η т σ r у|├▬
• Kunai x5
• Shuriken x10

▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|т є c н η ι q υ є ѕ|├▬
▬▬┤|N i n j u t s u

Maruton:
• Henge no Jutsu [ Transformation Technique ]
• Kawarimi no Jutsu [ Substitution Technique ]
• Bushin no Jutsu [ Clone Technique ]
• Suimen Hokou no Waza [ Act of Water Surface Walking ]
• Kinobori no Waza [ Act of Tree Climbing ]
• Kai [ Release ]

Doton


Raiton


Satetsu


▬▬┤|G e n j u t s u



▬▬┤|T a i j u t s u




▬▬┤|B u k i j u t s u




▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|н ι ѕ т σ r у|├▬
Kohaku was born in an outlying village in the wind country. He was born to a single mother, who raised him under his father's name. For the most part, Haku was happy, helping his mother find herbs and going outside to play in the sand. He knew he was different and sensed that his mother was hiding something from him. He never pried though, because his mother always seemed distant when thinking about it. On his tenth birthday, she decided to tell him that he was born a Raigyo, but she believed he had Satetsu power in him, not Raigyo. She also told him that he had an older sister. The boy was happy she told him but now wanted to meet his sister. To get close to her, Kohaku joined the Ninja academy to become a shinobi and find his sister.
 
PostPosted: Sun Oct 26, 2014 7:25 pm
Toxic Interior
User Image
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|ρ є r ѕ σ η α ℓ • ∂ α т α|├▬
Full Name: Kohaku Raigyo
Nickname: Ko, Haku

Age: 12
Birthdate: December 30
Gender: Male

Height: 4' 10"
Weight: 88lbs

Nindo: "Iron can be cold, but show it the proper heat and it can be warm, the same is true with me."
Personality: Kohaku is a shy child, not really one for interacting with other people. As a shinobi in training, he tried to get around that, and gradually started to talk to other people, much to his discomfort. He prefers solitude to company but will not argue over the company that he gets if it is someone he knows. He was stunned to find out from his mother that he was not actually born with the gifts as the Raigyo that he was raised to believe. He was actually born with the abilities of his mother, that of the Satetsu.

Village: Sunagakure
Rank: Genin
First Class: Taijutsu
Second Class: Sensor

▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|c σ м в α т • ∂ α т α|├▬
Bloodline: Satetsu [x]

Chakra Pool: 275
Stamina Pool: 225
Chakra Element: Raiton, Doton
Chakra Color: Gray
Chakra Materialization: Aura of steel flecks

Strengths:
• Close Combat
• Enemy Detection
Weaknesses:
• Slow Ninjutsu
• Strong Flames
Fears:
• Claustrophobia - Fear of enclosed/tight spaces
• Hemophobia - Fear of blood (particularly on his own body)

Class Disciplines :
• Oracle: The character, through a special talent given at birth, can naturally sense chakra around them. The user can sense chakra around them up to a 5 yard radius without the use of a sensory technique. This radius is increased by 5 yards every time the user ranks up. Additionally, sensory techniques do not take up ninjutsu technique slots.
• Brawler: Your taijutsu is just one side of your skill, as you are also versed in utilizing ninjutsu as well. Your taijutsu body vastly increases your flexibility and reflexes, while at the same time granting you an additional 2 ninjutsu techniques per level, then an extra 4 ninjutsu per rank after jounin.
Reductions:
• Learn Ninjutsu 1 post faster [Sensor]
• Learn Genjutsu 1 post faster [Sensor]
• Learn Taijutsu 1 post faster [Taijutsu]
• Learn Taijutsu 1 post slower [Bloodline]
• Learn Doton and Raiton Ninjutsu 1 post faster [Bloodline]
• Learn Taijutsu 1 post faster [Personal Attribute]
Personal Attributes:
• Hard Work: Taijutsu is learned at one [1] post faster
• Iron Born: Physical defense is slightly increased

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Ryo: 両0
AC: 0

Missions Complete:
D Rank :: 0
C Rank :: 0
B Rank :: 0
A Rank :: 0
S Rank :: 0

Limitations:
• Ninjutsu : : 00 / 07
• Genjutsu : : 00 / 04
• Taijutsu Styles: : 00 / 02
• Bukijutsu Styles: : 00 / 00

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Weapon Type: Iron Staff
Weapon Range: 5'
Weapon Weight: 5lbs
Weapon Location: Back

Summoning Type: N/A
Summon Sage: N/A
Pacts: N/A

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• Kunai x5
• Shuriken x10

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Maruton:
• Henge no Jutsu [ Transformation Technique ]
• Kawarimi no Jutsu [ Substitution Technique ]
• Bushin no Jutsu [ Clone Technique ]
• Suimen Hokou no Waza [ Act of Water Surface Walking ]
• Kinobori no Waza [ Act of Tree Climbing ]
• Kai [ Release ]

