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Wolfe Whitehorn

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PostPosted: Tue May 21, 2013 9:21 am
Yo-ko
To be honest Yo, I do already have an anchoring to the village and to several of the characters, outside of just showing up. A discussion has been struck up and this is my return to the guild, I was here before and I was the designer of the Tetsu no Ryu style that's still in use today.

When me and Az went over it, and when he struck up with Haji about me returning we decided to use the time I was out as a time I served studying outside of the village and as a character I'm now returning to it. I've already done my into to the village and don't feel as I should suffer more considering I was one mission away from Konin the last time I was active here.  
PostPosted: Tue May 21, 2013 9:28 am
Wolfe Nailo
Yo-ko
To be honest Yo, I do already have an anchoring to the village and to several of the characters, outside of just showing up. A discussion has been struck up and this is my return to the guild, I was here before and I was the designer of the Tetsu no Ryu style that's still in use today.

When me and Az went over it, and when he struck up with Haji about me returning we decided to use the time I was out as a time I served studying outside of the village and as a character I'm now returning to it. I've already done my into to the village and don't feel as I should suffer more considering I was one mission away from Konin the last time I was active here.
I shall discuss with you outside of this thread to not bog everything up  

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PostPosted: Wed May 22, 2013 10:57 am
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Full Name: Yamamoto, Kenryu
Nickname: N/A

Age: 16
Birthdate: December 12th
Gender: Male

Height: 5 Feet 10 Inches [ 5'10" ] | 12.954 Meters
Weight: 175 Pounds [ 175lb ] | 79.378 Kilograms

Nindo: ---
Personality: Kenryu is a very quiet, kind, peaceful, and courteous person. He believes that extended a hand of friendship and attempting peaceful negotiations first will usually solve any issue that arises. The boy was raised with manners, always respecting his elders and refusing to lay a hand on a woman. This could be seen as a weakness though; it would cause him to hesitate in battle if he was fighting against a woman. Kenryu dislikes the thought of killing someone, and would attempt to refrain from striking a killing blow unless all other options are wasted. He is a solemn person though, liking to keep to himself and not talk. Despite that fact though he is a true friend to anyone who would call him a friend adding to his uncanny loyalty and desire to protect them with all his might.

Village: Sunagakure
Rank: Genin
First Class: Bukijutsu
Second Class: Bukijutsu

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Bloodline: Kōton [ Steel Release ] [ Application | Approval ]

Chakra Pool: 250
Stamina Pool: 250
Chakra Element: Doton [ Earth Release ],
Chakra Color: Black
Chakra Materialization: Kenryu's chakra would radiate around him like a translucent full set of armor.

Strengths
• Omnidexterity
• Kenjutsu
Weaknesses
• Ninjutsu
• Genjutsu
Fears
• Death without Honor
• Loosing his Honor as a Samurai

Class Disciplines
• Weapon Specialist
Reductions
• Learns Bukijutsu techniques one [2] post faster.
• Superior Conditioning [ Chakra -5 | Stamina -5 ]
Personal Attributes
• Zen Training: Undergoing training in the art of Zen during his time in Tetsu no Kuni under his father's training, his natural Superior Conditioning ability was increased to lower his cost of chakra by 5.
• Samurai Training: Due to Kenryu being trained as a Samurai throughout his childhood, he has gained an imperfect version of their Genjutsu sensing. Unlike a true Samurai, Kenryu can only detect Genjutsu that he is in Three or more ranks below his own.

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Ryo: 両 0
AC: 0

Missions Complete:
D Rank :: 0
C Rank :: 0
B Rank :: 0
A Rank :: 0
S Rank :: 0

Limitations:
[ Learned / Total ]
• Ninjutsu : : 00 / 02 [ Can not learn these, but I am keeping track for my Discipline ]
• Genjutsu : : 00 / 00
• Taijutsu Styles: : 00 / 01
• Bukijutsu Styles: : 00 / 05

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Weapon Type: Katana
Weapon Range: 65 Centimeters
Weapon Weight: 1.2 Kilograms
Weapon Location: Left Hip

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• Katana
• His tradition attire [ a blood red shitagi, a black kosode, a black hakama, a blood red hakama-himo, white tabi, and waraji ]

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Stage 1
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Stage 1
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Kenryu was born to the Yamamoto Clan from the Land of Iron. His father, Yamamoto Musashi, was a prominent leader and made trips to the Sunagakure very often because of the ties he had to a Shinobi there. This Shinobi in question, was Kenryu's mother. She gave Kenryu to his father on his third birthday because she understood the importance of him being trained in the Way of the Samurai, but she requested that he was to be sent back to Sunagakure to be trained in the Art of the Shinobi when he was old enough to be considered a Samurai.

During one of the times that he made a trip to Sunagakure Musashi stopped by the blacksmith shop in Sunagakure. The man gave him a Daisho pair that were better than any other swords he had ever wielding, or seen. For this feat Musashi dubbed the man Masamune, a fitting title for the blacksmith. The man's real name was Satetsu Sanshi, the current Sannin of Sunagakure. This fact was unknown to Musashi, but he respected the man greatly.

Kenryu has finally completed his training as a Samurai, but his training was flawed. Kenryu was unable to manipulate his chakra enough to be able to preform Ninjutsu or Genjutsu, leaving him stuck with his Kekkei Genkai, and his martial arts.
 
PostPosted: Wed May 22, 2013 11:06 am
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Full Name: Yamamoto, Kenryu
Nickname: N/A

Age: 16
Birthdate: December 12th
Gender: Male

Height: 5 Feet 10 Inches [ 5'10" ] | 12.954 Meters
Weight: 175 Pounds [ 175lb ] | 79.378 Kilograms

Nindo: ---
Personality: Kenryu is a very quiet, kind, peaceful, and courteous person. He believes that extended a hand of friendship and attempting peaceful negotiations first will usually solve any issue that arises. The boy was raised with manners, always respecting his elders and refusing to lay a hand on a woman. This could be seen as a weakness though; it would cause him to hesitate in battle if he was fighting against a woman. Kenryu dislikes the thought of killing someone, and would attempt to refrain from striking a killing blow unless all other options are wasted. He is a solemn person though, liking to keep to himself and not talk. Despite that fact though he is a true friend to anyone who would call him a friend adding to his uncanny loyalty and desire to protect them with all his might.

Village: Sunagakure
Rank: Genin
First Class: Bukijutsu
Second Class: Bukijutsu

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Bloodline: Kōton [ Steel Release ] [ Application | Approval ]

Chakra Pool: 250
Stamina Pool: 250
Chakra Element: Doton [ Earth Release ],
Chakra Color: Black
Chakra Materialization: Kenryu's chakra would radiate around him like a translucent full set of armor.

Strengths
• Omnidexterity
• Kenjutsu
Weaknesses
• Ninjutsu
• Genjutsu
Fears
• Death without Honor
• Loosing his Honor as a Samurai

Class Disciplines
• Weapon Specialist
Reductions
• Learns Bukijutsu techniques one [2] post faster.
• Superior Conditioning [ Chakra -5 | Stamina -5 ]
Personal Attributes
• Zen Training: Undergoing training in the art of Zen during his time in Tetsu no Kuni under his father's training, his natural Superior Conditioning ability was increased to lower his cost of chakra by 5.
• Samurai Training: Due to Kenryu being trained as a Samurai throughout his childhood, he has gained an imperfect version of their Genjutsu sensing. Unlike a true Samurai, Kenryu can only detect Genjutsu that he is in Three or more ranks below his own.

