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Grand Chevalier Haji

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PostPosted: Wed Jun 05, 2013 2:26 pm
Yo-ko
denied. As discussed, you must change your discipline to the two element discipline in order to actually utilize 2 disciplines. then, you attribute needs to be written up, to as discussed

• Howling Winds:Noctis affinity for wind has always been greater than his affinity for water. His wind techniques defeat techniques of the same rank, while his water techniques are defeated by techniques of the same rank. All Noctis jutsu are still affected by, as well as can utilize elemental weaknesses.

must have 2 weaknesses

once those edits are posted, please quote and reapply


Howling Winds/Dry Ocean: Noctis affinity for wind has always been greater than his affinity for water. Thus allowing him to use the Single Element Discipline while still having two elements. But the discipline only affects his wind element. Noctis then forsakes learning Suiton jutsu in favor of his Fuuton.  
PostPosted: Wed Jun 05, 2013 6:51 pm
Grand Chevalier Haji
Yo-ko
denied. As discussed, you must change your discipline to the two element discipline in order to actually utilize 2 disciplines. then, you attribute needs to be written up, to as discussed

• Howling Winds:Noctis affinity for wind has always been greater than his affinity for water. His wind techniques defeat techniques of the same rank, while his water techniques are defeated by techniques of the same rank. All Noctis jutsu are still affected by, as well as can utilize elemental weaknesses.

must have 2 weaknesses

once those edits are posted, please quote and reapply


Howling Winds/Dry Ocean: Noctis affinity for wind has always been greater than his affinity for water. Thus allowing him to use the Single Element Discipline while still having two elements. But the discipline only affects his wind element. Noctis then forsakes learning Suiton jutsu in favor of his Fuuton.
no, that too is denied as that is infringing on the single element discipline. If you wish, simply use the attribute i ahve written out. if not, develop another idea.  

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PostPosted: Thu Jun 06, 2013 11:12 pm
Diablo en Musica 92
Quote:
NOTICE :: I kinda accidentally deleted my new profile stuff went, I was told to redo it and submit it, linking you to my very old profile stuff as prove that I did have these characters, all techniques listed are accepted, and that I'm not just a crazy b*****d that's lying my a** off.

Also in the last two post of that thread are the links to my training & Event Rewards.

Old Profile:
Found Here


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Full Name: Izuma Matsubara
Nickname: Izu

Age: 17
Birthdate: June 12th, XXXX
Gender: Male

Height: 5"9"
Weight: 178lbs

Nindo: "An eye for an eye..."
Personality: Izuma is a rather calm, polite, kind, caring and gentle individual. He would rather spend his time playing his flute than fighting or training. He treats others how they should be treated and he expected to be treated the same, with respect. When it comes to teaming up, he has really no likes or dislikes, he simple gets his missions done when they need to be done and moves on. Izuma is always willing to help those in need with minor to important task, making him a one of a kind individual. But because of his constant helping he at times looses track of the time.

When it comes to fighting and combat, he tends to dislike it. But when defending his village and fellow Shinobi, he can be down right nasty. Meaning, he's not afraid to go all out against his opponents. He also has not problem completely destroying your mental stability if it means protecting the things he finds important.

Village: Formerly Yukigakure, Konoha ( Temp. ), Currently Otogakure
Rank: Genin
First Class: Ninjutsu
Second Class: Sensor

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Bloodline: Shakuton - [ Scorch Release ]

Chakra Pool: [ 225 ] + [ 225 ] + [ 120 ] = [ 570 ]
Stamina Pool: [ 25 ] + [ 25 ] = [ 50 ]
Chakra Element: Katon (Fire) & Fuuton (Wind)
Chakra Color: Jade Green
Chakra Materialization: Bubbling Off

Strengths:
• Close - Mid Range Combat
• Bloodline Techniques
Weaknesses:
• Distance Combat
• Genjutsu
Fears:
• Tailed Beast
• Failing Village

Class Disciplines :
Elemental Dual Wielder - Your maximum chakra pool is increased by {10} points. The ninjutsu limit provided by this class is split amongst both of your chosen elements. ( At genin rank, rather than having a total of [ 06 ] ninjutsu slots for Katon or Suiton techniques, this class provides you with [ 06 ] slots for both Katon and Suiton techniques. Any ninjutsu slots received from other sources are filled at your discretion. )
Oracle - The character, through a special talent given at birth, can naturally sense chakra around them. The user can sense chakra around them up to a 5 yard radius without the use of a sensory technique. This radius is increased by 5 yards every time the user ranks up. Additionally, sensory techniques do not take up ninjutsu technique slots.
Reductions:
• None
• None
Personal Attributes:
• Sword Apprentice - Able to learn one [1] Bukijutsu style
• Combat Apprentice - Able to learn one [1] Taijutsu style

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Ryo: 両0
AC: 0

Missions Complete:
D Rank :: 0
C Rank :: 0
B Rank :: 0
A Rank :: 0
S Rank :: 0

Limitations:
• Ninjutsu : : 06 / 04
• Genjutsu : : 01 / 04
• Taijutsu Styles: : 00 / 00 / 01 (Att.)
• Bukijutsu Styles: : 00 / 00 / 01 (Att.)

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Weapon Type: Nodachi, Appearance
Weapon Range: The length of the nodachi's hilt varied between twelve to thirteen inches (30 to 33 centimeters). The blade was usually around four feet (122 centimeters) long. [ Close Range ]
Weapon Weight: 7.5 - 12.5lbs
Weapon Location: Back
• Basic Kunia Knife

Summoning Type: None
Summon Sage: No
Pacts: None

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• 10x Kunai
• 10x Shuriken
• 10x Senbon ( long needles )

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Maruton:
• Henge no Jutsu [ Transformation Technique ]
• Kawarimi no Jutsu [ Substitution Technique ]
• Genso Bushin no Jutsu [ Illusion Clone Technique ]
• Suimen Hokou no Waza [ Act of Water Surface Walking ]
• Kinobori no Waza [ Act of Tree Climbing ]
• Kai [ Release ]

Katon [ Fire ]


Fuuton [ Wind ]


Shakuton [ Scorch Release ]
• Mizu Shirizoke [ Water Repelling ], X
• Kensou no Bunshin [ Scorch Release: Dehydrated Clone ], X
• Moeru [ To Burn ], X
• Kabari [ Fire Needles], X

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• None

▬▬┤|T a i j u t s u

None
• N/A

▬▬┤|B u k i j u t s u

None
• N/A

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Izuma was born in Sunagakure with his mother and father bother being of the Shakuton Bloodline. He was born into a loving family that wanted him to become a great ninja or even a doctor if he so chose to be. It was his decision that he would have to make as he got older and close to the age where he could continue as a ninja or take a different path.

However fate had a different idea for the family. It was an attack upon the village of Sunagakure at the age of five that left the family separated from each other. Izuma and his mother were taken with the panic of the crowd, while his father was forced the stay and fight off the intrudes from the once famous village of Iwagakure. After a fearsome battle within the village, Sunagakure was victorious, but not without many injured and some deaths. One of those deaths being that of Izuma's father, many said he put up a fearsome fight with his Scorch Release, but he was overcome by the sheer numbers of enemy that had surrounded him. It would be about two weeks later that Izuma's father was laid to rest along with his other fallen comrades, a moment that crushed Izuma's young childhood.

At the age of only 13 Izuma's was still student at the academy in Sunagakure and his mother had to take up to duty and provide for them. Which meant she was now out on missions and had to come of her retirement, despite her conditions. It was also during one of those missions that she would meet the next love in her life, a shinobi from Yukigakure. They talked and sent letters for almost a year and a half before deciding to tie the knots. Despite protest from bother villages Izuma's mother remarried and began the paperwork to live in Yukigakure.

At the age of 15 Izuma and his mother had their minds streamed, removing secrets of Suna from their minds. They than departed to Yukigakure,upon arriving Izuma was noticed right away because of his mother and fathers fame. He was knonw as the Child of Two Suns. At the Academy Izuma finished his last year of academy, but never was officially given a headband due to concerns. But after a few years of debate Izuma will now be heading to the Yukikages office to become an official ninja of Yuki. While his mother settles done with his step father and start a new beginning.

However after a fearsome battle, Yukigakure had fallen, forcing him to take refugee in the Hidden Leaf. But after some time Izuma decided that he would take up services in Otogakure or the Hidden Sound as a Genin that served the Kage of that land.

This one is good to go.

The other one.... I am not so sure. Its no longer 6 for each element. Its six between the two, especially since you are dual. o.o'' You shouldn't have that many jutsu. Anyway. It looks alright... you just have to fix that first and repost it please.
 
PostPosted: Thu Jun 06, 2013 11:28 pm
digital m u f f i n s


- I thought that this Class Attribute gave me the 6 for each as it was going to be split. It is listed in the Ninjutsu class attribute.

Elemental Dual Wielder - Your maximum chakra pool is increased by {10} points. The ninjutsu limit provided by this class is split amongst both of your chosen elements. ( At genin rank, rather than having a total of [ 06 ] ninjutsu slots for Katon or Suiton techniques, this class provides you with [ 06 ] slots for both Katon and Suiton techniques. Any ninjutsu slots received from other sources are filled at your discretion. )

- Also the Jutsu did train for in the past ( O 3 O) and I did add so I figured it was right.

However if I'm wrong on the jutsu amount still I can simply remove some that is no big deal.  

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Grand Chevalier Haji

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PostPosted: Fri Jun 07, 2013 3:38 pm
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Full Name: Noctis Lucis Shinsetsu
Nickname: Noct, Noctis

Age: 21
Birthdate: June 26
Gender: Male

Height: 5'11
Weight: 170

Nindo: ""My duty is to protect everyone, before I protect myself.""
Personality:Pre-Hokage:Noctis is Stubborn, , strong-willed outspoken, he attempts to maintain a detached and "cool" image, despite claiming not to care about what other people think about him.if somebody picks a fight with him, he cannot help fighting back.He is genuinely compassionate and empathetic about others.Noctis has some trouble with authority and traditional respect, often quite rude and disrespectful when talking to those older than himself. Though he can be also be quite lazy

Hokage:Noctis still attempts to maintain a cool image, but he has chilled out quite a bit so to speak. Being Hokage and taking care of the village has mellowed him out.
Village: Konohagakure
Rank: Konin-Kage Level(Hokage)
First Class: Bloodline
Second Class: Bloodline

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Bloodline: Shinsetsu

Chakra Pool:1170
Stamina Pool: 950
Chakra Element: Wind, Water
Chakra Color: White
Chakra Materialization: When he is calm it appears like snow gently falling. But if you get him angry the snow quickly whips around his body like a blizzard.

