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Motherglare

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PostPosted: Tue Aug 27, 2013 6:34 pm
Panda King Tai-tai Grim

Approved after the fixes!  
PostPosted: Tue Aug 27, 2013 9:09 pm
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                                                    _______________Yoinome
                                                    [ Yoi :: Ten :: Female :: 4’ :: 70lbs. :: Otogakure :: Oni :: Taijutsu Specialization ]

                                                    Genin :: 000 AC /// 両 000 Ryo
                                                    ____000 :: D Rank Mssions
                                                    ____000 :: C Rank Missions
                                                    ____000 :: B Rank Missions
                                                    ____000 :: A Rank Missions
                                                    ____000 :: S Rank Missions

                                                    ____ 100 Chakra :: 400 Stamina
                                                    ____ Suiton and Doton
                                                    ____ Red-White Chakra
                                                    ____ Chakra aura causes Yoinome’s skin reddens slightly and she begins to exhale steam on deep breaths
                                                    ____ Incredible strength and proficiency in taijutsu
                                                    ____ Inefficient against long-range fighters
                                                    ____ Yoinome fears that the image of her clan will be tarnished and/or forgotten

                                                    ____D i s c i p l i n e s
                                                    Berserker :: Your external training and devotion to taijutsu has allowed your attacks to have great strength, speed, and power behind them, making them overwhelm physical taijutsu techniques of the same rank or lower. Additionally, your hardened body allows you to defend against ninjutsu attacks 2 ranks lower than a physical taijutsu defensive technique, taking little to no damage from it, and defend against ninjutsu attacks 1 rank below a complex taijutsu defensive technique unharmed.
                                                    Brawler :: Your taijutsu is just one side of your skill, as you are also versed in utilizing ninjutsu as well. Your taijutsu body vastly increases your flexibility and reflexes, while at the same time granting you an additional 2 ninjutsu techniques per level, then an extra 4 ninjutsu per rank after jounin.

                                                    ____R e d u c t i o n s
                                                    N/A :: N/A

                                                    ____C l a n _ A t t r i b u t e s
                                                    Oni Clan :: The Oni are physically durable. ( Able to take more of a beating than normal humans. )
                                                    Oni Clan :: The Oni are Katon [ fire ] resistant. ( Although they take damage from fire ninjutsu, they are not offset by the impact. )

                                                    ____P e r s o n a l _ A t t r i b u t e s
                                                    Shotline :: After using a taijutsu or bloodline technique that is above D-Rank, Yoi is refunded five chakra or stamina.
                                                    Born Brawler :: Yoi is able to ignore body-type requirements when learning a taijutsu style.

                                                    ____L i m i t a t i o n s
                                                    00 // 04 :: Ninjutsu
                                                    00 // 00 :: Genjutsu
                                                    00 // 05 :: Taijutsu
                                                    00 // 00 :: Bukijutsu

                                                    Techniques
                                                    ____B l o o d l i n e _ T e c h n i q u e s
                                                    ____The Oni Clan - Drunken Demon
                                                    ▪ Skill Ranking :: Skill Name
                                                    ▪ Skill Ranking :: Skill Name
                                                    ▪ Skill Ranking :: Skill Name

                                                    ____N i n j u t s u _ T e c h n i q u e s
                                                    ____Maruton
                                                    ▪ E Rank :: Henge no Jutsu [ Transformation Technique ]
                                                    ▪ E Rank :: Kawarimi no Jutsu [ Substitution Technique ]
                                                    ▪ E Rank :: Bushin no Jutsu [ Clone Technique ]
                                                    ▪ E Rank :: Suimen Hokou no Waza [ Act of Water Surface Walking ]
                                                    ▪ E Rank :: Kinobori no Waza [ Act of Tree Climbing ]
                                                    ▪ E Rank :: Kai [ Release ]

                                                    ____Suiton
                                                    ▪ Skill Ranking :: Skill Name
                                                    ▪ Skill Ranking :: Skill Name
                                                    ▪ Skill Ranking :: Skill Name

