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Posted: Mon Sep 02, 2013 7:35 pm
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Posted: Mon Sep 02, 2013 7:38 pm
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ken-faita Azeiel The Fallen Toryu approved unless someone has any problems with it. Chin. I'm sorry but I'm going to differ to wolfe on this one as both seem to be a bit much as they change the fundimental rulea of the boodline. Not to be bothersome... but could you look at mine, both the people after me got looked at, but it seems my profile was missed...
Alright well to be quite honest your attributes wouldnt do you much good unless your fighting a good quality rp-er. As most people just do jutsu in like two tenths of a second. I mean i can approve it but ya know just heads up XD |
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Posted: Mon Sep 02, 2013 11:28 pm
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▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|ρ є r ѕ σ η α ℓ • ∂ α т α|├▬
Full Name: Haituro Hari
Nickname: Haituro
Age: 14
Birthdate: April 22nd
Gender: Male
Height: 6'
Weight: 170lbs
Nindo: "I will never leave a comrade behind!"
Personality: Calm, cool, collected
Village: Kumogakure
Rank: Genin
First Class: Genjutsu
Second Class: Bloodline
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Bloodline: Hari
Chakra Pool: 375
Stamina Pool: 145
Chakra Element: Earth and Fire
Chakra Color: Silver
Chakra Materialization: chakra seems to reflect sunlight
Strengths:
• Fast hand signs
• Genjutsu
Weaknesses:
• Taijutsu
• Bukijutsu
Fears:
• Lonliness
• Falling
Class Disciplines :
• Inception: The user's genjutsu prowess has increased the sheer power of the genjutsu, making them act a rank higher then they are (up to S rank). This increases the Kai cost for an opponent.
• Thoroughbred: Your maximum chakra pool and maximum stamina pool are both increased by {10} points, and you receive an additional {05} points to each pool whenever you rank up. Additionally, when you perform bloodline techniques above Rank D, you are refunded {05} chakra or {05} stamina, depending on which energy was used. ( If chakra was used, you recover chakra; if stamina was used, you recover stamina; if both were used, you recover both. )
Reductions:
• Learn bloodline techniques one post faster.
• Learn Genjutsu techniques one post faster.
Personal Attributes:
• Mental Alacrity: Decreases the amount of posts it requires to learn a genjutsu by 1 post.
• Reflective: Haituro does not cast a shadow on the ground making him difficult to detect while hiding.
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Ryo: 両 0
AC: 0
Missions Complete:
D Rank :: 0
C Rank :: 0
B Rank :: 0
A Rank :: 0
S Rank :: 0
Limitations:
• Ninjutsu : : 02 / 08
• Genjutsu : : 00 / 10
• Taijutsu Styles: : 00 / 01
• Bukijutsu Styles: : 00 / 01
• Custom styles: 01/08
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Weapon Type: Kunai
Weapon Range: 76.2 cm (An arms length)
Weapon Weight: .5 lbs
Weapon Location: hilt on arm
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• 10 shuriken
• 5 Kunai
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Maruton:
• Henge no Jutsu [ Transformation Technique ]
• Kawarimi no Jutsu [ Substitution Technique ]
• Bushin no Jutsu [ Clone Technique ]
• Suimen Hokou no Waza [ Act of Water Surface Walking ]
• Kinobori no Waza [ Act of Tree Climbing ]
• Kai [ Release ]
•Doton
•Shinjuu Zanshu no Jutsu [ Double Suicide Decapitation Technique ] :: Rank D x
•Rikujou Douyou no jutsu (Ground shaking technique) :: Rank D x
•Katon
•Bloodline
• Garasu Bunshin No Jutsu (Glass clone technique) :: Rank C x
•Garasu Shuriken (Glass Shuriken) :: Rank C x
• Garasu Subeta no jutsu (Glass sword technique) :: Rank C x
• Garasu Ni-Doru no jutsu (Glass needles technique) :: Rank B x
• Garasu Shouheki no jutsu (Glass barrier technique):: Rank B x
• Garasu Yoroi no jutsu (Glass armor technique) :: Rank B x
▬▬┤|G e n j u t s u
• Ushinaware ai no kaigame [Mirror of lost love] :: Rank B :: Custom x
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Born and raised in Kumogakure Haituro made his way through the academy with flying colors. Although he is the only Hari clan member known at the moment his prowess appears to give him a lot of potential. Being the only member of the Hari he is fairly lonely. His personality makes him popular with females although he isn't very out going he doesn't seem to show much interest in them. He just recently graduated from the academy and is waiting on his first mission so he can continue his training on his way to becoming a genjutsu master. He has aspirations of one day becoming raikage and bringing peace to the 5 great nations.
