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 Posted: Thu Feb 05, 2009 11:52 pm
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Anime Geek7 Zoray Anime Geek7 Zoray Anime Geek7 Zoray *poke* of course youre gonna have to write more XD and very nice I knew you were going to say that so I left it at a cliff hanger... =w= Sankyuu. Not my most fail filled one yet, but not that great, either. And I'm going to hurt you if you chose the last option on the poll. stare lol, same with mine XD whattttt, all there was when i voted was reserved... and i wanted my gold NAO Huggles, kupo? OwO Yeah, but mine contains more fail. So? That doesn't mean you can vote that way! scream *Whackwhackwhackwhackwhackwhackwhackwhackwhackwhackwhackwhackwhackwhackwhackwhackwhackwhackwhackwhackwhackwhackwhackwhackwhackwhackwhackwhackwhackwhackwhackwhackwhackwhackwhackwhackwhackwhackwhackwhackwhackwhackwhackwhackwhackwhackwhackwhackwhackwhackwhackwhackwhackwhackwhackwhackwhackwhackwhackwhackwhackwhackwhackwhackwhackwhackwhackwhackwhackwhackwhackwhackwhackwhackwhackwhackwhackwhackwhackwhackwhackwhackwhackwhackwhackwhackwhackwhackwhackwhackwhackwhackwhackwhackwhack*
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*Whack*not with you whacking me ....you could reset the poll XD Don't feel like it. =w= |
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Posted: Fri Feb 06, 2009 2:38 pm
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If there is crap within this story, Snow's too dumb to see it. xD
The characterization, story flow (so far), and detail put into it are great.
However, there are just a few things that bug me (justa little.) The use of detail could be bordering on the edge of excessive, such as "dark black," or "angered, yet annoyed." Note, these are fine to use, Snowy's just a picky jerk. Speaking of which, sorry for the critique. sweatdrop
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Posted: Fri Feb 06, 2009 3:27 pm
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SnowDrifted If there is crap within this story, Snow's too dumb to see it. xD The characterization, story flow (so far), and detail put into it are great. However, there are just a few things that bug me (justa little.) The use of detail could be bordering on the edge of excessive, such as "dark black," or "angered, yet annoyed." Note, these are fine to use, Snowy's just a picky jerk. Speaking of which, sorry for the critique. sweatdrop
No, Snow isn't stupid. =w= I'm just super critical on my works...
Yeah... Geek tends to do that... Probably 'cause I'd have to describe the heck out of everything for most people I know to understand it. =w= Other wise they wouldn't get it. (Although, even with a mountain of detail they still probably wouldn't get it. >.> )
Critique = Good
Geek wants to improve. >w< |
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Posted: Fri Feb 06, 2009 10:21 pm
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Posted: Fri Feb 06, 2009 11:03 pm
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Posted: Fri Feb 06, 2009 11:09 pm
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Anime Geek7 SnowDrifted No, Snow isn't stupid, she's just dumb. rofl Oh yeah, feel free to critique me too. (You too, Zoray.) (I also want to get better!) Nuuuuuuuuuu! Snow isn't dumb! >.< Snow is Snow! Even when she's slow. I just made a rhyme. And 11:03 is the time. I will... After I finish the doodle of Risu... It'll probably take a while... (Curse me and my VK obsession... ) (Better is always better! >w< And making no sense is fun! )
Alright. Snow is Snow then. xD
2:06 over here...I should get to sleeps now.
Sweet! What is Geek without her VK obsession? I shudder at the thought. o.o
(I know, right? Butter is always better because better is always better than butter. =D ) |
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Posted: Sat Feb 07, 2009 12:21 am
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SnowDrifted Anime Geek7 SnowDrifted No, Snow isn't stupid, she's just dumb. rofl Oh yeah, feel free to critique me too. (You too, Zoray.) (I also want to get better!) Nuuuuuuuuuu! Snow isn't dumb! >.< Snow is Snow! Even when she's slow. I just made a rhyme. And 11:03 is the time. I will... After I finish the doodle of Risu... It'll probably take a while... (Curse me and my VK obsession... ) (Better is always better! >w< And making no sense is fun! ) Alright. Snow is Snow then. xD 2:06 over here...I should get to sleeps now. Sweet! What is Geek without her VK obsession? I shudder at the thought. o.o (I know, right? Butter is always better because better is always better than butter. =D )
Yesh!
It's true... Squirrels are evil... (Risu means squirrel)
True. Geek wouldn't have worn her awesome sorta VK-ish boots to school without her VK obsession. owo Plus, it would be like Zoray with out her mechs.
(Exactly! I knew you would understand!) |
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Posted: Sun Feb 08, 2009 3:53 pm
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Posted: Tue Feb 10, 2009 5:52 pm
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Posted: Tue Feb 10, 2009 6:10 pm
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SnowDrifted Anime Geek7 Working on chapter 2! >w> Be happy. Is most happy indeed. >=3 Raaawg your front page so organized!
owo Good.
Yesh, Geek likes organizing things... |
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Posted: Fri Feb 20, 2009 12:10 am
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Posted: Fri Feb 20, 2009 2:55 am
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Posted: Fri Feb 20, 2009 11:30 am
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Posted: Fri Feb 20, 2009 3:28 pm
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Posted: Fri Feb 20, 2009 7:58 pm
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Anime Geek7 Zoray SnowDrifted *pokes Geek with the update-fail-spear* *pokes geek with update fail staff* I was going to finish it! But I had homework to do! gonk I would have liked to have finished it...
Then why don't you finish it now -.- |
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