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Yo-ko

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PostPosted: Sat Jan 19, 2013 11:30 am
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Full Name: Leonidas Armidayus Anderson
Nickname:

Age: 12
Birthdate: may 5
Gender: male

Height: 5’0
Weight: 110

Nindo: "Internal cultivations become your external manifestations"
Personality: Leonidas is a very light, and happy, but exceptionally competitive fellow. His strong mind is what gives him the fortitude to compete with the other individuals. He always feels like eyes are on him due to his special ability, and that his performance can always use improvement. But despite this, he loves to train and have fun with the other ninja, but it is all business when it comes to combat.

Village: Konoha
Rank: Gennin
First Class: Ninjutsu
Second Class: Bloodline

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Bloodline: Shakuton, Youton

Chakra Pool:355
Stamina Pool: 155
Chakra Element: Earth, Fire, Wind
Chakra Color: Cosmic
Chakra Materialization: Looks like a Nebula

Strengths:
• Bloodline abilities
• Mental fortitude
Weaknesses:
• Women with Big Boobs
• Super Competitive
Fears:
• Looking stupid in front of a desired women
• injuring a team mate during battle

Class Disciplines :
• Elemental Brandish
• Bloodknight
Reductions:
• -1 bloodline techniques

Personal Attributes:
• Elementally Gifted: Leonidas was born with a true natural gift, some that only a few are ever able to achieve. Instead of one, Leo is capable of manipulating 2 elemental bloodlines. Unfortunately, this power costs Leo his ability to perform Genjutsu. This counts as 2 attibutes

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Ryo: 両0
AC: 0

Missions Complete:
D Rank :: 0
C Rank :: 0
B Rank :: 0
A Rank :: 0
S Rank :: 0

Limitations:
• Ninjutsu : : 03 per element / 04
• Genjutsu : : cant learn
• Taijutsu Styles: : 00 / 01
• Bukijutsu Styles: : 00 / 01

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Weapon Type: Chinese Jade sword
Weapon Range: 1meter
Weapon Weight: 2 lbs
Weapon Location: across back


Summoning Type: None yet
Summon Sage: none yet
Pacts: None yet

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• 15 shuriken
• 15 kunai

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Maruton:
• Henge no Jutsu [ Transformation Technique ]
• Kawarimi no Jutsu [ Substitution Technique ]
• Genso Bushin no Jutsu [ Illusion Clone Technique ]
• Suimen Hokou no Waza [ Act of Water Surface Walking ]
• Kinobori no Waza [ Act of Tree Climbing ]
• Kai [ Release ]

Katon


Doton


Fuuton


Shakuton

Youton



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{Style name here}
• {Stage progression / techniques learned}

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{Style name here}
• {Stage progression / techniques learned}

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Leo was born into a family in Konoha, and his gift was quickly discovered at an early age. His mother pushed his training hard, and he gained a very competitive nature. This was nurtured and allowed to grow, making him quite capable of many talents.
 
PostPosted: Sat Jan 19, 2013 3:17 pm
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Ok I fixed it. But so just so there is no confusion in the future, what do you mean by relevance to actual Rp? Are you saying I can't use the information in battle or... (honestly I doubt using it in battle will make much difference since mostly everyone tries to put down generic fears so they can pretend their RPC has none, like "afraid of dying" or "afraid of friends dying" I mean you can basically just guess these from anyone who just walks by ^^; )

You need to actually set up a situation where they show you their fear or you can at least deduce the fear rather than just looking and in some convoluted explanation jumping to the conclusion. Also I know that, and it's a crap shoot for you in that instance when it comes to the generic fears. The far better thing would be to induce a new fear/trauma.

Also what I mean is that you can be distracted while observing the person, in the middle of battle is fine, but while dodging an attack, while attacking is another thing, because that might dredge up what they might be afraid of.
anyway you do know that genjutsu can just do the work for you here right. I mean genjutsu can just make a persons mind fight against them. meaning you don't have to know their fear to make their fears consume them. Anyway you still need to add in the part about the distraction thing.
 

