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 Posted: Tue Aug 04, 2009 5:48 pm
Im not telling until the contest is over.
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Posted: Tue Aug 04, 2009 5:50 pm
dude i seen the other poems, they all sucked but mine
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Posted: Tue Aug 04, 2009 5:55 pm
not true, a lot of them were well written, they dont have to rhyme to be a poem..im surprised someone wrote a haiku
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Posted: Tue Aug 04, 2009 5:56 pm
no actually i like the haiku one it was pretty funny
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Posted: Tue Aug 04, 2009 5:58 pm
I thought a good amount of them used imagery and other literature devices...everyone did well enough.
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Posted: Tue Aug 04, 2009 5:59 pm
it not the literacy im concern about it the crap they wrote about
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Posted: Tue Aug 04, 2009 6:00 pm
The Sadistic Toan it not the literacy im concern about it the crap they wrote about some of these people need to see a doctor
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Posted: Tue Aug 04, 2009 6:06 pm
 
I don't need to see a doctor!
D;<
O:
!!!!!!!
I was logged in for like hours and didn't even know it!
//soupy
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Posted: Tue Aug 04, 2009 6:09 pm
Teh Soupreme
I don't need to see a doctor!
D;<
O:
!!!!!!!
I was logged in for like hours and didn't even know it!
//soupy you sir are despicable. will you marry me? i love you? dream come true?! your saying that to a digimon, and what worst an animal you sir need a doctor!
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Posted: Tue Aug 04, 2009 6:11 pm
Didn't I say that it was meant to be realistic as in I was talking to a human?
I wasn't talking to Renamon too!
I wasn't talking about someone else!
>///<
Edit: WTF?!
Now I'm screwing up my words.
I mean I was talking about someone else in my poem!
You fool!
I think I've picked up you're kraziiness while you gained my niceness...
//soupy
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Posted: Tue Aug 04, 2009 6:12 pm
and the guy that talk about nibbling on the neck oh god that just wrong
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Posted: Tue Aug 04, 2009 6:24 pm
That is weird, but it's a poem so yeah.
Was the poem to be made talking about her?
//soupy
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Posted: Tue Aug 04, 2009 6:24 pm
i liked soups, it didn't seem bad to me...but that other guy...oh wow..
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Posted: Tue Aug 04, 2009 6:27 pm
Was it supposed to be talking to Renamon?
Cause my poem is based off this girl I liked...
//soupy
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Posted: Tue Aug 04, 2009 6:31 pm
Teh Soupreme
Was it supposed to be talking to Renamon?
Cause my poem is based off this girl I liked...
//soupy if it about another girl then it alright but that other guy has problem
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