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PostPosted: Wed Jan 23, 2013 10:26 am
Lanfaer

Fixed, I accidentally put my class disciplines in the personal attributes. Changes have been made. smile  
PostPosted: Wed Jan 23, 2013 11:59 am
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[Personal Attributes]
Your two are the same thing. I would list the description of the second onto the first, and make another.

You are a Sakkakugan user, primary Genjutsu. You could simply give yourself a -2 to learning Genjutsu, or two more slots. Just a suggestion.


 

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SomeWittyNameGotScrewed

PostPosted: Wed Jan 23, 2013 12:05 pm
Lanfaer

Fixed, combined the two into one and gave myself -2 posts to learning genjutsu.  
PostPosted: Wed Jan 23, 2013 1:30 pm
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PostPosted: Wed Jan 23, 2013 9:04 pm
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Silly lanny, i made this character about three months or so ago, i revised her for the new class and stamina stuff  
PostPosted: Thu Jan 24, 2013 12:41 am
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[Little Mintchan → Clan]
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Silly lanny, i made this character about three months or so ago, i revised her for the new class and stamina stuff


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[Little Mintchan]
This character is approved.


 

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PostPosted: Fri Feb 01, 2013 8:40 pm
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Full Name: Zain Caden Hakemoto
Nickname: Zain, "That drunk monk"

Age: 21
Birthdate: October 5th
Gender: male

Height: 6.0"
Weight: 165

Nindo: "Live life by the fullest, enjoy it with booze."
Personality: He is rather smart and serious at times but only if you can get him sober other wise he is a silly guy.

Village: Yukigakure Wandered his drunk self to konoha
Rank: Jounin (he is not a new character but one i am bringing back from his life as a monk in the mountains)
First Class: Bukijustu
Second Class: Bloodline

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Bloodline: Hakemoto Clan

Chakra Pool: 410
Stamina Pool: 325
TP: 20
Chakra Element: Suiton / Fuuton
Chakra Color: Autum brown
Chakra Materialization: Like wind and water

Strengths:
• Close Combat [ Bukijustu ]
• His States [ Hakemoto ]
Weaknesses:
• Opposite Elements [ Shocking mud ]
• His wife [ Fuji ]
Fears:
• His wife [ What man doesn't? ]
• Breaking his vow as both a husband and a monk [ Has two vows ]

Class Disciplines :
• Mystic Hero [ Bukijustu ]
• Blood Knight [ Hakemoto ]
Reductions:
• Bloodline - 4 posts faster
• Bukijustu - 6 posts faster
Personal Attributes:
• Light clothing [ Flexible / manueverable ]
• Two swords [ blocking is easier ]

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Ryo: 両3,000
AC: 4,900

Missions Complete:
D Rank :: 0
C Rank :: 1
B Rank :: 1
A Rank :: 1
S Rank :: 1

Limitations: {How many of each technique you can learn. Refer to class info}
• Ninjutsu : : 06 / 11
• Genjutsu : : 00 / 00
• Taijutsu Styles: : 00 / 00
• Bukijutsu Styles: : 02 / 04

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Weapon Type: Iron Cross Full Tang [ x ]
Weapon Range: 19 1/2" [ not counting arm length ]
Weapon Weight: 1.1 lb
Weapon Location: On both sides ( he has two because they are medium swords )
•440 full tang stainless steel blade
•Sharpened
•Black finish
•Cord wrapped handle
•Metal iron cross guard
•Nylon sheath with shoulder strap


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• Normal equipment [ shoulder bag ]
• Swords and bottle of sake

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▬▬┤|N i n j u t s u

Maruton: {Start with the following six only}
• Henge no Jutsu [ Transformation Technique ]
• Kawarimi no Jutsu [ Substitution Technique ]
• Genso Bushin no Jutsu [ Illusion Clone Technique ]
• Suimen Hokou no Waza [ Act of Water Surface Walking ]
• Kinobori no Waza [ Act of Tree Climbing ]
• Kai [ Release ]

Suiton "Time will flow as does the river."
• Mizu Bunshin no Jutsu [ Water Clone Technique [ x ]

Fuuton "Let the wind guide you toward you're goal."

