GRAMMAR.

[Meiazure]

Twinkle twinkle little star,
How I wonder what you are!
Up above the world so high,

x

I was trying to sort of reassure Cookie. But yesh... you left because he was being a grammar Nazi again xd

D:

Peaaaaace!

Like a diamond in the sky,
Twinkle twinkle little star,
How I wonder what you are!

 

[TillxGone]

{ Everyday I wake up, I choose Love, I choose Light }
{-❀--✿--❀--✿--❀--✿--❀-}

And I try it's too easy just to fall apart:
D;
That is no laughing matter.
He really pissed me off.

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[Encarton]

Tilly needs to work on mastering the Not Caring maneuver O:

Blocking out those negative vibes is a useful ability.

 

[TillxGone]

{ Everyday I wake up, I choose Love, I choose Light }
{-❀--✿--❀--✿--❀--✿--❀-}

And I try it's too easy just to fall apart:
o 3o
It just gets to me.
I mean, I spend some of my time to write a story and he comes along and shoots me down after I feel so grateful to finish it.

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[Encarton]

Psh, just weigh the value of his opinion as one not to take much concern in.
If majority says its a good story disregard his remarks!
Some people are just picky picky~

 

[Meiazure]

Twinkle twinkle little star,
How I wonder what you are!
Up above the world so high,

=[

It's like how my mom used to criticize me for missing only a half mark on a math test. Criticism is good in some respects, but too much of it makes people feel unappreciated and that they're never good enough. I always think that encouragement is a much better method if you really have to criticize someone. =0

Like a diamond in the sky,
Twinkle twinkle little star,
How I wonder what you are!

 

[TillxGone]

{ Everyday I wake up, I choose Love, I choose Light }
{-❀--✿--❀--✿--❀--✿--❀-}

And I try it's too easy just to fall apart:
Though Cookie's criticism shouldn't really bother me, what he says is right. ; w;
Though, I thank everyone else who had liked my story.

{-❀--✿--❀--✿--❀--✿--❀-}  

[Meiazure]

Twinkle twinkle little star,
How I wonder what you are!
Up above the world so high,

=0

Oh, sorry. I wasn't laughing at the situation. It's just that whenever I read the words "grammar Nazi (Cookie)" in my head, I imagine a chocolate chip cookie with stick arms and legs (like eggo) walking on top of an essay on a desk, stomping on it while yelling: "What is this? What is this!?!?" and leaving cookie crumbs all over it. xDD

o.O I'm weird. redface

Like a diamond in the sky,
Twinkle twinkle little star,
How I wonder what you are!

 

[TillxGone]

{ Everyday I wake up, I choose Love, I choose Light }
{-❀--✿--❀--✿--❀--✿--❀-}

And I try it's too easy just to fall apart:
You made me think of something similar but, I see a waffle instead. o:

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[Encarton]

Her vivid description has also made me think of something similar except the cookie is wearing Nazi stuff in Hitler's office xD

 

[XxIxXAmXxDinosaurxX]

EMODINOSAIDWHAT?!

All I see is a dinosaur eating you all. :/

The Dino Has Spoken

 

[Encarton]

Aaron needs a psychiatrist O:
Hes obviously not right in the head xD

 

[TillxGone]

{ Everyday I wake up, I choose Love, I choose Light }
{-❀--✿--❀--✿--❀--✿--❀-}

And I try it's too easy just to fall apart:
He be liking dinosaurs. :3

{-❀--✿--❀--✿--❀--✿--❀-}  

[XxIxXAmXxDinosaurxX]

EMODINOSAIDWHAT?!

I already have a psychiatrist... But I ate her. :3

The Dino Has Spoken

 

[Encarton]

You ate her?
Gasp!
Must have been a waffle or something then...
cause I'm sure I would have heard about cannibalism on the tele otherwise xD