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Yo-ko

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PostPosted: Thu Feb 07, 2013 11:22 am
Nero Inferni
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Full Name: Sakagawa Kenshin
Nickname: N/A

Age: 16
Birthdate: December 12th
Gender: Male

Height: 5 Feet 10 Inches [ 5'10" ] | 12.954 Meters
Weight: 175 Pounds [ 175lb ] | 79.378 Kilograms

Nindo: ---
Personality: Kenshin is a very quiet, kind, peaceful, and courteous person. He believes that extended a hand of friendship and attempting peaceful negotiations first will usually solve any issue that arises. The boy was raised with manners, always respecting his elders and refusing to lay a hand on a woman. This could be seen as a weakness though; it would cause him to hesitate in battle if he was fighting against a woman. Kenshin dislikes the thought of killing someone, and would attempt to refrain from striking a killing blow unless all other options are wasted. He is a solemn person though, liking to keep to himself and not talk. Despite that fact though he is a true friend to anyone who would call him a friend adding to his uncanny loyalty and desire to protect them with all his might.

Village: Sunagakure
Rank: Genin
First Class: Bukijutsu
Second Class: Taijutsu

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Chakra Pool: 175
Stamina Pool: 325
Chakra Element: Raiton
Chakra Color:
Steel Blue
Chakra Materialization: His chakra surrounds him in an aura, starting from the feet.

Strengths
• Omnidextrous
• Kenjutsu
Weaknesses
• Ninjutsu
• Genjutsu
Fears
• Death without Honor
• Loosing his Honor as a Samurai

Class Disciplines
• Samurai
• Monk
Reductions
• Learns Bukijutsu techniques one [1] post faster
• Learns Pi Qua Quan [ Sungakure no Taijutsu ], Xing-Yi, and Xinyi Liuhe Quan two [ 2 ] posts faster.
• Complex Techniques cost ten [ 10 ] less chakra and stamina to use.
Personal Attributes
• "Zen Meditation: After training and meditating in the way of Zen, the user uses up ten [ 10 ] less stamina and chakra when using Jutsu."
• "Path of the Sword Saint: The user gains an extra Bukijutsu at Chuunin, and another one at Jounin."
• "Way of the Samurai: He learns Bukijutsu one [ 1 ] post quicker."

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Ryo: 両 0
AC: 0

Missions Complete:
D Rank :: 0
C Rank :: 0
B Rank :: 0
A Rank :: 0
S Rank :: 0

Limitations:
[ Learned / Total ]
• Ninjutsu : : 00 / 02
• Genjutsu : : 00 / 00
• Taijutsu Styles: : 00 / 02
• Bukijutsu Styles: : 00 / 02

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Weapon Type: Katana - [ Image ]
Weapon Range: 65 Centimeters
Weapon Weight: 1.2 Kilograms
Weapon Location: Left Hip

Summoning Type: {Ex. Dogs, Bears, Slugs, etc.} {If none, remove summon section}
Summon Sage: {Yes or No}
Pacts: {Ex. Dogs: Pakkun, etc. Sages do not need to list pacts}

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▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|т є c н η ι q υ є ѕ|├▬
▬▬┤|N i n j u t s u

Maruton:
• Bushi Ken no Jutsu [ Samurai Sabre Technique ] - [ B Rank ]
• Shunshin no Jutsu [ Body Flicker Technique ] - [ D Rank ]
• Kai [ Release ] - [ X Rank ]
• Kawarimi no Jutsu [ Substitution Technique ] - [ E Rank ]
• Saibai no Jutsu [ Cultivation Technique ] - [ 10*x Stamina to 10*x Chakra ]


▬▬┤|T a i j u t s u

{Style name here}
• {Stage progression / techniques learned}

▬▬┤|B u k i j u t s u

{Style name here}
• {Stage progression / techniques learned}

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Kenshin was born to the Sakagawa Clan from the Land of Iron. His father, Sakagawa Musashi, was a prominent leader and made trips to the Sunagakure very often because of the ties he had to a Shinobi there. This Shinobi in question, was Kenshin's mother. She gave Kenshin to his father on his third birthday because she understood the importance of him being trained in the Way of the Samurai, but she requested that he was to be sent back to Sunagakure to be trained in the Art of the Shinobi when he was old enough to be considered a Samurai.

During one of the times that he made a trip to Sunagakure Musashi stopped by the blacksmith shop in Sunagakure. The man gave him a Daisho pair that were better than any other swords he had ever wielding, or seen. For this feat Musashi dubbed the man Masamune, a fitting title for the blacksmith. The man's real name was Satetsu Sanshi, the current Sannin of Sunagakure. This fact was unknown to Musashi, but he respected the man greatly.

Kenshin finished his Samurai training three years ago at the age of thirteen. For two years he was sent to a Buddhist Temple to study under the Monks and become a Monk himself. During his time there he practiced Zen and the fact of clearing his mind this added to his Samurai training to further increase his resistance to Genjutsu. For one year he was at the Buddhist Temple until he was sent to Sunagakure to receive his Shinobi training like his mother requested. He graduated the Academy in two years. Kenshin does not claim his Shinobi heritage, but rather his Samurai one.
upon further discussion, your attribute "zen meditation needs be be reduced to either -10 from stamina, -10 from chackra, or -5 from both for complex techniques. -20 has been seen as a little excessive  
PostPosted: Thu Feb 07, 2013 11:24 am
Avedis Angelus
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Full Name: Atteharu Hyuuga
Nickname: Atte

Age: 23
Birthdate: April 18th
Gender: Male

Height: 6'2"
Weight: 154 lbs

Nindo: "All about the games."
Personality: The very least one could say about Atteharu is that he's not boring. He acts like a child, more or less, and instigates people just to instigate them. He enjoys trying to anger people to come extent, but will admit it was all in good fun at the end.

Village: Konohagakure
Rank: Genin
First Class: Taijutsu
Second Class: Sensory

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Bloodline: Hyuuga Clan

Chakra Pool: 275
Stamina Pool: 225
Chakra Element: Lightning
Chakra Color: Red
Chakra Materialization: Flickering Aura

Strengths:
• Close Combat
• Chakra Detection
Weaknesses:
• Ranged combat
• Someone Faster than Him
Fears:
• Waterfalls
• Tornadoes

Class Disciplines :
• Monk: A more internal martial artist, this user focuses on the ability to utilize chakra to increase their power and techniques due to their smaller body frame. Gains a -2 learning reduction to Pi Qua Quan, Xingyi, and Xinyi liuhe Quan. Complex techniques cost 10 less chakra and stamina to perform. Starts with extra technique [Cultivation](cultivation is a conversion of stamina to chakra, at a 10 chakra to 10 stamina conversion in any increment of 10.)

