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 Posted: Tue Feb 12, 2013 5:31 pm
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lord-kensington There are a few things I'd like you to tweak with your character. Your guys has seen too much at such a young age, I would expect him to have faced only one of the Imperium's great enemies at this stage. Not three. I'd expect you to be a grizzly veteran of at least 60. If you can just tweak that part then the rest is fine. Accepted, please make your first post
Name: Specialist Kinkaid Paladin
Age: 38
Profession: Elysian Drop Trooper/weapons specialist
Homeworld/World you're currently on: born onElysia currently awaiting redeployment on the planet Lukius.
Background/History: Born to a proud family who has served the empire for many generations, Kinkaid always knew what he was going to do in life, smite the enemies of the Empire. Training extensively in both weapons and tactics in addition to augmenting the planetary defense force in actions against outlaws and pirates who use the Elysian system as a staging ground and hide out., He was assigned to the 13th Drop Infantry division also known as the "Helldivers" at the age of eighteen. Since then he has served his Emperor and division well. Distinguishing himself in combat against the never ending tide of Green skins on multiple fronts, rising to the rank of weapons specialist. He, his squad and his division were preparing to face yet another threat to the empire. Moral was high, their training had them ready and there equipment was blessed. They died by the hundreds.
The Tyranids were a completely new foe and one that they had no experience against. The 13th suffered 90% casualties. Broken, the division was removed from combat rotation until they could be assessed and resupplied or folded in to another unit. The experience exacted a heavy toll on the Specialist. The already jaded veteran became cynical and though he still trains religiously, he only goes through the motions of service and devotion. His prayers are only words on his lips, his heart no longer burns with religious fever and military discipline. It now burns with rage and an longing to see every single threat burn in the fires of there sin.
It was then that Specialist Kinkaid received his summons.
Description/Photo:
So I made some changes to my character changing his planet of origin and increasing his age. I also found a better picture i think. shall I still Post first? |
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Posted: Tue Feb 12, 2013 5:34 pm
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Blaise Simpson lord-kensington There are a few things I'd like you to tweak with your character. Your guys has seen too much at such a young age, I would expect him to have faced only one of the Imperium's great enemies at this stage. Not three. I'd expect you to be a grizzly veteran of at least 60. If you can just tweak that part then the rest is fine. Accepted, please make your first post Specialist Kinkaid Paladin Age: 38 Profession: Elysian Drop Trooper/weapons specialist Homeworld/World you're currently on: born onElysia currently awaiting redeployment on the planet Lukius. Background/History: Born to a proud family who has served the empire for many generations, Kinkaid always knew what he was going to do in life, smite the enemies of the Empire. Training extensively in both weapons and tactics in addition to augmenting the planetary defense force in actions against outlaws and pirates who use the Elysian system as a staging ground and hide out., He was assigned to the 13th Drop Infantry division also known as the "Helldivers" at the age of eighteen. Since then he has served his Emperor and division well. Distinguishing himself in combat against the never ending tide of Green skins on multiple fronts, rising to the rank of weapons specialist. He, his squad and his division were preparing to face yet another threat to the empire. Moral was high, their training had them ready and there equipment was blessed. They died by the hundreds. The Tyranids were a completely new foe and one that they had no experience against. The 13th suffered 90% casualties. Broken, the division was removed from combat rotation until they could be assessed and resupplied or folded in to another unit. The experience exacted a heavy toll on the Specialist. The already jaded veteran became cynical and though he still trains religiously, he only goes through the motions of service and devotion. His prayers are only words on his lips, his heart no longer burns with religious fever and military discipline. It now burns with rage and an longing to see every single threat burn in the fires of there sin. It was then that Specialist Kinkaid received his summons. Description/Photo: So I made some changes to my character changing his planet of origin and increasing his age. I also found a better picture i think. shall I still Post first?
Ok, feel free to post, either pic is good. |
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Posted: Wed Feb 13, 2013 6:53 pm
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Posted: Wed Feb 13, 2013 7:00 pm
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Posted: Wed Feb 13, 2013 7:20 pm
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Posted: Thu Feb 14, 2013 8:07 pm
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Gracious Conversationalist
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Posted: Fri Feb 15, 2013 1:09 am
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Posted: Fri Feb 15, 2013 2:10 pm
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Posted: Fri Feb 15, 2013 10:05 pm
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Gracious Conversationalist
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Posted: Fri Feb 15, 2013 10:51 pm
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lord-kensington Roilvn Whiro i play Warboss dread the big Mek Warboss. Who wants a waaaaaagggghhhh? No, only human characters. Did you even read the requirements? stare
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Posted: Sun Feb 17, 2013 1:51 pm
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Roilvn Whiro lord-kensington Roilvn Whiro i play Warboss dread the big Mek Warboss. Who wants a waaaaaagggghhhh? No, only human characters. Did you even read the requirements? stare I am asking if in plot you would like a Waaaaggghhhh.... AKA Anti heros and drama and the like. Edit: stare stare
Not for this RP. Players will only be allowed to play as members of the Inquisition team. |
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Posted: Sun Feb 17, 2013 8:08 pm
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Posted: Sun Feb 17, 2013 8:09 pm
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