                                                    ____Doton
                                                    ▪ Skill Ranking :: Skill Name
                                                    ▪ Skill Ranking :: Skill Name
                                                    ▪ Skill Ranking :: Skill Name

                                                    ____T a i j u t s u _ S t y l e
                                                    ____Style Name
                                                    ▪ Skill Ranking :: Skill Name
                                                    ▪ Skill Ranking :: Skill Name
                                                    ▪ Skill Ranking :: Skill Name

                                                    Inventory
                                                    ____O t h e r
                                                    ▪ 10 :: Shuriken
                                                    ▪ 05 :: Kunai



 

Desshu

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PostPosted: Wed Aug 28, 2013 8:29 pm
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Full Name: Yukito kaede Hoshiyo
Nickname: Yukito.

Age: 15
Birthdate: During the first full moon of fall.
Gender: Male

Height: 5 foot 12 inches
Weight: 134 lbs

Nindo: "Don't let my outfit fool you, I'm not in to praying."
Personality: Sadistic tendencies, he is always trying to be nice and calm but the way he thinks is horrible.

Village: Otogakure
Rank: Genin
First Class: Bloodline
Second Class: Puppeteer

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Bloodline: Hakemoto Clan (Already Approved)

Chakra Pool: 355
Stamina Pool: 145
Chakra Element: Doton and Raiton
Chakra Materialization: It appears as a gentle yet warning breeze of cold air.

Strengths:
• Born as a Hakemoto ( Actuall Bloodline )
• Unknown range in combat. ( Bukijustu slot / Puppeteer class )
Weaknesses:
• Katon ( Against his puppets if made of wood )
• Sadism ( He is sadistic and insane )
Fears:
• No children for the future
• Going back to the village that he escaped.

Class Disciplines :
• Blood Bender ( Bloodline )
• Architect [ Puppeteer ]
Reductions:
• Learn bloodline techniques one (1) post faster ( Bloodline )
Personal Attributes:
• Learns Bukijustu 1 post faster
• Is Beautiful

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Ryo: 両0
AC: 0

Missions Complete:
D Rank :: 0
C Rank :: 0
B Rank :: 0
A Rank :: 0
S Rank :: 0

Limitations: {How many of each technique you can learn. Refer to class info}
• Ninjutsu : : 00 / 06
• Genjutsu : : 00 / 04
• Taijutsu Styles: : 00 / 01
• Bukijutsu Styles: : 00 / 01
• Kugutsu : : 00 / 07

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Weapon Type: Bow
Weapon Range: Medium range
Weapon Weight: Not too heavy or too light.
Weapon Location: On his back with a quiver
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Summoning Type: N?A
Summon Sage: No.
Pacts: N/A

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• Normal shinobi equipment
• Normal.

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▬▬┤|N i n j u t s u

Maruton: {Start with the following six only}
• Henge no Jutsu [ Transformation Technique ]
• Kawarimi no Jutsu [ Substitution Technique ]
• Bushin no Jutsu [ Clone Technique ]
• Suimen Hokou no Waza [ Act of Water Surface Walking ]
• Kinobori no Waza [ Act of Tree Climbing ]
• Kai [ Release ]

Doton Earth


Raiton Lightning


Hakemoto Bloodline


Kugustu Puppeteer



▬▬┤|G e n j u t s u



▬▬┤|T a i j u t s u

Mirror Image 'Art of Chakra'


▬▬┤|B u k i j u t s u

Kyoukan Ya 'Art of The Bow'


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Yukito was born to an average family of man and women, they lived outside a village's reign but within its country borders. The parents were outlaws, thieves and good ones too, the village of Kirigakure was a usual target of theirs until the village's kage killed the husband during a break-in to his house. The kage never knew this thief was the husband or even that he was wanted for many thieving crimes. He found out later and rage overtook the kage so he went to kill the family and reclaim a stolen sword. Yukito was young when his mother died at the hands of the kage and he was taken prisoner; the kage refused to kill a child but he tortured the child for years until his escape from Kiri's prisons. He managed to steal a dagger before leaving, wandering the other countries to be free and stay that way. He was fifteen when a strange man found him beaten up and dragged by bandits, the man saved his life and healed the child before telling him of otogakure, a village just for rogues. Yukito refused at the time, saying he didn't trust anyone but himself but he did thank the man before he left. Now Yukito wants a real home so he has come to Otogakure to see if what the man told him was true...