Doton


Raiton


Satetsu


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Kohaku was born in an outlying village in the wind country. He was born to a single mother, who raised him under his father's name. For the most part, Haku was happy, helping his mother find herbs and going outside to play in the sand. He knew he was different and sensed that his mother was hiding something from him. He never pried though, because his mother always seemed distant when thinking about it. On his tenth birthday, she decided to tell him that he was born a Raigyo, but she believed he had Satetsu power in him, not Raigyo. She also told him that he had an older sister. The boy was happy she told him but now wanted to meet his sister. To get close to her, Kohaku joined the Ninja academy to become a shinobi and find his sister.


Approved.  

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PostPosted: Tue Oct 28, 2014 8:48 pm
Only changing one personal, my pheromone one, to the following:

AandOE


Extreme Senses::
Syriahl has perfect memory in four of her five senses, being Sound, Taste, Touch, and Smell, and can remember every distinct encounter with those senses from the day she was born. However, this was combined with something far more annoying: an increased sensory input. Everything she sensed, other than sight, was thousands of times higher than normal levels for the average beast, such as a canine's sense of smell. This allows him to tell things about places, people, and objects that would otherwise be impossible without the use of jutsu. This comes with a downside, however. When in contact with too many people, too much history, Sensory Overload occurs. This is where Syriahl's brain has taken in too much information in too short a time, and it is the same effect as the worst migraine, but increased to a factor of ten. It is, in short, debilitating.


Summary
Basically, extremely, EXTREMELY high senses, yet when too much sensory comes in, such as dealing with fights that are too close together, she can pass out from the overload.



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Full Name: Yuuwaku Gagane
Known As: Syriahl [see-rai-ahl]

Age: 17
Birthdate: 1/25/xxxx
Gender: Hermaphrodite [Appears as both an extremely attractive male and extremely beautiful female]

Height: 5' 7"
Weight: 121 lbs

Nindo: "Make every action your last, for every moment might be. Dance yourself to happiness and freedom."
Personality: Syriahl is a hermaphrodite, and one of the rare ones that is both a male and female in equal portions. He/She identifies as either gender, depending on the scenerio and time of day. Because of this, he is quite mercurial in her attitude, often switching from one emotion to another without much concern or forethought. He is beautiful, so beautiful in fact that he doesn't appear to be male, yet she is far too handsome to be clearly female, and thus people looking at her will find themselves unable to tell his gender at all, even by the most skilled of individuals. This has led to Syriahl being very much into deception and dramatization, which, yes, has had negative results in his past. Overall, however, Syrial is a very caring person, far too emotional to be real, and prone to dramatization that often makes others look down at her. Yet is isn't until combat initiates that people realize just how deadly he can be. On a side note, he lies as easily as breathing, is absolutely loyal to her family, and a true killer when the time demands it.

Village: Sunagakure no Sato
Rank: Genin
First Class: Musician → Painting Pictures
Second Class: Ninjutsu → Elemental Dual Wielder

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Bloodline: Power: +2 PA, +25 chakra/stamina a rank

Chakra Pool: 495
Stamina Pool: 65
Chakra Element: Wind, Water
Chakra Color: Azure, with wisps of cyan both light and dark
Chakra Materialization: The chakra materializes as series of clouds about her body that flicker and dance as he dances.

Strengths:
• Dancing
• Close Combat Ninjutsu
• Deception and Manipulation
• Can mimic, perfectly, any voice he has ever heard
• Can paint perfectly
• Remembers every scent and sound, touch and taste, and can differentiate each with alarming accuracy, and can perceive them at levels beyond even most animals
Weaknesses:
• Is often far too "in-your-face" and ends up infuriating people
• Is far too obsessed with the power he has over those around her
• Because Syriahl has the ability to remember everything perfectly except vision, his sense of sight is slightly worse than others
• Because he remembers all senses other than sight perfectly, these memories are almost always trying to clash in his mind, flooding his mind with images and notes. This can lead to mental breakdowns if stress is too overwhelming
Fears:
• Death by Drowning
• Being seen as a monster by her family
• Breaking down due to sensory overload

Class Disciplines :
• Elemental Dual Wielder:
Your maximum chakra pool is increased by {10} points. The ninjutsu limit provided by this class is split amongst both of your chosen elements. ( At genin rank, rather than having a total of [ 06 ] ninjutsu slots for Katon or Suiton techniques, this class provides you with [ 06 ] slots for both Katon and Suiton techniques. Any ninjutsu slots received from other sources are filled at your discretion. )
• Painting Pictures:
The user is able to perform on their insturment like they are performing hand seals, making brilliant ninjutsu appear. This ability comes at the cost of not being able to perform genjutsu through performance or instrument. Can perform B rank ninjutsu and lower at gennin, A rank at Chunnin, and S rank at Jounin. At Konin, all ninjutsu cost 5 less chakra to perform if performed through an instrument or performance. at Sannin, ninjutsu cost 10 less chakra if performed through instrument or performance.
Reductions:
• Ninjutsu → 1 post