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PostPosted: Sat Jan 19, 2013 3:22 pm
Yo-ko


Yeah I'm not passing that until we have a talk about this in the crew thread, because that first trait, is a no~, and the idea of having to bloodlines in this guild has been refused before in discussion so~, Yeah~  
PostPosted: Sat Jan 19, 2013 3:52 pm
Reaper Elyse
Yo-ko


Yeah I'm not passing that until we have a talk about this in the crew thread, because that first trait, is a no~, and the idea of having to bloodlines in this guild has been refused before in discussion so~, Yeah~
It was just an attempt. Utilizing both of his personal attributes for it and sacrificing his ability to learn genjutsu, which would be a considerable number (probably equal to the bloodline) to pick up. If you would though, please discuss it with other crew members to see if they would allow it. I dont mind waiting  

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PostPosted: Sun Jan 20, 2013 1:13 am
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Full Name: Yuugao, Hanshou
Nickname: Yuu

Age: 15
Birthdate: October 3
Gender: Female

Height: 5'6
Weight:130Lbs

Nindo: “Rising from the shadows, only to slink back into their embrace.This is the true path of the shinobi. To remain a myth...not a tool.”

Personality: Yuugao, in a few words is astute, courageous, and stubbornly creative. She's receptive and tolerant towards others, but retains a strong sense of self and individuality. Never one to follow the crowd but set her own path. She aspires for great things in her life and does take some personal offense to those whom come between her and a goal. Yet she'd never show her personal emotions too openly. Finding it to be a weakness and an embarrassment considering her family traditions she hold rather close to her heart and seeks to discover deep truths about.

Theme:You will count your Dead

Battle Theme:Power of Darkness

Village: Kumogakura, Village Hidden in the Clouds
Rank: Genin
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Main Class: Genjutsu
Second Class: Tamer

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Bloodline: Mugen Clan (Kinmukugan)

Chakra Pool: 395
Stamina Pool: 200
Chakra Element: Fuuton(wind), Doton (earth)
Chakra Color: Pale plum (light purple)
Chakra Materialization: Rippling and swirling waves of etched tribal patterns

Strengths:
• Photographic Memory
• Courage
Weaknesses:
• Faster opponents
• Elaborate Traps
Fears:
• Suffocating
• Losing her mind

Class Attributes:
Mental Defenses: The user is more aware of how a genjutsu affects the mind, making them more aware and able to detect genjutsu and thus more resistant to it. Increases genjutsu detection, and reduces Kai cost by 1 rank.

Beast Master: The user is able to nurture grow, and bond with up to 3 animals, of various shapes and sizes (one lizard, one canine, one feline, ect), with the user being able to receive similar traits to their animals(must submit to customs). These animals will be close to the users level, though still requiring the leader for nurturing, growth, ect. The animals will not be able to pass Jounin level, even if the user can. They have 1/2 the user's chakra and stamina pool, while only being able to manipulate a single element. At gennin, the user can choose a single trait associated with their animal companion. At chunnin, when the user gains their second animal conpanion, the user may choose another trait associated with this single companion. At jounin, when the user gains their third companion, they may choose another trait associated with that animal. Each trait must be submitted to the custom jutsu thread.
--- Bloodline
• Mugen clan members must have Fuuton [ Wind ] as one of their chosen chakra elements.
• Mugen clan members learn Fuuton [ Wind ] ninjutsu one (1) post faster.
• Mugen clan members are born with their golden eyes, bearing a single Ouroboros ring.
• The Kinmukugan is capable of viewing areas at multiple angles, but it cannot see through obstacles.

Reductions:
• Learn genjutsu one [1] post faster.

Personal Attributes:
• A Fist and A Blade: Retains one extra [1] Bukijutsu style slot,
• Dual wielding: Yuugao is capable of performing and completing hand signs with one hand for her jutsu.


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Ryo: 両{Money} 300
AC: 450

Chakra/Stamina Training:
Basic Chakra Training: Performance x2
Basic Chakra Training: Sparring [Won]
Basic Training: Meditate


Missions Complete:
D Rank :: 3
C Rank :: 0
B Rank :: 0
A Rank :: 0
S Rank :: 0

Limitations:
• Ninjutsu : : 06 / 04
• Genjutsu : : 08 / 08
• Taijutsu Styles: : 01 / 01
• Bukijutsu Styles: : 01 / 01

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Weapon Type: Twin sickle short blades.
Weapon Range: 2'8ft
Weapon Weight: 5Lbs
Weapon Location: strapped to the side of her legs at the thigh, in holster hidden in her clothing.