• Resolution: The user is more determined to get fine details from his sensory techniques, but in order to get this type of clarity the user's range of the technique is reduced by half. The user is able to discover type of technique that is about to be active(fuuin, genjutsu, ninjutsu, custom jutsu, complex tai and buki), even specifics such as Bloodline type and rank. Additionally, the user can gain similar information about any chakra source in their sensory technique's range, including what bloodline the person possesses, and how large their chakra pool is.
Reductions:
• All Hyuuga learn taijutsu one [1] post faster.
• All Hyuuga learn maruton ninjutsu [1] one post faster.
Personal Attributes:
• Taijutsu Affinity: Learn Taijutsu 2 Posts Faster
• Complex Utilizer: Learn Complex Taijutsu 1 Post Faster

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Ryo: 両 0000
AC: 0000

Missions Complete:
D Rank :: 0
C Rank :: 0
B Rank :: 0
A Rank :: 0
S Rank :: 0

Limitations:
• Ninjutsu : : 00 / 04
• Genjutsu : : 00 / 04
• Taijutsu Styles: : 00 / 02
• Bukijutsu Styles: : 00 / 00

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Summoning Type:
Summon Sage:
Pacts:

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• 30 Kunai

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▬▬┤|N i n j u t s u

Maruton:
• Henge no Jutsu [ Transformation Technique ]
• Kawarimi no Jutsu [ Substitution Technique ]
• Genso Bushin no Jutsu [ Illusion Clone Technique ]
• Suimen Hokou no Waza [ Act of Water Surface Walking ]
• Kinobori no Waza [ Act of Tree Climbing ]
• Kai [ Release ]

Raiton


Bloodline



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• {If none, remove section}

▬▬┤|T a i j u t s u

Mirror Image
• Stage One

Xing-Yi
• Stage One

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Atteharu was born without knowledge of his lineage of being a Hyuuga. He found out about this only very recently in fact. When he figured this out he became a ninja. Otherwise, he is pretty normal.
Everything seems in order. Make sure you apply for your hyuuga bloodline.  

Yo-ko

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PostPosted: Thu Feb 07, 2013 12:32 pm
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Full Name: Sakagawa Kenshin
Nickname: N/A

Age: 16
Birthdate: December 12th
Gender: Male

Height: 5 Feet 10 Inches [ 5'10" ] | 12.954 Meters
Weight: 175 Pounds [ 175lb ] | 79.378 Kilograms

Nindo: ---
Personality: Kenshin is a very quiet, kind, peaceful, and courteous person. He believes that extended a hand of friendship and attempting peaceful negotiations first will usually solve any issue that arises. The boy was raised with manners, always respecting his elders and refusing to lay a hand on a woman. This could be seen as a weakness though; it would cause him to hesitate in battle if he was fighting against a woman. Kenshin dislikes the thought of killing someone, and would attempt to refrain from striking a killing blow unless all other options are wasted. He is a solemn person though, liking to keep to himself and not talk. Despite that fact though he is a true friend to anyone who would call him a friend adding to his uncanny loyalty and desire to protect them with all his might.

Village: Sunagakure
Rank: Genin
First Class: Bukijutsu
Second Class: Taijutsu

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Chakra Pool: 175
Stamina Pool: 325
Chakra Element: Raiton
Chakra Color:
Steel Blue
Chakra Materialization: His chakra surrounds him in an aura, starting from the feet.

Strengths
• Omnidextrous
• Kenjutsu
Weaknesses
• Ninjutsu
• Genjutsu
Fears
• Death without Honor
• Loosing his Honor as a Samurai

Class Disciplines
• Samurai
• Monk
Reductions
• Learns Bukijutsu techniques one [1] post faster
• Learns Pi Qua Quan [ Sungakure no Taijutsu ], Xing-Yi, and Xinyi Liuhe Quan two [ 2 ] posts faster.
• Complex Techniques cost ten [ 10 ] less chakra and stamina to use.
Personal Attributes
• "Zen Meditation": After training and meditating in the way of Zen, the user uses up five [ 5 ] less stamina and chakra when using Jutsu.
• "Path of the Sword Saint": The user gains an extra Bukijutsu at Chuunin, and another one at Jounin.
• "Way of the Samurai": He learns Bukijutsu one [ 1 ] post quicker.

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Ryo: 両 0
AC: 0

Missions Complete:
D Rank :: 0
C Rank :: 0
B Rank :: 0
A Rank :: 0
S Rank :: 0

Limitations:
[ Learned / Total ]
• Ninjutsu : : 00 / 02
• Genjutsu : : 00 / 00
• Taijutsu Styles: : 00 / 02
• Bukijutsu Styles: : 00 / 02

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Weapon Type: Katana - [ Image ]
Weapon Range: 65 Centimeters
Weapon Weight: 1.2 Kilograms
Weapon Location: Left Hip

Summoning Type: {Ex. Dogs, Bears, Slugs, etc.} {If none, remove summon section}
Summon Sage: {Yes or No}
Pacts: {Ex. Dogs: Pakkun, etc. Sages do not need to list pacts}

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▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|т є c н η ι q υ є ѕ|├▬
▬▬┤|N i n j u t s u

Maruton:
• Bushi Ken no Jutsu [ Samurai Sabre Technique ] - [ B Rank ]
• Shunshin no Jutsu [ Body Flicker Technique ] - [ D Rank ]
• Kai [ Release ] - [ X Rank ]
• Kawarimi no Jutsu [ Substitution Technique ] - [ E Rank ]
• Saibai no Jutsu [ Cultivation Technique ] - [ 10*x Stamina to 10*x Chakra ]


▬▬┤|T a i j u t s u

{Style name here}
• {Stage progression / techniques learned}

▬▬┤|B u k i j u t s u

{Style name here}
• {Stage progression / techniques learned}

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Kenshin was born to the Sakagawa Clan from the Land of Iron. His father, Sakagawa Musashi, was a prominent leader and made trips to the Sunagakure very often because of the ties he had to a Shinobi there. This Shinobi in question, was Kenshin's mother. She gave Kenshin to his father on his third birthday because she understood the importance of him being trained in the Way of the Samurai, but she requested that he was to be sent back to Sunagakure to be trained in the Art of the Shinobi when he was old enough to be considered a Samurai.

During one of the times that he made a trip to Sunagakure Musashi stopped by the blacksmith shop in Sunagakure. The man gave him a Daisho pair that were better than any other swords he had ever wielding, or seen. For this feat Musashi dubbed the man Masamune, a fitting title for the blacksmith. The man's real name was Satetsu Sanshi, the current Sannin of Sunagakure. This fact was unknown to Musashi, but he respected the man greatly.

