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Reaper Elyse

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PostPosted: Mon Jan 07, 2013 10:17 am
Grand Chevalier Haji

Alright, if you don't want to go trough the trouble I'm okay with that, but if you had all the old links for the training you could have it added in.

Zero_ryukai

-Stamina should be 145
-Your first trait can't reduce by a rank, ranking things up or reducing them by a rank isn't being allowed, but it can reduce the cost by 10-15 points and no lower that a 5 point cost (E-rank), makes no sense to cast a technique wiht out using any chakra now does it? =3
- Your reduction for your bloodline I don't~ think stacks up to 3 since there isn't one given. so it' just 2 posts. (need to g see about that...) but yeah other these things, once you clear it all up you're good.


pliokiju

Sakuta Hentona Nara: Your first trait can be either moderate or slight not great.
- I need to get back to the adding back in the class traits because they're important and should be there i think. but yeah for now I'm not going to say anything about it even though when you look at the remakes they're not there.
-assuming you bought the larger arsenal of projectiles since this is a resubmit but you should link those.

Shito Namo" can you clarify your second trait a little better, do you mean you can hide your chakra and your physical self better or make it so your chakra signature is harder to get a bead on. because this wouldn't make you absolutely undetectable to a sensor it would just take longer to notice you're possibly a ninja/person and details following. just want to be sure of what this is doing exactly. other than that it's approved, but you need to respond to this.
 
PostPosted: Mon Jan 07, 2013 10:33 am
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Sakuta Hentona Nara: Your first trait can be either moderate or slight not great.
- I need to get back to the adding back in the class traits because they're important and should be there i think. but yeah for now I'm not going to say anything about it even though when you look at the remakes they're not there.
-assuming you bought the larger arsenal of projectiles since this is a resubmit but you should link those.

Shito Namo" can you clarify your second trait a little better, do you mean you can hide your chakra and your physical self better or make it so your chakra signature is harder to get a bead on. because this wouldn't make you absolutely undetectable to a sensor it would just take longer to notice you're possibly a ninja/person and details following. just want to be sure of what this is doing exactly. other than that it's approved, but you need to respond to this.
First off, for Doc, Doc is able to detect thing easier and specific things easier but theres the down fall of his migraines. this was i think an on the line thing but its has been accepted before. and for the class traits, I will try not to have them really affect my character very much until there is a decision about it. and Doc started off with all his inventory from the start which was accepted before. but he has picked up accouple things along the way.

For Shito, I have clarified it so that it is harder to detect his chakra.

For the class traits thing, I really don't know about it because I think that they are really useful for the character thats why I took them off of Shito but kept them on Doc.

Thank you.  

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PostPosted: Mon Jan 07, 2013 10:50 am
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Accepted before doesn't mean accepted now there have been relevant notices of slips in the past and this current transition has presented the mod staff with a chance to reform them since we've polished our standards as is. Also migraines which you dictate and pretty much can maneuver around in whatever fashion in Rp isn't a very strong hindrance that we can put to any kind of quantity to measure it. (basically the down side is weak unless describes in a further way of what it over all stops him from doing and how long it lasts.)

as for the items like before i can notice that you probably purchases some more so I'm giving that to you but again from now mark your purchases with a link.

Well the class traits as i've been cleared on are being replaced so they shouldn't be on doc, but I'm talking about it in the crew forum currently. I'd edit it out just to be safe though.

Sakuta Hentona Nara: pending
Shito Namo: Accepted
 
PostPosted: Mon Jan 07, 2013 10:59 am
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Full Name: Sakuta Hentona Nara
Nickname: Doc

Age: 16
Birthdate: Jan. 15
Gender: male

Height: 5' 1''
Weight: 100 lb

Nindo: "Nonviolence is the first article of my faith. It is also the last article of my creed."
Personality: very lazy, bored, caring, very friendly, and will do anything his family says.

Village: sand village
Rank: Genin
First Class: Medical class
Second class: Genjutsu


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Bloodline/Clan: Nara clan

Chakra Pool: 435
Stamina Pool: 65
Chakra Color: blue with a tint of a muddy colour
Chakra Element: Water, Earth
Chakra Materialization: Swirls around me like a whirl pool of water

Strengths:
• Have a photographic memory
• Eiseijutsu
Weaknesses:
• Bukijutsu
• Gets migraines every [3] posts when in combat and gets worse if he doesn't stop what he is doing to deal with it. (lasts 10 posts every 3 posts in combat)
Fears:
• tight spaces
• getting lost

Class Deciplines:
- Specialist: The user, choosing to specialize in either healing or harmful medical techniques, gains a great boost to their chakra control in that area. At Chunnin, they gain a -5 chakra reduction to perform techniques in their specialty. at Jounin, -10, at Konin -15 at Sannin -20. To clarify, they they gain a -5 chakra reduction every rank, to a maximum of -20 at sannin.
- Mental Defenses: The user is more aware of how a genjutsu affects the mind, making them more aware and able to detect genjutsu and thus more resistant to it. Increases genjutsu detection, and reduces Kai cost by 1 rank.
Class Attribute:

Reductions:
- Ninjutsu [1] post faster
- Eistijutsu [1] post faster
Personal Attributes:
- Vision moderately increased (i.e. can see specifics greatly better then a normal person, can see faults in something, can see if there's something wrong with a person.)
- [2] extra Eiseijutsu slots


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Ryo 両Money: 400
AC: 950

Missions Complete:
D Rank :: 3
C Rank :: 0
B Rank :: 1
A Rank :: 0
S Rank :: 0

Limitations:
- Eiseijutsu : : 07 / 10
- Ninjutsu : : 05 / 07
- Genjutsu : : 04 / 11
- Taijutsu Styles: : 00 / 00
- Bukijutsu Styles: : 00 / 00

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Weapon Type: none
Weapon Range: n/a
Weapon Weight: n/a
Weapon Location: n/a

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- Shuriken x20
- smoke bombs x14
- Kuni x15
- sendon x9

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Maruton
• Henge no Jutsu [Transformation Technique]
• Kawarimi no Jutsu [Substitution Technique]
• Genso Bunshin no Jutsu [ Illusion Clone Technique ]
• Suimen Hokou no Waza [Act of Water Surface Walking]
• Kinobori no Waza [Act of Tree Climbing]
• Kai [Release]

Suiton
- Uo Tsuba [ Fish Spit ]
-Mizu Tate no Jutsu [ Water Shield Technique ]
-Mizu Bunshin no Jutsu [ Water Clone Technique ]

Doton
- Tsuchi Gunjikoudou no Jutsu [ Earth Military Movement Technique ]
- Doton Bunshin no Jutsu [ Earth Clone Skill ]

Eiseijutsu
- Shindan [ Diagnosis ]
- Tekishutsu [ Extraction ]
- Reimyo Honnui [ Delicate Stitching ]
- Chiyute No Jutsu: Karui [ Healing Hands Technique: Minor ]
- Teikouryoku [Power of Resistance ]
- Kuchiyose: Eiseimono [ Summon: Medical Tools ]
- Jokyo Dokubutsu [ Poison Removal ]
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Kageton
- Kageton: Endai Yami [ Shadow Release: Far Reaching Darkness ]
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▬▬┤|G e n j u t s u

- Iwa no Jutsu [ Rock Technique ]
- Kowaikao no Jutsu [ Scary Face Technique ]
- Kiri no Jutsu [ Mist Technique ]
-Shonben no Jutsu [ Urine Technique ]
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Sakura grew up with his aunt and uncle for he lost his parents when he was a little child by an attack on his village and he was there to watch the whole thing. So his uncle and aunt took him in to their care. His uncle was a medical shinobi and one of the best in his time. Sakura wasn't doing anything with his life and was just eating everything they had so they told him to go to school to become a shinobi for his uncles sake. They lived on the outskirts of Suna and he would have to walk to school every day, and his uncle knew this, which is one of the reasons for sending him there to make him fit. Sakura loved his uncle and wanted to be just like him so he started to follow in his uncles footsteps in becoming a great medical shinobi.


