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 Posted: Mon Jan 09, 2006 5:12 pm
Parithius Angels' Bleed
Angels bleed by the tainted touch
of my caress,
Needing to contaminate to illiviate
this lonliness,
I now know the depths I reach
are limitless. amazing/ awsome
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Posted: Mon Jan 09, 2006 5:21 pm
dbzx .Mistic.Azn.Dreamer. As I lay there staring at the white painted ceiling,
I wondered if I will finish High School
If I will ever get my driver's license
If I will ever get the car I wanted
If I will ever go to college
If I will ever get the job of my dreams
If I will ever find love
If I will get married
If I will ever have children of my own
If I will grow old and have grandchildren
But now as I lie there looking up upon the ceiling as the blood slowly seeps from my wrists,
I know now I will not know the answers to those questions.
I am slowly slipping away from the life I will never get the chance to know becaase what I had just done,
not knowing why I had slit them in the first place,
not knowing what the people that truley cared about me,
but I was too blind to see,
how it would affect them to see me gone.
As I lay numb
on the cold marble floor
slowly slipping away.
Sorry if it's kinda crappy I just thought it up. redface i liked it i think its great Thank Yous
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Posted: Mon Jan 09, 2006 5:23 pm
Hmm, I haven't written a poem since last year back in High School. Heres one I still have on my laptop, it's a poem from a Poetry Contest last year. It's pretty long so I'll just show a few stanzas. Please excuse some of the language. heh
A Face In The Crowd...
A face in the crowd with my hands side to side
I stay hidden from view, like a sly private eye.
Only focused on you, but behind I reside...
to admire... as you recieve, what I, cannot provide.
A face in the crowd, Im a gaze...cross the stage.
Im not in the movie... Im the credits that fade.
Not the ocean, a wave, not the master, a slave
Im not a big burst of sunshine, Im only a ray
not a month or a ******** only a day
Not the gift.
Im the box.
You can throw me away.
A face in the crowd, though you dont notice me
you dwell on my mind soon as I go to sleep
Look at YOU , so discrete...... look at ME , ob~so~lete
a wash up, a has been, nothing more..
so to speak.
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Posted: Mon Jan 09, 2006 7:31 pm
-=Cha^0^s_G3ar=- Hmm, I haven't written a poem since last year back in High School. Heres one I still have on my laptop, it's a poem from a Poetry Contest last year. It's pretty long so I'll just show a few stanzas. Please excuse some of the language. heh
A Face In The Crowd...
A face in the crowd with my hands side to side
I stay hidden from view, like a sly private eye.
Only focused on you, but behind I reside...
to admire... as you recieve, what I, cannot provide.
A face in the crowd, Im a gaze...cross the stage.
Im not in the movie... Im the credits that fade.
Not the ocean, a wave, not the master, a slave
Im not a big burst of sunshine, Im only a ray
not a month or a ******** only a day
Not the gift.
Im the box.
You can throw me away.
A face in the crowd, though you dont notice me
you dwell on my mind soon as I go to sleep
Look at YOU , so discrete...... look at ME , ob~so~lete
a wash up, a has been, nothing more..
so to speak.
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Posted: Mon Jan 09, 2006 7:37 pm
smile A haiku:
Icy stalactites
Grapple from high wintry rooftops
Like thin cliffhangers.
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Posted: Mon Jan 09, 2006 7:45 pm
these are two more i made and by the way people AWESOME POEMS the first one is one ive had for a little while i just modified it and the second one is a one a just made up and if ur an neon genesis evangalion fan u may think i deprived this from the show's intro song but i did not copy the words only certain phrases sound like the ones in the song its called copyright fools lol
how could i live without you
how could I live without you
you are the blinding light thats wards away my troubles
if i didnt have you what would do
how crazy or demented could my soul be torn apart
if you were gone how could i live
what will fill the dark hole of an abyss in my heart
if i had lost you
you would never come back like a lost sheep
how could i live without you
what would happen if you left...
