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Diablo en Musica 92

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PostPosted: Wed Jul 25, 2012 2:30 pm
Qastor Sugino Sakada


I'm personally not sure about your first ability....( O m O ) I'm kinda scared to approve it because of that. But everything else seems fine....hmmmm I say Approved

HOWEVER, if another approval MOD overrules me that may change so please do be aware my approval is not solid! ( > m < ) That I cannot stress enough.

o_Starlight_


You don't really need a pouch of clay. You have mouths on your hands that will mend explosive clay. Also you can only really have projectile based items in your inventory atm until you go guy stuff....

So I say change that and afterward you will be Approved

Approved  
PostPosted: Wed Jul 25, 2012 2:33 pm
Diablo en Musica 92
Qastor Sugino Sakada


I'm personally not sure about your first ability....( O m O ) I'm kinda scared to approve it because of that. But everything else seems fine....hmmmm I say Approved

HOWEVER, if another approval MOD overrules me that may change so please do be aware my approval is not solid! ( > m < ) That I cannot stress enough.

o_Starlight_


You don't really need a pouch of clay. You have mouths on your hands that will mend explosive clay. Also you can only really have projectile based items in your inventory atm until you go guy stuff....

So I say change that and afterward you will be Approved

Approved
Yeah, I thought it would be a neat ability to have but if it seems too OP I will change it. Its more of a stamina thing.I may change it to like a quarter of his chakra level if need be.  

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PostPosted: Wed Jul 25, 2012 2:34 pm
Qastor Sugino Sakada


I think that will be fine, once that change is made you are Approved  
PostPosted: Wed Jul 25, 2012 2:44 pm
Edited, thanks!  

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PostPosted: Wed Jul 25, 2012 3:05 pm
Diablo en Musica 92

o_Starlight_


You don't really need a pouch of clay. You have mouths on your hands that will mend explosive clay. Also you can only really have projectile based items in your inventory atm until you go guy stuff....

So I say change that and afterward you will be Approved

Approved

Why wouldn't she need a pouch of clay? The clay is munched on by the mouths, the mouths don't produce it. :T
 
PostPosted: Wed Jul 25, 2012 3:13 pm
o_Starlight_


( O 3 O) wait......I be losing me mind ( > A < ) damn it

Ignore my statement APPROVED

@Shin - I thought the mouth produced it ( O 3 O ) what it always seemed like to me in the anime and manga....  

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PostPosted: Thu Jul 26, 2012 7:13 pm
Diablo en Musica 92
o_Starlight_


( O 3 O) wait......I be losing me mind ( > A < ) damn it

Ignore my statement APPROVED

@Shin - I thought the mouth produced it ( O 3 O ) what it always seemed like to me in the anime and manga....


lol Its okay xD we all get that way

Thank you both for the approve :3  
PostPosted: Fri Jul 27, 2012 8:14 pm
Motaro Nagano
The Tracker

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P e r s o n a l x D a t a

Age: 13
Birth date: October 14th
Birthplace: Kirigakure
Gender: Male
Height: 5' 7"
Weight: 147 lbs.

Nindo: "I don't have one at the moment."
Personality: [Filling it in as I go along, I hate confinements.]

Village: Kirigakure
Rank: Genin
Class: Ninjutsu
Subclass: Brawler

B a t t l e x D a t a

Bloodline: Hyouton

Chakra Color: Crystal Blue
Chakra Elements: Suiton and Fuuton
Chakra Pool: 275 [300]

Strengths:
• Resilient [Used to fighting all sorts of animals much larger than him]
• Close quarters combat
• Survivalist

Weaknesses:
• Stubborn
• Weak against Doton techniques
• Long ranged specialists

Fears:
• Failing to live up to his family's name.
• Failing to prevent the order issued to execute his brother.
• Failing to never step out of his brother's shadow.
• That his path will end with him being the one tracked.

Personal Attributes:
• Tracker's body: Unusual amount of physical strength and dexterity developed from his lifestyle. [Slightly increased strength.]
• Tracker's sense: Possesses slightly sharpened sense of sight.
• All Hyouton users are capable of performing techniques with a single hand.

Class Attributes:
• Secret Drop: Backup reserve of [25] chakra.
• Willowy: Reflexes and flexibility slightly increased.


