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PostPosted: Fri Jan 18, 2013 7:21 am
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Full Name: Melious Totoro Gi Sakigami
Nickname: Mel, Mockingbird (calls himself this), Toto, Syke (uninformed people spell it "Psych" but that's not the way he spells it)

Age: 16
Birthdate: May 5
Gender: Male

Height: 68 in
Weight: 125lbs

Nindo: "Don't believe anything until you see it with your own eyes...and even then, don't believe it."
Personality: Melious suffers from a few mental instabilities and therefor his personality depends on a lot of variables. If he has his mask on he will usually act childish, like a 7 year old. Spinning and jumping about like a child. But sometimes he will switch into a different persona, which in turn changes everything about his personality. The way he acts, his outlook on life, the way he reacts, etc. Mostly he'll be seen with his mask on and acting childish.

Village: Konohagakure
Rank: Genin
First Class: Genjutsu
Second Class: Sensor

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Chakra Pool: 460
Stamina Pool: 40
Chakra Element: Wind // Fire
Chakra Color: White
Chakra Materialization: His chakra appears as an all white aura of flames wrapped around his body. When in more condensed forms (like when he builds chakra or becomes angry) it appears there is some type of demonic face smiling above his head.

Strengths:
• Genjutsu
• Chakra Detection
Weaknesses:
• Close Combat
• Earth-Style Ninjutsu
Fears:
• That someone is actually stronger than him.
• That his reality is actually not real.
• That one day he will die by Genjutsu.
• That someone will be able to break out of his Genjutsu.
• That he actually has a fear.

Class Disciplines :
• REM Sleep: The user's genjutsu prowess has enabled them to increase the amount of time a genjutsu is effective to an opponent. Increases duration 1 by post each time the user ranks up.
• Oracle: The character, through a special talent given at birth, can naturally sense chakra around them. The user can sense chakra around them up to a 5 yard radius without the use of a sensory technique. This radius is increased by 5 yards every time the user ranks up. Additionally, sensory techniques do not take up ninjutsu technique slots.
Reductions:
• None
Personal Attributes:
• Due to his mental instability and his prowess in Genjutsu, he has become quite adept at making things up giving him 2 extra custom slots.
• Mel has become very familiar with the chakra and how it changes and morphs with different people. He is now able to memorize peoples "chakra signitures" as well as sense hidden reserves of chakra. This also allows him to tell if someones chakra is either demonic or cursed in nature.

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Ryo: 0
AC: 0

Missions Complete:
D Rank :: 0
C Rank :: 0
B Rank :: 0
A Rank :: 0
S Rank :: 0

Limitations:
• Ninjutsu : : 00 / 08
• Genjutsu : : 00 / 12
• Taijutsu Styles: : 00 / 00
• Bukijutsu Styles: : 00 / 00

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Weapon Type: White Kunai
Weapon Range: 12 inches
Weapon Weight: 3 lbs
Weapon Location: Weapon Pouch
• White Kunai

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• x15 White Kunai (same as regular kunai, only white)
• x15 White Shuriken

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Maruton:
• Henge no Jutsu [ Transformation Technique ]
• Kawarimi no Jutsu [ Substitution Technique ]
• Genso Bushin no Jutsu [ Illusion Clone Technique ]
• Suimen Hokou no Waza [ Act of Water Surface Walking ]
• Kinobori no Waza [ Act of Tree Climbing ]
• Kai [ Release ]