Kenshin finished his Samurai training three years ago at the age of thirteen. For two years he was sent to a Buddhist Temple to study under the Monks and become a Monk himself. During his time there he practiced Zen and the fact of clearing his mind this added to his Samurai training to further increase his resistance to Genjutsu. For one year he was at the Buddhist Temple until he was sent to Sunagakure to receive his Shinobi training like his mother requested. He graduated the Academy in two years. Kenshin does not claim his Shinobi heritage, but rather his Samurai one.




Yo-Ko

1. Fixed
 
PostPosted: Thu Feb 07, 2013 3:10 pm
Nero Inferni
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Full Name: Sakagawa Kenshin
Nickname: N/A

Age: 16
Birthdate: December 12th
Gender: Male

Height: 5 Feet 10 Inches [ 5'10" ] | 12.954 Meters
Weight: 175 Pounds [ 175lb ] | 79.378 Kilograms

Nindo: ---
Personality: Kenshin is a very quiet, kind, peaceful, and courteous person. He believes that extended a hand of friendship and attempting peaceful negotiations first will usually solve any issue that arises. The boy was raised with manners, always respecting his elders and refusing to lay a hand on a woman. This could be seen as a weakness though; it would cause him to hesitate in battle if he was fighting against a woman. Kenshin dislikes the thought of killing someone, and would attempt to refrain from striking a killing blow unless all other options are wasted. He is a solemn person though, liking to keep to himself and not talk. Despite that fact though he is a true friend to anyone who would call him a friend adding to his uncanny loyalty and desire to protect them with all his might.

Village: Sunagakure
Rank: Genin
First Class: Bukijutsu
Second Class: Taijutsu

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Chakra Pool: 175
Stamina Pool: 325
Chakra Element: Raiton
Chakra Color:
Steel Blue
Chakra Materialization: His chakra surrounds him in an aura, starting from the feet.

Strengths
• Omnidextrous
• Kenjutsu
Weaknesses
• Ninjutsu
• Genjutsu
Fears
• Death without Honor
• Loosing his Honor as a Samurai

Class Disciplines
• Samurai
• Monk
Reductions
• Learns Bukijutsu techniques one [1] post faster
• Learns Pi Qua Quan [ Sungakure no Taijutsu ], Xing-Yi, and Xinyi Liuhe Quan two [ 2 ] posts faster.
• Complex Techniques cost ten [ 10 ] less chakra and stamina to use.
Personal Attributes
• "Zen Meditation": After training and meditating in the way of Zen, the user uses up ten [ 10 ] less stamina and chakra when using Jutsu. [ Cannot be used with Complex Techniques ]
• "Path of the Sword Saint": The user gains an extra Bukijutsu at Chuunin, and another one at Jounin.
• "Way of the Samurai": He learns Bukijutsu one [ 1 ] post quicker.

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Ryo: 両 0
AC: 0

Missions Complete:
D Rank :: 0
C Rank :: 0
B Rank :: 0
A Rank :: 0
S Rank :: 0

Limitations:
[ Learned / Total ]
• Ninjutsu : : 00 / 02
• Genjutsu : : 00 / 00
• Taijutsu Styles: : 00 / 02
• Bukijutsu Styles: : 00 / 02

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Weapon Type: Katana - [ Image ]
Weapon Range: 65 Centimeters
Weapon Weight: 1.2 Kilograms
Weapon Location: Left Hip

Summoning Type: {Ex. Dogs, Bears, Slugs, etc.} {If none, remove summon section}
Summon Sage: {Yes or No}
Pacts: {Ex. Dogs: Pakkun, etc. Sages do not need to list pacts}

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▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|т є c н η ι q υ є ѕ|├▬
▬▬┤|N i n j u t s u

Maruton:
• Bushi Ken no Jutsu [ Samurai Sabre Technique ] - [ B Rank ]
• Shunshin no Jutsu [ Body Flicker Technique ] - [ D Rank ]
• Kai [ Release ] - [ X Rank ]
• Kawarimi no Jutsu [ Substitution Technique ] - [ E Rank ]
• Saibai no Jutsu [ Cultivation Technique ] - [ 10*x Stamina to 10*x Chakra ]


▬▬┤|T a i j u t s u

{Style name here}
• {Stage progression / techniques learned}

▬▬┤|B u k i j u t s u

{Style name here}
• {Stage progression / techniques learned}

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Kenshin was born to the Sakagawa Clan from the Land of Iron. His father, Sakagawa Musashi, was a prominent leader and made trips to the Sunagakure very often because of the ties he had to a Shinobi there. This Shinobi in question, was Kenshin's mother. She gave Kenshin to his father on his third birthday because she understood the importance of him being trained in the Way of the Samurai, but she requested that he was to be sent back to Sunagakure to be trained in the Art of the Shinobi when he was old enough to be considered a Samurai.

During one of the times that he made a trip to Sunagakure Musashi stopped by the blacksmith shop in Sunagakure. The man gave him a Daisho pair that were better than any other swords he had ever wielding, or seen. For this feat Musashi dubbed the man Masamune, a fitting title for the blacksmith. The man's real name was Satetsu Sanshi, the current Sannin of Sunagakure. This fact was unknown to Musashi, but he respected the man greatly.

Kenshin finished his Samurai training three years ago at the age of thirteen. For two years he was sent to a Buddhist Temple to study under the Monks and become a Monk himself. During his time there he practiced Zen and the fact of clearing his mind this added to his Samurai training to further increase his resistance to Genjutsu. For one year he was at the Buddhist Temple until he was sent to Sunagakure to receive his Shinobi training like his mother requested. He graduated the Academy in two years. Kenshin does not claim his Shinobi heritage, but rather his Samurai one.




Lanfaer

1. There are no Main Class or Sub-Classes anymore with this Free Class System last I checked, you just pick two classes.
2. As I heard from Azeiel, I can have an extra Personal Attribute and 2 free Customs since I chose not to take a Bloodline.

Yo-Ko

1. See, it's not just for Complex Techniques, it is for ANY technique that requires Chakra and/or Stamina. I didn't remove the debuff but made it clear that it cannot be used with Complex Techniques
As much as i wish i could allow that, i simply cannot. Please pick between the three choices i labled before.