Personal Attributes:
• Breakfast! → Gains one free Taijutsu style!
• Seamless Combat → All jutsu performed through dances are increased by one [1] rank without increase in chakra requirements
• Second Breakfast! → Gains one free Bukijutsu style!
• Aphrodite Incarnate → Somehow, perhaps through some defect of birth, Syriahl possesses an overwhelming level of pheromones, of most varieties. Unfortunately, this is not under his control, not naturally. With her pheromones at nearly one thousand times the normal level of someone of her body type, he finds himself far too often on the receiving end of someone's love, lust, or hatred. For roleplay purposes, those who interact with Syriahl will either outright desire him, hate her, or find an intense desire to ignore them. More often than not, a sexual attraction is felt beyond the control of the victim, no matter the gender, yet with intense willpower the effects can be minimized.

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Ryo: 両0 ,0 0 0
AC: 0 , 0 0 0

Missions Complete:
D Rank :: 0
C Rank :: 0
B Rank :: 0
A Rank :: 0
S Rank :: 0

Limitations: {How many of each technique you can learn. Refer to class info}
• Ninjutsu : : 00 / 15
• Genjutsu : : 00 / 04
• Taijutsu Styles: : 00 / 01
• Bukijutsu Styles: : 00 / 00

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Weapon Type: Kusarigama
Weapon Range: 15 ft.
Weapon Weight: 3 lbs.
Weapon Location: Wrapped around arm and up to shoulder, hidden within sleeve

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• 9 Shuriken
• 1 Kunai
• 1 Grappling Hook [Collapsible]
• 1 Hooked Skinning Knife
• Makeup Kit
• Disguise Kit
• Formal Clothing, Male and Female
• Satchel
• Sapphire Earrings
• Diamond Bracelets [x 3]
• Spice Box
• Silver Choker
• Fishnet Material
• Mending/Sewing Kit

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Maruton:

♣ Henge no Jutsu [ Transformation Technique ]
♣ Kawarimi no Jutsu [ Substitution Technique ]
♣ Bushin no Jutsu [ Clone Technique ]
♣ Suimen Hokou no Waza [ Act of Water Surface Walking ]
♣ Kinobori no Waza [ Act of Tree Climbing ]
♣ Kai [ Release ]






