My poetry....^^

[~(Crimson poet)~]

Thank you all again^^ Here's a couple more....

Together...
"Take my hand, and together we'll delve into your mind.
Let us see what we'll find.
You have nothing to fear.
Don't worry, I'll always be right here.
Together, we'll brave your darkest fears.
Together, we'll both shed our tears.
You'll never have to hide, because I'll always be at your side.
Through the brightest morning, or the darkest night,
together we'll fight.
Even through this unsteady climb,
I promise, you'll be fine.
You open your eyes, and see me wearing a smile.
I say, "I was with you, all the while."
As I help you out of your grave,
I say, "It was your soul I was trying to save"
"I hope you've learned...
Never once, was a prayer unheard."

So, now you're exactly where you want to be.
Which is right beside me."

My religious poem... Not for me, but, for others.^^
(Thanks Alamora, for your strong faith, inspired this poem^^)

Killing, what killed you
"It begins to grow old.
I'm tired of the lies I'm being told.
I'm doing what I've been told to do, and that's change my view.
To change the way I see you.
Now I stare into your eyes,
and see on I despise.
No longer do I see,
the one who loved me.
Regardless of what you say,
I choose to feel this way.
One might ask, "why?"
and I'd simply reply, "Because I'm watching the ones they hurt die"
I want to heal!
Pin is not all one can feel!
I lay my hands upon the cuts on your arm.
"Why do you wish yourself harm?"
I lay my hands on the cuts on your wrists.
"You only did this, when you were pissed"
Now I lay my hands upon the gun.
"Don't worry, your pain is done."
You are healed, you are free!
Don't even bother taking the time to thank me.

Live your life...
Take everything in strife..."  

[~(Crimson poet)~]

The scream within.
"I have a deeper agony.
A deeper pain inside me.
I plaster on a fake smile,
while suffering all of the while.
I have these screams in my head.
They're allways telling me how I'm better off dead.
I feel as though I'll go insane.
All I have is this pain.
Slash my arm...
PAINLESS HARM!!
Cut my body...
LOOK AT WHAT YOU'VE DONE TO ME!!
All to the melody of the screams within...
A beautiful chorus of sin...
They never leave me alone...
The voices are always home...
I scream and shout.
Another one blows it's brains out.
I cut myself, with a now dull knife.
Another one takes it's life.

Before I know it, I'm dead...
And the screams haven't left my head."  

[manga_lover529]

wow.................deep  

[~(Crimson poet)~]

manga_lover529

wow.................deep

I shoot for feeling^^  

[Martyrize]

I really agree with Manga_lover.

Your poems are very deep, and they really make me feel a lot of emotion, all at the same time!
They're all amazing!

Have you had any published?

I'm like... Sorta a poet...
I'd rather not post any, because I'm not too proud of any of 'em. ._.

Maybe when I get a bit better I will. n_n  

[Recyclable Raccoon]

Aw, those are soo.. pretty. <333  

[~(Crimson poet)~]

Recyclable Raccoon

Aw, those are soo.. pretty. <333

Thank you dear^^  

[darly]

its so good better than mine  

[kilkutie]

So sweet <3333

 

[~(Crimson poet)~]

kilkutie

So sweet <3333

Thank you, thank you^^  

[~(Crimson poet)~]

Together, for Never...
"This is a poem, best told in a whisper...
It is a poem about the one I love, and how I cannot be with her...
I'm thinking about her all the time...
Every though, another wish she was mine.
Wishing she was right here with me...
But, apart we are, and that's how shall forever be...
Every night, I dream of her warm embrace...
The soft beauty of her face...
The glory of her smile...
That's what makes my living worth while.
I open my eyes, and she's ripped away.
Alone, I face the rest of my day...
This is true eternity...
Every moment she isn't with me.
This is true torture.
Every moment, I'm without her...
For without her, I'm incomplete, and unwhole...
She is the one to complete my soul...
She is the one to complete my heart...
For without her, it's cracked and breaking apart...
She is the one for me.
But, apart we are, and that's how shall forever be...

I'm dying forever...
Living without her..."  

[~(Crimson poet)~]

The Promise...

"I stand on a snow covered hill.
This used to be our place...
Our little escape.
Alone and cold, I watch the snow fall...
You loved the snow.
I lay a rose where we used to sit and watch the sunset...
You made me promise.... You made me promise to never leave.
That night, we held eachother close, and whispered sweet nothings...
We watched the stars, until we fell asleep.
I awoke the next morning to find you gone.
In your place, a headstone.
The rose I left is thriving...
"I never left... And I never will..." I say lying alongside you now.
Together... We once lived...
Together... We shall remain... Forever...

A new headstone rests alongside the first...
"I shall always be with you, my love" is carved on it.
The other, "I will forever wait for you my love" "  

[Captain Katinator]

OMG! Those are so good! I wish I could write like that... but I can't crying !
Anyway, those were awesome!  

[~(Crimson poet)~]

Chasing a Dream...

"I stand outside, on a windy spring day...
The sun warms my face, as the wind carries a cherry blossem.
I cahse it, into the sun's wake...
The wind brings more, as I stop and watch them float...
I look, and in the middle, I see you, smiling and waving...
I run in to hold you, but the wind carries you off...
I follow, until the last petal has drifted into the sunset...
Alone, I watch and wait for more, intent on seeing your face again...
I wait for a day, and the wind brings none...
I leave, and look for the tree...
I find the tree, winth the petals dancing beautifly beneath it...
I step in and dance, as the petals join me, and you take my hand...
You, wearing that gorgeous smile as always...
Together, we dance until the moon chases the sun away, and the winds has left...
At last, the petals leave, and we are alone beneath the flowerless tree...
Silent, we yell eachother's affection...
Motionless, we run away...
I move to hold you, and you dissapear in a sea of petals...
I'm left alone beneath the tree, and the winds dances once more...
One cherry blossom is left on the tree...
I pick it, and remember you. I smile and hold it close to my heart...
I awake to find you beside me... As I dream again, we dance in the sunset...
In my pocket, a pressed flower...
In my heart, a cherished memory... As I dance with the dream..."

It's backwards... When he's up, he's dreaming... When's he's asleep, he's awake... Lost in love^^  

[~(Crimson poet)~]

Holly...

"Holly...
Only once, have I known someone with a name so pretty.
She is one, who is far too kind...
She has such a beautiful mind...
There is this pain I do not understand.
I feel it, when I reach out for your hand.
There is this pain in my chest...
I rises above all the rest.
There's nothing to stop my heart!
Is it really only this distance, that's keeping us apart?
I want you close, I want you near...
I just want to know you're really here.
I stand in my neighbor's garden for hours...
Thinking of you, and picking flowers.
They're on my table, in a vase...
Whenever I see them, I envision your face.
When I'm alone with my thoughts, I whisper your name...
The sound of it makes me so happy... I hope you're feeling the same.
I stand in my room... Pad and pen at my side...
I'm thinking of ways to write these feelings, I cannot hide.
I want to start my words of love,
much like I did above.
Holly...
You have no idea how much you mean to me...
Holly...
I want to thank you for making me so happy.
And if I could make one wish be true,
it'd be, that I was right there... Holding you."