My Song (Now with an mp3! Making changes to song...)

[Sesshomaruka]

omg thank you ! ~

now i can listen to it on my ipod/phone x)


 

[KairiYukine]

♪我穿越想念得到幸福 有爱丁堡来守护
把爱变成那里的宝物 从此爱就坚固♪
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Omg, sweet! Thank you so much for the mp3! Yay! ^-^

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♪军乐很鼓舞又超酷 协奏著爱我们会同步
爱的城堡我想要居住 你要给我幸福♪

 

[Rio]

Nice song smile
I subscribed you XD I want to hear the chorus one day, so I gotta keep you in sight.
P:  

[MsPearfruit]

I really like it. = )
You're really good!  

[kuinluvsnear]

ur amazing! i play the piano too...but im still not good enough to come up with my own song...  

[sea-rover]

1000 times better than all the song i've wrote. heart  

[Cookie Piizha]

Cookie PIIZHA

Your song is amazing and beautiful.
Thank you for sharing! x]

 

[Ralphiie]

That is...amazing. :O

uhh.
uhh.
the only criticism I can say is that there wasn't any increase/decrease in sound at any point. It was like...the exact same volume throughout. o wo;;


But duuude. I'm completely jealous. ;___;  

[-Chuu Kitsune-]

.+. Wowwie . Truly Amazing . Favourited .+.

 

[TimmeeCitherix]

eek

I could listen to this song endlessly. Wow. I'm a musician myself, and this is both brilliant and beautiful.

Listening to it, it feels rushed. But, over time, I've come to enjoy your style. Maybe it is rushed, who knows. Put some more feeling into it.

Hope I didn't offend..  

[Dayam]

hey thx for your comments ^^

@TimmeeCitherix - yeah i noticed it was rushed a bit, i guess thats what happens when you take hundreds of takes and get frustrated

@Ralphiie - Thx for the advice, i've been working on the song a bit lately and have been doing some changes to the song. i'll probably be uploading a newer version that is both slower and more variance to sounds  

[Dayam]

been a long time since i updated...
anyway i uploaded a second version of my song. i took consideration of a few comments like speed and emotional values. hope it sounds better ^^  

[L O v 3`]

It's really good .
You're so talented..I mean I wish I could play the piano hahah


 

[Sesshomaruka]

my gosh ~
just when i thought it couldn't sound better.
you are a musician, a talented one; i envy you ><
i wish i can make my own songs ><
 

[KatMG]

Wow!!! I think your song is very wonderful!! 3nodding
I play piano as well, but I am not very good at writing songs. sweatdrop
I hope to hear the lyrics one day.