S h i n o b i x D a t a

Ryo: 00 両
AC: 00

Missions Complete:
D Rank :: 00
C Rank :: 00
B Rank :: 00
A Rank :: 00
S Rank :: 00

Limitations:
• Ninjutsu :: 00 / 15
• Genjutsu :: 00 / 01
• Taijutsu Styles :: 00 / 01
• Bukijutsu Styles :: 00 / 00

Headband Location | Color
Around Neck | Orange
Backpack Style | Color
Tiny | Green
Accessory Clothing | Color
See | Picture


W e a p o n x D a t a

Mistline II
Weapon Type: Combat Knife
Weapon Range: Arm's length [Close], 3-4 meters [Thrown]
Weapon Weight: 4 lb. [In total]
Weapon Properties: A sharp, razor thin, and serrated knife. Mistline is capable of being imbued with chakra for even more cutting potential. The knife itself is just as deadly thrown as it is wielded, it can catch enough velocity to take down a full grown buck when thrown with the right amount of force due to its weight - an entire two pounds heavier than the original Mistline giving it a great deal more trauma.


T e c h n i q u e x L i s t

Ninjutsu

◤ Non-Elemental
• Henge no Jutsu [Transformation Technique]
• Kawarimi no Jutsu [Substitution Technique]
• Bushin no Jutsu [Clone Technique]
• Suimen Hokou no Waza [Act of Water Surface Walking]
• Kinobori no Waza [Act of Tree Climbing]
• Kai [Release]

◤ Suiton










◤ Fuuton









◤ Hyouton



Genjutsu



Taijutsu

{Style Name Here}
• Stage Progress / Technique Name Here


Bukijutsu


{Style Name Here}
• Stage Progress / Technique Name Here


H i s t o r y
During the great bloodline extermination, the Nagano family, who happened to be descendants of the Hyouton clan fled to the wilderness of Kirigakure to escape persecution. It was there they raised their firstborn child, Makoto. The boy grew up strong in the harsh environment, often wrestling with the animals the Nagano hunted in order to survive for sport. As he grew to maturity he found himself possessing amazing physical prowess. One of his favorite pass times was engaging the alligators in the nearby bayou, timing how long he could hold back their jaws before they could snap them down at the tender age of eight years old. It was around this time that the second born child, Motaro was born.

Makoto was beginning to carve a niche for himself as a hunter, showing incredible promise for stalking and tracking his prey, with a keen eye for detail - noticing small things like indents in the soil and broken twigs seemed to be mere child's play. The youngest of the pair, Motaro, had only just begun following in his brother's footsteps as the period of strife in Kirigakure came to an end. With the relations between the native residents and its Kekkei Genkai users improving the Nagano family felt it was time to return to civilization, where they began making their living as humble fishermen. Makoto, whose abilities in tracking were highly acclaimed, was enrolled in the Kirigakure shinobi academy to be trained as an Oinin where he flourished under the tutelage of former Mizukage, Satoshi Hatake. Quickly rising the ladder to Jounin, the Nagano's second born child was enrolled in the shinobi academy with the hopes of furthering his family's growing prestige and reputation. The difference between the two was clear however. In comparison to his sibling's natural gifts, Motaro's abilities seemed almost subpar.

During the infamous assassination attempt on the village traitor, Doku Le, Makoto Nagano defected from Kirigakure. His whereabouts and reasons currently unknown, his name was placed in the Bingo Book for termination. Motaro took upon himself as a Nagano to stay his brother's execution passing his examinations with new found vigor upon receiving word from his family members. Such is his destiny; going beyond his limitations to track Kirigakure's greatest tracker.

Grand Chevalier Haji
Ah you guys are so strict now. Boring, boring. /waves off/
 

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PostPosted: Sat Jul 28, 2012 5:52 pm
Kazzoh



In your first attribute add "Slightly increased" strength etc.