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Ryo: 両 0
AC: 0

Missions Complete:
D Rank :: 0
C Rank :: 0
B Rank :: 0
A Rank :: 0
S Rank :: 0

Limitations:
[ Learned / Total ]
• Ninjutsu : : 00 / 02 [ Can not learn these, but I am keeping track for my Discipline ]
• Genjutsu : : 00 / 00
• Taijutsu Styles: : 00 / 01
• Bukijutsu Styles: : 00 / 05

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Weapon Type: Katana
Weapon Range: 65 Centimeters
Weapon Weight: 1.2 Kilograms
Weapon Location: Left Hip

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• Katana
• His tradition attire [ a blood red shitagi, a black kosode, a black hakama, a blood red hakama-himo, white tabi, and waraji ]

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Kenryu was born to the Yamamoto Clan from the Land of Iron. His father, Yamamoto Musashi, was a prominent leader and made trips to the Sunagakure very often because of the ties he had to a Shinobi there. This Shinobi in question, was Kenryu's mother. She gave Kenryu to his father on his third birthday because she understood the importance of him being trained in the Way of the Samurai, but she requested that he was to be sent back to Sunagakure to be trained in the Art of the Shinobi when he was old enough to be considered a Samurai.

During one of the times that he made a trip to Sunagakure Musashi stopped by the blacksmith shop in Sunagakure. The man gave him a Daisho pair that were better than any other swords he had ever wielding, or seen. For this feat Musashi dubbed the man Masamune, a fitting title for the blacksmith. The man's real name was Satetsu Sanshi, the current Sannin of Sunagakure. This fact was unknown to Musashi, but he respected the man greatly.

Kenryu has finally completed his training as a Samurai, but his training was flawed. Kenryu was unable to manipulate his chakra enough to be able to preform Ninjutsu or Genjutsu, leaving him stuck with his Kekkei Genkai, and his martial arts.
Everything looks in order. Approved unless otherwise specified  

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PostPosted: Wed May 22, 2013 7:51 pm
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Full Name: Ji-hun Kwon
Nickname: Mad Bomber...?

Age: 14
Birthdate: 6-13
Gender: Male

Height: 4'11''
Weight: 134lbs

Nindo: "Some things are meant to be turned into art."
Personality: Insane? Crazy? The preferred terms are dedicated, ambitious, artistic and flamboyant. What is a pyromaniac without love of the heat and the flame? A snake without the ground and a bird without wings? Ji-hun questions things often and often exclaims quotes in a riddle or poetic fashion exclaiming his supposed superiority above man. What's a knife when one can blow the body into millions of pieces? The view of the world to him is different, while some develop a peaceful or even pacifistic mentality, Ji-hun is ruthless and merciless to those that are deemed 'fit for death' and those He, however, is not a sadist for all it would take is a simple bombing to end someone's life in a mere instant. He frowns upon the mindless idiots who follow honor blindly and lead themselves into danger, self preservation is an ideology held high to him. And one that must be kept. Ji-hun, however, is by far no means a sociopath or a maniac, for he has a set mind for thinking logically with common sense and to fight without going ballistic.

Village: Sunagakure
Rank: Genin | "Low Person"
First Class: Puppetry | 'Dance puppets, dance!'
Second Class: Bloodline | 'Fear my Bombs!'

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Bloodline: Clay Method - Bakuton

Chakra Pool: 405
Stamina Pool: 155
Chakra Element: Earth, Fire, Bakuton
Chakra Color: Color-less - White
Chakra Materialization: Erupts out like a bomb and gives an illusion of smoke afterwards.

Strengths:
• Mid-Ranged Combat
• Kekkei genkai prowess
Weaknesses:
• Lightning Element - Makes bombs and earth ninjutsu useless
• Close Range combat
• Bakuton users have minimal experience in genjutsu. ( Moderately more susceptible to, and slightly less effective with genjutsu. )
Fears:
• Irony
• Bakuton users (other than himself)

Class Disciplines :
• Army of One: The user makes use of their puppetry skills to become a one man army, increasing the overall output potential that their signature weapons can dish out by allowing them to control 2 weapon mechanisms per finger. To maximize this potential, the users puppets gain a +3 weapon mechanism per puppet. Additionally, their chakra strings are significantly tougher than other puppet user's, making any chakra string technique act a rank higher. For Gennin, this bonus only works for techniques D rank and lower, Chunnin C rank and lower, Jounin B rank and lower, Konin A rank and lower, Sannin S rank and lower.

•Thoroughbred: Your maximum chakra pool and maximum stamina pool are both increased by {10} points, and you receive an additional {05} points to each pool whenever you rank up. Additionally, when you perform bloodline techniques above Rank D, you are refunded {05} chakra or {05} stamina, depending on which energy was used. ( If chakra was used, you recover chakra; if stamina was used, you recover stamina; if both were used, you recover both. )

Reductions:
• Learn bloodline techniques one (1) post faster.
Personal Attributes:
• Fine Tuning: From a habit of perfection from a severe case of OCD and art, Ji-hun is able to perfect his bloodline to increased levels. The speed of which he makes makes his clay bombs is moderately increased along with the potency of the explosives slightly (Destructive force/size).
• Another Art: In addition to puppets along with clay bombs, Ji-hun has been using archery as a method to combat those from afar, especially those with raiton abilities.

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Ryo: 両 0,000
AC: 0,000

Missions Complete:
D Rank :: 0
C Rank :: 0
B Rank :: 0
A Rank :: 0
S Rank :: 0

Limitations:
• Ninjutsu : : 00 / 06
• Genjutsu : : 00 / 04
• Kugutsu : : 00 / 07
• Taijutsu Styles: : 00 / 01
• Bukijutsu Styles: : 00 / 02* (Perk)

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Weapon Type: Short Bow & 24 Arrow Quiver
Weapon Range: 75 Foot (Maximum Effective Range)
Weapon Weight: 1 3/4 lbs
Weapon Location: Back

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• Clay Satchel 1: A beige satchel tied to the side of his belt. Left Side
• Clay Satchel 2: A beige satchel tied to the side of his belt. Right Side
• Kunai Holster: Right side, strapped to thigh.
    Six Kunai knives. .

• Quiver: Across back
    Twenty Four arrows.


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Maruton: {Start with the following six only}
• Henge no Jutsu [ Transformation Technique ]
• Kawarimi no Jutsu [ Substitution Technique ]
• Genso Bushin no Jutsu [ Illusion Clone Technique ]
• Suimen Hokou no Waza [ Act of Water Surface Walking ]
• Kinobori no Waza [ Act of Tree Climbing ]
• Kai [ Release ]

Doton "The basis of my clay"


Katon "Something that gives a bit of bang."


Bakuton - Clay "My favorite method."


Kugutsu "Puppets are just a distraction."


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Born in a lowly merchant class family, Ji-hun had mostly grown up in a poor setting while growing up with a bit of ambition to become a shinobi. With a mother taken to a fever and a single father, he was motherless for much of his growing child hood. Sculpting and Calligraphy along with some forms of painting have been Ji-hun's strong point as a hobby, often drawing in the dirt and using stuff such as clay (hint hint) for sculpting, mud as a sort of make shift paint with pigments and such. This artist form had led to creating dolls of wood and even led to him in his first few academy years where he trained in Shurikenjutsu, basics of form and nature transformation in chakra, and basic concepts of ninja warfare. At age eleven, he had became a genin and been in training for a few years following that in Sunagakure.
 