Fuuton


Katon


▬▬┤|G e n j u t s u


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Melious, as a child, was very happy. Though his family was not extremely wealthy, he still enjoyed his childhood. He had good friends and great parents. The village that he lived in was a very small village in the Fire Country so they often went unnoticed when it came to assigning ninja for protection. IT was also known that this particular village had very little money, certainly not enough to buy missions above D-class. This made it easy for bandits and rogue ninja to come through and basically take whatever they wanted. One day, a rogue ninja decided to bust into Melious' home and take whatever seemed of value. The rogue took everything and when Melious tried to stop him, he was struck down easily. The rogue even took the pendant off of his mom's neck. That pendant was given to her by her husband. Later in Melious' life, he began to train himself as a ninja. Hoping that he would be able to ward off bandits. He was 8 when he learned how to use his first Genjutsu. He practiced this Genjutsu over and over on the woodland animals. One day he used it on a rabbit he saw. The rabbit would take off running, hopping in random directions before hitting a tree. It would run into the tree over and over and over again until it finally died. Melious would stare at the rabbit hours after the little incident. He cried for a while but then later stopped and began to smile. It was a wicked devilish smile. He did this technique again and again with other animals and they all did the exact same thing. Killing themselves. Melious loved being able to control the minds of other living things. It made him happy that he could kill something at anytime. But he began to grow bored of using it on animals so he decided to use it on a human. A little boy in fact. This boy liked to pick on the other kids and Melious hated that. One day the bully was in the woods with his friends when Melious stepped out and used his Genjutsu on them. They all started screaming and yelling about a pain in their heads. How there was laughing coming from all around them and it felt as if their heads were going to explode. They all began causing physical damage to their heads. Punching, scratching, banging against trees and branches trying to get the sounds out. This continued till all of them were unable to move. All the while, Melious was there. Watching it happen with a demonic smile on his face. He was happy that they were dead but then as he was walking off he heard one of the boys cough. Still hanging on to the small bit of life he still had. Melious walked up to him and looked down at him. The boy would become terrified as he saw Melious' chakra begin to manifest and change into a demon. A demon with a large sharp toothed grin and piercing eyes. Melious would pick up a large rock and hold it over the boys head, looking down at his terrified face. Melious would give a smile before dropping the stone which would kill the boy. Melious would wash up in a nearby river before heading home. When he got home he went straight to his room without speaking to either of his parents. As he slept that night, he could feel himself splitting. His inner-self was fighting against itself. One side of him wanted to kill and the other wanted to protect. The two sides began to fight. In his dream it looked like an army of angels and a lone demon were fighting. Each angel was slaughtered, one by one, by this lone demon. They were unable to defend themselves against the demons Genjutsu, even though some of them tried. The angels came in all sizes. Adult size, child size, fat, and even skinny. The battlefield looked to be some sort of wierd distorted village that was slowly burning down due to all the fighting. It went on all night until he awoke in his bed. When he awoke he went into the kitchen where his family was and sat at the table awaiting his food. His dad would ask if he was alright and Melious' would smile and look up saying everything was fine. His dad would then say "Good. I'm glad your okay because we love you son." The dad would smile and the mother would turn around smiling too. The words "We love you." would echo from every direction. Melious' would continue to smile as the words echoed. He smiled and smiled and smiled. Until finally everything around began to go wavey. Slowly distorting and then finally showing the truth. What was actually around him. Melious was sitting on the ground, in a pile of ashes where his house used to be. There were several small fires still going on. Bodies of dead villigers were scattered about the destroyed village. Melious' body and clothes were stained with blood. Tears would fall from his eyes as he continued to hear the words of his parents. He sat there in complete and total silence. After a night of sleeping in ash, he awoke with a large grin and stood up making a big yawn. He looked down at the bodies of his parents with a smile and began to speak to them about leaving the village and becoming a ninja in the Hidden Leaf Village. He spoke to them as if they were still alive. His mind was now unstable due to the horrific acts he did on the village and the people. He left the village and began his small adventure. His mental state was so off balance they he even made other personalities as friends to talk to on his journey. He would even allow them to use his body. Whether they be boy or girl. This is why in some of the villages he passed through, his sexuality was put into question. Sometimes a girl persona was in his body and sometimes a boy persona. He began to notice that this was strange to other people and made them want to avoid and shun him. He decided if he wanted to blend in then he needed to remain one person and act normal.He only spoke to his persona's in his head, in order to blend in with regular people. Melious would then find an old man who would take him in and raise as if he was his own. Even training him to be a ninja one day. Melious hoped that he would be a great ninja and be able to control anyone he wanted. Able to warp and distort their minds so they would bend to his will though he never told this to his sensai.
A couple years later, after the death of his sensai, he would make his way to the Hidden Leaf Village. He was still in need of more training. He came to this village with no bags or spare articles of clothing except for what he wore. And his clothing choices were a bit strange to people seeing as they showed skin and had wierd patterns and attachments. A few days of living on the streets, he was approached by a ninja who would allow him to live with him if Melious would join the academy. The ninja said he saw potential in Melious. Of course Melious took him up on his offer and did as he said. He enrolled in the academy at age 12, training and studying hard. Graduating at age 13 with all the basic skills of a ninja and becoming a true Genin. He enjoyed the time he spent in the village though throughout all the years that had past, not a day went by without thoughts of his actions in his original home and all the deaths he caused in that small vilage. Though these thoughts were not had out of. They were actually more like fond memories to him. Memories he enjoyed looking back on and laughing about to himself. He was now in a new village, one that was way bigger than his old one and filled with ninja who had the ability to defend themselves. If he could destroy this village, it would be a true testament to his power. The mere thought made him giddy with anticipation to the day when he was finally strong enough to destroy this place. The screams of his village could still be heard echoing in his head. Screams of pain and anguish. It was music to his ears and a foreshadow of things to come.
 
PostPosted: Fri Jan 18, 2013 11:25 am
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Okay, it all seems to be in order, but your second personal trait.
-Your trait can't make you outright know every genjutsu is a genjutsu just because you're of the same rank as someone. It can make your more aware than normal, and we usually level it to a slight or moderate degree. Yet outright resistance just based on rank isn't going to pass.
-Also despite the first trait being fine, the explanation behind it is confusing, since I guess you're trying to say his creativity affords him these extra slots, but what does his genjutsu have to do with it? Just a quirk, but yeah. You can edit or replace the second one.
 