Strengths:
• Ninjutsu
• Bloodline
Weaknesses:
• Genjutsu

Fears:
• Failing his Village
• Letting his shinobi die

Class Disciplines :
• Thoroughbred: Your maximum chakra pool and maximum stamina pool are both increased by {10} points, and you receive an additional {05} points to each pool whenever you rank up. Additionally, when you perform bloodline techniques above Rank D, you are refunded {05} chakra or {05} stamina, depending on which energy was used. ( If chakra was used, you recover chakra; if stamina was used, you recover stamina; if both were used, you recover both. )
•Blood Knight: Your bloodline techniques possess greater power, allowing them to overwhelm techniques of the same rank, and preventing them from succumbing to elemental weaknesses of techniques the same rank.
•If this class is taken as the first and second class, then the user may pick 2 of its disciplines. Additionally, the cost to perform bloodline techniques is reduced by 10 chakra, to a minimum of 5.
Reductions:
•Learns Bloodline Techniques 4 posts faster
Personal Attributes:
• Gains 3 extra custom slots
• Bloodline Master: Due to Noctis Specialization in his bloodline he gains the ability to perform bloodline jutsu with no handsigns.
Training Attributes
Shigure Soen
•Insight Rain: The user will practice extending themselves into the atmosphere, in a sense. After much dedication, the user develops the ability to sense hostile intent in the immediate area. As to where, however, they cannot be sure.

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Ryo: 両 1370
AC: 51,250

Missions Complete:
D Rank :: 9
C Rank :: 10
B Rank :: 3
A Rank :: 3
S Rank :: 1



Time Skip Rewards
First Time Skip
Mission points obtained: 10
Training name: Extreme
Chakra reward: +60
Cost: 8
Training name:Simple
Chakra reward: +10
Cost: 2 X

Second Time Skip
Nadeshiko-Ryū Kōha Senkaigiri [ Nadeshiko-Style Hardliner Revolving Cut ]
Rank: B- 8 points
Nadeshiko-Ryū Kōha Reppūken [ Nadeshiko-Style Hardliner Gale Fist ]
Rank: - 8 points
Rasengan [ Spiral Sphere ]
Rank: A -16 points
Tandokuhikou [ Solo Flight ]
Rank: A -16 points
Gentoushin no Jutsu [ Lit Apparition Technique ]
Rank: A-16 points

28mpt
Extreme training (+60 chakra) : : 8 mpts.
Extreme training (+60 chakra) : : 8 mpts.
Extreme training (+60 chakra) : : 8 mpts.
Simple training (+10 chakra) : : 2 mpts.
Simple training (+10 chakra) : : 2 mpts.
Total 200 Chakra/Stamina
Thread Link
Completed Training Missions
Genin
❥ Basic Chakra Training: Meditate x2
+40 ChakraX
❥ Basic Chakra Training: Performance x2
+20 ChakraX
❥ Basic Chakra Training: Spar-Defeat
+10 ChakraX
❥ Basic Chakra Training: Spar-Victory
+25X
Chunnin
❥Chakra Training: Meditatex2
+50 ChakraX
❥ Chakra Training: Performancex2
+30X
❥ Chakra Training: Sparx2
+50X
Jounin
❥Advanced Chakra Training: Concentratex2
+60X
❥Advanced Chakra Training: Performance x2
+30X
❥ Advanced Chakra Training: Combat
+35 X

Limitations: {How many of each technique you can learn. Refer to class info}
• Ninjutsu : : 26/ 20((Six jutsu are crossed out and unable to be used))
• Genjutsu : : 00/ 05
• Taijutsu Styles: : 00 / 02
• Bukijutsu Styles: : 00 / 02

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Weapon Type: Katana
Weapon Range: 65 cm
Weapon Weight: 3 pounds
Weapon Location: Back


Summoning Type:
Summon Sage:
Pacts:

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• 10 Smoke Pellets
• 5 Explosive tags
• 5 Kunai
• 10 Shuriken
• Jounin Scroll X

• Fairytale Pattern Scarf
• Long-Sleeve Yukata ( Snowflake )


• Short-Sleeve Yukata ( Snowflake )
• Snowflake Shurikenx10
• Winter's Tooth ( Senbon ) x2


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Maruton:
• Henge no Jutsu [ Transformation Technique ]
• Kawarimi no Jutsu [ Substitution Technique ]
• Bushin no Jutsu [ Clone Technique ]
• Suimen Hokou no Waza [ Act of Water Surface Walking ]
• Kinobori no Waza [ Act of Tree Climbing ]
• Kai [ Release ]
• Shadow Clone Jutsu X
• Shunshin no Jutsu-X
•Chakra Kyuuin Jutsu [ Chakra Absorption Technique ]
Rank: D

•Karasu Bunshin no Jutsu [ Crow Clone Technique ]
Rank: C
•Dokushinjutsu [ Eye Mind Reading ]
Rank: C
•Hari Jizou [ Underworld Guardian Spikes ]
Rank: B
Ranji Shigumi no Jutsu [ Wild Lion's Mane Technique ]
Rank: B

•Ukojizai no Jutsu [ Fierce Raining at Will ]
Rank: B
•Hyourou no Jutsu [ Ice Prison Technique ]
Rank: B
•Kagerou [ Mayfly ]
Rank: S
Training for Jutsu Above

Fuuton
•Kaze Bunshin [ Wind Clone ]
Rank: E
Tobidougu Soujuu no Jutsu [ Projectile Control Technique ]
Rank: E

•Boufuu Kyuuzou [ Gale Surge ]
Rank: D
•Zankuuha [ Decapitating Air Waves ]
Rank: D
•Daitoppa [ Great Breakthrough ]
Rank: C
•Zankyokukuuha [ Extreme Decapitating Air Waves ]
Rank: C
Furyuu no Jutsu [ Wind Dragon Technique ]
Rank: C

•Koukiatsu no Jutsu [ High Air Pressure Technique ]
Rank: C

•Kaze no Yaiba [ Sword of Wind ]
Rank: C
Furyuuchou Ken [ Flowing Wind Fist ]
Rank: B

•Atsugai [ Pressure Damage ]
Rank: B
•Juha: Reppushou [ Beast Wave: Gale Wind Palm ]
Rank: A
Training for Fuuton Jutsu Above
•Kaze Bunshin Bakuha [ Wind Clone Explosion ]Rank: B-Learned-X
•Jousoukiryuu [ Currents ]
Rank: A
•Kyojin Taka Bakuha [ Giant Falcon Blast ]
Rank: S
•Otonashi Kaze [ Silent Wind ]
Rank: S
Training for Jutsu Above


Shinsetsu

Hatsuyuki [ First Snow ]
Rank: D — Chakra
__Genin: Creates 1 cloud; Maximum 2 clouds.
___Chunin: Creates 1 cloud; Maximum 4 clouds.
___Jounin: Creates 2 clouds; Maximum 6 clouds.
___Konin: Creates 3 clouds; Maximum 6 clouds.
___Sannin: Creates 3 clouds; Maximum 9 clouds.

Yukimari [ Snowball ]
Rank: E — Chakra

Kousetsu [ Snowfall ]
Rank: D — Chakra

Yukibakudan [ Snowbomb ]
Rank: C — Chakra

Fuyu no Ibuki [ Breath of Winter ]
Rank: C — Chakra

Fuyu no Unari [ Winter's Howl ]
Rank: C — Chakra

Fubuki Hira no Jutsu [ Snowstorm Palm Technique ]
Rank: B — Chakra

Boufuusetsu no Unari [ Blizzard's Bellow ]
Rank: B — Chakra

Hanpou Kousetsu [ Rampant Snowfall ]
Rank: B — Chakra

Yuki-onna no Houyou [ Snow Woman's Embrace ]
Rank: A — Complex

Hyou [ Hail ]
Rank: A — Chakra

Teikiatsu Kousetsu [ Cyclone Snowfall ]
Rank: S — Chakra
Old bloodline tech traded for New bloodline techs
•Hatsuyuki [ First Snow ]
Rank E-Learned X
•Yukimari [ Snowball ]
Rank E -LearnedX
•Ooyukimari [ Heavy Snowball ]
Rank D -LearnedX
•Koyukimari [ Great Snowball ]
Rank C-LearnedX
•Kousetsu [ Snowfall ]
Rank D-Learned X
•Oosetsu [ Heavy Snowfall ]
Rank C-Learned X
•Gousetsu [ Tremendous Snowfall ]
Rank B-LearnedX
•Kake no Yuki [ Fragment of Snow ]
Rank C -Learned X
•Zouge Seppun [ Ivory Kiss ]
Rank C -LearnedX
•Setsuzou [ Snow Sculpture ]
Rank C -Learned-X
•Fuyu no Iki [ Breath of Winter ]
Rank C Learned-X
•Youkai Yuki [ Snow Phantom ]
Rank B Learned-X
•Fubuki Hira [ Snow Storm Palm ]
Rank A
•Hyou [ Hail ]
Rank A
•Kogarashi [ Wintry Winds ]
Rank A
Training for the 3 Jutsu above.
•Hyouga Reiki [ Glacier Aura ]
Rank S
X

Fuinjutsu
•Bunshin Houin [ Clone Sealing ]
Rank: A
X

Kuchiyose
•Shizen no Kuchiyose [ Nature Summoning ]
Rank: C
•Gyaku Kuchiyose no Jutsu [ Reverse Summoning Technique ]
Rank: C
Training for Jutsu Above

Custom Jutsu

Snow Armor Rank-Rank C X


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• {If none, remove section}

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Dainamikku-Entori [ Dynamic Entry ]
Simple :: E-Ranked
Dainamikku-Akushon [ Dynamic Action ]
Simple :: E-Ranked
Youjitsuba [ Spitting Toothpick ]
Simple :: E-Ranked

___S t a g e T w o [2]
Asshou [ Pressure Palm ]
Simple :: D-Ranked
Fuuma Kage Shuriken no Jutsu [ Wind Shuriken Shadow Windmill ]
Simple :: D-Ranked
Haridoku [ Poison Needles ]
Simple :: D-Ranked
Harisuzu [ Bell Needles ]
Simple :: D-Ranked
Hayabusa Otoshi [ Peregrine Falcon Drop ]
Simple :: D-Ranked
Houshou [ Crushing Fist ]
Simple :: D-Ranked
Kage Buyou [ Leaf Shadow Dance ]
Simple :: D-Ranked
Konoha Senpuu [ Leaf Spinning Wind ]
Simple :: D-Ranked
Konoha Daisenpuu [ Leaf Great Whirlwind ]
Simple :: D-Ranked
Konoha Reppuu [ Leaf Violent Wind ]
Simple :: D-Ranked
Shoushitsu [ Knee Strike ]
Simple :: D-Ranked
Tokken [ Tackle Charge ]
Simple :: D-Ranked
Tsutenkyaku [ Painful Sky Leg ]
Simple :: D-Ranked

___S t a g e T h r e e [3]
Bunshin Kaiten Kakatou Otoshi [ Clone Spinning Heel Drop ]
Complex :: C-Ranked
Bunshin Taiatari [ Clone Body Blow ]
Complex :: C-Ranked
Hien [ Flying Swallow ]
Complex :: C-Ranked
Konoha Gouriki Senpuu [ Leaf Herculean Whirlwind ]
Simple :: C-Ranked
Konoha Shofu [ Leaf Rising Wind ]
Simple :: C-Ranked
Midare Senbu [ Chaos Fan Dance ]
Simple :: C-Ranked
Sakura Fubuki no Jutsu [ Cherry Blossom Blizzard Technique ]
Simple :: C-Ranked
Shishi Rendan [ Lion Combo ]
Simple :: C-Ranked
Shou-Geki-Shou [ Rising Impact Palm ]
Simple :: C-Ranked

___S t a g e F o u r [4]
Konoha Raiken [ Leaf Thunder Fist ]
Simple / Complex :: B-Ranked
Isshi Resshin [ One-fingered Earthquake ]
Simple :: B-Ranked