Summoning Type: N/A
Summon Sage: Nope
Pacts: N /A

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• 15 kunai
• 9 senbon
• 6 smoke pellets


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Maruton: {Start with the following six only}
• Henge no Jutsu [ Transformation Technique ]
• Kawarimi no Jutsu [ Substitution Technique ]
• Bushin no Jutsu [ Clone Technique ]
• Suimen Hokou no Waza [ Act of Water Surface Walking ]
• Kinobori no Waza [ Act of Tree Climbing ]
• Kai [ Release ]

•Juujin Bunshin [ Beast-Man Clone ] Rank: D

Fuuton
• Kamaitachi no Jutsu [ Slashing Wind Skill ] Rank: D
• Furyuuchou Ken [ Flowing Wind Fist ] Rank: B

Doton:
• Tsuchi Gunjikoudou no Jutsu [ Earth Military Movement Technique ] Rank: E
• Doryuuha [ Earth Flow Wave ] Rank: C
• Doryuu Heki [ Mud Slide Barrier ] Rank: D-S

Kinmukugan
• Shouten Shiten [ Focus Point ] Rank: D
• Torakkingu Mokushi [ Tracking Sight ] Rank: D
• Jettosutori-mu [ Jet Stream ] Rank: C
• Kamikaze Seiryoku [ Divine Wind Force ] Rank: C
• Kussetsu Zendou [ Bending Path of Virtue ] Rank: C
• Katsu Torakkingu [ Split Tracking ] Rank: B
• Fūjin no Nageku [ Fūjin's Sigh ] Rank: B
• Nyoronyoro Zendou [ Slithering Path of Virtue ] Rank: B
• Koshouten [ Great Focus ] Rank: B
• Hayai Shouten [ Quick Focus ] Rank: B



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• Buki Hanshoku [ Weapon Multiply ] Rank: D — Sight
• Kumo Bunshin no Jutsu [ Cloud Clone Technique ] Rank: D — Sight
• Hitoshirenu Shikaku no Jutsu [ Hidden Assassin Technique ] Rank: C — Sight
• Doro no Gekiryuu [ Raging Rapids of Mud ] Rank: C — Sight
• Go Kasho Fuu: Raikou Seki no Jutsu [ Five Point Seal: Lightning Barrier Technique ] Rank: C — Touch
• Okuyuki Katawa [ Depth Distortion ] Rank: E — Sound
• Nouzui Momiryouji [ Brain Massage ] Rank: C — Sound
• Doku Kumo no Jutsu [ Poison Cloud Technique ] Rank: B — Sight


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{Kumogakure no Taijutsu}
• {Stage One}
○ Wall Scaling Technique _Complex :: Rank E
○ Fall Breaker _Complex :: Rank E
• {Stage Two}
○ Flying Kick _Simple :: Rank D
○ Flying Tackle _Simple :: Rank D
○ Double Jump _Complex :: Rank D
• {Stage Three}
○ Wall Run _Simple :: Rank C
○ Air Disperse _Complex :: Rank C
○ Area Disruption _Complex :: Rank C
• {Stage Four}
○ Angled Dive _Simple :: Rank B
○ Tunnel Sound _Complex :: Rank B
○ Triple Jump _Complex :: Rank B



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{Sobagai Deba Sentou }
• {Stage One}
○ Countering Technique: Upward Repel _Simple :: Rank E
○ Offensive Technique: Assisted Jab _Complex :: Rank E
○ Offensive Style: Knife Stances _Practice :: Rank E
○ Offensive Style: Simple Play _Practice :: Rank E
• {Stage Two}



• {Stage Three}



• {Stage Four}




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• {Asagao}[ Mornings-glory ]-Male Kangaroo (mutt between a red kangaroo & Propelopus)
Personality: : Strong-willed, Prideful, Brave.
Age: 4 (adult), June 15
Height: 6'0
Weight: 305 LBs
Fur: Black
Element: Katon(for personal reference and organization)
Chakra {198};
Genin
~ Natural Abilities: : "Jump"- 30ft, "Run" 40Mph top speed (that's for an average red kangaroo)
~ Carries : : N/A
Jutsu : :