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PostPosted: Wed Aug 28, 2013 9:21 pm
@Death Alright your profile is ALMOST good. But I cant approve that second personal attribute you have.

@Minty please define your second attribute a bit better please it doesnt make much sense.  

Azeiel The Risen

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PostPosted: Sat Aug 31, 2013 4:32 pm
Death~The~Spice~of~Life
First Personal: Chose either bloodline or taijutsu, and chose chakra or stamina
Example: After using a bloodline technique that is above D-Rank, Yoi is refunded five chakra

You other personal is fine as long as you realize that Rigourus styles are not body restrictions. But more so difficulty restrictions. and will not be covered under your personal.


little mintchan
Second attribute: Means only that HE is beautiful? if thats all then its approved.


Ghost of 10th Mountain
Second attribute denied, runs closely to metagaming and autoknowing. Its more like a jutsu than anything else. And it's like gaara's sand where it comes up to protect you automatically.
 
PostPosted: Sun Sep 01, 2013 6:42 am
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Full Name: Ken Awai Nagadera
Nickname: Ken

Age: 14
Birthdate: Feb. 11th
Gender: Male

Height: 5'8"
Weight: 135

Nindo: "The world breaks everyone, only the strong rise up again."
Personality: Ken is a very excitable person. He enjoys learning and discovering new things, especially when this discovery is not easily achieved. He is someone who looks at a challenge with relish. Ken often times tries to do things that harder way, simply for the enjoyment of overcoming an obstacle. He is someone who loves the idea of training and giving one hundred percent of his effort one hundred percent of the time. Ken does, however, take certain things very seriously. Often times, in battle, Ken changes his rather childish demeanor for a much more focused one. He loves the thought of finding an opponent who challenges him in new ways, especially one who could even potentially defeat him, and create a new goal for him to eventually try and overcome.

Village: Otogakure
Rank: Genin
First Class: Ninjutsu
Second Class: Bloodline

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Bloodline: Koton [Light Release]

Chakra Pool: 425
Stamina Pool: 145
Chakra Element: Fire, Lightning
Chakra Color: Golden Yellow
Chakra Materialization: A golden aura that surrounds Ken, and stays close to his body.
Strengths:
• Elemental ninjutsu
• Bloodline techniques
Weaknesses:
• Darkness (weakens bloodline jutsu)
• Genjutsu
Fears:
• Sharks
• Dying young.

Class Disciplines :
• Elemental Dual Wielder: Your maximum chakra pool is increased by {10} points. The ninjutsu limit provided by this class is split amongst both of your chosen elements. ( At genin rank, rather than having a total of [ 06 ] ninjutsu slots for Katon or Suiton techniques, this class provides you with [ 06 ] slots for both Katon and Suiton techniques. Any ninjutsu slots received from other sources are filled at your discretion. )
• Blood Knight: Your bloodline techniques possess greater power, allowing them to overwhelm techniques of the same rank, and preventing them from succumbing to elemental weaknesses of techniques the same rank.
Reductions:
• Learn ninjutsu one (1) post faster.
• Learn bloodline techniques one (1) post faster.
Personal Attributes:
• Efficiency: Ken can perform ninjutsu/bloodline techniques using a single hand seal
• Control: Ken's chakra control is so great that he is refunded 5 chakra on every Bloodline jutsu he uses that is above D-rank.