[ A c a d e m y - S t u d e n t ] - - - Completed [ All fuuton ]
• Kaze Bushin [ Wind Clone ]

[ G e n i n ] - - - Completed
• Kamaitachi no Justu [ Slashing Wind Skill ]
• Suiyaku Kaze [ Propelling Winds ]

[ C h u n i n ] - - -
• Teikiatsu no Justu [ Low Air Pressure Technique ]
• Koukiatsu no Justu [ High Air Pressure Technique ]

Hakemoto States "A vow to aid those with my power."

• Zama no Chiyu [ State of Healing ] [ x ]

• Zama no Seishi [ State of Control ] [ x ]


▬▬┤|B u k i j u t s u


[ D e s c e n d i n g - G r e a t n e s s - S h i g u r e - S o e n ]

[ S t a g e - 1 ] - - - E ranked [ B e c o m e - M y - D i s c i p l e ]
• Shajiku No Ame [ Axle Of Rain ] [ x ]
• Sakamaku No Ame [ Rolling Rain ] [ x ]

[ S t a g e - 2 ] - - - D ranked [ Y o u ' r e - A - Q u i c k - L e a r n e r ]
• Yarazu No Ame [ Last Minute Rain ] [ x ]
• Gofuu Juu [ May Wind, October Rain ] [ x ]

[ S t a g e - 3 ] - - - C ranked [ Y o u ' r e - S h o w i n g - P r o m i s e ]
• Samidare [ Summer Rain ] [ x ]
• Shibuki Ame [ Splashing Rain ] [ x ]

[ S t a g e - 4 ] - - - E ranked(Complex) [ N o t i c e - Y o u r - P r o g r e s s ]
• Mujitsu Ame [ Innocent Rain ] [ x ]
• Ganshiki Ame [ Insight Rain ][ x ]

[ S t a g e - 5 ] - - - A ranked [ A r e - Y o u - R e a d y ? ]
• Pelting Rain -
• Torrential Dance [ x ]
• Flame Spin Rain [ x ]

[ S t a g e - 6 ] - - - S ranked [ Y o u - A r e - N o w - T h e - T e a c h e r ! ]
• Duplicate Rain [ x ]
• Seasonal Dance [ x ]
• Torrential Blessings [ 65+ chakra ] [ x ]



[ S h u n k a n - N o - H a g a n e ]

[ S t a g e - 1 ] - - - E ranked [ W e l c o m e ]
• Basic Chop
• Forward Step
• Backward Step
• Basic Stab
• Basic Block [ x ]

[ S t a g e - 2 ] - - - D ranked [ H o w - A r e - Y o u ? ]
• Pivote Block [ x ]
• Forward Grind [ x ]
• Deflection One [ x ]
• Disarming One [ x ]

[ S t a g e - 3 ] - - - C ranked [ L o n g - T i m e - N o - S e e ] [ x ]
• Calligraphy
• Extension
• Thread Walking
• Solid Footing


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Zain was born in the northern most alps, a place untouched by many but seen by lots. Both his parents were monks, his mother soon abandoned the monk way of life to go become a farmer while his father became a swordsmaster of the small village near the temple of monks. He taught Zain up until he was 10 the ways of swords, adopting two swords that use to be one whole sword. At the age of 11 he had a chose, choose to become a full fledge monk of the temple or become the best swordsmen in the small village. He spent most of his life to learn to be both but now he had to choose one. Instead he left, he kept the way of being a monk and never showed anger or loss of emotions. He was a happy man traveling to lands, training in swords but always keeping his ways. He finally traveled to a land of Snow, Yukigakure at the age 12. He settled down and became a ninja, graduating the academy fast and proving his loyalty and skill to become a chunin. Zain had adopted the name of a monk he knew well, Hakemoto. It's unknown how he became a Jounin before the day he was promoted he set off to find a new style of sword practice. Now he is 19 and has returned to Yuki to continue being their Jounin. After a year of returning to Kumo Zain celebrated his 20th birthday, still the same as a year before, he has not grown much except he looks more tired and his hair is still unmanagable. He still failed at growing a beard.

