Thank you very much for your patience ^^ I have read your character profile and everything seems to be in order, she sounds like an interesting character.
However,
We must discuss her psychic abilities. When reading through the profile it felt like this "psychic" power was thrown in without too much purpose. You also do not explain exactly what her psychic powers do only that she was put to sleep because of them and that now they're under control after some training. She is pretty young so exactly when did she develop these powers and how is it that at a young age she managed to gain control over them? Even, Sabrina (without a doubt the strongest psychic in the pokemon anime) didn't really have her powers under control and rather they seemed to control her instead.
What I'm saying is that if we remove the psychic powers from the profile, it does not change anything about her (per se). I need more information about these psychic powers and how they are important to her character as well as her future because as of right now it only feels like it was a last minute decision.
I'm not against having a character with special abilities, but I want it to be more developed because having a psychic can change a lot in this kind of RP that is plot-heavy. So if you'd like for your character to have psychic powers then convince me by giving me more details about its importance to her character as well as what these powers are
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