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Ryo: 両 0
AC: 0

Missions Complete:
D Rank :: 0
C Rank :: 0
B Rank :: 0
A Rank :: 0
S Rank :: 0

Limitations:
• Ninjutsu : : 00 / 010 (per element)
• Genjutsu : : 00 / 03
• Taijutsu Styles: : 00 / 01
• Bukijutsu Styles: : 00 / 01

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Weapon Type: N/A (for now)
Weapon Range:
Weapon Weight:
Weapon Location:


Summoning Type: N/A (For now)
Summon Sage:
Pacts:

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• 10x Shuriken
• 15x Kunai


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▬▬┤|N i n j u t s u

Maruton: {Start with the following six only}
• Henge no Jutsu [ Transformation Technique ]
• Kawarimi no Jutsu [ Substitution Technique ]
• Bushin no Jutsu [ Clone Technique ]
• Suimen Hokou no Waza [ Act of Water Surface Walking ]
• Kinobori no Waza [ Act of Tree Climbing ]
• Kai [ Release ]

Katon


Raiton


Bloodline


▬▬┤|T a i j u t s u

{Style name here}
• {Stage progression / techniques learned}

▬▬┤|B u k i j u t s u

{Style name here}
• {Stage progression / techniques learned}

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Ken was born in Otogakure. His mother raised him a lone, being one of the members of their clan to actually choose to join a military village. He lived there with his mother for all of his childhood, where she told him the history of their clan. At about the age of 10 his mother passed away and he lived there with a close family friend while he attended the academy. In a few short years Ken successfully graduated the academy, and has now become a genin.
 

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The Committee Staff Mage

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PostPosted: Sun Sep 01, 2013 3:31 pm
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Full Name: Baldr and Freja
Nickname: Silence & Whisper
Age: 20
Birthdate: january 1993
Gender: Male (Silence) & female (whisper)

Height: 5foot 6
Weight: 120 pounds

Nindo: " a mask, hides beauty"
Personality: Silence is a natural follower, he wishes to do his master (or kage) proud. He would follow any order to the end: Loyal, careing, full of respect
Whisper on the other hand, wants power, would step on her own mother for it: rutheless,angry, full of pride

Village: The Sound
Rank: Genin
First Class: Taijutsu
Second Class: Musician

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Bloodline: Sōma no Kō : Attack of an Evil Spirit Pair

Chakra Pool: 365
Stamina Pool: 215
Chakra Element: Wind & Fire
Chakra Color: green
Chakra Materialization: Flames growing on the flesh

Strengths:
• close combat fighting
• team work
Weaknesses:
• ranged fighting
• can be distracted (can enter an argument with twin over way of doing things )
Fears:
• small spaces
• Deep water

Class Disciplines :
• Beserker
•Picture painter
Reductions:
• None

Personal Attributes:
• Splitting takes half a post to complete
• Both ninja both know how to play any instrument they can pick up

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Ryo: 両 0
AC: 0

Missions Complete:
D Rank :: 0
C Rank :: 0
B Rank :: 0
A Rank :: 0
S Rank :: 0

Limitations:
• Ninjutsu : : 00 / 04
• Genjutsu : : 00 / 03
• Taijutsu Styles: : 00 / 02
• Bukijutsu Styles: : 00 / 00

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Weapon Type: 2 sets (one for each person) bladed knuckle duster (as Asuma uses)
Weapon Range: far as my arm (plus 5 inches for the blade)
Weapon Weight: Irrelevent (to light to matter)
Weapon Location:
• in a pouch on my thighs.


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•15 kunai (simple)

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▬▬┤|N i n j u t s u

Maruton: {Start with the following six only}
• Henge no Jutsu [ Transformation Technique ]
• Kawarimi no Jutsu [ Substitution Technique ]
• Bushin no Jutsu [ Clone Technique ]
• Suimen Hokou no Waza [ Act of Water Surface Walking ]
• Kinobori no Waza [ Act of Tree Climbing ]
• Kai [ Release ]

Katon


Fuuton


Sōma no Kō : Attack of an Evil Spirit Pair (applying for)