He was married to Fuji before she was killed by assassins who attacked Zain's home which was a sacred monk temple in the mountains, having his only home destroyed, he is wandering drunk and injured, saddened by his wife's death and that he was unable to protect her.
 
PostPosted: Sat Feb 02, 2013 7:33 pm
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PostPosted: Sun Feb 03, 2013 10:26 am
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Full Name: Sakagawa Kenshin
Nickname: N/A

Age: 16
Birthdate: December 12th
Gender: Male

Height: 5 Feet 10 Inches [ 5'10" ] | 12.954 Meters
Weight: 175 Pounds [ 175lb ] | 79.378 Kilograms

Nindo: ---
Personality: Kenshin is a very quiet, kind, peaceful, and courteous person. He believes that extended a hand of friendship and attempting peaceful negotiations first will usually solve any issue that arises. The boy was raised with manners, always respecting his elders and refusing to lay a hand on a woman. This could be seen as a weakness though; it would cause him to hesitate in battle if he was fighting against a woman. Kenshin dislikes the thought of killing someone, and would attempt to refrain from striking a killing blow unless all other options are wasted. He is a solemn person though, liking to keep to himself and not talk. Despite that fact though he is a true friend to anyone who would call him a friend adding to his uncanny loyalty and desire to protect them with all his might.

Village: Sunagakure
Rank: Genin
First Class: Bukijutsu
Second Class: Taijutsu

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Chakra Pool: 175
Stamina Pool: 325
Chakra Element: Raiton
Chakra Color:
Steel Blue
Chakra Materialization: His chakra surrounds him in an aura, starting from the feet.

Strengths
• Omnidextrous
• Kenjutsu
Weaknesses
• Ninjutsu
• Genjutsu
Fears
• Death without Honor
• Loosing his Honor as a Samurai

Class Disciplines
• Samurai
• Monk
Reductions
• Learns Bukijutsu techniques one [1] post faster
• Learns Pi Qua Quan [ Sungakure no Taijutsu ], Xing-Yi, and Xinyi Liuhe Quan two [ 2 ] posts faster.
• Complex Techniques cost ten [ 10 ] less chakra and stamina to use.
Personal Attributes
• "Zen Meditation: After training and meditating in the way of Zen, the user uses up ten [ 10 ] less stamina and chakra when using Jutsu."
• "Path of the Sword Saint: The user gains an extra Bukijutsu at Chuunin, and another one at Jounin."
• "Way of the Samurai: He learns Bukijutsu one [ 1 ] post quicker."

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Ryo: 両 0
AC: 0

Missions Complete:
D Rank :: 0
C Rank :: 0
B Rank :: 0
A Rank :: 0
S Rank :: 0

Limitations:
[ Learned / Total ]
• Ninjutsu : : 00 / 02
• Genjutsu : : 00 / 00
• Taijutsu Styles: : 00 / 02
• Bukijutsu Styles: : 00 / 02

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Weapon Type: Katana - [ Image ]
Weapon Range: 65 Centimeters
Weapon Weight: 1.2 Kilograms
Weapon Location: Left Hip

Summoning Type: {Ex. Dogs, Bears, Slugs, etc.} {If none, remove summon section}
Summon Sage: {Yes or No}
Pacts: {Ex. Dogs: Pakkun, etc. Sages do not need to list pacts}

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▬▬┤|N i n j u t s u

Maruton:
• Bushi Ken no Jutsu [ Samurai Sabre Technique ] - [ B Rank ]
• Shunshin no Jutsu [ Body Flicker Technique ] - [ D Rank ]
• Kai [ Release ] - [ X Rank ]
• Kawarimi no Jutsu [ Substitution Technique ] - [ E Rank ]
• Saibai no Jutsu [ Cultivation Technique ] - [ 10*x Stamina to 10*x Chakra ]


▬▬┤|T a i j u t s u

{Style name here}
• {Stage progression / techniques learned}

▬▬┤|B u k i j u t s u

{Style name here}
• {Stage progression / techniques learned}

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Kenshin was born to the Sakagawa Clan from the Land of Iron. His father, Sakagawa Musashi, was a prominent leader and made trips to the Sunagakure very often because of the ties he had to a Shinobi there. This Shinobi in question, was Kenshin's mother. She gave Kenshin to his father on his third birthday because she understood the importance of him being trained in the Way of the Samurai, but she requested that he was to be sent back to Sunagakure to be trained in the Art of the Shinobi when he was old enough to be considered a Samurai.