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Stamina Pool: 65
Ryo: 400
AC: 950[/size]
 

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PostPosted: Mon Jan 07, 2013 11:09 am
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Full Name: Rakuin Shimiru Sanmiitai & Tetsubou
Nickname: Ryoukyokutan, Raku

Age: Fifteen : : 1
Birthdate: January 3rd : : August 17th
Gender: Male : : Male

Height: 5' 10" : : 2' 6"
Weight: 140 Lbs : : 85 lbs

Nindo: "Blood and steel above all, honor be damned."
Personality: As the eldest, whom inherited the valued family blood, Rakuin had spent a great deal of his time under the watchful eye of their mother. The young man tends to fall in line with habits brought in under her tutelage, in which he is to remain dutiful to blood first (while the village comes second, a teaching that he keeps silent), and remain forceful. A will of steel, so to speak.
While dealing with most, Rakuin will quietly take most direct opinions being pushing upon him, and simply wave them off. Orders are to be followed, with little question, however when something comes in direct violation of his own convictions, here is where we get to meet the vocal side of him with authority figures.
More often than not, when dealing with others of an age with him, Rakuin will be a bit more awkward, uncertain of things to say with many others, he'll often resort to the things not so tactful. With the siblings, there's a slight bit of resentment he tends to hide beneath affection, though over all.
Tetsubou tends to stand off to the side of most interactions, choosing to remain close to Rakuin.

Village: Konohagakure
Rank: Genin
First Class: Bukijutsu
Second Class: Tamer
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Bloodline: Koton: Steel Release

Chakra Pool: 225 : : 110
Stamina Pool: 250 : : 125
Chakra Element: Doton : : Futon
Chakra Color: Bronze and platinum
Chakra Materialization: It materializes in a form few actually notice, as it ebbs from his feet in simple pulses.

Strengths:
• High Agility
• Weight Shifting
Weaknesses:
• Mid ranged combat; Rakuin functions best in either extreme range of combat, pushing him to the middle reduces accuracy greatly.
• Raiton
Fears:
• Storms: Somehow, mixing steel coated limbs and the raw power of a lightning strike doesn't sound appealing...
• The Sea: High quantities of corrosive materials in the very air you breath? Becoming a statue sounds no good!
• Scissors: A natural fear of Tetsubou's, as a species consistently sheared for their wool, there's a lingering fear of shearing tools.

Class Disciplines :
Mystic Hero: The user is much like a hybrid warrior, focusing on mixing ninjutsu into their personal arsenal. Through their great devotion to this path the user can cast ninjutsu without hand seals while wielding a weapon, D at gennin, C at chunnin, B at Jounin, A at Konin, and S at Sannin. These techniques maintain the same description and criteria to use, as well as require the same amount of time to mold the chakra through the weapon as would be needed to perform hand seals, meaning the techniques are not instantaneously cast. The user’s spirit is so strong, that they can utilize their physical bukijutsu techniques to negate ninjutsu techniques of the same rank or below.
Beast Master: The user is able to nurture grow, and bond with up to 3 animals, of various shapes and sizes (one lizard, one canine, one feline, ect), with the user being able to receive similar traits to their animals(must submit to customs). These animals will be close to the users level, though still requiring the leader for nurturing, growth, ect. The animals will not be able to pass Jounin level, even if the user can. They have 1/2 the user's chakra and stamina pool, while only being able to manipulate a single element. At gennin, the user can choose a single trait associated with their animal companion. At chunnin, when the user gains their second animal conpanion, the user may choose another trait associated with this single companion. At jounin, when the user gains their third companion, they may choose another trait associated with that animal. Each trait must be submitted to the custom jutsu thread.
Reductions:
• Learns Bukijutsu [1] Post Faster

Personal Attributes:
• Freedom of Frame: Able to learn physical styles without the necessary body type.
• The Noble's Privilege: Obtains a bonus [10] Ryo & AC for every [100] Ryo & AC earned.

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Ryo:
AC:

Missions Complete:
D Rank :: 0
C Rank :: 0
B Rank :: 0
A Rank :: 0
S Rank :: 0

Limitations: {How many of each technique you can learn. Refer to class info}
• Ninjutsu : : 00 / 03
• Genjutsu : : 00 / 00
• Taijutsu Styles: : 00 / 01
• Bukijutsu Styles: : 00 / 01

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Weapon Type: Winged Spear
Weapon Range: 50 inch haft, 8 inch point
Weapon Weight: 30 Lbs
Weapon Location: Strapped vertically upon his back.


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• Senbon x10
• Kunai x10
• Shuriken x10

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Maruton: {Start with the following six only}
• Henge no Jutsu [ Transformation Technique ]
• Kawarimi no Jutsu [ Substitution Technique ]
• Genso Bushin no Jutsu [ Illusion Clone Technique ]
• Suimen Hokou no Waza [ Act of Water Surface Walking ]
• Kinobori no Waza [ Act of Tree Climbing ]
• Kai [ Release ]


Doton


Fuuton


Koton


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Born just within the outskirts of the village hidden in the leaves to a former shinobi, and his precious noble lady. A scandal it may have been, but little did they care. The small noble family were tying themselves to a clan possessing Kekkei Genkai, and the power it afforded them was most welcome. Three were carried through the lady's pregnancy, and into the world came first the eldest, Samuru. After which came Rakuin, and at last, Maylee. In this retelling of the history of the trio, we focus on Rakuin.

Time passed slowly on, and when it became apparent that the eldest brother of trio possessed not the trait of the bloodline, it quickly became apparent that to ensure their place of power, no matter how meager... It was to be Rakuin who would be selected for the duty to come. With it, came the long and arduous process of socializing for a climate not even he was prepared for. Passive aggressive people, wheeling and dealing wherever. However they could. It seemed the only time he had fun, were the few times he played with his own siblings, or even watched his father practice. The serene grace one could move, even while coated in steel... It was entrancing.

About the time that the decision had been made for what was to become of the three children, things were muddled beyond comprehension. With Rakuin in line to inherit a position of nobility, he was to actually receive tutelage from his father, for the sake of defense. A show of power in time. The decision had been made for Maylee and Samuru to be sent to the academy, without the knowledge that their brother would not be joining the pair. This news... It was undermining everything he had been taught, by his mother and father. Blood was everything. It could be more powerful than even the black steel that the children could make use of. This was the first time he met the decision, and did something against the wishes of the clan. Rakuin ran.

Through the village, in fact, until he met a sight he'd never seen on the premises of the clan grounds. People, walking side by side with animals of all shapes and sizes, predominantly was it sighted that canines were a particular favorite, due to the heavy influence the Inuzuka had. It was in this, that inspired the boy in his off time... Or time when he'd slip away, that he'd talk and study with the Inuzuka. Learn of their bonds with animals, and it quickly became apparent how much less pressure they must have felt with one another. Not that he could do anything. He wasn't going to be a Shinobi, after all. Upon his way home one night, it was a sight to be seen. Sweet Samuru, the elder brother, was stealing! Aghast at the possible slander of the name they bore, ever duty bound, he went to the one person he knew could cover it up better than most. Their father.

Unfortunately, they had arrived a bit late. While the situation was cleared up, it was without opportunity to clear up without incident. Poor Samuru and Maylee... And even worse, retribution was quick to follow upon the just party, no less. There was ruin, and blood. Lots of blood. His idol fell before his very eyes, and orders were simple. Get them to safety. It was his duty, as the heir to defend them, and lead them. Even with that, he failed to complete wholly. Their mother was next to fall, in practice with her duty. The children escaped, but no longer did it matter. Samuru and Maylee were safe, and Rakuin felt nothing. A pit. He disappeared in the night. He'd already failed, and the boy sought comfort above all else. Where to turn? Where to go? He knew not where he went, but when he awoke, it was an odd sight. White fluff, wherever he looked.

Was he dead? Had he died fulfilling the wishes of his father and mother? Baaa! His eyes snapped wide open, looking about. He was not dead, he'd somehow awakened within the barn of a farmer, keeping an odd sort of beast on hand. Big horn sheep. One little ewe had taken upon herself to keep the boy warm through the night. A hug and a whispered thanks, he disappeared again, to track down his siblings, and see what kind of damages were done. Their mother wounded and unresponsive to most stimuli, it was up to the three to do what they could, even while the case fell away into sand at the lightest touch. A crime unanswered, duty bound Rakuin took up a mantle beside his siblings. To enter the academy, and become shinobi.

Aside from interaction with his brother and sister, the poor child had little time to interact with other students. In class, out to learn of merchants and dealings. When it came down to his free time, it became split. The Inuzuka were constant companions, though it was the animals he came for. Then, there was the farmer and the ewe who'd given the boy comfort. For years, that farm was a haven. He watched the first ewe pass, with a final lamb, and when that one grew, his time in the academy was about to come to a close, and that lamb begot another, a male. The first male. A day to learn to walk and climb, and then it was off, developing its own person. A stubborn little thing. The boy of steel met with someone for the first time, much like himself. Scrounging what little coin he could, the little lamb was soon his, and given the name Tetsubou. Months have passed since the two became a pair, but upon graduation from the academy, it was clear that their journey was only beginning. Brother, sister, and his precious Tetsubou.
 