Fuuton











Suiton










Fuuinjutsu











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____Oh, the good old days! You want to hear about my past? Why, isn't that a shocker! Most look at me and think me a slut, a whore, a b***h with the physique of a man, while other days they desire me, so such questions are rare. Still, can't waste the opportunity!
____My earliest memory was being born. Most people would call me a liar, but while I might not remember sights I can remember the smells, the sensations, even the taste of blood in my mouth as I squeezed out ahead of my littlest sister! But that's not really important, no, it was much later that my first picture memory took place. You see, I'm a hermaphrodite, born with the body of two genders, but unlike many I don't tend towards one or the other: I'm evenly male and female, with all the ups and downs of both. As you might imagine, people didn't like that too much, and my mother constantly was asked to throw me out of our troupe, our little caravan. However, she loved me, and would never do such a thing! But I learned that day just what it meant for me to live in this world.
____Growing up, I realized with the help of my sister and older brother that I had a place in this world that few others did. I learned that my body produced pheromones at insane levels, which made both genders desire me and hate me, depending on the situation. And growing up, I learned to embrace my differences, and learned to act either gender at my own desire. I learned to dance, for when I danced I was truly alive, with my mother and sister joining in due to my mother's focus on performance.
____Yet this is all more...general, than focused. Here, let me explain!
____Growing up, I learned another oddity about my existence: I could recall everything perfectly, ever sense, except for sight. Every sound, smell, touch and taste I could remember with perfect accuracy, yet my visual memory was slightly lacking (read as terrible!). This influenced my life, and led to me doing everything possible to experience those four senses. I would taste everything laid before me, as well as taste things I likely shouldn't have, such as leaves on a tree, dead on the ground, and grass, and bugs! I would touch everything, feeling their differences, learning to see more through my touch and through contact than with my own eyes. This led to several confrontations with my twin, who quickly hated how often I would touch her, to memorize every change she went through. Even Aki had problems with it.
____As a performer I focused on dancing, and learned that fighting, in all its forms, is simply another form of dance. I would cartwheel to victory, twirl and smash my fists into my opponents face, as well as other things~. I learned to fight because it helped me dance, though often I believe it might have been the other way around, considering how often I got into fights due to my pheromones! I performed through dress up, through impersonation, which I did well considering my unique gender and my ability to mimic voices perfectly. I became famous for it, even when younger, though it grew later as I aged. During this time I took upon myself the stage name of Syriahl, a name given to an archangel in a book I once read.
____Yet the greatest turning point in my life happened when, during a routine performance on a high wire, I heard a scream outside. That scream...I knew it. No sound ever left my memory, never faded from my thoughts, and thus it was immediately recognizable. Leaping from the rope I caught a pole and spun around it in descent, hitting the ground running. I remember flinging myself outside, and the scent. Gods, those scents! Terror, agony, rage, blood, death! Each assaulted my senses like a white hot poker. I remember my twin in my arms for a moment before she retreated. I remember her voice, shrill, near the point of screeching, her wails and tears coming at alarming rates. I knew, without looking, what had happened. My mother's breath I could no longer smell, even though that above all else I could smell on a normal day. Her bowels had emptied, and rot was already creeping in. No, she was gone, there was no saving. Yet I could not console my sister, for my senses were overwhelmed, my heart racing, the blood pounding within my head and coursing through my veins as a gushing river. I screamed and fell to the ground, writhing, each convulsion memorizing the sensations of dirt and gravel rubbing into my flesh. It nearly drove me mad that day, and I fear that my actions convinced my sister I blamed her for our mother's death. Oh, but that was never the case. No, death comes for us all in one way or another, and no blame can be cast when His grizzly hand reaches out for you.Yet that blame would haunt my sister for years to come, even to this day.
____Though we were taken in by an old couple we met, after our father left. Father leaving hurt the worst of all, for he had been a rock in my life, someone to speak to when the worst came for my body, when I was teased or attacked. Him leaving...that memory was the worst. The many different sensations still cloud my mind when I think of it, but worst was the taste of hatred on the air from my brother. Aki did not take well to that betrayal, but then, did any of us? The elderly couple tried very hard to do right by us, yet like my brother I knew they were simply not effective as replacements. I thank them still for their kindness, and I wish they would forgive me for all the fights and conflict brought on by my hormones as I aged. I know that the animals of the troupe would never look at me the same way after those years! Still, after a time my sister came to heal, and we became closer as a family, yet...I knew always that I would be the black sheep. I could never fit the norm, always flitting from one action or emotion to another, the sensations ever my concern. For without my four senses my memories were pale, lifeless things, and I wished to remember everything I could, even if it drove me mad! To this end, I pushed my sister with side comments and suggestive glances until we, as twins, entered the academy together. When our brother learned of this he joined us, and now here we are!
____I often wonder where my life is taking me in this bleak, desolate land, and how the world will treat me when they learn of my truth. Yet I aspire to bring love, joy, dance and happiness to all in the world if I can, and peace and solace to my grieving twin. Aki...he will always be Achiamel, but maybe one day he'll smile again, and be the older brother I so desperately remember! Only time will tell...
 
PostPosted: Fri Oct 31, 2014 7:52 pm
Resubmitted I needed to change one my PA ^^

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Full Name: Yukari Konan Mitsiyo
Nickname: Yuka,Airi

Age: 16
Birthdate: March 21st
Gender: Female

Height: 5'5
Weight: 109 Lbs

Nindo: "Fight for a better future "
Personality: To put in words Yukari is a very kindhearted girl to the point where she would take on a loved ones suffering or strangers leaving her a bit gullible. She's a bookworm among all and is always seen reading a book whether it be on her free time or during a mission that's not to busy. Despite her peaceful demeanor Yukari is nervous around large groups, crowds and men that try to get to close leaving the teen to hide behind someone she's close too or flee the area. With her rough childhood she still finds time to keep a smile on her face.
Village: Kumo
Rank: Genin
First Class: Bukijutsu
Second Class: Sensor

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Bloodline: Konan (Origami no Dara) x

Chakra Pool: 350
Stamina Pool: 150
Chakra Element: Suiton, Fuuton
Chakra Color: Pinkish pearl
Chakra Materialization: Forms pink butterflies around her.

Strengths:
• All ranged Combat
• reflects
Weaknesses:
• Fire
• Fragile
Fears:
• Jail's, cages
• Large crowds

Class Disciplines :
• Mystic Hero:
The user is much like a hybrid warrior, focusing on mixing ninjutsu into their personal arsenal. Through their great devotion to this path the user can cast ninjutsu without hand seals while wielding a weapon, D at gennin, C at chunnin, B at Jounin, A at Konin, and S at Sannin.