During one of the times that he made a trip to Sunagakure Musashi stopped by the blacksmith shop in Sunagakure. The man gave him a Daisho pair that were better than any other swords he had ever wielding, or seen. For this feat Musashi dubbed the man Masamune, a fitting title for the blacksmith. The man's real name was Satetsu Sanshi, the current Sannin of Sunagakure. This fact was unknown to Musashi, but he respected the man greatly.

Kenshin finished his Samurai training three years ago at the age of thirteen. For two years he was sent to a Buddhist Temple to study under the Monks and become a Monk himself. During his time there he practiced Zen and the fact of clearing his mind this added to his Samurai training to further increase his resistance to Genjutsu. For one year he was at the Buddhist Temple until he was sent to Sunagakure to receive his Shinobi training like his mother requested. He graduated the Academy in two years. Kenshin does not claim his Shinobi heritage, but rather his Samurai one.
 
PostPosted: Sun Feb 03, 2013 3:34 pm
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Full Name: Sakagawa Kenshin
Nickname: N/A

Age: 16
Birthdate: December 12th
Gender: Male

Height: 5 Feet 10 Inches [ 5'10" ] | 12.954 Meters
Weight: 175 Pounds [ 175lb ] | 79.378 Kilograms

Nindo: ---
Personality: Kenshin is a very quiet, kind, peaceful, and courteous person. He believes that extended a hand of friendship and attempting peaceful negotiations first will usually solve any issue that arises. The boy was raised with manners, always respecting his elders and refusing to lay a hand on a woman. This could be seen as a weakness though; it would cause him to hesitate in battle if he was fighting against a woman. Kenshin dislikes the thought of killing someone, and would attempt to refrain from striking a killing blow unless all other options are wasted. He is a solemn person though, liking to keep to himself and not talk. Despite that fact though he is a true friend to anyone who would call him a friend adding to his uncanny loyalty and desire to protect them with all his might.

Village: Sunagakure
Rank: Genin
First Class: Bukijutsu
Second Class: Taijutsu

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Chakra Pool: 175
Stamina Pool: 325
Chakra Element: Raiton
Chakra Color:
Steel Blue
Chakra Materialization: His chakra surrounds him in an aura, starting from the feet.

Strengths
• Omnidextrous
• Kenjutsu
Weaknesses
• Ninjutsu
• Genjutsu
Fears
• Death without Honor
• Loosing his Honor as a Samurai

Class Disciplines
• Samurai
• Monk
Reductions
• Learns Bukijutsu techniques one [1] post faster
• Learns Pi Qua Quan [ Sungakure no Taijutsu ], Xing-Yi, and Xinyi Liuhe Quan two [ 2 ] posts faster.
• Complex Techniques cost ten [ 10 ] less chakra and stamina to use.
Personal Attributes
• "Zen Meditation: After training and meditating in the way of Zen, the user uses up ten [ 10 ] less stamina and chakra when using Jutsu."
• "Path of the Sword Saint: The user gains an extra Bukijutsu at Chuunin, and another one at Jounin."
• "Way of the Samurai: He learns Bukijutsu one [ 1 ] post quicker."