PostPosted: Mon Jan 07, 2013 2:50 pm
Reaper Elyse

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-Stamina should be 145
-Your first trait can't reduce by a rank, ranking things up or reducing them by a rank isn't being allowed, but it can reduce the cost by 10-15 points and no lower that a 5 point cost (E-rank), makes no sense to cast a technique wiht out using any chakra now does it? =3
- Your reduction for your bloodline I don't~ think stacks up to 3 since there isn't one given. so it' just 2 posts. (need to g see about that...) but yeah other these things, once you clear it all up you're good.


-done
-done
-it is three, bloodline class does reduce it mrgreen  

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Full Name: Thanatos Hatake
Nickname: Thana

Age: 18
Birthdate:Month of June
Gender: Male

Height: 5'11
Weight: 175

Nindo: "I will fufill our dream to become a great shinobi"
Personality: Like a true Hatake he is calm and decisive , he doesn't get as cheery as his brother ever since he lost his eye sight in one eye at a young age. Though he can still show kindness,

Village: Kumogakure
Rank: Chunnin
First Class: Ninjutsu
Second Class: Bloodline

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Bloodline:Hatake

Chakra Pool:415
Stamina Pool: 180
Chakra Element: Water,Lightning
Chakra Color: Black
Chakra Materialization: His chakra takes the form of a panther's head with black lightning surging through it.

Strengths:
• Ninjutsu
• Raiton
Weaknesses:
• Doton
• Wind
Fears:
• Failing his brother
• Dying without accomplishing anything.

Class Disciplines :
• Elemental Dual Wielder: Your maximum chakra pool is increased by {10} points. The ninjutsu limit provided by this class is split amongst both of your chosen elements. ( At genin rank, rather than having a total of [ 06 ] ninjutsu slots for Katon or Suiton techniques, this class provides you with [ 06 ] slots for both Katon and Suiton techniques. Any ninjutsu slots received from other sources are filled at your discretion. )
•Blood Knight: Your bloodline techniques possess greater power, allowing them to overwhelm techniques of the same rank, and preventing them from succumbing to elemental weaknesses of techniques the same rank.
Reductions:
• Ninjutsu -1 post
• Bloodline -1 post
• Raiton -1 post
Personal Attributes:
• Thanatos physical training nullifies all rigorous style restrictions. Though the training takes longer (+1 Tai and Buki training)
• Thanatos can learn one extra Bukijutsu Style

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Ryo: 両2400
AC: 5450

Missions Complete:
D Rank :: 0
C Rank :: 0
B Rank :: 0
A Rank :: 0
S Rank :: 0

Limitations: {How many of each technique you can learn. Refer to class info}
• Ninjutsu : : 00 / 015 (9 slots split amongst elements))
• Genjutsu : : 00 / 05
• Taijutsu Styles: : 00 / 01
• Bukijutsu Styles: : 00 / 02(1 slot from personal attribute)

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Weapon Type: Katana
Weapon Range: 65 cm
Weapon Weight: 3 pounds
Weapon Location: Back


Summoning Type:
Summon Sage:
Pacts:

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• 10 Kunai
• 10 Shuriken
• 10 Senbon

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Maruton: {Start with the following six only}
• Henge no Jutsu [ Transformation Technique ]
• Kawarimi no Jutsu [ Substitution Technique ]
• Genso Bushin no Jutsu [ Illusion Clone Technique ]
• Suimen Hokou no Waza [ Act of Water Surface Walking ]
• Kinobori no Waza [ Act of Tree Climbing ]
• Kai [ Release ]
• Kage Bunshin no Jutsu [ Shadow Clone Technique ]
Rank: B
Training
Lightning
•Raikou Bunshin no Jutsu [ Lightning Clone Technique ]
Rank: E-Learned
•Teikou no Kuntou [ Electrical Resistance Training ]
Rank: E
•Nagare Tensou no Jutsu [ Current Transfer Technique ]
Rank: D
•Raikou Henge no Jutsu [ Lightning Transformation Technique ]
Rank: D
•Dendou Bakuhatsu no Jutsu [ Electric Explosion Technique ]
Rank: C
•Raikou Hitofuki no Jutsu [ Lightning Blast Technique ]
Rank: C
•Dendou Enmu no Jutsu [ Electric Fog Technique ]
Rank: B
Training
Water
•Suiben [ Water Whip ] Rank: E
•Mizu Shuriken no Jutsu [ Water Shuriken Technique ]
Rank: D
•Mizu no Tatsumaki [ Tornado of Water ]
Rank: C
•Sensatsu Suishou [ Thousand Flying Water Needles of Death ] Rank: B
•Baku Suishouha [ Bursting Water Collision Waves ]
Rank: B
•Suiryuudan no Jutsu [ Water Dragon Projectile Technique ] Rank: B
•Ten no Gachan Hashira [ Crashing Pillar of Heaven ]
Rank: A
Training
Hatake
•Raiton: Shiroi Yaiba (Lightning Release: White Blade)
•Rank - D
•Raiton: Shiroi Yari (Lightning Release: White Spear)
•Rank - D
•Raiton: Tanto Yaiba (Lightning Release: Tanto Blade)
•Rank - C
•Raiton: Hatake (Lightning Release: Scarecrow)
•Rank - B
•Chidori Sai (One Thousand Birds Cut)
•Rank - B
•Shiroi Chidori (One Thousand White Birds)
•Rank - A
•Chidori Tatsumaki (One Thousand Birds Tornado)
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___S t a g e ○ O n e [1]
Ittoryu [ One-sword School ] Rank: E :: Sword Style

___S t a g e ○ T w o [2]
Itto-Ryu Iai: Shishi Sonson [ One Sword Style Draw and Resheath Technique: Lion's Song ] Rank: D :: Simple

Hiryuu Kaen [ Flying Dragon Impulse ]Rank: D :: Complex

San-Juu-Roku Pondo Hou [ Single Sword Rising Phoenix ] Rank: D :: Complex

___S t a g e ○ T h r e e [3]
Nitoryu [ Two-Sword School ]Rank: B :: Sword Style

Sai Kuru [ Rhino Rampage ]Rank: C :: Simple

Nigiri [ Double Slash ]Rank: C :: Simple

Tourou [ Climbing a Tower ]Rank: C :: Complex

Outourou [ Reply Climbing a Tower ]Rank: C :: Complex

Hirameki [ Flash ] Rank: C :: Complex
__S t a g e ○ F o u r [4]
Samon [ Sand Drawing ]Rank: B :: Complex

Nitou-Ryuu Iai: Rashoumon [ Two Sword Style Draw and Resheath Technique: Rashou Gate ]Rank: B :: Simple

Nana-Juu-Ni Pound Hou [ Dual Sword Soaring Phoenix ]Rank: B :: Complex
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Stage One,E Rank

○ Basic Chop

○ Forward Step

○ Backward Step

○ Basic Stab

○ Basic Block

Stage Two,D Rank

○ Pivot Block

○ Forward Grind

○ Deflection One

○ Disarming One

Stage Three, C Rank

○ Calligraphy

○ Extension

○ Thread Walking One

○ Solid Footing

Stage Four,B Rank

○ Swordslinger

○ Sensory Information

○ Twin Blade

○ Brush Stroke

○ Hydra Strike

○ Disarming Two

○ Deflection Two

○ Advancement of Steel
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The Beginning

Thanatos was born in Kumogakure, when the Hatake exiled themselves many went to Suna, but his parents went to Kumo. They stayed there together and had him. In the early years of his life he wasn't very social. He didn't go and play with other children unless he was invited. That's where he met Demetri, you see Demetri wasn't his blood brother. But that is for later, Now he met Demetri and they almost instantly became friends. They both shared a loyalty to the village and a pride within themselves to be the best. Some people would mistake them for siblings since they both had silverish hair. But Demetri's skin was a tad tanner than Thanatos. Thanatos was glad he had such a good friend someone who was like a brother to him. They made a pact that they would become great shinobi together and would always be there for the other.

