Hard to seal.

[Metamorfosis Mental]

i2smexiforchu2

Metamorfosis Mental

i2smexiforchu2

Metamorfosis Mental

i2smexiforchu2

Metamorfosis Mental

Girl, I don't like the "slang". So, don't talk to me with "slang" please... (don't get me wrong and don't get mad)
No one comes here and rate or comment, "it's stuck" "it's going slow" "a dead (almost) guild".

Well. Uhm i think the same but i still participate and write. Its my thing, i guess.

Yes, you're a good writer. You must keep writing and growing. Because if you give up somebody will take your place.

Thank you. I have a long way to go though, im still young.

Well, I guess you're 16 or 17. Am I wrong?
Can I ask you something?
Are you mexican or something like that?

No where to close to age, 13
And no. Im not.

Good  

[i2smexiforchu2]

How is that "good"? And why are you asking?  

[Aislin Schreiber]

It seems good, the little snippit you give here. Some capitalization issues I guess you could call it and you must remember to stay in present tense if that is what you plan on using it in the book. That means saying 'says' instead if 'said'. Other than that it seems good! Just keep writing and age doesn't matter. I'm only fifteen and have started writing my novel.  

[i2smexiforchu2]

Girl on Fire 12

It seems good, the little snippit you give here. Some capitalization issues I guess you could call it and you must remember to stay in present tense if that is what you plan on using it in the book. That means saying 'says' instead if 'said'. Other than that it seems good! Just keep writing and age doesn't matter. I'm only fifteen and have started writing my novel.

Lolz thanx for the tips.  

[Angstbucket Edgelord]

I think this may need to be moved to a subforum.

Elder Astrauld