• Oracle: The character, through a special talent given at birth, can naturally sense chakra around them. The user can sense chakra around them up to a 5 yard radius without the use of a sensory technique. This radius is increased by 5 yards every time the user ranks up. Additionally, sensory techniques do not take up ninjutsu technique slots.
Reductions:
• Learn ninjutsu one [1] post faster.
• Learn genjutsu one [1] post faster
• Learn Bukijutsu one (1) post faster.
Personal Attributes:
• Art Show : +1 custom bloodline technique
• The Lefty: Yuka is able to preform jutsu with one hand.


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Ryo: 両 0
AC: 0

Missions Complete:
D Rank :: 0
C Rank :: 0
B Rank :: 0
A Rank :: 0
S Rank :: 0

Limitations:
• Ninjutsu : : 00 / 05
• Genjutsu : : 00 / 04
• Taijutsu Styles: : 00 / 00
• Bukijutsu Styles: : 00 / 02

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Weapon Type: Tanto
Weapon Range: 4 inchs
Weapon Weight: 5 lb
Weapon Location: Side waist

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• Kunai x5
• Senbon x10
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Maruton:
• Henge no Jutsu [ Transformation Technique ]
• Kawarimi no Jutsu [ Substitution Technique ]
• Bushin no Jutsu [ Clone Technique ]
• Suimen Hokou no Waza [ Act of Water Surface Walking ]
• Kinobori no Waza [ Act of Tree Climbing ]
• Kai [ Release ]

Suiton


Fuuton


Origami no Dara


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• {Stage progression / techniques learned}

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Yukari was raised outside kiri with in a small village that had been filled with gambling and unfriendly like people. As a little girl her father Fujitara never payed much attention to her and was quick to sell any scrap of her belongings for money. Her mother Yuuki was somewhat the same but she would tell her all kinds of stories like of their first daughter they had left behind and promised it wouldn't happen to her. When Yukari turned eight things went down hill with the loss of her mother due to a illness her father couldn't come up with money to pay off his debt to a bandit lord outside the land of water so he sold Yukari to them which lead to more problems. She spent seven years serving under rouge's, bandits .On one fatal night herself and a group of other broke free of their cages and tried to escape only Yukari made it out but with the cost of losing her right arm. She fainted due to a large amount of blood loss and when she came too, the teen awakened five months later inside a hospital. The nurse that took care of her in formed Yukari that she was with in Kumogakure. safety but under watch. Yukari spent a year under watch as she attended the villages ninja academy after learning her older sibling lived here. Wanting to prove herself to this sibling Yukari passed and became a Genin.
 

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PostPosted: Sun Nov 02, 2014 10:19 pm
Removing both my old inactive characters. Picture to be posted as soon as Photobucket stops being a b***h.


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Full Name: Kaolin Satetsu
Nickname: Kao

Age: 18
Birthdate: Jan. 1
Gender: Male

Height: 6ft 0in
Weight: 177lbs

Nindo: "If it won't fill your stomach or your pockets it isn't worth it."
Personality: Hard-working and reliable, the kind of guy you'd trust to get the job done no matter what, as long as it fills his stomach and pays his bills. One could accuse him of being too simple, of being only after money and food in life and they would be half-correct. His goals in life do include becoming someone wealthy enough to stuff himself obese everyday, but he also does his work due to a sense of love and loyalty for his village and everyone in it.

Matched by his greed and hunger is his being competitive. He makes competitions and rivals out of nearly everything and everyone and this is what makes him constantly strive to better himself, to always be ten steps ahead of other people's ten steps ahead. This is partly due to him being a bit of an attention seeker, also because of it, he can be quite flashy for a ninja (often going overboard in combat, using techniques with the most "wow" factor). He isn't an idiot though, and in serious situations can curb this part of him.
Village: Sunagakure
Rank: Genin
First Class: Bukijutsu
Second Class: Bukijutsu


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Bloodline: Satetsu - Jiton Bloodline Application

Chakra Pool: 250 / 250
Stamina Pool: 250 / 250
Chakra Element: Doton | Raiton | Jiton
Chakra Color: Varies
Chakra Materialization: Varies

Strengths:
• Expert in close quarters combat
• Natural fighting instincts
Weaknesses:
• Over-confidence
• One sided means of fighting (Little bloodline ninjutsu, littler normal ninjutsu, absolutely no genjutsu, all kung-fu and pew-pew)
Fears:
• Growing old
• Being powerless