___S t a g e F i v e [5]
Oukashou
Complex :: B-Ranked
Tsuuten Kyaku
Complex :: B-Ranked
Kujiku Hajiku [ To Break and Snap ]
Simple :: A-Ranked

___S t a g e S i x [6]
Sodate Rakka [ Raising Drop ]
Simple :: S-Ranked

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Shigure Soen
Stage 1
Simple • [ Axle Of Rain ]-Rank E-Learned X
Complex • [ Rolling Rain ]-Rank E-LearnedX
Complex•Misting Rain-Rank:E-Learned X
Stage 2
Simple• [ Last Minute Rain ]-Rank D-LearrnedX
Simple • [ May Wind, October Rain ]-Rank D-LearnedX
Stage 3
Simple• [ Summer Rain ]-Rank C-LearnedX
Complex • [ Splashing Rain ]-Rank C-LearnedX
•Blessed Rain Rank: C : : +35 Chakra Training-X
Stage 4
• Complex [ Innocent Rain ] - -LearnedX
• [ Insight Rain ] - Passive-LearnedX
Fiendish Speed Rain
Rank: B : : Complex
___S t a g e F i v e [5]
Pelting Rain
Rank: A : : Simple
Torrential Dance
Rank: A : : Complex
Flame Spin Rain
Rank: A : : Complex

___S t a g e Six [6]
Duplicate Rain
Rank: S : : Complex
Seasonal Dance
Rank: S : : Complex
Torrential Blessings
Rank: S : : Training
• Chakra pool +65
The Task of the Next Generation
Rank: S : : Passive

Shunkan no Hagane

Stage One,E Rank

○ Basic Chop

○ Forward Step

○ Backward Step

○ Basic Stab

○ Basic Block

Stage Two,D Rank

○ Pivot Block

○ Forward Grind

○ Deflection One

○ Disarming One

Stage Three, C Rank

○ Calligraphy

○ Extension

○ Thread Walking One

○ Solid Footing

Stage Four,B Rank

○ Swordslinger

○ Sensory Information

○ Twin Blade

○ Brush Stroke

○ Hydra Strike

○ Disarming Two

○ Deflection Two

○ Advancement of Steel

Stage Five,A Rank

○ Shearing Learned

○ Thread Walking Two

○ Crescent Block

○ Defense of Steel

○ Sword Drawing Technique


Stage Six,S Rank

○ Final Words

○ Vorpal Blade

○ Movement of Steel

○ Offense of Steel

○ Instant of Steel

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Noctis is from the Shinsetsu clan, he was there when they were going to be invaded and heard of how the other clan was completely obliterated. he had known people from that clan. He was made how they were so suddenly taken away and was glad when his clan made them retreat.He learned from that that nothing good ever comes from showing off everything you got that the strongest keep things to themselves until the time is right. When his clan made the decision to send families out to different parts of the world. He was angry why should they have to leave their homeland. If they were able to hold of the invaders that time they would be able to do it the next time as well.But it wasn't up to him. And his family was sent to the Land of Fire they settled in Konohagakure, but the whole experience had made Noctis a cold person. He didn't really put much trust into anyone thinking that he could be better of by himself but the truth is that if he acted that way no one would get close enough for him to care if they ever disappeared. He became a academy to further himself in attaining more power so he could protect himself and not rely on other ninja or the kage to do it for him.

During his genin years he met many people, most notably Shikatsu Nara and Eclipse Naito Inuzuka. He quickly became friends with them, despite his urge to not rely on anyone. He then unfortunatly met another genin, Reiko Uchiha. He was arrogant, prideful and a a*****e. He hated him with every fiber because of this he wished to surpass even him. He trained hard and soon became a chunnin, surpassing his two friends. But Reiko continued at his level, becoming a chunnin the same time he did. He still kept in touch with Shikatsu and Eclipse, Eclipse more so than Shika. Him and Eclipse went out on a training trip, after it was over they decided to relax at a nearby bathhouse. Lets say things ended up getting heated between the two, basically a one night stand. They never told anyone and kept it a secret. Not like anyone would find out right? Oh by the way, she was engaged to Reiko Uchiha ya remember that a*****e? HIM.

The day of her wedding came, but she never arrived, she ended up giving birth to twins one with blood red eyes and the other blue as the sky. There was something oddly familiar about the kids. At least, about the twin girl, he suddenly came to the realization that they were his.Soon after becoming Jounin, It seemed the fates decided to actually alleviate his problems and Reiko was banished from Konoha for abandoning a mission. He was soon after killed by Kumogakure shinobi. Noctis then told Eclipse that the kids were his and she knew it too. They decided to be together, even though at the moment they didn't truly love each other. It was for the kids, and Noctis over time fell in love with Eclipse and he always loved his kids.

Noctis soon gained an apprentice, Jae Ketsueki. They didn't really mesh well together, she was a tripolar crazy chick. And he was a calm cold and collected type of person. He thought many things about her were off, he never remembered seeing her in the village. She just appeared, he didn't know the reasons the Hokage paired them together but he guessed it was for the best. They headed to Yukigakure, were Noctis committed what he thinks was one of the worst things in his life. He followed Jae after she had run off and discovered her secret. She wasn't native of Konoha, but then again neither was he. He revealed to her what he had done that seemed to be one of the definitive moments were a crack between them appeared.

The chunnin exams rolled around and he participated along with Jae, though after his match he was called away by Anbu. He was named Hokage, the leader of a village. For the first few days he was in shock. He couldn't believe he had to take care of this entire village. He didn't believe he had it in him, he was always a solitary kind of person. The previous Hokage approached him and said."Being Hokage doesn't mean being the strongest, smartest, or fastest. You just have to accept everyone in this village as your family and protect them as you would them." Those words resounded through his mind. His family? This village was his family? From that day on he was determined to protect everyone with everything he had. Jae returned to Konoha after the exams to the surprise of him sitting in the Hokage's chair. It seemed a the crack mended itself a little during each others absence.

One night, he found Jae drinking alone and she asked him a question."What do you think of Jae?" He was surprised by this. For one she wasn't loud or angry she just spoke normally. But he also didn't know what to say, he did he think of her? In all honesty he didn't know so he reply was."Jae...is Jae..." At that moment, the crack tore open once again. Steadily the crack increased between them over time. No matter how much he tried it seemed he only brought out the worst of Jae.

But life went on, His kids grew up so fast they were already talking and walking around like it was nothing. He really did care deeply for them and Eclipse. Though he didn't have much time for them since his Hokage duties kept him busy. He did his duties as Hokage and even gained a new apprentice. A skilled young genin, he trained him well and he quickly became jounin.

New of the UHV came later that year, they had formed together from the smaller villages. Seemingly becoming a force to be reckoned with. They began expanding their land. Noctis had a bad feeling, they weren't made to protect themselves.

Jae returned after an extended vacation. The crack between them only grew deeper despite what he did. But during the time away he finally understood how he felt about her. To him Jae was...

THE END **For now**


 
PostPosted: Fri Jun 07, 2013 5:12 pm
Yo-ko

Azeiel The Fallen


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Ningishzida

Demonic Gatekeeper


Yo-ko

Hallowed Prophet

PostPosted: Fri Jun 07, 2013 5:13 pm
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Full Name: Noctis Lucis Shinsetsu
Nickname: Noct, Noctis

Age: 21
Birthdate: June 26
Gender: Male

Height: 5'11
Weight: 170

Nindo: ""My duty is to protect everyone, before I protect myself.""
Personality:Pre-Hokage:Noctis is Stubborn, , strong-willed outspoken, he attempts to maintain a detached and "cool" image, despite claiming not to care about what other people think about him.if somebody picks a fight with him, he cannot help fighting back.He is genuinely compassionate and empathetic about others.Noctis has some trouble with authority and traditional respect, often quite rude and disrespectful when talking to those older than himself. Though he can be also be quite lazy

Hokage:Noctis still attempts to maintain a cool image, but he has chilled out quite a bit so to speak. Being Hokage and taking care of the village has mellowed him out.
Village: Konohagakure
Rank: Konin-Kage Level(Hokage)
First Class: Bloodline
Second Class: Bloodline

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Bloodline: Shinsetsu

Chakra Pool:1170
Stamina Pool: 950
Chakra Element: Wind, Water
Chakra Color: White
Chakra Materialization: When he is calm it appears like snow gently falling. But if you get him angry the snow quickly whips around his body like a blizzard.

Strengths:
• Ninjutsu
• Bloodline
Weaknesses:
• Genjutsu

Fears:
• Failing his Village
• Letting his shinobi die

Class Disciplines :
• Thoroughbred: Your maximum chakra pool and maximum stamina pool are both increased by {10} points, and you receive an additional {05} points to each pool whenever you rank up. Additionally, when you perform bloodline techniques above Rank D, you are refunded {05} chakra or {05} stamina, depending on which energy was used. ( If chakra was used, you recover chakra; if stamina was used, you recover stamina; if both were used, you recover both. )
•Blood Knight: Your bloodline techniques possess greater power, allowing them to overwhelm techniques of the same rank, and preventing them from succumbing to elemental weaknesses of techniques the same rank.
•If this class is taken as the first and second class, then the user may pick 2 of its disciplines. Additionally, the cost to perform bloodline techniques is reduced by 10 chakra, to a minimum of 5.
Reductions:
•Learns Bloodline Techniques 4 posts faster
Personal Attributes:
• Gains 3 extra custom slots
• Bloodline Master: Due to Noctis Specialization in his bloodline he gains the ability to perform bloodline jutsu with no handsigns.
Training Attributes
Shigure Soen
•Insight Rain: The user will practice extending themselves into the atmosphere, in a sense. After much dedication, the user develops the ability to sense hostile intent in the immediate area. As to where, however, they cannot be sure.