-10 chakra
-10 stamina
-5 both

thanks  

Yo-ko

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Yo-ko

Hallowed Prophet

PostPosted: Thu Feb 07, 2013 7:29 pm
Nero Inferni
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Full Name: Sakagawa Kenshin
Nickname: N/A

Age: 16
Birthdate: December 12th
Gender: Male

Height: 5 Feet 10 Inches [ 5'10" ] | 12.954 Meters
Weight: 175 Pounds [ 175lb ] | 79.378 Kilograms

Nindo: ---
Personality: Kenshin is a very quiet, kind, peaceful, and courteous person. He believes that extended a hand of friendship and attempting peaceful negotiations first will usually solve any issue that arises. The boy was raised with manners, always respecting his elders and refusing to lay a hand on a woman. This could be seen as a weakness though; it would cause him to hesitate in battle if he was fighting against a woman. Kenshin dislikes the thought of killing someone, and would attempt to refrain from striking a killing blow unless all other options are wasted. He is a solemn person though, liking to keep to himself and not talk. Despite that fact though he is a true friend to anyone who would call him a friend adding to his uncanny loyalty and desire to protect them with all his might.

Village: Sunagakure
Rank: Genin
First Class: Bukijutsu
Second Class: Taijutsu

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Chakra Pool: 175
Stamina Pool: 325
Chakra Element: Raiton
Chakra Color:
Steel Blue
Chakra Materialization: His chakra surrounds him in an aura, starting from the feet.

Strengths
• Omnidextrous
• Kenjutsu
Weaknesses
• Ninjutsu
• Genjutsu
Fears
• Death without Honor
• Loosing his Honor as a Samurai

Class Disciplines
• Samurai
• Monk
Reductions
• Learns Bukijutsu techniques one [1] post faster
• Learns Pi Qua Quan [ Sungakure no Taijutsu ], Xing-Yi, and Xinyi Liuhe Quan two [ 2 ] posts faster.
• Complex Techniques cost ten [ 10 ] less chakra and stamina to use.
Personal Attributes
• "Zen Meditation": After training and meditating in the way of Zen, the user uses up five [ 5 ] less stamina and chakra when using Jutsu.
• "Path of the Sword Saint": The user gains an extra Bukijutsu at Chuunin, and another one at Jounin.
• "Way of the Samurai": He learns Bukijutsu one [ 1 ] post quicker.

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Ryo: 両 0
AC: 0

Missions Complete:
D Rank :: 0
C Rank :: 0
B Rank :: 0
A Rank :: 0
S Rank :: 0

Limitations:
[ Learned / Total ]
• Ninjutsu : : 00 / 02
• Genjutsu : : 00 / 00
• Taijutsu Styles: : 00 / 02
• Bukijutsu Styles: : 00 / 02

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Weapon Type: Katana - [ Image ]
Weapon Range: 65 Centimeters
Weapon Weight: 1.2 Kilograms
Weapon Location: Left Hip

Summoning Type: {Ex. Dogs, Bears, Slugs, etc.} {If none, remove summon section}
Summon Sage: {Yes or No}
Pacts: {Ex. Dogs: Pakkun, etc. Sages do not need to list pacts}

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▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|т є c н η ι q υ є ѕ|├▬
▬▬┤|N i n j u t s u

Maruton:
• Bushi Ken no Jutsu [ Samurai Sabre Technique ] - [ B Rank ]
• Shunshin no Jutsu [ Body Flicker Technique ] - [ D Rank ]
• Kai [ Release ] - [ X Rank ]
• Kawarimi no Jutsu [ Substitution Technique ] - [ E Rank ]
• Saibai no Jutsu [ Cultivation Technique ] - [ 10*x Stamina to 10*x Chakra ]


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• {Stage progression / techniques learned}

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• {Stage progression / techniques learned}

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Kenshin was born to the Sakagawa Clan from the Land of Iron. His father, Sakagawa Musashi, was a prominent leader and made trips to the Sunagakure very often because of the ties he had to a Shinobi there. This Shinobi in question, was Kenshin's mother. She gave Kenshin to his father on his third birthday because she understood the importance of him being trained in the Way of the Samurai, but she requested that he was to be sent back to Sunagakure to be trained in the Art of the Shinobi when he was old enough to be considered a Samurai.

During one of the times that he made a trip to Sunagakure Musashi stopped by the blacksmith shop in Sunagakure. The man gave him a Daisho pair that were better than any other swords he had ever wielding, or seen. For this feat Musashi dubbed the man Masamune, a fitting title for the blacksmith. The man's real name was Satetsu Sanshi, the current Sannin of Sunagakure. This fact was unknown to Musashi, but he respected the man greatly.

Kenshin finished his Samurai training three years ago at the age of thirteen. For two years he was sent to a Buddhist Temple to study under the Monks and become a Monk himself. During his time there he practiced Zen and the fact of clearing his mind this added to his Samurai training to further increase his resistance to Genjutsu. For one year he was at the Buddhist Temple until he was sent to Sunagakure to receive his Shinobi training like his mother requested. He graduated the Academy in two years. Kenshin does not claim his Shinobi heritage, but rather his Samurai one.




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PostPosted: Tue Feb 12, 2013 6:07 pm
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Full Name: Kurai Karasu.
Nickname: Crow

Age: 14
Birthdate: augusta 15th
Gender: Male

Height: 5'7
Weight: 130

Nindo: "Life's to short to be serious"
Personality: Rarely serious. Kinda dull.

Village: Suna
Rank: Genin
First Class: Ninjutsu
Second Class: Bllodline

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Bloodline: Bakuton • Explosive Release - Clay method

Chakra Pool: 415
Stamina Pool: 155
Chakra Element: Earth, Fire
Chakra Color: Crimson
Chakra Materialization: Swirly Aura

Strengths:
• Enhanced physical strength.
• Extreme Accuracy.
Weaknesses:
• weak against suiton
• Week against Raiton.
Fears:
• drowning.
• claustrophobic

Class Disciplines :
• Thoroughbred: Your maximum chakra pool and maximum stamina pool are both increased by {10} points, and you receive an additional {05} points to each pool whenever you rank up. Additionally, when you perform bloodline techniques above Rank D, you are refunded {05} chakra or {05} stamina, depending on which energy was used. ( If chakra was used, you recover chakra; if stamina was used, you recover stamina; if both were used, you recover both. )
• Elemental Dual Wielder: Your maximum chakra pool is increased by {10} points. The ninjutsu limit provided by this class is split amongst both of your chosen elements. ( At genin rank, rather than having a total of [ 06 ] ninjutsu slots for Katon or Suiton techniques, this class provides you with [ 06 ] slots for both Katon and Suiton techniques. Any ninjutsu slots received from other sources are filled at your discretion. )
Reductions:
• Learn bloodline techniques one (2) post faster.
• Learn ninjutsu (1) post faster.
Personal Attributes:
• Learn Bloodline techniques (1) post faster.
• Learn ninjutsu (1) post faster
•Extramly acurate.
•Enhanced vision. (Able to see clearly for up to 18 miles {when on flat ground and not obstructed} and 60 miles from up high. {Either atop a high place or flying on a clay creature.} Facts proven from google with a little boost due to enhanced vision)