The Tragedy

Then one day, Demetri didn't come to the park to play. He found this strange but his mother told him not to worry he might have just been busy. But a week went by and he didn't see Demetri at all. Worried for his friend he headed to his house. When he arrived he knocked a few times, noone answered and he didn't here anyone inside. At first he feared that they had maybe moved away. But he shook his head and knocked one more time. No answer, but suddenly he heard something move. He called out Demetri's name but heard no answer he opened the door and entered. The entire house was dark, the sun was setting and no natural light was showing through the drawn curtains. He turned on a light of the kitchen and he found Demetri sitting at the table alone. A bowl of half eaten rice in front of him, he looked over at the sink and noticed many dishes piled up. This was strange as his mom would always be cleaning."Demetri?" said in a questional tone. He saw something glinting on Demetri's cheeks and it feel to the table. He was crying, in all his years of knowing Demetri he had never seen him cry.He was going to take a step towards him when he finally spoke."They're dead."He said, Thanatos tilted his his what did he mean by that."Wh-"He was cut off before he could ask."MY PARENTS!" He yelled, another thing Demetri didn't usually do in such a manner. It was a feeling of mix anger and sorrow."They were heading to support a team who had asked for backup, when they arrived they were ambushed, their team fought and killed them. But my parents...they didn't survive...I-I don't have any family left." Demetri tears had stopped, but you could feel the anger coming from the boy. Thanatos felt bad for him walked up to his side placing a hand on his shoulder. Demetri looked up at him as Thanatos smiled."Come be a part of my family, you can become my brother." Demetri eyes widened in surprise before he could speak Thanatos added."We will always be there for each other Demetri." Demetri's anger left him, he wiped the wet spots off his face and stood. He followed Thanatos him. His parents warmly and gladly accepted him into their home and family. So Thanatos and Demetri became brothers, and they would smile and laugh when people asked them if they were.


The Incident

But then, an something happened. When they were about 11 they had gotten jobs to make some money for themselves. Simple things like chopping firewood or gathering herbs. One day they had been finishing up various jobs and being paid for them. The last one was delivering firewood to a old man who lived in the forest outside of Kumogakure. Though there parents didn't allow them to leave and go that far off. The man paid well so they wanted to make a little more then they usually do. Everything went fine with the delivery. The man paid and they were on their way. While heading back they were stopped by some bandit. He demanded the money they had, he must have seen the old man pay them. Demetri in an attempt to help them escape picked up a stick and threw it at the man, it hit him in the eye and he yelled in pain. They both ran off, but they weren't fast enough. He cut them off and he was angry."You little brat, I'm gonna cut your eyes out!"he yelled as he pulled out a kunai and slashed Demetri. Thanatos watched as the man attacked his brother. So he pushed him out of the way and took the attack. He slashed his eye and Thanatos screamed in pain, Demetri was instantly by his side trying to protect him from the bandit. They were so scared, they didn't know what to do. They were just kids...but then everything fell silent. The bandit fell dead on the floor. The anbu had arrived after hearing yells from the bandit. The took Demetri home and hospitalized Thanatos. At the hospital Demetri was there when they told his parents that he had lost the use of his eye. When they told the doctor if there son could still be a shinobi. He informed them that he could no longer qualify. Thanatos laid in the bed, pretending to be asleep. He couldn't believe that his dream was over. They wouldn't allow him to be a shinobi even if he tried. After many hours had passed by Demetri finally came up to him, apologizing for ruining his life and his dreams. Thanatos merely smiled and placed his hand on his brothers shoulder."You'll just have to fulfill our dreams Demetri." Demetri looked at him with a surprised look. He then nodded with a look of sheer determination in his eyes.

Two Dreams, One Goal.


And then the years went by, Demetri went to the academy and came back to show Thanatos how to do what he had learn. Then Demetri became a genin and he became increasingly busier, training doing missions all that sort of stuff. Then when he was a chunnin his schedule slowed. But then Demetri returned one day being carried by his teammates. His family was called and told that he was in a Coma and they had no idea when he would wake up. At the time Thanatos began thinking of what Demetri made him promise a long time ago. But he wouldn't consider it as long as his brother had a pulse. He finally woke up one day, he looked physically unwell. But that was probably from the many weeks on inactivity. He had even told him that the doctors said his junk had shrunk! Thanatos was happy Demetri was ok it was good to have his brother alive and well.


Tragedy Repeats Itself


But it seemed, with Demetri history would always repeat itself. And a tragedy fell upon the Hatake family. It seemed like a normal day, Thanatos came back from working out, even though he wasn't a ninja it didn't mean he couldn't be fit. He neared his house seeing someone with a black cloak and a mask at his door talking to his parent. His thoughts instantly fell on Demetri."What did that idiot get himself into this time?"He asked himself with a small smirk, but his smirk was instantly wiped off when his mother fell to the floor. Crying her eyes out, a feeling sunk deep in his being. It was dread. He rushed to his mothers side asking what happened. The Anbu remained silent and his father kneeled next to him."Its about Demetri...He died on a mission...earlier today." Thanatos heard it but it didn't register completely in his mind. He just shook his head."No, you're wrong there's no way." He said completely and outright denying it. The anbu asked them to come and confirm the body. Thanatos wanted his parent to stay while he went but his mother insisted she went. When they arrived at the hospital they were taken to the morgue. A doctor took them to a table that had silver hair coming out of the edges of the cloth. Thanatos mother instantly started crying again. His father holding her tight, the doctor asked Thanatos to confirm the body. And He pulled the cover off, and Thanatos was in disbelief. There lay the body of his brother. His only sibling even though they weren't connected by blood. He fell to his knees he clenched the metal table his brother laid upon. And anger shook his entire body and for the first time ever since they were attacked by that bandit. Thanatos cried it was a silent but angry cry. His tears hit the floor making the sound of water dripping. Only footsteps broke through the dripping sound. He carried Demetri's belonging, his headband, his weapons, and his little orange book. He would always make fun of him for keeping that little thing. It was almost like a diary but he called it a journal. There was also a note Thanatos took the note and opened it reading it too himself."Remember your promise."It said. He closed his eyes remembering the promise he made. It had only been a week after Demetri had entered the academy. He woke up Thanatos late in the night."Thanatos, I'm going to be a shinobi someday...I'll be going on dangerous missions if anything ever happens to me...I want you to have my eye." Thanatos was struck mute by this he didn't know what had brought this to his brothers mind. He tried to reason with him but Demetri merely shook his head and told him to promise. Thanatos promised that he would take his brothers eyes. To fulfill their dream of becoming a great shinobi. Thanatos opened his eyes to find the medic shinobi holding another note dressed to the hospital."This is Demetri's final wish...I'm sure it corresponds with the note you received, Are you ready?"Thanatos wiped away his tears and nodded. They immediately took him and Demetri into another room for the surgery to began the implantation. Thanatos laid against the operating table as a mask was placed over his mouth and nose."Demetri...You'll become my eye, and I'll see the future for you, I shall become a great shinobi, for both of us!"


The Last Beginning

With his brothers eye now replacing the eye he lost so long ago. Thanatos has received permission to become a shinobi. Being too old to attend the academy but because of his brother he passed the exam with flying colors. Wearing Demetri's mask and the headband he wore as a shinobi which covers his real eye while leaving Demetri's green eye exposed for the world to see. He wanted them to know, that a great shinobi died. And he was to take his place and become even better fulfilling their dreams.
 
PostPosted: Mon Jan 07, 2013 6:38 pm
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the traits still has to be either slight or moderate, in this case moderate. the usefulness and the detail you put in parenthetical will still apply they general wording just follows a certain format and constraints. ( the constraints still don't overwrite the system as is from what I've gotten clear)
After that it's approved.


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Full Name: Jack Harren Snipe 
Nickname: The Mad Carny (Not Official) 

Age: 18 
Birthdate: He does not know 
Gender: Male 

Height: 5' 3” 
Weight: 98 lbs 

Nindo: "Take the truth that others would rather not see, and drag it kicking and screaming into the light. For only when truths are revealed is the world made whole."  
Personality: There is only one word that describes Jack properly: Odd. He speaks in riddles, in rhymes too horrible for most to bear. He likes to test people, finding out who and what they really are, though his main purpose is to force THEM to see who they really are, force them to face their demons within. He paints horrific images that seem to drag the eye to them, a truth hidden within so far that not even Jack can see to their heart. While not quiet, neither is he talkative, and above all he fears nothing. Its not that he's a cold hearted kid, oh no. Its just that nothing he experiences will ever be as horrifying as the images in his own head. Always, no matter what, there is a smile on his lips.