PostPosted: Thu May 23, 2013 6:15 am
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Full Name: Fuma Kotaro
Nickname: Soaring Hurricane

Age: 23
Birthdate: 11/15
Gender: Male

Height: 5'8''
Weight: 165lbs

Nindo: " The winds have changed to its own advantage once more.
Now, there is only silence."
Personality:

Village: Sunagakure
Rank: Genin
First Class: Ninjutsu
Second Class: Bukijutsu

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Bloodline: Ranton

Chakra Pool: 260
Stamina Pool: 150
Chakra Element: Lightning, Water, Storm
Chakra Color: Color-less - White
Chakra Materialization: Appears like a fog

Strengths:
• Close to Mid Range
• Coverage in area of effect
Weaknesses:
• Genjutsu
• Overwhelming jutsu
Fears:
• Heights
• Open Sea

Class Disciplines :
• Elemental Dual Wielder: Your maximum chakra pool is increased by {10} points. The ninjutsu limit provided by this class is split amongst both of your chosen elements.
• Mystic Hero: The user is much like a hybrid warrior, focusing on mixing ninjutsu into their personal arsenal. Through their great devotion to this path the user can cast ninjutsu without hand seals while wielding a weapon, D at gennin, C at chunnin, B at Jounin, A at Konin, and S at Sannin. These techniques maintain the same description and criteria to use, as well as require the same amount of time to mold the chakra through the weapon as would be needed to perform hand seals, meaning the techniques are not instantaneously cast. The user’s spirit is so strong, that they can utilize their physical bukijutsu techniques to negate ninjutsu techniques of the same rank or below.
Reductions:
• {Learns ---jutsu so many posts faster}

Personal Attributes:
• 2 Additional Ninjutsu slots
• Ranton Specialty: Ability to apply Ranton element to Suiton/Raiton jutsu, costs 10 extra Chakra to the cost to do this. (Ex: 10 -> 20)

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Ryo: 両 0
AC: 0

Missions Complete:
D Rank :: 0
C Rank :: 0
B Rank :: 0
A Rank :: 0
S Rank :: 0

Limitations:
• Ninjutsu : : 00 / 09 *Perk, 3 slots do not apply to Ninjutsu discipline.
• Genjutsu : : 00 / 01
• Taijutsu Styles: : 00 / 00
• Bukijutsu Styles: : 00 / 00

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Weapon Type: Ninjatou
Weapon Range: 3 1/2 Feet
Weapon Weight: 3lbs
Weapon Location: Back

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• 6 Kunai

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Maruton:
• Henge no Jutsu [ Transformation Technique ]
• Kawarimi no Jutsu [ Substitution Technique ]
• Genso Bushin no Jutsu [ Illusion Clone Technique ]
• Suimen Hokou no Waza [ Act of Water Surface Walking ]
• Kinobori no Waza [ Act of Tree Climbing ]
• Kai [ Release ]

Suiton


Raiton


Ranton


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A man born into a noble clan of Kumogakure's infamous linage, Ranton elemental properties. Admitted as a shinobi a few years back in the Sand Village, he's of a little background other than being an outcast of old. Today he serves the Sandvillage as a shinobi, still underway with training.
 

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Yo-ko

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PostPosted: Thu May 23, 2013 8:53 am
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Full Name: Ji-hun Kwon
Nickname: Mad Bomber...?

Age: 14
Birthdate: 6-13
Gender: Male

Height: 4'11''
Weight: 134lbs

Nindo: "Some things are meant to be turned into art."
Personality: Insane? Crazy? The preferred terms are dedicated, ambitious, artistic and flamboyant. What is a pyromaniac without love of the heat and the flame? A snake without the ground and a bird without wings? Ji-hun questions things often and often exclaims quotes in a riddle or poetic fashion exclaiming his supposed superiority above man. What's a knife when one can blow the body into millions of pieces? The view of the world to him is different, while some develop a peaceful or even pacifistic mentality, Ji-hun is ruthless and merciless to those that are deemed 'fit for death' and those He, however, is not a sadist for all it would take is a simple bombing to end someone's life in a mere instant. He frowns upon the mindless idiots who follow honor blindly and lead themselves into danger, self preservation is an ideology held high to him. And one that must be kept. Ji-hun, however, is by far no means a sociopath or a maniac, for he has a set mind for thinking logically with common sense and to fight without going ballistic.

Village: Sunagakure
Rank: Genin | "Low Person"
First Class: Puppetry | 'Dance puppets, dance!'
Second Class: Bloodline | 'Fear my Bombs!'

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Bloodline: Clay Method - Bakuton

Chakra Pool: 405
Stamina Pool: 155
Chakra Element: Earth, Fire, Bakuton
Chakra Color: Color-less - White
Chakra Materialization: Erupts out like a bomb and gives an illusion of smoke afterwards.

Strengths:
• Mid-Ranged Combat
• Kekkei genkai prowess
Weaknesses:
• Lightning Element - Makes bombs and earth ninjutsu useless
• Close Range combat
• Bakuton users have minimal experience in genjutsu. ( Moderately more susceptible to, and slightly less effective with genjutsu. )
Fears:
• Irony
• Bakuton users (other than himself)

Class Disciplines :
• Army of One: The user makes use of their puppetry skills to become a one man army, increasing the overall output potential that their signature weapons can dish out by allowing them to control 2 weapon mechanisms per finger. To maximize this potential, the users puppets gain a +3 weapon mechanism per puppet. Additionally, their chakra strings are significantly tougher than other puppet user's, making any chakra string technique act a rank higher. For Gennin, this bonus only works for techniques D rank and lower, Chunnin C rank and lower, Jounin B rank and lower, Konin A rank and lower, Sannin S rank and lower.

•Thoroughbred: Your maximum chakra pool and maximum stamina pool are both increased by {10} points, and you receive an additional {05} points to each pool whenever you rank up. Additionally, when you perform bloodline techniques above Rank D, you are refunded {05} chakra or {05} stamina, depending on which energy was used. ( If chakra was used, you recover chakra; if stamina was used, you recover stamina; if both were used, you recover both. )

Reductions:
• Learn bloodline techniques one (1) post faster.
Personal Attributes:
• Fine Tuning: From a habit of perfection from a severe case of OCD and art, Ji-hun is able to perfect his bloodline to increased levels. The speed of which he makes makes his clay bombs is moderately increased along with the potency of the explosives slightly (Destructive force/size).
• Another Art: In addition to puppets along with clay bombs, Ji-hun has been using archery as a method to combat those from afar, especially those with raiton abilities.

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Ryo: 両 0,000
AC: 0,000

Missions Complete:
D Rank :: 0
C Rank :: 0
B Rank :: 0
A Rank :: 0
S Rank :: 0

Limitations:
• Ninjutsu : : 00 / 06
• Genjutsu : : 00 / 04
• Kugutsu : : 00 / 07
• Taijutsu Styles: : 00 / 01
• Bukijutsu Styles: : 00 / 02* (Perk)

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Weapon Type: Short Bow & 24 Arrow Quiver
Weapon Range: 75 Foot (Maximum Effective Range)
Weapon Weight: 1 3/4 lbs
Weapon Location: Back

▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|ι η ν є η т σ r у|├▬
• Clay Satchel 1: A beige satchel tied to the side of his belt. Left Side
• Clay Satchel 2: A beige satchel tied to the side of his belt. Right Side
• Kunai Holster: Right side, strapped to thigh.
    Six Kunai knives. .

