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Posted: Wed Jun 14, 2006 7:19 pm
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Twack .Sodomy.On.A.Stick. Macabre_Cogitation Ugh, right as I get back!! ROARAGH! -sigh- Who is all here!? I is here, and writing in rhyme! It just so happens to be poetry time! I like writing in verse, it's funfun indeed =D But bad poetry really makes my eyes bleed. Thankfully, people here can write pretty well! So I am not actually in iambic hell =3really i think my poems suck i hate that show n**-tuck it makes me puke i hate the team Duke i cant write happy verse i dont know which is worse my rhyming or my timing this is kinda hard i fell like a retard thats all for now i keep rhyming and don't know how
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That's an interesting verse... almost like a rap! But what's rap but poetry on crack ((and crap)). Your poems don't suck, I think they're just fine! Certaintly they're more interesting than mine xD You gotta let it come from the heart, then flow through the soul, And collect on your paper as if it's a giant bowl. I don't know how I rhyme! I simply just do =3 That's when you know the poetry is very true. Just let it flow man! Don't get writer's block! ((Though if you do a good remedy is mental shock ;3)) So I'll shut up now... I go on and on xD And it makes me feel stupid... and somewhat blonde! NOO NOT THE BLONDENESS! ::dies hair black:: That's much better... and I'm NOT on crack xD
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Posted: Wed Jun 14, 2006 7:23 pm
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Posted: Wed Jun 14, 2006 7:23 pm
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Macabre_Cogitation Thank you for your kind words, .Sodomy.On.A.Stick...... Which is funny to say outload with your mum talking to you and getting odd looks biggrin .. I have been waiting, and will continue to do so. -sigh- I've gained notoriety from fellow subjects at the tormentation known as school, it's fun, yet I prefered when I wasn't spoken to..... Alas, I shall try and enjoy this momentary escapade!
Because I refer to myself in person number three... Aloud and IRL I tend to call myself "Sodomy". It's interesting actually, since no one else gets it... So they all look at me like "What the s**t?!" So yess I do know what you mean right there xD It's much better when there's no one 'round to care.
EDITT::
I'm known as "Pants Girl" of the freshman class... Which isn't much fun... it's just a pain in the a**. People stereotype and prejudge and it's just wrong! So when I make friendships, they have to be strong D=
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Posted: Wed Jun 14, 2006 7:27 pm
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Posted: Wed Jun 14, 2006 7:27 pm
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Twack i thought it sounded like a freestyle which in my experiance have no style With my rhyms i see to go for miles in my bathroom there are white tiles i like heve metal and hard core rock and ov polotics i dont like to talk That rhyme was bad and kind of sad but thats ok im only a kid my rhyming skills i have hid to end this poem strong i say PINK FRILL THONG!
Your poems are random and fun to read! But they're a bit strange, so peeps should take heed xD But freestyle is alright if it is somewhat good. Otherwise they need to shut up and go back to the 'hood. I like Metal, it's a real fave! I'm not a partier, though I like a good rave. I take too long when writing my rhymes, So i'll end this here for the sake of time.
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Posted: Wed Jun 14, 2006 7:31 pm
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Twack Sorry but it is now i must go i really hope for it to snow yes summer it is but im a rhyming wiz so again i will end my rhyme strong PRITTY PINK AND FRILLY THONG!
Goodbye my friend Twack! Have a good night and take care! I hope for no snow... now that really wouldn't be fair D= I spend my winters shovelling, and am glad when I'm done. SO NO MORE SNOW OR I'LL USE THIS GUN. And you are a rhyming whiz indeed, I must say that xD And uhhm.... RIGHT NOW I'M WEARING A HAT. I'm tired and bored so my poetry will suffer! I need an editer... or at least a buffer! xD ((To smooth out the rough edges it what I do mean. I figured I really might as well come clean.))
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Posted: Wed Jun 14, 2006 7:48 pm
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Posted: Wed Jun 14, 2006 7:48 pm
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Posted: Wed Jun 14, 2006 7:50 pm
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Posted: Wed Jun 14, 2006 7:55 pm
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Posted: Wed Jun 14, 2006 7:59 pm
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Posted: Wed Jun 14, 2006 8:02 pm
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Posted: Wed Jun 14, 2006 8:03 pm
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Posted: Wed Jun 14, 2006 8:14 pm
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Posted: Wed Jun 14, 2006 8:17 pm
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