Blood line approval.
Re-submission for approval (Changed 1 word in personal attributes to make the attribute not useless) Changed Activate -> Learn |
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Posted: Tue Sep 03, 2013 3:59 am
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Azeiel The Fallen ken-faita Azeiel The Fallen Toryu approved unless someone has any problems with it. Chin. I'm sorry but I'm going to differ to wolfe on this one as both seem to be a bit much as they change the fundimental rulea of the boodline. Not to be bothersome... but could you look at mine, both the people after me got looked at, but it seems my profile was missed... Yea I can take care of it. Alright well to be quite honest your attributes wouldnt do you much good unless your fighting a good quality rp-er. As most people just do jutsu in like two tenths of a second. I mean i can approve it but ya know just heads up XD
Ok so could I make one of them where I just perform jutsu using one hand sign? at least then I should be able to do it just a tad faster than two tenths of a second haha, I will make another one besides that one as well, just refund five chakra on every jutsu or something. |
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Posted: Tue Sep 03, 2013 5:18 pm
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▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|ρ є r ѕ σ η α ℓ • ∂ α т α|├▬
Full Name: Lilly Pond
Nickname: The Flash, Tiny.
Age: 16
Birthdate: 29/6
Gender: Female
Height: 5'0"
Weight: 100lbs
Nindo: "I can't believe I ate the whole thing."
Personality: Happy go lucky, energetic and somewhat hyper from time to time. Lilly is a clingy and touchy feely kind of person who tends to occasionally crave the attention of the people she cares about. She is extremely intelligent and learns things quickly. Having had an interest in medicine and anatomy from a young age she is generally a likable woman. She is also Scottish with a thick accent. People occasionally have trouble understanding her when she talks quickly and she has a habit of swearing a lot.
Village: Otogakure
Rank: Genin
First Class: Taijutsu
Second Class: Medical
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Bloodline: Speed release. [Applying]
Chakra Pool: 250
Stamina Pool: 250
Chakra Element: Wind
Chakra Color: Blue and white
Chakra Materialization: Scottish flag appearing behind her as if in smoke.
Strengths:
• Intelligence
• Close combat
Weaknesses:
• Strength
• Small size
Fears:
• *****
• Sheep
Class Disciplines :
• Brawler: Your taijutsu is just one side of your skill, as you are also versed in utilizing ninjutsu as well. Your taijutsu body vastly increases your flexibility and reflexes, while at the same time granting you an additional 2 ninjutsu techniques per level, then an extra 4 ninjutsu per rank after jounin.
• Specialist: The user, choosing to specialize in either healing or harmful medical techniques, gains a great boost to their chakra control in that area. At Chunnin, they gain a -5 chakra reduction to perform techniques in their specialty. at Jounin, -10, at Konin -15 at Sannin -20. To clarify, they they gain a -5 chakra reduction every rank, to a maximum of -20 at sannin.
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Personal Attributes:
• Lilly is capable of learning an extra Taijutsu style from Genin.
• Lilly is capable of learning an extra Bukijutsu style from Genin.
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Ryo:
AC:
Missions Complete:
D Rank :: 0
C Rank :: 0
B Rank :: 0
A Rank :: 0
S Rank :: 0
Limitations:
• Ninjutsu : : 06 / 00
• Genjutsu : : 03 / 00
• Taijutsu Styles: : 03 / 00
• Bukijutsu Styles: : 01 / 00
• Eisei jutsu : 08 / 00
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Weapon Type: Wakazashi.
Weapon Range: 2 1/2 foot.
Weapon Weight: 1lb
Weapon Location:
• Upon the left hip.