Class Disciplines :
Mystic Hero: The user is much like a hybrid warrior, focusing on mixing ninjutsu into their personal arsenal. Through their great devotion to this path the user can cast ninjutsu without hand seals while wielding a weapon, D at gennin, C at chunnin, B at Jounin, A at Konin, and S at Sannin. These techniques maintain the same description and criteria to use, as well as require the same amount of time to mold the chakra through the weapon as would be needed to perform hand seals, meaning the techniques are not instantaneously cast. The user’s spirit is so strong, that they can utilize their physical bukijutsu techniques to negate ninjutsu techniques of the same rank or below.
Samurai: You follow Bushidō, the "Way of the Warrior." Your serene mind allows you to detect genjutsu you are trapped within that are two or more ranks below your own status rank, and your tempered body allows you to wear thick armor that a ninja would otherwise be dragged to their knees by. Additionally, you start with the following four (4) techniques, rather than the six (6) most ninja do; Bushi Ken no Jutsu [ Samurai Sabre Technique, ] Shunshin no Jutsu [ Body Flicker Technique, ] Kai [ Release, ] and Kawarimi no Jutsu [ Substitution Technique. ]
Specialization: If this class is chosen as the first and second class, then the user starts with one [1] additional taijutsu and Bukijutsu slot. Superior conditioning allows the user to choose a specific energy cost (stamina or chakra) and reduce the costs of technique activation by 5, to a minimum activation cost of 5. Every time the user ranks up, they repeat this process. Chakra costs reduced by 5.

Reductions:
• Learns bukijutsu techniques two [2] posts faster.
• Satetsu users learn taijutsu and bukijutsu techniques one [1] post slower.
Personal Attributes:
• Balanced workout : Somehow manages to train so rigorously that any of those passive bonuses to a specific area of the body granted from styles now effect the entire body.
• Can learn 1 extra bukijutsu style

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Ryo: 両0
AC: 0

Missions Complete:
D Rank :: 0
C Rank :: 0
B Rank :: 0
A Rank :: 0
S Rank :: 0

Limitations: {How many of each technique you can learn. Refer to class info}
• Ninjutsu : : 00 / 02
• Genjutsu : : 00 / 00
• Taijutsu Styles: : 00 / 01
• Bukijutsu Styles: : 00 / 05

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Weapon Type: Wakizashi
Weapon Range: Hilt: 7.5in | Blade: 17.5in
Weapon Weight: 1.5lbs
Weapon Location: Back


Summoning Type: --
Summon Sage: --
Pacts: --

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• 10 Shuriken (Back pouch)
• 5 Kunai (Other back pouch)

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Maruton:
• Bushi Ken no Jutsu [ Samurai Sabre Technique ]
• Shunshin no Jutsu [ Body Flicker Technique ]
• Kai [ Release ]
• Kawarimi no Jutsu [ Substitution Technique ]




Doton


Raiton


Bloodline - Jiton




















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Hard Physical
• {D-rank} + {Training Link}
• {C-rank} + {Training Link}
• {B-rank} + {Training Link}
• {A-rank} + {Training Link}
• {S-rank} + {Training Link}
• {S+rank} + {Training Link}
{D-rank Slots}
• {Stage progression / technique learned} + {Training Link}
• {Stage progression / technique learned} + {Training Link}
{C-rank Slots}
• {Stage progression / technique learned} + {Training Link}
• {Stage progression / technique learned} + {Training Link}
{B-rank Slots}
• {Stage progression / technique learned} + {Training Link}
• {Stage progression / technique learned} + {Training Link}
{A-rank Slots}
• {Stage progression / technique learned} + {Training Link}
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• {Stage progression / technique learned} + {Training Link}
• {Stage progression / technique learned} + {Training Link}
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Born and raised in Sunagakure to parents both under the employ of the Kazekage, it was no surprise that he would choose to follow in their footsteps. As soon as he could walk and talk he's been immersing himself in the shinobi world trying to rise to the top. So far his efforts have been fruitful, and he has become one of the new, promising genin likely to ascend the ranks fast.
 
PostPosted: Mon Nov 03, 2014 10:36 am

Desin Slight
Removing both my old inactive characters. Picture to be posted as soon as Photobucket stops being a b***h.


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Full Name: Kaolin Satetsu
Nickname: Kao

Age: 18
Birthdate: Jan. 1
Gender: Male

Height: 6ft 0in
Weight: 177lbs

Nindo: "If it won't fill your stomach or your pockets it isn't worth it."
Personality: Hard-working and reliable, the kind of guy you'd trust to get the job done no matter what, as long as it fills his stomach and pays his bills. One could accuse him of being too simple, of being only after money and food in life and they would be half-correct. His goals in life do include becoming someone wealthy enough to stuff himself obese everyday, but he also does his work due to a sense of love and loyalty for his village and everyone in it.

