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 Posted: Mon Jul 16, 2007 8:27 am
<33 @Aciddwolf: That was really great! I love it! <33
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Posted: Mon Jul 16, 2007 7:14 pm
thaks! why dont you post your own!? come on!! I want to see em! 4laugh ninja
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Posted: Wed Jul 18, 2007 11:52 am
hmmm I have to think up some more...and till then I shall be read other ppls fine poems here!!!
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Posted: Wed Jul 18, 2007 1:39 pm
<33 I posted one... but it was really bad and super short. <33
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Posted: Wed Jul 18, 2007 5:25 pm
its good so far just need to add to it some thats all!
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Posted: Wed Jul 18, 2007 5:27 pm
<33 Oh, well it was a lune which is supposed to be 3 words, 5 words, 3 words and that's all. <33
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Posted: Thu Jul 19, 2007 8:18 pm
i have poetry on a websight and even got editors choice on one of them click here look up felicia leeds under the find a poet and you'll see the poems ..feal free to pm me to tell me what you think
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Posted: Fri Jul 20, 2007 2:10 pm
omg!!! Felicia...your poems are sooooooooooooooooooo good!!! have you writen a book yet cause I want to buy em!!!
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Posted: Fri Jul 20, 2007 2:19 pm
here is one of my best poems that I did but...to me its sorta messed up in some parts heh..
Tears'n'fears
Im afraid of being alone
Afraid of no one understanding
Im afraid that when I sleep
I might not wake up
I cry tears, real tears
Im not some fake
That you may think i am
Im afriad of no one being there
to help me face my scariest fears
My fears are being alone
With no one to hold me
No one to talk to me
No one to love me
No one to help me see
Tears running down my
Face.....fears coming closer
I need to be strong
But im getting weaker
Im afraid of death
And sometimes the world
How can this life
Be so cruel?
Im afriad of not being
Able to love
Please reach out to me
And hold my hand
Kiss me when i least
Expcet it
Tickle me to the ground
And cheer me up when
I start to frown
Be there for me
Like i am for you
We can do this together
Not just me alone
You can help me get
Through this
If you just try
The most important thing
Wipe away my tears when I start
To cry
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Posted: Fri Jul 20, 2007 6:49 pm
thank you very much heart
i have one-unforgiven was published by the website but i dont know whair i have a few more i'm still working on though...
You see the path another has walked, but his dream has faltered,
fot their he stands bathed in solitude and sorrow.
He spies you pace as you follow the path he has wrought and thus so inspiers him, detering him from sorrow.
And step by step he walks, gaining curage once again, with you confidence in stride, it helps him walk again.
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Posted: Fri Jul 20, 2007 6:51 pm
I realy like your poems......you should enter some of the contest smile
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Posted: Fri Jul 20, 2007 9:59 pm
really? I dont think they are THAT good...but how do you enter them? cause it might be fun just to give it a try!
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Posted: Fri Jul 20, 2007 10:08 pm
this one about the war we have going now, and it so true!
Am a Soldier...
I am a soldier,
In the youth of today.
I'm supposed to fight for everyone,
And I'm supposed to be brave.
I'm supposed to fight.
For all of our rights.
Keeping terror away,
For everyones sake.
But I'm just a kid,
I'm supposed to have fun.
I'm too young to know about bombs,
Drugs, ammo, guns.
They say we're fighting for this country,
That's why we went to war.
But have you forgotten what we were really fighting for?
I'm supposed to keep my family alive,
Even though I can't even drive.
I'm too little to have to fight,
But I still gotta survive.
But I'm tired of fighting,
I'm too young and it's no fun.
So I'm gonna stop.
I'm gonna put down the gun.
Send our troops home and end this war,
Because we shouldn't be fighting anymore.
Everyone fights as the president toils,
But I could've sworn this WASN'T about oil.
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Posted: Sat Jul 21, 2007 12:09 pm
aciddwolff really? I dont think they are THAT good...but how do you enter them? cause it might be fun just to give it a try! I think they are.. poetry. com is compleately about putting your poems out their and entering contests go their and just click enter contest and fill out the form its 100% free only reson i even thought about entering a contest was because i was bord and i did for shits and giggles you never know what'll happen
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Posted: Sat Jul 21, 2007 5:35 pm
hmmm...ok I shall give it a try!!! yay!
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