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The Mugen were a great shinobi clan once which once fought along side their fellow shinobi from the land of clouds to defend themselves from foreign threats. Lending themselves to kumogakura for the express purpose of only defending their land rather than openly establishing a nation. the clan had scattered to the winds. Becoming shadow dwellers to an even deeper sense than that of the average hidden village. The Mugen clan had birthed many branch families in it's time of isolation, but one which held fast in service to the main branches ideals though dwindling was that of the Hansho (night). The metaphorical shadow of the Mugen clan, which would hold their ideals and carry them over the best they could, but with time the bend of time and the political sphere around the shinobi arts, and techniques drew them back to the bosom of Kumogakura. Yet in shame as not only being that of a branch family but the lowly and forever marked clansmen of the Megen whom turned their backs on the village with in its conception.
Born amongst the this branch family is the heir to their house, Yuugao Hanshou. A young girl raised for most of her life outside of the village in the plains between the desert territory between the leaf and wind villages. here in the savanna plain terrain Yuugao (Moonflower) was conceived and trained in the art of the shinobi by her parents and aunts and uncles. Given the mission to one day take her talents and knowledge of animals to establish a growth original to the Hanshou. The Hanshou house was always well versed in taming the wildlife. Domesticating and developing animals to work along side their blood line techniques to draw more life into their abilities as well as hiding the influence of human hands.

Each Hanshou is born with a predetermined kinship to a specified animal with in the world. A "shadow", so to speak, that would follow them to the bitter end loyally. Once of age they are to discover this primary shadow and establish their bond. For Yuu, her bond was in Asagao (Morning glory), A jet black kangaroo with fierce eyes not unlike her own. Though a "joey" at the time the little male kangaroo had fight in him and an impressive speed and power behind his movements. Before coming to Kumagakura to settle Yuu spent several months on her own in the desert chasing after Asagao until she made her bond and returning with him she'd proven herself ready to present herself to the Raikage. Now four years after her arrival Yuu has grown into a competent and fairly well spoken shinobi of kumogakura. Yet she prides herself in her individuality and personal agenda. Though she may be shamed by them for her heritage Yuu perceives the Mugen as a point of pride and strength.
 
PostPosted: Sun Jan 20, 2013 8:05 pm
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PostPosted: Sun Jan 20, 2013 8:42 pm
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Full Name: Kyoishi and Shizuka Inuzuka
Nickname: Kyo and Shi

Age: 13 / 4
Birthdate: Somewhere near the end of May
Gender: Male -- Male

Height: 5'0
Weight: 130 lbs / 122 lbs

Nindo: "Honor is differently defined then Intergrity, neither can be used at the same time."
Personality: Arrogant, big mouth, dosen't mind to grope females out of curosity and will defintly love being with friends and act normal.


Village: Kumo
Rank: Jounin / ANBU
First Class: Taijutsu
Second Class: Tamer


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Bloodline: Inuzuka

Chakra Pool: 400
Stamina Pool: 430
Chakra Element: Raiton -- Katon
Chakra Color: Tomato
Chakra Materialization: Aura

Strengths:
• Close combat [ T a i j u s t u ]
• Senses [ I n u z u k a ]
Weaknesses:
• Long range [ G e n j u s t u ]
• Suiton [ K a t o n | R a i t o n ]
Fears:
• Being alone
• Females

Class Disciplines :
• Brawler: Your taijutsu is just one side of your skill, as you are also versed in utilizing ninjutsu as well. Your taijutsu body vastly increases your flexibility and reflexes, while at the same time granting you an additional 2 ninjutsu techniques per level, then an extra 4 ninjutsu per rank after Jounin.

•Beast Master: The user is able to nurture grow, and bond with up to 3 animals, of various shapes and sizes (one lizard, one canine, one feline, ect), with the user being able to receive similar traits to their animals(must submit to customs). These animals will be close to the users level, though still requiring the leader for nurturing, growth, ect. The animals will not be able to pass Jounin level, even if the user can. They have 1/2 the user's chakra and stamina pool, while only being able to manipulate a single element. At gennin, the user can choose a single trait associated with their animal companion. At chunnin, when the user gains their second animal conpanion, the user may choose another trait associated with this single companion. At jounin, when the user gains their third companion, they may choose another trait associated with that animal. Each trait must be submitted to the custom jutsu thread.

Reductions:
• Learn taijutsu five {5} posts faster.
• --
Personal Attributes:
• Learn Taijustu 2 posts faster
• Speed increase


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Ryo: 両6,450
AC: 10,100

Missions Complete:
D Rank :: 11
C Rank :: 8
B Rank :: 2
A Rank :: 1
S Rank :: 1

Limitations:
• Ninjutsu : : 09 / 17
• Genjutsu : : 00 / 00
• Taijutsu Styles: : 04 / 05
• Bukijutsu Styles: : 00 / 00

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• Scrolls of Taijutsu styles
• Two strap backpack / black / scroll holder

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Maruton:
• Henge no Jutsu [ Transformation Technique ]
• Kawarimi no Jutsu [ Substitution Technique ]
• Genso Bushin no Jutsu [ Illusion Clone Technique ]
• Suimen Hokou no Waza [ Act of Water Surface Walking ]
• Kinobori no Waza [ Act of Tree Climbing ]
• Kai [ Release ]

Chakra Training "It's how we grow faster!"