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Ryo:0
AC:0
Missions Complete:
D Rank :: 0
C Rank :: 0
B Rank :: 0
A Rank :: 0
S Rank :: 0

Limitations: {How many of each technique you can learn. Refer to class info}
• Ninjutsu : : 00 / 10 (For each Elemental jutsu)
• Genjutsu : : 00 / 03
• Taijutsu Styles: : 00 / 01
• Bukijutsu Styles: : 00 / 01
• Bloodline Jutsu: : 00/13

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Weapon Type:
Weapon Range:
Weapon Weight:
Weapon Location:


Summoning Type:
Summon Sage:
Pacts:

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▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|т є c н η ι q υ є ѕ|├▬
▬▬┤|N i n j u t s u

Maruton:
• Henge no Jutsu [ Transformation Technique ]
• Kawarimi no Jutsu [ Substitution Technique ]
• Genso Bushin no Jutsu [ Illusion Clone Technique ]
• Suimen Hokou no Waza [ Act of Water Surface Walking ]
• Kinobori no Waza [ Act of Tree Climbing ]
• Kai [ Release ]

{Your first element's name}
• Doton

{Your second element's name}
• Katon

{Other jutsu type's name} Bloodline
• Bakuton • Explosive Release - Clay style

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• {If none, remove section}

▬▬┤|T a i j u t s u

{Style name here}
• {Stage progression / techniques learned}

▬▬┤|B u k i j u t s u

{Style name here}
• {Stage progression / techniques learned}

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Kurai was a lonely child, growing up on the streets with no family to take him in. He didn't have any friends to play with so he just trained his skills as a ninja. He was able to join the ninja academy and is now ready to become a genin.
 

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PostPosted: Tue Feb 12, 2013 6:23 pm
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Approved.
 
PostPosted: Sun Feb 17, 2013 10:05 pm
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Full Name: Takumi Satetsu
Nickname: Takumi of the Golden Sand

Age: 17
Birthdate: May 30
Gender: Male

Height: 5' 11"
Weight: 155lbs

Nindo: "Witness the power of Gold, Vanish into the Void forever"
Personality: Takumi is a pretty laid back person once you get to know him though that is very rare when it happens and if it actually does at all. He mostly spends his time alone in solitude training or some other things that are unknown to most people. He likes his time alone and really doesn't like it when other bother him for stupid reasons. If you come at him with reason's that are unneeded then you will never figure him out.

Village: Sunagakure
Rank: Genin
First Class: Puppeteer *Architect*
Second Class: Sensor *Resolution*

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Bloodline: Iron Sand

Chakra Pool: 450
Stamina Pool: 50
Chakra Element: Raiton, Doton
Chakra Color: Silver outlined in Gold
Chakra Materialization: Forms a weird aura around him that looks like a snake.

Strengths:
• Long Range Ninjutsu
• Collaboration attacks
Weaknesses:
• Close combat
• Weaker Body to Physical attacks
Fears:
• Losing those close to him
• Dying without a friend

Class Disciplines :
• Architect: The user has a fantastic creative mind, able to make more custom puppets (+2) as well as construct them and prepare them easier. For each rank the user increases, they gain a [-1] bonus to preparation time. . Additionally, the user is so good at creating and planning, that human puppets only cost 1 custom puppet slot.
• Resolution: The user is more determined to get fine details from his sensory techniques, but in order to get this type of clarity the user's range of the technique is reduced by half. The user is able to discover type of technique that is about to be active(fuuin, genjutsu, ninjutsu, custom jutsu, complex tai and buki), even specifics such as Bloodline type and rank. Additionally, the user can gain similar information about any chakra source in their sensory technique's range, including what bloodline the person possesses, and how large their chakra pool is.
Reductions:
• Learn Doton, Raiton ninjutsu [ 1 ] post faster

Personal Attributes:
• True Puppeteer: Takumi's Charka threads are invisible to most others except for senor ninja.
• Master Puppeteer: Takumi is a natural at using puppets and due to this he is able to create 2 more custom puppets than a normal puppet user would be able to make.

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Ryo: 両 0
AC: 0

Missions Complete:
D Rank :: 0
C Rank :: 0
B Rank :: 0
A Rank :: 0
S Rank :: 0

Limitations:
• Kugutsu : : 00 / 07
• Ninjutsu : : 00 / 06
• Genjutsu : : 00 / 06
• Taijutsu Styles: : 00 / 00
• Bukijutsu Styles: : 00 / 00

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Weapon Type: N/a
Weapon Range: N/a
Weapon Weight: N/a
Weapon Location: N/a

Summoning Type: N/a
Summon Sage: N/a
Pacts: N/a

▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|ι η ν є η т σ r у|├▬
• Kunai x15
• Shuriken x15

▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|т є c н η ι q υ є ѕ|├▬
▬▬┤|N i n j u t s u

Maruton:
• Henge no Jutsu [ Transformation Technique ]
• Kawarimi no Jutsu [ Substitution Technique ]
• Genso Bushin no Jutsu [ Illusion Clone Technique ]
• Suimen Hokou no Waza [ Act of Water Surface Walking ]
• Kinobori no Waza [ Act of Tree Climbing ]
• Kai [ Release ]

Doton


Raiton


Jiton


▬▬┤|G e n j u t s u

• {If none, remove section}

▬▬┤|T a i j u t s u

{Style name here}
• {Stage progression / techniques learned}

▬▬┤|B u k i j u t s u

{Style name here}
• {Stage progression / techniques learned}

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Takumi's history has been destroyed over the years. All that is known about him is that he is the cousin of Sanshi Satetsu.
 

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PostPosted: Tue Feb 19, 2013 8:44 am
Lucifer Lord of Death


[Attributes]
Master Puppeteer :: I cannot approve of that. That would mean that at Chunin rank you are able to utilize S ranked puppets. So this particular attribute is denied.

[Iron Sand]
Keep in mind this only works for Iron. If I remember your clan request correctly, you posted as if you were utilizing Gold to kill people. As I was just corrected on by my girlfriend, who knows this kind of stuff, Gold is not a magnetic element. Thus, your character can only utilize Iron, Cobalt, and Nickel, as well as Carbon Steel, as sand. So please keep in mind these are the only elements you can magnetize, unless you use a jutsu that gives something else magnetism.
 