• Quiver: Across back
    Twenty Four arrows.


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▬▬┤|N i n j u t s u

Maruton: {Start with the following six only}
• Henge no Jutsu [ Transformation Technique ]
• Kawarimi no Jutsu [ Substitution Technique ]
• Genso Bushin no Jutsu [ Illusion Clone Technique ]
• Suimen Hokou no Waza [ Act of Water Surface Walking ]
• Kinobori no Waza [ Act of Tree Climbing ]
• Kai [ Release ]

Doton "The basis of my clay"


Katon "Something that gives a bit of bang."


Bakuton - Clay "My favorite method."


Kugutsu "Puppets are just a distraction."


▬▬┤|G e n j u t s u



▬▬┤|T a i j u t s u

{Style name here}
• {Stage progression / techniques learned}

▬▬┤|B u k i j u t s u

{Style name here}
• {Stage progression / techniques learned}

▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|н ι ѕ т σ r у|├▬
Born in a lowly merchant class family, Ji-hun had mostly grown up in a poor setting while growing up with a bit of ambition to become a shinobi. With a mother taken to a fever and a single father, he was motherless for much of his growing child hood. Sculpting and Calligraphy along with some forms of painting have been Ji-hun's strong point as a hobby, often drawing in the dirt and using stuff such as clay (hint hint) for sculpting, mud as a sort of make shift paint with pigments and such. This artist form had led to creating dolls of wood and even led to him in his first few academy years where he trained in Shurikenjutsu, basics of form and nature transformation in chakra, and basic concepts of ninja warfare. At age eleven, he had became a genin and been in training for a few years following that in Sunagakure.


Personal Attributes:
• Fine Tuning: From a habit of perfection from a severe case of OCD and art, Ji-hun is able to perfect his bloodline to increased levels. The speed of which he makes makes his clay bombs is moderately increased along with the potency of the explosives slightly (Destructive force/size).
• Another Art: In addition to puppets along with clay bombs, Ji-hun has been using archery as a method to combat those from afar, especially those with raiton abilities.

Your first attribute is fine, by typical means, but on a side note it seems rather ambiguous and will not exactly work for you/against you. I would prefer if you would add a bit of more description/concrete-ness to the first attribute.

the second attribute on the other hand is weird....i have no idea what it actually does.....you know there is a bow and arrow style buki right?  
PostPosted: Thu May 23, 2013 8:57 am
Kagawa Fenris
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Full Name: Fuma Kotaro
Nickname: Soaring Hurricane

Age: 23
Birthdate: 11/15
Gender: Male

Height: 5'8''
Weight: 165lbs

Nindo: " The winds have changed to its own advantage once more.
Now, there is only silence."
Personality:

Village: Sunagakure
Rank: Genin
First Class: Ninjutsu
Second Class: Bukijutsu

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Bloodline: Ranton

Chakra Pool: 260
Stamina Pool: 150
Chakra Element: Lightning, Water, Storm
Chakra Color: Color-less - White
Chakra Materialization: Appears like a fog

Strengths:
• Close to Mid Range
• Coverage in area of effect
Weaknesses:
• Genjutsu
• Overwhelming jutsu
Fears:
• Heights
• Open Sea

Class Disciplines :
• Elemental Dual Wielder: Your maximum chakra pool is increased by {10} points. The ninjutsu limit provided by this class is split amongst both of your chosen elements.
• Mystic Hero: The user is much like a hybrid warrior, focusing on mixing ninjutsu into their personal arsenal. Through their great devotion to this path the user can cast ninjutsu without hand seals while wielding a weapon, D at gennin, C at chunnin, B at Jounin, A at Konin, and S at Sannin. These techniques maintain the same description and criteria to use, as well as require the same amount of time to mold the chakra through the weapon as would be needed to perform hand seals, meaning the techniques are not instantaneously cast. The user’s spirit is so strong, that they can utilize their physical bukijutsu techniques to negate ninjutsu techniques of the same rank or below.
Reductions:
• {Learns ---jutsu so many posts faster}

Personal Attributes:
• 2 Additional Ninjutsu slots
• Ranton Specialty: Ability to apply Ranton element to Suiton/Raiton jutsu, costs 10 extra Chakra to the cost to do this. (Ex: 10 -> 20)

▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|c α r є є r • ∂ α т α|├▬
Ryo: 両 0
AC: 0

Missions Complete:
D Rank :: 0
C Rank :: 0
B Rank :: 0
A Rank :: 0
S Rank :: 0

Limitations:
• Ninjutsu : : 00 / 09 *Perk, 3 slots do not apply to Ninjutsu discipline.
• Genjutsu : : 00 / 01
• Taijutsu Styles: : 00 / 00
• Bukijutsu Styles: : 00 / 00

▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|ω є α ρ σ η • ∂ α т α|├▬
Weapon Type: Ninjatou
Weapon Range: 3 1/2 Feet
Weapon Weight: 3lbs
Weapon Location: Back

▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|ι η ν є η т σ r у|├▬
• 6 Kunai

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▬▬┤|N i n j u t s u

Maruton:
• Henge no Jutsu [ Transformation Technique ]
• Kawarimi no Jutsu [ Substitution Technique ]
• Genso Bushin no Jutsu [ Illusion Clone Technique ]
• Suimen Hokou no Waza [ Act of Water Surface Walking ]
• Kinobori no Waza [ Act of Tree Climbing ]
• Kai [ Release ]

Suiton


Raiton


Ranton


▬▬┤|G e n j u t s u

• {If none, remove section}

▬▬┤|T a i j u t s u

{Style name here}
• {Stage progression / techniques learned}

▬▬┤|B u k i j u t s u

{Style name here}
• {Stage progression / techniques learned}

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A man born into a noble clan of Kumogakure's infamous linage, Ranton elemental properties. Admitted as a shinobi a few years back in the Sand Village, he's of a little background other than being an outcast of old. Today he serves the Sandvillage as a shinobi, still underway with training.

Limitations:
• Ninjutsu : : 00 / 09 *Perk, 3 slots do not apply to Ninjutsu discipline.
• Genjutsu : : 00 / 01
• Taijutsu Styles: : 00 / 00
• Bukijutsu Styles: : 00 / 00

what do you mean by this? im assuming you mean an 2 from your attribute +1 from your buki discipline? you know it is much easier to do the limitations for "number gained from first class" / "number gained from second class

Personal Attributes:
• 2 Additional Ninjutsu slots
• Ranton Specialty: Ability to apply Ranton element to Suiton/Raiton jutsu, costs 10 extra Chakra to the cost to do this. (Ex: 10 -> 20)

your second one is denied, as it is more of a custom technique then it is a attribute.  

Yo-ko

Hallowed Prophet



-x- Rei -x-


O.G. Vampire

PostPosted: Thu May 23, 2013 9:09 am
Yo-ko
Reiko Zena
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This character use is for my personal use ONLY. I've designed the character and had this made for my use. Attempting to reuse this without permission to the original owner or mine will be art theft.

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Full Name: Ji-hun Kwon
Nickname: Mad Bomber...?