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Not much is known about Silence and Whisper. They are one of the few members remaining in their clan. All that is known about these two, is that they spent their growing years exploring, never staying in any town or village for long. On the way, they started to collect a vast array of instruments, each either hand made, found, won or paid for, from traveling merchants. The twins, attempting to keep their identity secret, traveled by night, and kept their faces hidden, for they have a dark history.

while growing up, Silence got into a fight with a schoolfriend, and Whisper wouldn't back down. The people used to say that the twins were demons, about how they shouldn't be able to combine. So Whisper, beleiving that if they are called demons, they might as well act like it, strangled the bully. That evening, after the body was discovered, the father of the bully set the house ablaze, the parents, after hearing off what happened, left the children to burn. They escaped, but whisper was baddly burned. After this, they both left their village, and began to explore. Both with masks on, Whisper, to hide her burns, and Silence, to save her from feeling the odd one out. The twins have never returned to the Mist vilage. They joined the sound resently, and here their story begins.
 
PostPosted: Sun Sep 01, 2013 6:58 pm
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Full Name: Artemis Sandetsetsu
Nickname: none yet, but would like one!


Age: 15
Birthdate: June 17th
Gender: Female

Height: 5 ft 6
Weight: 7 stone 4 ounces

Nindo: "Watch the clouds, your death will come from there."
Personality: A normal teenager, interested in romantic notions and shiny objects. She always has her falcon ivory on her shoulder unless shes in the air, in which case they cover each other fairly well. She seems normal in a lot of respects except she has a slightly weak will. She learns very quickly however, being a little bit of a book worm. Her temper is fairly slow but if you push the right buttons, as with most people you will get a response. She has a natural aptitude for the bow she carries and has fine attention to detail, earning her the right to come into the medical field.

Village: Otogakure
Rank: Genin
First Class: Medical
Second Class: Tamer

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Bloodline: Power: +2 PA, +25 chakra/stamina a rank


Chakra Pool:325
Stamina Pool: 200
Chakra Element: Lightning, Earth ( Partner: Fire and Wind )
Chakra Color: Pink!
Chakra Materialization: Slowly falls like feathers on the wind.

Strengths:
• Falconry is pretty much a lost art. So its not likely to be expected.
• Ranged combat
Weaknesses:
• Stamina is a bit low it seems.
• Somewhat weak willed
Fears:
• Large Feline type things
• Tentacle Monsters

Class Disciplines :
• Efficiency Expert: For every rank the user increases, they can choose 1 medical technique and perform it at half the cost, to a minimum of 5 chakra. Gennin can only choose techniques D rank and lower, Chuunin C rank and lower, Jounin B rank and lower, and Konin is A rank and lower. You may only at one time, only have 1 half cost technique per rank. To clarify, you may only have 1 D, 1 C, 1 B, 1 A.

• Eternal Partners: The user is able to nurture, grow, and bond with a single animal, almost becoming an animal themselves with traits, characteristics, and natural weaponry. This single animal will be exactly the same at the user's level in chakra and stamina pool, and able to manipulate any two elements, perform 3 activations a post (max of 2 offensive), and gaining +8 jutsu slots a rank.. For every rank the user increases, they can claim a trait associated with their chosen animal (communicate with species, natural weaponry, senses, ect) to be approved in the custom jutsu thread, and add it to their character.
Reductions:
• Learn Medical techniques one (1) post faster.

Personal Attributes:
• Archery: Gains one [Bukijutsu] style ((Try and guess which one!))
• Old Castle: Any negative effects from various techniques lose one post in their duration. (Minimum of 1 post )
• Combat Focus Longbow: All bows she uses are considered to have double the draw weight as listed, making her bow hit harder and ammunition fly faster than other bows.
• Hunter: Hunter: Ability to actively suppress her chakra if shes not moving This is to say she can hide from sensors and the like if immobile.



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Pet name: Ivory Sandetsetsu
Pet Species: Peregrine Falcon
Pet Gender: Female
Personality Ivory is a very aggressive bird, seeing Ivory as her long time partner. They are pretty much inseparable, and if someone were to try and touch her, the bird defends her like a wild one would defend its nest. The hawk in question lives up to its historical nature in flight, surpassing the vast majority of animals, only hawks of the same species passing up her speed.