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Ryo: 両 1370
AC: 51,250

Missions Complete:
D Rank :: 9
C Rank :: 10
B Rank :: 3
A Rank :: 3
S Rank :: 1



Time Skip Rewards
First Time Skip
Mission points obtained: 10
Training name: Extreme
Chakra reward: +60
Cost: 8
Training name:Simple
Chakra reward: +10
Cost: 2 X

Second Time Skip
Nadeshiko-Ryū Kōha Senkaigiri [ Nadeshiko-Style Hardliner Revolving Cut ]
Rank: B- 8 points
Nadeshiko-Ryū Kōha Reppūken [ Nadeshiko-Style Hardliner Gale Fist ]
Rank: - 8 points
Rasengan [ Spiral Sphere ]
Rank: A -16 points
Tandokuhikou [ Solo Flight ]
Rank: A -16 points
Gentoushin no Jutsu [ Lit Apparition Technique ]
Rank: A-16 points

28mpt
Extreme training (+60 chakra) : : 8 mpts.
Extreme training (+60 chakra) : : 8 mpts.
Extreme training (+60 chakra) : : 8 mpts.
Simple training (+10 chakra) : : 2 mpts.
Simple training (+10 chakra) : : 2 mpts.
Total 200 Chakra/Stamina
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Completed Training Missions
Genin
❥ Basic Chakra Training: Meditate x2
+40 ChakraX
❥ Basic Chakra Training: Performance x2
+20 ChakraX
❥ Basic Chakra Training: Spar-Defeat
+10 ChakraX
❥ Basic Chakra Training: Spar-Victory
+25X
Chunnin
❥Chakra Training: Meditatex2
+50 ChakraX
❥ Chakra Training: Performancex2
+30X
❥ Chakra Training: Sparx2
+50X
Jounin
❥Advanced Chakra Training: Concentratex2
+60X
❥Advanced Chakra Training: Performance x2
+30X
❥ Advanced Chakra Training: Combat
+35 X

Limitations: {How many of each technique you can learn. Refer to class info}
• Ninjutsu : : 26/ 20((Six jutsu are crossed out and unable to be used))
• Genjutsu : : 00/ 05
• Taijutsu Styles: : 00 / 02
• Bukijutsu Styles: : 00 / 02

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Weapon Type: Katana
Weapon Range: 65 cm
Weapon Weight: 3 pounds
Weapon Location: Back


Summoning Type:
Summon Sage:
Pacts:

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• 10 Smoke Pellets
• 5 Explosive tags
• 5 Kunai
• 10 Shuriken
• Jounin Scroll X

• Fairytale Pattern Scarf
• Long-Sleeve Yukata ( Snowflake )


• Short-Sleeve Yukata ( Snowflake )
• Snowflake Shurikenx10
• Winter's Tooth ( Senbon ) x2


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Maruton:
• Henge no Jutsu [ Transformation Technique ]
• Kawarimi no Jutsu [ Substitution Technique ]
• Bushin no Jutsu [ Clone Technique ]
• Suimen Hokou no Waza [ Act of Water Surface Walking ]
• Kinobori no Waza [ Act of Tree Climbing ]
• Kai [ Release ]
• Shadow Clone Jutsu X
• Shunshin no Jutsu-X
•Chakra Kyuuin Jutsu [ Chakra Absorption Technique ]
Rank: D

•Karasu Bunshin no Jutsu [ Crow Clone Technique ]
Rank: C
•Dokushinjutsu [ Eye Mind Reading ]
Rank: C
•Hari Jizou [ Underworld Guardian Spikes ]
Rank: B
Ranji Shigumi no Jutsu [ Wild Lion's Mane Technique ]
Rank: B

•Ukojizai no Jutsu [ Fierce Raining at Will ]
Rank: B
•Hyourou no Jutsu [ Ice Prison Technique ]
Rank: B
•Kagerou [ Mayfly ]
Rank: S
Training for Jutsu Above

Fuuton
•Kaze Bunshin [ Wind Clone ]
Rank: E
Tobidougu Soujuu no Jutsu [ Projectile Control Technique ]
Rank: E

•Boufuu Kyuuzou [ Gale Surge ]
Rank: D
•Zankuuha [ Decapitating Air Waves ]
Rank: D
•Daitoppa [ Great Breakthrough ]
Rank: C
•Zankyokukuuha [ Extreme Decapitating Air Waves ]
Rank: C
Furyuu no Jutsu [ Wind Dragon Technique ]
Rank: C

•Koukiatsu no Jutsu [ High Air Pressure Technique ]
Rank: C

•Kaze no Yaiba [ Sword of Wind ]
Rank: C
Furyuuchou Ken [ Flowing Wind Fist ]
Rank: B

•Atsugai [ Pressure Damage ]
Rank: B
•Juha: Reppushou [ Beast Wave: Gale Wind Palm ]
Rank: A
Training for Fuuton Jutsu Above
•Kaze Bunshin Bakuha [ Wind Clone Explosion ]Rank: B-Learned-X
•Jousoukiryuu [ Currents ]
Rank: A
•Kyojin Taka Bakuha [ Giant Falcon Blast ]
Rank: S
•Otonashi Kaze [ Silent Wind ]
Rank: S
Training for Jutsu Above


Shinsetsu

Hatsuyuki [ First Snow ]
Rank: D — Chakra
__Genin: Creates 1 cloud; Maximum 2 clouds.
___Chunin: Creates 1 cloud; Maximum 4 clouds.
___Jounin: Creates 2 clouds; Maximum 6 clouds.
___Konin: Creates 3 clouds; Maximum 6 clouds.
___Sannin: Creates 3 clouds; Maximum 9 clouds.

Yukimari [ Snowball ]
Rank: E — Chakra

Kousetsu [ Snowfall ]
Rank: D — Chakra

Yukibakudan [ Snowbomb ]
Rank: C — Chakra

Fuyu no Ibuki [ Breath of Winter ]
Rank: C — Chakra

Fuyu no Unari [ Winter's Howl ]
Rank: C — Chakra

Fubuki Hira no Jutsu [ Snowstorm Palm Technique ]
Rank: B — Chakra

Boufuusetsu no Unari [ Blizzard's Bellow ]
Rank: B — Chakra

Hanpou Kousetsu [ Rampant Snowfall ]
Rank: B — Chakra

Yuki-onna no Houyou [ Snow Woman's Embrace ]
Rank: A — Complex

Hyou [ Hail ]
Rank: A — Chakra

Teikiatsu Kousetsu [ Cyclone Snowfall ]
Rank: S — Chakra
Old bloodline tech traded for New bloodline techs
•Hatsuyuki [ First Snow ]
Rank E-Learned X
•Yukimari [ Snowball ]
Rank E -LearnedX
•Ooyukimari [ Heavy Snowball ]
Rank D -LearnedX
•Koyukimari [ Great Snowball ]
Rank C-LearnedX
•Kousetsu [ Snowfall ]
Rank D-Learned X
•Oosetsu [ Heavy Snowfall ]
Rank C-Learned X
•Gousetsu [ Tremendous Snowfall ]
Rank B-LearnedX
•Kake no Yuki [ Fragment of Snow ]
Rank C -Learned X
•Zouge Seppun [ Ivory Kiss ]
Rank C -LearnedX
•Setsuzou [ Snow Sculpture ]
Rank C -Learned-X
•Fuyu no Iki [ Breath of Winter ]
Rank C Learned-X
•Youkai Yuki [ Snow Phantom ]
Rank B Learned-X
•Fubuki Hira [ Snow Storm Palm ]
Rank A
•Hyou [ Hail ]
Rank A
•Kogarashi [ Wintry Winds ]
Rank A
Training for the 3 Jutsu above.
•Hyouga Reiki [ Glacier Aura ]
Rank S
X

Fuinjutsu
•Bunshin Houin [ Clone Sealing ]
Rank: A
X

Kuchiyose
•Shizen no Kuchiyose [ Nature Summoning ]
Rank: C
•Gyaku Kuchiyose no Jutsu [ Reverse Summoning Technique ]
Rank: C
Training for Jutsu Above

Custom Jutsu

Snow Armor Rank-Rank C X


▬▬┤|G e n j u t s u

• {If none, remove section}

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___S t a g e O n e [1]

Dainamikku-Entori [ Dynamic Entry ]
Simple :: E-Ranked
Dainamikku-Akushon [ Dynamic Action ]
Simple :: E-Ranked
Youjitsuba [ Spitting Toothpick ]
Simple :: E-Ranked

___S t a g e T w o [2]
Asshou [ Pressure Palm ]
Simple :: D-Ranked
Fuuma Kage Shuriken no Jutsu [ Wind Shuriken Shadow Windmill ]
Simple :: D-Ranked
Haridoku [ Poison Needles ]
Simple :: D-Ranked
Harisuzu [ Bell Needles ]
Simple :: D-Ranked
Hayabusa Otoshi [ Peregrine Falcon Drop ]
Simple :: D-Ranked
Houshou [ Crushing Fist ]
Simple :: D-Ranked
Kage Buyou [ Leaf Shadow Dance ]
Simple :: D-Ranked
Konoha Senpuu [ Leaf Spinning Wind ]
Simple :: D-Ranked
Konoha Daisenpuu [ Leaf Great Whirlwind ]
Simple :: D-Ranked
Konoha Reppuu [ Leaf Violent Wind ]
Simple :: D-Ranked
Shoushitsu [ Knee Strike ]
Simple :: D-Ranked
Tokken [ Tackle Charge ]
Simple :: D-Ranked
Tsutenkyaku [ Painful Sky Leg ]
Simple :: D-Ranked

___S t a g e T h r e e [3]
Bunshin Kaiten Kakatou Otoshi [ Clone Spinning Heel Drop ]
Complex :: C-Ranked
Bunshin Taiatari [ Clone Body Blow ]
Complex :: C-Ranked
Hien [ Flying Swallow ]
Complex :: C-Ranked
Konoha Gouriki Senpuu [ Leaf Herculean Whirlwind ]
Simple :: C-Ranked
Konoha Shofu [ Leaf Rising Wind ]
Simple :: C-Ranked
Midare Senbu [ Chaos Fan Dance ]
Simple :: C-Ranked
Sakura Fubuki no Jutsu [ Cherry Blossom Blizzard Technique ]
Simple :: C-Ranked
Shishi Rendan [ Lion Combo ]
Simple :: C-Ranked
Shou-Geki-Shou [ Rising Impact Palm ]
Simple :: C-Ranked

___S t a g e F o u r [4]
Konoha Raiken [ Leaf Thunder Fist ]
Simple / Complex :: B-Ranked
Isshi Resshin [ One-fingered Earthquake ]
Simple :: B-Ranked

___S t a g e F i v e [5]
Oukashou
Complex :: B-Ranked
Tsuuten Kyaku
Complex :: B-Ranked
Kujiku Hajiku [ To Break and Snap ]
Simple :: A-Ranked

___S t a g e S i x [6]
Sodate Rakka [ Raising Drop ]
Simple :: S-Ranked

Style Given by Corrections Office


▬▬┤|B u k i j u t s u

Shigure Soen
Stage 1
Simple • [ Axle Of Rain ]-Rank E-Learned X
Complex • [ Rolling Rain ]-Rank E-LearnedX
Complex•Misting Rain-Rank:E-Learned X
Stage 2
Simple• [ Last Minute Rain ]-Rank D-LearrnedX
Simple • [ May Wind, October Rain ]-Rank D-LearnedX
Stage 3
Simple• [ Summer Rain ]-Rank C-LearnedX
Complex • [ Splashing Rain ]-Rank C-LearnedX
•Blessed Rain Rank: C : : +35 Chakra Training-X
Stage 4
• Complex [ Innocent Rain ] - -LearnedX
• [ Insight Rain ] - Passive-LearnedX
Fiendish Speed Rain
Rank: B : : Complex
___S t a g e F i v e [5]
Pelting Rain
Rank: A : : Simple
Torrential Dance
Rank: A : : Complex
Flame Spin Rain
Rank: A : : Complex

___S t a g e Six [6]
Duplicate Rain
Rank: S : : Complex
Seasonal Dance
Rank: S : : Complex
Torrential Blessings
Rank: S : : Training
• Chakra pool +65
The Task of the Next Generation
Rank: S : : Passive

Shunkan no Hagane

Stage One,E Rank

○ Basic Chop

○ Forward Step

○ Backward Step

○ Basic Stab

○ Basic Block

Stage Two,D Rank

○ Pivot Block

○ Forward Grind

○ Deflection One

○ Disarming One

Stage Three, C Rank

○ Calligraphy

○ Extension

○ Thread Walking One

○ Solid Footing

Stage Four,B Rank

○ Swordslinger

○ Sensory Information

○ Twin Blade

○ Brush Stroke

○ Hydra Strike

○ Disarming Two

○ Deflection Two

○ Advancement of Steel

Stage Five,A Rank

○ Shearing Learned

○ Thread Walking Two

○ Crescent Block

○ Defense of Steel

○ Sword Drawing Technique


Stage Six,S Rank

○ Final Words

○ Vorpal Blade

○ Movement of Steel

○ Offense of Steel

○ Instant of Steel

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Noctis is from the Shinsetsu clan, he was there when they were going to be invaded and heard of how the other clan was completely obliterated. he had known people from that clan. He was made how they were so suddenly taken away and was glad when his clan made them retreat.He learned from that that nothing good ever comes from showing off everything you got that the strongest keep things to themselves until the time is right. When his clan made the decision to send families out to different parts of the world. He was angry why should they have to leave their homeland. If they were able to hold of the invaders that time they would be able to do it the next time as well.But it wasn't up to him. And his family was sent to the Land of Fire they settled in Konohagakure, but the whole experience had made Noctis a cold person. He didn't really put much trust into anyone thinking that he could be better of by himself but the truth is that if he acted that way no one would get close enough for him to care if they ever disappeared. He became a academy to further himself in attaining more power so he could protect himself and not rely on other ninja or the kage to do it for him.