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PostPosted: Fri Jan 18, 2013 11:44 am
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Okay, it all seems to be in order, but your second personal trait.
-Your trait can't make you outright know every genjutsu is a genjutsu just because you're of the same rank as someone. It can make your more aware than normal, and we usually level it to a slight or moderate degree. Yet outright resistance just based on rank isn't going to pass.
-Also despite the first trait being fine, the explanation behind it is confusing, since I guess you're trying to say his creativity affords him these extra slots, but what does his genjutsu have to do with it? Just a quirk, but yeah. You can edit or replace the second one.

Okay. The second trait I will change to something more acceptable, sorry for the mix up ^^;
The first trait. Using genjutsu is basically making an illusion. Most people who create illusions have to have their minds open to all possibilities even the inpossible. But that's just my way of looking at it. I can take it out if you'd like ^^;  
PostPosted: Fri Jan 18, 2013 12:32 pm
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For the first you really don't have to change it, like I said it's just a quirk, but each just let me know when you fix it. From what I'm still reading the second is still setting up a rank comparison which isn't going to be allowed.  

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PostPosted: Fri Jan 18, 2013 12:42 pm
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Changed my second personal trait thing. Hope this is better, trying to make something unique to him instead of something like strong legs to run fast or somethin generic sweatdrop  
PostPosted: Fri Jan 18, 2013 3:24 pm
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Full Name: Yehn Ming Uchiha, Aki
Nickname: Nothing so far

Age: 14 -2
Birthdate: April 21
Gender: Female

Height: 5,3 - 1,8
Weight: 114.5 lb -75lbs

Nindo: "Theres more to know and less to forgive."
Personality: Yehn is a airhead often falling face first in dirt but its mostly a cover up to cheer friends up. She will trust anyone first glance making her heart fragile. Compared to other Uchiha's her pride is driven by protecting those who cant defend themselves.

Aki is very protective of Yehn she hardly leaves the girls side.
Village: Konoha
Rank: Genin
First Class: Bukijutsu
Second Class: Tamer

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Bloodline: Uchiha/ Sharingan Dormant

Chakra Pool: 225 - 100
Stamina Pool: 250 - 125
Chakra Element: Fire,
Chakra Color: sky blue
Chakra Materialization: Takes the form of feathers floating around her.

Strengths:
• Sword play
• Tactical
Weaknesses:
• Sweets
• Suiton
Fears:
• Losing Aki
• Killing a loved one

Class Disciplines :
• Samurai: You follow Bushidō, the "Way of the Warrior." Your serene mind allows you to detect genjutsu you are trapped within that are two or more ranks below your own status rank, and your tempered body allows you to wear thick armor that a ninja would otherwise be dragged to their knees by. Additionally, you start with the following four (4) techniques, rather than the six (6) most ninja do; Bushi Ken no Jutsu [ Samurai Sabre Technique, ] Shunshin no Jutsu [ Body Flicker Technique, ] Kai [ Release, ] and Kawarimi no Jutsu [ Substitution Technique. ]

• Eternal Partners: The user is able to nurture, grow, and bond with a single animal, almost becoming an animal themselves with traits, characteristics, and natural weaponry. This single animal will be exactly the same at the user's level in chakra and stamina pool, and able to manipulate 2 elements, and learn collaboration with the user. It's like one mind shares 2 bodies, and 2 experiences. For every rank the user increases, they can claim a trait associated with their chosen animal (communicate with species, natural weaponry, senses, ect) to be approved in the custom jutsu thread, and add it to their character.

Reductions:
• Learns Bukijutsu techniques one [1] post faster

Personal Attributes:
• slightly increase speed higher than one of her rank.
• Tag team: Both Yehn and Aki learn Bukijutsu style [1] post when working together.

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Ryo: 両0
AC: 0

Missions Complete:
D Rank :: 0 0
C Rank :: 0
B Rank :: 0
A Rank :: 0
S Rank :: 0

Limitations:
• Ninjutsu : : 00 / 03
• Genjutsu : : 00 / 00
• Taijutsu Styles: : 00 / 01
• Bukijutsu Styles: : 00 / 02

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Weapon Type: Claymore
Weapon Range: five feet
Weapon Weight: 40lb
Weapon Location: Strapped horizontally on her lower back.