PostPosted: Tue Feb 19, 2013 11:34 am
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I edited Master Puppeteer and changed what it said.  

Lucifer Lord of Death


Yo-ko

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PostPosted: Tue Feb 19, 2013 9:25 pm
Lucifer Lord of Death
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Full Name: Takumi Satetsu
Nickname: Takumi of the Golden Sand

Age: 17
Birthdate: May 30
Gender: Male

Height: 5' 11"
Weight: 155lbs

Nindo: "Witness the power of Gold, Vanish into the Void forever"
Personality: Takumi is a pretty laid back person once you get to know him though that is very rare when it happens and if it actually does at all. He mostly spends his time alone in solitude training or some other things that are unknown to most people. He likes his time alone and really doesn't like it when other bother him for stupid reasons. If you come at him with reason's that are unneeded then you will never figure him out.

Village: Sunagakure
Rank: Genin
First Class: Puppeteer *Architect*
Second Class: Sensor *Resolution*

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Bloodline: Iron Sand

Chakra Pool: 450
Stamina Pool: 50
Chakra Element: Raiton, Doton
Chakra Color: Silver outlined in Gold
Chakra Materialization: Forms a weird aura around him that looks like a snake.

Strengths:
• Long Range Ninjutsu
• Collaboration attacks
Weaknesses:
• Close combat
• Weaker Body to Physical attacks
Fears:
• Losing those close to him
• Dying without a friend

Class Disciplines :
• Architect: The user has a fantastic creative mind, able to make more custom puppets (+2) as well as construct them and prepare them easier. For each rank the user increases, they gain a [-1] bonus to preparation time. . Additionally, the user is so good at creating and planning, that human puppets only cost 1 custom puppet slot.
• Resolution: The user is more determined to get fine details from his sensory techniques, but in order to get this type of clarity the user's range of the technique is reduced by half. The user is able to discover type of technique that is about to be active(fuuin, genjutsu, ninjutsu, custom jutsu, complex tai and buki), even specifics such as Bloodline type and rank. Additionally, the user can gain similar information about any chakra source in their sensory technique's range, including what bloodline the person possesses, and how large their chakra pool is.
Reductions:
• Learn Doton, Raiton ninjutsu [ 1 ] post faster

Personal Attributes:
• True Puppeteer: Takumi's Charka threads are invisible to most others except for senor ninja.
• Master Puppeteer: Takumi is a natural at using puppets and due to this he is able to create 2 more custom puppets than a normal puppet user would be able to make.

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Ryo: 両 0
AC: 0

Missions Complete:
D Rank :: 0
C Rank :: 0
B Rank :: 0
A Rank :: 0
S Rank :: 0

Limitations:
• Kugutsu : : 00 / 07
• Ninjutsu : : 00 / 06
• Genjutsu : : 00 / 06
• Taijutsu Styles: : 00 / 00
• Bukijutsu Styles: : 00 / 00

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Weapon Type: N/a
Weapon Range: N/a
Weapon Weight: N/a
Weapon Location: N/a

Summoning Type: N/a
Summon Sage: N/a
Pacts: N/a

▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|ι η ν є η т σ r у|├▬
• Kunai x15
• Shuriken x15

▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|т є c н η ι q υ є ѕ|├▬
▬▬┤|N i n j u t s u

Maruton:
• Henge no Jutsu [ Transformation Technique ]
• Kawarimi no Jutsu [ Substitution Technique ]
• Genso Bushin no Jutsu [ Illusion Clone Technique ]
• Suimen Hokou no Waza [ Act of Water Surface Walking ]
• Kinobori no Waza [ Act of Tree Climbing ]
• Kai [ Release ]

Doton


Raiton


Jiton


▬▬┤|G e n j u t s u

• {If none, remove section}

▬▬┤|T a i j u t s u

{Style name here}
• {Stage progression / techniques learned}

▬▬┤|B u k i j u t s u

{Style name here}
• {Stage progression / techniques learned}

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Takumi's history has been destroyed over the years. All that is known about him is that he is the cousin of Sanshi Satetsu.
Approved until/if another mod dissaproves  
PostPosted: Thu Feb 21, 2013 1:53 am
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Full Name: Rayzu Senju
Nickname: none atm

Age: 16
Birthdate: 10/4
Gender: male

Height: 5'6"
Weight: 125 lb

Nindo: "{ Torrmow}"
Personality: Kind open friendly blunt

Village: Leaf
Rank: genin
First Class: Bloodline - Blood Bender
Second Class: Sensor - Resolution

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Bloodline: Mokuton

Chakra Pool: 355 (+80)
Stamina Pool: 145
Chakra Element: Doton - Suiton - Mokuton
Chakra Color: Green
Chakra Materialization: chakra forms as branches around his body.

Strengths:
• Green Grow - With Rayzu's pride in his Mokuton his Mokuton jutsu are two times as big they don't gain anymore power just grow larger.
• Wanna be sage - With Rayzu's Mokuton bloodline and being a Sensor he may flow his sensor ability into his Mokuton element.
Weaknesses:
• Fire, Fire, Fire - Fire is a big weakness for Mokuton users and with this it is one of his biggest weakness
• Strong mind, weak body - Rayzu chakra pool is large but doesn't have too much Stamina. so when it comes to combat involving no chakra he is at an disadvantage.
Fears:
• Death
• Losing friends

Class Disciplines :
•Blood Bender: User receives and additional 3 custom bloodline techniques. To clarify, these are custom techniques that must involve and utilize the characters bloodline.
•Resolution: The user is more determined to get fine details from his sensory techniques, but in order to get this type of clarity the user's range of the technique is reduced by half. The user is able to discover type of technique that is about to be active(fuuin, genjutsu, ninjutsu, custom jutsu, complex tai and buki), even specifics such as Bloodline type and rank. Additionally, the user can gain similar information about any chakra source in their sensory technique's range, including what bloodline the person possesses, and how large their chakra pool is.

Reductions:
• Learn bloodline techniques one (1) post faster.
Personal Attributes:
• Senju Saint - Rayzu main power is his Mokuton element and with this he must use it wisely. This skill allows his jutsu to cost one rank lower to use and making his Mokuton lose it's natural weakness note it can still be burn just won't be completely destroyed by fire.
•Senju sealer - Rayzu is a Seal master he was able to learn Fuuinjutsu since he was a small child and with this he can use sealing just though his Mokuton element. This also means he may learn Fuuinjutsu as a Genin as long as he follows the ranking jutsu system.