During his genin years he met many people, most notably Shikatsu Nara and Eclipse Naito Inuzuka. He quickly became friends with them, despite his urge to not rely on anyone. He then unfortunatly met another genin, Reiko Uchiha. He was arrogant, prideful and a a*****e. He hated him with every fiber because of this he wished to surpass even him. He trained hard and soon became a chunnin, surpassing his two friends. But Reiko continued at his level, becoming a chunnin the same time he did. He still kept in touch with Shikatsu and Eclipse, Eclipse more so than Shika. Him and Eclipse went out on a training trip, after it was over they decided to relax at a nearby bathhouse. Lets say things ended up getting heated between the two, basically a one night stand. They never told anyone and kept it a secret. Not like anyone would find out right? Oh by the way, she was engaged to Reiko Uchiha ya remember that a*****e? HIM.

The day of her wedding came, but she never arrived, she ended up giving birth to twins one with blood red eyes and the other blue as the sky. There was something oddly familiar about the kids. At least, about the twin girl, he suddenly came to the realization that they were his.Soon after becoming Jounin, It seemed the fates decided to actually alleviate his problems and Reiko was banished from Konoha for abandoning a mission. He was soon after killed by Kumogakure shinobi. Noctis then told Eclipse that the kids were his and she knew it too. They decided to be together, even though at the moment they didn't truly love each other. It was for the kids, and Noctis over time fell in love with Eclipse and he always loved his kids.

Noctis soon gained an apprentice, Jae Ketsueki. They didn't really mesh well together, she was a tripolar crazy chick. And he was a calm cold and collected type of person. He thought many things about her were off, he never remembered seeing her in the village. She just appeared, he didn't know the reasons the Hokage paired them together but he guessed it was for the best. They headed to Yukigakure, were Noctis committed what he thinks was one of the worst things in his life. He followed Jae after she had run off and discovered her secret. She wasn't native of Konoha, but then again neither was he. He revealed to her what he had done that seemed to be one of the definitive moments were a crack between them appeared.

The chunnin exams rolled around and he participated along with Jae, though after his match he was called away by Anbu. He was named Hokage, the leader of a village. For the first few days he was in shock. He couldn't believe he had to take care of this entire village. He didn't believe he had it in him, he was always a solitary kind of person. The previous Hokage approached him and said."Being Hokage doesn't mean being the strongest, smartest, or fastest. You just have to accept everyone in this village as your family and protect them as you would them." Those words resounded through his mind. His family? This village was his family? From that day on he was determined to protect everyone with everything he had. Jae returned to Konoha after the exams to the surprise of him sitting in the Hokage's chair. It seemed a the crack mended itself a little during each others absence.

One night, he found Jae drinking alone and she asked him a question."What do you think of Jae?" He was surprised by this. For one she wasn't loud or angry she just spoke normally. But he also didn't know what to say, he did he think of her? In all honesty he didn't know so he reply was."Jae...is Jae..." At that moment, the crack tore open once again. Steadily the crack increased between them over time. No matter how much he tried it seemed he only brought out the worst of Jae.

But life went on, His kids grew up so fast they were already talking and walking around like it was nothing. He really did care deeply for them and Eclipse. Though he didn't have much time for them since his Hokage duties kept him busy. He did his duties as Hokage and even gained a new apprentice. A skilled young genin, he trained him well and he quickly became jounin.

New of the UHV came later that year, they had formed together from the smaller villages. Seemingly becoming a force to be reckoned with. They began expanding their land. Noctis had a bad feeling, they weren't made to protect themselves.

Jae returned after an extended vacation. The crack between them only grew deeper despite what he did. But during the time away he finally understood how he felt about her. To him Jae was...

THE END **For now**


Personal attributes: may gain +2 custom attributes. The second one is denied  
PostPosted: Sat Jun 08, 2013 7:36 am
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Full Name: Daniel, Kurama
Nickname: "Doc"

Age: 15
Gender: Male

Height: "72" inches
Weight: 175 pounds

Nindo: I will save everyone...after all no enemy gave up secrets dead...
Personality: Daniel is a thoughtful intlegent being. which makes him really slow to anger. he chooses to anylayze a situation before he acts, making it seem as if he just dosent care about the situation or is a bit slow. Daniel is always calm in even the gravest circumstances believing that to lose ones temper is the quickest way to losing there very life. by far his greatest trait is his genius intelect.

Village: Kumogakure
Rank: Gennin
First Class: Genjutsu
Second Class: Medical

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Bloodline: Sakugan

Chakra Pool: 435
Stamina Pool: 65
Chakra Element: Suiton, Fuuton
Chakra Color: Light blue that darkens towards the center of his aura.
Chakra Materialization: Flows around him like water.

Strengths:
• Genjutsu
• Medical techniques
Weaknesses:
• Taijutsu
• Summonings. (he cant do them.)
Fears:
• Uchiha.
• Other sakugan users.

Class Disciplines :
• Inception: The user's genjutsu prowess has increased the sheer power of the genjutsu, making them act a rank higher then they are (up to S rank). This increases the Kai cost for an opponent.
• Medical license: The user is much more adept at utilizing items during combat. The user gains 2 free custom items, one at Chunnin and one at jounin. These items must be associated and utilized medical abilities. Additionally, they gain a -5 chakra cost to all techniques.
Reductions:
• Learn Medical techniques one (1) post faster.

Personal Attributes:
• analitical prowess- when doujutusu is active it costs Daniel 5 chakra a post but is able to read there movements way better than the standard naked eye. should be notied that this genetic ability is not as good as the uchiha's legendary sharingan.
• Two halfs of the brain-Able to use both halves of his brain independitly of each other when using genjutusu. Allowing for him to mix two genjutus together that are somewhat simialr.

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Ryo: 0
AC: 0

Missions Complete:
D Rank :: 0 0
C Rank :: 0
B Rank :: 0
A Rank :: 0
S Rank :: 0

Limitations: {How many of each technique you can learn. Refer to class info}
• Ninjutsu : : 00 / 07
• Genjutsu : : 00 / 11
• Taijutsu Styles: : 00 / 00
• Bukijutsu Styles: : 00 / 00
• Eiseijutsu Styles : 00/08

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Weapon Type: Small shield connected on the left forearm.
Weapon Range: Circumfrence of two feet.
Weapon Weight: 1 pound
Weapon Location: attached to the left fore arm.

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• 7 Kunai
• 7 Senbons
• 1 spiked ball

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Maruton:
• Henge no Jutsu [ Transformation Technique ]
• Kawarimi no Jutsu [ Substitution Technique ]
• Genso Bushin no Jutsu [ Illusion Clone Technique ]
• Suimen Hokou no Waza [ Act of Water Surface Walking ]
• Kinobori no Waza [ Act of Tree Climbing ]
• Kai [ Release ]

{Your first element's name} Suiton


{Your second element's name} Fuuton


{Other jutsu type's name} Sakugan


▬▬┤|G e n j u t s u

• {If none, remove section}

▬▬┤|B u k i j u t s u

{Style name here}
• {Stage progression / techniques learned}

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Daniel grew up in the cloud village as a free spirit. never having family he was never burdened by ties to others. Daniel never had any real friends. most people never actully understood the things he said and were put off by that. Daniel has just roamed around the village studing diligently to become a ninja and start his life.
 

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Grand Chevalier Haji

Unbeatable Warlord

9,300 Points
  • Hunter 50
  • Team Jacob 100
  • Survivor 150
PostPosted: Sat Jun 08, 2013 3:18 pm
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Full Name: Noctis Lucis Shinsetsu
Nickname: Noct, Noctis

Age: 21
Birthdate: June 26
Gender: Male

Height: 5'11
Weight: 170

Nindo: ""My duty is to protect everyone, before I protect myself.""
Personality:Pre-Hokage:Noctis is Stubborn, , strong-willed outspoken, he attempts to maintain a detached and "cool" image, despite claiming not to care about what other people think about him.if somebody picks a fight with him, he cannot help fighting back.He is genuinely compassionate and empathetic about others.Noctis has some trouble with authority and traditional respect, often quite rude and disrespectful when talking to those older than himself. Though he can be also be quite lazy

Hokage:Noctis still attempts to maintain a cool image, but he has chilled out quite a bit so to speak. Being Hokage and taking care of the village has mellowed him out.
Village: Konohagakure
Rank: Konin-Kage Level(Hokage)
First Class: Bloodline
Second Class: Bloodline

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Bloodline: Shinsetsu

Chakra Pool:1170
Stamina Pool: 950
Chakra Element: Wind, Water
Chakra Color: White
Chakra Materialization: When he is calm it appears like snow gently falling. But if you get him angry the snow quickly whips around his body like a blizzard.

Strengths:
• Ninjutsu
• Bloodline
Weaknesses:
• Genjutsu

Fears:
• Failing his Village
• Letting his shinobi die

Class Disciplines :
• Thoroughbred: Your maximum chakra pool and maximum stamina pool are both increased by {10} points, and you receive an additional {05} points to each pool whenever you rank up. Additionally, when you perform bloodline techniques above Rank D, you are refunded {05} chakra or {05} stamina, depending on which energy was used. ( If chakra was used, you recover chakra; if stamina was used, you recover stamina; if both were used, you recover both. )
•Blood Knight: Your bloodline techniques possess greater power, allowing them to overwhelm techniques of the same rank, and preventing them from succumbing to elemental weaknesses of techniques the same rank.
•If this class is taken as the first and second class, then the user may pick 2 of its disciplines. Additionally, the cost to perform bloodline techniques is reduced by 10 chakra, to a minimum of 5.
Reductions:
•Learns Bloodline Techniques 4 posts faster
Personal Attributes:
• Gains 2 extra custom slots
• Bloodline techniques cost 10 less chakra
Training Attributes
Shigure Soen
•Insight Rain: The user will practice extending themselves into the atmosphere, in a sense. After much dedication, the user develops the ability to sense hostile intent in the immediate area. As to where, however, they cannot be sure.