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Maruton: {Start with the following six only}
• Henge no Jutsu [ Transformation Technique ]
• Kawarimi no Jutsu [ Substitution Technique ]
• Bushin no Jutsu [ Clone Technique ]
• Suimen Hokou no Waza [ Act of Water Surface Walking ]
• Kinobori no Waza [ Act of Tree Climbing ]
• Kai [ Release ]
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Lilly is from a far away country on another continent. Her travels to this land brought about by an interest in learning about other cultures as well as making diverse friends. Upon her arrival she didn't find any of the other villages to be to her liking. And then she found Otogakure. A village full of people like her who had nowhere to go. She enrolled in the academy and quickly became fast friends with Artemis Sandetsetsu. Or Arty as she preferred to call her, much to the womans chagrin. She has become a familiar face around the village in practically no time. |
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Posted: Wed Sep 04, 2013 9:40 pm
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Full Name: Natsuki Senju
Nickname: The Suna Oasis
Age: 21
Birthdate: Feb 25
Gender: Female
Height: 5'8"
Weight: 100
Nindo: " "I have no interest in whether it is right or wrong. All I care about is executing orders as a shinobi. All who get in my way are my enemies and all enemies must be slain. That is all that matters. "
Personality: Natsuki is staunchly loyal, firm, and unbending in her beliefs. She is a hard worker and takes a strong moral stance — she particularly believes in following orders. She is generally reserved and truly not arrogant in any manner, though she is not above mocking/joking around with her opponents or smirking while in combat. She will not hesitate in the slightest to strike down even her subordinates if they stand in her way. She chooses to ignore all her subordinates in combat , only intervening upon their imminent death, believing that personal struggle builds character. Natsuki is a person of incredible resolve, not hesitating to do whatever it takes to complete a mission and defeat her enemy. Very rarely will she show signs of desperation or emotion on the battlefield. Despite her cold demeanor she displays a certain level of faith in those that she leads often trusting them to act in her stead.
Village: Sunagakure
Rank: Genin
First Class: Medic
Second Class: Medic
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Bloodline:Senju/Mokuton
Chakra Pool: 720
Stamina Pool: 100
Chakra Element: Suiton, Doton
Chakra Color: Magenta
Chakra Materialization: When her chakra materializes her body gives off a faint magenta glow.
Strengths:
• Analysis
• Poison Creation
Weaknesses:
• Low physical strength
• Insatiable Curiosity
Fears:
• Making Speeches
• Letting someone die because she wasnt a good enough medic.
Class Disciplines :
• Efficiency Expert: For every rank the user increases, they can choose 1 medical technique and perform it at half the cost, to a minimum of 5 chakra. Gennin can only choose techniques D rank and lower, Chuunin C rank and lower, Jounin B rank and lower, and Konin is A rank and lower. You may only at one time, only have 1 half cost technique per rank. To clarify, you may only have 1 D, 1 C, 1 B, 1 A.
• Medical license: The user is much more adept at utilizing items during combat. The user gains 2 free custom items, one at Chunnin and one at jounin. These items must be associated and utilized medical abilities. Additionally, they gain a -5 chakra cost to all techniques.
Reductions:
• All Mokuton users are able to learn Doton [ Earth ] and Suiton [ Water ] ninjutsu one [1] post faster.
• Learns Eiseijutsu two [2] posts faster.(class)
• Learns bloodline jutsu [2] posts faster (personal)
• Learns genjutsu one [1] post SLOWER (personal)
Bloodline Traits:
• All Mokuton users have Doton [ Earth ] and Suiton [ Water ] as chakra elements.
• All Mokuton users are able to learn Doton [ Earth ] and Suiton [ Water ] ninjutsu one [1] post faster.
• All Mokuton have incredibly deep chakra pools. [ Chakra pool maximum +320 ]
• All Mokuton techniques have a weakness to Katon [ Fire ], & grow uncontrollably when around users of the Nine-Tails Chakra Mode.
• The Senju Clan is highly susceptible to the Moulding Mushroom and its effects.
• No handsigns are needed for Eiseijutsu usage if of that class.