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Ryo: 両 0
AC: 0

Missions Complete:
D Rank :: 0
C Rank :: 0
B Rank :: 0
A Rank :: 0
S Rank :: 0

Limitations:
[ Learned / Total ]
• Ninjutsu : : 00 / 02
• Genjutsu : : 00 / 00
• Taijutsu Styles: : 00 / 02
• Bukijutsu Styles: : 00 / 02

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Weapon Type: Katana - [ Image ]
Weapon Range: 65 Centimeters
Weapon Weight: 1.2 Kilograms
Weapon Location: Left Hip

Summoning Type: {Ex. Dogs, Bears, Slugs, etc.} {If none, remove summon section}
Summon Sage: {Yes or No}
Pacts: {Ex. Dogs: Pakkun, etc. Sages do not need to list pacts}

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▬▬┤|N i n j u t s u

Maruton:
• Bushi Ken no Jutsu [ Samurai Sabre Technique ] - [ B Rank ]
• Shunshin no Jutsu [ Body Flicker Technique ] - [ D Rank ]
• Kai [ Release ] - [ X Rank ]
• Kawarimi no Jutsu [ Substitution Technique ] - [ E Rank ]
• Saibai no Jutsu [ Cultivation Technique ] - [ 10*x Stamina to 10*x Chakra ]


▬▬┤|T a i j u t s u

{Style name here}
• {Stage progression / techniques learned}

▬▬┤|B u k i j u t s u

{Style name here}
• {Stage progression / techniques learned}

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Kenshin was born to the Sakagawa Clan from the Land of Iron. His father, Sakagawa Musashi, was a prominent leader and made trips to the Sunagakure very often because of the ties he had to a Shinobi there. This Shinobi in question, was Kenshin's mother. She gave Kenshin to his father on his third birthday because she understood the importance of him being trained in the Way of the Samurai, but she requested that he was to be sent back to Sunagakure to be trained in the Art of the Shinobi when he was old enough to be considered a Samurai.

During one of the times that he made a trip to Sunagakure Musashi stopped by the blacksmith shop in Sunagakure. The man gave him a Daisho pair that were better than any other swords he had ever wielding, or seen. For this feat Musashi dubbed the man Masamune, a fitting title for the blacksmith. The man's real name was Satetsu Sanshi, the current Sannin of Sunagakure. This fact was unknown to Musashi, but he respected the man greatly.

Kenshin finished his Samurai training three years ago at the age of thirteen. For two years he was sent to a Buddhist Temple to study under the Monks and become a Monk himself. During his time there he practiced Zen and the fact of clearing his mind this added to his Samurai training to further increase his resistance to Genjutsu. For one year he was at the Buddhist Temple until he was sent to Sunagakure to receive his Shinobi training like his mother requested. He graduated the Academy in two years. Kenshin does not claim his Shinobi heritage, but rather his Samurai one.
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PostPosted: Thu Feb 07, 2013 8:30 am
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[Classes]
There are two issues. Unless I am mistaken, he cannot have two main classes. Taijutsu is not a secondary class. I will ask to clarify, of course, so don't worry about changing this part yet. But the next one...

[Personal Attributes]
Unless this is your third character, you can only have two Personal Attributes. Is this your third character? If not, you will have to remove one of those Attributes.

I know that Yo-ko approved this, but until I can get answers to the above two things, I will deny your character.
 
PostPosted: Thu Feb 07, 2013 9:24 am
Lanfaer
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[Classes]
There are two issues. Unless I am mistaken, he cannot have two main classes. Taijutsu is not a secondary class. I will ask to clarify, of course, so don't worry about changing this part yet. But the next one...

[Personal Attributes]
Unless this is your third character, you can only have two Personal Attributes. Is this your third character? If not, you will have to remove one of those Attributes.

I know that Yo-ko approved this, but until I can get answers to the above two things, I will deny your character.
if he doesnt pick a bloodline, then they gain the bonus of 1 additional attribute and 2 additional custom techniques  

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PostPosted: Thu Feb 07, 2013 9:29 am
Yo-ko
Lanfaer
Yo-ko
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[Classes]
There are two issues. Unless I am mistaken, he cannot have two main classes. Taijutsu is not a secondary class. I will ask to clarify, of course, so don't worry about changing this part yet. But the next one...

[Personal Attributes]
Unless this is your third character, you can only have two Personal Attributes. Is this your third character? If not, you will have to remove one of those Attributes.

