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the_forgotten_thought

XxXlil rock_goddessXxX

the_forgotten_thought

XxXlil rock_goddessXxX

holy ********! excuse my language but oh my damn your hella good mister forgotten!! gah *jealous*

haha, thanks. redface and uh, that's miss forgotten. haha

oh my gosh im so sorry!! redface ahhh *hides under a rock*

trust me, i get it so often in the real world, it doesn't even bug me. i'm just happy that someone actually spent the time to read one of my insanely long poems. haha.

oh. well im still sowy and yeah well im glad i did it was amazing! haha

 

[Whisper Gently]

I'm having a hard time not stating my opinion on these...
It might hurt somebody's feelings.

 

[XxKitty_of_DeathxX]

you screamed but i didn't hear
you cried out for help but i wasn't near
and now my concence is the opposite of clear

every day my life goes on
while yours is dead and gone
i beat my self till i bleed
for not getting to you
in time to stop the evil deed

i feel guilty
its my fault
i cant get through this
you are dead and im alive

millions of pounds are on my shoulders
i know im going under
from the pain and guilt and regret
that i hadn't gotten to you yet
i pushed and pushed on my way

but i came to late
there you lay
on the ground
naked bleeding and dead
i crumpled on the ground beside your head
i cried and cried

if only i was there
if only i could have gotten there faster
but that stupid basterd go to you be for me
now im in complete misery

i cant believe i was to late
and that in itself made your fate  

[Angel of the End]

I have a few nice poems... have not written any in a while. However, all of yours are lovely 3nodding  

[the_forgotten_thought]

prettywomen444: i was probably reading this wrong, but i had trouble with the flow. like, at times i was wondering if it was free-verse or in couplets. it was pretty good, though; keep writing.  

[Out Of My Waffles]

You tell me that you love me
Yet you stand in my way
You will never let it be
Even though it may
break our hearts sometimes
We must let it go
We had some good times
But you have to know
I love you
But you don't love me
You said you would do
anything to stay with me
But now you're gone
Was i just a pawn?

So kiss me like you did,
My heart stopped beating.
So love me like you did,
The memories are fleeting.
So hold me like you did,
I promise not to go.
So have me like you did,
Digging deep below.
So hide me like you did,
Take away my presence.
So leave me like you did,
Evacuate my essence.
So hate me like you did,
Don't clot my endless bleeding.
So kill me like you did,
My heart stopped beating

 

[SADERR]

I figured I'd put down a spoken-word piece I have lying around in here. I've been writing a lot recently (All of my poetry is either spoken word or rap, in most cases) and this was one I rather liked.

_______

I would gladly split my tounge down the middle,
Only then could I speak both sides of myself rationally.
No diluted saliva would fall to the crevice
And form slurred words to malfunction my mind's malpractice.
My teeth would grind on like a dull rumbling story
A fairytale, with a malevolent twisted purpose.
Where the princess-ridden tower crumbles to cement
And other's crushed beer cans are the obstacle you overcome.
A watered-down substance that is in fact my words
turgid with phrases to make my path seem leafless
While I leaf through novelettes of suicide notes
Trying to understand how it died, when it's not a person.

In coil-bound chains light as clouds, I didn't notice
The regurgitated lies in a red-covered notebook
My split tounge in half green, and half blue
But it never would have been that ocean turqoise without you.
So let the waves crash menacingly against my gums
And I will sip from a cracked cup of feeble reassurance
And smash the glass later to figuratively defeat the purpose
Because I will not accept the cool beverage that is sanity
I would prefer the dull lie of romantics at the moment.
Soft smiles and cheap tounges speak, no one heard it
But I simply sit back and wish it worth it.

But I am lying to the jury who is a third-person I
And I am fixing the blanket on my third blackened eye
To cover the fact that I need history's reprise
To the calm, blue days of tornado green skies.
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