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• 15 Senbon
• 20 Shuriken
• Black silk gloves.
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Maruton:
• Henge no Jutsu [ Transformation Technique ]
• Kawarimi no Jutsu [ Substitution Technique ]
• Genso Bushin no Jutsu [ Illusion Clone Technique ]
• Suimen Hokou no Waza [ Act of Water Surface Walking ]
• Kinobori no Waza [ Act of Tree Climbing ]
• Kai [ Release ]

Katon





Bloodline


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▬▬┤|B u k i j u t s u




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Yehn was born on April 21 to a poor family that lived in a small village in the fire country. Her father would cause trouble for the family with his drinking often mistreating her Mother and older sister. When Yehn reached the age of five her mother couldn't take the abuse and took her daughters leaving the man. The three traveled on a wagon untill it was attacked. Yehn's mother and sister were killed defending the child from the slavers. Nine years has passed since that day her life as been cleaning to making meals for bandits. She couldn't stand being that place soo Yehn escaped during a night shift. For two weeks the girl had been traveling on her own untill she stumbled across a injured hawk. Yehn restored the animal back to health along the way to Konoha. A year has passed since the two partners lived in Konoha taking test at the academy passing each with hard work reaching the ranks of Genin.
 

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PostPosted: Fri Jan 18, 2013 3:41 pm
Fixed ?  
PostPosted: Fri Jan 18, 2013 3:53 pm
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Fixed ?

Using jutsu one handed is kinda a huge thing. I would edit it to say you can use any jutsu of your rank with one hand. Anything above your rank you cannot use, okay?

And good job on that bio. I find it interesting and can't wait to roleplay with this character.
 

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PostPosted: Fri Jan 18, 2013 3:57 pm
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Damn it, forgot your character ^^'

[Attributes]
→ Flash Step: That needs far more detail, such as the cap of speed, exactly what degree it speeds up, so on and so forth. Keep in mind that you will not be able to outrun the rank above you, not at all.

→ Tag Team: No issue, just going to say that I truly like this particular attribute :3


 
PostPosted: Fri Jan 18, 2013 8:20 pm
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Damn it, forgot your character ^^'

[Attributes]
→ Flash Step: That needs far more detail, such as the cap of speed, exactly what degree it speeds up, so on and so forth. Keep in mind that you will not be able to outrun the rank above you, not at all.

→ Tag Team: No issue, just going to say that I truly like this particular attribute :3




I fixed it and thank you biggrin im happy its liked  

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PostPosted: Fri Jan 18, 2013 8:25 pm
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Damn it, forgot your character ^^'

[Attributes]
→ Flash Step: That needs far more detail, such as the cap of speed, exactly what degree it speeds up, so on and so forth. Keep in mind that you will not be able to outrun the rank above you, not at all.

→ Tag Team: No issue, just going to say that I truly like this particular attribute :3




I fixed it and thank you biggrin im happy its liked


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That one attribute just really isn't working. You can say her speed is slightly higher than one of her rank, but that's about as far as I'd go. Honestly, I can think of alot of mechanics to make what I think you're saying work, but it gets complicated fast.

Just a suggestion.

 
PostPosted: Fri Jan 18, 2013 8:32 pm
Oh I like Aki I hope we'll be on the same squad or at least I'll get to have an all Bukijutsu sparring match with her. Would be fun. There's my two cents I decided to give for no particular reason XD  

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PostPosted: Fri Jan 18, 2013 9:54 pm
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Lanfaer
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Damn it, forgot your character ^^'

[Attributes]
→ Flash Step: That needs far more detail, such as the cap of speed, exactly what degree it speeds up, so on and so forth. Keep in mind that you will not be able to outrun the rank above you, not at all.

→ Tag Team: No issue, just going to say that I truly like this particular attribute :3




I fixed it and thank you biggrin im happy its liked


»»(φ)«« Ⱦђѯ ζσґȡ Ѻӻ DɒɱᾖᾆȶΊσᾖ »»(φ)««


That one attribute just really isn't working. You can say her speed is slightly higher than one of her rank, but that's about as far as I'd go. Honestly, I can think of alot of mechanics to make what I think you're saying work, but it gets complicated fast.

Just a suggestion.



Well ill go with that lol couldnt think of anything x3  
PostPosted: Fri Jan 18, 2013 11:32 pm
Tai-tai Grim

Okay this new trait seems interesting, but I'd say since everyone has a fears list on their character profile and just knowing all of them over time wit no limits in battle is far to meta to pass as a trait, I'll accept this trait if you edit it to allow you to learn only one fear without relevance to the actual Rp if you observe them for one post without distraction (e.x: someone trying to kill (like just that instant, brief pauses in battle that give you that space of time are free game) explosions, etc.).  

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PostPosted: Sat Jan 19, 2013 3:18 am
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Ok I fixed it. But so just so there is no confusion in the future, what do you mean by relevance to actual Rp? Are you saying I can't use the information in battle or... (honestly I doubt using it in battle will make much difference since mostly everyone tries to put down generic fears so they can pretend their RPC has none, like "afraid of dying" or "afraid of friends dying" I mean you can basically just guess these from anyone who just walks by ^^; )  
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