I know that Yo-ko approved this, but until I can get answers to the above two things, I will deny your character.
if he doesnt pick a bloodline, then they gain the bonus of 1 additional attribute and 2 additional custom techniques


Where is THAT rule? o >O
 
PostPosted: Thu Feb 07, 2013 9:31 am
Lanfaer
Yo-ko
Lanfaer
Yo-ko
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[Classes]
There are two issues. Unless I am mistaken, he cannot have two main classes. Taijutsu is not a secondary class. I will ask to clarify, of course, so don't worry about changing this part yet. But the next one...

[Personal Attributes]
Unless this is your third character, you can only have two Personal Attributes. Is this your third character? If not, you will have to remove one of those Attributes.

I know that Yo-ko approved this, but until I can get answers to the above two things, I will deny your character.
if he doesnt pick a bloodline, then they gain the bonus of 1 additional attribute and 2 additional custom techniques


Where is THAT rule? o >O
Keep this to the mod chatroom please if you have questions, or pm me  

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PostPosted: Thu Feb 07, 2013 10:08 am
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Full Name: Atteharu Hyuuga
Nickname: Atte

Age: 23
Birthdate: April 18th
Gender: Male

Height: 6'2"
Weight: 154 lbs

Nindo: "All about the games."
Personality: The very least one could say about Atteharu is that he's not boring. He acts like a child, more or less, and instigates people just to instigate them. He enjoys trying to anger people to come extent, but will admit it was all in good fun at the end.

Village: Konohagakure
Rank: Genin
First Class: Taijutsu
Second Class: Sensory

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Bloodline: Hyuuga Clan

Chakra Pool: 275
Stamina Pool: 225
Chakra Element: Lightning
Chakra Color: Red
Chakra Materialization: Flickering Aura

Strengths:
• Close Combat
• Chakra Detection
Weaknesses:
• Ranged combat
• Someone Faster than Him
Fears:
• Waterfalls
• Tornadoes

Class Disciplines :
• Monk: A more internal martial artist, this user focuses on the ability to utilize chakra to increase their power and techniques due to their smaller body frame. Gains a -2 learning reduction to Pi Qua Quan, Xingyi, and Xinyi liuhe Quan. Complex techniques cost 10 less chakra and stamina to perform. Starts with extra technique [Cultivation](cultivation is a conversion of stamina to chakra, at a 10 chakra to 10 stamina conversion in any increment of 10.)

• Resolution: The user is more determined to get fine details from his sensory techniques, but in order to get this type of clarity the user's range of the technique is reduced by half. The user is able to discover type of technique that is about to be active(fuuin, genjutsu, ninjutsu, custom jutsu, complex tai and buki), even specifics such as Bloodline type and rank. Additionally, the user can gain similar information about any chakra source in their sensory technique's range, including what bloodline the person possesses, and how large their chakra pool is.
Reductions:
• All Hyuuga learn taijutsu one [1] post faster.
• All Hyuuga learn maruton ninjutsu [1] one post faster.
Personal Attributes:
• Taijutsu Affinity: Learn Taijutsu 2 Posts Faster
• Complex Utilizer: Learn Complex Taijutsu 1 Post Faster

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Ryo: 両 0000
AC: 0000

Missions Complete:
D Rank :: 0
C Rank :: 0
B Rank :: 0
A Rank :: 0
S Rank :: 0

Limitations:
• Ninjutsu : : 00 / 04
• Genjutsu : : 00 / 04
• Taijutsu Styles: : 00 / 02
• Bukijutsu Styles: : 00 / 00

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Summoning Type:
Summon Sage:
Pacts:

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• 30 Kunai

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Maruton:
• Henge no Jutsu [ Transformation Technique ]
• Kawarimi no Jutsu [ Substitution Technique ]
• Genso Bushin no Jutsu [ Illusion Clone Technique ]
• Suimen Hokou no Waza [ Act of Water Surface Walking ]
• Kinobori no Waza [ Act of Tree Climbing ]
• Kai [ Release ]

Raiton


Bloodline



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Mirror Image
• Stage One

Xing-Yi
• Stage One

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Atteharu was born without knowledge of his lineage of being a Hyuuga. He found out about this only very recently in fact. When he figured this out he became a ninja. Otherwise, he is pretty normal.
 
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