[ G e n i n - T r a i n i n g ]
• Basic Chakra Training: Spar x1
• Basic Chakra Training: Combat x1
• Basic Chakra Training: Meditate [ + 40 total chakra ] x2 [ x ] [ x ]

[ C h u n i n - T r a i n i n g ]
• Chakra Training: Spar x1
• Chakra Training: Meditate [ +25 ] x1 [ x ]


Katon "A soul burns brighter as it grows."
[ A c a d e m y | S t u d e n t ] - - -
• Ichi (Fire Release: One) [ x ]

[ G e n i n ] - - -
• Ni (Fire Release: Two) [ x ]

[ C h u n i n ] - - -
• San (Fire Release: Three) [ x ]
• Shi (Fire Release: Four) [ x ]
• Taika no Jutsu [ Fireproof Technique ]

[ J o u n i n ] - - -
• Go [ Five ]


Raiton "I'll bring the storm to your front door."
[ A c a d e m y | S t u d e n t ] - - -
• Raikou Bunshin no Jutsu (Lightning Clone Technique) [ x ]
• Seiteki Suji no Jutsu (Static Strings Technique) [ x ]

[ G e n i n ] - - -
• Raikou Henge no Jutsu (Lightning Transformation Technique) [ x ]

[ C h u n i n ] - - -




Bloodline "I'm not a cute little puppy."
[ H o w l i n g | M o d e ] - - -


[ A c a d e m y | S t u d e n t ] - - -
• Shikyaku no Jutsu [ Four-Legged Technique ] [ x ]
• Dainamikku Maakingu [ Dynamic Marking ] [ x ]

[ G e n i n ] - - -
• Juujin Bunshin [ Beast-Man Clone ] [ x ]
• Tsuuga [ Piercing Fang ] [ x ]

[ C h u n i n ] - - -
• Gatsuuga [ Dual Piercing Fang ] [ x ]
• Inuzuka Ryuu Chinjuu Konbi Henge : Soutou Rou [ Inuzuka Style Rare Beast Transformation : Double-Headed Wolf ] [ x ]



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[ H a r a i s e ] - - - Style Completed

[ S t a g e - 1 ] D ranked
• Akuma Sutansu - Devil Stance [ x ]
• Kuro Tsume - Dark Talon [ x ]

[ S t a g e - 2 ] C ranked
• Akuma Kamu - Devil Bite [ x ]
• Jinsoku Biribiri [ x ]

[ S t a g e - 3 ] B ranked
• Akuma Ataru - Devil Strike [ x ]
• Akuma Sutansu Ni - Devil Stance Two [ x ]

[ S t a g e - 4 ] A ranked
• Akuma Mochi - Devil Charge [ x ]
• Kuro Shippuu - Dark Hurricane [ x ]

[ S t a g e - 5 ] S ranked
• Akuma Hasami - Devil Scissors [ x ]
• Akuma Jisatsu - Devil's Suicide [ x ] [ forbidden technique ]

[ K a n j o - T e k i n a - I k a r i ] - - - Currently Off Limits

[ S t a g e - 1 ] Hate E ranked
• Spiteful Strike [ x ]
• Disdainful Elbow [ x ]
• Unrefined kick [ x ]

[ S t a g e - 2 ] Envy D ranked
• Introverted Step
• Distressed Block [ x ]
• Step Counter [ x ]
• Dishonorable Strike [ x ]
• False Sweep [ x ]

[ S t a g e - 3 ] Fury C ranked
• Invisible Spear Strike [ x ]
• Burst-Step Strike: Tantrum [ x ]
• Burst-Step Strike: Treachery [ x ]
• Break-Step Strike: Devastation [ x ]
• Break-Step Strike: Frenzy [ x ]

[ S t a g e - 4 ] Sorrow B ranked
• Iron Body [ x ]

[ S a z a n a m i ] - - -

[ S t a g e - 1 ] E ranked
• Footing one [ x ]
• Parry [ x ]

[ S t a g e - 2 ] D ranked
• Footing Two: Horse Stance [ x ]
• Bell Ring [ x ]