Species Information: Known historically as the Duck Hawk in North America, is a widespread bird of prey in the family Falconidae. A large, crow-sized falcon, it has a blue-grey back, barred white underparts, and a black head and "moustache". As is typical of bird-eating raptors, Peregrine Falcons are sexually dimorphic, females being considerably larger than males. The Peregrine is renowned for its speed, reaching over 322 km/h (200 mph) during its characteristic hunting stoop (high speed dive), making it the fastest member of the animal kingdom. According to a National Geographic TV program, the highest measured speed of a Peregrine Falcon is 389 km/h (242 mph).

The Peregrine Falcon has a body length of 34 to 58 centimetres (13–23 in) and a wingspan from 74 to 120 centimetres (29–47 in). The male and female have similar markings and plumage, but as in many birds of prey the Peregrine Falcon displays marked reverse sexual dimorphism in size, with the female measuring up to 30% larger than the male. Males weigh 424 to 750 grams (0.93–1.7 lb) and the noticeably larger females weigh 910 to 1,500 grams (2.0–3.3 lb). The standard linear measurements of Peregrines are: the wing chord measures 26.5–39 cm (10.4–15 in), the tail measures 13–19 cm (5.1–7.5 in) and the tarsus measures 4.5 to 5.6 cm (1.8 to 2.2 in).
The back and the long pointed wings of the adult are usually bluish black to slate grey with indistinct darker barring (see "Subspecies" below); the wingtips are black. The white to rusty underparts are barred with thin clean bands of dark brown or black. The tail, coloured like the back but with thin clean bars, is long, narrow, and rounded at the end with a black tip and a white band at the very end. The top of the head and a "moustache" along the cheeks are black, contrasting sharply with the pale sides of the neck and white throat. The cere is yellow, as are the feet, and the beak and claws are black. The upper beak is notched near the tip, an adaptation which enables falcons to kill prey by severing the spinal column at the neck. The immature bird is much browner with streaked, rather than barred, underparts, and has a pale bluish cere and orbital ring.

The Peregrine Falcon has been used in falconry for more than 3,000 years, beginning with nomads in Asia. Due to its ability to dive at high speeds, it is highly sought-after and generally used by experienced falconers. Peregrine Falcons are also occasionally used to scare away birds at airports to reduce the risk of bird-plane strikes, improving air-traffic safety, and were used to intercept homing pigeons during World War II.


Pet Equipment
• Jessie's hanging from feet, Leather






Tamer Attributes:
Hawk eyes: The users eyes gain hawk like sharpness, gaining the vision of a hawk in all respects.They can see minute movements from very long distances just like a hawk uses to hunt with, and have excellent reaction time due to the way they hunt. As such the user can again see farther, minute details, and faster things.







Ivory's Jutsu List:
















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Ryo:
AC:

Missions Complete:
D Rank :: 0
C Rank :: 0
B Rank :: 0
A Rank :: 0
S Rank :: 0

Limitations:
• Ninjutsu : : 00 / 05
• Genjutsu : : 00 / 03
• Eiseijutsu : : 00 / 08
• Taijutsu Styles: : 00 / 01
• Bukijutsu Styles: : 00 / 01
• Partner total pool : : 00 / 14

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Weapon Type: Longbow
Weapon Draw Weight: 100 pound
Weapon Range: Your likely in range
Weapon Weight: 4 pounds
Weapon Location: Carries it over her shoulder


Summoning Type:
Summon Sage: That might be neat
Pacts: {Ex. Dogs: Pakkun, etc. Sages do not need to list pacts}

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• 7 kunai knives
• 1 Mirror, hand sized
• Longbow
• 30 arrows
• 2 bow strings
• Leather glove, thin on left arm. For Ivory to grip when it lands