Age: 14
Birthdate: 6-13
Gender: Male

Height: 4'11''
Weight: 134lbs

Nindo: "Some things are meant to be turned into art."
Personality: Insane? Crazy? The preferred terms are dedicated, ambitious, artistic and flamboyant. What is a pyromaniac without love of the heat and the flame? A snake without the ground and a bird without wings? Ji-hun questions things often and often exclaims quotes in a riddle or poetic fashion exclaiming his supposed superiority above man. What's a knife when one can blow the body into millions of pieces? The view of the world to him is different, while some develop a peaceful or even pacifistic mentality, Ji-hun is ruthless and merciless to those that are deemed 'fit for death' and those He, however, is not a sadist for all it would take is a simple bombing to end someone's life in a mere instant. He frowns upon the mindless idiots who follow honor blindly and lead themselves into danger, self preservation is an ideology held high to him. And one that must be kept. Ji-hun, however, is by far no means a sociopath or a maniac, for he has a set mind for thinking logically with common sense and to fight without going ballistic.

Village: Sunagakure
Rank: Genin | "Low Person"
First Class: Puppetry | 'Dance puppets, dance!'
Second Class: Bloodline | 'Fear my Bombs!'

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Bloodline: Clay Method - Bakuton

Chakra Pool: 405
Stamina Pool: 155
Chakra Element: Earth, Fire, Bakuton
Chakra Color: Color-less - White
Chakra Materialization: Erupts out like a bomb and gives an illusion of smoke afterwards.

Strengths:
• Mid-Ranged Combat
• Kekkei genkai prowess
Weaknesses:
• Lightning Element - Makes bombs and earth ninjutsu useless
• Close Range combat
• Bakuton users have minimal experience in genjutsu. ( Moderately more susceptible to, and slightly less effective with genjutsu. )
Fears:
• Irony
• Bakuton users (other than himself)

Class Disciplines :
• Army of One: The user makes use of their puppetry skills to become a one man army, increasing the overall output potential that their signature weapons can dish out by allowing them to control 2 weapon mechanisms per finger. To maximize this potential, the users puppets gain a +3 weapon mechanism per puppet. Additionally, their chakra strings are significantly tougher than other puppet user's, making any chakra string technique act a rank higher. For Gennin, this bonus only works for techniques D rank and lower, Chunnin C rank and lower, Jounin B rank and lower, Konin A rank and lower, Sannin S rank and lower.

•Thoroughbred: Your maximum chakra pool and maximum stamina pool are both increased by {10} points, and you receive an additional {05} points to each pool whenever you rank up. Additionally, when you perform bloodline techniques above Rank D, you are refunded {05} chakra or {05} stamina, depending on which energy was used. ( If chakra was used, you recover chakra; if stamina was used, you recover stamina; if both were used, you recover both. )

Reductions:
• Learn bloodline techniques one (1) post faster.
Personal Attributes:
• Fine Tuning: From a habit of perfection from a severe case of OCD and art, Ji-hun is able to perfect his bloodline to increased levels. The speed of which he makes makes his clay bombs is moderately increased along with the potency of the explosives slightly (Destructive force/size).
• Another Art: In addition to puppets along with clay bombs, Ji-hun has been using archery as a method to combat those from afar, especially those with raiton abilities.

▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|c α r є є r • ∂ α т α|├▬
Ryo: 両 0,000
AC: 0,000

Missions Complete:
D Rank :: 0
C Rank :: 0
B Rank :: 0
A Rank :: 0
S Rank :: 0

Limitations:
• Ninjutsu : : 00 / 06
• Genjutsu : : 00 / 04
• Kugutsu : : 00 / 07
• Taijutsu Styles: : 00 / 01
• Bukijutsu Styles: : 00 / 02* (Perk)

▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|ω є α ρ σ η • ∂ α т α|├▬
Weapon Type: Short Bow & 24 Arrow Quiver
Weapon Range: 75 Foot (Maximum Effective Range)
Weapon Weight: 1 3/4 lbs
Weapon Location: Back

▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|ι η ν є η т σ r у|├▬
• Clay Satchel 1: A beige satchel tied to the side of his belt. Left Side
• Clay Satchel 2: A beige satchel tied to the side of his belt. Right Side
• Kunai Holster: Right side, strapped to thigh.
    Six Kunai knives. .

• Quiver: Across back
    Twenty Four arrows.


▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|т є c н η ι q υ є ѕ|├▬
▬▬┤|N i n j u t s u

Maruton: {Start with the following six only}
• Henge no Jutsu [ Transformation Technique ]
• Kawarimi no Jutsu [ Substitution Technique ]
• Genso Bushin no Jutsu [ Illusion Clone Technique ]
• Suimen Hokou no Waza [ Act of Water Surface Walking ]
• Kinobori no Waza [ Act of Tree Climbing ]
• Kai [ Release ]

Doton "The basis of my clay"


Katon "Something that gives a bit of bang."


Bakuton - Clay "My favorite method."


Kugutsu "Puppets are just a distraction."


▬▬┤|G e n j u t s u



▬▬┤|T a i j u t s u

{Style name here}
• {Stage progression / techniques learned}

▬▬┤|B u k i j u t s u

{Style name here}
• {Stage progression / techniques learned}

▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|н ι ѕ т σ r у|├▬
Born in a lowly merchant class family, Ji-hun had mostly grown up in a poor setting while growing up with a bit of ambition to become a shinobi. With a mother taken to a fever and a single father, he was motherless for much of his growing child hood. Sculpting and Calligraphy along with some forms of painting have been Ji-hun's strong point as a hobby, often drawing in the dirt and using stuff such as clay (hint hint) for sculpting, mud as a sort of make shift paint with pigments and such. This artist form had led to creating dolls of wood and even led to him in his first few academy years where he trained in Shurikenjutsu, basics of form and nature transformation in chakra, and basic concepts of ninja warfare. At age eleven, he had became a genin and been in training for a few years following that in Sunagakure.


Personal Attributes:
• Fine Tuning: From a habit of perfection from a severe case of OCD and art, Ji-hun is able to perfect his bloodline to increased levels. The speed of which he makes makes his clay bombs is moderately increased along with the potency of the explosives slightly (Destructive force/size).
• Another Art: In addition to puppets along with clay bombs, Ji-hun has been using archery as a method to combat those from afar, especially those with raiton abilities.

Your first attribute is fine, by typical means, but on a side note it seems rather ambiguous and will not exactly work for you/against you. I would prefer if you would add a bit of more description/concrete-ness to the first attribute.

the second attribute on the other hand is weird....i have no idea what it actually does.....you know there is a bow and arrow style buki right?


For the first, it's basically deriving off of his Bloodline class and improving his overall proficiency with his kekkei genkai such as speed to create, potency of explosions, etc.

The second I forgot to add an additional note in parenthesis, for it's basically allowing him to learn an additional bukijutsu, which would be Bow & Arrows with that buki you've mentioned.  
PostPosted: Thu May 23, 2013 9:14 am
Reiko Zena
Yo-ko
Reiko Zena
User Image

This character use is for my personal use ONLY. I've designed the character and had this made for my use. Attempting to reuse this without permission to the original owner or mine will be art theft.

▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|ρ є r ѕ σ η α ℓ • ∂ α т α|├▬
Full Name: Ji-hun Kwon
Nickname: Mad Bomber...?