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Ryo: 両0
AC: 0

Missions Complete:
D Rank :: 0

C Rank :: 0
B Rank :: 0
A Rank :: 0
S Rank :: 0

Limitations:
• Ninjutsu : : 00 / 08
• Genjutsu : : 00 / 06
• Taijutsu Styles: : 00 / 01
• Bukijutsu Styles: : 00 / 01

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Weapon Type: Wooden Sword
Weapon Range: 4 ft
Weapon Weight: 2 lb
Weapon Location: back


Summoning Type: N/A
Summon Sage: N/A
Pacts:N/A

▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|ι η ν є η т σ r у|├▬
• Shuriken x15
• Kunai x10
• Senbon x5
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|т є c н η ι q υ є ѕ|├▬
▬▬┤|N i n j u t s u

Maruton:
• Henge no Jutsu [ Transformation Technique ]
• Kawarimi no Jutsu [ Substitution Technique ]
• Genso Bushin no Jutsu [ Illusion Clone Technique ]
• Suimen Hokou no Waza [ Act of Water Surface Walking ]
• Kinobori no Waza [ Act of Tree Climbing ]
• Kai [ Release ]

Doton


Suiton


Mokuton



▬▬┤|G e n j u t s u





▬▬┤|F u u i n j u t s u





▬▬┤|T a i j u t s u

Hsing-I Pakua
-Stage 0


▬▬┤|B u k i j u t s u

Tetsu no Ryu
• Stage 0

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{I'll do it tomorrow lol}

 

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PostPosted: Thu Feb 21, 2013 10:37 am
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Full Name: Rayzu Senju
Nickname: none atm

Age: 16
Birthdate: 10/4
Gender: male

Height: 5'6"
Weight: 125 lb

Nindo: "{ Torrmow}"
Personality: Kind open friendly blunt

Village: Leaf
Rank: genin
First Class: Bloodline - Blood Bender
Second Class: Sensor - Resolution

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Bloodline: Mokuton

Chakra Pool: 355 (+80)
Stamina Pool: 145
Chakra Element: Doton - Suiton - Mokuton
Chakra Color: Green
Chakra Materialization: chakra forms as branches around his body.

Strengths:
• Green Grow - With Rayzu's pride in his Mokuton his Mokuton jutsu are two times as big they don't gain anymore power just grow larger.
• Wanna be sage - With Rayzu's Mokuton bloodline and being a Sensor he may flow his sensor ability into his Mokuton element.
Weaknesses:
• Fire, Fire, Fire - Fire is a big weakness for Mokuton users and with this it is one of his biggest weakness
• Strong mind, weak body - Rayzu chakra pool is large but doesn't have too much Stamina. so when it comes to combat involving no chakra he is at an disadvantage.
Fears:
• Death
• Losing friends

Class Disciplines :
•Blood Bender: User receives and additional 3 custom bloodline techniques. To clarify, these are custom techniques that must involve and utilize the characters bloodline.
•Resolution: The user is more determined to get fine details from his sensory techniques, but in order to get this type of clarity the user's range of the technique is reduced by half. The user is able to discover type of technique that is about to be active(fuuin, genjutsu, ninjutsu, custom jutsu, complex tai and buki), even specifics such as Bloodline type and rank. Additionally, the user can gain similar information about any chakra source in their sensory technique's range, including what bloodline the person possesses, and how large their chakra pool is.

Reductions:
• Learn bloodline techniques one (1) post faster.
Personal Attributes:
• Senju Saint - Rayzu main power is his Mokuton element and with this he must use it wisely. This skill allows his jutsu to cost one rank lower to use and making his Mokuton lose it's natural weakness note it can still be burn just won't be completely destroyed by fire.
•Senju sealer - Rayzu is a Seal master he was able to learn Fuuinjutsu since he was a small child and with this he can use sealing just though his Mokuton element. This also means he may learn Fuuinjutsu as a Genin as long as he follows the ranking jutsu system.

▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|c α r є є r • ∂ α т α|├▬
Ryo: 両0
AC: 0

Missions Complete:
D Rank :: 0

C Rank :: 0
B Rank :: 0
A Rank :: 0
S Rank :: 0

Limitations:
• Ninjutsu : : 00 / 08
• Genjutsu : : 00 / 06
• Taijutsu Styles: : 00 / 01
• Bukijutsu Styles: : 00 / 01

▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|ω є α ρ σ η • ∂ α т α|├▬
Weapon Type: Wooden Sword
Weapon Range: 4 ft
Weapon Weight: 2 lb
Weapon Location: back


Summoning Type: N/A
Summon Sage: N/A
Pacts:N/A

▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|ι η ν є η т σ r у|├▬
• Shuriken x15
• Kunai x10
• Senbon x5
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|т є c н η ι q υ є ѕ|├▬
▬▬┤|N i n j u t s u

Maruton:
• Henge no Jutsu [ Transformation Technique ]
• Kawarimi no Jutsu [ Substitution Technique ]
• Genso Bushin no Jutsu [ Illusion Clone Technique ]
• Suimen Hokou no Waza [ Act of Water Surface Walking ]
• Kinobori no Waza [ Act of Tree Climbing ]
• Kai [ Release ]

Doton


Suiton


Mokuton



▬▬┤|G e n j u t s u





▬▬┤|F u u i n j u t s u





▬▬┤|T a i j u t s u

Hsing-I Pakua
-Stage 0


▬▬┤|B u k i j u t s u

Tetsu no Ryu
• Stage 0

▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|н ι ѕ т σ r у|├▬
{I'll do it tomorrow lol}

In general, your profile is in order. Their are a few things that need to be adjusted, and i showed them on your profile in this repost.

Strengths/weaknesses: You are basically trying to treat them as extra attributes, or custom technqiues when that is not what they are intended for. For strengths, stick to a general description such as "Mokuton" if you wish him to have a strength in the area. You weaness (that has been struck through) is just mearly describing the nature of your characters build (chakra and stamina) and not neccessarily a weakness of the character. If you still wish to keep that, then maybe state it "lacks long combat endurance" to show you are weak (hence weakness) in that area.

Personal atributes: Your personal attributes were both cast out. We do not do anything "by rank" as a personal attribute system, especially ones that involve reducing chakra cost. Additionally, taking away your fire weakness (which you labled as a weakness...) will also not work. In term, please edit. Maybe you can make it so that you mokuton grows twice as large? No power increase, but definitely a useful trait.