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▬▬┤|N i n j u t s u

Maruton: {Start with the following six only}
• Henge no Jutsu [ Transformation Technique ]
• Kawarimi no Jutsu [ Substitution Technique ]
• Bushin no Jutsu [ Clone Technique ]
• Suimen Hokou no Waza [ Act of Water Surface Walking ]
• Kinobori no Waza [ Act of Tree Climbing ]
• Kai [ Release ]

{Raiton}


{Doton}


Eiseijutsu
Healing





Offensive





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Kyoukan Ya
• {Stage progression / techniques learned}

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Artemis has a short story to this point. She was born in Otogakure to a home of animal lovers. That would be putting it lightly. Every member of her family had their own bonded pet. It was almost expected of her. She took up the art of Falconry when she was little and raised her falcon, which she named Ivory. She recently graduated from the academy in oto and is going into active service in the next few days. Shes an excellent hunter and has never had issues finding food for herself, even when out in the field on survival exercises. This is due to her partner who is a born hunter.



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Toryu Naminosaki


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PostPosted: Sun Sep 01, 2013 9:24 pm
Toryu Naminosaki

Personal Attributes:
• Archery: Gains one [Bukijutsu] style ((Try and guess which one!))
• Old Castle: Any negative effects from various techniques lose one post in their duration.
• Quick learner: Post reductions doubled when learning in proper environments
• Bottomless quiver: Any time that she reaches into her quiver, she will find at least one arrow remaining.

Taking a look at this section alone I would have to deny the profile. The bonus Buki, no big deal. Old Castle I see as decent, but it has to be to a minimum of one, no instantly out of it shenanigans.

Quick learner: I'm sorry, I have to deny myself. It's already fast enough to learn techniques, that is just overkill.

Bottomless Quiver: Essentially, this is god modding in one sense. Endless supply of ammunition. We're not all Legolas here, we can't just rain projectiles we magically have down on everyone's heads. If anything it'd be an attribute allowed to be used once per combat, and even then I find it as a stretch.  
PostPosted: Sun Sep 01, 2013 9:35 pm
Chinmoku000


Down to brass tacks on this one. Sick of this scene. Everyone has a full name, even if the character doesn't know theirs they most likely have it. So supply it. If he doesn't know it, denote that fact and a potential reason why. Nicknames are fine.

Chakra materialization: This is one someone else may wish to rebut, but I personally would say that for that to be your chakra materialization you're obviously having to spend too much focus on shaping it like that. Simple Chakra materializations are good, the best in my opinion.

Also, I know you noted not to deny for it, but it's in the GUILD RULES PAGE: Do not post an application for a character with a Bloodline until it's approved. There is an open subforum for user workboxes and Gaia is kind enough to provide you with a journal to use.
 

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PostPosted: Mon Sep 02, 2013 9:39 am
Wolfe Nailo
Chinmoku000


Down to brass tacks on this one. Sick of this scene. Everyone has a full name, even if the character doesn't know theirs they most likely have it. So supply it. If he doesn't know it, denote that fact and a potential reason why. Nicknames are fine.

Chakra materialization: This is one someone else may wish to rebut, but I personally would say that for that to be your chakra materialization you're obviously having to spend too much focus on shaping it like that. Simple Chakra materializations are good, the best in my opinion.

Also, I know you noted not to deny for it, but it's in the GUILD RULES PAGE: Do not post an application for a character with a Bloodline until it's approved. There is an open subforum for user workboxes and Gaia is kind enough to provide you with a journal to use.


sorted. simplified and given a name, even thouggh I'll never use either.

and the whole bloodline thing, I forgot.  
PostPosted: Mon Sep 02, 2013 5:01 pm
Wolfe Nailo


Fixed what was needed in the profile, and the rest of it I don't believe could get it denied for much of a reason. I've followed the format and how to set everything up on the character sheet. Tallied everything up correctly, added sections to make everything clear. The only things that have been added to things like inventory are things that I would have naturally from having both the weapon type, and being a falconer.

Short words: Fixed, waiting for approval.  

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