and this one
A cruel angel
A cruel angel will only bleed
as it is slayed by those of pure hearts
as its burning hand touches those
who are unworthy of its mercy
banishing those to eternal damnation
to never witness light again
its appearance is a mere ghost
and yet as a cruel angel
its soul may be
the one that judges yours
but as the cruel angel bleeds
you shall stand at the top
kneeling down to
help the one that judged you
for that is how
a cruel angel bleeds
I have more but i dont want to go over board and the reason y i think my poems suck is because i can basicly pull them out of my a** in a non offensive way
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Posted: Mon Jan 09, 2006 8:05 pm
oh and sorry to put one post after another but for those of you who may (not saying you are) intimidated this thread wlecomes all poems in shapes or sizes like this one
you are the one
you are the one
so beautiful
my asian girl
seriously just post any poem u want
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Posted: Mon Jan 09, 2006 8:54 pm
i grew to depind on you even though i didnt want it, even in my darkest moment you came to save me. at times when i see those flesh wounds on u, i - i felt as if it was me carving to u those wounds that still grows. i cry every night hoping you can let go of you're sword and put it to rest. i want you to start to depind on me, and let me be you're sheith instead of s ghost that held you since you're dark times. let me help heal those wounds so that you breath normal, so that you may have the chance to move on.
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Posted: Tue Jan 10, 2006 1:46 pm
i am hate and evil made of power.
society's evil has created me. i am the mask of death.
i am the avenger that stalks society.
my promis to society is; that my palace well be in the stars,
my throne will be the sacred mountains over looking the north.
i well live in the highest cloud and i'll be the patrich of the
universe.
give a prejudice and bad society, what it gives you, is
an evil society that will draw it's own blood.
only powere and survival will matter in an evil society.
bad society create monsters, they then wounder how these
monsters came to be. only society can answer such a questions.
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Posted: Tue Jan 10, 2006 1:56 pm
well i'm only good at depressing poems...sorry
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Posted: Tue Jan 10, 2006 2:11 pm
but anyways here's one for those that don't mind
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Posted: Tue Jan 10, 2006 2:13 pm
There was a song from long ago,
that my mother used to sing for me.
it gave me peace, love, and hope
-of the good person i could be......
I can remember her voice like yesterday,
her voice as smooth as the sea.
When she left, she took my love away-
and never returned it back to me.
I've long forgot how the song went.
I've long forgot what love is like.
I only remember that my heart was rent-
as if I've been stabbed by a pike.
I'm no longer the loving child I was before,
I'm seldom happy anymore.
I never laugh,
i never cry,
I never smile,
I never sigh.
I never show my true emotions,
-I keep it all inside.
My mind's in a constant motion,
-my thoughts, a swirling tide.
It's during these times that I will hear-
Hear a song I used to know.
A song sang to take away fear,
-a song sang from long ago.
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Posted: Tue Jan 10, 2006 3:15 pm
Sildrag There was a song from long ago, that my mother used to sing for me. it gave me peace, love, and hope -of the good person i could be...... I can remember her voice like yesterday, her voice as smooth as the sea. When she left, she took my love away- and never returned it back to me. I've long forgot how the song went. I've long forgot what love is like. I only remember that my heart was rent- as if I've been stabbed by a pike. I'm no longer the loving child I was before, I'm seldom happy anymore. I never laugh, i never cry, I never smile, I never sigh. I never show my true emotions, -I keep it all inside. My mind's in a constant motion, -my thoughts, a swirling tide. It's during these times that I will hear- Hear a song I used to know. A song sang to take away fear, -a song sang from long ago. that was awesome.ur'e great!
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Posted: Tue Jan 10, 2006 4:20 pm
Ummmm... By William Shakespeare
From you have I been absent in the spring,
When proud-pied April, dressed in all his trim,
Hath put a spirit of youth in everything,
That heavy Saturn laughed and leaped with him,
Yet nor the lays of birds, nor the sweet smell
Of different flowers in odor and in hue,
Could make me any summer's story tell,
Or from their proud lap pluck them where they grew.
Nor did I wonder at the lily's white,
Nor praise the deep vermilion in the rose;
They were but sweet, but figures of delight,
Drawn after you, you pattern of all those.
Yet seemed it winter still, and, you away,
As with your shadow I with these did play
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Posted: Tue Jan 10, 2006 4:23 pm
i made this one up! i really like it
bathe in the tears you forced me to cry
feel the blood you stole from my heart
taste the lies you fed into my ears
becuase that's all you have to remember me...
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