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Ryo: 両 70
AC: 50,000

Missions Complete:
D Rank :: 9
C Rank :: 10
B Rank :: 3
A Rank :: 3
S Rank :: 1



Time Skip Rewards
First Time Skip
Mission points obtained: 10
Training name: Extreme
Chakra reward: +60
Cost: 8
Training name:Simple
Chakra reward: +10
Cost: 2 X

Second Time Skip
Nadeshiko-Ryū Kōha Senkaigiri [ Nadeshiko-Style Hardliner Revolving Cut ]
Rank: B- 8 points
Nadeshiko-Ryū Kōha Reppūken [ Nadeshiko-Style Hardliner Gale Fist ]
Rank: - 8 points
Rasengan [ Spiral Sphere ]
Rank: A -16 points
Tandokuhikou [ Solo Flight ]
Rank: A -16 points
Gentoushin no Jutsu [ Lit Apparition Technique ]
Rank: A-16 points

28mpt
Extreme training (+60 chakra) : : 8 mpts.
Extreme training (+60 chakra) : : 8 mpts.
Extreme training (+60 chakra) : : 8 mpts.
Simple training (+10 chakra) : : 2 mpts.
Simple training (+10 chakra) : : 2 mpts.
Total 200 Chakra/Stamina
Thread Link
Completed Training Missions
Genin
❥ Basic Chakra Training: Meditate x2
+40 ChakraX
❥ Basic Chakra Training: Performance x2
+20 ChakraX
❥ Basic Chakra Training: Spar-Defeat
+10 ChakraX
❥ Basic Chakra Training: Spar-Victory
+25X
Chunnin
❥Chakra Training: Meditatex2
+50 ChakraX
❥ Chakra Training: Performancex2
+30X
❥ Chakra Training: Sparx2
+50X
Jounin
❥Advanced Chakra Training: Concentratex2
+60X
❥Advanced Chakra Training: Performance x2
+30X
❥ Advanced Chakra Training: Combat
+35 X

Limitations: {How many of each technique you can learn. Refer to class info}
• Ninjutsu : : 26/ 20((Six jutsu are crossed out and unable to be used))
• Genjutsu : : 00/ 05
• Taijutsu Styles: : 00 / 02
• Bukijutsu Styles: : 00 / 02

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Weapon Type: Katana
Weapon Range: 65 cm
Weapon Weight: 3 pounds
Weapon Location: Back


Summoning Type:
Summon Sage:
Pacts:

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• 10 Smoke Pellets
• 5 Explosive tags
• 5 Kunai
• 10 Shuriken
• Jounin Scroll X

• Fairytale Pattern Scarf
• Long-Sleeve Yukata ( Snowflake )


• Short-Sleeve Yukata ( Snowflake )
• Snowflake Shurikenx10
• Winter's Tooth ( Senbon ) x2


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Maruton:
• Henge no Jutsu [ Transformation Technique ]
• Kawarimi no Jutsu [ Substitution Technique ]
• Bushin no Jutsu [ Clone Technique ]
• Suimen Hokou no Waza [ Act of Water Surface Walking ]
• Kinobori no Waza [ Act of Tree Climbing ]
• Kai [ Release ]
• Shadow Clone Jutsu X
• Shunshin no Jutsu-X
•Chakra Kyuuin Jutsu [ Chakra Absorption Technique ]
Rank: D

•Karasu Bunshin no Jutsu [ Crow Clone Technique ]
Rank: C
•Dokushinjutsu [ Eye Mind Reading ]
Rank: C
•Hari Jizou [ Underworld Guardian Spikes ]
Rank: B
Ranji Shigumi no Jutsu [ Wild Lion's Mane Technique ]
Rank: B

•Ukojizai no Jutsu [ Fierce Raining at Will ]
Rank: B
•Hyourou no Jutsu [ Ice Prison Technique ]
Rank: B
•Kagerou [ Mayfly ]
Rank: S
Training for Jutsu Above

Fuuton
•Kaze Bunshin [ Wind Clone ]
Rank: E
Tobidougu Soujuu no Jutsu [ Projectile Control Technique ]
Rank: E

•Boufuu Kyuuzou [ Gale Surge ]
Rank: D
•Zankuuha [ Decapitating Air Waves ]
Rank: D
•Daitoppa [ Great Breakthrough ]
Rank: C
•Zankyokukuuha [ Extreme Decapitating Air Waves ]
Rank: C
Furyuu no Jutsu [ Wind Dragon Technique ]
Rank: C

•Koukiatsu no Jutsu [ High Air Pressure Technique ]
Rank: C

•Kaze no Yaiba [ Sword of Wind ]
Rank: C
Furyuuchou Ken [ Flowing Wind Fist ]
Rank: B

•Atsugai [ Pressure Damage ]
Rank: B
•Juha: Reppushou [ Beast Wave: Gale Wind Palm ]
Rank: A
Training for Fuuton Jutsu Above
•Kaze Bunshin Bakuha [ Wind Clone Explosion ]Rank: B-Learned-X
•Jousoukiryuu [ Currents ]
Rank: A
•Kyojin Taka Bakuha [ Giant Falcon Blast ]
Rank: S
•Otonashi Kaze [ Silent Wind ]
Rank: S
Training for Jutsu Above


Shinsetsu

Hatsuyuki [ First Snow ]
Rank: D — Chakra
__Genin: Creates 1 cloud; Maximum 2 clouds.
___Chunin: Creates 1 cloud; Maximum 4 clouds.
___Jounin: Creates 2 clouds; Maximum 6 clouds.
___Konin: Creates 3 clouds; Maximum 6 clouds.
___Sannin: Creates 3 clouds; Maximum 9 clouds.

Yukimari [ Snowball ]
Rank: E — Chakra

Kousetsu [ Snowfall ]
Rank: D — Chakra

Yukibakudan [ Snowbomb ]
Rank: C — Chakra

Fuyu no Ibuki [ Breath of Winter ]
Rank: C — Chakra

Fuyu no Unari [ Winter's Howl ]
Rank: C — Chakra

Fubuki Hira no Jutsu [ Snowstorm Palm Technique ]
Rank: B — Chakra

Boufuusetsu no Unari [ Blizzard's Bellow ]
Rank: B — Chakra

Hanpou Kousetsu [ Rampant Snowfall ]
Rank: B — Chakra

Yuki-onna no Houyou [ Snow Woman's Embrace ]
Rank: A — Complex

Hyou [ Hail ]
Rank: A — Chakra

Teikiatsu Kousetsu [ Cyclone Snowfall ]
Rank: S — Chakra
Old bloodline tech traded for New bloodline techs
•Hatsuyuki [ First Snow ]
Rank E-Learned X
•Yukimari [ Snowball ]
Rank E -LearnedX
•Ooyukimari [ Heavy Snowball ]
Rank D -LearnedX
•Koyukimari [ Great Snowball ]
Rank C-LearnedX
•Kousetsu [ Snowfall ]
Rank D-Learned X
•Oosetsu [ Heavy Snowfall ]
Rank C-Learned X
•Gousetsu [ Tremendous Snowfall ]
Rank B-LearnedX
•Kake no Yuki [ Fragment of Snow ]
Rank C -Learned X
•Zouge Seppun [ Ivory Kiss ]
Rank C -LearnedX
•Setsuzou [ Snow Sculpture ]
Rank C -Learned-X
•Fuyu no Iki [ Breath of Winter ]
Rank C Learned-X
•Youkai Yuki [ Snow Phantom ]
Rank B Learned-X
•Fubuki Hira [ Snow Storm Palm ]
Rank A
•Hyou [ Hail ]
Rank A
•Kogarashi [ Wintry Winds ]
Rank A
Training for the 3 Jutsu above.
•Hyouga Reiki [ Glacier Aura ]
Rank S
X

Fuinjutsu
•Bunshin Houin [ Clone Sealing ]
Rank: A
X

Kuchiyose
•Shizen no Kuchiyose [ Nature Summoning ]
Rank: C
•Gyaku Kuchiyose no Jutsu [ Reverse Summoning Technique ]
Rank: C
Training for Jutsu Above

Custom Jutsu

Snow Armor Rank-Rank C X


▬▬┤|G e n j u t s u

• {If none, remove section}

▬▬┤|T a i j u t s u

___S t a g e O n e [1]

Dainamikku-Entori [ Dynamic Entry ]
Simple :: E-Ranked
Dainamikku-Akushon [ Dynamic Action ]
Simple :: E-Ranked
Youjitsuba [ Spitting Toothpick ]
Simple :: E-Ranked

___S t a g e T w o [2]
Asshou [ Pressure Palm ]
Simple :: D-Ranked
Fuuma Kage Shuriken no Jutsu [ Wind Shuriken Shadow Windmill ]
Simple :: D-Ranked
Haridoku [ Poison Needles ]
Simple :: D-Ranked
Harisuzu [ Bell Needles ]
Simple :: D-Ranked
Hayabusa Otoshi [ Peregrine Falcon Drop ]
Simple :: D-Ranked
Houshou [ Crushing Fist ]
Simple :: D-Ranked
Kage Buyou [ Leaf Shadow Dance ]
Simple :: D-Ranked
Konoha Senpuu [ Leaf Spinning Wind ]
Simple :: D-Ranked
Konoha Daisenpuu [ Leaf Great Whirlwind ]
Simple :: D-Ranked
Konoha Reppuu [ Leaf Violent Wind ]
Simple :: D-Ranked
Shoushitsu [ Knee Strike ]
Simple :: D-Ranked
Tokken [ Tackle Charge ]
Simple :: D-Ranked
Tsutenkyaku [ Painful Sky Leg ]
Simple :: D-Ranked

___S t a g e T h r e e [3]
Bunshin Kaiten Kakatou Otoshi [ Clone Spinning Heel Drop ]
Complex :: C-Ranked
Bunshin Taiatari [ Clone Body Blow ]
Complex :: C-Ranked
Hien [ Flying Swallow ]
Complex :: C-Ranked
Konoha Gouriki Senpuu [ Leaf Herculean Whirlwind ]
Simple :: C-Ranked
Konoha Shofu [ Leaf Rising Wind ]
Simple :: C-Ranked
Midare Senbu [ Chaos Fan Dance ]
Simple :: C-Ranked
Sakura Fubuki no Jutsu [ Cherry Blossom Blizzard Technique ]
Simple :: C-Ranked
Shishi Rendan [ Lion Combo ]
Simple :: C-Ranked
Shou-Geki-Shou [ Rising Impact Palm ]
Simple :: C-Ranked

___S t a g e F o u r [4]
Konoha Raiken [ Leaf Thunder Fist ]
Simple / Complex :: B-Ranked
Isshi Resshin [ One-fingered Earthquake ]
Simple :: B-Ranked

___S t a g e F i v e [5]
Oukashou
Complex :: B-Ranked
Tsuuten Kyaku
Complex :: B-Ranked
Kujiku Hajiku [ To Break and Snap ]
Simple :: A-Ranked

___S t a g e S i x [6]
Sodate Rakka [ Raising Drop ]
Simple :: S-Ranked

Style Given by Corrections Office


▬▬┤|B u k i j u t s u

Shigure Soen
Stage 1
Simple • [ Axle Of Rain ]-Rank E-Learned X
Complex • [ Rolling Rain ]-Rank E-LearnedX
Complex•Misting Rain-Rank:E-Learned X
Stage 2
Simple• [ Last Minute Rain ]-Rank D-LearrnedX
Simple • [ May Wind, October Rain ]-Rank D-LearnedX
Stage 3
Simple• [ Summer Rain ]-Rank C-LearnedX
Complex • [ Splashing Rain ]-Rank C-LearnedX
•Blessed Rain Rank: C : : +35 Chakra Training-X
Stage 4
• Complex [ Innocent Rain ] - -LearnedX
• [ Insight Rain ] - Passive-LearnedX
Fiendish Speed Rain
Rank: B : : Complex
___S t a g e F i v e [5]
Pelting Rain
Rank: A : : Simple
Torrential Dance
Rank: A : : Complex
Flame Spin Rain
Rank: A : : Complex

