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Posted: Wed Jan 05, 2011 8:11 am
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Razor_Fluff rolled 3 12-sided dice:
3, 8, 1
Total: 12 (3-36)
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Posted: Thu Jan 06, 2011 4:09 am
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Posted: Fri Jan 07, 2011 4:10 pm
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Razor_Fluff Hey Man, I read your chapter and it flows really nice. I think it's a really good beginning to the story, and you really made me feel like I was there. You wrote to all the senses 3nodding good job. There were just a few typos; I don't mean to ride people too hard but my freshman comp. professor in college was a real grammar nazi so it's stuck in me now. If you need an editor for stuff like that, I'd totally love to help out. Keep doing what you do best. wink hey it all cool. I could use the help.
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Posted: Fri Jan 07, 2011 8:45 pm
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Posted: Sat Jan 08, 2011 8:53 am
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Posted: Sat Jan 08, 2011 4:52 pm
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Posted: Sun Jan 09, 2011 2:21 am
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Posted: Mon Jan 10, 2011 6:34 pm
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Damon Zane izak1399 s**t, A world trip would be wicked. If you could convey the feeling of moving round the world, it being a big deal for him traveling, that would be awesome. It's hard to explain, the Bourne movies did it really well, I always had a sense he was moving through "real" places, and I was traveling with him. If you can capture that somehow then you have yourself a winner of a story. I not sure on specifics but I have an idea as to why he has to travel around the world. It will be hard to make up characters for them, there are a couple people here that I will make sure to hit on... wink but as to how he leaves is still a bit fuzzy. So time will tell.
Yeah roll with it. Have fun. =D
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