[ S t a g e - 3 ] C ranked
• Sweeping Strike [ x ]
• Half-Step [ x ]
• Spin Step [ x ]
• Attack Redirection: Upper Body [ x ]

[ S t a g e - 4 ] B ranked
• Attack Redirection: Lower Body [ x ]
• Hummingbird’s Flight [ x ]
• Cross Split [ x ]
• Third Footing (Back Stance) [ x ]
• Flat Step [ x ]


[ K u m o g a k u r e - N o - T a i j u s t u ] - - -

[ S t a g e - 1 ] E ranked
• wall scaling techinque [ x ]
• fall breaker [ x ]

[ S t a g e - 2 ] D ranked
• Flying kick
• flying tackle [ x ]
• double jump [ x ]

[ S t a g e - 3 ] C ranked
• Wall Run [ x ]
• Air Dispense [ x ]
• Area Disruption [ x ]

[ S t a g e - 4 ] B ranked


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Kyoishi was born in the leaf village, his family happy to finally get a boy for he had three older sisters. One named Mary, the second named Tina, the third named Namine. They were all in their early adults when he was born and were soon abandoned by the family. Kyo was born into the Inuzuka clan of the leaf but soon him and his two parents moved to Kumogakure. He found Shi when he was in the academy as a ninja and got to keep him. They are like brothers. Academy life was hard, people made fun of his orange hair and laughed cause he always got hurt in practice. When he graduated and finally became a genin, he met Sypher Senju. He saved him from some bullies and stopped his constant crying. It was a secret up until he turned ten and was a chunin, that both of them had fallen in love but Kyo had to wait until he was 15 for it to be true. As a chunin he had a couple students, a blind girl who's name he can't remember and a boy he'd rather forget. He never mentions having any students because most were girls and he has a distaste towards them except Dai. He hasen't spoken to many people after he accidently burned Dai and nearly killed her. He refuses to call anyone a friend except one person. And thats cause he ate a dog biscuit. He is now twelve and is a bit more mature then when he was younger, mostly cause his father died from unknown causes. Kyo has made it a goal to become a ANBU captain. Unfortunly half a year ago, twow eeks after Kyo's father passed away, his mother got very lonely and dyed Kyo's own hair by force, red, like his fathers but she felt nothing after doing that and two months later died of a broken heart. One of his sisters came to kumo and is staying with Kyo so he wouldn't be put into a orphanage but is often taken advantage of by his sister who is the oldest of the four siblings together. He became jounin the day of his mother's death and has lost some of his happiness from that. His sister has been known to abuse him so he often tries to do whatever he can to use as a excuse of not coming home to her. Shi has grown over the year to become full sized shepard, he has also learned to speak human tounge from kyo.
 
PostPosted: Mon Jan 21, 2013 1:33 am
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Full Name: Shiro Nakamura
Nickname: Taiyō ( 太陽 )

Age: 16
Birthdate: 10/17
Gender: Male

Height: 71 inches
Weight: 157 Pounds

Nindo: "To live for yourself is to protect your allies"
Personality: Shiro is a very quiet and rather reclusive person, he's intelligent and calculating. As a result of his rather unusual behavior, he is often considered to be cold and distant, however he often times puts up a façade of kindness with an inviting smile. Though this is usually very recognizable as being untruthful.

Village: Konohagakure
Rank: Genin
First Class: Bloodline
Second Class: Musician

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Bloodline: Jiton • Magnet Release

Chakra Pool: 375
Stamina Pool: 145
Chakra Element: Earth & Lightning
Chakra Color: A foggy silver color
Chakra Materialization: His chakra takes form as a large electrical current, trickling around him in sudden bursts and quick bursts.

Strengths:
• Ranged Combat
• Ninjutsu
Weaknesses:
• Prolonged Combat
• Genjutsu
Fears:
• Dying without accomplishments
• Spiders

Class Disciplines :
• Thoroughbred: Your maximum chakra pool and maximum stamina pool are both increased by {10} points, and you receive an additional {05} points to each pool whenever you rank up. Additionally, when you perform bloodline techniques above Rank D, you are refunded {05} chakra or {05} stamina, depending on which energy was used. ( If chakra was used, you recover chakra; if stamina was used, you recover stamina; if both were used, you recover both. )
• Painting Pictures: The user is able to perform on their insturment like they are performing hand seals, making brilliant ninjutsu appear. This ability comes at the cost of not being able to perform genjutsu through performance or instrument. Can perform B rank ninjutsu and lower at gennin, A rank at Chunnin, and S rank at Jounin. At Konin, all ninjutsu cost 5 less chakra to perform if performed through an instrument or performance. at Sannin, ninjutsu cost 10 less chakra if performed through instrument or performance.
Reductions:
• Learns bloodline techniques [1] post faster.
• Learns Doton and Raiton techniques [1] post faster.
Personal Attributes:
• Grandmaster - Learns Ninjutsu techniques [1] post faster.
• Samurai - Learns bukijutsu techniques [1] post faster.

