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 Posted: Sun Apr 09, 2006 1:37 pm
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Posted: Sun Apr 09, 2006 2:44 pm
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Posted: Tue Apr 11, 2006 6:07 pm
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Posted: Tue Apr 11, 2006 6:16 pm
Heres a short piece I doodled down in Tec Discovery today.
A pen in an author's hand,
Is the greatest of all tools.
With it they write wondrous works,
And make you and I look like fools.
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Posted: Wed Apr 12, 2006 4:40 pm
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Posted: Thu Apr 27, 2006 2:23 pm
I'm back again! Yay! biggrin
I walk alone
My heart is broken
My face forgotten
My soul...
I walk alone
My heart is broken
My face forgotten
my soul...
I try to find my paradise
Looking everywhere
Soon I see a glimpse of you
And...
I walk alone
My heart is broken
My face forgotten
My soul...
Soon you see me standing there
But when you turn... You're gone
So I walk alone
My heart is broken
My face forgotten
My soul...
I walk alone
My heart is broken
My face forgotten
My soul...
My soul is gone.
hehe... Thats sucks... Don't be afraid to say it because it does.. sweatdrop
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Posted: Thu Apr 27, 2006 6:26 pm
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Posted: Thu Apr 27, 2006 6:33 pm
Hollow and empty
a cold ******** gap of ice
wondering soulles
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A dark void inside
ripped from my body and crushed
consuming darkness
I like to write haiku poems sometimes. Not the greatest thing but I like 'em.
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Posted: Thu Apr 27, 2006 8:43 pm
I love the meaning that you put into those.... Though i think when you cussed it kinda put me off...... But other than that it was great... I don't even really know what a haiku is...
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Posted: Fri Apr 28, 2006 4:06 pm
Yeah, sort of sorry about that, that's just how it came out. Anyways, a haiku poem is a Japanese poem of seventeen syllables, in three lines of five, seven, and five. To some people, their sort of hard to write because the first line has to have five syllables, the second line seven, and the third five again, also it has to tell about something but not directly about it. Something like that.
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Posted: Fri Apr 28, 2006 8:23 pm
OH!!! So that's a haiku.... We had to write those in class a couple of years ago... They were really hard to write...
I'm glad that you liked my poem!!
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Posted: Fri Apr 28, 2006 8:40 pm
Tears
Shadows hide me from the world
tears roll down my face
shackles bind the feet
to keep them in place
Eyes, the color of yellow moon
perice my weary soul
shattering the heart into peices
leaving me to drown in sorrow
Feeling as though I cannot breathe
seeing the shapes and colors before me
like a dead rose
beautiful and fallen
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Posted: Sat Apr 29, 2006 10:59 am
eek That was...... Really good! I really thought it had a feel to it... Keep going like this, and soon I'll steal your brain for better poetry ideas. biggrin
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Posted: Sat Apr 29, 2006 12:41 pm
My brain? o_O I'de like to keep that appendage and thanks I'll keep writting.
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Posted: Sat Apr 29, 2006 12:59 pm
rosemont419 eek That was...... Really good! I really thought it had a feel to it... Keep going like this, and soon I'll steal your brain for better poetry ideas. biggrin *gasp!* you brain theif!!
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