In your second attribute to me is too similar to Tamer class attribute which increases one's senses. and just too many things being increased for a single personal attribute. If you chose one of those like sight only then I'll accept also you can always chose something entirely different.  
PostPosted: Sat Jul 28, 2012 6:04 pm
Kazzoh


Boring but fair ^_^

accepted  

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PostPosted: Tue Jul 31, 2012 10:37 pm
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Full Name: Valoren Shiranui
Nickname: Val, Valoren

Age: 16
Birthdate: October 24
Gender: Male

Height: 66 in/135cm
Weight: 123 lbs./60 kg

Nindo: "Fear the Calm Before the Storm "
Personality: Valoren is a relatively calm individual who prefers speaking in a quiet voice, often yawning between sentences. He sees life as dull but often warns people to beware the calm before the storm while rarely ever seeming to follow his own advice. Although he is perhaps the most extreme possible case of albino, it hasn't seemed to bother him much and he's even marked over with with bright red paint, ignoring the remarks of others.

Village: Kumogakure
Rank: Genin
Main Class: Genjutsu
Subclass: Sensor

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Bloodline: Ranton (Under Approval Process)

Chakra Pool: 245
Chakra Element: Suiton and Raiton
Chakra Color: White
Chakra Materialization: Valoren's chakra forms in a flickering aura

Strengths:
• Genjutsu
• Ranged Combat
Weaknesses:
• Strong Minded Foes
• Close Quarter Combat
Fears:
• Dying without Achieving anything
• Being Caught and Defeated by A Simple Genjutsu

Class Attributes:
• Able to detect chakra from living sources within a 60 yard radius
• Perceiving Mind: Effect of genjutsu rank D and below slightly increased
Reductions:
• Learn genjutsu one [1] post faster.

Personal Attributes:
• Learn Bloodline Techniques [1] Post Faster (Subject to Change)
• Learn Genjutsu [1] Post Faster

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Ryo: 両 0
AC: 0

Missions Complete:
D Rank :: 0
C Rank :: 0
B Rank :: 0
A Rank :: 0
S Rank :: 0

Limitations:
• Ninjutsu : : 00 / 8
• Genjutsu : : 00 / 12
• Taijutsu Styles: : 00 / 00
• Bukijutsu Styles: : 00 / 00

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Weapon Type: N/A
Weapon Range: N/A
Weapon Weight: N/A
Weapon Location: N/A


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• 10x Shuriken
• 15x Kunai
• 5x Smoke Bombs

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▬▬┤|N i n j u t s u

Maruton:
• Henge no Jutsu [ Transformation Technique ]
• Kawarimi no Jutsu [ Substitution Technique ]
• Genso Bushin no Jutsu [ Illusion Clone Technique ]
• Suimen Hokou no Waza [ Act of Water Surface Walking ]
• Kinobori no Waza [ Act of Tree Climbing ]
• Kai [ Release ]

Suiton


Raiton


Ranton


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Valoren was born not only left handed but albino as well in the village of Kumogakure, a village mostly dominated by darker skinned people. Although this did not directly affect his teaching, it did cause some tensions between him and the people of the Academy while he attended. One day, while attending, he inadvertently used a very very poor version of a simple Ranton technique. It was then that his family was alerted to the presence of the bloodline within their family. They were baffled as neither of them knew of the limit within their own family ties. This led to a violent split between Valoren's mother and father, the young boy going with his mother due to his father's renouncement of Valoren's existence. Unsure what to do, Valoren's mother took him to the Academy and sought a tutor for the boy to manage his chakra control so he wouldn't go and injure himself with more Ranton techniques. This was accomplished but Valoren was in turn slowed in his progress through the Academy, only graduating with people who were about two years his juniors. This has not discouraged Valoren and he only sees it as a momentary lapse in his ability, being a step behind other class mates.
 
PostPosted: Tue Jul 31, 2012 11:24 pm
iChan-Chan

The sum of your chakra should be 245 and last I checked, the Ranton doesn't supply you with additional chakra.
emotion_sweatdrop Hmm, I don't know why you have 345. : O

For your inventory, please remove paper bombs. They don't count as projectiles however smoke bombs do in fact are. (Just a suggestion for the smoke bombs)

After some fixes, you will be all set to go. Welcome to Kumo~
 

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PostPosted: Tue Jul 31, 2012 11:45 pm
Redera Issun

Sorry, the 345 was my fault, other guilds with similar classes run using 300+ so I accidentally jotted down 345 without a second thought. Thanks for catching that sweatdrop

Ready For Re-inspection  
PostPosted: Tue Jul 31, 2012 11:48 pm
iChan-Chan

Hm, good call guys.
Yo' welcome. And have fun! I see nothing else wrong. Approved.
 

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