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Ryo: 両0
AC: 0

Missions Complete:
D Rank :: 0
C Rank :: 0
B Rank :: 0
A Rank :: 0
S Rank :: 0

Limitations:
• Ninjutsu : : 07 / 07
• Genjutsu : : 05 / 05
• Taijutsu Styles: : 01 / 01
• Bukijutsu Styles: : 01 / 01

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Weapon Type: Violin (Not sure if this belongs here).
Weapon Range: As far as the sound can reach.
Weapon Weight: Just under a pound.
Weapon Location: Shiro carries it around in a sizable black case.
• Katana

Summoning Type: -
Summon Sage: -
Pacts: -

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• 15 Shuriken
• 15 Kunai

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Maruton:
• Henge no Jutsu [ Transformation Technique ]
• Kawarimi no Jutsu [ Substitution Technique ]
• Genso Bushin no Jutsu [ Illusion Clone Technique ]
• Suimen Hokou no Waza [ Act of Water Surface Walking ]
• Kinobori no Waza [ Act of Tree Climbing ]
• Kai [ Release ]

Doton


Raiton


Jiton


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• {Stage progression / techniques learned}

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Shiro was always quiet, from his days in the academy. While he never knew his parents, and was left to fend for himself as an orphan, it really didn't effect his life much. He began playing the Violin at a young age, and it began influencing his life at that very moment.
Academy - While in the academy, Shiro would spend most of his time on his own, practicing his violin, working towards applying his chakra in the best way possible. He payed attention in school and got acceptable grades, but it never really interested him beyond what he needed in order to get by, his true instants stood in preparing for the future, practicing on his own.
 

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PostPosted: Mon Jan 21, 2013 11:38 am
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Full Name: Leonidas Armidayus Anderson
Nickname:

Age: 12
Birthdate: may 5
Gender: male

Height: 5’0
Weight: 110

Nindo: "Internal cultivations become your external manifestations"
Personality: Leonidas is a very light, and happy, but exceptionally competitive fellow. His strong mind is what gives him the fortitude to compete with the other individuals. He always feels like eyes are on him, and that his performance can always use improvement. But despite this, he loves to train and have fun with the other ninja, but it is all business when it comes to combat.

Village: Konoha
Rank: Gennin
First Class: Taijutsu
Second Class: Bukijutsu

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Bloodline: Koton

Chakra Pool: 175
Stamina Pool: 325
Chakra Element: Earth, Wind
Chakra Color: Black
Chakra Materialization: wolves

Strengths:
• Bloodline abilities
• Mental fortitude
Weaknesses:
• Women with Big Boobs
• Super Competitive
Fears:
• Looking stupid in front of a desired women
• injuring a team mate during battle

Class Disciplines :
• Berserker
• Mystic Hero
Reductions:
• -1 Buki

Personal Attributes:
• Ninjutsu Curious: By his extreme curiosity of the ninjutsu art, Leo gains +1 ninjutsu per rank he grows.
• Heart of Steel: Leo has become accustomed to the use of his steel and movement, utilizing his skill and superior body to not be slowed down by the weight of his steel. Due to his training and his bloodline trait, he is actually slightly faster when utilizing his bloodline.


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Weapon Type: Chinese Jade sword
Weapon Range: 1meter
Weapon Weight: 2 lbs
Weapon Location: across back


Summoning Type: None yet
Summon Sage: none yet
Pacts: None yet

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• 15 shuriken
• 15 kunai

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Maruton:
• Henge no Jutsu [ Transformation Technique ]
• Kawarimi no Jutsu [ Substitution Technique ]
• Genso Bushin no Jutsu [ Illusion Clone Technique ]
• Suimen Hokou no Waza [ Act of Water Surface Walking ]
• Kinobori no Waza [ Act of Tree Climbing ]
• Kai [ Release ]

Doton


Fuuton


Koton



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• {Stage progression / techniques learned}

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Leo was born into a family in Konoha, and his gift was quickly discovered at an early age. His mother pushed his training hard, and he gained a very competitive nature. This was nurtured and allowed to grow, making him quite capable of many talents.
 