___S t a g e Six [6]
Duplicate Rain
Rank: S : : Complex
Seasonal Dance
Rank: S : : Complex
Torrential Blessings
Rank: S : : Training
• Chakra pool +65
The Task of the Next Generation
Rank: S : : Passive

Shunkan no Hagane

Stage One,E Rank

○ Basic Chop

○ Forward Step

○ Backward Step

○ Basic Stab

○ Basic Block

Stage Two,D Rank

○ Pivot Block

○ Forward Grind

○ Deflection One

○ Disarming One

Stage Three, C Rank

○ Calligraphy

○ Extension

○ Thread Walking One

○ Solid Footing

Stage Four,B Rank

○ Swordslinger

○ Sensory Information

○ Twin Blade

○ Brush Stroke

○ Hydra Strike

○ Disarming Two

○ Deflection Two

○ Advancement of Steel

Stage Five,A Rank

○ Shearing Learned

○ Thread Walking Two

○ Crescent Block

○ Defense of Steel

○ Sword Drawing Technique


Stage Six,S Rank

○ Final Words

○ Vorpal Blade

○ Movement of Steel

○ Offense of Steel

○ Instant of Steel

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Noctis is from the Shinsetsu clan, he was there when they were going to be invaded and heard of how the other clan was completely obliterated. he had known people from that clan. He was made how they were so suddenly taken away and was glad when his clan made them retreat.He learned from that that nothing good ever comes from showing off everything you got that the strongest keep things to themselves until the time is right. When his clan made the decision to send families out to different parts of the world. He was angry why should they have to leave their homeland. If they were able to hold of the invaders that time they would be able to do it the next time as well.But it wasn't up to him. And his family was sent to the Land of Fire they settled in Konohagakure, but the whole experience had made Noctis a cold person. He didn't really put much trust into anyone thinking that he could be better of by himself but the truth is that if he acted that way no one would get close enough for him to care if they ever disappeared. He became a academy to further himself in attaining more power so he could protect himself and not rely on other ninja or the kage to do it for him.

During his genin years he met many people, most notably Shikatsu Nara and Eclipse Naito Inuzuka. He quickly became friends with them, despite his urge to not rely on anyone. He then unfortunatly met another genin, Reiko Uchiha. He was arrogant, prideful and a a*****e. He hated him with every fiber because of this he wished to surpass even him. He trained hard and soon became a chunnin, surpassing his two friends. But Reiko continued at his level, becoming a chunnin the same time he did. He still kept in touch with Shikatsu and Eclipse, Eclipse more so than Shika. Him and Eclipse went out on a training trip, after it was over they decided to relax at a nearby bathhouse. Lets say things ended up getting heated between the two, basically a one night stand. They never told anyone and kept it a secret. Not like anyone would find out right? Oh by the way, she was engaged to Reiko Uchiha ya remember that a*****e? HIM.

The day of her wedding came, but she never arrived, she ended up giving birth to twins one with blood red eyes and the other blue as the sky. There was something oddly familiar about the kids. At least, about the twin girl, he suddenly came to the realization that they were his.Soon after becoming Jounin, It seemed the fates decided to actually alleviate his problems and Reiko was banished from Konoha for abandoning a mission. He was soon after killed by Kumogakure shinobi. Noctis then told Eclipse that the kids were his and she knew it too. They decided to be together, even though at the moment they didn't truly love each other. It was for the kids, and Noctis over time fell in love with Eclipse and he always loved his kids.

Noctis soon gained an apprentice, Jae Ketsueki. They didn't really mesh well together, she was a tripolar crazy chick. And he was a calm cold and collected type of person. He thought many things about her were off, he never remembered seeing her in the village. She just appeared, he didn't know the reasons the Hokage paired them together but he guessed it was for the best. They headed to Yukigakure, were Noctis committed what he thinks was one of the worst things in his life. He followed Jae after she had run off and discovered her secret. She wasn't native of Konoha, but then again neither was he. He revealed to her what he had done that seemed to be one of the definitive moments were a crack between them appeared.

The chunnin exams rolled around and he participated along with Jae, though after his match he was called away by Anbu. He was named Hokage, the leader of a village. For the first few days he was in shock. He couldn't believe he had to take care of this entire village. He didn't believe he had it in him, he was always a solitary kind of person. The previous Hokage approached him and said."Being Hokage doesn't mean being the strongest, smartest, or fastest. You just have to accept everyone in this village as your family and protect them as you would them." Those words resounded through his mind. His family? This village was his family? From that day on he was determined to protect everyone with everything he had. Jae returned to Konoha after the exams to the surprise of him sitting in the Hokage's chair. It seemed a the crack mended itself a little during each others absence.

One night, he found Jae drinking alone and she asked him a question."What do you think of Jae?" He was surprised by this. For one she wasn't loud or angry she just spoke normally. But he also didn't know what to say, he did he think of her? In all honesty he didn't know so he reply was."Jae...is Jae..." At that moment, the crack tore open once again. Steadily the crack increased between them over time. No matter how much he tried it seemed he only brought out the worst of Jae.

But life went on, His kids grew up so fast they were already talking and walking around like it was nothing. He really did care deeply for them and Eclipse. Though he didn't have much time for them since his Hokage duties kept him busy. He did his duties as Hokage and even gained a new apprentice. A skilled young genin, he trained him well and he quickly became jounin.

New of the UHV came later that year, they had formed together from the smaller villages. Seemingly becoming a force to be reckoned with. They began expanding their land. Noctis had a bad feeling, they weren't made to protect themselves.

Jae returned after an extended vacation. The crack between them only grew deeper despite what he did. But during the time away he finally understood how he felt about her. To him Jae was...

THE END **For now**


 
PostPosted: Sat Jun 08, 2013 9:59 pm
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Full Name: Kakeru Hitoshimaru
Nickname: N/A

Age: 20
Birthdate: Unknown
Gender: Male

Height: 5' 10"
Weight: 164 lbs

Nindo: "All Life is meant to be lived to it's fullest."
Personality: Kakeru is in a way a peace keeper of sorts, he likes nature and animals to some extent, but enjoys life as a whole. He doesn't take it for granted. He's a bit of a flirt when it comes down to girls who he views as attractive, but is very kind and generous. Despite his care for life around him, he will not hesitate in a fight if someone close to him, or if someone he feels he must protect is in danger.

Village: Konohagakure
Rank: Genin
First Class: Ninjutsu Class
Second Class: Ninjutsu Class

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Chakra Pool: 460
Stamina Pool: 50
Chakra Element: Wind, Earth
Chakra Color: Green
Chakra Materialization: Leaves

Strengths:
• Versatility
• Ninjutsu
Weaknesses:
• Being unable to use ninjutsu
• Care for life
Fears:
• Killing
• Injuring someone enough for them to be virtually dead.

Class Disciplines :
• Elemental Specialist: You are only able to have one (1) chosen chakra element. Your elemental ninjutsu possess greater power, allowing them to overwhelm techniques of the same element and rank, and preventing them from succumbing to elemental weaknesses. You begin with two (2) additional ninjutsu slots, and earn an additional three (3) ninjutsu slots whenever you rank up.
[+1 Element for Ninjutsu Class Specialization]
Reductions:
• N/A
Personal Attributes:
• Special Training: Because of the specialized training Kakeru went through, as opposed to learning about genjutsu, he learned more about Taijutsu. So giving up genjutsu he is able to currently learn, as well as any future genjutsu he would be able to learn he has ONE taijutsu style.
• Ninjutsu Expert: Learns Ninjutsu 2 posts faster.

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Ryo: 両0000
AC: 0000

Missions Complete:
D Rank :: 0
C Rank :: 0
B Rank :: 0
A Rank :: 0
S Rank :: 0

Limitations:
• Ninjutsu : : 00 / 08 [Per Element]
• Genjutsu : : 00 / 00
• Taijutsu Styles: : 00 / 01
• Bukijutsu Styles: : 00 / 00

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• N/A

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Maruton:
• Henge no Jutsu [ Transformation Technique ]
• Kawarimi no Jutsu [ Substitution Technique ]
• Genso Bushin no Jutsu [ Illusion Clone Technique ]
• Suimen Hokou no Waza [ Act of Water Surface Walking ]
• Kinobori no Waza [ Act of Tree Climbing ]
• Kai [ Release ]

Fuuton


Doton



▬▬┤|T a i j u t s u

{Style name here}
• {Stage progression / techniques learned}

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Kakeru grew up fairly normal to some extent. He cared for his sick ex-shinobi mother, who had also taught him most of what he knew. His mother died from her sickness very recently, his caring for her is the reason he is only recently becoming a shinobi. He doesn't carry around weapons, as he believes weapons are the most harmful thing usable by people, and doesn't like harming people too much.
 

Ichengo Angelus

Man-Hungry Kitten

10,575 Points
  • The Wolf Within 100
  • Elysium's Gatekeeper 100
  • Battle: Rogue 100

chrissy b e a n

Hygienic Gawker

10,600 Points
  • Citizen 200
  • Friendly 100
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PostPosted: Sat Jun 08, 2013 10:11 pm
Avedis Huehue Angelus

Me likey. You are good to go. :]  
PostPosted: Sun Jun 09, 2013 5:21 am
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Avedis Huehue Angelus

Me likey. You are good to go. :]


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Full Name: Daniel, Kurama
Nickname: "Doc"

Age: 15
Gender: Male

Height: "72" inches
Weight: 175 pounds

Nindo: I will save everyone...after all no enemy gave up secrets dead...
Personality: Daniel is a thoughtful intlegent being. which makes him really slow to anger. he chooses to anylayze a situation before he acts, making it seem as if he just dosent care about the situation or is a bit slow. Daniel is always calm in even the gravest circumstances believing that to lose ones temper is the quickest way to losing there very life. by far his greatest trait is his genius intelect.

Village: Kumogakure
Rank: Gennin
First Class: Genjutsu
Second Class: Medical

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Bloodline: Sakugan

Chakra Pool: 435
Stamina Pool: 65
Chakra Element: Suiton, Fuuton
Chakra Color: Light blue that darkens towards the center of his aura.
Chakra Materialization: Flows around him like water.

Strengths:
• Genjutsu
• Medical techniques
Weaknesses:
• Taijutsu
• Summonings. (he cant do them.)
Fears:
• Uchiha.
• Other sakugan users.

Class Disciplines :
• Inception: The user's genjutsu prowess has increased the sheer power of the genjutsu, making them act a rank higher then they are (up to S rank). This increases the Kai cost for an opponent.
• Medical license: The user is much more adept at utilizing items during combat. The user gains 2 free custom items, one at Chunnin and one at jounin. These items must be associated and utilized medical abilities. Additionally, they gain a -5 chakra cost to all techniques.
Reductions:
• Learn Medical techniques one (1) post faster.