Age: 14
Birthdate: 6-13
Gender: Male

Height: 4'11''
Weight: 134lbs

Nindo: "Some things are meant to be turned into art."
Personality: Insane? Crazy? The preferred terms are dedicated, ambitious, artistic and flamboyant. What is a pyromaniac without love of the heat and the flame? A snake without the ground and a bird without wings? Ji-hun questions things often and often exclaims quotes in a riddle or poetic fashion exclaiming his supposed superiority above man. What's a knife when one can blow the body into millions of pieces? The view of the world to him is different, while some develop a peaceful or even pacifistic mentality, Ji-hun is ruthless and merciless to those that are deemed 'fit for death' and those He, however, is not a sadist for all it would take is a simple bombing to end someone's life in a mere instant. He frowns upon the mindless idiots who follow honor blindly and lead themselves into danger, self preservation is an ideology held high to him. And one that must be kept. Ji-hun, however, is by far no means a sociopath or a maniac, for he has a set mind for thinking logically with common sense and to fight without going ballistic.

Village: Sunagakure
Rank: Genin | "Low Person"
First Class: Puppetry | 'Dance puppets, dance!'
Second Class: Bloodline | 'Fear my Bombs!'

▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|c σ м в α т • ∂ α т α|├▬
Bloodline: Clay Method - Bakuton

Chakra Pool: 405
Stamina Pool: 155
Chakra Element: Earth, Fire, Bakuton
Chakra Color: Color-less - White
Chakra Materialization: Erupts out like a bomb and gives an illusion of smoke afterwards.

Strengths:
• Mid-Ranged Combat
• Kekkei genkai prowess
Weaknesses:
• Lightning Element - Makes bombs and earth ninjutsu useless
• Close Range combat
• Bakuton users have minimal experience in genjutsu. ( Moderately more susceptible to, and slightly less effective with genjutsu. )
Fears:
• Irony
• Bakuton users (other than himself)

Class Disciplines :
• Army of One: The user makes use of their puppetry skills to become a one man army, increasing the overall output potential that their signature weapons can dish out by allowing them to control 2 weapon mechanisms per finger. To maximize this potential, the users puppets gain a +3 weapon mechanism per puppet. Additionally, their chakra strings are significantly tougher than other puppet user's, making any chakra string technique act a rank higher. For Gennin, this bonus only works for techniques D rank and lower, Chunnin C rank and lower, Jounin B rank and lower, Konin A rank and lower, Sannin S rank and lower.

•Thoroughbred: Your maximum chakra pool and maximum stamina pool are both increased by {10} points, and you receive an additional {05} points to each pool whenever you rank up. Additionally, when you perform bloodline techniques above Rank D, you are refunded {05} chakra or {05} stamina, depending on which energy was used. ( If chakra was used, you recover chakra; if stamina was used, you recover stamina; if both were used, you recover both. )

Reductions:
• Learn bloodline techniques one (1) post faster.
Personal Attributes:
• Fine Tuning: From a habit of perfection from a severe case of OCD and art, Ji-hun is able to perfect his bloodline to increased levels. The speed of which he makes makes his clay bombs is moderately increased along with the potency of the explosives slightly (Destructive force/size).
• Another Art: In addition to puppets along with clay bombs, Ji-hun has been using archery as a method to combat those from afar, especially those with raiton abilities.

▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|c α r є є r • ∂ α т α|├▬
Ryo: 両 0,000
AC: 0,000

Missions Complete:
D Rank :: 0
C Rank :: 0
B Rank :: 0
A Rank :: 0
S Rank :: 0

Limitations:
• Ninjutsu : : 00 / 06
• Genjutsu : : 00 / 04
• Kugutsu : : 00 / 07
• Taijutsu Styles: : 00 / 01
• Bukijutsu Styles: : 00 / 02* (Perk)

▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|ω є α ρ σ η • ∂ α т α|├▬
Weapon Type: Short Bow & 24 Arrow Quiver
Weapon Range: 75 Foot (Maximum Effective Range)
Weapon Weight: 1 3/4 lbs
Weapon Location: Back

▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|ι η ν є η т σ r у|├▬
• Clay Satchel 1: A beige satchel tied to the side of his belt. Left Side
• Clay Satchel 2: A beige satchel tied to the side of his belt. Right Side
• Kunai Holster: Right side, strapped to thigh.
    Six Kunai knives. .

• Quiver: Across back
    Twenty Four arrows.


▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|т є c н η ι q υ є ѕ|├▬
▬▬┤|N i n j u t s u

Maruton: {Start with the following six only}
• Henge no Jutsu [ Transformation Technique ]
• Kawarimi no Jutsu [ Substitution Technique ]
• Genso Bushin no Jutsu [ Illusion Clone Technique ]
• Suimen Hokou no Waza [ Act of Water Surface Walking ]
• Kinobori no Waza [ Act of Tree Climbing ]
• Kai [ Release ]

Doton "The basis of my clay"


Katon "Something that gives a bit of bang."


Bakuton - Clay "My favorite method."


Kugutsu "Puppets are just a distraction."


▬▬┤|G e n j u t s u



▬▬┤|T a i j u t s u

{Style name here}
• {Stage progression / techniques learned}

▬▬┤|B u k i j u t s u

{Style name here}
• {Stage progression / techniques learned}

▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|н ι ѕ т σ r у|├▬
Born in a lowly merchant class family, Ji-hun had mostly grown up in a poor setting while growing up with a bit of ambition to become a shinobi. With a mother taken to a fever and a single father, he was motherless for much of his growing child hood. Sculpting and Calligraphy along with some forms of painting have been Ji-hun's strong point as a hobby, often drawing in the dirt and using stuff such as clay (hint hint) for sculpting, mud as a sort of make shift paint with pigments and such. This artist form had led to creating dolls of wood and even led to him in his first few academy years where he trained in Shurikenjutsu, basics of form and nature transformation in chakra, and basic concepts of ninja warfare. At age eleven, he had became a genin and been in training for a few years following that in Sunagakure.


Personal Attributes:
• Fine Tuning: From a habit of perfection from a severe case of OCD and art, Ji-hun is able to perfect his bloodline to increased levels. The speed of which he makes makes his clay bombs is moderately increased along with the potency of the explosives slightly (Destructive force/size).
• Another Art: In addition to puppets along with clay bombs, Ji-hun has been using archery as a method to combat those from afar, especially those with raiton abilities.

Your first attribute is fine, by typical means, but on a side note it seems rather ambiguous and will not exactly work for you/against you. I would prefer if you would add a bit of more description/concrete-ness to the first attribute.

the second attribute on the other hand is weird....i have no idea what it actually does.....you know there is a bow and arrow style buki right?


For the first, it's basically deriving off of his Bloodline class and improving his overall proficiency with his kekkei genkai such as speed to create, potency of explosions, etc.