Matched by his greed and hunger is his being competitive. He makes competitions and rivals out of nearly everything and everyone and this is what makes him constantly strive to better himself, to always be ten steps ahead of other people's ten steps ahead. This is partly due to him being a bit of an attention seeker, also because of it, he can be quite flashy for a ninja (often going overboard in combat, using techniques with the most "wow" factor). He isn't an idiot though, and in serious situations can curb this part of him.
Village: Sunagakure
Rank: Genin
First Class: Bukijutsu
Second Class: Bukijutsu


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Bloodline: Satetsu - Jiton Bloodline Application

Chakra Pool: 250 / 250
Stamina Pool: 250 / 250
Chakra Element: Doton | Raiton | Jiton
Chakra Color: Varies
Chakra Materialization: Varies

Strengths:
• Expert in close quarters combat
• Natural fighting instincts
Weaknesses:
• Over-confidence
• One sided means of fighting (Little bloodline ninjutsu, littler normal ninjutsu, absolutely no genjutsu, all kung-fu and pew-pew)
Fears:
• Growing old
• Being powerless

Class Disciplines :
Mystic Hero: The user is much like a hybrid warrior, focusing on mixing ninjutsu into their personal arsenal. Through their great devotion to this path the user can cast ninjutsu without hand seals while wielding a weapon, D at gennin, C at chunnin, B at Jounin, A at Konin, and S at Sannin. These techniques maintain the same description and criteria to use, as well as require the same amount of time to mold the chakra through the weapon as would be needed to perform hand seals, meaning the techniques are not instantaneously cast. The user’s spirit is so strong, that they can utilize their physical bukijutsu techniques to negate ninjutsu techniques of the same rank or below.
Samurai: You follow Bushidō, the "Way of the Warrior." Your serene mind allows you to detect genjutsu you are trapped within that are two or more ranks below your own status rank, and your tempered body allows you to wear thick armor that a ninja would otherwise be dragged to their knees by. Additionally, you start with the following four (4) techniques, rather than the six (6) most ninja do; Bushi Ken no Jutsu [ Samurai Sabre Technique, ] Shunshin no Jutsu [ Body Flicker Technique, ] Kai [ Release, ] and Kawarimi no Jutsu [ Substitution Technique. ]
Specialization: If this class is chosen as the first and second class, then the user starts with one [1] additional taijutsu and Bukijutsu slot. Superior conditioning allows the user to choose a specific energy cost (stamina or chakra) and reduce the costs of technique activation by 5, to a minimum activation cost of 5. Every time the user ranks up, they repeat this process. Chakra costs reduced by 5.

Reductions:
• Learns bukijutsu techniques two [2] posts faster.
• Satetsu users learn taijutsu and bukijutsu techniques one [1] post slower.
Personal Attributes:
• Balanced workout : Somehow manages to train so rigorously that any of those passive bonuses to a specific area of the body granted from styles now effect the entire body.
• Can learn 1 extra bukijutsu style

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Ryo: 両0
AC: 0

Missions Complete:
D Rank :: 0
C Rank :: 0
B Rank :: 0
A Rank :: 0
S Rank :: 0

Limitations: {How many of each technique you can learn. Refer to class info}
• Ninjutsu : : 00 / 02
• Genjutsu : : 00 / 00
• Taijutsu Styles: : 00 / 01
• Bukijutsu Styles: : 00 / 05

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Weapon Type: Wakizashi
Weapon Range: Hilt: 7.5in | Blade: 17.5in
Weapon Weight: 1.5lbs
Weapon Location: Back


Summoning Type: --
Summon Sage: --
Pacts: --

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• 10 Shuriken (Back pouch)
• 5 Kunai (Other back pouch)

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Maruton:
• Bushi Ken no Jutsu [ Samurai Sabre Technique ]
• Shunshin no Jutsu [ Body Flicker Technique ]
• Kai [ Release ]
• Kawarimi no Jutsu [ Substitution Technique ]




Doton


Raiton


Bloodline - Jiton




















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▬▬┤|B u k i j u t s u

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Hard Physical
• {D-rank} + {Training Link}
• {C-rank} + {Training Link}
• {B-rank} + {Training Link}
• {A-rank} + {Training Link}
• {S-rank} + {Training Link}
• {S+rank} + {Training Link}
{D-rank Slots}
• {Stage progression / technique learned} + {Training Link}
• {Stage progression / technique learned} + {Training Link}
{C-rank Slots}
• {Stage progression / technique learned} + {Training Link}
• {Stage progression / technique learned} + {Training Link}
{B-rank Slots}
• {Stage progression / technique learned} + {Training Link}
• {Stage progression / technique learned} + {Training Link}
{A-rank Slots}
• {Stage progression / technique learned} + {Training Link}
• {Stage progression / technique learned} + {Training Link}
{S-rank Slots}
• {Stage progression / technique learned} + {Training Link}
• {Stage progression / technique learned} + {Training Link}
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Born and raised in Sunagakure to parents both under the employ of the Kazekage, it was no surprise that he would choose to follow in their footsteps. As soon as he could walk and talk he's been immersing himself in the shinobi world trying to rise to the top. So far his efforts have been fruitful, and he has become one of the new, promising genin likely to ascend the ranks fast.



