Fallen_kitsune_thief's Humble Art Abode (NEW 5/5 PG 2)

[APS-tan]

i suggest that you do some sort of study on the human head? they aren't that bad, but i feel like there isn't enough skull to hold the face, ya know? i think the frontal facial structure is too big for the back of the head. i'm not sure, but that is what caught my attention sweatdrop
but what eejbeej said about lines weights will really help your drawings, here is a good tutorial on where you should thicken and where you should thin the lines [x] it's kinda hard in the begining but you'll get the hang of it =]
i pretty much agree with what everyone here has had to say,
hoep that helped in some sort of way, keep drawing :3

[edit: w00t! you now have a 2nd page!]  

[AMItotic]

Thanks for the crit. ^_^ And thank you SO much for the line tutorial: I was wondering where I could find a good one. I appreciate it!  

[AMItotic]

New work!

http://i6.photobucket.com/albums/y247/fallen_kitsune_thief/Gaia Commissions/Pet Linearts/Jubs_1.jpg

Another kid from Endgames: I attempted some line thickness, some shading techniques, and gasp, an action pose! Tell me what you guys think. heart