The second I forgot to add an additional note in parenthesis, for it's basically allowing him to learn an additional bukijutsu, which would be Bow & Arrows with that buki you've mentioned.
that makes more sense. The second one is approved.

the first one still is unclear. i understadn its the overall effectivness, but do you see how is that is a little vague? Such as how muh bigger are your explosions vs a regular bakuton? how much faster do you create them.....overall this attribute would be lost in your character simply because it can be ignored. That is why we did away with the previous class attributes for the discipline system  

Yo-ko

Hallowed Prophet



-x- Rei -x-


O.G. Vampire

PostPosted: Thu May 23, 2013 9:47 am
Yo-ko


Personal Attributes:
• Fine Tuning: From a habit of perfection from a severe case of OCD and art, Ji-hun is able to perfect his bloodline to increased levels. The speed of which he makes makes his clay bombs is moderately increased along with the potency of the explosives slightly (Destructive force/size).
• Another Art: In addition to puppets along with clay bombs, Ji-hun has been using archery as a method to combat those from afar, especially those with raiton abilities. Allows an additional bukijutsu slot

Added note to second. For the first then, how would this sound... Since a few techniques in Clay Bakuton involve prepping their jutsu a set amount of posts. Would reducing the prep time (say 2 posts for 1 post) by 1 post work?  
PostPosted: Thu May 23, 2013 9:52 am
Reiko Zena
Yo-ko


Personal Attributes:
• Fine Tuning: From a habit of perfection from a severe case of OCD and art, Ji-hun is able to perfect his bloodline to increased levels. The speed of which he makes makes his clay bombs is moderately increased along with the potency of the explosives slightly (Destructive force/size).
• Another Art: In addition to puppets along with clay bombs, Ji-hun has been using archery as a method to combat those from afar, especially those with raiton abilities. Allows an additional bukijutsu slot

Added note to second. For the first then, how would this sound... Since a few techniques in Clay Bakuton involve prepping their jutsu a set amount of posts. Would reducing the prep time (say 2 posts for 1 post) by 1 post work?


Reducing prep time could work, yes. but can only be reduced by 1 post. For the record however, i believe AandOE is working on the bakuton edits to prep time and stuff

second looks good  

Yo-ko

Hallowed Prophet



-x- Rei -x-


O.G. Vampire

PostPosted: Thu May 23, 2013 10:09 am
Yo-ko
Reiko Zena
Yo-ko


Personal Attributes:
• Fine Tuning: From a habit of perfection from a severe case of OCD and art, Ji-hun is able to perfect his bloodline to increased levels. The speed of which he makes makes his clay bombs is moderately increased along with the potency of the explosives slightly (Destructive force/size).
• Another Art: In addition to puppets along with clay bombs, Ji-hun has been using archery as a method to combat those from afar, especially those with raiton abilities. Allows an additional bukijutsu slot

Added note to second. For the first then, how would this sound... Since a few techniques in Clay Bakuton involve prepping their jutsu a set amount of posts. Would reducing the prep time (say 2 posts for 1 post) by 1 post work?


Reducing prep time could work, yes. but can only be reduced by 1 post. For the record however, i believe AandOE is working on the bakuton edits to prep time and stuff

second looks good


1 post is all I need. Lemme edit the attributes and I'll repost here in a sec.

Edit: 'Kay, edited edition is now up.  
PostPosted: Thu May 23, 2013 10:19 am
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Full Name: Ji-hun Kwon
Nickname: Mad Bomber...?

Age: 14
Birthdate: 6-13
Gender: Male

Height: 4'11''
Weight: 134lbs

Nindo: "Some things are meant to be turned into art."
Personality: Insane? Crazy? The preferred terms are dedicated, ambitious, artistic and flamboyant. What is a pyromaniac without love of the heat and the flame? A snake without the ground and a bird without wings? Ji-hun questions things often and often exclaims quotes in a riddle or poetic fashion exclaiming his supposed superiority above man. What's a knife when one can blow the body into millions of pieces? The view of the world to him is different, while some develop a peaceful or even pacifistic mentality, Ji-hun is ruthless and merciless to those that are deemed 'fit for death' and those He, however, is not a sadist for all it would take is a simple bombing to end someone's life in a mere instant. He frowns upon the mindless idiots who follow honor blindly and lead themselves into danger, self preservation is an ideology held high to him. And one that must be kept. Ji-hun, however, is by far no means a sociopath or a maniac, for he has a set mind for thinking logically with common sense and to fight without going ballistic.

Village: Sunagakure
Rank: Genin | "Low Person"
First Class: Puppetry | 'Dance puppets, dance!'
Second Class: Bloodline | 'Fear my Bombs!'

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Bloodline: Clay Method - Bakuton

Chakra Pool: 405
Stamina Pool: 155
Chakra Element: Earth, Fire, Bakuton
Chakra Color: Color-less - White
Chakra Materialization: Erupts out like a bomb and gives an illusion of smoke afterwards.

Strengths:
• Mid-Ranged Combat
• Kekkei genkai prowess
Weaknesses:
• Lightning Element - Makes bombs and earth ninjutsu useless
• Close Range combat
• Bakuton users have minimal experience in genjutsu. ( Moderately more susceptible to, and slightly less effective with genjutsu. )
Fears:
• Irony
• Bakuton users (other than himself)

Class Disciplines :
• Army of One: The user makes use of their puppetry skills to become a one man army, increasing the overall output potential that their signature weapons can dish out by allowing them to control 2 weapon mechanisms per finger. To maximize this potential, the users puppets gain a +3 weapon mechanism per puppet. Additionally, their chakra strings are significantly tougher than other puppet user's, making any chakra string technique act a rank higher. For Gennin, this bonus only works for techniques D rank and lower, Chunnin C rank and lower, Jounin B rank and lower, Konin A rank and lower, Sannin S rank and lower.

•Thoroughbred: Your maximum chakra pool and maximum stamina pool are both increased by {10} points, and you receive an additional {05} points to each pool whenever you rank up. Additionally, when you perform bloodline techniques above Rank D, you are refunded {05} chakra or {05} stamina, depending on which energy was used. ( If chakra was used, you recover chakra; if stamina was used, you recover stamina; if both were used, you recover both. )

Reductions:
• Learn bloodline techniques one (1) post faster.
Personal Attributes:
• Fine Tuning: From a habit of perfection from a severe case of OCD and art, Ji-hun is able to perfect his bloodline to increased levels. The speed of which he makes makes his clay bombs is increased by reducing the preperation time of some jutsu by one [1] post.
• Another Art: In addition to puppets along with clay bombs, Ji-hun has been using archery as a method to combat those from afar, especially those with raiton abilities. (Additional Bukijutsu Slot)

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Ryo: 両 0,000
AC: 0,000

Missions Complete:
D Rank :: 0
C Rank :: 0
B Rank :: 0
A Rank :: 0
S Rank :: 0

Limitations:
• Ninjutsu : : 00 / 06
• Genjutsu : : 00 / 04
• Kugutsu : : 00 / 07
• Taijutsu Styles: : 00 / 01
• Bukijutsu Styles: : 00 / 02* (Perk)

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Weapon Type: Short Bow & 24 Arrow Quiver
Weapon Range: 75 Foot (Maximum Effective Range)
Weapon Weight: 1 3/4 lbs
Weapon Location: Back

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• Clay Satchel 1: A beige satchel tied to the side of his belt. Left Side
• Clay Satchel 2: A beige satchel tied to the side of his belt. Right Side
• Kunai Holster: Right side, strapped to thigh.
    Six Kunai knives. .

• Quiver: Across back
    Twenty Four arrows.


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▬▬┤|N i n j u t s u

Maruton: {Start with the following six only}
• Henge no Jutsu [ Transformation Technique ]
• Kawarimi no Jutsu [ Substitution Technique ]
• Genso Bushin no Jutsu [ Illusion Clone Technique ]
• Suimen Hokou no Waza [ Act of Water Surface Walking ]
• Kinobori no Waza [ Act of Tree Climbing ]
• Kai [ Release ]

Doton "The basis of my clay"


Katon "Something that gives a bit of bang."