The second one i will have to argue on, specifically that Fuuin is supposed to be for jounin+ for a reason. Additionally, canon wise, one had to be a very stron ninjutsu person to really understand the grasp on how to utilize this. My ruling on this is that you may reduce it to chunin, but may still not learn any A rank seals and above until you make jounin.  
PostPosted: Thu Feb 21, 2013 3:31 pm
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Full Name: Ayame Noriko Hatake

Age: 19
Birthdate: January 31
Gender: Female

Height: 5'8
Weight: 140 lbs

Nindo: "Get up. Walk it off."
Personality: Ayame is loyal and a fast learner. She is also caring, dependable, and responsible. She hates getting things wrong and will try and try again until she gets it right even though she gets frustrated. She would rather read and be outside than stay inside no matter the weather (unless it's like tornadoes and such she ain't stupid).

Village: Sunagakore
Rank: Genin
First Class: Tamer
Second Class: Ninjutsu

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Bloodline: Hatake

Chakra Pool: 335
Stamina Pool: 150
Chakra Element: Lightning
Chakra Color: Ice Blue
Chakra Materialization: It appears as an aura

Strengths:
• Close Combat
• Lightning Style Ninjutsu
Weaknesses:
• Soft Spot for Animals
• Procrastinates
Fears:
• Losing Daichi
• Fear of enclosed spaces (Claustrophobia)

Class Disciplines :
• Eternal Partners
•Elemental Specialist
Personal Attributes:
• Into the Wild: Ayame has spent so much time with Daichi that she already has begun to adapt and bond with him on a greater level. Ayame's hands have adapted to form powerful claws, as well as house a great deal of grip strength designed to rip and tear the opponent.
• Her bond with Daichi has also given her night vision


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Ryo: 0
AC: 0

Missions Complete:
D Rank :: 0
C Rank :: 0
B Rank :: 0
A Rank :: 0
S Rank :: 0

Limitations:
• Ninjutsu : : 08 / 02
• Genjutsu : : 01 / 00
• Taijutsu Styles: : 00 / 01
• Bukijutsu Styles: : 00 / 00

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Weapon Type: Katana
Weapon Range: 33cm
Weapon Weight: 2.5lbs
Weapon Location: Sheath at her back


▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|ι η ν є η т σ r у|├▬
• 15 Kunai
• 15 Shuriken
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|т є c н η ι q υ є ѕ|├▬
▬▬┤|N i n j u t s u

Maruton:
• Henge no Jutsu [ Transformation Technique ]
• Kawarimi no Jutsu [ Substitution Technique ]
• Genso Bushin no Jutsu [ Illusion Clone Technique ]
• Suimen Hokou no Waza [ Act of Water Surface Walking ]
• Kinobori no Waza [ Act of Tree Climbing ]
• Kai [ Release ]

Raiton


Hatake




▬▬┤|T a i j u t s u

{Style name here}


▬▬┤|B u k i j u t s u

{Style name here}
• {Stage progression / techniques learned}


▬▬┤|D a i c h i
Description He is a white wolf with multiple scars

Personality Calm, patient. Hates cats to the point if he sees one he's gonna eat it unless there is an intervention on Ayame's part.

Maruton


Fuuton


Doton





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Ayame was born and raised in the sand and given Daichi as a pet at a the age of 5. She was at first a rash young girl until an incident with a bear caused Daichi to be critically injured. After going through almost losing her best friend she became a much more calm and patient person as is expected of a Hatake
 

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PostPosted: Thu Feb 21, 2013 3:41 pm
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▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|ρ є r ѕ σ η α ℓ • ∂ α т α|├▬
Full Name: Ayame Noriko Hatake

Age: 19
Birthdate: January 31
Gender: Female

Height: 5'8
Weight: 140 lbs

Nindo: "Get up. Walk it off."
Personality: Ayame is loyal and a fast learner. She is also caring, dependable, and responsible. She hates getting things wrong and will try and try again until she gets it right even though she gets frustrated. She would rather read and be outside than stay inside no matter the weather (unless it's like tornadoes and such she ain't stupid).

Village: Sunagakore
Rank: Genin
First Class: Tamer
Second Class: Ninjutsu

▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|c σ м в α т • ∂ α т α|├▬
Bloodline: Hatake

Chakra Pool: 335
Stamina Pool: 150
Chakra Element: Lightning
Chakra Color: Ice Blue
Chakra Materialization: It appears as an aura

Strengths:
• Close Combat
• Lightning Style Ninjutsu
Weaknesses:
• Soft Spot for Animals
Fears:
• Losing Daichi
• Fear of enclosed spaces (Claustrophobia)

Class Disciplines :
• Eternal Partners
•Elemental Specialist
Personal Attributes:
• Real Lightning!!! Ayame's affinity for lightning ninjutsu is so great that her techniques are actually faster, much like real life lightning.
• Into the Wild: Ayame has spent so much time with Daichi that she already has begun to adapt and bond with him on a greater level. Ayame's hands have adapted to form powerful claws, as well as house a great deal of grip strength designed to rip and tear the opponent.



▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|c α r є є r • ∂ α т α|├▬
Ryo: 0
AC: 0

Missions Complete:
D Rank :: 0
C Rank :: 0
B Rank :: 0
A Rank :: 0
S Rank :: 0

Limitations:
• Ninjutsu : : 08 / 02
• Genjutsu : : 01 / 00
• Taijutsu Styles: : 00 / 01
• Bukijutsu Styles: : 00 / 00

▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|ω є α ρ σ η • ∂ α т α|├▬
Weapon Type: Katana
Weapon Range: 33cm
Weapon Weight: 2.5lbs
Weapon Location: Sheath at her back


▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|ι η ν є η т σ r у|├▬
• 15 Kunai
• 15 Shuriken
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|т є c н η ι q υ є ѕ|├▬
▬▬┤|N i n j u t s u

Maruton:
• Henge no Jutsu [ Transformation Technique ]
• Kawarimi no Jutsu [ Substitution Technique ]
• Genso Bushin no Jutsu [ Illusion Clone Technique ]
• Suimen Hokou no Waza [ Act of Water Surface Walking ]
• Kinobori no Waza [ Act of Tree Climbing ]
• Kai [ Release ]

Raiton


Hatake




▬▬┤|T a i j u t s u

{Style name here}


▬▬┤|B u k i j u t s u

{Style name here}
• {Stage progression / techniques learned}


▬▬┤|D a i c h i
Description He is a white wolf with multiple scars

Personality Calm, patient. Hates cats to the point if he sees one he's gonna eat it unless there is an intervention on Ayame's part.

Maruton


Fuuton


Doton





▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|н ι ѕ т σ r у|├▬
Ayame was born and raised in the sand and given Daichi as a pet at a the age of 5. She was at first a rash young girl until an incident with a bear caused Daichi to be critically injured. After going through almost losing her best friend she became a much more calm and patient person as is expected of a Hatake
Everything is in order, except you must have a minimum of two (2) weaknesses. please add, then resubmit so i may do a full review  
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