PostPosted: Mon Jan 21, 2013 1:24 pm
Codekasu

Just know that your language on the first trait would surmise to be a moderate increase in speed, and the second should say you can learn bukijutsu 1 post faster if that was your aim. A small edit for clarity, Also you need to adjust your projectile count. You have 35 none with the 15 senbon, and 20 shiriken that's 35 projectiles, you should have 30.but after than Approved.

little mintchan

Okay I'm trying to work out your chakra pool an stamina pool but from what i have of the base count it's 205 chakra, and 430 stamina, but both get boosted by your training, so it's possible your stamina pool is lower than it should be if the spars, and combat training boosts add up to give you a 195 boost.
Also the general speed increase is considered moderate written like that, just letting you know.


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Yo-ko

~I'm not sure about the second trait, because that's essentially the one draw back of the bloodline and also couldn't you negate that effect with the light weight doton jutsu? Which is something i think needs stifled considering this bloodline essentially has all the benefits and shows or explains no flaws beyond what might be obvious where lightning jutsu is concerned as the only natural counter to it's strength..  

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PostPosted: Mon Jan 21, 2013 1:43 pm
Reaper Elyse
Codekasu

Just know that your language on the first trait would surmise to be a moderate increase in speed, and the second should say you can learn bukijutsu 1 post faster if that was your aim. A small edit for clarity, Also you need to adjust your projectile count. You have 35 none with the 15 senbon, and 20 shiriken that's 35 projectiles, you should have 30.but after than Approved.

little mintchan

Okay I'm trying to work out your chakra pool an stamina pool but from what i have of the base count it's 205 chakra, and 430 stamina, but both get boosted by your training, so it's possible your stamina pool is lower than it should be if the spars, and combat training boosts add up to give you a 195 boost.
Also the general speed increase is considered moderate written like that, just letting you know.


Mental Neko-Kun

Approved

Tai-tai Grim

Approved

Yo-ko

~I'm not sure about the second trait, because that's essentially the one draw back of the bloodline and also couldn't you negate that effect with the light weight doton jutsu? Which is something i think needs stifled considering this bloodline essentially has all the benefits and shows or explains no flaws beyond what might be obvious where lightning jutsu is concerned as the only natural counter to it's strength..
Well their is a technique that increases strength, so we can only assume that with that they would be able to manipulate their weight and armor. Ill come up with a new trait however  
PostPosted: Mon Jan 21, 2013 1:49 pm
Yo-ko

Increasing strength is still better than making it light weight because you still have limits on that. You strength will have it's limits and impossible amounts of your steel like a forests worth of black steel won't just be ignored easily. Light weight would just null it rather than contest the weight with strength.  

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PostPosted: Mon Jan 21, 2013 2:33 pm
Disturbed Otaku

Okay you first trait ifs fine, since you technically only get a moderate in creates in speed, and then you have a short sprint ability based on expending stamina. All's fair, but this stamina cost needs to be a give amount. Also it has to have some kind of limit so you're not just leap frogging a speed above your rank (which is a no no in most cases). So after using it you'd need to have a turn of rest, basically a one turn cool down, and a fair cost would be 20 chakra points for jumping rank like that.

Lanfear

Since you approved him I just wanted you aware of what I'm doing here. Also to see if you agree or would like to discuss the reason for what I'm doing.  
PostPosted: Mon Jan 21, 2013 2:37 pm
Reaper Elyse

hmmmm why spending chakra? I would assume that stamina would make more sense. Hmmmmmm well I was thinking if I could actually change it anyways. Speed is all well and good but since he focuses a lot on being stealthy and fighting only when necessary I would think changing it to a more stealth-like trait would be better...  

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PostPosted: Mon Jan 21, 2013 2:40 pm
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Reaper Elyse

hmmmm why spending chakra? I would assume that stamina would make more sense. Hmmmmmm well I was thinking if I could actually change it anyways. Speed is all well and good but since he focuses a lot on being stealthy and fighting only when necessary I would think changing it to a more stealth-like trait would be better...


Did I write chakra, I meant stamina sorry. ^^;

Also that's fine by me really since we're here under the pretense of editing it in the first place. Just reply with what you would like to exchange it with, kay. =3  
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