Village: Kirigakure 
Rank: Chuunin 
First Class: Genjutsu 
Second Class: Musician 
 
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Bloodline: Sakkakugan

Chakra Pool:600 
Stamina Pool: 125 
Chakra Element: Maruton
Chakra Color: Dark Maroon, almost black 
Chakra Materialization: Creeping things, moving in shadows, writhing as if the shadows were alive. As if his chakra was a gate to the world of the dead itself, the spirits trying to crawl out into the light. Noises accompany it, a thousand whispers filled with secrets and playing across the mind.  

Strengths: 
• Genjutsu
• Using your own fears against you
• Diplomacy 
• Strategy
• Understanding Human Emotions and the Drive Behind Them
• Understanding a person through their movements and actions  
Weaknesses: 
• Physical Combat
• Is lost in thought far too often
• Speaks in riddles that others find difficult to understand
• Always creepy, and always seeming to have an air of mystery, as if he knows far more than is comfortable to those who are looking at him  
Fears: 
• His Memories, the ones buries that come out in his dreams
• Himeself
• {Besides this, Jack possesses no fear, as his mind and memories are far more horrifying than anything he's ever seen} 

Class Disciplines : 
Inception: The user's genjutsu prowess has increased the sheer power of the genjutsu, making them act a rank higher then they are (up to S rank). This increases the Kai cost for an opponent.  
• Grand Performance: The user can perform both types of arts (ninjutsu and genjutsu) through their performance or instrument, often casting them at the same time (must pay for both techniques). Can perform D rank techniques through instrument at gennin, C and Chunnin, B at jounin, A at Konin, and S at Sannin.
Reductions: 
• Genjutsu → 3 Posts 
• Ninjutsu → 1 Post
Personal Attributes: 
Creative Thinking: Oddly enough, Jack has absolutely no ability with elemental jutsu in any way. He has no chakra elements. Due to this irregularity, the only jutsu he seems to have any true quality with are customized jutsu and Maruton. With this attribute, Jack gains 2 additional customized jutsu slots, and a -1 to learning them.
Perception: With Jack's constant exposure to Genjutsu in current day and in his unknown past, along with his incredibly high IQ (today's standards, he'd be a Wunderkind), Jack is able to realize Genjutsu in ways few others can. Because of this, his ability to realize Genjutsu is increased.
 
 
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Ryo: 両520 
AC: {Advancement credit} {Start at zero} {Additional information in mission board subforum} 

Missions Complete: 
D Rank :: 0 {All start at zero} 
C Rank :: 0 
B Rank :: 0 
A Rank :: 1 
S Rank :: 0 

Limitations: {How many of each technique you can learn. Refer to class info} 
• Ninjutsu : : 00 / 11 
• Genjutsu : : 09 / 16 
• Custom Jutsu : : 02 / 07
• Bloodline : : 04 / ∞
• Taijutsu Styles: : 00 / 00 
• Bukijutsu Styles: : 00 / 00 
 
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Weapon Type: Walking Cane (Doubles as a Flute)
Weapon Range: 3 Feet + Arm Length 
Weapon Weight: 6 Pounds
Weapon Location: In his hand

Summoning Type:
Summon Sage:
Pacts: 

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• Odd Carny Outfit instead of Flak Jacket 
• 10 Explosive Tags
• Small Drum
• Small Harp
• Instrument Cleaning Tools
• Deck of Cards (300 cards)
• Chess Board
• Periscope
• Fingerbones (Divining)
• Crystal Ball
• Single Exotic Feather
• Top Hat (in which feather rests)


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Maruton: {Start with  
• Henge no Jutsu [ Transformation Technique ] 
• Kawarimi no Jutsu [ Substitution Technique ] 
• Genso Bushin no Jutsu [ Illusion Clone Technique ] 
• Suimen Hokou no Waza [ Act of Water Surface Walking ] 
• Kinobori no Waza [ Act of Tree Climbing ] 
• Kai [ Release ] 

Maruton  
•Oboro Bunshin no Jutsu [ Haze Clone Technique ]  → D Rank
→ Oboro Bunshin no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique utilized by the Rain Genin team lead by Oboro. Oboro Bunshin is a normal Bunshin technique that created approximately a hundred clones of their Genin team. Due to the number of clones created, Oboro and his team can take the opportunity to hide from their target. To attack their target they will hide in the shadows of the clones and attack from underground.
•Kirigakure no Jutsu [ Hidden Mist Technique ]  → D Rank
Kirigakure no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique utilized by Hidden Mist Shinobi. The Shinobi causes the area surrounding their target to be covered in fog. The low visibility allows the Shinobi to silently and secretly assassinate their target. 
•Gama Daira Kage Ayatsuri no Jutsu [ Toad Flat Shadow Control Technique ]  → B Rank
 Gama Daira Kage Ayatsuri no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique that allows Jiraiya to merge into the shadow of subdued foe. Jiraiya can then fully control the victim from within their shadow, allowing him to more easily infiltrate foreign territories. If he has to use his other Jutsu, he must emerge from the shadow. Once he fully emerges, the hold over his victim is broken and they regain control of their body. 
•Kage Bunshin no Jutsu [ Shadow Clone Technique ]  → B Rank
Creates a solid clone which is able to interact with the environment, and perform any technique that the user knows. The strength of each clone is dependent on the actual number of clones formed. If two clones are made, they each possess one half (1/2) the strength of the original, four clones- one forth (1/4), etc. For simplicity reasons, rather than having to split the chakra pool evenly amongst user and clones, whenever a technique is performed by a clone, the allotted chakra cost is taken from the original, overall pool. ( If the original has 100 available chakra, and a clone performs a technique that costs 10, the available amount of chakra becomes 90. ) Shadow clones cannot be told apart by doujutsu. When a clone is dispersed, any knowledge it gained while active is transferred to the original only, no other clones. Rather than costing [40] chakra to perform, each clone created costs [25] chakra. Up to three (3) clones can be created per usage of this technique. 
•Meisai Gakure no Jutsu [ Camouflage Concealment Technique ] → A Rank
 After forming the needed hand seals, the Shinobi can grant them self near-invisibility. So far only the Sharingan eye and its revelation abilities have been shown to pierce the veil and see the hidden Shinobi . It is unknown if the Byakugan can penetrate the Jutsu and see the user's Chakra circulatory system. 
•Kagura Shingan [ Kagura Mind's Eye ] → Jounin Variable
•Dokushinjutsu [ Eye Mind Reading ]  → Chuunin Variable
•Menma's Chakra Enhancing Music [ Unnamed ]  → Jounin Variable
•Ukojizai no Jutsu [ Fierce Raining at Will ]  → Jounin Variable
•Zetsu's Sensory Range Technique [ Unnamed ]  → Jounin Variable
•Kanningu no Jutsu [ Cheating Technique ]  → Genin Variable
•Toomegane no Jutsu [ Telescope Technique ]  → A Ranked




 
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•Senkou no Jaku [ Flash of Weakness ]  → Clan C Rank
A blaring dark green light will erupt from the user's eyes, momentarily disabling the active doujutsu of those who gaze into its range. It should be noted that this technique does not work against other Sakkakugan owners.  [Lasts 2 posts]
•Genni Genjutsu [ Strengthen Genjutsu ]  → Clan Rankless
By having the Sakkakugan active during a genjutsu, the user powers up the technique to the point where it can no longer be discerned as real or fake by non-Sakkakugan doujutsu. In addition to this, if the afflicted manages to find out they are in a genjutsu, it will require an additional [15] chakra for them to activate Kai. 
•Kugai [ World of Suffering ] → Clan Rankless
While having the Sakkakugan active during a genjutsu, the user will supply an amount of chakra equal to half the genjutsu's base cost in order to further modify the technique. The enhanced genjutsu can no longer be broken by the releasing technique [ Kai.] However, no matter what the genjutsu's description says, it can now be broken by amounts of pain scaling with the rank of the technique. 
•Henjou [ Relinquish ] → Clan B Rank
A highly advanced anti-genjutsu technique. This developed technique is capable of shattering genjutsu thought to be "unbreakable." [This includes even those modified by Kugai. ] 