Personal Attributes:
• analitical prowess- when doujutusu is active it costs Daniel 5 chakra a post but is able to read there movements way better than the standard naked eye. should be notied that this genetic ability is not as good as the uchiha's legendary sharingan.
• Two halfs of the brain-Able to use both halves of his brain independitly of each other when using genjutusu. Allowing for him to mix two genjutus together that are somewhat simialr.

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Ryo: 0
AC: 0

Missions Complete:
D Rank :: 0 0
C Rank :: 0
B Rank :: 0
A Rank :: 0
S Rank :: 0

Limitations: {How many of each technique you can learn. Refer to class info}
• Ninjutsu : : 00 / 07
• Genjutsu : : 00 / 11
• Taijutsu Styles: : 00 / 00
• Bukijutsu Styles: : 00 / 00
• Eiseijutsu Styles : 00/08

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Weapon Type: Small shield connected on the left forearm.
Weapon Range: Circumfrence of two feet.
Weapon Weight: 1 pound
Weapon Location: attached to the left fore arm.

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• 7 Kunai
• 7 Senbons
• 1 spiked ball

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Maruton:
• Henge no Jutsu [ Transformation Technique ]
• Kawarimi no Jutsu [ Substitution Technique ]
• Genso Bushin no Jutsu [ Illusion Clone Technique ]
• Suimen Hokou no Waza [ Act of Water Surface Walking ]
• Kinobori no Waza [ Act of Tree Climbing ]
• Kai [ Release ]

{Your first element's name} Suiton


{Your second element's name} Fuuton


{Other jutsu type's name} Sakugan


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• {If none, remove section}

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{Style name here}
• {Stage progression / techniques learned}

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Daniel grew up in the cloud village as a free spirit. never having family he was never burdened by ties to others. Daniel never had any real friends. most people never actully understood the things he said and were put off by that. Daniel has just roamed around the village studing diligently to become a ninja and start his life.
 

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PostPosted: Sun Jun 09, 2013 5:08 pm
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Full Name: Kohaku Karasu
Nickname: Amber Crow

Age: 27
Birthdate: December 17th
Gender: Female

Height: 6’0”
Weight: 165

Nindo: "Its’ a bad world out there and its’ survival of the fittest, so I’m gonna strike first and strike ‘em dead.”
Personality: Kohaku is one that can be described as having sociopathic tendencies. She lies without a second thought or guilty feeling, she never seems nervous or scared, seems to lack a conscious, and anything that she may have failed at she believes another person is at fault. Not to say that she couldn’t fake emotions as when needed, but experiences and traumas from childhood have certainly left her empty and ready to strike back at the world.

Village: Otogakure
Rank: Genin
First Class: Ninjutsu
Second Class: Sensor

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Chakra Pool:460
Stamina Pool: 50
Chakra Element: Water and Lightning
Chakra Color: A transparent, black sort of color.
Chakra Materialization: It swirls around her like a tornado of black feathers.

Strengths:
• Ninjutsu
• Genjutsu
Weaknesses:
• Can’t use weapons very well.
• Never learned how to swim.
Fears:
• Enclosed spaces (on the claustrophobic side)
• Becoming a vegetable

Class Disciplines :
• Elemental Dual Wielder: Your maximum chakra pool is increased by {10} points. The ninjutsu limit provided by this class is split amongst both of your chosen elements. ( At genin rank, rather than having a total of [ 06 ] ninjutsu slots for Katon or Suiton techniques, this class provides you with [ 06 ] slots for both Katon and Suiton techniques. Any ninjutsu slots received from other sources are filled at your discretion. )
• Resolution: The user is more determined to get fine details from his sensory techniques, but in order to get this type of clarity the user's range of the technique is reduced by half. The user is able to discover type of technique that is about to be active(fuuin, genjutsu, ninjutsu, custom jutsu, complex tai and buki), even specifics such as Bloodline type and rank. Additionally, the user can gain similar information about any chakra source in their sensory technique's range, including what bloodline the person possesses, and how large their chakra pool is.
Reductions:
• Can learn Ninjutsu one post faster
• Can learn Genjutsu one post faster
Personal Attributes:
• Be Prepared!: Even if Kohaku excels at chakra based attacks, it never hurts to know physical arts of defense. Can learn 1 Taijutsu style.
• I’m the best!: Enjoying Ninjutsu best, Kohaku excels at learning them and can learn Ninjutsu one post faster.
• Trick of the mind: Also is adept at learning genjutsu, learns genjutsu one post faster.

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Ryo: 両 0
AC: 0

Missions Complete:
D Rank :: 0
C Rank :: 0
B Rank :: 0
A Rank :: 0
S Rank :: 0

Limitations: {How many of each technique you can learn. Refer to class info}
• Ninjutsu : : 00 / 10
• Genjutsu : : 00 / 05
• Taijutsu Styles: : 00 / 00
• Bukijutsu Styles: : 00 / 00

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Weapon Type:
Weapon Range:
Weapon Weight:
Weapon Location:

Summoning Type:
Summon Sage:
Pacts:

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• Kunai x15


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Maruton:
• Henge no Jutsu [ Transformation Technique ]
• Kawarimi no Jutsu [ Substitution Technique ]
• Genso Bushin no Jutsu [ Illusion Clone Technique ]
• Suimen Hokou no Waza [ Act of Water Surface Walking ]
• Kinobori no Waza [ Act of Tree Climbing ]
• Kai [ Release ]

Raiton


Suiton


Fuinjutu {Bloodline, Kugutsu, Eiseijutsu, etc.} {If none, remove section}


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Tame za Kyokudo

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Life had never been easy for Kohaku, it had always been a bitter struggle that dragged her down. She was the oldest of three siblings, their father had left them when she was eight, leaving his family impoverished. Kohaku always remembered her mother coming home dead tired, day after day and with not much to show for her back breaking labor. Kohaku faired no better with whatever honest method of making money she tried. Things became worse when her mother married a pig of a man who tried touching her and her little sister.
Kohaku finally snapped after one night when he’d seriously harmed her and slit his throat. The twelve year old felt no remorse for him and was forced to flee. From then on she survived in whatever way possible, stealing, working, even eating human flesh to ensure she wouldn’t starve to death. She finally arrived at Otogakure and felt at home, deciding that by becoming a shinobi, she’d be able to strike back at the world, with all of the monstrous people that lived in it.


Bloodline-less, so I get the extra personal attribute right?  
PostPosted: Sun Jun 09, 2013 5:50 pm
Okay I made a loooooooot of changes to Eren. Basically re-made him into a whole new character. Since he's basically just a re-make of Eren Oni (because he is) I just ask that he be able to auto-learn the jutsu down there that I have listed since Eren Oni knew some. I hope this will be allowed.

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Full Name: Eren Aburame
Nickname: Rin

Age: 16
Birthdate: March 18
Gender: Male

Height: 5'7
Weight: 125 lbs

Nindo: "I do not wish to fight. However, if I must, all should know that mercy is a foreign concept to me."
Personality: Like most Aburame Eren can be uninterested and apathetic to what's going on around him. This makes him bad at socializing with people but also makes him extremely patient and therefore a great strategist. That's where Eren's similarities to the other Aburame clan members ends (aside from the whole bugs living in him thing. He still has that). Eren actually wants to be more social and make more friends. That's why he constantly tries even though he usually ends up just making a fool of himself. He will still usually be the one to try to initiate conversation and, on the off chance he succeeds in making friends with someone, he becomes the best friend anyone can ask for. He is completely devoted to doing his best to protect that person with his life if need be. He also becomes far better at conversing with that person and has absolutely no problem being social around them.

Village: Konohagakure
Rank: Genin
First Class: Genjutsu
Second Class: Medical

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Bloodline: Aburame (will apply)

Chakra Pool: 410
Stamina Pool: 210
Chakra Element: Suiton and Fuuton
Chakra Materialization: Red aura that takes the form of a spider.

Strengths:
• Incredibly Intelligent
• Long Range
• Genjutsu
Weaknesses:
• Close Range
• Raiton
• Katon
Fears:
• Fire
• Not being fast or strong enough to save/protect his comrades

Class Disciplines:
• Inception: The user's genjutsu prowess has increased the sheer power of the genjutsu, making them act a rank higher then they are (up to S rank). This increases the Kai cost for an opponent.
• Specialist: The user, choosing to specialize in either healing or harmful medical techniques, gains a great boost to their chakra control in that area. At Chunnin, they gain a -5 chakra reduction to perform techniques in their specialty. at Jounin, -10, at Konin -15 at Sannin -20. To clarify, they they gain a -5 chakra reduction every rank, to a maximum of -20 at sannin.
(Specializes in harmful medical techniques.)
Reductions:
• Learn Medical techniques one (1) post faster.
Personal Attributes:
• Still Able to Defend Himself: Eren is able to learn one taijutsu style.
• Give and Take: Loses 85 chakra but gains 85 stamina.

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Ryo: 0
AC: 0

Missions Complete:
D Rank :: 0
C Rank :: 0
B Rank :: 0
A Rank :: 0
S Rank :: 0

Limitations:
• Ninjutsu : : 00 / 07
• Genjutsu : : 00 / 11
• Eiseijutsu : : 00 / 08
• Taijutsu Styles: : 00 / 01

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Weapon Type: N/A
Weapon Range: N/A
Weapon Weight: N/A
Weapon Location: N/A

Summoning Type: N/A
Summon Sage: N/A
Pacts: N/A

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• Kunai x15
• Explosive Tags x15

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Maruton
• Henge no Jutsu [Transformation Technique]
• Kawarimi no Jutsu [Substitution Technique]
• Genso Bushin no Jutsu [Illusion Clone Technique]
• Suimen Hokou no Waza [Act of Water Surface Walking]
• Kinobori no Waza [Act of Tree Climbing]
• Kai [Release]

Doton


Fuuton


Eiseijutsu


Bloodline
• Hijutsu: Mushiyose (Secret Technique: Insect Gathering)
• Mushi Bunshin no Jutsu (Insect Clone Technique)
• Mushi Kabe no Jutsu (Insect Wall Technique)
• Hijutsu: Mushimayu (Secret Technique: Insect Cocoon)
• Mushi Kame no Jutsu (Insect Jar Technique)
• Kikaichū Drill (Destruction Bug Drill)
• Kikaichū no Jutsu (Destruction Bug Host Technique)

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Sazanami
• Parry
• Footing One
• Footing Two: Horse Stance
• Bell Ring

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Eren was kidnapped by Otogakure shinobi when he was a child. Why was he kidnapped? Because Otogakure wanted more powerful bloodlines. They took him, along with a Nara and a Yamanaka. Eren spent months at Otogakure as a prisoner... at the age of 6. The living conditions were terrible. He never once got to shower. There was only one meal a day, and it could hardly be called a meal. Otogakure basically did a shitty job of getting Eren to remain cooperative. Luckily, it didn't take long for Konoha to find out there were missing clan children. His father, along with other Jounin from Konoha, successfully took Eren back. Since he got back to Konoha, Eren's mother has grown ill. He decided then to become a medical shinobi to hopefully cure her of her disease. He was not physically strong though, so becoming a shinobi could end up eventually being dangerous to him. That's what made Eren decide that he would master genjutsu.
 

Disturbed Otaku


Yo-ko

Hallowed Prophet

PostPosted: Sun Jun 09, 2013 9:03 pm
Grand Chevalier Haji


first perosnal: approved

you can either reducde chakra OR stamina by 10, or reduce both by 5  
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