Everything is good but I can not approve with one of the current PA's. With something more reasonable it can work. You could gain that ability for 1 (single) passive from a buki or tai of your choice. But the effects would be halved for the entire body. If that is not what you were after I would resubmit with a different PA.


Codekasu
Resubmitted I needed to change one my PA ^^

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Full Name: Yukari Konan Mitsiyo
Nickname: Yuka,Airi

Age: 16
Birthdate: March 21st
Gender: Female

Height: 5'5
Weight: 109 Lbs

Nindo: "Fight for a better future "
Personality: To put in words Yukari is a very kindhearted girl to the point where she would take on a loved ones suffering or strangers leaving her a bit gullible. She's a bookworm among all and is always seen reading a book whether it be on her free time or during a mission that's not to busy. Despite her peaceful demeanor Yukari is nervous around large groups, crowds and men that try to get to close leaving the teen to hide behind someone she's close too or flee the area. With her rough childhood she still finds time to keep a smile on her face.
Village: Kumo
Rank: Genin
First Class: Bukijutsu
Second Class: Sensor

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Bloodline: Konan (Origami no Dara) x

Chakra Pool: 350
Stamina Pool: 150
Chakra Element: Suiton, Fuuton
Chakra Color: Pinkish pearl
Chakra Materialization: Forms pink butterflies around her.

Strengths:
• All ranged Combat
• reflects
Weaknesses:
• Fire
• Fragile
Fears:
• Jail's, cages
• Large crowds

Class Disciplines :
• Mystic Hero:
The user is much like a hybrid warrior, focusing on mixing ninjutsu into their personal arsenal. Through their great devotion to this path the user can cast ninjutsu without hand seals while wielding a weapon, D at gennin, C at chunnin, B at Jounin, A at Konin, and S at Sannin.


• Oracle: The character, through a special talent given at birth, can naturally sense chakra around them. The user can sense chakra around them up to a 5 yard radius without the use of a sensory technique. This radius is increased by 5 yards every time the user ranks up. Additionally, sensory techniques do not take up ninjutsu technique slots.
Reductions:
• Learn ninjutsu one [1] post faster.
• Learn genjutsu one [1] post faster
• Learn Bukijutsu one (1) post faster.
Personal Attributes:
• Art Show : +1 custom bloodline technique
• The Lefty: Yuka is able to preform jutsu with one hand.


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Ryo: 両 0
AC: 0

Missions Complete:
D Rank :: 0
C Rank :: 0
B Rank :: 0
A Rank :: 0
S Rank :: 0

Limitations:
• Ninjutsu : : 00 / 05
• Genjutsu : : 00 / 04
• Taijutsu Styles: : 00 / 00
• Bukijutsu Styles: : 00 / 02

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Weapon Type: Tanto
Weapon Range: 4 inchs
Weapon Weight: 5 lb
Weapon Location: Side waist

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• Kunai x5
• Senbon x10
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Maruton:
• Henge no Jutsu [ Transformation Technique ]
• Kawarimi no Jutsu [ Substitution Technique ]
• Bushin no Jutsu [ Clone Technique ]
• Suimen Hokou no Waza [ Act of Water Surface Walking ]
• Kinobori no Waza [ Act of Tree Climbing ]
• Kai [ Release ]

Suiton


Fuuton


Origami no Dara


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▬▬┤|T a i j u t s u


• {Stage progression / techniques learned}

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Yukari was raised outside kiri with in a small village that had been filled with gambling and unfriendly like people. As a little girl her father Fujitara never payed much attention to her and was quick to sell any scrap of her belongings for money. Her mother Yuuki was somewhat the same but she would tell her all kinds of stories like of their first daughter they had left behind and promised it wouldn't happen to her. When Yukari turned eight things went down hill with the loss of her mother due to a illness her father couldn't come up with money to pay off his debt to a bandit lord outside the land of water so he sold Yukari to them which lead to more problems. She spent seven years serving under rouge's, bandits .On one fatal night herself and a group of other broke free of their cages and tried to escape only Yukari made it out but with the cost of losing her right arm. She fainted due to a large amount of blood loss and when she came too, the teen awakened five months later inside a hospital. The nurse that took care of her in formed Yukari that she was with in Kumogakure. safety but under watch. Yukari spent a year under watch as she attended the villages ninja academy after learning her older sibling lived here. Wanting to prove herself to this sibling Yukari passed and became a Genin.



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