Personal Attributes:
• Master Surgeon: Transplants performed by Natsuki work slightly better than others, allowing for a more cohesive attachment to the new host. As such, the sustain requirements for Awoken Stage [1] is 500 active chakra, and Awoken Stage [2] is 1,000 active chakra. Implants performed by Natsuki into herself do not gain this. Those having the implant done into or on them gain the attribute 'Skilled Implantation', which confers the new sustain requirements. However this cannot stack with the reduction granted by the Hatake bloodline. (approved by AandOE)
• Versatile Learner: Natsuki can learn her bloodline jutsu two posts[2] faster but this dedication to her blood leaves other areas lacking, learns genjutsu one post [+1] slower.
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Ryo: 両
AC:
Missions Complete:
D Rank :: 0
C Rank :: 0
B Rank :: 0
A Rank :: 0
S Rank :: 0
Limitations: {How many of each technique you can learn. Refer to class info}
• Ninjutsu : : 00 / 06
• Genjutsu : : 00 / 06
• Eiseijutsu : : 00 / 16
• Taijutsu Styles: : 00 / 00
• Bukijutsu Styles: : 00 / 00
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• Kunai: 10
• Shuriken: 10
• Explosive Tags: 7
• Smoke Bombs: 3
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• Henge no Jutsu [ Transformation Technique ]
• Kawarimi no Jutsu [ Substitution Technique ]
• Bushin no Jutsu [ Clone Technique ]
• Suimen Hokou no Waza [ Act of Water Surface Walking ]
• Kinobori no Waza [ Act of Tree Climbing ]
• Kai [ Release ]
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Natsuki was born to Anya and Nariomi Senju in an Inn on February 25th, making her a pure blooded Senju. When she was barely 2 years old a UHV general tracked Nariomi down, killed him, and captured Anya and Natsuki. The two became subject to numerous experiments at the hands of the General and the UHV as they researched the Senju bloodline.
Nine years later, She and her mother escaped the UHV research facility, but her mother was wounded and only made it as far as the gates in the slums of the city before she collapsed. A female shinobi named Bast was there though her reasons were her own, Her mother begged her to keep Natsuki safe, and she agreed. For years she raised Natsuki alone as her adopted daughter in Sunagakure . As Natsuki grew up she continued to try and understand why her family was targeted and why she was used as a test subject. These events naturally pushed her to refining her knowledge of medicine and understanding of science. Viewing Bast as her mother and her own personal debt to her caused Natsuki to develop an unwavering loyalty to the village and her as a result. |
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Posted: Wed Sep 04, 2013 10:23 pm
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Posted: Thu Sep 05, 2013 4:44 pm
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Posted: Thu Sep 05, 2013 8:39 pm
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Grand Chevalier Haji ken-faita I am sorry to bother you again, but you never responded. So I changed my profile attributes. I form a single handseal for jutsu (you said everyone does jutsu in a second anyways, so if it is a waisted slot, then so be it.) And a 5 chakra refund per jutsu. Just ninjutsu/bloodline jutsu, since those are my characters classes, anything else seems unfair. So is my profile approved? No, you can only do it with one specific thing . Ex: Katon, Genjutsu, Bloodline jutsu ,Taijutsu That's the way everyone else has had to do it. Ninjutsu is not acceptable since that covers a wide variety of things.
Ok, I switched it to Bloodline. |
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Posted: Thu Sep 05, 2013 9:51 pm
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ken-faita Grand Chevalier Haji ken-faita I am sorry to bother you again, but you never responded. So I changed my profile attributes. I form a single handseal for jutsu (you said everyone does jutsu in a second anyways, so if it is a waisted slot, then so be it.) And a 5 chakra refund per jutsu. Just ninjutsu/bloodline jutsu, since those are my characters classes, anything else seems unfair. So is my profile approved? No, you can only do it with one specific thing . Ex: Katon, Genjutsu, Bloodline jutsu ,Taijutsu That's the way everyone else has had to do it. Ninjutsu is not acceptable since that covers a wide variety of things. Ok, I switched it to Bloodline.
Ok good, I noticed one last discrepancy. You have too many projectiles listed in you inventory you can only have a total of 15 also wire and explosives notes arenot projectiles please remove those. Then it is accepted. |
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