Bakuton - Clay "My favorite method."


Kugutsu "Puppets are just a distraction."


▬▬┤|G e n j u t s u



▬▬┤|T a i j u t s u

{Style name here}
• {Stage progression / techniques learned}

▬▬┤|B u k i j u t s u

{Style name here}
• {Stage progression / techniques learned}

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Born in a lowly merchant class family, Ji-hun had mostly grown up in a poor setting while growing up with a bit of ambition to become a shinobi. With a mother taken to a fever and a single father, he was motherless for much of his growing child hood. Sculpting and Calligraphy along with some forms of painting have been Ji-hun's strong point as a hobby, often drawing in the dirt and using stuff such as clay (hint hint) for sculpting, mud as a sort of make shift paint with pigments and such. This artist form had led to creating dolls of wood and even led to him in his first few academy years where he trained in Shurikenjutsu, basics of form and nature transformation in chakra, and basic concepts of ninja warfare. At age eleven, he had became a genin and been in training for a few years following that in Sunagakure.
 


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PostPosted: Thu May 23, 2013 10:49 am
Reiko Zena
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This character use is for my personal use ONLY. I've designed the character and had this made for my use. Attempting to reuse this without permission to the original owner or mine will be art theft.

▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|ρ є r ѕ σ η α ℓ • ∂ α т α|├▬
Full Name: Ji-hun Kwon
Nickname: Mad Bomber...?

Age: 14
Birthdate: 6-13
Gender: Male

Height: 4'11''
Weight: 134lbs

Nindo: "Some things are meant to be turned into art."
Personality: Insane? Crazy? The preferred terms are dedicated, ambitious, artistic and flamboyant. What is a pyromaniac without love of the heat and the flame? A snake without the ground and a bird without wings? Ji-hun questions things often and often exclaims quotes in a riddle or poetic fashion exclaiming his supposed superiority above man. What's a knife when one can blow the body into millions of pieces? The view of the world to him is different, while some develop a peaceful or even pacifistic mentality, Ji-hun is ruthless and merciless to those that are deemed 'fit for death' and those He, however, is not a sadist for all it would take is a simple bombing to end someone's life in a mere instant. He frowns upon the mindless idiots who follow honor blindly and lead themselves into danger, self preservation is an ideology held high to him. And one that must be kept. Ji-hun, however, is by far no means a sociopath or a maniac, for he has a set mind for thinking logically with common sense and to fight without going ballistic.

Village: Sunagakure
Rank: Genin | "Low Person"
First Class: Puppetry | 'Dance puppets, dance!'
Second Class: Bloodline | 'Fear my Bombs!'

▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|c σ м в α т • ∂ α т α|├▬
Bloodline: Clay Method - Bakuton

Chakra Pool: 405
Stamina Pool: 155
Chakra Element: Earth, Fire, Bakuton
Chakra Color: Color-less - White
Chakra Materialization: Erupts out like a bomb and gives an illusion of smoke afterwards.

Strengths:
• Mid-Ranged Combat
• Kekkei genkai prowess
Weaknesses:
• Lightning Element - Makes bombs and earth ninjutsu useless
• Close Range combat
• Bakuton users have minimal experience in genjutsu. ( Moderately more susceptible to, and slightly less effective with genjutsu. )
Fears:
• Irony
• Bakuton users (other than himself)

Class Disciplines :
• Army of One: The user makes use of their puppetry skills to become a one man army, increasing the overall output potential that their signature weapons can dish out by allowing them to control 2 weapon mechanisms per finger. To maximize this potential, the users puppets gain a +3 weapon mechanism per puppet. Additionally, their chakra strings are significantly tougher than other puppet user's, making any chakra string technique act a rank higher. For Gennin, this bonus only works for techniques D rank and lower, Chunnin C rank and lower, Jounin B rank and lower, Konin A rank and lower, Sannin S rank and lower.

•Thoroughbred: Your maximum chakra pool and maximum stamina pool are both increased by {10} points, and you receive an additional {05} points to each pool whenever you rank up. Additionally, when you perform bloodline techniques above Rank D, you are refunded {05} chakra or {05} stamina, depending on which energy was used. ( If chakra was used, you recover chakra; if stamina was used, you recover stamina; if both were used, you recover both. )

Reductions:
• Learn bloodline techniques one (1) post faster.
Personal Attributes:
• Fine Tuning: From a habit of perfection from a severe case of OCD and art, Ji-hun is able to perfect his bloodline to increased levels. The speed of which he makes makes his clay bombs is increased by reducing the preperation time of some jutsu by one [1] post.
• Another Art: In addition to puppets along with clay bombs, Ji-hun has been using archery as a method to combat those from afar, especially those with raiton abilities. (Additional Bukijutsu Slot)

▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|c α r є є r • ∂ α т α|├▬
Ryo: 両 0,000
AC: 0,000

Missions Complete:
D Rank :: 0
C Rank :: 0
B Rank :: 0
A Rank :: 0
S Rank :: 0

Limitations:
• Ninjutsu : : 00 / 06
• Genjutsu : : 00 / 04
• Kugutsu : : 00 / 07
• Taijutsu Styles: : 00 / 01
• Bukijutsu Styles: : 00 / 02* (Perk)

▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|ω є α ρ σ η • ∂ α т α|├▬
Weapon Type: Short Bow & 24 Arrow Quiver
Weapon Range: 75 Foot (Maximum Effective Range)
Weapon Weight: 1 3/4 lbs
Weapon Location: Back

▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|ι η ν є η т σ r у|├▬
• Clay Satchel 1: A beige satchel tied to the side of his belt. Left Side
• Clay Satchel 2: A beige satchel tied to the side of his belt. Right Side
• Kunai Holster: Right side, strapped to thigh.
    Six Kunai knives. .

• Quiver: Across back
    Twenty Four arrows.


▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|т є c н η ι q υ є ѕ|├▬
▬▬┤|N i n j u t s u

Maruton: {Start with the following six only}
• Henge no Jutsu [ Transformation Technique ]
• Kawarimi no Jutsu [ Substitution Technique ]
• Genso Bushin no Jutsu [ Illusion Clone Technique ]
• Suimen Hokou no Waza [ Act of Water Surface Walking ]
• Kinobori no Waza [ Act of Tree Climbing ]
• Kai [ Release ]

Doton "The basis of my clay"


Katon "Something that gives a bit of bang."


Bakuton - Clay "My favorite method."


Kugutsu "Puppets are just a distraction."


▬▬┤|G e n j u t s u



▬▬┤|T a i j u t s u

{Style name here}
• {Stage progression / techniques learned}

▬▬┤|B u k i j u t s u

{Style name here}
• {Stage progression / techniques learned}

▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|н ι ѕ т σ r у|├▬
Born in a lowly merchant class family, Ji-hun had mostly grown up in a poor setting while growing up with a bit of ambition to become a shinobi. With a mother taken to a fever and a single father, he was motherless for much of his growing child hood. Sculpting and Calligraphy along with some forms of painting have been Ji-hun's strong point as a hobby, often drawing in the dirt and using stuff such as clay (hint hint) for sculpting, mud as a sort of make shift paint with pigments and such. This artist form had led to creating dolls of wood and even led to him in his first few academy years where he trained in Shurikenjutsu, basics of form and nature transformation in chakra, and basic concepts of ninja warfare. At age eleven, he had became a genin and been in training for a few years following that in Sunagakure.
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