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• Hekireki Koe no Jutsu [ Thunder Voice Technique ]  → Cloud E Rank 
This Genjutsu is very simple. Upon its execution, the target is made to hear the user's voice at an astoundingly amplified level. This is a Genjutsu often used by academy teachers to awaken students that fall asleep in class.  [Lasts 2 posts]
•Keizokuteki Enmu no Jutsu [ Continuous Fog Technique ]  → Cloud C Rank
An offshoot version of the original Cloud Clone Technique that is generally used to cause a diversion giving the user time to run away. The user creates around 6 posts or so roughly generated Cloud Clones, these clones have the same capability as the previous Cloud Clones do. However, when a Clone is hit instead of going through the clone, like it normally does in the technique, the clone instead explodes into a spread of smoke-like fog that becomes denser, stronger, and harder to dispel with every clone that is hit.  [Lasts 3 posts]
•Zettai Tenkou Kansei no Jutsu [ Absolute Weather Control Technique ] → Cloud A Rank
The user of this technique appears to be able to control the weather. The possibilities are nearly endless. The user could create what appears to be a sudden driving blizzard that rapidly coats the area in snow and blasts the target with freezing winds, or they could create a torrential downpour that seems to saturate the ground to the point that it becomes a thick mud river, causing trees and other objects to fall over. The user could initiate a firestorm, or call up a hurricane. Really, the user can create any form of extreme weather that can be imagined.  [Lasts 7 posts]
•Okkuu Chiri no Jutsu [ Annoying Dust Technique ]  → Rock E Rank
This simple Genjutsu makes a person feel as if there was a speck of dust in their eye, irritating it. Although not damaging, it can cause the victim to lose concentration and also make him continually rub his eyes in an attempt to get the nonexistent dust speck out. [Lasts 1 post]
•Kyuukai Nikutai Oshuu no Jutsu [ Rotting Flesh Foul Smell Technique ] → Rock D Rank
A Genjutsu that makes a person imagine the smell of rotting flesh permeating through the air. This causes a loss of concentration, nausea, and sometimes vomiting.  [Lasts 2 posts]
•Kenbou [ Forgetfulness ] → Leaf B Rank
A somewhat whimsical and fanciful technique, this one is most often familiarized with mind control but is very much different. Using only a pre-designated seal as the focal point, the user is able to alter their Chakra to affect memories to a very basic extent by creating new ones which replace or block out anything current. For example, an enemy might come up to the user and try to interrogate their purpose. With this technique, the user will ‘suggest’ that the victim has mistaken him as somebody else and should carry on with his duties. Most often, the user wins out in these cases but it will not work against all. Another way to use this technique is by making a victim suddenly remember that they have something to do. Another example would be like making a guard recall that they have to check the keys in at the barracks and must return to do so. The limits of this technique are obvious. Actual memories cannot be recreated, only suggestions which would allude to real memories. Also, these memories can be so false that a victim will realize immediately that there is something the matter and will see this as a sign of provocation.  [Lasts 2 Posts]
•Magen: Kyouran no Me kara Kyoufu [ Demonic Illusion: Fear Through the Eyes of Madness ]  → Leaf A Rank
•Sakkaku no Meiun [ Vision of Doom ]  → Sand A Rank
•Eikyou no Koe [ Voice of Influence ]  → Sound A Rank
By now, the user has gone far beyond the limits of normal persuasive speech. The scope of commands or requests that the user can make has broadened considerably. For example, team members that have not worked together for long could easily be made to fight each other. It takes quite a high amount of resistance on the part of the victim to overcome the effects of the Jutsu. The Jutsu can last as long as the user remains speaking, however, due to the high level of concentration required, the user cannot effectively keep the Jutsu up for more than 3 posts. [Lasts 5 posts after finished speaking]
•Kokohi no Jutsu [ False Place Technique ]  → Anime C Rank
•Mateki: Mugen Onsa [ Demon Flute: Illusion Tune Chains ]  → Sound B Rank
Mateki : Mugen Onsa is a Genjutsu technique utilized by the Sound Shinobi Tayuya. To use this illusion she needs to enter her cursed seal level two form. When she plays the music for this illusion on her flute, her opponent's mind enters a barren wasteland. While in this illusion the Shinobi feels retrained by chains which bind the user as their skin and muscle begins to melt off their bones. Because they feel restrained in the illusion, they are retrained in real life as well. [Lasts 4 posts]
•Magen: Nijū Kokoni Arazu no Jutsu [ Demonic Illusion: Double False Surroundings Technique ]  → Guild C Rank
This Jutsu places another illusion on top of a previous illusion created by the user. If and when the target dispels the first illusion, they will not realize that a second is in place. The Chakra cost & duration is in conjunction with the Genjutsu being 'doubled', & begins after the first has been dispelled. 
•Kyouyuu Shiryoku [ Shared Sight ]  → Guild C Rank
•Senrigan [ Clairvoyance ] → Guild B Rank


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• Scattering the Ashes → B Rank Ninjutsu
This jutsu is extremely odd, for when others see it in action they immediately think it is a Genjutsu. By forming two handseals, the Rat and then the Tiger, at the user's discretion their body will scatter into flaming ash that will slowly burn away to nothing. Now, this is why others think it is a Genjutsu and a misdirection jutsu, though the truth is far different. It moves a person from one location to another. The location of arrival must be chosen before the jutsu is activated, and in that location ash will fall in a small cloud, which will then reform into the user. This jutsu cannot be used inside of combat except to escape. The distance of transportation is 500 yards as a Genin, and it goes up by 200 yards per rank.
• The Departed's Retribution → B Rank Genjutsu
In order to use this technique, Jack must have already summoned haze clones, as many as he can. However, instead of them being copies of himself the images take on the appearance of shadowy humanoids. Now, then, Jack can use this jutsu. By forming the handsigns Rat-Ox-Horse-Bird the faces and bodies of the Haze Clones are altered. They now appear as the most important people in the targets' lives who had died, whether the most loved or hated, and they speak of how horrible the target is, bringing up forgotten crimes and misdeeds, failed missions and such, in order to assault the psyche of the targets. After the faces have fully formed, the Haze clones vanish, leaving the idea that the shades from the Haze had been the souls and minds of those who were dead.


 
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Jack's history is as shrouded in shadow as his own mind, the little of which he remembers brought out only in flashes of nightmares and dreams. But what is of importance is what Jack can remember, what he was told about the day he arrived at the Mist village. 

The guards were on duty, as they always were, when from the mists came screams and cries of the dead, dying, and damned. It shocked and horrified the shinobi as from the mist stepped a figure wreathed in shadow and carrying a grim scythe. From the hood of its robe that seemed sewn from the fabric of the deepest night was revealed twin fires for eyes, as green and black as the unholy fires of hell. It was death incarnate, the Grim Reaper himself, as the Shinobi thought, and yet to their surprise it wasn't there to reap their souls, oh no. In its arms was a bundle of black cloth, and silently it held out the bundle to the two. Too terrified to do anything other than obey, the captain of the squad reached forth and bravely took the bundle. It was large, requiring two hands to hold without struggle, yet light enough to have been held in one hand had the size not been so awkward. The Reaper slowly faded into the mists, and the cries dwindled to nothing. Slowly, the Captain set the bundle on the stone at his feet, and pulled back the flap at the top to reveal a shock. There, in the bundle, was a pale child of ten years of age, a cane and tophat in his hands, too big for a child of his size to have. And there, written across the fabric above his head, was a name.

Jack Harren Snipe.

From that day the village knew he was an oddity, and as he grew, so did the fear of him. That he was neither normal nor possibly human. As he grew, Jack became well known for his "testing" of people, setting up odds and ends and creating all manner of trapped settings to test others. He seemed to study their reactions, always a small smile upon his lips, as if he knew this others did not. And when he spoke, no one could understand his mad rhymes, so terrible that true poetry artists cringed when he even started to open his mouth. When he entered the academy, as he was asked to do by the Mizukage, the tricks continued, becoming more powerful and demented as he learned Genjutsu. But no one could stop him legally, for his "tests" never harmed anyone, nor had any lasting harm other than his victims avoiding him. Because of this, today Jack lives on the edge of the village, on a small island in the middle of the ocean. He is checked on, of course, but now his life was one of solitude, spent devising more Genjutsu, ones that others had never seen, nor dared to try. 
 
PostPosted: Mon Jan 07, 2013 8:01 pm
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Full Name: Izumi Katsuo
Nickname:

Age: 19
Birthdate: July 14th
Gender: Female

Height: 5'7"
Weight: 129.5 lb

Nindo: "I won't just survive, I'm going to live!"
Personality: Izumi is a kind person with a very playful around. Her main hobbies consist of teasing the people she is talking with in various ways. She finds it fun the various reactions she can get from people, they are interesting after all. Everyone acts differently. When it comes to important matters she is very serious and proves that she isn't someone that lets herself be pushed over all the time.

Village: Konoha
Rank: Gennin
Main Class: Taijutsu
Subclass: Medical

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Chakra Pool: 250
Stamina Pool: 250
Chakra Element: Suiton and Doton
Chakra Color: Purple
Chakra Materialization:Swirls around her

Strengths:
• Hand to hand combat
• Medical Jutsu
Weaknesses:
• Strawberries (she loves them)
• Genjutsu
Fears:
• Being used (betrayel etc)
• Creepers (they can be scary the pervs <.<)

Class Disciplines :
• Monk
• Specialist: Healing

Reductions:
• Learn taijutsu one [1] post faster.
• Learn Medical techniques one (1) post faster.
Personal Attributes:
• Physical defense slightly increased
• [2] extra Ninjutsu slots

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Ryo: 両0
AC: 0

Missions Complete:
D Rank :: 0
C Rank :: 0
B Rank :: 0
A Rank :: 0
S Rank :: 0

Limitations:
• Ninjutsu : : 00 / 05
• Genjutsu : : 00 / 03
• Eiseijutsu : : 00/08
• Taijutsu Styles: : 00 / 00
• Bukijutsu Styles: : 00 / 02


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Weapon Type:---
Weapon Range:----
Weapon Weight: -----
Weapon Location: -----
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Summoning Type:
Summon Sage:
Pacts:

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• x20 Shurikan
• x10 kunai
• x 5 explosive tags

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▬▬┤|N i n j u t s u

Maruton:
• Henge no Jutsu [ Transformation Technique ]
• Kawarimi no Jutsu [ Substitution Technique ]
• Genso Bushin no Jutsu [ Illusion Clone Technique ]
• Suimen Hokou no Waza [ Act of Water Surface Walking ]
• Kinobori no Waza [ Act of Tree Climbing ]
• Kai [ Release ]

Suiton


Doton


Eiseijutsu


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▬▬┤|T a i j u t s u

{Style name here}


▬▬┤|B u k i j u t s u

{Style name here}


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Izumi has had a difficult past, not because of drama and what not but due to the fact that as a child she was always very sickish making it hard for her to do the same things other of her age did. Even then she was determined to become a shinobi. The idea had always intrigued her. It took a lot of work and a long time. With her conditions she was only able to graduate properly at the age of 14. She didn't let the age bother her. Age had nothing to do with it. And as the years moved on her sickness was getting weaker, and she was getting stronger. Izumi continued her training and managed to enter the chuunin exams at the age of 16. However things did not go very well for her in them. during on of the practical tests she was stuck so hard by another shinobi of another village that she was left in a coma for about a year. For the past two years she has been living in a more isolated location in order to focus on recovering from the coma and retrain many things before returning back to the village to take up missions again.
 

Aquos Dragoa


Grand Chevalier Haji

Unbeatable Warlord

9,300 Points
  • Hunter 50
  • Team Jacob 100
  • Survivor 150
PostPosted: Tue Jan 08, 2013 1:23 am
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Full Name: Sebastian Uchiha
Nickname: Hidden Demon of the Sand

Age: 16
Birthdate: Month of June
Gender: Male

Height: 172 cm
Weight: 59 kg

Nindo: "N/A"
Personality: Sebastian is just like any other 16 year old kid, like to play around, hang out. Likes girls but is shy about it.
But then he has a darker side, much darker. This side of him shows no fear, no mercy to those who threaten him or anyone he cares for.
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Village: Sunagakure
Rank:Jonin/Anbu
First Class: Kenjutsu
Second Class: Taijutsu

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Bloodline: {If none, remove section}

Chakra Pool:245
Stamina Pool: 420
Chakra Element: Fire,Lightning
Chakra Color: Blood Red
Chakra Materialization: His chakra burns into a large flame that looks like it has a demonic face within the flames.

Strengths:
• His reaction time and reflexes due to his physical training are extraordinary allowing him better and faster movements
• His darker side is fearless, meaning he cannot be crippled or paralyzed by fear.
Weaknesses:
• While his darker side is fearless it can also be a weakness, putting him in dangerous situations
• Water
Fears:
• hurting someone he cares about
• His other side

Class Disciplines :
• Weapon Specialist: The user Gains a free custom weapon slot, while forsaking the ability to learn ninjutsu for the ability to learn more than 1 rigorous style (styles still count for 2 slots). For each 20 ninjutsu the user doesn’t learn, they get to learn [1] additional bukijutsu style. Their depth and devotion to the weapon arts allows their skill to increase with every rank allowing their weapons to cut through defensive bukijutsu techniques of the same rank.
•Berserker: Your external training and devotion to taijutsu has allowed your attacks to have great strength, speed, and power behind them, making them overwhelm physical taijutsu techniques of the same rank or lower. Additionally, your hardened body allows you to defend against ninjutsu attacks 2 ranks lower than a physical taijutsu defensive technique, taking little to no damage from it, and defend against ninjutsu attacks 1 rank below a complex taijutsu defensive technique unharmed.
Reductions:
•Learns Bukijutsu 3 posts faster
•Learns Taijutsu 2 posts faster
Personal Attributes:
• Close Combat Master:The disciple Berserker extends itself to also include his bukijutsu attacks.
• Rigorous Is My Middle Name: Rigorous stlyes count for one slot instead of two.

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Ryo: 両11250
AC: 23300

Missions Complete:
D Rank :: 0
C Rank :: 0
B Rank :: 0
A Rank :: 0
S Rank :: 0

Limitations: {How many of each technique you can learn. Refer to class info}
• Ninjutsu : : 00 / 06
• Genjutsu : : 00 / 00
• Taijutsu Styles: : 00 / 03
• Bukijutsu Styles: : 00 / 03

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Weapon Type: Straight Sword
Weapon Range: N/a
Weapon Weight: 5 pounds
Weapon Location: Back


Summoning Type:
Summon Sage:
Pacts:

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•10 Kunai
•10 Smoke bomb
•10 Shuriken

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▬▬┤|N i n j u t s u

Maruton: {Start with the following six only}
• Henge no Jutsu [ Transformation Technique ]
• Kawarimi no Jutsu [ Substitution Technique ]
• Genso Bushin no Jutsu [ Illusion Clone Technique ]
• Suimen Hokou no Waza [ Act of Water Surface Walking ]
• Kinobori no Waza [ Act of Tree Climbing ]
• Kai [ Release ]

Uchiha


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• {If none, remove section}

▬▬┤|T a i j u t s u

{Style name here}
• {Stage progression / techniques learned}

▬▬┤|B u k i j u t s u

{Style name here}
• {Stage progression / techniques learned}

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Sebastian Uchiha grew up in exile, his mother who was an Uchiha married a simple businessman. The clan did not like this and so they exiled her. They lived a comfortable life, his mother quit being a shinobi to help his father with his business. One day he had left with his parents on a business trip, this would be the first time they had ever taken him along and he was excited. He got to meet alot of new people and see new things. They were on their way back to suna when they were attacked, his mother and father were slaughtered before his very eyes. Before the rogues could get him though a group of anbu patrolling the borders heard the scream and came to his rescue. Though it was too late for his parents. He was placed in an orphanage where he met a girl, and ever since she was his best friend.

But he was never the same since that day, his mind had been shattered into two parts. One was the real Sebastian a fun quiet caring type of person. The other is a dark merciless killer though they are opposites they live in the same body.

Sebastian secretly moved up the ranks of shinobi, his abilities were completely unmatched at his age. And even without his sharingan he made it this far.



I am taking the rank/Ac/ryo of my Yukigakure shinobi who was an Jounin Anbu, the Kazekage has already allowed me to join his village in such a fashion. Akatsuki Kain  
PostPosted: Tue Jan 08, 2013 2:53 am
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Full Name: Saphira Yuki
Nickname: Icy hot

Age: 14
Birthdate: December 25th
Gender: Female

Height: 5' 6"
Weight: 115 lbs.

Nindo: "I live with a cold body, but I will die before I develop a cold heart again."
Personality: Saphira is a person who doesn't enjoy just talking to anyone. She finds cockiness to be very irritating which she finds most nin to be. Special she may be but vain she is not. At first meet, she can seem kind of stand off ish but she speaks louder with actions than with her words and can become good friends with those who come to understand that. She appears to have a cold attitude but inside a warm heart. In your time of need, if she can help she will, you just may not see her do it. She will do whatever to protect a fellow rat.

Village: Konohagakure
Rank: Genin
First Class: Bukijutsu
Second Class: Ninjutsu

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Bloodline: Hyouton

Chakra Pool: 360
Stamina Pool: 150
Chakra Element: Suiton and Futon
Chakra Color: Icy blue
Chakra Materialization: It looks as if it solidifies around her in the shape of an icicle upside down although it is noticeably not solid.

Strengths:
• Variety of strenghts of ninjutsu and kenjutsu
• Can use jutsu through the blade
Weaknesses:
• A fist to fist brawl
• Her past
Fears:
• Becoming cold hearted
• Bloodline being sampled and taken from her, manipulated.

Class Disciplines :
• Mystic Hero
• Elemental Dual Wielder
Reductions:
• Learn ninjutsu one (1) post faster.
• Learn Bukijutsu techniques one [1] post faster
Personal Attributes:
Tapping into Eiseijutsu: Ability to use medical jutsu equal to half available ninjutsu (For Dual Elemental Ninjutsu it is half the number that each of your elements get. Such as 6 for each element = 3 Eiseijutsu, dual element slots do not stack but the other class does.)
Family of the Cold Hearts: Growing up in a family of self gain and proficiency, Saphira has a natural ability that her Hyouton jutsu cost half as much strain and chakra as they normally would.


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Ryo: 0
AC: 0

Missions Complete:
D Rank :: 0
C Rank :: 0
B Rank :: 0
A Rank :: 0
S Rank :: 0

Limitations: {How many of each technique you can learn. Refer to class info}
• Ninjutsu : : 00 / 06 (per element) + 1 from Bukijutsu
• Genjutsu : : 00 / 01
• Taijutsu Styles: : 00 / 00
• Bukijutsu Styles: : 00 / 02

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Weapon Type: Katana
Weapon Range: 3 1/2 ft.
Weapon Weight: 1 1/2 lbs.
Weapon Location: On hip


Summoning Type:
Summon Sage:
Pacts:

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• 15 Kunai
• 10 Shuriken
• 5 Senbon

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▬▬┤|N i n j u t s u

Maruton: {Start with the following six only}
• Henge no Jutsu [ Transformation Technique ]
• Kawarimi no Jutsu [ Substitution Technique ]
• Genso Bushin no Jutsu [ Illusion Clone Technique ]
• Suimen Hokou no Waza [ Act of Water Surface Walking ]
• Kinobori no Waza [ Act of Tree Climbing ]
• Kai [ Release ]

{Your first element's name}
• Suiton

{Your second element's name}
• Futon

{Other jutsu type's name}
• Hyouton


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• {If none, remove section}

▬▬┤|T a i j u t s u

{Style name here}
• {Stage progression / techniques learned}

▬▬┤|B u k i j u t s u

{Style name here}
• {Stage progression / techniques learned}

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Saphira comes from a chain of dark, cold people. Her past is full of those who were out to gain for no one but themselves even her parents. She didn't grow up with parents. Ever since day one of being able to understand survival she has been on her own trying to survive besides one who changed her world. She lived a life of selfishness, stealing, and beating people just for food and sometimes pleasure. She took from the poor, the wealthy it didn't matter, she just lived for her, until one day she met Sammy.
You automatically assume Sammy is another little boy or maybe a puppy or a cat but no, it was a mouse. An amazing mouse she met at the age of eight. The mouse was shooed away by a lady with a broom at a restaurant and Saphira came up and decked the lady straight in her teeth. As the lady fell Saphira grabbed the broom, snapped it in half, and stabbed the pieces through the wooden door of the restaurants back. She then ran inside and grabbed enough food for herself and a little bit extra of some cheese she saw.
After that she tracked the mouse, not finding her. For a while she kept looking for the mouse but couldn't find her and sat down and let out a sigh. At that moment she decided to grab a piece of bread she obtained and as soon as she cracked it she heard a squeak. She looked around and behind a small piece of wood, was Sammy. Sammy was staring at the cheese Saphira had. Saphira edged Sammy to come over but Sammy ran behind the wood. Not wanting to scare the rat off, Saphira tossed a piece of the cheese toward where the rat was but not behind the wood. After about ten seconds, you could see a little nose peep around the corner. Then Sammy rushed the cheese. Saphira kept throwing cheese and luring Sammy closer and closer until Sammy was literally on top of Saphira's lap. In this Saphira learned, her life... she'd been nothing but a rat, shooed away. In being a rat, she helped another and made the other's day a lot better. She realized what it was like, to not be cold, for once in her life. Her inner core started to warm up, a feeling she never felt before. Now Sammy and Saphira's friendship didn't last all that long as it was a mouse and untrained. Saphira eventually ran out of food which means she ran out of Sammy but in this Saphira found a new light. Now, although finding a new light in life, she still stole but only from the wealthy, never from those hurting as well, she considered them "her fellow rats." She did this until around the age of ten when she was adopted into the Konohagakure village and welcomed into the Academy and finally worked her way out of "ratdom" but still protected others as if they are still "fellow rats".
 

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PostPosted: Tue Jan 08, 2013 10:23 am
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Full Name: Haihachi
Nickname:

Age: 20
Birthdate: August 26
Gender: Male

Height: 6'1
Weight: 210

Nindo: "Give all you got for what matters"
Personality: Very odd person, constantly talking to himself. Is a habitual liar, and often does it for attention. Despite the bad there is good to him, as he is easy to get along with. Has a more positive outlook on things, and is hard to get down. Though he can be cocky at times, its due to his own belief in himself. Could be considered to be full of himself, but does not brag about it much.

Village: Cloud
Rank: Genin
Main Class: Ninjutsu
Subclass: Bloodline

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Bloodline: Hatake

Chakra Pool: 225 (class) + 130(sub-class) = 375 (+20 discipline)
Chakra Element: Water and lightning
Chakra Color: White
Chakra Materialization: Flickers like electricity
Stamina: 25 (Class) + 130 (Subclass) = 165 (+10 discipline)

Strengths:
• Ninjutsu
• Ranged combat
Weaknesses:
• Slower speed
• Earth element
Fears:
• Quicksand
• Tight spaces

Disciplines:
• Elemental Dual Wielder
• Thoroughbred
Reductions:
• Learn Ninjutsu 1 post faster
• Learn bloodline 1 post faster
Personal Attributes:
• Learns Ninjutsu 1 post faster
• Physical speed increased

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Ryo: 両0
AC: 0

Missions Complete:
D Rank :: 0
C Rank :: 0
B Rank :: 0
A Rank :: 0
S Rank :: 0

Limitations: {How many of each technique you can learn. Refer to class info}
• Ninjutsu : : 12 / 2
• Genjutsu : : 1 / 1
• Taijutsu Styles: : 00 / 1
• Bukijutsu Styles: : 00 / 1

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Weapon Type: Tanto
Weapon Range: 24 inches
Weapon Weight: 1lb
Weapon Location: At his hip
• Tanto



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• Shuriken x30

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Maruton:
• Henge no Jutsu
• Kawarimi no Jutsu
• Genso Bushin no Jutsu
• Suimen Hokou no Waza
• Kinobori no Waza
• Kai

Suiton
• Mizuame Nabara Rank C
• Mizurappa Rank C
• Sensatsu Suishou Rank B

Raiton
• Raikou Bunshin no Jutsu Rank E
• Dendou Bakuhatsu no Jutsu Rank C
• Raikou Kousen no Jutsu Rank C


Bloodline
• Raiton: Shiroi Yaiba Rank D
• Raiton: Shiroi Yari Rank D
• Raiton: Tanto Yaiba Rank C
• Raiton: Hatake Rank B
• Chidori Sai Rank B




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His childhood was like anyone else, the only difference being he never truly knew his parents. They had died early on in his life, and he was left in the foster care of a relative. The relative was very nice to him, and it was not difficult to grow up with them. As much as he missed his parents, he knew there was nothing to do for them. So he would just do as best he could to make them proud, and eventually decide that he was going to become a ninja.
 
PostPosted: Tue Jan 08, 2013 12:20 pm
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pliokiju

the traits still has to be either slight or moderate, in this case moderate. the usefulness and the detail you put in parenthetical will still apply they general wording just follows a certain format and constraints. ( the constraints still don't overwrite the system as is from what I've gotten clear)
After that it's approved.

Sorry for this whole thing, and thank you for your time. I have changed it to moderately, so hopefully that is better. Sorry about trait ordeal.  

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